Unit 3 Fascinating Parks单元话题满分范文必背（含解析）2022-2023学年高二英语选择性必修第一册单元重难点易错题精练（人教版2019）
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Unit 3单元话题满分范文必背
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1．（2022·全国·高二课时练习）假设你是某市高中学生李华，你的家乡新建立了一个主题公园，请给你的加拿大朋友Tony写一封邮件，邀请他来该主题公园游玩。邮件的内容包括：
1.邮件目的；2.介绍新建的主题公园的相关内容；3.期待回复；
注意：
1.词数不少于80;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已经给出不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
How is everything going
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Yours truly
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tony,
How is everything going Learning that you are keen to Chinese history, I’m writing to invite you to visit the newly-built theme park- Folk Culture Park.
Located 12 km south of our city, the park is a combination of culture, entertainment and food. To begin with, it is a perfect place where you may have a taste of various features in different times of China. Additionally, the park has plenty of restaurants with tasty food for every appetite.
Once you make up your mind, don’t hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours’
Li Hua
【分析】本文属于应用文之邀请信。
【详解】第1步：假设你是某市高中学生李华，你的家乡新建立了一个主题公园，请给你的加拿大朋友Tony写一封邮件，邀请他来该主题公园游玩。邮件的内容包括：1.)邮件目的；2.)介绍新建的主题公园的相关内容；3.)期待回复；
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be keen to (喜欢)；invite sb. to do sth. (邀请某人做某事)；newly-built (新建的)；be located (坐落于)；have a taste of(品尝，欣赏)；make up one’s mind(下定决心)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容要点齐全，句式精炼，充分完成了写作的任务。高分句型如下：使用现在分词作状语：Learning that you are keen to Chinese history, I’m writing to invite you to visit the newly-built theme park- Folk Culture Park.使用过去分词短语做状语：Located 12 km south of our city, the park is a combination of culture, entertainment and food. 使用定语从句：To begin with, it is a perfect place where you may have a taste of various features in different times of China.
2．（2021·全国·高二课时练习）假定你是李华，你的家乡今年新建了一个中国民俗文化主题公园，请给你的留学生好友Mike写封邮件，邀请他一同来公园参观，内容包括:
1.时间、地点；2.参观内容:了解中国民俗文化，体验民间艺术等；3.注意事项。
参考词汇:中国民俗文化主题公园Chinese folk culture theme park
注意:
1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Mike,
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Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I can’t wait to share a piece of good news with you. A Chinese folk culture theme park has just been built in my hometown. I think this is a great chance for you to learn more about Chinese culture, so I’d like to invite you to visit the park with me.
We can meet at the bus station at 8 next Saturday morning and then set off for there. During the visit, we will learn about Chinese folk culture and experience various forms of folk art, through which we can see Chinese history changes and great society development, especially Chinese countryside. When we visit it, we had better behave well and follow the related rules and order. Don’t smoke, make noises or throw rubbish anywhere. I am sure you can harvest and benefit from this visit.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Lihua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生写一封邮件，邀请留学生好友Mike参观中国民俗文化主题公园，并介绍见面的时间和地点、参观内容和注意事项。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。个别表达需要用到现在完成时。
结构：三段式：第一段写出写信目的，引出主题；第二段写出具体内容，包括见面的时间和地点、参观内容和注意事项；第三段期待收到对方的回复。
要求：1. 表明写信的目的
2. 介绍见面的时间和地点、参观内容和注意事项
3. 表明期待收到对方的回复
第二步:列提纲 （重点单词及词组）
can’t wait to sth. (迫不及待做某事); share sth. with sb (与某人分享某物); invite sb. to do sth. (邀请某人做某事); set off (动身，出发); learn about (了解); various forms of… (各种形式的……); development (发展); especially (尤其); behave (表现); follow the rules (遵守规则); make noises (制造噪音); throw rubbish (扔垃圾); harvest (收获); benefit from (从……收益); look forward to… (期待，盼望); reply (答复)
第三步：连词成句
1. I can’t wait to share a piece of good news with you.
2. I think this is a great chance for you to learn more about Chinese culture.
3. I’d like to invite you to visit the park with me.
4. We can meet at the bus station at 8 next Saturday morning.
5. We will learn about Chinese folk culture and experience various forms of folk art.
6. We had better behave well and follow the related rules and order.
7. Don’t smoke, make noises or throw rubbish anywhere.
8. I am sure you can harvest and benefit from this visit.
9. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all; to begin with; firstly/first; secondly/second… ; and then(本篇文章使用过); finally; in the end; at last
2. 表并列补充关系：What’s more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; additionally; not only… but also…; as well as; both…and…
3. 表转折对比关系：but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand…, on the other hand…; some…, while others…
4. 表因果关系：because; because of; for; so (本篇文章使用过); since; thus; therefore; as a result; why
5. 表总结：in short; in a word; in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
根据写作内容需要，加入高级句式，如名词性从句，定语从句，状语从句等。
During the visit, we will learn about Chinese folk culture and experience various forms of folk art. 本句用来介绍参观的具体内容。可以使用定语从句，进一步介绍通过参观，可以学习到什么。润色修改为：During the visit, we will learn about Chinese folk culture and experience various forms of folk art, through which we can see Chinese history changes and great society development, especially Chinese countryside.
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中合理使用了复合句，如：During the visit, we will learn about Chinese folk culture and experience various forms of folk art, through which we can see Chinese history changes and great society development, especially Chinese countryside. 这句话为which引导的定语从句；其次，使用了一些固定句型，如：can’t wait to sth.; invite sb. to do sth.; share sth. with sb等，使语言更加丰富；同时使用了一些高级词汇及短语，如development; harvest; throw rubbish; behave等，让语言更加地道。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．（2022·全国·高三课时练习）假设你是李华，曾经在美国作交换生，现已回到自己的祖国。请用英文给你在美时的房东Chris写一封邮件，邀请他在春节期间来中国旅游。
写作要点：1. 感谢他及家人对你的照顾；
2. 介绍中国春节（食物、活动、风俗等）；
3. 可适当增加细节。
注意：1. 字数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总数。
Dear Chris,
Time flies! I have been missing you all.
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Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
Time flies! I have been missing you all. Words are beyond my gratefulness for what you and your family did for me. I sincerely invite you to visit my country over the Spring Festival, the most important festival in China, one of whose traditions is family reunion, so if you come then you can meet me friendly and hospitable family and relatives. Another tradition is visiting friends or travelling. New clothes and lucky money are the tradition that kids like best.
As is known to all, Chinese food varies from place to place—some are sweet, some sour and some hot. But during the Spring Festival, dumplings are the first choice of all Chinese.
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，曾经在美国作交换生，现已回到自己的祖国。请用英文给你在美时的房东Chris写一封邮件，邀请他在春节期间来中国旅游。写作要点：1. 感谢他及家人对你的照顾；2. 介绍中国春节（食物、活动、风俗等）；3. 可适当增加细节。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：beyond my gratefulness (超出我的感激之情)；the Spring Festival(春节)；hospitable (好客的)；tradition (传统)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I sincerely invite you to visit my country over the Spring Festival, the most important festival in China, one of whose traditions is family reunion, so if you come then you can meet me friendly and hospitable family and relatives.运用非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．（2021·全国·高二课时练习）假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Henry 打算寒假来南宁游玩，有两个公园可以选择：青秀山公园（Qingxiu Mountain Park）或五象湖公园（Wuxiang Lake Park）。他来信希望你推荐其中一个公园。请你回信，内容包括：
1. 你推荐的公园；
2. 你推荐的理由；
3. 你的祝愿。
注意：1. 词数100 左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：historical relics 历史遗迹; Wuxiang New District五象新区
Dear Henry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Henry,
Knowing that you are going to travel to Nanning and are considering which park to visit, I am now writing to make a recommendation.
I highly recommend that you visit Qingxiu Mountain Park. The reasons are as follows. To begin with, when touring Qingxiu Mountain, you can enjoy the fascinating scenery and breathe the fresh air, especially on the top of the mountain, where the whole city seems far away and small. What’s more, there are a lot of attractions, such as temples, Qingshan Tower, various plants and flowers, which will help you have a better understanding of the title “Green City”.
Hope you will have a good time in Nanning.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一封书信，假定你是李华，英国朋友Henry要来游玩，你给你的英国朋友Henry 推荐青秀山公园和五象湖公园中的一个。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1. 你推荐的公园；2. 你推荐的理由；3. 你的祝愿。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语及句子有：make a recommendation ，I highly recommend that you visit … ，The reasons are as follows.， enjoy the fascinating scenery and breathe the fresh air ，such as， have a better understanding of ，have a good time 。
可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also)。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句： I highly recommend that you visit Qingxiu Mountain Park. 这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句。What’s more, there are a lot of attractions, such as temples, Qingshan Tower, various plants and flowers, which will help you have a better understanding of the title “Green City”. 这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如：make a recommendation ，as follows ，have a better understanding of。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
5．（2022·全国·高三）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友David下周三将来你所在的城市旅游，但你有事无法去机场接他。请你给他发一封电子邮件，要点如下：
1.表示歉意并说明理由；
2. 安排他人接机。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总次数。
Dear David，
I am very happy to know that you are coming to visit my city next Wednesday._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I am very happy to know that you are coming to visit my city next Wednesday.
Having kept in touch with each other by writing for years, I can’t wait to see you. However, I am sorry to tell you that I can’t meet you at the airport that day. My sister fell ill and was taken to the hospital, so I have to take care of her there. But don’t worry. I’ve asked my best friend, Li Lei, to pick you up and take you to the booked hotel instead. What’s more, I have recommended some places of interest in the attachment, which I think you may be interested in. Of course you can also visit other tourist attractions by yourself. Meanwhile, I will call you the moment I am available. I’m expecting your arrival and hope you will enjoy your stay here sincerely.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；假定你是李华，你的英国笔友David下周三将来你所在的城市旅游，但你有事无法去机场接他。请你给他发一封电子邮件，要点如下：1.表示歉意并说明理由；2. 安排他人接机。人称使用第一、二人称。时态应为一般现在时、一般将来时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：can’t meet you at the airport（不能去机场接你），pick up sb.（接某人），recommend（推荐）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句However, I am sorry to tell you that I can’t meet you at the airport that day.非谓语动词Having kept in touch with each other by writing for years, I can’t wait to see you.；同位语I’ve asked my best friend, Li Lei, to pick you up and take you to the booked hotel instead. 定语从句What’s more, I have recommended some places of interest in the attachment, which I think you may be interested in.时间状语从句Meanwhile, I will call you the moment I am available.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，过渡词及短语however，so，but，What’s more，of course，meanwhile的使用，使得文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．（2020·全国·高二专题练习）请根据以下要点，写一篇80词左右的英语短文介绍香港海洋公园。
·香港海洋公园，位于香港的南部，是一个著名的主题公园。
·面积超过87万平方米，是世界上最大的海洋公园之一，有40多年的历史，是亚洲主要的旅游景点之一；是香港最受人们甚欢的公园。每年吸引了大量的世界游客。
·游客可以体验惊险之旅和观看各种表演。
·香港海洋公园还为它提供的教育项目而自豪。
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【答案】Hong Kong Ocean Park, a famous theme park, is situated in the southern side of Hong Kong. As one of the largest marine parks in the world, it covers more than 870,000 square meters.With a history of more than 40 years, Ocean Park has become one of the major tourist attractions in Asia. It is Hong Kong's favourite park, which attracts many visitors from all over the world. Visitors can not only experience adventurous trips but also enjoy a broad variety of shows. The park also takes pride in its educational programs as well.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求写一篇短文，介绍香港海洋公园。
【详解】第一步：
审题：短文，介绍香港海洋公园
人称：第三人称
时态：一般现在时
结构：全文为一部分，介绍香港海洋公园的地理位置、面积、历史、旅游特色等。
要点：介绍香港海洋公园的地理位置、面积、历史、旅游项目等。
地理位置：位于香港的南部
面积和历史：面积超过87万平方米，有40多年的历史
③旅游特色：是亚洲主要的旅游景点之一，游客可以体验惊险之旅、观看各种表演、提供教育项目
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）
theme park；be situated in；marine park；cover more than 870,000 square meters；with a history of；tourist attraction；favourite；attract；experience adventurous trips；a broad variety of；take pride in；educational program
第三步：连词成句
(1)Hong Kong Ocean Park is a famous theme park.
(2)Hong Kong Ocean Park is situated in the southern side of Hong Kong.
(3) Hong Kong Ocean Park is one of the largest marine parks in the world.
(4)It covers more than 870,000 square meters.
(5) Hong Kong Ocean Park has a history of more than 40 years.
(6)Ocean Park has become one of the major tourist attractions in Asia.
(7) The Ocean Park is Hong Kong's favourite park.
(8 ) The Ocean Park attracts many visitors from all over the world.
(9)Visitors can experience adventurous trips.
(10)Visitors can enjoy a broad variety of shows.
(11)The park also takes pride in its educational programs as well.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词、亮点词汇）
将第一个句子作同位语，连接下面两个句子
(1)Hong Kong Ocean Park is a famous theme park.
(2)Hong Kong Ocean Park is situated in the southern side of Hong Kong.
→Hong Kong Ocean Park, a famous theme park, is situated in the southern side of Hong Kong.
将第二个句子改写现在分词作状语，连接下面两个句子
(3) Hong Kong Ocean Park is one of the largest marine parks in the world.
(4)It covers more than 870,000 square meters.
→Hong Kong Ocean Park is one of the largest marine parks in the world, covering more than 870,000 square meters.
将第二个句子作定语从句，连接下面两个句子
(7) Hong Kong Ocean Park is Hong Kong's favourite park.
(8 ) Hong Kong Ocean Park attracts many visitors from all over the world.
→ Ocean Park is Hong Kong's favourite park, which attracts many visitors from all over the world.
用not only… but also…连接下面两个句子
(9)Visitors can experience adventurous trips.
(10)Visitors can enjoy a broad variety of shows.
→Visitors can not only experience adventurous trips but also enjoy a broad variety of shows.
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。
【点睛】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 theme park；be situated in；cover；with a history of；tourist attraction；attract；experience；a broad variety of ；take pride in 等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如现在分词作状语的运用covering more than 870,000 square meters；定语从句的运用It is Hong Kong's favourite park, which attracts many visitors from all over the world；not only… but also并列结构的运用Visitors can not only experience adventurous trips but also enjoy a broad variety of shows等。
7．（2022·云南·昆明市第三中学高二期中）书面表达
假定你是李华，你的英国网友Peter对你上传在QQ空间中的湿地公园照片很感兴趣，他想了解更多信息。请根据以下要点给他回复：
1.位置与交通（市区东部，离市中心20公里)：
2.设施与环境：
3.休闲活动。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好。
参考词汇：湿地公园wetlandpark
DearPeter,
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Yours,
LiHu
【答案】A possible version
I’m pleased to tell you more about the newly-built wetland park as is shown in my photos posted online the other day.
Located in the east of our city, about 20 kilometers away from the city center，it can be easilyapproached to by bus or subway. Surrounded by the Golden lake, it is a paradise for various flowers, water-plants, fishes and seabirds with a balanced ecosystem. Besides, the park is equipped with all kinds of available facilities including groceries and a medical center. Therefore, tourists can enjoy the breath-taking scenery fully and take part in relaxing activities, such as boating, photographing and having a picnic.
Should you pay a visit here, I would keep you company.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这篇书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。假定你是李华，你的英国网友Peter对你上传在QQ空间中的湿地公园照片很感兴趣，他想了解更多信息。请根据以下要点给他回复。
【详解】假定你是李华，你的英国网友Peter对你上传在QQ空间中的湿地公园照片很感兴趣，他想了解更多信息。请根据以下要点给他回复：1. 位置与交通（市区东部，离市中心20公里)：2. 设施与环境：3. 休闲活动。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。Surrounded by the Golden lake, it is a paradise for various flowers, water-plants, fishes and seabirds with a balanced ecosystem.过去分词作状语的运用
(名校最新真题)
1．（2022·全国·高二课时练习）假设你是某市高中学生李华，你的家乡新建立了一个主题公园，请给你的加拿大朋友Tony写一封邮件，邀请他来该主题公园游玩。邮件的内容包括：
1.邮件目的；2.介绍新建的主题公园的相关内容；3.期待回复；
注意：
1.词数不少于80;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已经给出不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
How is everything going
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Yours truly
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tony,
How is everything going Learning that you are keen to Chinese history, I’m writing to invite you to visit the newly-built theme park- Folk Culture Park.
Located 12 km south of our city, the park is a combination of culture, entertainment and food. To begin with, it is a perfect place where you may have a taste of various features in different times of China. Additionally, the park has plenty of restaurants with tasty food for every appetite.
Once you make up your mind, don’t hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours’
Li Hua
【分析】本文属于应用文之邀请信。
【详解】第1步：假设你是某市高中学生李华，你的家乡新建立了一个主题公园，请给你的加拿大朋友Tony写一封邮件，邀请他来该主题公园游玩。邮件的内容包括：1.)邮件目的；2.)介绍新建的主题公园的相关内容；3.)期待回复；
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be keen to (喜欢)；invite sb. to do sth. (邀请某人做某事)；newly-built (新建的)；be located (坐落于)；have a taste of(品尝，欣赏)；make up one’s mind(下定决心)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】本文内容要点齐全，句式精炼，充分完成了写作的任务。高分句型如下：使用现在分词作状语：Learning that you are keen to Chinese history, I’m writing to invite you to visit the newly-built theme park- Folk Culture Park.使用过去分词短语做状语：Located 12 km south of our city, the park is a combination of culture, entertainment and food. 使用定语从句：To begin with, it is a perfect place where you may have a taste of various features in different times of China.
2．（2021·全国·高二课时练习）假定你是李华，你的家乡今年新建了一个中国民俗文化主题公园，请给你的留学生好友Mike写封邮件，邀请他一同来公园参观，内容包括:
1.时间、地点；2.参观内容:了解中国民俗文化，体验民间艺术等；3.注意事项。
参考词汇:中国民俗文化主题公园Chinese folk culture theme park
注意:
1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Mike,
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Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mike,
I can’t wait to share a piece of good news with you. A Chinese folk culture theme park has just been built in my hometown. I think this is a great chance for you to learn more about Chinese culture, so I’d like to invite you to visit the park with me.
We can meet at the bus station at 8 next Saturday morning and then set off for there. During the visit, we will learn about Chinese folk culture and experience various forms of folk art, through which we can see Chinese history changes and great society development, especially Chinese countryside. When we visit it, we had better behave well and follow the related rules and order. Don’t smoke, make noises or throw rubbish anywhere. I am sure you can harvest and benefit from this visit.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Lihua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生写一封邮件，邀请留学生好友Mike参观中国民俗文化主题公园，并介绍见面的时间和地点、参观内容和注意事项。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。个别表达需要用到现在完成时。
结构：三段式：第一段写出写信目的，引出主题；第二段写出具体内容，包括见面的时间和地点、参观内容和注意事项；第三段期待收到对方的回复。
要求：1. 表明写信的目的
2. 介绍见面的时间和地点、参观内容和注意事项
3. 表明期待收到对方的回复
第二步:列提纲 （重点单词及词组）
can’t wait to sth. (迫不及待做某事); share sth. with sb (与某人分享某物); invite sb. to do sth. (邀请某人做某事); set off (动身，出发); learn about (了解); various forms of… (各种形式的……); development (发展); especially (尤其); behave (表现); follow the rules (遵守规则); make noises (制造噪音); throw rubbish (扔垃圾); harvest (收获); benefit from (从……收益); look forward to… (期待，盼望); reply (答复)
第三步：连词成句
1. I can’t wait to share a piece of good news with you.
2. I think this is a great chance for you to learn more about Chinese culture.
3. I’d like to invite you to visit the park with me.
4. We can meet at the bus station at 8 next Saturday morning.
5. We will learn about Chinese folk culture and experience various forms of folk art.
6. We had better behave well and follow the related rules and order.
7. Don’t smoke, make noises or throw rubbish anywhere.
8. I am sure you can harvest and benefit from this visit.
9. Looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 表文章结构顺序：first of all; to begin with; firstly/first; secondly/second… ; and then(本篇文章使用过); finally; in the end; at last
2. 表并列补充关系：What’s more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; additionally; not only… but also…; as well as; both…and…
3. 表转折对比关系：but; however; on the contrary; instead; although; in spite of; on the one hand…, on the other hand…; some…, while others…
4. 表因果关系：because; because of; for; so (本篇文章使用过); since; thus; therefore; as a result; why
5. 表总结：in short; in a word; in conclusion; in summary; all in all; generally speaking
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
根据写作内容需要，加入高级句式，如名词性从句，定语从句，状语从句等。
During the visit, we will learn about Chinese folk culture and experience various forms of folk art. 本句用来介绍参观的具体内容。可以使用定语从句，进一步介绍通过参观，可以学习到什么。润色修改为：During the visit, we will learn about Chinese folk culture and experience various forms of folk art, through which we can see Chinese history changes and great society development, especially Chinese countryside.
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中合理使用了复合句，如：During the visit, we will learn about Chinese folk culture and experience various forms of folk art, through which we can see Chinese history changes and great society development, especially Chinese countryside. 这句话为which引导的定语从句；其次，使用了一些固定句型，如：can’t wait to sth.; invite sb. to do sth.; share sth. with sb等，使语言更加丰富；同时使用了一些高级词汇及短语，如development; harvest; throw rubbish; behave等，让语言更加地道。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．（2022·全国·高三课时练习）假设你是李华，曾经在美国作交换生，现已回到自己的祖国。请用英文给你在美时的房东Chris写一封邮件，邀请他在春节期间来中国旅游。
写作要点：1. 感谢他及家人对你的照顾；
2. 介绍中国春节（食物、活动、风俗等）；
3. 可适当增加细节。
注意：1. 字数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总数。
Dear Chris,
Time flies! I have been missing you all.
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Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
Time flies! I have been missing you all. Words are beyond my gratefulness for what you and your family did for me. I sincerely invite you to visit my country over the Spring Festival, the most important festival in China, one of whose traditions is family reunion, so if you come then you can meet me friendly and hospitable family and relatives. Another tradition is visiting friends or travelling. New clothes and lucky money are the tradition that kids like best.
As is known to all, Chinese food varies from place to place—some are sweet, some sour and some hot. But during the Spring Festival, dumplings are the first choice of all Chinese.
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是李华，曾经在美国作交换生，现已回到自己的祖国。请用英文给你在美时的房东Chris写一封邮件，邀请他在春节期间来中国旅游。写作要点：1. 感谢他及家人对你的照顾；2. 介绍中国春节（食物、活动、风俗等）；3. 可适当增加细节。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：beyond my gratefulness (超出我的感激之情)；the Spring Festival(春节)；hospitable (好客的)；tradition (传统)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I sincerely invite you to visit my country over the Spring Festival, the most important festival in China, one of whose traditions is family reunion, so if you come then you can meet me friendly and hospitable family and relatives.运用非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．（2021·全国·高二课时练习）假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Henry 打算寒假来南宁游玩，有两个公园可以选择：青秀山公园（Qingxiu Mountain Park）或五象湖公园（Wuxiang Lake Park）。他来信希望你推荐其中一个公园。请你回信，内容包括：
1. 你推荐的公园；
2. 你推荐的理由；
3. 你的祝愿。
注意：1. 词数100 左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：historical relics 历史遗迹; Wuxiang New District五象新区
Dear Henry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Henry,
Knowing that you are going to travel to Nanning and are considering which park to visit, I am now writing to make a recommendation.
I highly recommend that you visit Qingxiu Mountain Park. The reasons are as follows. To begin with, when touring Qingxiu Mountain, you can enjoy the fascinating scenery and breathe the fresh air, especially on the top of the mountain, where the whole city seems far away and small. What’s more, there are a lot of attractions, such as temples, Qingshan Tower, various plants and flowers, which will help you have a better understanding of the title “Green City”.
Hope you will have a good time in Nanning.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一封书信，假定你是李华，英国朋友Henry要来游玩，你给你的英国朋友Henry 推荐青秀山公园和五象湖公园中的一个。
【详解】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1. 你推荐的公园；2. 你推荐的理由；3. 你的祝愿。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语及句子有：make a recommendation ，I highly recommend that you visit … ，The reasons are as follows.， enjoy the fascinating scenery and breathe the fresh air ，such as， have a better understanding of ，have a good time 。
可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also)。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句： I highly recommend that you visit Qingxiu Mountain Park. 这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句。What’s more, there are a lot of attractions, such as temples, Qingshan Tower, various plants and flowers, which will help you have a better understanding of the title “Green City”. 这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。使用了一些固定词组，如：make a recommendation ，as follows ，have a better understanding of。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
5．（2022·全国·高三）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友David下周三将来你所在的城市旅游，但你有事无法去机场接他。请你给他发一封电子邮件，要点如下：
1.表示歉意并说明理由；
2. 安排他人接机。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总次数。
Dear David，
I am very happy to know that you are coming to visit my city next Wednesday._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I am very happy to know that you are coming to visit my city next Wednesday.
Having kept in touch with each other by writing for years, I can’t wait to see you. However, I am sorry to tell you that I can’t meet you at the airport that day. My sister fell ill and was taken to the hospital, so I have to take care of her there. But don’t worry. I’ve asked my best friend, Li Lei, to pick you up and take you to the booked hotel instead. What’s more, I have recommended some places of interest in the attachment, which I think you may be interested in. Of course you can also visit other tourist attractions by yourself. Meanwhile, I will call you the moment I am available. I’m expecting your arrival and hope you will enjoy your stay here sincerely.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；假定你是李华，你的英国笔友David下周三将来你所在的城市旅游，但你有事无法去机场接他。请你给他发一封电子邮件，要点如下：1.表示歉意并说明理由；2. 安排他人接机。人称使用第一、二人称。时态应为一般现在时、一般将来时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：can’t meet you at the airport（不能去机场接你），pick up sb.（接某人），recommend（推荐）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句However, I am sorry to tell you that I can’t meet you at the airport that day.非谓语动词Having kept in touch with each other by writing for years, I can’t wait to see you.；同位语I’ve asked my best friend, Li Lei, to pick you up and take you to the booked hotel instead. 定语从句What’s more, I have recommended some places of interest in the attachment, which I think you may be interested in.时间状语从句Meanwhile, I will call you the moment I am available.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，过渡词及短语however，so，but，What’s more，of course，meanwhile的使用，使得文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．（2020·全国·高二专题练习）请根据以下要点，写一篇80词左右的英语短文介绍香港海洋公园。
·香港海洋公园，位于香港的南部，是一个著名的主题公园。
·面积超过87万平方米，是世界上最大的海洋公园之一，有40多年的历史，是亚洲主要的旅游景点之一；是香港最受人们甚欢的公园。每年吸引了大量的世界游客。
·游客可以体验惊险之旅和观看各种表演。
·香港海洋公园还为它提供的教育项目而自豪。
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【答案】Hong Kong Ocean Park, a famous theme park, is situated in the southern side of Hong Kong. As one of the largest marine parks in the world, it covers more than 870,000 square meters.With a history of more than 40 years, Ocean Park has become one of the major tourist attractions in Asia. It is Hong Kong's favourite park, which attracts many visitors from all over the world. Visitors can not only experience adventurous trips but also enjoy a broad variety of shows. The park also takes pride in its educational programs as well.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求写一篇短文，介绍香港海洋公园。
【详解】第一步：
审题：短文，介绍香港海洋公园
人称：第三人称
时态：一般现在时
结构：全文为一部分，介绍香港海洋公园的地理位置、面积、历史、旅游特色等。
要点：介绍香港海洋公园的地理位置、面积、历史、旅游项目等。
地理位置：位于香港的南部
面积和历史：面积超过87万平方米，有40多年的历史
③旅游特色：是亚洲主要的旅游景点之一，游客可以体验惊险之旅、观看各种表演、提供教育项目
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）
theme park；be situated in；marine park；cover more than 870,000 square meters；with a history of；tourist attraction；favourite；attract；experience adventurous trips；a broad variety of；take pride in；educational program
第三步：连词成句
(1)Hong Kong Ocean Park is a famous theme park.
(2)Hong Kong Ocean Park is situated in the southern side of Hong Kong.
(3) Hong Kong Ocean Park is one of the largest marine parks in the world.
(4)It covers more than 870,000 square meters.
(5) Hong Kong Ocean Park has a history of more than 40 years.
(6)Ocean Park has become one of the major tourist attractions in Asia.
(7) The Ocean Park is Hong Kong's favourite park.
(8 ) The Ocean Park attracts many visitors from all over the world.
(9)Visitors can experience adventurous trips.
(10)Visitors can enjoy a broad variety of shows.
(11)The park also takes pride in its educational programs as well.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词、亮点词汇）
将第一个句子作同位语，连接下面两个句子
(1)Hong Kong Ocean Park is a famous theme park.
(2)Hong Kong Ocean Park is situated in the southern side of Hong Kong.
→Hong Kong Ocean Park, a famous theme park, is situated in the southern side of Hong Kong.
将第二个句子改写现在分词作状语，连接下面两个句子
(3) Hong Kong Ocean Park is one of the largest marine parks in the world.
(4)It covers more than 870,000 square meters.
→Hong Kong Ocean Park is one of the largest marine parks in the world, covering more than 870,000 square meters.
将第二个句子作定语从句，连接下面两个句子
(7) Hong Kong Ocean Park is Hong Kong's favourite park.
(8 ) Hong Kong Ocean Park attracts many visitors from all over the world.
→ Ocean Park is Hong Kong's favourite park, which attracts many visitors from all over the world.
用not only… but also…连接下面两个句子
(9)Visitors can experience adventurous trips.
(10)Visitors can enjoy a broad variety of shows.
→Visitors can not only experience adventurous trips but also enjoy a broad variety of shows.
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。
【点睛】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 theme park；be situated in；cover；with a history of；tourist attraction；attract；experience；a broad variety of ；take pride in 等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如现在分词作状语的运用covering more than 870,000 square meters；定语从句的运用It is Hong Kong's favourite park, which attracts many visitors from all over the world；not only… but also并列结构的运用Visitors can not only experience adventurous trips but also enjoy a broad variety of shows等。
7．（2022·云南·昆明市第三中学高二期中）书面表达
假定你是李华，你的英国网友Peter对你上传在QQ空间中的湿地公园照片很感兴趣，他想了解更多信息。请根据以下要点给他回复：
1.位置与交通（市区东部，离市中心20公里)：
2.设施与环境：
3.休闲活动。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好。
参考词汇：湿地公园wetlandpark
DearPeter,
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Yours,
LiHu
【答案】A possible version
I’m pleased to tell you more about the newly-built wetland park as is shown in my photos posted online the other day.
Located in the east of our city, about 20 kilometers away from the city center，it can be easilyapproached to by bus or subway. Surrounded by the Golden lake, it is a paradise for various flowers, water-plants, fishes and seabirds with a balanced ecosystem. Besides, the park is equipped with all kinds of available facilities including groceries and a medical center. Therefore, tourists can enjoy the breath-taking scenery fully and take part in relaxing activities, such as boating, photographing and having a picnic.
Should you pay a visit here, I would keep you company.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这篇书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。假定你是李华，你的英国网友Peter对你上传在QQ空间中的湿地公园照片很感兴趣，他想了解更多信息。请根据以下要点给他回复。
【详解】假定你是李华，你的英国网友Peter对你上传在QQ空间中的湿地公园照片很感兴趣，他想了解更多信息。请根据以下要点给他回复：1. 位置与交通（市区东部，离市中心20公里)：2. 设施与环境：3. 休闲活动。分析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
【点睛】这篇书面表达的关键在于句子内容的准确表述，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。Surrounded by the Golden lake, it is a paradise for various flowers, water-plants, fishes and seabirds with a balanced ecosystem.过去分词作状语的运用