Unit 2 Saving the earth.单元话题满分范文必背（含答案）2023-2024学年九年级英语上册单元重难点易错题精练（仁爱版）

Unit 2 Saving the Earth
单元话题满分范文必背
一、材料作文
1．（2023秋·福建龙岩·九年级统考期中）假如你是李华，近日你校正在开展建设绿色校园的活动，校英文报现面向全校学生征文，请大家谈谈校园中存在的一些环保问题。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文进行投稿。
要求：(1) 要点齐全、语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范；
(2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3) 字数80词 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
The Green School Project has become part of the environmental education in our school. However, there are still some problems. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
The Green School Project has become part of the environmental education in our school. However, there are still some problems. Some students throw away soft drink bottles. And some students leave the water running or lights on. They are both a waste of energy.
In order to solve these problems, it’s necessary to make students realize the importance of environmental protection. For example, we can put up some posters or give some speeches to stop littering. Also, we can encourage students to do small things like saving water and paper. What’s more, we should always remember to turn off the lights when we leave the classroom.
I think it’s important to build a green school because a beautiful school environment makes everyone happy and comfortable. I believe our school will become better and better if we try our best.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，注意不要遗漏关键问题，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，描述校园存在的环境问题；
第二步，提出具体的办法来解决这些问题；
第三步，说明建设绿色校园的重要性，祝福校园环境在大家的努力下越来越好。
[亮点词汇]
①throw away扔掉
②a waste of energy浪费能源
③In order to为了
④put up张贴
⑤turn off关闭
[高分句型]
①It’s necessary to make students realize the importance of environmental protection.(it作形式主语的句型)
②What’s more, we should always remember to turn off the lights when we leave the classroom.(含有时间状语从句的复合句)
2．（2023·福建福州·福建省福州铜盘中学校考模拟预测）六月，全国节能宣传周和全国低碳日活动的主题是“践行节能低碳，建设美丽家园”。请以“共建文明城市，低碳生活我先行”为主题，根据以下要点提示，写一篇倡议书。词数80左右。
主题 Let’s create a civilized city together
具体做法 ways benifits
1.ride, walk reduce, save...
2.throw, spit clean...
3.plant beautiful, environment...
你的建议 联系生活实际提出至少2条合理的建议。
注意事项：
1）根据要点提示，可适当发挥（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3）文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
Let’s create a civilized city together
As middle school students, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city.
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【答案】例文：
Let’s create a civilized city together
As middle school students, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city.
We can reduce air pollution by riding bikes or walking. It can also save energy. We mustn’t throw rubbish or spit anywhere. In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a comfortable life. And we’d better plant more trees to protect the environment and make our city beautiful.
In my daily life, I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. I can turn off the lights when leaving the room. Actions speak louder than words. Let’s take an active part in creating a civilized city.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的时态以一般现在时为主；
③提示：注意具体做法要点已给出，注意衔接顺畅，建议不能少于两点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述建造一个文明的城市是我们的责任；
第二步，详细说如何做；
第三步，给出的两点建议。
[亮点词汇]
①in this way使用这种方法
②so that为了
[高分句型]
①In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a comfortable life.（表目的的状语从句）
②Actions speak louder than words.（谚语：行动胜于言语）
3．（2023·福建泉州·统考三模）在6月5日“世界环境日”到来之际，你们社区打算举行义卖活动为绿化小区环境出一份力。请你根据以下提示写一篇 80词左右的倡议书，呼吁更多人参与。
Time afternoon of June 1st
Place the community gate
Items school things, toys, clothes...
Purposes raise money to plant more trees and flowers ...
要求：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2.所有提示须全部用上，并作适当发挥；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。
Dear friends,
As we all know, green community means environment-friendly community. It’s time to do our part.
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【答案】例文：
Dear friends,
As we all know, green community means environment-friendly community. It’s time to do our part. We plan to hold a charity sale at the community gate in the afternoon of June 1st to contribute to the greening of the community environment. We have a lot of everyday things here, such as school things, toys, clothes and books. Of course, if you have the time, we also need some volunteers for this event. The money we raised was for planting more trees and flowers. I hope everyone can actively participate in the construction of the community and contribute their own strength.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中时间、地点，物品和目的的介绍，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，具体介绍活动；
第二步，介绍了活动的目的；
第三步，呼吁人们参与。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②of course当然
[高分句型]
① I hope everyone can actively participate in the construction of the community and contribute their own strength.（宾语从句）
② The money we raised was for planting more trees and flowers.（定语从句）
4．（2021秋·福建龙岩·九年级统考期中）保护环境，人人有责。作为中学生，我们可以从身边的小事做起。请你根据下面的表格内容给你们学校的英语校刊投稿，号召大家提高环保意识。
Problems fewer trees and polluted rivers
Methods reuse textbooks, save electricity, use fewer plastic products …
Feelings …
要求：
1. 短文须包括表格中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：80（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
As we know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Possible version:
As we know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. Some people cut down too many trees. And rivers are badly polluted by waste water from factories.
Though we are just students, we can still do a little bit to help reduce these environmental problems. Firstly, we can reuse old textbooks at school. It helps save trees. Secondly, we should shut off lights before leaving classrooms. It helps save energy. Thirdly, we can use fewer plastic products. It’s a good way to reduce plastic pollution. Finally, We should save every drop of water.
In a word, we ought to make less pollution and save more energy. If everyone does a little bit for the cleaner earth, we can make the planet a better place to live.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：本题给出了部分提示，考生需注意对“Methods”部分要展开论述，以及对“Feelings”部分进行适当的发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：阐述当前环境所面临的问题；
第二步：具体介绍作为中学生可以采取的措施；
第三步：表达自己的感受和愿景。
[亮点词汇]
① cut down 砍倒
② badly 严重地
③ a little bit 一点点
④ in a word 总之
[高分句型]
① And rivers are badly polluted by waste water from factories.（一般现在时的被动语态）
② It’s a good way to reduce plastic pollution. （不定式作定语）
③ If everyone does a little bit for the cleaner earth, we can make the planet a better place to live.（if条件句）
5．（2021秋·福建福州·九年级统考期中）假设你是某“学生”，昨天在街上乱丢垃圾，被环卫人员发现并被告知要注意环保。请以此事为题材写一篇记叙文，略谈自己对这件事的感想，并就如何保护环境发表四点看法。
参考词汇： from somewhere, dustman(环卫人员), feel shameful(羞耻), realize(意识到)
注意事项：
1、包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2、意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范，词数 80 左右；
3、请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Yesterday when I was walking on the street, I threw some rubbish about. Just as I was leaving, I heard….__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Yesterday when I was walking on the street, I threw some rubbish about. Just as I was leaving, I heard someone shouting at me from somewhere. I found he was a dustman. He told me to protect the environment. I felt very shameful. I realized I have done something wrong. I think this city is our home. It is our duty to protect the environment.
As a student, I think we shouldn’t throw about the rubbish. We should reuse water and recycle used paper and plastic bags. We should turn off the electricity when we leave the room.
Please love our environment from now on.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，写自己的一次经历；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括自己的行为以及通过这次行为受到的教育等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的具体的行为以及对自己的懊悔；
第二步，介绍作为一名学生应该如何保护环境；
第三步，最后呼吁人们都要保护环境。
[亮点词汇]
① shout at对……大喊
② tell sb to do sth告诉某人做某事
③ turn off关闭
[高分句型]
① Yesterday when I was walking on the street, I threw some rubbish about.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I think this city is our home.（省略that的宾语从句）
二、讲稿
6．（2022春·福建厦门·九年级厦门市华侨中学校考期中）地球生态环境日益恶化，一系列遭受破坏的自然现象向人类敲响了警钟。保护环境，刻不容缓。在世界环境活动日期间，你校英语社团开展了以”Save Our Planet”为题的英语演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿参加本次活动。
SAVE OUR PLANET A speech competition will be held in the school hall. Each student is welcome to take part in the competition. Talk about the environmental problems around us. Tell us how to solve the e and join us!
要求：词数 80 词以上。
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【答案】例文
Dear friends,
We all live on the earth and we share the same planet. But there are many kinds of environment problems around us. These have done great harm to our earth and it’s our duty to protect it. We should plant more tress and prevent factories from pouring waste water into rivers and fields. We must do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy. We shouldn’t leave rubbish everywhere. We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. If everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the planet will become much more beautiful and our life will be better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍环境污染的严重性；
第二步，介绍如何保护环境。
[亮点词汇]
①prevent…from doing sth阻止……做某事
②pour into倒入
③try one’s best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事
[高分句型]
①But there are many kinds of environment problems around us（there be句型）
7．（2022秋·福建福州·九年级统考期中）保护环境，人人有责，杜绝污染，从我做起。假如你是本周的值日班长，请你根据下面表格中的提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，告诉同学们，作为中学生应该怎样保护环境，杜绝污染。
Things we should do Things we should not do
put rubbish into the dustbin throw rubbish everywhere
reuse/recycle paper and plastic bottles burn paper or plastic bags
pour waste water into drains(下水道) pour waste water on healthy soil
(补充) … (补充) …
要求：
1. 语句通顺，条理清楚，书写规范。
2. 80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear classmates,
I’m happy to be this week’s monitor on duty. As we all know, it’s very important for us to protect the environment.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s take action as soon as possible to protect our environment.
That’s all. Thanks.
【答案】例文
Dear classmates,
I’m happy to be this week’s monitor on duty. As we all know, it’s very important for us to protect the environment. As middle school students, there is something that we should do and something we should not do. Above all, we should never throw rubbish everywhere. We should put it into the dustbin. We can reuse or recycle paper and plastic bottles instead of burning them. We should not pour waste water on healthy soil because it can cause soil pollution. We should pour it into drains. To save energy and avoid light pollution, we should turn off the lights when there are no people in the classroom. We should never leave the classroom with the lights on.
Let’s take action as soon as possible to protect our environment.
That’s all. Thanks.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍我们应该做的；
第二步，介绍我们不应该做的。
[亮点词汇]
①as we all know众所周知
②above all首先
③instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①We should not pour waste water on healthy soil because it can cause soil pollution.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②To save energy and avoid light pollution（动词不定式作目的状语）
8．（2021秋·福建南平·九年级福建省南平第一中学校考期中）我校正在创建文明 (civilized) 校园，号召每一位同学积极参与，贡献自己的一份力量，让我们的校园更加文明和谐。请根据表格中的内容，以“How to Create Civilized School”为题，写一篇80词左右的倡议书。要求必须用上表格中的所有信息，语句通顺，书写规范。
Dear students,
School is our second home. It’s our duty to create civilized school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you.
【答案】范文：
Dear students,
School is our second home. It’s our duty to create civilized school. As students, we should do everything we can to achieve the dream. First of all, we should obey the schoolrules. For example, we’d better go to school on time. Don’t be late for class. Second, we ought to protect the environment. We are supposed to use both sides of paper. We ought to shut off the lights when we leave the classroom. Don’t waste water. We shouldn’t pick flowers or step on grass. Last but not least, it’s important for us to be polite to others. We should respect our teachers and help our classmates in need.
I hope our school will be more and more civilized and beautiful.
That’s all, Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“省略号部分”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明创建文明校园是大家的责任；
第二步，具体阐述创建文明校园大家应该具体怎么做；
第三步，书写结语，祝福校园在大家的努力下越来越好。
[亮点词汇]
① First of all首先
②had better do sth. 最好做某事
③ be supposed to应该
④ in need有需要的
[高分句型]
① we should do everything we can to achieve the dream.(含有定语从句的复合句)
② We ought to shut off the lights when we leave the classroom.(含有时间状语从句的复合句)
9．（2021秋·福建龙岩·九年级统考期中）假如你是李华，你校拟举行以“共建美丽家园”为主题的英文演讲比赛。请你根据下表提示，写一篇80词左右的演讲稿参赛。
主 题 Build green and beautiful hometown together
具体做法 绿色出行，避免交通拥堵，减少空气污染； 不乱扔垃圾，让家园变得干净舒适； 植树造林，美化家园，保护环境。
你的建议 ……
注意事项：1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
提示词：垃圾箱dustbin；交通拥堵traffic jams
Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. Today I’d like to share my opinions on “Build green and beautiful hometown together”. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Hua. Today I’d like to share my opinions on “Build green and beautiful hometown together”.
As middle school students, it’s our duty to help build a green and beautiful hometown. First, we can ride bikes or walk to school if it’s not far away from our homes. The more people choose the public transportation, the fewer traffic jams there will be and the cleaner the air will be. Second, we mustn’t throw rubbish here and there. We must throw them into the dustbin. If so, our hometown will be clean and tidy. We will feel more comforable, too. Third, plant more trees. Trees are important to the environment. They can make the air much fresher.
We should do everything we can to protect the environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的写作要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤
]第一步，介绍共建美丽家园的具体做法；
第二步，提出自己的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①far away from远离
②traffic jam交通堵塞
③here and there到处
[高分句型]
①it’s our duty to help build a green and beautiful hometown.（动词不定式作主语）
②we can ride bikes or walk to school if it’s not far away from our homes.（if引导的条件状语从句）
三、电子邮件
10．（2021秋·福建泉州·九年级统考期中）假如你是李华，最近你的美国笔友Tom谈及自己学校在提倡绿色生活，询问你有何建议。请你根据导图提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1.回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数;
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Tom,
I’m happy to know your school encourages you to live a green life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope all of these can be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m happy to know your school encourages you to live a green life. I think it’s meaningful for everyone and here are some suggestions for you.
To start with, you ought to choose the right way to travel around. For example, you’d better take the bus to school instead of taking a car, and it’s also a good idea to ride a bike. Then, in order to save energy, you should turn off the lights and shut off the TV when you don’t use them. In addition, why not plant more trees and flowers They can make the air fresher and bring you good feelings, too. Last but not least, when you go to the supermarket, you can use cloth bags rather than plastic bags.
I hope all of these can be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文写作，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据思维导图中的写作要点，谈谈你对过绿色生活有什么好的建议，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，邮件开头已给出，承接上文，表达自己对绿色生活的观点，引出下文的建议；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“出行方式，节约能源，种树等”几个方面提出详细的建议；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①to start with首先
②instead of代替
③in order to为了
④turn/shut off关掉
⑤rather than而不是
[高分句型]
①For example, you’d better take the bus to school instead of taking a car, and it’s also a good idea to ride a bike.（it固定句型，it是形式主语）
②you should turn off the lights and shut off the TV when you don’t use them.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③why not plant more trees and flowers （Why not....提建议）