(共18张PPT)
感知文体常识
如何写诗评
诗评是对诗歌的评论。写诗评通常包含三个步骤:首先介绍诗作和诗人;其次,分析和评价这首诗的艺术特点,如韵律、形象、比喻手法、点睛之处等;最后分析作者想要表达的情感。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.image n.意象
2.sound n.语音
3.rhythm n.节奏
4.rhyme n.韵,押韵
5.pattern n.模式
6.impressive adj.给人印象深刻的
7.poet n.诗人
8.interpret v.诠释
9.poem n.诗歌
10.bring out使显现
(二)精彩句型
1.The poet compares his sweet heart to a red rose and sweet music.
诗人把他的心上人比作红色的玫瑰花和悦耳的音乐。
2.The poem is so impressive that I will remember it forever.
这首诗给人印象深刻,所以我会永远记住它。
3.The poem has touched my heartstring so I can have a better understanding of it.
这首诗触动了我的心弦,所以我能更好地理解它。
4.This poem conveys the author’s sadness at being far from his home and family.
这首诗表达了作者远离家乡和家人的悲伤。
5.Many of his poems reflect the history and culture,giving you vivid pictures of people’s life hundreds of years ago.
他的许多诗反映了历史和文化,生动描述了几百年前的人们的生活。
6.His poems enjoy great popularity at home and abroad.
他的诗在国内外都很受欢迎。
7.He often used rural scenes to explore deep questions.
他经常利用乡村场景来探索深层次的问题。
8.The poem shows the truth that all real and beautiful things will disappear gradually.
这首诗揭示了一切真切而美好的事物最终定会逐渐消失的哲理。
9.The poet uses simile to express the strong affection which cannot be controlled.
诗人用明喻来表达难以控制的强烈的爱。
10.The writer indicates the changes of seasons using unique techniques.
作者使用了独特的技巧来表现季节的变化。
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
阅读下面美国诗人Ralph Emerson的诗歌A Nation’s Strength节选,写一篇诗评,发表在校英文报上。内容应包括:
1.诗歌的作者;
2.简要介绍这首诗的内容;
3.这首诗对你的启发。
注意:词数80左右。
A Nation’s Strength
(excerpt)
Not gold but only men can make
A people great and strong;
Men who for truth and honor’s sake
Stand fast and suffer long.
Brave men who work while others sleep,
Who dare while others fly...
They build a nation’s pillars deep
And lift them to the sky.
【审题谋篇】
体裁 诗评
人称 第三人称
时态 一般现在时
话题 评价A Nation’s Strength这首诗
框架 第一段 简单介绍诗人和这首诗
第二段 分析和评价这首诗
第三段 你对这首诗的理解以及你个人的经历或感情
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1) n.脊柱
(2) 为了;为了……的利益
(3) adv.无私地
(4) adv.勇敢地;大胆地
(5) 依我看
(6) v.值得,应受
(7) 下决心做……
(8) 为……奉献我的一生
(9) adj.确信的;坚信不疑的
(10) adj.繁荣的,富足的
backbone
for the sake of
selflessly
fearlessly
from my perspective
deserve
be determined to do
devote my whole life to...
convinced
prosperous
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①《国家的力量》这首诗是美国诗人拉尔夫·爱默生写的。
The poem A Nation’s Strength was written by American poet Ralph Emerson.
②在这首诗中,爱默生对他的国家的脊梁充满了赞美。
In this poem,Emerson is his nation.
③他的人民为了真理和荣誉,无私无畏地战斗和工作。
His people fight and work selflessly and fearlessly,______________________
.
full of praise for the backbone of
for the sake of the truth
and honor
④在我看来,这些民族英雄确实值得我们尊敬。
,these national heroes really .
⑤我决心把我的一生奉献给我的国家。
I my own country.
⑥我相信,随着许多年轻人的奉献,我们的国家一定会变得更加繁荣。
I believe our country ______________________________________________
.
From my perspective
deserve our respect
am determined to devote my whole life to
is sure to become more prosperous with the dedication
of many young people
(2)句式升级
⑦用定语从句改写句②和句③
⑧用连词and及convinced后跟宾语从句改写句⑤和句⑥
In this poem,Emerson is full of praise for the backbone of his nation,whose people,for the sake of the truth and honor,fight and work selflessly and fearlessly.
I am determined to devote my whole life to my own country and I am convinced that with the dedication of many young people,our country is sure to become more prosperous.
【妙笔成篇】
The poem A Nation’s Strength was written by American poet Ralph Emerson.In this poem,Emerson is full of praise for the backbone of his nation, whose people,for the sake of the truth and honor,fight and work selflessly and fearlessly.
From my perspective,these national heroes really deserve our respect.I am determined to devote my whole life to my own country and I am convinced that with the dedication of many young people,our country is sure to become more prosperous.
针对训练
假如你是李华,老师让你读下面的英国浪漫主义民主诗人珀西·比希·雪莱(Percy Bysshe Shelley)写的一首诗,并且写出你对这首诗Ozymandias(《奥兹曼迪亚斯》)的理解。Ozymandias曾经是一位威武的埃及法老(国王)。
词数:80左右。
提示词:arrogant 傲慢的
Ozymandias
I met a traveller from an antique land
Who said:Two vast and trunkless legs of stone
Stand in the desert.Near them on the sand,
Half sunk,a shattered visage lies,whose frown
And wrinkled lip and sneer of cold command
Tell that its sculptor well those passions read
Which yet survive,stamped on these lifeless things,
The hand that mocked them and the heart that fed.
And on the pedestal these words appear:
“My name is Ozymandias,King of Kings:
Look on my works,ye Mighty,and despair!”
Nothing beside remains.Round the decay
Of that colossal wreck,boundless and bare,
The lone and level sands stretch far away.
I met a traveller from an antique land.
Percy Bysshe Shelley was one of the major romantic British poets.This poem Ozymandias brings us to a totally different world,one full of arrogance and death.
I seem to hear the sound “My name is Ozymandias,King of Kings:Look on my works,ye Mighty,and despair!” The voice whistles down through the fierce wind and makes a person shiver.There is no doubt that the monologue brings out an arrogant and overconfident side of Ozymandias.
The strong images impress me deeply.What the poem aims to tell us is that anything including power can’t be everlasting.For example,once I was weak,but now I have become strong.(共15张PPT)
感知文体常识
介绍最喜爱的食物
美食介绍类的文章多为说明文。介绍中国传统美食,如饺子、粽子等,可以从外观、营养、味道等方面进行介绍,再进行适当扩充,如表达自己的观点态度等。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.a traditional Chinese food一种中国传统食物
2.be rich/high in...富含……
3.be made of/from...由……做成
4.date back to.../date from...追溯到……
5.symbolize the full moon象征着满月
6.stand for代表
7.appeal to对……有吸引力
8.be popular with很受……的欢迎
(二)精彩句型
1.There are several reasons for its popularity.
它的流行有几点原因。
2.The traditional and unique soup dumplings are its specialty,which you can feast on.
独特的传统汤包是它的特色菜,你可以尽情享用。
3.As for the cooking methods people usually use,frying,baking and boiling are among the very common ones.
至于人们通常使用的烹饪方法,煎炸、烘焙和蒸煮是很常见的。
4.All these diverse and delicate dishes remind people of the cook’s nimble fingers and rich imagination.
这些花样众多的精致菜肴无不让人想到厨师灵巧的手指和丰富的想象力。
5.In my opinion,food is always connected with people,reflecting their different living situations and attitudes.
在我看来,食物总是与人联系在一起,反映出人们不同的生活状况和生活态度。
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
请你用英语介绍最喜欢的中国传统美食,说明其食材、做法和代表的文化内涵。
要求:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【审题谋篇】
体裁 说明文
人称 第三人称
时态 一般现在时
话题 介绍最喜欢的中国传统美食——中国饺子
框架 第一段 介绍最喜欢的食物
第二段 喜欢的原因
第三段 自己的感受
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1) 中国饺子
(2) adj.传统的
n.传统
(3) adj.非常必要的
(4) 准备
(5) 切成碎片
(6) v.混合
(7) v.象征
(8) 与……相似
Jiaozi—Chinese Dumpling
traditional
tradition
essential
get ready for
cut into pieces
mix
symbolize
be similar to
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①饺子是一种中国的传统食品。
Chinese dumpling is a Chinese food.
②在中国北方的节日里,它是必不可少的。
It is during holidays in northern China.
③你应该准备好材料,如面粉、水、蔬菜和肉,把它们尽可能地切成小块,并把它们混合在一起。
You should the materials,such as flour,water, vegetables and meat, small pieces as possible as you can and them together.
traditional
essential
get ready for
cut them into
mix
④饺子象征着财富。
Chinese dumpling wealth.
⑤它的形状类似于中国古代的金银元宝。
Its shape ancient Chinese gold or silver ingots.
⑥它是中国文化和传统的一部分。
It is the Chinese culture and .
symbolizes
is similar to
part of
tradition
(2)句式升级
⑦用非限制性定语从句改写句①、句②
⑧用since和and改写句④、句⑤、句⑥
Chinese dumpling is a traditional Chinese food,which is essential during holidays in northern China.
Chinese dumpling symbolizes wealth since its shape is similar to ancient Chinese gold or silver ingots and it is part of the Chinese culture and tradition.
【妙笔成篇】
Chinese Dumpling
Chinese dumpling is a traditional Chinese food,which is essential during holidays in northern China.
Firstly,you should get ready for the materials,such as flour,water, vegetables and meat,cut them into small pieces as possible as you can and mix them together.Secondly,knead a dough,cut it into small ones and roll them into dumpling wrappers.Thirdly,make dumplings with the stuffing and dumpling wrappers one by one.
Chinese dumpling symbolizes wealth since its shape is similar to ancient Chinese gold or silver ingots and it is part of the Chinese culture and tradition.
针对训练
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Jonah对中国美食很感兴趣,来信询问你家乡的特色饮食。请根据以下要点给他回一封邮件。内容包括:
1.推荐一种美食;
2.简要介绍其特色;
3.邀请他来品尝。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jonah,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jonah,
Hearing you are interested in Chinese food,I’d like to recommend a well-known dish—Gong Bao Chicken to you.
As one of the most popular dishes in my hometown,Gong Bao Chicken is made of chicken breast,roasted peanuts,small pieces of tofu,dried chillis and onions.Cooked with sugar,salt and vinegar,it has a combination of sweet and sour taste,which is loved by both the young and the old.
I would like to extend my sincere welcome to you to pay a visit to China, during which I will show you around.We’ll try this delicious dish and other famous local cuisines.Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua(共15张PPT)
感知文体常识
介绍喜欢的歌手或乐队
介绍歌手或乐队类文章,常用生动、形象的语言将人物活灵活现地刻画出来。写这类文章时,常用第三人称,时态以一般现在时与一般过去时为主。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.extraordinary adj.不寻常的,非凡的;意想不到的,令人惊奇的
2.can’t wait to do sth 迫不及待地做某事
3.cheer up 使振奋
4.feel relaxed 感到放松
5.reduce the pressure 减轻压力
6.float into one’s mind 在某人心中浮现
7.have a great influence on/upon... 对……有很大的影响
8.gain popularity among...在……中受欢迎
(二)精彩句型
1.When it comes to a popular singer in my country,I’d like to introduce a singer called...
说到我国的流行歌手,我想介绍一位歌手,他叫……
2.It is truly a spiritual enjoyment to listen to his songs.
听他的歌真是一种精神享受。
3.He is a very successful and well-known singer around the world for the last three decades.
在过去的三十年里,他是一名非常成功和著名的歌手。
4.His musical style is full of change and excitement.His songs include...
他的音乐风格充满了变化和刺激。 他的歌曲包括……
5.He has fans of different ages and of different musical tastes.
他的歌迷年龄和音乐品味各不相同。
6.Many of his songs have become parts of my life and memory.
他的许多歌曲已经成为我生活和记忆的一部分。
7.It sounds very nice and pure and can bring people into the dream land.Just relax,and forget all the problems.
它听起来非常美好和纯净,可以把人们带进梦幻之地。只是放松,忘记所有的问题。
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
请你以“我最喜爱的歌手或乐队”为题写一篇短文。内容如下:
1.你最喜欢的歌手或乐队是什么;
2.简单介绍该歌手或乐队;
3.喜欢的理由。
注意:1.词数80 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【审题谋篇】
体裁 说明文
人称 第三人称
时态 一般现在时和一般过去时
话题 最喜欢的歌手或乐队
框架 第一段 介绍歌手或乐队的基本信息
第二段 阐述该歌手或乐队的音乐特点以及对你的影响
第三段 解释你最爱的原因
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1) adj.最喜欢的
(2) adj.受欢迎的
(3) 参加
(4) n.冠军
(5) n.旋律
favourite
popular
participate in
championship
melody
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①我最喜欢的歌手是毛不易,他很受年轻人欢迎。
My favourite singer is Mao Buyi,and he young people.
②他的歌曲以节奏缓慢、旋律优美而闻名。
His songs being slow and melodious.
③2017年他参加了一档选秀节目,获得全国总决赛冠军。
In 2017,he a talent show and won the national final championship.
is very popular among
are well known for
participated in
④2018年,他获得了年度音乐新力量奖。
In 2018,he the Annual Music New Power Award.
⑤同年,他获得了年度音乐人荣誉。
,he won Musician of the Year.
⑥我非常喜欢他的歌,经常在走路的时候听。
I like his songs very much and often listen to them .
won
In the same year
while I am walking
(2)句式升级
⑦用定语从句改写句①和句②
⑧用并列句合并句④和句⑤
⑨用状语从句的省略改写句⑥
My favourite singer is Mao Buyi,very popular among young people,whose songs are well known for being slow and melodious.
In 2018,he won the Annual Music New Power Award and Musician of the Year.
I like his songs very much and often listen to them while walking.
【妙笔成篇】
My favourite singer is Mao Buyi,very popular among young people, whose songs are well known for being slow and melodious.He is from Heilongjiang Province.
In 2017,he participated in a talent show and won the national final championship.In 2018,he won the Annual Music New Power Award and Musician of the Year.
I like his songs very much and often listen to them while walking.His songs let me enjoy the beautiful melody and the beauty of the sound.
针对训练
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Alice在给你的邮件中提到她最近对音乐很感兴趣,想请你介绍一下你最喜欢的歌手或乐队,请你给Alice写一封回信,要点如下:
1.你最喜欢的歌手或乐队是哪一个;
2.简单介绍该歌手或乐队;
3.喜欢的理由。
注意:1.词数80 左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Alice,
I’m very glad to hear from you.As for my favourite band,it must be the Beatles,a rock and roll group from England.The Beatles invaded America in 1964 and released their first album in the United States.No matter what their new songs were,they could definitely hit the jackpot,making the listeners crazy about them.The Beatles looked different and sounded different from any other musical group before them.They are so charming and fantastic that I can sing most of their songs.
If you want to know more,please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua (共17张PPT)
感知文体常识
如何制作一件艺术作品
写如何制作一件艺术作品属于说明文,语言要简练明确。首先要清晰地说明你需要的材料,然后列出制作步骤。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.tool n.工具
2.material n.材料,素材
3.arrange v.安排;整理;布置
4.procedure n.步骤;程序
5.a piece of一片,一块;一张
6.firstly/to begin with/to start with首先
7.the next step下一步
8.finally/lastly/in the end最后,终于
(二)精彩句型
1.Have you ever tried to make art out of wood
你试过用木头做艺术品吗
2.Follow the steps below to make it.
按照下面的步骤来做。
3.There are endless possibilities for the works you create.
你创作的作品有无限的可能性。
4.Cut them into pieces.
把它们切成小块。
5.Decide what image you want to create.
决定你想要创造什么样的形像。
6.Display your work on the wall.把你的作品挂在墙上。
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
假如你是李华,请你用英语写一篇“如何用树叶做一幅小金鱼画”的小短文,步骤如下:
首先收集各种形状和大小的红、黄、绿树叶。选择小红叶做金鱼的嘴唇,然后从其他红叶上剪下小圈做金鱼的眼睛。用黄叶制作鱼的身体、鳍和尾巴。用剪刀剪需要的形状,用剩下的叶子做水草。把叶子排列在一张纸上,创造金鱼在五彩的水中植物中游泳的形象。把叶子粘在纸上。
注意:词数80左右。
【审题谋篇】
体裁 说明文
人称 第二人称
时态 一般现在时
话题 如何制作一件艺术作品
框架 第一段 说明要制作的作品
第二段 需要的材料和步骤
第三段 如何处理制作好的作品
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1)a piece of 一件艺术品
(2) n.池塘
(3) n.剪刀
(4) n.胶水 v.粘贴
(5) adj.各种各样的
(6) v.选择
(7) adj.合适的
(8) v.安排;布置
(9) n.杰作
artwork
pond
scissors
glue
various
select
appropriate
arrange
masterpiece
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①当我们在当地的公园或校园里散步时,我们经常会看到五颜六色的落叶。
We often find colourful fallen leaves _________________________________
.
②你有没有想过把它们收集起来做成一件艺术品
Have you ever thought about _______________________________________
③根据你找到的树叶的颜色、形状和大小,你可以创建各种各样的图片。
,shapes and sizes of the leaves ,
you can create various pictures.
when we walk in the local park
or on campus
collecting them and making them into a
piece of artwork
Depending on the colours
you find
④我们要作一张独特的图片,展示美丽的金鱼在池塘里游泳,里面有五颜六色的水草!
We are going to make a unique picture _______________________________
!
⑤选择小红叶做金鱼的嘴唇,然后从其他红叶上剪下小圈做金鱼的眼睛。
Select small red leaves to be the lips of the fish and then cut small circles from some of the other red leaves .
⑥找到合适的叶子,最好是黄色的,来制作鱼的身体、鳍和尾巴。
Find appropriate leaves,preferably yellow in colour,_____________________
.
to show beautiful goldfish which is
swimming in a pond with colourful water plants in it
to make the eyes of the goldfish
to make the bodies,
fins and tails of the fish
⑦如果叶子的形状不对,就用剪刀剪。 用剩下的叶子做水草。
If the leaves are not the right shape, .Use the rest of the leaves as water plants.
⑧把你的叶子排列在一张纸上,创造金鱼在五颜六色的水生植物中游泳的形象。把叶子粘在纸上。
Arrange your leaves on a piece of paper to create the image of goldfish
.Glue the leaves to the paper.
cut them with scissors
swimming among the colourful water plants
(2)句式升级
⑨用状语从句的省略改写句①
⑩用分词短语作定语改写句④
When walking in the local park or on campus,we often find colourful fallen leaves.
We are going to make a unique picture showing beautiful goldfish swimming in a pond with colourful water plants in it!
【妙笔成篇】
When walking in the local park or on campus,we often find colourful fallen leaves.Have you ever thought about collecting them and making them into a piece of artwork Depending on the colours,shapes and sizes of the leaves you find,you can create various pictures.We are going to make a unique picture showing beautiful goldfish swimming in a pond with colourful water plants in it!
How to make a unique picture with leaves
Materials and tools:
◆Leaves of different colours,shapes and sizes
◆Scissors
◆Glue
◆A piece of A4-size paper
Procedures:
Step 1:Collect red,yellow and green leaves of various shapes and sizes.
Step 2:Select small red leaves to be the lips of the fish and then cut small circles from some of the other red leaves to make the eyes of the goldfish.
Step 3:Find appropriate leaves,preferably yellow in colour,to make the bodies, fins and tails of the fish.If the leaves are not the right shape,cut them with scissors.Use the rest of the leaves as water plants.
Step 4:Arrange your leaves on a piece of paper to create the image of goldfish swimming among the colourful water plants.
Step 5:Glue the leaves to the paper.
Once everything is dry,show your unique masterpiece to your classmates!
针对训练
假如你是李华,请你用英语写一篇“如何做水果沙拉”的小短文,步骤如下:
首先把三根香蕉、三个苹果和三个梨切成块,接着把水果放到一个碗中,然后在碗中放入两勺沙拉,最后,把所有的东西搅拌一下,一盘美味的水果沙拉就做好了。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
How to Make Fruit Salad
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How to Make Fruit Salad
Fruit salad is many people’s favourite because it is not only easy to make but tastes delicious.
Things you need:
◆Three bananas,three apples and three pears
◆Salad
◆A bowl
◆A knife
◆A plate
Procedures:
Step 1:Wash the fruit and cut them into pieces.
Step 2:Put all the pieces of fruit into a bowl and add two spoons of salad to them.
Step 3:Mix the fruit and salad in the bowl.
Step 4:Pour the fruit salad in a plate.
Now you can eat it.But before you do,make sure you take a photo of it.That way,you will enjoy your work later.
