Unit 2 I’ll help clean up the city parks. Name
Writing
I. Answer the questions.
1. Where do you want to volunteer
2. Which volunteer job do you want to do
3. What are your interests and hobbies
4. How can these help you to do the job
5. Why do you want to do the volunteer job
6. When are you free to do the job
II. Analyze the topic(审题)
Writing Topic
In March, there are many activities to learn the spirit of Lei Feng. This month, volunteers are needed in our school to help some activities. To be a volunteer, you need to provide some information.
1. Which volunteer job do you want to do
2. What are your interests and hobbies
3. How can these help you to do the job
4. Why do you want to do the volunteer job
5. When are you free to do the job
If you are interested, please write an e-mail to the Mr. Tu in our school.
写作要求：1.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确；
2.书写规范，80词左右；
3.文中不得出现涉及真实的人名、地名或校名等。
Person：
Tense：
Text：
Details：
III. Make an outline
Structure：
IV. Finish the first draft
V. Finish the second draft(共18张PPT)
Unit 2
I’ll help clean up the city parks.
Writing
Would you like to be volunteers
Pre-writing
What do you think of volunteers
At the old people’s home
at an art museum
listen to them and talk with them
care for them and take them to the hospital
read/sing/dance for them and play chess with them.
help to keep order
clean up the museum
help them do the chores
What can we do as volunteers
Pre-writing
introduce the artworks to the visitors
What can we do as volunteers
in the street
at school
help to organize the some events like parents’ meeting and sports meeting.
pick up the trash
help clean the city parks/streets.
ask people to protect the environment.
help with the traffic police
pick up the trash(垃圾) and clean the blackboard
help the teacher collect and give out exercise books
help students with their study.
Pre-writing
Pre-writing
Where do you want to volunteer
I’d like to
I want to
volunteer at/in...
Pre-writing
Which volunteer job do you want to do
I’d like to/I’m interested in/I want to volunteer as...
Pre-writing
What are your interests and hobbies
I’m good at...
I’m strong in...
I can do...well.
In my free time, I like to/doing …
so I think I’d be good at the job.
How can these help you to do the job
Pre-writing
Firstly,I can...
Secondly ,I can...
Third,I can...
I believe I am good at this job.
Why do you want to do the volunteer job
Pre-writing
I want to do the job because...
I can do what I love to do and help others at the same time.
I believe it can help me to get his future dream job.
The reason why I ...is that...
I believe helping people can make me happy.
When are you free to do the job
Pre-writing
As for the working time,I’m free to help in/on …
Pre-writing
Writing Topic
In March,there are many activities to learn the spirit of Lei Feng.This month,volunteers are needed in our school to help some activities.To be a volunteer,you need to provide some information.
1.Which volunteer job do you want to do
2.What are your interests and hobbies
3.How can these help you to do the job
4.Why do you want to do the volunteer job
5.When are you free to do the job
If you are interested,please write an e-mail to the Mr.Tu in our school.
写作要求：
1.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确2.书写规范，80词左右。
3.文中不得出现涉及真实的人名、地名或校名等。
Analyze the topic(审题)
Person(人称):
Tense(时态):
Text(体裁):
Details:(细节)
The first person
The simple present tense
an-email
1.provide some information to be a volunteer
2.80 words
Let’s make an outline(列提纲)
Structure
(结构)
Beginning:
Body:
Ending:
Where do you want to volunteer
Which volunteer job do you want to do
What are your interests and hobbies
How can these help you to do the job
Why do you want to do the volunteer job
When are you free to do the job
express the hope
I really hope that you can give me a chance to be a volunteer.
...
introduce yourself
Writing Tips(写作小技巧)
2.make some modifier to make the composition more vivid.
用一些修饰词（ 形容词/副词），让描述更加生动。
1.Use some linking words(连接词):
and/but/so/because/However...
First of all,then,also,what’s more...
3.make some additions to make the description more specific.
做一些补充和扩充，让描述更加具体。
4.Use some good sentences.使用一些好句。
Pre-writing:
I think volunteering can not only help others but also is a good way to study.
I often help others.
I am always ready to help others.
I am Linda.
I'm Linda,a14-year-old girl from No.I Middle School
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Spelling mistakes
Wrong sentences &Punctuation mistakes
Good sentences
Conjunction words
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Check the composition
Work in groups,correct the mistakes and appreciate(欣赏) your group members’ compositions. Then show it to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. punctuation(标点)
6. language(语言)
7. fluency(流畅度)
Post-writing：
Dear Mr.Tu,
I'm Linda,a14-year-old girl from No.2 Middle School.
I would like to volunteer in an old people's home.I am good at cleaning the house and I am also interested in cooking.What's more,I am strong in communicating with others.Therefore,I can do a lot for the old pcople.Firstly I can help the old people to do some cleaning.Secondly,I can cook delicious food for them.Finally,I can talk with them when they feel lonely and unhappy. I believe I am good at this job.I want to help out as a volunteer in an old pcople 's home because it makes me do what I love to do and I also think volunteering can not only help others but also is a good way to study.As for the working time, I am free to help on Saturdays.
I really hope that you can give me a chance to be a volunteer.
Yours,
LindaMarking ladders
Unit 2I’ll help to clean up the city parks
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I write the e-mail into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I introduce myself (1 point)
Para_____:I have written all the information. (3 points)
Para.____:I express my hope. (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language My expressions are right. (3 points)
There are spelling mistakes. (1 point)
I have used some good sentences. (2 point)
I have used some conjunction words and transitional sentences.. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score
What can I do to improve my writing next time
