Unit 1 What's the matter话题作文练习（含范文及解析）

2024年人教新目标Go For It!八年级下册Unit 1 What's the matter 话题作文练习
一、书面表达
1．安全事故在我们身边屡见不鲜。安全无小事。请你就安全话题写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。内容包括：
1、简述你遇到过的一次安全问题以及你的解决方式；
2、中学生在日常生活中应该如何确保安全呢？请你给出至少两条建议。
作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文：不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。
As we all know, safety always comes first.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．假如你是李大明，你昨天骑自行车时遇到一位疲劳驾驶的司机，发生了一场交通事故。请根据图片提示写一篇英语短文，介绍事故发生的经过及吸取的教训，并呼吁大家遵守交通规则、注意交通安全。
要求：
1）包含图片信息，语句通顺、流畅，可适当发挥；
2）100 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
I’m Li Daming. Yesterday, an accident happened to me near my home. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．水滴石穿，绳锯木断。坚持做好一件事情，成就更好的自己。请以“One thing I keep doing every day”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇发言稿，参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。
写作要点：
1. What do you keep doing every day
2. Why
3.Your feelings.
要求：
1.短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发择；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数不少于80，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
One thing I keep doing every day
Good morning, everyone!
I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic of my speech is one thing I keep doing every day.
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That’s all. Thank you!
4．假如你叫王涛，新学期第一天，老师要求同学们做一下自我介绍。请根据下列信息提示，写一篇不少于60词的英语短文，向大家介绍一下你自己吧!
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5． 书面表达
你看过类似的老人跌倒无人理会的新闻吗？你又听说过最美女教师救她的学生的故事吗？对这两种社会现象，你有什么看法呢？请你以“Would you like to help others ”为题写一篇短文。
内容包括：1. 你对上面其中一件事的看法。
2. 如果你遇到了这样的事情会怎样做。
3. 讲述你的一次类似经历。
作文要求：1. 词数80个左右。不得照抄原文；不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 条理清晰，语句连贯。
Would you like to help others
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6．对于每个人来说，生命只有一次。注意安全，就是善待和珍惜生命的一种有效途径。每年因意外事故伤亡的中学生有很多，为了让自己健康平安成长，你该如何保护自己的人身安全呢？请根据提示，以“Protect ourselves, cherish(珍爱)our lives”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。
1. get on well with your classmates, not fight
2. not swim alone, not swim in dangerous places
3. surf the internet safely, not meet net—friend alone
4. not smoke or drink wine(酒), make sure your food is safe
5. follow the traffic rules, walk on the zebra crossing(斑马) when crossing the street
6. …
注意：
1. 文中请勿使用真实人名，校名和地名；
2. 内容应包含表格中的要点并适当发挥；
3. 词数：80词左右；
4. 文章的开头已经给出，单不计入总词数。
Protect ourselves, cherish our lives
Life is only once for everybody. It's important to cherish our lives. As students, what should we do
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7．书面表达
你的朋友Jack由于长时间玩电脑游戏，现在头痛、眼睛不舒服、腰背酸痛，并且睡不好觉。写一篇短文介绍一下他的情况，并给出你对他的建议。
要求：（1）内容包含所提供的信息，可适当发挥；
（2）书写认真，句子通顺；
（3）词数：80词左右。
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8．书面表达
请根据以下提示写一篇不少于70词的短文。
提示:1. Dennis今天得了重感冒，头痛、发烧；
医生建议他在家休息，多喝水，按时吃药;
你准备放学后去看他，帮他补习功课。
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9．书面表达。
利津中学八年级一班同学的体检结果表明：本班大部分同学的身体状况良好，但也有部分同学的身体存在问题。假如你是班长张辉，请根据下列表格提示写一篇短文，介绍一下体检结果，并提出建议。
名字 问题 建议
江一明 喉咙痛 多喝蜂蜜水
刘斌 发烧 吃药
杜淳 肚子痛 喝热水并躺下休息
马新哲 牙痛 看牙医
要求：1.短文应包含表格内容，可适当发挥； 2.70词左右。
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10．随着阳光体育运动在全国的开展,“每天锻炼一小时,健康工作50年,幸福生活一辈子”的理念深入人心,校园里出现了可喜的变化:运动时间延长了,运动项目增加了,学生体质增强了,校园生活丰富了。请以“Sports in Our School”为题给校刊写一篇报道。
要求:
(1)80词左右,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称等相关信息。
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参考答案：
1．例文
As we all know, safety always comes first. Last week, a car hit an old man when I went across the road. The old man fell down and couldn’t move at that moment. I called the emergency center at once. Then I stopped the bleeding on the old man’s leg based on what I learned. When the ambulance arrived, the doctors said the old man had received a non-life-threatening injury.
As a middle student, how should we ensure safety in their daily life First, we must obey the traffic rules. Second, we had better master some knowledge of first aid.
All in all, safety is important, it is everybody’s business.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“安全问题”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。文章的开头已给出，接着描述自己遇到的有关安全问题的一次经历；第二段发表如何保持安全的建议；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
2．例文
I’m Li Daming. Yesterday, an accident happened to me near my home. While I was riding a bike in the middle of the road, I was listening to music.
A car appeared and it wasn’t going fast. However, the driver was very tired, so he didn’t see me. The driver and I didn’t stop and I hit the car. I fell off my bike and broke my leg. The driver called 120 and I went to the hospital with his help.
Now I am very careful. It’s important to pay attention on the road. Don’t listen to music when you are riding a bike. And don’t drive a car when you are very tired.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇看图作文，介绍一起交通事故的记叙文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据题目图片提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括事故发生的时间、地点、经过以及结果等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍昨天发生了一起事故；
第二步，具体阐述事故的情况。包括事故发生的经过以及结果等；
第三步，最后介绍通过这次事故吸取的教训。
[亮点词汇]
① happen to发生于
② in the middle of在……中间
③ ride a bike骑自行车
[高分句型]
① While I was riding a bike in the middle of the road, I was listening to music.（while引导时间状语从句）
②And don’t drive a car when you are very tired.（when引导的时间状语从句）
3．例文
One thing I keep doing every day
Good morning, everyone!
I am very happy to be here to make a speech today. The topic of my speech is one thing I keep doing every day.
As we know, what we keep doing every day is very important for us to achieve our goals. That’s why I keep reading every day no matter how busy I am. I usually spend about one hour a day reading my favorite books and I often share what I have read with my friends. Honestly speaking, reading not only brings me knowledge, but also teaches me how to get on well with others and how to be a better person. Keeping reading helps me open my eyes to the outside world. The more I read, the wiser I will be.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你每天坚持做的事情；
第二步，说明你为什么坚持做；
第三步，最后表达你的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing花费时间做
②not only...but also不但……而且
③get on well with sb与某人相处融洽
[高分句型]
①As we know, what we keep doing every day is very important for us to achieve our goals.（what引导的主语从句）
②Keeping reading helps me open my eyes to the outside world. （动名词作主语）
③The more I read, the wiser I will be.（the+比较级，the+比较级的结构）
4．One possible version:
Hello, everyone! My name is Wang Tao. My English name is Frank. I’m a Chinese boy and I’m 13 years old. My phone number is 0535-8246323. I like green and white very much. I like reading books. Charlotte’s Web is my favorite book. It is quite interesting. I have four good friends, and they are Jack, Mary, Susan, Nick. Do you want to be my friend
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作内容提示已给出，考生要注意不要遗漏内容提示中的信息，并且要在内容提示的基础上适当发挥，文章内容更加丰满。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍自己的姓名、年龄、国家和电话等基本信息；
第二步：介绍自己最喜爱的颜色，及自己最喜欢读的书，这一部分可以适当拓展；
第三步：介绍自己的朋友。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth.喜欢做某事
②want to do sth. 想要做某事
[高分句型]
① I’m a Chinese boy and I’m 13 years old.（and引导并列句）
5．Would you like to help others
After hearing these events,I was deeply shocked.Why didn’t they help the old man The things they did were so terrible! We need to help each other,don’t we I think,if I were one of the passers-by,I would call the police and try my best to help the old man.Last year,on my way to school,I saw a car accident happen.I stopped,called the police and asked other people to help the woman who was injured.At last,she was saved.
If we help each other every day,our world will be warmer and more beautiful.
【详解】这篇作文要求我们Would you like to help others 为题，写一篇作文，选择题目中的一件事，表述自己的看法，并假设自己遇到类似的事情该怎样做，并讲述自己类似的一次经历。题目中给列出了大概的写作提纲，而具体的内容和细节都需要学生们自己发挥想象力进行补充，这是写作中的一个难点。学生们可以从自己的现实生活出发，搜索相关的素材，然后用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态，根据表达需要使用适当的人称，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。如可以使用较常见的主谓宾或主系表结构，这种句子结构简单，易于掌握，不易出错。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句或复合句，如and, but连接的并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。
【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，以Would you like to help others 为题，介绍了自己对老人跌倒无人理会这样的事件的看法，假设自己遇到了这样的事情会怎么做，并讲述了自己的一次类似的经历。短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有内容，且对细节进行了想象的描述，使文章内容更加充实、丰富。叙述清晰，有层次。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，短文以第一人称、一般现在时和一般过去时为主来叙述，注意了谓语动词正确形式的变化，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构完整，表达符合英语的习惯。句式以简单句结构为主，也穿插使用了并列句和宾语从句、状语从句等复合句。表达流畅，文意连贯。短文中较好的句型有After hearing these events, I was deeply shocked.、I think, if I were one of the passers-by, I would call the police and try my best to help the old man、I stopped, called the police and asked other people to help the woman who was injured、If we help each other every day, our world will be warmer and more beautiful等等。
6．例文：
Protect ourselves, cherish our lives
Life is only once for everybody. It's important to cherish our lives. As students, what should we do
First, we should get on well with our classmates at school. Don’t fight with them. If we really have trouble in communicating with them, we can ask our teachers for help. Second, we shouldn’t swim alone or swim in dangerous places. It is dangerous. Third, we should surf the internet safely, and we shouldn’t meet net-friends alone. Fourth, we had better not smoke or drink wine and we must make sure our food is safe. What’s more, there are more and more cars nowadays. So we must follow the traffic rules. We should walk on the zebra crossing when crossing the street.
Safety comes first. So we must be careful at any moment.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时要按说明文格式写。在写作时开头介绍珍爱生命很重要；第二段介绍如何保护自己的人身安全；第三段概括安全是第一位的。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一、三人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时，介绍与同学好好相处，不要独自去游泳，在路上遵守交通规则等叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：
短语：get on well with；have trouble in；make sure；what’s more。
句型：条件状语从句If we really have trouble in communicating with them；省略句when crossing the street。
7．Jack is my friend. He likes playing computer games very much. He often sits in the same way for too long without moving. Now he has a headache, sore eyes and a sore back. He doesn’t sleep well at night, so he feels tired every day.
I think he should take breaks away from the computer. He shouldn’t use the computer for a long time. He should do eye exercises to relax his eyes and go to bed early at night.
I think if he has a good rest, he will feel well soon.
【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，你的朋友Jack由于长时间玩电脑游戏，现在头痛、眼睛不舒服、腰背酸痛，并且睡不好觉。。本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，用一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系
8．My friend Dennis didn’t come to school today. He went to hospital because he had a bad cold. He had a headache and a fever. The doctor looked him over and said，“It’s nothing serious. But you have to stay at home for two days. You should drink more water and have a good rest. Take the medicine three times a day. Then you’ll feel better. ”
After school，I’m going to visit him and help him with his lessons. I hope he will be OK very soon.
【详解】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如come to school，go to hospital，have a bad cold，have a headache and a fever，look him over，It’s nothing serious，have to do，stay at home，have a good rest，take the medicine等。而He went to hospital because he had a bad cold./ I hope he will be OK very soon.两个从句j结构的运用更是为文章增色不少，是本篇习作的亮点。
点睛：这是一篇材料作文。根据提示内容可知用一般过去时，按照提示内容逐词进行扩句，进行适当发挥，最后连接成一篇短文。
9．Hi，I'm_Zhang_Hui.Here_are_the_results_of_the_physical_examination.Most_of_the_students_in_our_class_are_fine_but_some_of_them_do_have_some_trouble.Jiang_Yiming_has_a_sore_throat.I_think_he_should_drink_some_hot_water_with_honey.Liu_Bin_has_a_fever.He_should_take_some_medicine.Du_Chun_has_a_stomachache.I_think_he_should_drink_some_hot_water，lie_down_and_rest.Ma_Xinzhe_has_a_toothache.He_should_see_a_dentist.
【详解】【亮点说明】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如most of the students，in our class，have some trouble，have a fever，take some medicine，lie down，turn off the lights，see a dentist等。而Here are the results of the physical examination./ Jiang Yiming has a sore throat. I think he should drink some hot water with honey./ I think he should drink some hot water，lie down and_rest.等多种句式的运用更是为文章增色不少。
点睛：这是一篇材料作文。根据提示内容可知用一般现在时和表示建议的should+原形动词结构，可以把提纲提供的信息翻译成英文，然后在写作中进行适当性的发挥。
10．例文
Sports in Our School
Sports in our school have changed a lot. Now we have more than three P.E. classes a week, and we have at least one hour to exercise every day.
Students get so excited at these changes. More and more students take an active part in the ball games, running, and jumping on the playground. Our school life is becoming more wonderful.
Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit. What's more, a healthy body can help us study better and live a happier life.
【详解】1.题干解读：这个题目要求我们以Sports in Our School为题写一篇作文，介绍自己学校随着阳光体育运动的开展，发生的变化。题目里只笼统介绍了一些基本情况，学生们以在此基础上，联系实际生活再进行拓展，对此进行细致的介绍，把文章写得更具体、更充实。审题可知，短文应用一般现在时、第三人称来叙述。
2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文分成三段，第一段介绍了学校的变化；第二段介绍的是学生们对此的反应；最后一段总结了运动对身体健康的好处。结构清晰，内容完整、充实。短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，以简单句为基础，也使用了并列句、非谓语动词、形容词比较级等高级句式。表达流畅，意思连贯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：more than；at least；take part in；What’s more；a good way to。
句型：Now we have more than three P.E. classes a week, and we have at least one hour to exercise every day.；More and more students take an active part in the ball games, running, and jumping on the playground.；Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit.。