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Unit 5
What were you doing when the rainstorm came
Section B 3a-SC
课型：写作课
主讲人：XXX
CONTENTS
01
情景导入
回顾总结
05
学习理解
02
考点速递
06
应用实践
03
随堂小练
07
迁移创新
04
家庭作业
08
01
能够围绕“重大事件”的话题，通过听、说、读等活动搜集、理解所需要的语言基础信息；能够正确使用一般过去时和过去进行时记录过去的一件事；能够熟悉记叙文的结构特点，用英语写记叙文记录一件最重要的事，明白记叙文的基本要素，即事件，时间，地点，事件的经过和结果
语言能力
02
能够通过多种渠道学习和复习，保持英语学习兴趣；认识了以读促写的写作模式并尝试进行写作
学习能力
03
能够在老师的帮助下，通过学习，多层次、多角度、多元化地内化有关“过去的重大事件”的语言知识；在写作中，注意到语篇的整体性、结构性、逻辑性
思维品质
04
能够懂得生活中重要的经历都可以促进我们学习，帮助我们明白很多道理
文化意识
学习目标
B
Look at these pictures and tell us what they were doing when the Wenchuan earthquake happened
What were you doing when the Wenchuan earthquake happened
I was playing soccer when the Wenchuan earthquake happened.
Look at these pictures and tell us what they were doing when the Wenchuan earthquake happened
I was sleeping when the Wenchuan earthquake happened.
What were you doing when the Wenchuan earthquake happened
Look at these pictures and tell us what they were doing when the Wenchuan earthquake happened
What were you doing when the Wenchuan earthquake happened
I was shopping when the Wenchuan earthquake happened.
Look at these pictures and tell us what they were doing when the Wenchuan earthquake happened
I was talking on the phone when the Wenchuan earthquake happened.
What were you doing when the Wenchuan earthquake happened
Do you remember what happened in the past
Why do you remember it well
Let's make some notes and write about it later.
an important exam
a piano competition
a school trip
an earthquake
a big fire
Work in pairs. One student asks WH-questions and the other one guesses what the event was.
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important
events
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What were people doing
Why was it important
How did you feel
How can you write a passage about a past event Think of the elements that can be included in the passage.
what was
the event
when and where it happened
what were you and your friends/family doing
why you remember it
Make notes about an event you remember well.
3a
What was the event
When did it happen
Where was the event
What were you doing
What were your friends doing
Why was it important
Time
Place
Activities
Activities
Reasons
Why do you remember this event
Event
Reasons
It started on February 4, 2022.
Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics.
At Bird Nest(鸟巢) in Beijing.
I was having dinner with my family.
My friends were doing homework.
It was the first time for China to have the Winter Olympic Games
We enjoed a wonderful show .
Make notes about an event you remember well.
3a
What was the event
When did it happen
Where was the event
What were you doing
What were others doing
Why was it important
Time
Place
Activities
Activities
Reasons
Why do you remember this event
Event
Reasons
On May 22, 2021.
Yuan Longping passed away.
In Changsha
I was reading books.
My parents were cooking lunch.
Yuan Longping spend all his life doing research on rice.
He is such a great hero that he will be remembered by the world forever.
Write a short article about the important event in 3a. Try to write three paragraphs.
3b
Para.1
Introduction
First,write about the event（ when and where it happended）.
An important thing that I remember well was ___________. It happened in/ on_____ at/in _____.
Para.2
Details
When I heard the news of this event/ When this event happened, I was ______.My friends were________.
Next,write about what you and some of your friends were doing when this event happened.
Para.3
Reasons
Then, write about
why this event was important.
This event is very important to me because_______./ I remember this event well because____________.
Let’s practice.
文
体裁
时
时态
第 人称
人称
.
话题
①审
记叙
过去进行/一般过去
一
难忘的经历
在你成长的过程中，有些事情会让你记忆犹新，经久难忘。请以 “An Unforgettable Experience” 为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
内容包括：
1.这件难忘的事情的经过。
2.它令你难忘的原因。
Try to find out the structure of this passage.
An important event that I remember well was that a group of foreign students visited our school. It happened on March 20th, 2019.
When this event happened, I was reading an article in the classroom. My friends were playing basketball in the playground.
This event is very important to me because this was the first time that I had communicated with foreigners. I was so excited that day.
Example
What
When
Where
Why
When/what
Brainstorm
Let’s find out the writing structure.
An unforgettable experience for me
1. when & where
2. what
3. feelings & details
4. why
Let’s draft
What sentences can we use to describe this paragraph
An unforgettable experience for me
1. when & where
2. what
3. feelings & details
4. why
1. when & where
The year of 2023 was finally over. Many things happened. The important thing that I will never forget is .
Let’s draft
What sentences can we use to describe this paragraph
An unforgettable experience for me
1. when & where
2. what
3. feelings & details
4. why
The year of 2023 was finally over. Many things happened. The important thing that I will never forget is .
2. what
When I heard the news of this event/ When this event happened, I was ______.My friends were________.
Let’s draft
What sentences can we use to describe this paragraph
An unforgettable experience for me
1. when & where
2. what
3. feelings & details
4. why
The year of 2023 was finally over. Many things happened. The important thing that I will never forget is .
When I heard the news of this event/ When this event happened, I was ______.My friends were________.
3. feelings & details
I was worried what…
“Would they feel scared too ”
“Can I be brave to help them ”
Let’s draft
What sentences can we use to describe this paragraph
An unforgettable experience for me
1. when & where
2. what
3. feelings & details
4. why
The year of 2023 was finally over. Many things happened. The important thing that I will never forget is .
When I heard the news of this event/ When this event happened, I was ______.My friends were________.
I was worried what…
“Would they feel scared too ”
“Can I be brave to help them ”
4. why
Thanks to … everything is normal now in …
This was the event I will never forget because…
Let’s draft
What sentences can we use to describe this paragraph
An unforgettable experience for me
1. when & where
2. what
3. feelings & details
4. why
The year of 2023 was finally over. Many things happened. The important thing that I will never forget is .
When I heard the news of this event/ When this event happened, I was ______.My friends were________.
I was worried what…
“Would they feel scared too ”
“Can I be brave to help them ”
Thanks to … everything is normal now in …
This was the event I will never forget because…
Let’s draft
What sentences can we use to describe this paragraph
How to make the passage better
佳句集锦
历史是说过和做过事情的记忆。
过去的事就让它过去吧。
充实今天的生活，昨日已成历史，明天还是未知数。
◆ History is the memory of things said and done.
◆ Let bygones be bygones.
◆ Enrich your life today; yesterday is history; tomorrow is the unknown.
Let’s proofread
One possible version.
People often remember what they were doing when they heard the news of important news in history. An important event that I remember well was that the great man Yuan Longping passed away in Changsha on May22,2021.
When I heard the news, I was reading books while my parents were making lunch. We were completely shocked and thought it was unbelievable. Later, we saw the report on the Internet. All of us felt very sad and finished the rest of lunch in silence. On hearing the news, hundreds of people came to the hospital in Changsha to see him off and shouted out words such as “Grandpa Yuan, have a good journey.”
As we all know, Yuan Longping spent all his life doing research on rice. He is such a great hero that he will be remembered by the world forever. As a teenager, I will pass on his spirit and try my best to build our country into a more prosperous one.
Self-check and peer-check.
Let’s proofread
check
Check for mistakes:
spelling
grammar
polish
□你分段了吗？
□你的每一段都有主旨吗？
□你包含介绍的基本信息了吗？
□ 你有拼写错误吗？
□ 你有语法错误吗？
□ 你使用连词and了吗？
Let’s evaluate
Let’s edit
评价维度 具体要求 分值 得分 总分
基本分 (9分) 内容 要点齐全有细节 3
词数恰当 (80-120词) 1 逻辑连贯 (不生搬硬套) 2 结构 段落布局适合文体 (2-4段) 1 衔接 (恰当使用过渡词) 2 加分项 (6分) 语言 表达符合语境且拼写正确 1 大量使用初中阶段所学表达 1 满足语言使用的多样性: 短语、句型、从句等 1 标点符号使用正确 1 排版 书写干净整齐 1 版面布局恰当 (分段/对齐) 1
Self check 1
1. Fill in the blanks with when or while.
1. ______ I was walking home from school, I saw a strange light in the sky. But ______ I pointed it out to my friend, it went away.
2. ______ I told my older brother about the stange light in the sky, he just laughed and didn't believe me.
3. _______my brother was laughing, the television news reported that other people had seen the light as well.
While
when
When
While
Self check 2
2. Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets.
When I _____ (be) in the sixth grade, I ______ (join) a piano competition. I _________ (practice) for four hours every day and my piano teacher ______ (come) three times a week to ______ (help) me. Then the big day finally ________(arrive). I _____ (be) so nervous when they ______ (call) my name. I ______ (go) up and _______ (start) to play.
arrived
joined
was
came
help
practiced
was
called
went
started
Self check 2
2. Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets.
While I ___________ (play), everyone _____ (sit) still and listened. I played the song without any mistakes. Then I ______ (wait) for them to call out the winner. When I ______ (hear) my name, my heart __________ (beat) so quickly I thought I would stop breathing. I couldn't believe it. I _____ (win)! It _____ (be) the happiest day of my life!
was playing
sat
won
heard
was beating
waited
was
Summary
in the library, on the street, at the bus stop, in the kitchen, outside his home, in the area, by the side of the road
A: What were you doing at eight last night
B: I was taking a shower.
A: What was Jenny doing while Linda was sleeping
B: While Linda was sleeping, Jenny was helping Mary with her homework.
Structures
Where
busy, serious, still, again, very, also, finally, suddenly, luckily, heavily, together, apart, in a mess, in bad shape
rainstorm, car accident, helping a dog by roadside, Martin Luther King's death, the World Trade Center
Past events & stories
How
What
When
at eight last night, at the time of the rainstorm, so far this year, when I woke up, while I was running home
But when I pointed it out to my friend, it went away. (教材P40 1)
point out 指出
Point
Language points
point out是“动词+副词”型短语。代词作宾语时，只能放在point与out 之间。
This is a photo of my family. Can you point me out
The teacher pointed out many mistakes in my homework.
【拓展延伸】point to意为“指向”，所指的物体较远，point at意为“指着”，所指的物体较近。
一、单项选择
1
I bought a magazine ____ I was waiting for the train.
A. as soon as B. after C. until D. while
Diana is so careful that she always look over her exercises to_____ there are no mistakes.
A. find out B. make sure C. come up with D. look for
—Mary won first prize in the competition.
—_____ She said she made several terrible mistakes.
A. I think so. B.You're welcome.
C. You must be kidding. D. It doesn't matter.
2
C
D
3
B
二、用括号中所给词的适当形式填空
Take a deep breath and calm down, and you will fall ______ (sleep).
Can you tell me the ______(true) of the accident
Look! It's raining _______ (heavy). You'd better take an umbrella with you.
We were __________ (complete) surprised when we heard the news.
They argued with each other. In the end, they said nothing and went home in _______ (silent).
asleep
1
2
5
heavily
truth
completely
silence
3
4
Homework
Level A: What were you doing when you heard some news about big events, like Su Yiming’s success in Beijing 2022 Winter Olympic Games and the air accident of a China Eastern Airlines plane with 132 people aboard in Guangxi. Write a short passage to record it.
Level B: Draw a mind map to sum up the knowledge of this unit.
