【中考2024】贵州地区2023年中考真题分类汇编-书面表达【含答案解析】
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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
贵州地区中考真题分类汇编-书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．（2023·贵州·统考中考真题）请结合下图内容及提示，以“My__________ Family Memory”为题，根据写作要求，写一篇不少于80词的短文。
describe the memoryWhat happened When did it happen Who was in the memory express your feelings or opinionsWhat do you think of it Why do you think so
写作要求：
（1）结合实际，用适当的形容词补全标题。
（2）短文须包含图中所有信息，并适当拓展。
（3）文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
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2．（2022·贵州遵义·统考中考真题）假定你是李华，来自光明学校，将代表你校参加全市中学生“学会学习”主题分享会。请以 “Learning to Learn” 为题，根据提示问题和写作要求，写一篇英语发言稿。
提示问题：(1) What subject are you interested in
How do you deal with the difficulties in learning
Do you often make any plans for your study
What methods do you usually use to learn
Do you use other good learning materials
写作要求：（1）请作简要的自我介绍；
（2）至少选择三个提示问题展开写作；
（3）词数不少于80词；
（4）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Learning to Learn
Dear teachers and students,
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3．（2022·贵州安顺·统考中考真题）当前，为实现“减负不减质、提质更增效”的目标，各地正在积极落实“双减”政策（Double-reduction Policy），作为中学生的你可以做些什么呢？（比如：锻炼身体、欣赏音乐、了解美育、参加劳动、志愿服务等）请依据以下思维导图内容，以“What I Can Do under the Double-reduction Policy”为题，写一篇不少于100词的英语短文。
要求如下：
（1）文中应包含思维导图所有信息；
（2）重点谈论“双减”后你怎样安排课余时间及你的感受；
（3）文中不得出现考生真实的个人信息。
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4．（2022·贵州六盘水·统考中考真题）丰富多彩的“课后服务”活动让我们的校园生活更加充实，促进我们成长。请以“Colorful Activities at School”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文。
要求如下：
（1）短文应包含思维导图的所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）主要写“课后服务”期间参加的活动，如作业辅导、社团活动等；
（3）摘抄试卷内容不得分，文中不得出现考生真实姓名、学校校名。
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5．（2022·贵州黔西·统考中考真题）假如你是李华，在学校网站上看到“英语文化节”（English Festival）招募启事，你很感兴趣，并准备写封邮件参加应征。启事如下：
邮件要求：（1）写信意图和你所在年级（2点）
（2）应征目的（2点）；
（3）自我介绍：性格、英语能力等（2点）。
写作要求：（1）词数80左右。不能暴露真实姓名等信息。
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Volunteers Wanted 招募志愿者Our school English Festival is now looking for 12 student volunteers to work for Talent (才艺) Show, Speech Contest (比赛) and English Street next month. If you are interested, please send an email to Ms. Wang.Email add: wanglaoshi@.
Dear Ms. Wang,
How are you I’m Li Hua. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2022·贵州贵阳·统考中考真题）劳动教育是青少年全面发展的重要组成部分。因此，青少年应该主动参加各类劳动，如社区服务、学校劳动和日常家务等。近期，育才中学围绕“劳动让我成长”这一主题开展了问卷调查。请你参考问卷内容或结合自身经历，以“Let’s Take Part in Labor Activities” 为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文。
要求如下：
（1）请列举2~3项你经常参加的劳动；
（2）重点谈谈你参加劳动的收获并提出建议；
（3）文中不得出现真实个人信息。
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7．（2022·贵州黔东南·统考中考真题）每个人都有不同的生活习惯，养成良好的生活习惯能帮助我们拥有健康的体魄和美好的生活。临近毕业，校团委正在向九年级学生征文，请结合自身实际，以How to Develop Good Living Habits为题，从日常起居，卫生习惯，健康饮食，体育锻炼，交通安全等方面进行阐述，写一篇英语短文投稿。
写作要求：
（1）意思连贯，表达准确，书写规范，适当发挥；
（2）文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名及所在地等信息；
（3）词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Develop Good Living Habits
Everyone has different living habits. Good habits can help us keep healthy and have beautiful lives. As teenagers, what should we do
In my opinion, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．（2022·贵州铜仁·统考中考真题）你校广播站面向全校学生举办一场以“丰富的课外活动”为主题的英语征文活动。假设你是李华，请撰文投稿，分享学校的课外活动情况及体会。
要求：
（1）短文必须包括左图所有信息，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
（2）80词左右（文章开头句已给出，不计入总词数）。
（3）文章不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。
（4）书写正确规范，卷面整洁。
提示词：
labor practice base（劳动实践基地）
digging the land（松土）；
respect（尊重）。
Colorful After-School Activities
I’m Li Hua. Glad to share the colorful after-school activities of our school. In our school, we can choose what we are interested in.
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9．（2022·贵州毕节·统考中考真题）劳动课即将走进我们的课程中，你作为一名即将完成义务教育阶段学习任务的学生，请你为在校同学写一篇英文发言稿，谈谈你对新课程方案的看法和建议。词数80左右。
内容包括：
（1）初中学生的学习任务应该有哪些 （写2点）
（2）课程方案规定，初中学生能设计一日三餐食谱，独立制作午餐或晚餐中3—4道菜等。对此你有何想法 （2点）
（3）你对在校同学的倡议（2点）
作文要求：
（1）文章的开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；
（2）语句连贯，书写工整；不得出现单位或个人真实名称。
参考词汇：
课程方案： curriculum plan； 设计食谱design recipes；
A new subject will be carried out in school
The new change about the labor class in school has had a heated discussion online.
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参考答案：
1．例文
My Funniest Family Memory
There are countless interesting memories in our family. Let me tell you one of them. It’s about eating.
I remember once, when I was at my grandma’s house, it’s time for dinner. I was so hungry that I ran to the table in a windy manner and started eating. I just had a bite of the food, feeling very spicy. I asked my mother, “Mom, why is vegetable pepper so hot ” Mom ran over and tasted it. She said, “This is not vegetable pepper. It’s pepper!” “Ah ” I asked in confusion. This is chili. No wonder it’s so spicy. “Give me some water!” The family laughed when they heard it.
In fact, there are many interesting family stories, waiting for us to discover. As long as you are serious about discovering it, you will feel that family fun everywhere.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章标题以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“补全题目”这一要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步，根据要点讲述这一事件发生的时间、人物及经过，要列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发你对这件事的评价并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①countless interesting memories无数的有趣回忆
②in confusion疑惑地
③no wonder难怪
[高分句型]
①I was so hungry that I ran to the table in a windy manner and started eating.（so that引导的结果状语从句）
②As long as you are serious about discovering it, you will feel that family fun everywhere.（as long as引导的条件状语从句）
2．例文
Learning to Learn
Dear teachers and students,
My name is Li Hua. I come from Guangming School. Today my topic is “Learn to learn”.
First of all, my favorite subject is English. In fact, at the beginning, my English was not good, but I was still very interested in it. In order to improve my English, I often ask my teacher for help and recite words at home by myself every day. Slowly, my English improved. Besides, I also make plans for my study. For example, I have to memorize English words when I have breakfast in the morning. And I review what I learn every day before I go to bed at night.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给英文提示以 “Learning to Learn” 为题写一篇作文，介绍“学会学习”。
[写作步骤]
第一步，可以从所给提示问题选出两个来叙述；
第二步，再从剩下的问题中选择一个展开描述。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②in order to 为了
③for example比如
[高分句型]
①I have to memorize English words when I have breakfast in the morning.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②And I review what I learn every day before I go to bed at night.（what引导的宾语从句）
3．例文
What I Can Do under the Double-reduction Policy
Since the double-reduction policy was carried out, my life has greatly changed. I used to have much homework and many after-school classes. But now I have more time than before. So what can I do under the double-reduction policy
In the evening, I can listen to some soft music because it makes me feel relaxed. On weekends, I can play sports with my friends to keep healthy. I also plan to learn to play the guitar. During holidays, I want to do some volunteering. I’d like to help others and do something meaningful.
All in all, I think the double-reduction policy is good for my body and mind. It makes my life colorful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要使用“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“What I Can Do under the Double-reduction Policy”为题，结合思维导图进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“双减政策下我能做什么”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点谈论“双减”后你怎样安排课余时间；
第三步，书写结语。表达对“双减”政策的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①carry out执行，实行
②keep healthy保持健康
③plan to do sth.计划做某事
④all in all总而言之
[高分句型]
①In the evening, I can listen to some soft music because it makes me feel relaxed.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②All in all, I think the double-reduction policy is good for my body and mind.（省略that的宾语从句）
4．例文
Colorful Activities at School
Since the implementation of the “double reduction” policy, a variety of “after-school service” activities have enriched our campus life. Let me introduce some of my own activities.
First, after school, I usually play basketball on the playground for half an hour. And it will make me more energetic. Then I finish my homework at school. So I don’t have to do my homework when I go home. Finally, I will take drawing classes. Because I like drawing things on paper best. I think it’s very relaxing for me.
【详解】（1）题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“Colorful Activities at School”为题，根据思维导图内容，介绍下自己在学校的丰富活动。
（2）写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主；人称以第一人称为主。写作时按照思维导图给出的提示展开叙述，不要遗漏，可运用短语句型使文章更连贯。针对细节可适当发挥，最后行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
5．例文：
Dear Ms. Wang,
How are you I’m Li Hua. I’m a student from junior Grade 3. I want to be a volunteer for our school English Festival next month. I really want to have the chance to practice my English. I also want to improve my confidence in speaking English in public. I’m an outgoing girl. I get along with my classmates well. I like to help people. And I think my English is very good, too. I’m sure I will be a very good volunteer.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】（1）题干解读：本文是一篇电子邮件。根据邮件要求，写一篇作文，参加“英语文化节”招募启事应征。
（2）写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第一人称。邮件内容需包含：写信意图和你所在年级、应征目的、性格、英语能力等。叙述时不要遗漏，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
6．例文
Let’s Take Part in Labor Activities
Labor is the source of all happiness. Labor is one of the necessary conditions for students’ all-round development. And I think it is good to do housework.
Doing chores helps to develop children’s independence and teaches them how to look after themselves. I used to be lazy at home. Seeing this, my mother came up with an idea—I have to earn my pocket money by doing housework. It changed me a lot. For example, when I can’t work out a math problem, I prefer to sweep the floor or tidy up my room to clear my mind. Once my mother told me to buy some fruit. I quickly made a list, compared prices and bought fresh fruit. I now have a habit of managing money and I know it’s great of my mother to look after my family so well!
This is how I learn to do housework—it’s a skill that lasts a lifetime.
【详解】（1）题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Let’s Take Part in Labor Activities” 为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
（2）写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍经常参加的劳动以及参加劳动的收获并提出建议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
7．例文
How to Develop Good Living Habits
Everyone has different living habits. Good habits can help us keep healthy and have beautiful lives. As teenagers, what should we do
In my opinion, everyone should get up and go to bed on time every day. Don’t stay up too late. Everyone should wash hands before meals. Everyone should eat more vegetables and fruit. Don’t eat too much junk food. What’s more, everyone should do exercise. No littering and spitting. It is not allowed to play on the road. When crossing the road, everyone should obey the traffic rules.
In a word, we must develop good living habits so as to keep healthy.
【详解】（1）题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“如何养成良好的生活习惯”为题写一篇短文。
（2）写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主。分为三段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段从日常起居，卫生习惯，健康饮食，体育锻炼，交通安全等方面进行阐述；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
8．例文
Colorful After-School Activities
I’m Li Hua. Glad to share the colorful after-school activities of our school. In our school, we can choose what we are interested in.
If you want to improve your oral English, you can choose English Club. You can learn about how to recite here. If you are good at drawing, you can join Drawing Club. You can also learn about paper-cutting. If you are interested in growing vegetables and planting, you can join Labour Practice. If you want to keep healthy, you can join Sports Club. You can learn how to swim, play football and so on.
These after-school activities not only enrich our after-school lives, but also teach us some basic skills.
【详解】（1）题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“丰富的课外活动”写一篇短文。
（2）写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题，文章开头已给出；第二段根据提示材料介绍学校不同的课外活动，以及参加这些课外活动的好处；最后一段表达自己对这些课外活动的体会。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
9．例文
A new subject will be carried out in school
The new change about the labor class in school has had a heated discussion online.
According to the new curriculum plan, students should learn the basic subjects well, such as Chinese, Math, English and so on. Besides that, students should also have labor classes so that students can keep healthy.
The new curriculum plan also says that students can design recipes for three meals a day and make 3-4 dishes for lunch or dinner independently. I think it not only helps to develop students’ independence, but also it can make students better understand their parents.
As students, we should take an active part in labor classes and learn some useful life skills.
【详解】（1）题干解读：本文以“A new subject will be carried out in school”为题，并根据题干中的提示写一篇文章，可适当增加细节。
（2）写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主。第一段已给出；第二段主要谈论初中学生的学习任务有哪些；第三段谈论对中学生设计食谱以及做饭的看法；第四段讲述对学生的倡议。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
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贵州地区中考真题分类汇编-书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．（2023·贵州·统考中考真题）请结合下图内容及提示，以“My__________ Family Memory”为题，根据写作要求，写一篇不少于80词的短文。
describe the memoryWhat happened When did it happen Who was in the memory express your feelings or opinionsWhat do you think of it Why do you think so
写作要求：
（1）结合实际，用适当的形容词补全标题。
（2）短文须包含图中所有信息，并适当拓展。
（3）文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2022·贵州遵义·统考中考真题）假定你是李华，来自光明学校，将代表你校参加全市中学生“学会学习”主题分享会。请以 “Learning to Learn” 为题，根据提示问题和写作要求，写一篇英语发言稿。
提示问题：(1) What subject are you interested in
How do you deal with the difficulties in learning
Do you often make any plans for your study
What methods do you usually use to learn
Do you use other good learning materials
写作要求：（1）请作简要的自我介绍；
（2）至少选择三个提示问题展开写作；
（3）词数不少于80词；
（4）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Learning to Learn
Dear teachers and students,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2022·贵州安顺·统考中考真题）当前，为实现“减负不减质、提质更增效”的目标，各地正在积极落实“双减”政策（Double-reduction Policy），作为中学生的你可以做些什么呢？（比如：锻炼身体、欣赏音乐、了解美育、参加劳动、志愿服务等）请依据以下思维导图内容，以“What I Can Do under the Double-reduction Policy”为题，写一篇不少于100词的英语短文。
要求如下：
（1）文中应包含思维导图所有信息；
（2）重点谈论“双减”后你怎样安排课余时间及你的感受；
（3）文中不得出现考生真实的个人信息。
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4．（2022·贵州六盘水·统考中考真题）丰富多彩的“课后服务”活动让我们的校园生活更加充实，促进我们成长。请以“Colorful Activities at School”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文。
要求如下：
（1）短文应包含思维导图的所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）主要写“课后服务”期间参加的活动，如作业辅导、社团活动等；
（3）摘抄试卷内容不得分，文中不得出现考生真实姓名、学校校名。
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5．（2022·贵州黔西·统考中考真题）假如你是李华，在学校网站上看到“英语文化节”（English Festival）招募启事，你很感兴趣，并准备写封邮件参加应征。启事如下：
邮件要求：（1）写信意图和你所在年级（2点）
（2）应征目的（2点）；
（3）自我介绍：性格、英语能力等（2点）。
写作要求：（1）词数80左右。不能暴露真实姓名等信息。
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Volunteers Wanted 招募志愿者Our school English Festival is now looking for 12 student volunteers to work for Talent (才艺) Show, Speech Contest (比赛) and English Street next month. If you are interested, please send an email to Ms. Wang.Email add: wanglaoshi@.
Dear Ms. Wang,
How are you I’m Li Hua. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2022·贵州贵阳·统考中考真题）劳动教育是青少年全面发展的重要组成部分。因此，青少年应该主动参加各类劳动，如社区服务、学校劳动和日常家务等。近期，育才中学围绕“劳动让我成长”这一主题开展了问卷调查。请你参考问卷内容或结合自身经历，以“Let’s Take Part in Labor Activities” 为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文。
要求如下：
（1）请列举2~3项你经常参加的劳动；
（2）重点谈谈你参加劳动的收获并提出建议；
（3）文中不得出现真实个人信息。
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7．（2022·贵州黔东南·统考中考真题）每个人都有不同的生活习惯，养成良好的生活习惯能帮助我们拥有健康的体魄和美好的生活。临近毕业，校团委正在向九年级学生征文，请结合自身实际，以How to Develop Good Living Habits为题，从日常起居，卫生习惯，健康饮食，体育锻炼，交通安全等方面进行阐述，写一篇英语短文投稿。
写作要求：
（1）意思连贯，表达准确，书写规范，适当发挥；
（2）文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名及所在地等信息；
（3）词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Develop Good Living Habits
Everyone has different living habits. Good habits can help us keep healthy and have beautiful lives. As teenagers, what should we do
In my opinion, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．（2022·贵州铜仁·统考中考真题）你校广播站面向全校学生举办一场以“丰富的课外活动”为主题的英语征文活动。假设你是李华，请撰文投稿，分享学校的课外活动情况及体会。
要求：
（1）短文必须包括左图所有信息，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
（2）80词左右（文章开头句已给出，不计入总词数）。
（3）文章不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。
（4）书写正确规范，卷面整洁。
提示词：
labor practice base（劳动实践基地）
digging the land（松土）；
respect（尊重）。
Colorful After-School Activities
I’m Li Hua. Glad to share the colorful after-school activities of our school. In our school, we can choose what we are interested in.
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9．（2022·贵州毕节·统考中考真题）劳动课即将走进我们的课程中，你作为一名即将完成义务教育阶段学习任务的学生，请你为在校同学写一篇英文发言稿，谈谈你对新课程方案的看法和建议。词数80左右。
内容包括：
（1）初中学生的学习任务应该有哪些 （写2点）
（2）课程方案规定，初中学生能设计一日三餐食谱，独立制作午餐或晚餐中3—4道菜等。对此你有何想法 （2点）
（3）你对在校同学的倡议（2点）
作文要求：
（1）文章的开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；
（2）语句连贯，书写工整；不得出现单位或个人真实名称。
参考词汇：
课程方案： curriculum plan； 设计食谱design recipes；
A new subject will be carried out in school
The new change about the labor class in school has had a heated discussion online.
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参考答案：
1．例文
My Funniest Family Memory
There are countless interesting memories in our family. Let me tell you one of them. It’s about eating.
I remember once, when I was at my grandma’s house, it’s time for dinner. I was so hungry that I ran to the table in a windy manner and started eating. I just had a bite of the food, feeling very spicy. I asked my mother, “Mom, why is vegetable pepper so hot ” Mom ran over and tasted it. She said, “This is not vegetable pepper. It’s pepper!” “Ah ” I asked in confusion. This is chili. No wonder it’s so spicy. “Give me some water!” The family laughed when they heard it.
In fact, there are many interesting family stories, waiting for us to discover. As long as you are serious about discovering it, you will feel that family fun everywhere.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章标题以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“补全题目”这一要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步，根据要点讲述这一事件发生的时间、人物及经过，要列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发你对这件事的评价并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①countless interesting memories无数的有趣回忆
②in confusion疑惑地
③no wonder难怪
[高分句型]
①I was so hungry that I ran to the table in a windy manner and started eating.（so that引导的结果状语从句）
②As long as you are serious about discovering it, you will feel that family fun everywhere.（as long as引导的条件状语从句）
2．例文
Learning to Learn
Dear teachers and students,
My name is Li Hua. I come from Guangming School. Today my topic is “Learn to learn”.
First of all, my favorite subject is English. In fact, at the beginning, my English was not good, but I was still very interested in it. In order to improve my English, I often ask my teacher for help and recite words at home by myself every day. Slowly, my English improved. Besides, I also make plans for my study. For example, I have to memorize English words when I have breakfast in the morning. And I review what I learn every day before I go to bed at night.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给英文提示以 “Learning to Learn” 为题写一篇作文，介绍“学会学习”。
[写作步骤]
第一步，可以从所给提示问题选出两个来叙述；
第二步，再从剩下的问题中选择一个展开描述。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②in order to 为了
③for example比如
[高分句型]
①I have to memorize English words when I have breakfast in the morning.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②And I review what I learn every day before I go to bed at night.（what引导的宾语从句）
3．例文
What I Can Do under the Double-reduction Policy
Since the double-reduction policy was carried out, my life has greatly changed. I used to have much homework and many after-school classes. But now I have more time than before. So what can I do under the double-reduction policy
In the evening, I can listen to some soft music because it makes me feel relaxed. On weekends, I can play sports with my friends to keep healthy. I also plan to learn to play the guitar. During holidays, I want to do some volunteering. I’d like to help others and do something meaningful.
All in all, I think the double-reduction policy is good for my body and mind. It makes my life colorful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要使用“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“What I Can Do under the Double-reduction Policy”为题，结合思维导图进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“双减政策下我能做什么”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点谈论“双减”后你怎样安排课余时间；
第三步，书写结语。表达对“双减”政策的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①carry out执行，实行
②keep healthy保持健康
③plan to do sth.计划做某事
④all in all总而言之
[高分句型]
①In the evening, I can listen to some soft music because it makes me feel relaxed.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②All in all, I think the double-reduction policy is good for my body and mind.（省略that的宾语从句）
4．例文
Colorful Activities at School
Since the implementation of the “double reduction” policy, a variety of “after-school service” activities have enriched our campus life. Let me introduce some of my own activities.
First, after school, I usually play basketball on the playground for half an hour. And it will make me more energetic. Then I finish my homework at school. So I don’t have to do my homework when I go home. Finally, I will take drawing classes. Because I like drawing things on paper best. I think it’s very relaxing for me.
【详解】（1）题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“Colorful Activities at School”为题，根据思维导图内容，介绍下自己在学校的丰富活动。
（2）写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主；人称以第一人称为主。写作时按照思维导图给出的提示展开叙述，不要遗漏，可运用短语句型使文章更连贯。针对细节可适当发挥，最后行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
5．例文：
Dear Ms. Wang,
How are you I’m Li Hua. I’m a student from junior Grade 3. I want to be a volunteer for our school English Festival next month. I really want to have the chance to practice my English. I also want to improve my confidence in speaking English in public. I’m an outgoing girl. I get along with my classmates well. I like to help people. And I think my English is very good, too. I’m sure I will be a very good volunteer.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】（1）题干解读：本文是一篇电子邮件。根据邮件要求，写一篇作文，参加“英语文化节”招募启事应征。
（2）写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第一人称。邮件内容需包含：写信意图和你所在年级、应征目的、性格、英语能力等。叙述时不要遗漏，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
6．例文
Let’s Take Part in Labor Activities
Labor is the source of all happiness. Labor is one of the necessary conditions for students’ all-round development. And I think it is good to do housework.
Doing chores helps to develop children’s independence and teaches them how to look after themselves. I used to be lazy at home. Seeing this, my mother came up with an idea—I have to earn my pocket money by doing housework. It changed me a lot. For example, when I can’t work out a math problem, I prefer to sweep the floor or tidy up my room to clear my mind. Once my mother told me to buy some fruit. I quickly made a list, compared prices and bought fresh fruit. I now have a habit of managing money and I know it’s great of my mother to look after my family so well!
This is how I learn to do housework—it’s a skill that lasts a lifetime.
【详解】（1）题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Let’s Take Part in Labor Activities” 为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
（2）写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍经常参加的劳动以及参加劳动的收获并提出建议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
7．例文
How to Develop Good Living Habits
Everyone has different living habits. Good habits can help us keep healthy and have beautiful lives. As teenagers, what should we do
In my opinion, everyone should get up and go to bed on time every day. Don’t stay up too late. Everyone should wash hands before meals. Everyone should eat more vegetables and fruit. Don’t eat too much junk food. What’s more, everyone should do exercise. No littering and spitting. It is not allowed to play on the road. When crossing the road, everyone should obey the traffic rules.
In a word, we must develop good living habits so as to keep healthy.
【详解】（1）题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“如何养成良好的生活习惯”为题写一篇短文。
（2）写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主。分为三段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段从日常起居，卫生习惯，健康饮食，体育锻炼，交通安全等方面进行阐述；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
8．例文
Colorful After-School Activities
I’m Li Hua. Glad to share the colorful after-school activities of our school. In our school, we can choose what we are interested in.
If you want to improve your oral English, you can choose English Club. You can learn about how to recite here. If you are good at drawing, you can join Drawing Club. You can also learn about paper-cutting. If you are interested in growing vegetables and planting, you can join Labour Practice. If you want to keep healthy, you can join Sports Club. You can learn how to swim, play football and so on.
These after-school activities not only enrich our after-school lives, but also teach us some basic skills.
【详解】（1）题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“丰富的课外活动”写一篇短文。
（2）写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题，文章开头已给出；第二段根据提示材料介绍学校不同的课外活动，以及参加这些课外活动的好处；最后一段表达自己对这些课外活动的体会。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
9．例文
A new subject will be carried out in school
The new change about the labor class in school has had a heated discussion online.
According to the new curriculum plan, students should learn the basic subjects well, such as Chinese, Math, English and so on. Besides that, students should also have labor classes so that students can keep healthy.
The new curriculum plan also says that students can design recipes for three meals a day and make 3-4 dishes for lunch or dinner independently. I think it not only helps to develop students’ independence, but also it can make students better understand their parents.
As students, we should take an active part in labor classes and learn some useful life skills.
【详解】（1）题干解读：本文以“A new subject will be carried out in school”为题，并根据题干中的提示写一篇文章，可适当增加细节。
（2）写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主。第一段已给出；第二段主要谈论初中学生的学习任务有哪些；第三段谈论对中学生设计食谱以及做饭的看法；第四段讲述对学生的倡议。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
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