2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写 阅读障碍克服之后 讲义-

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名称 2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写 阅读障碍克服之后 讲义-
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读后续写阅读障碍克服之后
阅读下面材料 ,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段 ,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was really nervous about English class this year because I was an eleventh grader taking a twelfth grade class. I knew that I wouldn't know anyone in the class, and that scared me a little. But since I didn't know anyone, I had the chance to do something I love almost as much as socializing-people watching.
One of the most interesting girls in the class sat directly behind me. she was always laughing and talking , and she just seemed so happy. She was friendly , too—she was one of the very few people in the class who made any attempt to acknowledge me. She was one of those people you just liked , even if you didn’t really know her.
At the end of the year , we were assigned a big project. It was a very open-ended project , where the instructions were basically to read something , then read or watch something else that related to it , and then come up with a class presentation based on what you learned. The presentations were spread out over the last month of school , and because everyone had chosen such different topics and different ways to present those topics , we had some of the most interesting and varied presentations I’ve ever watched.
The girl behind me presented on one of the last days. She got up in front of the class , and told everyone how she had read about eating disorders , because she herself had struggled with one. Since it would have been too difficult for her to talk to us about it directly , she and a friend had made a movie , where they interviewed each other about their eating disorders , how they had felt while they were struggling with them , and how they had overcome them.
注意:
1 . 续写词数应为150 左右;
2 . 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
By the end of the presentation , almost everyone was in tears.
When she returned to her seat , I Could tell she was really relieved and happy.
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By the end of the presentation, almost everyone was in tears. We gave her a big applause. Several classmates put up their hands to comment on how brave she was to stand up in front of thirty people and talk about something so personal, and how strong she was to have overcome the disorder. The most shocking thing about the whole presentation was how surprising it was. We never thought that she would have had a problem like that. She always seemed so happy and confident. We were really inspired by her courage.
When she returned to her seat, I could tell she was really relieved and happy. “Well done! You are my hero!” I gave her a thumbs-up signal and praised her. “Thanks! Things are always changing for the better so long as we believe in ourselves and take some action.” she replied with a broad smile on her face. I couldn’t agree with her more. Her story also reminds me how difficult it is to judge people. You never know just by looking, or even from observing them, what type of person someone is.
续写译文
演讲结束时,几乎每个人都在流泪。我们给了她热烈的掌声。几位同学举起双手,评论她是多么勇敢地站在三十个人面前,谈论如此私人的事情,以及她克服这种疾病是多么坚强。整个演讲最令人震惊的是它是多么令人惊讶。我们从没想过她会有这样的问题。她总是显得那么快乐和自信。她的勇气让我们深受鼓舞。
当她回到座位上时,我看得出来,她真的很放心和高兴。“干得好!你是我的英雄!我向她竖起大拇指,称赞她。“谢谢!只要我们相信自己并采取一些行动,事情总是在向好的方向发展,“她脸上带着灿烂的笑容回答道。我完全同意她的看法。她的故事也提醒我,评判人是多么困难。你永远无法通过观察,甚至通过观察他们来知道一个人是什么样的人。
续写亮点
Several classmates put up their hands to comment on how brave she was to stand up in front of thirty people and talk about something so personal, and how strong she was to have overcome the disorder.
运用了介词后的宾语从句。第一个And连接并列谓语动词。
The most shocking thing about the whole presentation was how surprising it was.
运用了表语从句。
We never thought that she would have had a problem like that.
运用了宾语从句。
She always seemed so happy and confident.
运用了seem adj结构。
We were really inspired by her courage.
运用了一般过去时的被动语态。
I gave her a thumbs-up signal and praised her.
运用了and连接并列谓语动词。
Things are always changing for the better so long as we believe in ourselves and take some action.
运用了主从复合句。
she replied with a broad smile on her face.
运用了主谓状语。
I couldn’t agree with her more.
运用了否定词加比较级。
Her story also reminds me how difficult it is to judge people.
运用了remind sb 宾语从句。