Unit 1 The Changing World 单元话题满分范文必背 2023-2024学年九年级英语上册单元重难点易错题精练（仁爱版）含解析

Unit 1 The Changing World
单元话题满分范文必背
一、材料作文
1．请根据下列内容提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈中国人口数量，以及政府在改善人们生活水平方面取得的成就。
内容提示：
1.中国有很大的人口，超过14亿人口。
2.中国做了巨大的努力来满足人们的日常需求。中国政府制定了很多合理的政策促进发展。中国变得越来越强大，人们生活水平正快速改善。
3.人们相信中国的未来会更加光明。
参考词汇：合理的政策 rational policies；工作机会 job opportunities；接受好的教育 get a good education
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【答案】例文
China is now developing faster and faster, and its population is also growing. China has a large population, more than 1.4 billion people.
China has made great efforts to meet people’s daily needs. The Chinese government has made many rational policies to promote development. It also provides more and more job opportunities for people because of the good education people get.
China is becoming stronger and stronger, and people’s living standards are improving rapidly. People believe that China’s future will be brighter.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”为主；
③提示：题干要求根据材料提示，谈谈中国人口数量，以及政府在改善人们生活水平方面取得的成就。
[写作步骤]
第一步，从总体上介绍中国的发展情况以及人口数量；
第二步，具体阐述政府在改善人们生活水平方面取得的成就；
第三步，总结全文，祝愿中国的未来会更好。
[亮点词汇]
①make great efforts to do努力做某事
②provide sth for sb为某人提供某物
③because of+名词（短语）因为
④faster and faster越来越快
[高分句型]
①The Chinese government has made many rational policies to promote development.(动词不定式作目的状语)
②It also provides more and more job opportunities for people because of the good education people get.(定语从句)
2．请根据提示写一篇题为“The Population Problem”的短文。80词左右。
提示： 1. 人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一；
2. 中国是世界上人口最多的国家；
3. 人口增长过快，将会带来许多严重的问题（请举例说明）。
The Population Problem
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【答案】例文
The Population Problem
It is reported that the world’s population is growing faster and faster. The population is one of the biggest problems in the world today. China has the largest population with more than 1.3 billion. It’s about one fifth of the world’s population. The large population causes lots of problems. There is less living space for each family, and it is difficult for lots of people to find jobs. Most cities are more crowded than before, and the traffic is much heavier. Natural environments are becoming worse and worse. I think we should take measures to control the population growth.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一以及中国是人口最多的国家等，并介绍因人口增长带来的一些问题，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
3．请根据提示写一篇题为The Population Problem的短文。（80词左右）
提示:
1.人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一；
2.中国是世界上人口最多的国家；
3.如果人口增长过快，将会带来许多严重问题（请举例说明）；
4.我们应继续执行计划生育政策，以控制人口增长。
The Population Problem
【答案】The Population Problem
The population is one of the biggest problems in the world today. China has the largest population with 1.3 billion. It has become a serious problem. A large population causes many difficulties, not only for every family, but also for the whole nation. For example, there is less living space. It’s difficult for many people to find jobs. We are short of energy and water. Most cities are more crowded than before, and the traffic is much heavier.
As far as I am concerned, we should do something to control the population. One answer is known as the one-child policy. It has worked well in controlling China’s population.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于材料作文，主要讲述当今世界上最大的问题——人口问题，并讲述人口过快增长的问题以及解决方法。注意时态的运用，并不能遗漏要点。
2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的文章，涉及到题目中所给的要点，第一段讲述人口问题、中国是世界上人口最多的国家以及带来的问题，第二段讲述采取的措施。本文时态运用准确，并运用了许多高级短语以及句型，符合英语国家的语言习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数, not only...but also..., for example, be short of, much+比较级，as far as I am concerned等。
句型：It’s difficult for many people to find jobs中it作形式主语，真正的主语为to find jobs。
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数, be short of, much+比较级，It’s difficult for many people to find jobs中it作形式主语，真正的主语为to find jobs。等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如not only...but also..., for example, as far as I am concerned等；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
4．双减背景下，家庭作业的变化是同学们关注和讨论的话题。假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike来信向你了解你校英语家庭作业的情况。请你结合下面表格内的要点用英语给他写一封回信，介绍你校英语家庭作业的变化，并谈谈你喜欢的作业类型以及原因。
过去的家庭作业 现在的家庭作业
作业量大，用时长；主要是抄写单词、背诵课文、做题等。 作业量适中，用时短；作业形式多样，如听英语歌、讲英语故事、绘制英语手抄报等。
你喜欢的作业类型和原因（至少一种）
注意：1. 词数80—100；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：recite（背诵）；amount（数量）；handwritten English newspaper（英语手抄报）
Dear Mike,
Glad to hear from you. I’m OK. You want to know something about English homework in our school. Now let me share some with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Could you please tell me something about your homework I’m looking forward to your letter again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
Glad to hear from you. I'm OK. You want to know something about English homework in our school. Now let me share some with you. Our English homework has changed a lot. Our English teacher used to give us too much homework, such as copying words, reciting texts and doing exercises. We had to stay up late to finish it. Nowadays, we just need to do proper amount of homework and it takes us a short time. Our teachers design many different kinds of English homework for us, like listening to English songs, telling English stories and making handwritten English newspapers, so we are interested in it.
For me, I like practicing conversations with my friends because it helps improve my spoken English. Meanwhile, it can also make us more confident.
Could you please tell me something about your homework I'm looking forward to your letter again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，根据表格要点提示介绍英语家庭作业的变化，以及阐述喜欢的作业类型和原因。
写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合，一般过去时用于介绍“双减政策”前的家庭作业，一般现在时用来介绍现在的家庭作业；人称用第一人称；在写作时可适当加入自己对这种变化的感受；最后结合现在的作业，写出自己最喜欢的形式以及原因。注意保持主谓一致，无语法和标点的错误。
5．以 The Changes in My Hometown为题，写一篇80字左右的短文。
过去 1.生活贫困，房屋破旧； 2.污染严重，垃圾遍地； 3.家庭成员多，父母负担不起孩子的教育；
现在 1.生活改善，住房宽敞、明亮； 2.人人保护环境，城市干净、现代 3.政府实行计划生育来控制人口，孩子都能接受教育；
将来 请你展望家乡的未来
The Changes in My Hometown
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【答案】例文
The Changes in My Hometown
In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. There are many members in families, so parents can not afford their children’s education.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Everyone protect the environment, so the environment has become much better and the city is clean and modern. Our government has carried out the family planning policy to control the population. All children can accept education.
I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇命题作文，要求以“ The Changes in My Hometown为题”为题，根据提示要点，写一篇短文，文中从三个方面来介绍了家乡的变化：过去；现在；未来。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2.例文点评：本文时态用到了一般过去时，一般现在时，现在完成时和一般将来时。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：live a poor life；can not afford，their children’s education.；become much better；carry out。
句型：and there was rubbish everywhere. ；There are many members in families, so parents can not afford their children’s education.；Our government has carried out the family planning policy to control the population.； All children can accept education.
二、电子邮件
6．假如你是李华，你们学校将组织一次主题为“用行动温暖世界”的志愿者活动，活动地点在养老院。你打算邀请你校的交换生Peter参加，请你用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动的时间、地点、内容以及需要做什么准备。
写作要求：
（1）内容包含以上信息，词数 80—100；
（2）文中已给出内容，不计入总词数；
（3）语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（4）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
How’s it going I’m writing to invite you to join us for the volunteer activity “Acts make the world warm”.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
How’s it going I’m writing to invite you to join us for the volunteer activity “Acts make the world warm”. We are going to organize the activity at the old people’s home in our neighborhood next Friday afternoon. We’ll meet at the gate of our school at 8:00 am.
As soon as we reach the old people’s home, we’ll help the old to clean their rooms first. Then we’ll have a talk with them. We’ll tell them something interesting so that they can feel happy and comfortable. At last, there will be a talent show. Some classmates will sing songs, dance and play games with them. Besides, remember to take a camera to take photos and you should prepare something that you want to give them. I’m sure you can learn a lot.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件，要求以李华的名义给Peter写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加学校组织的志愿者活动，需要将活动的时间、地点、内容以及准备事项一一列出。
2.写作指导：文章以第一人称为主，时态主要为一般将来时，注意主谓一致问题。写作时注意按要点分段叙述，第一段介绍活动的时间、地点；第二段介绍活动的安排及准备事项；最后一段作为结束语。写作时应注意英语句式结构的特点，语法应符合英语规范，用词准确。
7．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Vicky在网上看到了你校“爱心环保俱乐部”的信息，他对此很感兴趣。你作为这个俱乐部的发起人，根据以下要点用英语回复一封电子邮件，向他介绍俱乐部的爱心善举以及丰硕收获。
(1)俱乐部成员在每周四下午收集废品；
(2)我们鼓励全校师生把废品分类，如：塑料瓶、易拉罐、废纸等；
(3)我们卖掉废品,并用这些钱资助贫困地区的学生；
(4)三年来，倶乐部坚持扶贫工程，已经帮扶近百名学生；
(5)我的观点……
参考词汇：把……分类sort；易拉罐can；扶贫工程poverty reduction projects
要求：(1)词数：80-100个。
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear Vicky,
I’m glad to introduce our Love & Recycling Club to you. All our club members _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope this will be helpful to you!
Yours truly
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文：
Dear Vicky,
I’m glad to introduce our Love & Recycling Club to you. All our club memberscollect waste every Thursday afternoon. We encourage teachers and students in our school to sort waste products, such as plastic bottles, cans, waste paper and so on. We sell waste and use the money to help students in poor areas. Over the past three years, the club keeps supporting the poverty reduction projects. So far, it has helped nearly a hundred students.
I think it’s meaningful for us to raise money for the poor students for areas. I hope more people will join our club to help more people in need of help.
Hope this will be helpful to you!
Yours truly
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。按照提示材料，给笔友Vicky回复一封信来介绍俱乐部的爱心善举以及丰硕收获。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称，时态采用一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段介绍俱乐部的爱心善举及丰硕收获；第二段介绍自己的观点；最后一段表达能希望帮到对方。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
三、话题作文
8．成长是一种蜕变，在跌跌撞撞中成就更好的自己。你可能学会了一项新技能，或者掌握了新知识，也可能是养成了一种好习惯。请选择一个方面谈谈你成长改变的经历以及收获。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所有的内容要点；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
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【答案】例文
In the final exam of the ninth grade, I got the first place in my class. I have regained my confidence. I believe everything is easy.
In the seventh grade, I was crazy about computer games. At that time, I went to bed very late every night. I couldn’t get up in the morning. I slept in class and didn’t listen carefully. So I failed the exam. I felt that my classmates looked down on me, and my teachers and parents worried about me. Later, I realized that this was not good. I began to ask my teachers and my good friends for help. Since then, I didn’t play computer games anymore. I developed good learning habits.
I studied hard and achieved my dreams.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，话题作文，谈谈你成长改变的经历以及收获；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作时，围绕话题进行叙述，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题（总写）。我获得了第一名，认为一切很简单；
第二步，叙述成长改变的经历；
第三步，谈谈收获，结尾。努力学习，实现了梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①In the final exam of在……的期末考试中
②get the first place获得第一名
③be crazy about迷恋
④look down on瞧不起
⑤ask … for help请求帮助
⑥develop good learning habits养成良好的学习习惯
⑦study hard and achieve dreams努力学习，实现梦想
[高分句型]
I felt that my classmates looked down on me, and my teachers and parents worried about me.（宾语从句）
9．时光飞逝，转眼我们都长大了，现在的你与过去相比，一定有许多的变化吧？请以“How I have changed!”为题描述自己这几年的变化，写一篇80词左右的文章。
内容包括：
1. 从外貌、性格、爱好三个方面描述你的变化；
2. 介绍一个重要的变化、变化过程和原因。
要求：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
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【答案】例文
How I have changed!
Time goes by. I grow up and I have changed a lot in the last few years.
I used to be short, but I am much taller now. I used to be very shy and quiet. When I talked to people, my face often red. Now I am much more outgoing. As for my hobby, I used to like reading but I am more interested in sports. That’s because doing sports is not only exciting but also good for my health. I think the biggest change is that I study harder than before. Two years ago, the head teacher talked to me in person and he let me know the importance of study. From then on, I decided to make some change.
Generally speaking, people change and I believe my life will be better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。
③提示：话题和写作内容已给出，考生应紧扣话题“How I have changed!”，且不能遗漏写作内容，写作时考生应适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开篇引出我的变化这一话题。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述自己外貌、性格、爱好三个方面的变化，并介绍一个重要的变化、变化过程和原因。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己会变得越来越好的希望。
[高分词汇]
① used to be 过去是
② be interested in 对……感兴趣
③ Generally speaking 一般来说
[高分句型]
①As for my hobby, I used to like reading but I am more interested in sports. （使用but连接前后句，表转折；使用比较级more+多音节形容词）
②That’s because doing sports is not only exciting but also good for my health. （使用句型：That’s because+句子；使用连词not only...but also）
四、书信作文
五、讲稿
10．随着科技的发展，人们的生活会发生巨大的变化。学校的科艺节将举行一场以Fuzhou in 10 years为题的演讲比赛。请用英文写一篇演讲稿，结合下图谈谈你对福州未来生活的设想。
写作要点:
1.结合图意，围绕城市环境、出行方式、智能生活以及自己的想象展开叙述。
2.字数90词左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数。
3.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
Fuzhou in 10 years
With the development of technology, the life in Fuzhou will be different. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】参考范文:
Fuzhou in 10 years
With the development of technology, the life in Fuzhou will be different. We will live in greener cities.
There are more trees and electric cars. Our transportation will be easier and faster. By then, there may be flying cars. Make our travel time shorter. Travel is more convenient. We will also live in an intelligent house, and robots will do what we need for us. I also hope to travel to the moon in the future. In a word, life in 10 years will be better than it is now. I will try my best to make it possible to have a better life!
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据图片提示要点，畅想十年后的福州会是怎样的，从不同的方面进行畅想，结合图片加以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
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