基于七选五的教学设计
教学目标
知道语篇的衔接和连贯手段
理解语篇的衔接和连贯手段
应用语篇的衔接和连贯手段
教学过程
教学活动1 语篇衔接连贯知识的梳理
语篇的衔接和连贯手段:
一、语法手段(指称,替代和省略)
二、词汇手段(原词复现,近义词/同义词,上下义词,反义词等)
三、连接词
四、其它手段(相同句式,符号,句中位置,句间逻辑等)
设计意图:学生解题前让学生列出语篇衔接和连贯的手段,为后面的语篇的衔接和连贯分析作铺垫。
教学活动2 教师引导解释七选五语篇中的的衔接和连贯现象
Personal Forgiveness
Taking responsibility for mistakes is a positive step, but don’t beat yourself up about them. To err (犯错) is human. 36 D. It’s just as important to show yourself some forgiveness. _____________________ You can use the following writing exercise to help you do this. 解释:代词this回指show yourself some forgiveness. D选项和前面的 To err is human有逻辑上的因果关系。(语法手段:代词回指)
In a journal or on a piece of paper, put the heading “Personal strengths.” 37 Are you caring Creative Generous A good listener Fun to be around They don’t have to be world-changing, just aspects of your personality that you’re proud of.
37.选B. Now list all the characteristics you like about yourself.选项中的characteristic和后面的caring, Creative, Generous, A good listener, Fun to be around,有上下义关系(词汇手段:上下义词)
At the top of a second page, put the heading “Acts of kindness.” On this one, list all the positive things you’ve done for others. It might be the time when you helped a friend with their homework, when you did the ironing without being asked, or when you baked cookies after the family had had a tiring day. 38
38题选F. Whatever it is, no matter how small it might seem, write it down.空前讲述了列出你为别人做过的所有积极的事情,F选项“不管是什么事,不管它看起来可能有多小,把它写下来”总结上文,符合逻辑。(语法手段:it指代)
You could ask a friend or family member to help add to your list. 39:C. Theymight even like to have a go at doing the exercise. 代词回指(语法手段)
That way, you could exchange thoughts on what makes each of you special and the aspects of your personality that shine through. In fact, don’t wait until you’ve made a mistake to try this — it’s a great way to boost self-confidence at any time.
It’s something of a cliché(陈词滥调) that most people learn not from their successes but their mistakes. The thing is, it’s true. 40G. Whatever the mistake, remember it isn’t a fixed aspect of your personality. We’re all changing and learning all the time and mistakes are a positive way to develop and grow.互为反义,形成对比(词汇手段:反义词)
A. A little self-forgiveness also goes a long way.
B. Now list all the characteristics you like about yourself.
C. They might even like to have a go at doing the exercise.
D. It’s just as important to show yourself some forgiveness.
E. It doesn’t mean you have to ignore what’s happened or forget it.
F. Whatever it is, no matter how small it might seem, write it down.
G. Whatever the mistake, remember it isn’t a fixed aspect of your personality.
设计意图:教师示范讲解语篇衔接连贯手段在语篇中的具体应用,帮助学生对语篇的衔接和连贯手段有更好的理解,为后面学生对这个知识的应用作好铺垫。
教学活动3 学生小组合作,解释语篇2,3,4,5(具体语篇略)
As we know, mental health is in a worse situation among young people globally. 1.C. The frequency of depression and anxiety is increasing.This not only lowers quality of life,but has a negative impact on a teenager's growth.
解释:1. 答案选C, 过渡句的位置, 对mental health is in a worse situation是一种解释,后面的代词this回指答案。(代词回指)
Indeed, some screen time can promote connections and enable tasks to be done more efficiently. 2. D. there are many more ways, nevertheless, in which it is harmful.In addition to troubling nerve stimulation, too much screen time ...
解释:2. 答案选D,转折连词,答案所在的句子和前面的句子是转折关系。后面的句子和答案所在的句子之间的连词in addition to又有递进关系。(连词)
3.F. paying constant directed attention to screens can raise directed attention tiredness. The attention systems can be restored in natural environment ....
解释:3. 答案选F,(原词复现)
4. G. This study highlights that nature may currently be a potential public health resource. The great nature could potentially function as a psychological...
解释:4. 答案选G,(原词复现)
This knowledge could be a guide to public health departments that are struggling to restore happiness and cheer in countless anxious teenagers. 5. It suggests more outdoor projects like building parks can be fundamental.
解释:5.答案选E,It 回指前面的内容(代词回指)
设计意图:让学生通过小组合作的学习方式来解释,分析语篇衔接和连贯知识在语篇中的具体应用,帮助学生内化此知识。
教学活动4 作业布置
根据文章选择正确的选项
1.
The Upside to Being Outside
Research shows that being in nature makes people feel good, whether they’re roughing it in the wilderness for days or just hanging out at a local park for a while. One study was conducted in the city of Birmingham, Alabama. Researchers found that most participants’ mood and well-being improved significantly when they spent time in urban parks, even though the average visit was only around half an hour.
1 For example, scientists in the United Kingdom studied the impact of the “30 Days Wild” campaign. It challenged people to interact with nature for 30 days by enjoying earthy activities like feeding birds and planting flowers. Participants were measurably happier and healthier throughout the challenge…and for months afterwards, too. 2
How does nature boost people’s happiness Scientists say that spending time in natural settings reduces stress and anxiety, which benefits mental and physical health. Research shows our brains are more relaxed in natural settings.
To most people, it’s not news that nature can be calming. But multiple studies have found that spending time in nature also has some more surprising benefits, like improving creativity and problem-solving. 3 Another found that exposure to nature helped people score better on tests. That’s more proof that going outside is a smart move!
What accounts for the connection with cognition and creativity It could be that a good dose of nature acts as a cure to information overload. Everyday life involves a lot of multitasking. Some scientists theorize that spending time in nature enables our brains to rest and recover from mental tiredness. 4
Naturally, scientific studies don’t cover everything that’s great about the great outdoors. 5 From recreation and exercise to happiness and creativity, there are lots of upsides to getting outside.
A.One study revealed that people were better at figuring out puzzles after a four-day camping trip.
B.According to many scientific studies, there’s a good chance it’ll make you happier, healthier, and more creative.
C.What’s more, the lift people get from nature is long lasting.
D.Lots of people enjoy fun activities outside, like swimming, riding bikes, or climbing trees.
E.When the only light you’ve seen all day is the glow of a screen, it might be a good idea to switch it off.
F.This means that whether you’re studying or playing video games, heading outside to give your brain a break might help you get to the next level.
G.So, kicking back in a park is a bit like treating your mind to a restful mini vacation.
【答案】1.C 2.G 3.A 4.F 5.D
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。主要介绍的是户外活动的好处。
1.根据空后的For example可知,空后内容是对该空的举例说明,所以该空为本段的主题句,根据空处所在段落的尾句“Participants were measurably happier and healthier throughout the challenge…and for months afterwards, too. (在整个挑战过程中,参与者都更快乐、更健康……之后的几个月也是如此。)”可知,该段讲述的是在户外活动给参与者带来的快乐会持续很久,C选项“What’s more, the lift people get from nature is long lasting. (更重要的是,人们从大自然中获得的提升是持久的。)”表述的内容与举例说明中的内容一致,符合语境。故选C项。
2.根据空前“For example, scientists in the United Kingdom studied the impact of the “30 Days Wild” campaign. It challenged people to interact with nature for 30 days by enjoying earthy activities like feeding birds and planting flowers.Participants were measurably happier and healthier throughout the challenge…and for months afterwards, too. (例如,英国科学家研究了“野外30天”运动的影响。它要求人们在30天内与大自然互动,享受像喂鸟和种花这样的朴实活动。参与者在整个挑战过程中以及之后的几个月里都明显更快乐、更健康。在整个挑战过程中,参与者都更快乐、更健康……之后的几个月也是如此。)”可知,该段讲述的是在户外活动给参与者带来快乐,G选项“So, kicking back in a park is a bit like treating your mind to a restful mini vacation. (所以,在公园里放松一下有点像给你的大脑放个小长假。)”,是对前面的总结,符合语境。故选G项。
3.根据空前“But multiple studies have found that spending time in nature also has some more surprising benefits, like improving creativity and problem-solving.(但多项研究发现,花时间在大自然中也有一些更令人惊讶的好处,比如提高创造力和解决问题的能力。)”中的multiple studies以及空后句子“Another found that exposure to nature helped people score better on tests.(另一项研究发现,接触大自然有助于人们在考试中取得更好的成绩。)”中的another可知,该空格应该是关于在户外好处的相关研究,A选项“One study revealed that people were better at figuring out puzzles after a four-day camping trip.(一项研究表明,人们在为期四天的露营旅行后更善于找出谜题。)”讲述的为一项关于户外好处的研究,符合语境。故选A项。
4.根据空格处于尾句可知,该空应为本段的总结,根据空前“Some scientists theorize that spending time in nature enables our brains to rest and recover from mental tiredness. (一些科学家认为,花时间在大自然中可以让我们的大脑休息并从精神疲劳中恢复过来。)”可知,户外会让大脑得到休息,从精神疲劳中恢复过来,F选项“This means that whether you’re studying or playing video games, heading outside to give your brain a break might help you get to the next level. (这意味着无论你是在学习还是玩电子游戏,到外面去让你的大脑休息一下可能会帮助你达到一个新的水平。)”中的this means是对空前内容的解释,结合句意可知,F选项内容与空前内容吻合。故选F项。
5.根据空后“From recreation and exercise to happiness and creativity, there are lots of upsides to getting outside. (从娱乐和锻炼到快乐和创造力,户外活动有很多好处。)”的recreation(娱乐)相关的户外活动为全文首次出现可以推断,此空处应提到相关内容,D选项“Lots of people enjoy fun activities outside, like swimming, riding bikes, or climbing trees. (很多人在外面享受有趣的活动,如游泳、骑自行车或爬树。)”中的fun activity以及其后的举例内容与空后内容一致。故选D项。
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Recycling is good for our planet, but it can be confusing. Can I recycle plastic bags What about pizza cartons Toothpaste tubes Which bin should I use There are so many questions, and more than half of Americans are unsure about how to recycle. 6 Here’s a handy four-step guide on how to recycle effectively:
Know what to put in the recycling bin. Keep it simple and focus on the most commonly recycled items, such as paper, glass, aluminum and plastic. 7 Don’t use the recycled symbol as a guide. “The number on the container is really for people to identify the type of resin (树脂). That’s not helpful for the common consumer,” said Cody Marshall, a strategist at nonprofit Recycling Partnership.
8 It is really important to know what you cannot put in your bin. You can always check with your city or at BeRecycled.org. If you live in the US, just plug in your postcode to search. Recycling companies struggle with the same problem items: hoses (软管), cords, needles and clothing, according to Marshall, so don’t put those items in your bin.
Wash or clean items. Do a quick clean to make sure there is no food left in containers before you put them in the bin. 9 Save food for composting (堆肥) in your garden.
Don’t bag it. Unless you live in a place that requires it, like New York City, keep the recyclables lost in the bin. “A lot of the time, it’s not safe for our employees to tear those bags open, or it takes too much time,” said Keller. “ 10 ”
A.Know what is not recyclable.
B.The answers are not hard to find.
C.A lot of bagged stuff goes right to the landfill.
D.Plastic bags can be used again or returned to grocery stores.
E.If you really don’t know if an item is recyclable, then just throw it in the garbage.
F.This is really important if you only use one bin because food items could ruin paper.
G.Hard plastics like water and soft drink bottles or anything like these can be recycled.
【答案】6.B 7.G 8.A 9.F 10.C
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了有效回收的4个步骤:知道要把什么放进回收箱;知道什么是不可回收的;扔垃圾之前清理出食物残留;不要把垃圾装袋。
6.前文“There are so many questions, and more than half of Americans are unsure about how to recycle.(有这么多的问题,超过一半的美国人不确定如何回收)”提及了回收时有太多问题令人困扰,后文“Here’s a handy four-step guide on how to recycle effectively(以下是有效回收垃圾的四步指南)”则说到有效回收的4个步骤。由此推知,设空句作为中间过渡句,应是与前文在句意逻辑上构成转折,且引出后文内容。B项“The answers are not hard to find.(答案不难找到)”的“The answers”对应前文“questions”,句意上与前文构成转折,且可引出后文内容,用在文中可承前启后,符合语境。故选B项。
7.根据主题句“Know what to put in the recycling bin.(知道该把什么放在回收箱里)”可知,该段主要讲述可回收物品,G项“Hard plastics like water and soft drink bottles or anything like these can be recycled.(硬塑料,如水瓶和软饮料瓶或类似的任何东西,都可以回收)”介绍的是可回收的物品,贴合该段主题,符合语境。故选G项。
8.设空句为该段主题句。根据后文“It is really important to know what you cannot put in your bin.(知道哪些东西不能放进垃圾桶是很重要的)”可知,本段介绍的是不可回收的物品。选项A“Know what is not recyclable.(知道什么是不可回收的)”可作该段主题句。故选A项。
9.前文“Do a quick clean to make sure there is no food left in containers before you put them in the bin.(在你把容器放进垃圾桶之前,快速清理一下,确保容器里没有食物残留)”提及要将食物残留清理出来,那么,设空句应解释这样做的原因。选项F“This is really important if you only use one bin because food items could ruin paper.(如果你只用一个垃圾桶,这一点非常重要,因为食物会破坏纸张)”解释了原因,符合语境。故选F项。
10.前文“A lot of the time, it’s not safe for our employees to tear those bags open, or it takes too much time(很多时候,我们的员工撕开这些袋子是不安全的,或者需要花费太多时间)”提及袋装垃圾有危害性或浪费时间。由此推知,设空句应讲述为了安全或不浪费时间,袋装垃圾的去处。选项C“A lot of bagged stuff goes right to the landfill.(很多袋装的东西直接被扔进了垃圾填埋场)”讲到了袋装垃圾不会经过人工处理,直接被扔进了填埋场,符合语境。故选C项。