Unit 1 Can you play the guitar话题作文练习（含范文及解析）

2024年人教新目标Go For It!七年级下册 Unit 1 Can you play the guitar 话题作文练习
一、书面表达
1．运动使我们更健康。寒假，你所在的社区为学生开设体育室(the sports room)，你很想和你的朋友一起去打球。请你根据以下要点给体育室的负责人 Mr. Xu 写一封信，简单介绍一下自己的情况。
1、写作要点：
1)你叫Lin Tao，13 岁，电话是 0710-7233155，介绍你和你的好朋友所拥有的体育用品；
2)日常所进行的体育活动；
3)你想去打球的原因（对该体育项目的看法）。
2、注意事项：
1）70词左右；文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
2）书信格式正确，语法准确，语意连贯，书写规范。
Dear __________
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Yours,
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2．假如你是中学生李海，你的美国网友Mike从你的微信朋友圈得知你们班上周召开了班会，他对你在班会的发言很感兴趣。请根据以下信息给他写封信。
写作要点：
1. 班会的主题（theme）：我的好朋友；
2. 发言情况：介绍我的几位好朋友；
①张鹏比大多数孩子安静。
②王艺比我更擅长运动。
③赵佳和我一样努力。
3. 说一说中学生如何交更多的朋友。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实姓名、地名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to tell you about my class meeting held last week.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hai
3．
假定你是李华，你加入了Rosie Bridge School昆虫社团 (Insect Club)。为了吸引新的成员，Miss Gmen绘制了一张海报，请你补全社团近期活动以完成海报。
内容包括：
活动时间；
活动内容；
你的感受。
要求：
1.词数80。作文的标题、结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.字迹工整，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，语言准确规范；
3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Rosie Bridge School Insect Club
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The Insect Club
4．假定你是李华，在校学生会工作。即将来你校的交换生David对中国文化非常感兴趣，他向你询问关于学校象棋俱乐部的情况及学习象棋的技巧，请你根据下列提示用英语给他回一封信。
Δ可以于每周五下午在象棋俱乐部上课；
Δ需要学习游戏规则，并多多练习；
Δ从输掉的棋局中汲取经验，提高能力。
参考词汇：strategies（n.策略） chess pieces (n.棋子)
注意：
1. 词数80 ～ 100；
2.请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；
4.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
You asked about our Chinese Chess Club and how to play chess in your letter. Now I’d like to tell you something about these.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you’ll love the game and we can play it later at school.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
5．书面表达
61. 新昌的穿岩十九峰飞龙栈道声名远扬，假如你是新昌旅游网的负责人，请你在英语网站上写一篇介绍，并邀请大家来游玩。
注意：（1）词数：80—100。开头已给出，不计入总词数；（2）不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥；（3）参考词汇：the Nineteen Peaks十九峰；glass skywalk玻璃栈道
地理位置 在浙江东部（east of Zhejiang）
交通方式 乘巴士或自己开车
活动 爬山、走玻璃栈道（最刺激的活动）、拍照、吃美食……
门票 30元
The Nineteen Peaks is a good place to take a vacation.
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6．书面表达
假如你是李娟，请你根据下表写一篇英语短文，在英语课上介绍你的四个好朋友的上学方式。60 词左右，可适当发挥。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
姓名 方式
Li Hua 步行
Dale 骑自行车
Alice 乘地铁
Liang Lan 坐校车
I’m Li Juan. I have four good friends. They go to school in different ways. ______________________________________________________________________________________
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7．书面表达
请向你的同学介绍一下，你都能会些什么。约30-50词。
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8．书面表达。
根据提示写一篇招聘广告。
Happy Middle School想要招聘一些老师，要求会说中英文，会唱歌跳舞，喜欢小孩子。有意者请拨打696 8583与怀特先生联系。
要求：1.内容完整，语句通顺。2.50词左右。
提示：kids小孩子
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9．根据表格内的信息，以Sally’s Day为题，描述一下她一天的活动安排。要求不得遗漏任何一项，数字全部用英文，词数不少于50。
起床 5: 40 午饭 12: 00
早饭 6: 30 做作业 7: 00
上学 7: 30 看电视 9: 00
上课 8: 00 上床睡觉 10: 00
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10．以My friend 为题写一篇关于你的朋友的外貌、特长、爱好和日常生活的短文。80词左右
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参考答案：
1．例文
Dear Mr. Xu,
I want to be a member of your club. My name is Lin Tao. I am a 13-year-old boy. My telephone number is 0710-7233155. My friend and I have two basketballs. My favorite sport is basketball because it is interesting. I often play basketball with my friend on weekends. I want to join this club in order to share the happiness of playing. Besides, we want to make more friends who like playing basketball there. I think playing basketball is good for our health.
Yours,
Lin Tao
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示，补全书信格式；
第二步，介绍你的姓名、年龄、联系方式及拥有的体育用品；
第三步，介绍你日常所进行的体育活动；
第四步，介绍你想去打球的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①want to be想成为
②want to do sth.想去做某事
③make more friends结交更多朋友
④be good for有益于
[高分句型]
①My favorite sport is basketball because it is interesting.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I want to join this club in order to share the happiness of playing.（in order to为了……）
③Besides, we want to make more friends who like playing basketball there.（who引导的定语从句）
④I think playing basketball is good for our health.（宾语从句，playing basketball动名词短语作主语）
2．例文
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to tell you about my class meeting held last week. The theme of the meeting was “My Good Friends,” and I would like to share with you about my close friends.
First of all, there’s Zhang Peng. He’s quieter than most kids in our class, but he’s very thoughtful and always cares for others. Then, there’s Wang Yi, who is better at sports than I am. He’s always motivating me to be more active and join in on games. Lastly, there’s Zhao Jia, who works as hard as I do. We often study together and help each other out.
Speaking of making friends, I think it’s important for us as middle school students to be open and approachable. We can start by saying hello to people we don’t know, taking part in class activities, and being kind and helpful to others. Also, joining clubs and extracurricular activities can give us the opportunity to meet new people with similar interests. I believe that friendship is a two-way street, and we need to make an effort to maintain our relationships.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hai
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，从班会主题、发言情况等方面介绍，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开头已给出；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述班会主题、发言情况和几位好朋友；
第三步，说一说中学生如何交更多的朋友。
[亮点词汇]
①First of all首先
②help each other互相帮助
[高分句型]
I believe that friendship is a two-way street, and we need to make an effort to maintain our relationships.（宾语从句）
3．例文
Rosie Bridge School Insect Club
Welcome to Rosie Bridge School Insect Club. Many students who are interested in insects are in the club. We will be here from 5:00 to 7:00 in the evening every Wednesday. We can look at all kinds of insects carefully and find out their living habits. We can also learn about them more by reading books and discussing with each other. We often draw pictures of them, too. We are all happy and active. We think we have learned a lot and we can love the nature more.
Come to join the club and enjoy the beautiful nature. We are waiting for you.
The Insect Club
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“你的感受”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出欢迎加入昆虫俱乐部；
第二步，具体阐述俱乐部的活动时间和活动内容及感受；
第三步，书写结语，倡议大家来昆虫俱乐部。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in感兴趣于……
②all kinds of各种各样的
③their living habits它们的生活习性
④wait for you等你
[高分句型]
①Many students who are interested in insects are in the club. (who引导的定语从句)
②We think we have learned a lot and love the nature more. (省略that的宾语从句)
4．例文
Dear David,
You asked about our Chinese Chess Club and how to play chess in your letter. Now I’d like to tell you something about these.
Firstly, you can go to Chinese Chess Club on Friday afternoon. There are many experienced teachers there, who can help you learn about the rules of how to move the chess pieces and how to win a game. Then, you need to learn some basic chess strategies. The most important thing you can do is to get better at chess. It doesn’t matter if you play it at home with your friends or play online, you have to play the game a lot to improve. Last but not least, don’t get discouraged if you don’t win all of your games right away. As long as you continue to have fun and learn from the game you lost, then you can enjoy chess forever.
I hope you’ll love the game and we can play it later at school.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。内容是给来校的交换生David介绍一下学校象棋俱乐部的情况及学习象棋的技巧，并根据下列提示用英语给他回一封信。我们可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：1. 可以于每周五下午在象棋俱乐部上课；2. 需要学习游戏规则，并多多练习；3. 从输掉的棋局中汲取经验，提高能力。
2.例文点评：例文采用四段式；时态主要为一般现在时。人称主要为第二人称。第一段直接引入话题。第二段详细地介绍了象棋俱乐部上课时间和需要学习的游戏规则，应该从输掉的棋局中汲取经验，提高能力。后两段是愿望和祝福。
3.高分亮点：
短语：learn about ；need to do sth.；right away；as long as；learn from。
句型：1. There are many experienced teachers there, who can help you learn about the rules of how to move the chess pieces and how to win a game. 那里有许多经验丰富的老师，他们可以帮助你学习如何移动棋子和如何赢得比赛的规则。
这句话是由who引导的非限制性定语从句。
2. As long as you continue to have fun and learn from the game you lost, then you can enjoy chess forever. 只要你继续有兴趣，从你输掉的棋局中汲取经验，你就可以永远享受象棋的乐趣。
这句话是由As long as引导的条件状语从句。
5．The Nineteen Peaks is a good place to take a vacation. It’s in the east of Zhejiang. It’s famous for its mountains. You can take a bus or drive your car here. There are nineteen peaks here, so you can enjoy climbing the mountains. And the most exciting thing is to walk on the glass skywalk. You will feel like walking in the air. Also, it’s a wonderful place to take photos. If you are tired or hungry, you can taste lots of delicious food. The ticket is only 30 yuan for each person. There is something for everyone here. I’m sure you will have a great time. Why not come and visit it
【详解】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，结合所给材料，介绍景点“穿岩十九峰飞龙栈道”，把旅游景点的位置、交通方式、活动和门票等表达出来。注意一些常见句式的应用，注意把握时态与人称。还要注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己的观点和想法。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开篇描述了“the Nineteen Peaks”是个旅游的好去处，接下来介绍了相关内容， 最后作者发表了自己的观点和看法。本文采用了丰富的短语与句型，比如：in the east of；be famous for; feel like doing; it’s a wonderful place to take photos; if引导的条件状语从句；宾语从句等多种句式交替运用，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。
6．例文
I’m Li Juan. I have four good friends. They go to school in different ways. Li Hua usually walks to school, because his home is only one kilometer from school. Dale rides his bike to school. It takes him half an hour. He thinks it’s good exercise. Alice lives far from school, so she takes the subway to school. Liang Lan takes the school bus to school. She likes the bus ride because she can talk to her classmates.
【分析】
【详解】短文介绍自己的四个好朋友的上学方式，所以句子的时态用一般现在时，主语用第三人称单数形式，不要遗漏要点，要注意上下文的衔接，不要出现语法错误。
写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：Li Hua usually walks to school, because his home is only one kilometer from school. Dale rides his bike to school. It takes him half an hour. Alice lives far from school, so she takes the subway to school.She likes the bus ride because she can talk to her classmates.短文用了because引导的原因状语从句，用了so引导的并列句，增加了文章的亮点。
7．My name is Li Daming. I'm a 15 years old boy. I'm active ,lovely and clever. In the school,my favourite subject is math . I also like sports very much. I can play football and basketball. I can swim and I am good at it. At home I can help my mother do housework.
【详解】亮点说明：文中使用了非常好的短语，例如in the school，my favourite subject，15 years old，active ,lovely and clever，like sports，very much，play football and basketball，be good at，at home，help sb. do等。虽然习作的句式和内容都较简单，但层次清楚，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
8．Teachers Wanted for Happy Middle School
We want some teachers for the Happy Middle School.Can you speak Chinese and English？Can you sing and dance？Do you like kids？Are you good with them？We need you_to help us teach students.It is not difficult.If you want to join us，call Mr. White at 6968583.
【详解】1. 本文为材料作文，用上所给的材料。把招聘要求写清楚。
2. 注意时态，用一般现在时来写。
3. 注意用情态动词can来写句子。
4. 一定要写清楚联系方式。
9．例文：
Sally’s Day
I have a good friend. Her name is Sally. She has lots of things to do every day.
She usually gets up at five forty. She has breakfast at six thirty. She has two eggs and a glass of milk. She goes to school at seven thirty. School starts at eight o’clock. At twelve o’clock, she has lunch at school. She often does her homework at seven o’clock in the evening. At nine o’clock, she watches TV with her parents. She goes to bed at around ten o’clock.　
What a nice day! How about yours
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题属于话题作文，内容是介绍Sally的一天。题目给出的表格为写作要点。注意表格中数字全部用英文，文章字数不少于50。
2. 写作指导：由于作文主要介绍Sally的一天，所以作文时态为一般现在时，主语是第三人称。作文可以采用“三段式”结构，第一段介绍Sally，第二段描Sally的一天，注意按照时间顺序从早到晚介绍，第三段可以用互动的方式结尾。作文完成后注意检查语法、单词拼写和标点。
10．例文：
My friend
My friend Jack is an outgoing boy. He is of medium height with short blond hair. He has a round face, big eyes, a big nose and a wide mouth. He likes sports and music. He is good at basketball. He plays basketball on Mondays with his friends. He can sing English songs very well. On weekdays, he goes to school at 7:00am. He has four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. He goes back home at 6:00pm.and he has dinner at 6:30pm. He goes to bed at 10:00pm. He is busy and happy.
【详解】1.题干解读：本篇要求以My friend为题介绍你的一个朋友。内容包括描述朋友的外貌、特长、爱好和日常生活。
2.写作指导：本篇写作用单数第三人称、一般现在时。书写时应分层有序地介绍朋友的外貌、特长、爱好和日常生活；正确运用一般现在时、单三形式；力求文句表达完整、语法正确。