湖北地区2023年中考英语真题分类汇编-书面表达（1）（含解析）
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湖北地区中考真题分类汇编-书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．（2023·湖北襄阳·统考中考真题）今年五一，襄阳凭借丰富的旅游资源和优质的服务，吸引了各地的游客前来“打卡”。在校园英语文化周，你将代表班级做关于“旅行”的英语演讲。请根据以下要点提示，结合你的旅游或出行经历，写一篇英语演讲稿。
要点提示：
(1)简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法；
(2)详述你的一次旅游或出行经历；
(3)根据你的旅行感受，为襄阳的旅游发展提出一条合理的建议或希望。
注意事项：
(1)词数90左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
2．（2023·湖北黄石·统考中考真题）请以“Put yourself in others’ shoes”为主题写一篇英语短文，讲述自己换位思考的故事和体会。
要点：
（1）谈谈你对换位思考的看法；
（2）结合自身经历，谈谈你是如何做到换位思考的。
要求：
（1）短文必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥。
（2）文中不能出现本人真实姓名以及学校相关信息。
（3）80词左右。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2023·湖北荆门·中考真题）我国于今年5月30日成功发射神州十六号载人飞船。航天员乘组中的载荷专家桂海潮从小就有一个航天梦，并不断在为实现梦想而努力。假如你是李华，请根据以下要点，号召大家向桂海潮学习，通过努力实现梦想。
要点：
（1）努力学习各种知识， 丰富大脑；
（2）积极参加体育锻炼，增强体质；
（3）勇于面对不同挑战，永不放弃；
（4）乐于寻求他人帮助，学会合作；
（5）你的看法……
要求：
（1） 文中不得出现真实的人名或地名；
（2） 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
（3）要点齐全，内容可适当发挥；
（4）词数：100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：发射 launch （v. ）；丰富大脑 enrich one’s mind；乐于 be willing to do；合作 cooperate（v.）
Dear teenagers,
I’m Li Hua from Jingmen. China launched the Shenzhou-16 successfully on May 30th this year. One of the astronauts Gui Haichao is our model. As teenagers, we can learn a lot from him to realize our dream.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Students’ Union
4．（2023·湖北十堰·统考中考真题）三年的初中生活，你一定有许多收获，也会有一些不足。展望未来，你肯定有许多美好的期待。假如你被邀请在班会上发言，请你根据以下表格信息，写一篇发言稿。
提示内容 提示词
回顾过去 1.性格上的改变2.学习上的成就3.反思不足 1. outgoing, get on with2. learn from, make progress3. waste time, not understand
展望未来 未来的期望 come true
要求：
发言稿需涵盖表格中所有内容，可适当发挥；
行文连贯，条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
文中不可出现真实人名和校名等相关信息：
词数80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear students,
How time flies! Looking back at these past three years, I have improved a lot. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good luck!
5．（2023·湖北恩施·中考真题）自教育部等十七部门联合印发《全面加强和改进新时代学生心理健康工作专项行动计划（2023—2025）》以来，越来越多的人开始关注青少年的健康。某英语网站拟举办一次以“How to Live a Healthy Life”为题的征文比赛。作为青少年，我们该如何健康生活？请根据下表要点提示，从如何保持身体健康和心理健康两方面写一篇英语短文投稿。
身体健康 心理健康
坚持锻炼 拥有自信
保证睡眠 保持好心情
…… ……
写作要求：
（1）文中必须包含表格中所给的要点，另对任意一方面补充一条你自己的观点；
（2）条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80。开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；
（3）文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息。
参考词汇：physical health 身体健康 psychological health 心理健康
How to Live a Healthy Life
Nowadays, more and more people have come to focus on teenagers’ health. The followings are my opinions about how we teenagers live a healthy life.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．（2023·湖北鄂州·统考中考真题）我运动，我健康；我运动，我快乐。请你以“Doing Sports”为题，写一篇短文。
写作要点：
What sports do you do in your school
What sports do you like
Why do you like the sport(s)
写作要求：
文中不得出现真实校名和师生姓名。
文章必须包括上述写作要点，可适当发挥。
词数80左右。
Doing Sports
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
1．例文
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
Now more and more people are interested in travelling. I think trip is an opportunity for us to experience life and increase knowledge. At the same time, it can also broaden our horizon.
Last Wednesday, we went on a trip to Yixing. Yixing is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest. It was a fine warm day. In the morning, we climbed the hill in the Bamboo Park. On the way, we met an Australian. He was kind and patient. We had fun practising speaking English. In the afternoon, we rowed boats along the underground river in the Shanjuan Cave. It was a great day.
I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据内容提示，介绍自己的旅游经历和感受，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法；
第二步，详述你的一次旅游或出行经历；
第三步，提出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②at the same time同时
③places of interest名胜古迹
[高分句型]
①Yixing is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest.（非限制性定语从句）
②I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.（宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句）
2．例文
Put Yourself in Others’ Shoes
Putting yourself in others’ shoes is a communication skill. It can help us to understand each other. So it’s necessary for us students to learn it.
Three months ago, I asked my parents to buy me a mobile phone, but they refused. I was angry and didn’t talk with them for weeks. But they cooked me delicious food every day as usual. I felt so sorry because I knew my parents loved me so much and they could do everything to help me. At last, my father told me that my life would be more beautiful if I learned to put myself in others’ shoes.
I’ll never forget this lesson: We’d better keep calm and think about it from another direction when something unpleasant happens.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示内容讲述自己换位思考的故事和体会，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，谈谈你对换位思考的看法；
第二步，结合自身经历，谈谈你是如何做到换位思考的；
第三步，谈谈自己的感想和体会。
[亮点词汇]
①as usual像往常一样
②keep calm保持镇定
[高分句型]
①I felt so sorry because I knew my parents loved me so much and they could do everything to help me. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②At last, my father told me that my life would be more beautiful if I learned to put myself in others’ shoes.(if引导的条件状语从句)
3．例文
Dear teenagers,
I’m Li Hua from Jingmen. China launched the Shenzhou-16 successfully on May 30th this year. One of the astronauts Gui Haichao is our model. As teenagers, we can learn a lot from him to realize our dream.
If we want to realize our dreams, first of all, we should work hard to learn all kinds of knowledge to enrich our brains. Second, we should take an active part in physical exercise to build up our body. The body is the root of everything. Third, we must be brave enough to face different challenges and never give up. Finally, when you are in trouble, be willing to ask others for help. Besides, it is important to learn to cooperate with others.
In my opinion, we need a firm heart if we want to realize our dreams. We should have a strong sense of purpose and work hard to do it step by step.
The Students’ Union
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出；
第二步，根据要点提示具体阐述努力实现梦想需要做的事情；
第三步，最后表达个人观点。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of各种各样的
②take an active part in积极参与
③never give up永不放弃
④in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①If we want to realize our dreams, first of all, we should work hard to learn all kinds of knowledge to enrich our brains.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②Finally, when you are in trouble, be willing to ask others for help.（when引导的时间状语从句）
4．例文：
Dear students,
How time flies! Looking back at these past three years, I have improved a lot.
I used to be very shy, not daring to express myself in public. But with the encouragement from my teachers, I not only become more outgoing but also get on well with all the people around me. Besides, I often learn from my classmates so I have made great progress in my study. However, I also wasted much valuable time in playing computer games. What’s worse, I couldn’t really understand my parents, always talking back to them loudly. But now, everything has changed. I make a decision to study harder to make my parents proud of me. I believe that my dream will come true and I will have a bright future.
Good luck!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态综合使用“一般过去时”，“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述过去的三年有很大的变化；
第二步，回顾过去，包括性格、学习的变化并反思自己的不足；
第三步，展望未来，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in public在公共场合
②get on well with与……相处融洽
③make great progress取得很大进步
④make a decision做决定
[高分句型]
①But with the encouragement from my teachers, I not only become more outgoing but also get on well with all the people around me.（not only...but also,,,结构）
②I believe that my dream will come true and I will have a bright future.（that引导的宾语从句）
5．例文
How to Live a Healthy Life
Nowadays, more and more people have come to focus on teenagers’ health. The following are my opinions about how we teenagers live a healthy life.
Firstly, we must keep healthy. We should have a balanced diet. This means eating different kinds of food and lots of fresh fruit and vegetables. We’d better play sports at least one hour every day. Exercise makes us stronger and helps us relax. We should get at least eight hours’ sleep at night, so that we can have enough energy to study.
Secondly, we have to be mentally healthy. We must be confident and have good moods every day.
Finally, be happy. Happiness is important for our health. If you are worried about something, try to solve it as soon as possible.
To sum up, health is wealth. Keeping healthy is very important for us. I hope everybody can live a healthy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“How to Live a Healthy Life”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出自己对青少年如何过健康生活的看法；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从身体健康和心理健康两个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②different kinds of不同种类的
③be worried about担心
④sum up总结
[高分句型]
①We should get at least eight hours’ sleep at night, so that we can have enough energy to study.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
②If you are worried about something, try to solve it as soon as possible.（if引导的条件状语从句）
6．One possible version:
Doing Sports
We do many sports in our school. We usually play basketball every day. And we can play football in our P.E. class. After class, we always take part in many sports, such as jumping the lines, running, playing ping-pong and so on.
Of all the sports, I like playing basketball best. I think I can learn many things from it. Playing basketball can teach me a lot of useful skills, as well as helping me to keep fit and healthy. I can know teamwork from it, too. (88 words)
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章标题以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇介绍你在学校里进行的运动有哪些；
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的运动是哪个项目并说明喜欢这个项目的原因，可列举具体的事例。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②such as比如
③as well as也，又，还
[高分句型]
①I think I can learn many things from it.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
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湖北地区中考真题分类汇编-书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．（2023·湖北襄阳·统考中考真题）今年五一，襄阳凭借丰富的旅游资源和优质的服务，吸引了各地的游客前来“打卡”。在校园英语文化周，你将代表班级做关于“旅行”的英语演讲。请根据以下要点提示，结合你的旅游或出行经历，写一篇英语演讲稿。
要点提示：
(1)简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法；
(2)详述你的一次旅游或出行经历；
(3)根据你的旅行感受，为襄阳的旅游发展提出一条合理的建议或希望。
注意事项：
(1)词数90左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
2．（2023·湖北黄石·统考中考真题）请以“Put yourself in others’ shoes”为主题写一篇英语短文，讲述自己换位思考的故事和体会。
要点：
（1）谈谈你对换位思考的看法；
（2）结合自身经历，谈谈你是如何做到换位思考的。
要求：
（1）短文必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥。
（2）文中不能出现本人真实姓名以及学校相关信息。
（3）80词左右。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2023·湖北荆门·中考真题）我国于今年5月30日成功发射神州十六号载人飞船。航天员乘组中的载荷专家桂海潮从小就有一个航天梦，并不断在为实现梦想而努力。假如你是李华，请根据以下要点，号召大家向桂海潮学习，通过努力实现梦想。
要点：
（1）努力学习各种知识， 丰富大脑；
（2）积极参加体育锻炼，增强体质；
（3）勇于面对不同挑战，永不放弃；
（4）乐于寻求他人帮助，学会合作；
（5）你的看法……
要求：
（1） 文中不得出现真实的人名或地名；
（2） 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
（3）要点齐全，内容可适当发挥；
（4）词数：100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：发射 launch （v. ）；丰富大脑 enrich one’s mind；乐于 be willing to do；合作 cooperate（v.）
Dear teenagers,
I’m Li Hua from Jingmen. China launched the Shenzhou-16 successfully on May 30th this year. One of the astronauts Gui Haichao is our model. As teenagers, we can learn a lot from him to realize our dream.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Students’ Union
4．（2023·湖北十堰·统考中考真题）三年的初中生活，你一定有许多收获，也会有一些不足。展望未来，你肯定有许多美好的期待。假如你被邀请在班会上发言，请你根据以下表格信息，写一篇发言稿。
提示内容 提示词
回顾过去 1.性格上的改变2.学习上的成就3.反思不足 1. outgoing, get on with2. learn from, make progress3. waste time, not understand
展望未来 未来的期望 come true
要求：
发言稿需涵盖表格中所有内容，可适当发挥；
行文连贯，条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
文中不可出现真实人名和校名等相关信息：
词数80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear students,
How time flies! Looking back at these past three years, I have improved a lot. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good luck!
5．（2023·湖北恩施·中考真题）自教育部等十七部门联合印发《全面加强和改进新时代学生心理健康工作专项行动计划（2023—2025）》以来，越来越多的人开始关注青少年的健康。某英语网站拟举办一次以“How to Live a Healthy Life”为题的征文比赛。作为青少年，我们该如何健康生活？请根据下表要点提示，从如何保持身体健康和心理健康两方面写一篇英语短文投稿。
身体健康 心理健康
坚持锻炼 拥有自信
保证睡眠 保持好心情
…… ……
写作要求：
（1）文中必须包含表格中所给的要点，另对任意一方面补充一条你自己的观点；
（2）条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80。开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；
（3）文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息。
参考词汇：physical health 身体健康 psychological health 心理健康
How to Live a Healthy Life
Nowadays, more and more people have come to focus on teenagers’ health. The followings are my opinions about how we teenagers live a healthy life.
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6．（2023·湖北鄂州·统考中考真题）我运动，我健康；我运动，我快乐。请你以“Doing Sports”为题，写一篇短文。
写作要点：
What sports do you do in your school
What sports do you like
Why do you like the sport(s)
写作要求：
文中不得出现真实校名和师生姓名。
文章必须包括上述写作要点，可适当发挥。
词数80左右。
Doing Sports
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参考答案：
1．例文
Dear schoolmates,
Good morning! I’m glad to make a speech here.
Now more and more people are interested in travelling. I think trip is an opportunity for us to experience life and increase knowledge. At the same time, it can also broaden our horizon.
Last Wednesday, we went on a trip to Yixing. Yixing is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest. It was a fine warm day. In the morning, we climbed the hill in the Bamboo Park. On the way, we met an Australian. He was kind and patient. We had fun practising speaking English. In the afternoon, we rowed boats along the underground river in the Shanjuan Cave. It was a great day.
I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据内容提示，介绍自己的旅游经历和感受，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍你对旅行的态度或看法；
第二步，详述你的一次旅游或出行经历；
第三步，提出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②at the same time同时
③places of interest名胜古迹
[高分句型]
①Yixing is a modern and tidy city, where there are many places of interest.（非限制性定语从句）
②I think if we want to attract more tourists, we should provide better service for tourists.（宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句）
2．例文
Put Yourself in Others’ Shoes
Putting yourself in others’ shoes is a communication skill. It can help us to understand each other. So it’s necessary for us students to learn it.
Three months ago, I asked my parents to buy me a mobile phone, but they refused. I was angry and didn’t talk with them for weeks. But they cooked me delicious food every day as usual. I felt so sorry because I knew my parents loved me so much and they could do everything to help me. At last, my father told me that my life would be more beautiful if I learned to put myself in others’ shoes.
I’ll never forget this lesson: We’d better keep calm and think about it from another direction when something unpleasant happens.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示内容讲述自己换位思考的故事和体会，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，谈谈你对换位思考的看法；
第二步，结合自身经历，谈谈你是如何做到换位思考的；
第三步，谈谈自己的感想和体会。
[亮点词汇]
①as usual像往常一样
②keep calm保持镇定
[高分句型]
①I felt so sorry because I knew my parents loved me so much and they could do everything to help me. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②At last, my father told me that my life would be more beautiful if I learned to put myself in others’ shoes.(if引导的条件状语从句)
3．例文
Dear teenagers,
I’m Li Hua from Jingmen. China launched the Shenzhou-16 successfully on May 30th this year. One of the astronauts Gui Haichao is our model. As teenagers, we can learn a lot from him to realize our dream.
If we want to realize our dreams, first of all, we should work hard to learn all kinds of knowledge to enrich our brains. Second, we should take an active part in physical exercise to build up our body. The body is the root of everything. Third, we must be brave enough to face different challenges and never give up. Finally, when you are in trouble, be willing to ask others for help. Besides, it is important to learn to cooperate with others.
In my opinion, we need a firm heart if we want to realize our dreams. We should have a strong sense of purpose and work hard to do it step by step.
The Students’ Union
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出；
第二步，根据要点提示具体阐述努力实现梦想需要做的事情；
第三步，最后表达个人观点。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of各种各样的
②take an active part in积极参与
③never give up永不放弃
④in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①If we want to realize our dreams, first of all, we should work hard to learn all kinds of knowledge to enrich our brains.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②Finally, when you are in trouble, be willing to ask others for help.（when引导的时间状语从句）
4．例文：
Dear students,
How time flies! Looking back at these past three years, I have improved a lot.
I used to be very shy, not daring to express myself in public. But with the encouragement from my teachers, I not only become more outgoing but also get on well with all the people around me. Besides, I often learn from my classmates so I have made great progress in my study. However, I also wasted much valuable time in playing computer games. What’s worse, I couldn’t really understand my parents, always talking back to them loudly. But now, everything has changed. I make a decision to study harder to make my parents proud of me. I believe that my dream will come true and I will have a bright future.
Good luck!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态综合使用“一般过去时”，“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述过去的三年有很大的变化；
第二步，回顾过去，包括性格、学习的变化并反思自己的不足；
第三步，展望未来，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in public在公共场合
②get on well with与……相处融洽
③make great progress取得很大进步
④make a decision做决定
[高分句型]
①But with the encouragement from my teachers, I not only become more outgoing but also get on well with all the people around me.（not only...but also,,,结构）
②I believe that my dream will come true and I will have a bright future.（that引导的宾语从句）
5．例文
How to Live a Healthy Life
Nowadays, more and more people have come to focus on teenagers’ health. The following are my opinions about how we teenagers live a healthy life.
Firstly, we must keep healthy. We should have a balanced diet. This means eating different kinds of food and lots of fresh fruit and vegetables. We’d better play sports at least one hour every day. Exercise makes us stronger and helps us relax. We should get at least eight hours’ sleep at night, so that we can have enough energy to study.
Secondly, we have to be mentally healthy. We must be confident and have good moods every day.
Finally, be happy. Happiness is important for our health. If you are worried about something, try to solve it as soon as possible.
To sum up, health is wealth. Keeping healthy is very important for us. I hope everybody can live a healthy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“How to Live a Healthy Life”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出自己对青少年如何过健康生活的看法；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从身体健康和心理健康两个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②different kinds of不同种类的
③be worried about担心
④sum up总结
[高分句型]
①We should get at least eight hours’ sleep at night, so that we can have enough energy to study.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
②If you are worried about something, try to solve it as soon as possible.（if引导的条件状语从句）
6．One possible version:
Doing Sports
We do many sports in our school. We usually play basketball every day. And we can play football in our P.E. class. After class, we always take part in many sports, such as jumping the lines, running, playing ping-pong and so on.
Of all the sports, I like playing basketball best. I think I can learn many things from it. Playing basketball can teach me a lot of useful skills, as well as helping me to keep fit and healthy. I can know teamwork from it, too. (88 words)
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章标题以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇介绍你在学校里进行的运动有哪些；
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的运动是哪个项目并说明喜欢这个项目的原因，可列举具体的事例。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②such as比如
③as well as也，又，还
[高分句型]
①I think I can learn many things from it.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
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