Unit1Where did you go on vacation?话题写作专项人教版英语八年级上册

第一单元话题写作专项
【话题分析】
本单元的写作话题是根据自己假期的旅游见闻,写一篇游记。游记通常使用过去时来记叙当时发生的事件。若议论、抒情或描写景色和人时,为了生动,也可用一般现在时。
【写作典例】
假设你是王明,上周末和父母一起去三亚旅游。请根据提示及要求写一篇英语短文介绍你们的三亚之旅。
时间 上周末
人物 你和父母
天气 炎热、潮湿
活动 周六: 去海滩、冲浪、游泳……
周日: 参观博物馆、购物、品尝美食……
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【写作指导】
1.根据题干可知,本文是一篇记叙文。
2.文章应使用第一人称。
3.时态为一般过去时。
【写作提纲】
【写作范文】
　　①Last weekend my parents and I went to Sanya on vacation.The weather was hot and wet. On Saturday, we went to the beach.②There was much to do there.③First of all, I surfed and swam with my father.My mother enjoyed the sunshine on the beach.After that, we played volleyball together.On Sunday we went to a museum. We saw some old things there.Then we went shopping.We bought something special for my grandparents.Also, we tried some seafood in the restaurant.It tasted really delicious. ④All in all, the trip was enjoyable.Though we were tired, we learned a lot. ① Last weekend my parents and I went to Sanya on vacation.首句直接交代了事情发生的地点、时间、人物等信息。 ②There was much to do there.该句总写作者在沙滩有很多事可做。 ③First of all、 after that、 then、 also等词的使用使文章逻辑清晰。 ④All in all, the trip was enjoyable.用all in all 总写, 并且点题, 首尾呼应。
【知识拓展】
假如你是来自北京的Jack,上周末你和妈妈到上海游玩。请你根据提示及要求给爸爸写一封邮件,简述你们的活动和感受。
Activities:
Day 1: went to Shanghai Disneyland (上海迪士尼乐园)
Day 2: visited the Oriental Pearl Tower (东方明珠塔) and tried local (当地的) food
参考词汇: 机会chance; 景色scenery
要求:70词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Dad,
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We had great fun there.
Yours,
Jack