书面表达之建议信
(
高考真题
)
1 ．【2023.新高考 I&II 卷】假定你是李华， 外教 Ryan 准备将学生随机分为两人一组， 让大家课后练习 口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2 ．（2023·北京 · 统考高考真题） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim 正在策划一次以“绿色
北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意： (1)词数 100 左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
Yours，
Li Hua 3 ．（2021·北京 · 高考真题）【北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友 Jim 原定本周末一起
外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(
2023
年高考模拟真题
)
4 ．（2022·浙江 · 浙江省丽水中学校联考二模）假如你是李华，你已经订阅英文杂志 English Writing 一年多
了，请你给杂志英文主编写封英语信，内容包括：
1.阅读收获； 2.有何建议； 3.希望祝愿。
注意： 1.写作词数应为 80 左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
_________________________________________________________________________________
5 ．（2023·辽宁沈阳 · 沈阳二中校考模拟预测）假如你是学生会主席李华，为促进学生身心健康发展，请你
面向全体学生写一份倡议书，内容包括：
1.倡议目的；
2.倡议内容；
3.倡议与希望。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
The Student Union 6 ．（2023·广东 · 华南师大附中校考三模） 你是高中学生李华， 你的英国朋友 Anna 计划明年夏天高中毕业后 来中国游玩， 准备提前学一点汉语。她来 email 询问你关于汉语学习的建议。请给 Anna 回信， 主要内容包
括：
1.学习难点；
2.方法建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Anna,
Best regards,
Li Hua 7 ．（2023·四川· 石室中学校考模拟预测）假定你是一所国际学校的学生李华， 世界读书日(World Reading Day) 临近， 你校学生会准备组织相关活动， 现向同学们征求建议， 请你给学生会主席 David 写一封建议信， 内
容包括: 1.活动主题； 2.活动内容。
注意：
1.字数 80 词左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua 8 ．（2023·吉林长春 · 东北师大附中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Caroline 来信说她打算参 加所在学校举办的文化节活动并介绍中国文化，想请你从下列主题中推荐一项：1.传统节日；2.文字发展。
请你给她回信，内容包括：
1.你的建议；
2.推荐理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
______________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua 9 ．（2023·重庆 · 统考三模）假定你是学生李华，你的南非朋友 Louis 对中国古代四大名著很感兴趣，希望
你能给他推荐其中的一部。请你用英语给 Louis 回信，内容包括：
1. 简要介绍一本名著；
2. 说明你推荐的理由。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：
《三国演义》Romance of the Three Kingdoms
《水浒传》Water Margin
《西游记》Journey to the West
《红楼梦》A Dream of Red Mansions
Dear Louis,
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
10 ．（2023·广东 · 统考二模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Hans 来信请你为他负责策划的 4 月 20 日“ 中文
日”班级庆祝活动提建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1.来信收悉；
2.提出活动建议；
3.望录制和分享。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Hans,
_______________________________
Yours,
Li Hua 11 ．（2023·湖北 · 华中师大一附中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校交换生 Lucy 准备参加所在城市组织
的汉语演讲比赛，特征求你的意见。请你回复一封邮件， 内容如下：
1. 表示鼓励；
2. 注意事项。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 词左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Lucy,
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
12 ．（2023·山西朔州 ·怀仁市第一中学校校考模拟预测） 假定你是李华， 你的英国朋友 Jeff 来信说他痴迷于
刷短视频，对学习失去了兴趣，很苦恼。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.肯定短视频在某些方面的好处；
2.你的建议；
3.表达祝愿。
注意： 1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jeff,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
13 ．（2023·广东韶关 · 统考二模）假定你是李华, 你的英国笔友 Mike 所在的学校将开设汉语选修课。他来
信咨询如何布置一间教室来营造良好的汉语学习氛围。请给他回信，提出建议并说明理由。
注意： 1. 写作词数应为 80 左右。 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
Greetings from China!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua书面表达之建议信
(
高考真题
)
1 ．【2023.新高考 I&II 卷】假定你是李华， 外教 Ryan 准备将学生随机分为两人一组， 让大家课后练习 口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
(
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s
not
a
good
idea
to
randomly pair up
students
for
the
spoken
English
training
after class. The reasons are
as
follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the
groups.
This can hinder the progress of
students as the more advanced
one may
dominate the
conversation,
leaving
little
room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may
feel uncomfortable
or
less
motivated
if
paired
with
someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty commu
nicating
with.
My suggestion is to group students based o
n their
language
abilities
or to
let
students
choose
their
own
partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and
improving
thei
r
spoken
English
together.
Thank you for considering my sug
gestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
)
(
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，
要求考生给外教写一封邮件， 告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，
让大家课后
练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
首先：
to begin with →
first
of
all
提高：
improve → progress
建议：
suggestion →
advice
选择：
choose
→
select
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
My suggestion is to
group students based on
their
language
abilities
or
to
let
students
choose
their
own
partners.
拓展句：
My suggestion is that we are
supposed to
group
students
based
on
their
language
abilities
or
to
let
students choose their o
wn partners.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1]
This can hinder the progress of
students as the more advanced one may
dominate the
con
versation,
leaving
little
room for the other students
to improve.
（运用了现在分词作状语）
[
高分句型
2]
Besides,
Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if
paired with someone who they
do
n’t
get
along with
or have difficulty communicating with.
（运用了省略句和
who
引导定语从句）
)
2 ．（2023·北京 · 统考高考真题） 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim 正在策划一次以“绿色
北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意： (1)词数 100 左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am
writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which
will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing” .
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友 Jim 策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】 1.词汇积累
建议： suggestion→tip
提供： offer→provide
开展： carry out→conduct
主题： theme→topic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句： Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am
writing to offer you my suggestions.
拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing
to offer you my suggestions.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need
my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. (运用了 that 引导宾语从句)
[高分句型 2] I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means
students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different
activities by themselves. (运用了 which 引导非限制性定语从句)
3 ．（2021·北京 · 高考真题）【北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友 Jim 原定本周末一起
外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1.词数 100 左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. I hope the change won’t
cause you too much trouble.
How about going out next Saturday morning If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at the school gate at 9: 00.
Please let me know what time suits you best. I should be available anytime next weekend.
In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers
together.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文， 要求考生给英国好友 Jim 写一封电子邮件， 就因故不能赴约而致歉并
建议再约。
【详解】 1.词汇积累
通知： tell→inform
除此之外： in addition→besides
适合： fit→suit
有空的： available→free
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers
(
together.
拓展句：
In addition, there will be a flower
show
in
Beihai
Park
next
Saturday,
when
we
can
go
to
see
the
flowers
together.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t
go
out with
you
this
weekend.(
运用了
that
引导的宾语
从句
)
[
高分句型
2] I’ve
just been told that I have to go and visit my sick
grandfath
er
in the
countryside,
who
was
suddenly admitted to the hospital. (
运用了
who
引导的非限制性定语从句
)
2023
年高考模拟真题
)
4 ．（2022·浙江 · 浙江省丽水中学校联考二模）假如你是李华，你已经订阅英文杂志 English Writing 一年多
了，请你给杂志英文主编写封英语信，内容包括：
1.阅读收获； 2.有何建议； 3.希望祝愿。
注意： 1.写作词数应为 80 左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
(
【答案】
Dear Editor,
Hope this mail finds you well. Having been a devoted reader of
your magazine for
one
year,
I
am
wr
iting
to
share with you my thoughts.
Whenever I receive your magazine, I will read each issue from cover to
cover.
The varieties
of
columns,
thrilling articles, impressive opinions and helpful writing tips have bene
fited me so much.
The
series
of
contents
not only improve my writing skills but also deepen my
insight
into profound English
writing
world.
Meanwhile,
I
suggest that your magazine should be a platform for
us students to
share
our works.
Do hope English Writing will be more popular. Hope everything goes well with your w
ork.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，
你已经订阅英文杂志
English Writin
g
一年多了， 请你
给杂志英文主编写封英语信，内容包括：
1.
阅读收获；
2.
有何建议；
3.
希望祝愿。
)
(
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
建议：
tip→advice→suggestion
忠实的：
devoted→loyal
激动人心的：
thrilling→exciting
有帮助的：
helpful→of
help
2.
句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：
Having been a devoted reader of
your magazine for one year, I
am
wri
ting
to
share
with
you
my
thoughts.
拓展句：
Since I have been a devote
d
reader
of
your magazine
for
one
year,
I
am
writing
to
share
with
you
my
thoughts.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] Having been a devoted reader of
your magazine for one yea
r, I
am writing
to
share
with
you my thoughts. (
运用了现在分词作
状语
)
[
高分句型
2] Meanwhile, I suggest that your ma
gazine should be a platform
for us
students to
share
our works.
(
运用了虚拟语气
)
)
5 ．（2023·辽宁沈阳 · 沈阳二中校考模拟预测）假如你是学生会主席李华，为促进学生身心健康发展，请你
面向全体学生写一份倡议书，内容包括：
1.倡议目的；
2.倡议内容；
3.倡议与希望。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
The Student Union
(
【答案】
A Possible Version:
Dear fellow
students,
As is known to all, it is health that really matters in the process
of
our
learning
and
growth.
Therefore,
I
)
(
appeal to every individual to take action in order to
improve
our physical
and mental health.
Balancing our study and lif
e always comes
first,
for
only by
doing
so
can we
refresh
ourselves
to
greet
the
new day ahead. Besides, it is also a must
to participate
in
a
variety
of
extracur
ricular
activities,
which
can
definitely relieve us of
stress. Plus, doing voluntary work is bound to make a big difference.
Let’s keep healthy both physically and mentally tog
ether!
The
Student Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是学生会主席李华，
为促进学生身心健康发
展，
请你面向全体
学生写一份倡议书。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
为了：
in order to→so
as
to
呼吁：
appeal to→call
for
健康的：
healthy→fit
此外：
besides→in addition
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
Therefore, I appeal to every individual t
o take
action in
order
to
improve
our physical
and
mental
health.
拓展句：
Therefore, I a
ppeal to every
individual to take
action
so
that
we
can
improve
our physical
and
mental
health.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] As is known to all,
it is health that really matters in
the process
of
our
learning
and
growth.
(
运用了
as
引导非限制性定语从句和强调句
)
[
高分句型
2] Besides, it is also a must to participate in
a variety
of
e
xtracurricular
activities, which
can
definitely
relieve us of
stress. (
运用
了
which
引导非限制性定语从句
)
)
6 ．（2023·广东 · 华南师大附中校考三模） 你是高中学生李华， 你的英国朋友 Anna 计划明年夏天高中毕业后 来中国游玩， 准备提前学一点汉语。她来 email 询问你关于汉语学习的建议。请给 Anna 回信， 主要内容包
括：
1.学习难点；
2.方法建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Anna,
Best regards,
Li Hua
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【答案】
Sample
1:
Dear Anna,
It’s wonderful to hear you’re planning to visit China and learning
Chinese! I
am thrilled
to
offer
some
advice
that
may
help
you
along
your
language
learning
journey
.
Firstly, one of
the biggest challenges of
learning Chinese is the pronunciation
and tones.
The
four basic tones in Chinese can be tricky, and even slight variations
in tone
can
change
the
meaning
of
a
word.
Listening
to
native
speakers and practicing with a tutor or language partner can help
you to develop
your
ear
for
the
language
and
improve your pronunciation. Another challenge is getting used to the grammar
. Chinese
sentence
structure is
quite
different from that of
English, so it may take some
time
to
adjust.
I
su
ggest
starting
with basic
sentence patterns
and gradually working your way up to more complex structures. It ma
y also be
helpful
to
focus
on
learning
practical vocabulary related to travel, such as directions, transportation, and
order
ing
food. This
will
enable
you
to
communicate more effectively during y
our trip.
I hope these tips are helpful to you, and I wish you the best of
luck in your
language
learning
journey.
Don’t
forget to have fun exploring the language and culture
of
Chin
a!
Best regards,
Li Hua
)
Sample 2:
Dear Anna,
(
Thank you for your email. I’
m so looking forward
to
your
visit
to
China
and
I
think
it’s
a
great
idea
to
learn
some Chinese before you come.
English-speaking people often think Chinese is difficult to learn because we don’t use
the
alphabet, but
in
practice it is not as difficult as it
seems
once you
begin. What
is
much
harder
is
the pronunciation,
as
the
same
sound with different tones would mean different things and correspond to different
c
haracters.
I think
the best
)
(
advice about learning a language is t
o try to
do
a
little
every
day — that’s much more
effective,
in
my
opinion,
than doing a lot once a week or once
a
fortnight.
It’dbe
sensible
to
have
some
le
ssons, but
you’d
have
to
do
a
lot
of
work
on
your
own
in
between
the
lessons
if
you
want
to
make
good
progress
.
Although
pronunciation
is
difficult at first, I think that’s what you should concentrate
on. Don’t worry
too
much
abo
ut
the
writing
of
the
characters. That way you’ll be able to communicate, even if
you don’t know how
to
write.
Have fun in learning Chinese and enjoy the preparation proces
s
for your visit
to
China.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给计划明年
夏天高中毕业后来中国游玩并准备学点汉语的英
国朋友
Anna
写一封关于汉语学习建议的信。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
激动的：
thrilled→excited
习惯：
get used to→become
used to
有帮助的：
be helpful→be
of
he
lp
适应：
adjust→adapt
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
I suggest starting with basic sentence patterns
and
gradually working
your way
up
to
more
complex
structures.
拓展句：
I suggest that you start with basic
se
ntence patterns
and
gradually work your
way
up
to
more
complex
structures.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
Listening to native speaker
s and practicing with a tutor or language partner can
help
you
to develop your ear for the language and improve your pronunciation.(
运用了动名词短语
作主语
)
【高分句型
2
】
It may also be helpful to focus on learning practical
vocabulary related to travel,
such
as
directions, transportation, and ordering food.(
运用了
it
作形式
主语，不定式作真正主语的结构
)
)
7 ．（2023·四川· 石室中学校考模拟预测）假定你是一所国际学校的学生李华， 世界读书日(World Reading Day) 临近， 你校学生会准备组织相关活动， 现向同学们征求建议， 请你给学生会主席 David 写一封建议信， 内
容包括: 1.活动主题； 2.活动内容。
注意：
1.字数 80 词左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version
Dear David,
I am writing to offer my suggestions for the upcoming World Reading Day celebrations. My proposed theme
is “The Power of Stories”, which celebrates the impact that stories have on our live.
To bring this theme to life, I suggest hosting a storytelling session to share students’ favorite personal stories, and a creative writing workshop where students can learn how to craft their own stories. These activities will not only encourage students to read the power of stories, but also provide them with a platform to express themselves
creatively.
Thank you for considering my suggestions.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学生会主席 David 写一封关于世界读书日组织活动的建议
信，内容包括：活动主题和活动内容。
【详解】 1.词汇积累
提供： offer→ provide
建议： suggest → advise
鼓励： encourage→ inspire
影响： impact→ effect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： These activities will not only encourage students to read the power of stories, but also provide them with a
platform to express themselves creatively.
拓展句： These activities will not only encourage students to read the power of stories, but also provide them with
a platform where students can express themselves creatively.
(
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
My proposed theme is “The
Power of Stories”, which celebrates the impact that stories
have on our live.
（运用了
which
引导的非限制性定语从句和
that
引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型
2
】
To bring this theme to li
fe, I suggest hosting a
storytelling
session to
share
students’
favorite
personal stories, and a creative writing workshop where
students can
learn
how
to
craft
their
own
stories.
（运用
了不定式作状语、动名词作宾语和
where
引
导的定语从句）
)
8 ．（2023·吉林长春 · 东北师大附中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Caroline 来信说她打算参 加所在学校举办的文化节活动并介绍中国文化，想请你从下列主题中推荐一项：1.传统节日；2.文字发展。
请你给她回信，内容包括：
1.你的建议；
2.推荐理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
(
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Caroline,
Glad to receive your letter. With regard to the matter you mentioned, I’m writing to off
er some
suggestions.
I propose a brief
introduction to the Chinese writing system be a good
choice.
To
star
t with,China
is widely
known for its incredible civilization. Written Chinese becomes an
important means by whi
ch
China’s present
is
connected with its past. Moreover, Chinese writing is a significant part
of
the
cultur
e, known
as
Chinese
calligraphy.Today, many people enjoy practicing this classic art,making it popular both at
home and
abroad.
Hope my suggestions can help. If
you have any question, please
feel
free to tell me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
)
Dear Caroline.
(
Glad to receive your letter. With regard to the matter you mentioned, I’m writing to off
er some
suggestions.
I propose Chinese traditional festivals. To start with, Chin
a
is widely known
for
its
rich
history.
Over
5000
years’ history has witnessed the creation of
many Chinese traditional festivals. You can talk
about
the
Chinese
new year, the Mid-autumn festivals, or the Dragon boat festival, each
of
which has
incredible
stories b
ehind.
Moreover, celebrations of
traditional festivals can reflect people’s lifestyles. You can
even
compar
e
festivals
and
their celebrations with the similar ones in you
r
country.
Hope my suggestions can help. If
you have any question, please
feel
free to tell me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友
Caroline
写封回信，
向她推荐一个主题以帮助她
参加其学校举办的文化节活动并介绍中国文化。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
关于：
with regard to→ in reference to/con
cerning/as to
首先：
to start with→ first
of
all/firstly
此外：
moreover→ what’s more/besides
重要的：
significant
→
important
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
Today, many people enjoy practicing this classic
art, making it popular both
at home
and
abroad.
拓展句：
Today, many people enjoy practicing
this classic art,
which
makes
it popular both
at
home
and
abroad.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
Written Chinese becomes
an important means by which China’s present is connected
with
its past.
（运用了
which
引导的定语从句）
【高分句型
2
】
If
you have any question, please feel free to tell me.
（运用了
if
引导的状语从句）
)
9 ．（2023·重庆 · 统考三模）假定你是学生李华，你的南非朋友 Louis 对中国古代四大名著很感兴趣，希望
你能给他推荐其中的一部。请你用英语给 Louis 回信，内容包括：
1. 简要介绍一本名著；
2. 说明你推荐的理由。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：
《三国演义》Romance of the Three Kingdoms
《水浒传》Water Margin
《西游记》Journey to the West
《红楼梦》A Dream of Red Mansions
Dear Louis,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible version
Dear Louis,
I’m glad you’re fond of our traditional culture and the China’s four great classical novels. I will recommend
Journey to the West to you at your request.
Journey to the West tells the story of Tang Xuanzang and his three disciples who go to India for Buddhist
scriptures. During their journey, they bravely face a series of dangers and finally conquer those devils and
monsters. This book is not only interesting in content and vivid in language, but also conveys a spirit of courage.
In our daily life, we are bound to meet with all kinds of challenges. We should be brave and never give up.
The book is well worth reading. I hope you will like it.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的名义给朋友 Louis 介绍四大名著中的一部，并说明
推荐的理由。
【详解】 1.词汇积累
高兴的： glad→delighted/pleased
勇敢地： bravely→courageously
战胜： conquer→beat/defeat
(
各种各样的：
all kinds of→a var
eity of/vareities of
2.
句型拓展
陈述句变到状语
原句：
This book is not only interesting in
content and
vivid
in
language,
but
also
conveys
a
spirit
of
courage.
拓展句：
Not only is this book interesti
ng in content
and
vivid
in
language, but
also
it
conveys
a
spirit
of
courage.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1]Journey to the West tells the story of
Tang Xuanzan
g and his
three
disciples who
go
to
India
for Buddhist scriptures.
（运用了
who
引导的限制性定语从句）
[
高分句型
2]I’mglad you’re fond of
our traditional culture
and the China’s
four great
classical
novels.
（运用了
省略引导词
that
的宾语从句）
)
10 ．（2023·广东 · 统考二模）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Hans 来信请你为他负责策划的 4 月 20 日“ 中文
日”班级庆祝活动提建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1.来信收悉；
2.提出活动建议；
3.望录制和分享。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Hans,
Yours,
Li Hua
(
【答案】
Dear Hans,
I’m glad to hear you will hold an activity on the “C
hinese
Language
Day”.
Here
are
some
tips
to make
it
amazing and educational.
First, engaging audience in entertaining activities is the
key.
It
can
start with
Chinese
calligraphy
show
demonstrating the beauty of
Chinese characters. Then, why not hold a Chinese
speech contest
to
hi
ghlight
the
unmatched charm of
this elegant language After that, it could be wrapped up with
“Jasmine”,
a traditional
)
(
Chinese song, which will certainly impress the
audience.
I am sure this will be a feast of
culture
and
I
sincerely ho
pe
you
could record
this
unforgettable
show
and
share your achievem
ent with me!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友
Hans
回复邮件，为他负
责策划的
4
月
20
日
“
中
文日
”
班级庆祝活动提建议。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
高兴的：
glad→delighted
以
……
开始：
start with→begin with
比赛：
contest→competition
真诚地：
sincerely→genuinely
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
First, engaging audience in entertaining activities
is the
key.
拓展句：
First, what matters is to engage audience
in
entertaining
activities.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
I’m glad to hear you will ho
ld an activity on the
“Chinese Language
Day”
.
（运用了省
略
that
的宾语从句）
【高分句型
2
】
After that, it could be w
rapped up with “Jasmine”, a traditional Chinese
song, which will
certainly
impress the audience.
（运用了
which
引导的非限制性定语从句）
)
11 ．（2023·湖北 · 华中师大一附中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校交换生 Lucy 准备参加所在城市组织
的汉语演讲比赛，特征求你的意见。请你回复一封邮件， 内容如下：
1. 表示鼓励；
2. 注意事项。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 词左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Lucy,
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Lucy,
I’m delighted to know that you will participate in the City’s Chinese Speech Contest. I firmly believe you
will win a prize.
Firstly, you should choose a topic that you’re familiar with. It would be better for you to choose impressive examples to gain the recognition of the judges. In addition, you must be well prepared for it. For example, you
have to practise your spoken Chinese to express yourself more clearly and fluently.
I really hope that my advice will be of help to you. Wish you a great success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求考生给校交换生 Lucy 写一封建议信，以帮助其
更好地参加所在城市组织的汉语演讲比赛。
【详解】 1.词汇积累
高兴的： delighted → happy/glad/joyful
首先： firstly→ first of all/initially
此外： in addition→ what’s more/besides
有帮助的： be of help→ be helpful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： For example, you have to practise your spoken Chinese to express yourself more clearly and fluently.
拓展句：For example, you have to practise your spoken Chinese so that you can express yourself more clearly and
fluently.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】I’m delighted to know that you will participate in the City’s Chinese Speech Contest.(运
用了 that 引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型 2】Firstly, you should choose a topic that you’re familiar with.(运用了 that 引导的定语从句)
12 ．（2023·山西朔州 ·怀仁市第一中学校校考模拟预测） 假定你是李华， 你的英国朋友 Jeff 来信说他痴迷于
刷短视频，对学习失去了兴趣，很苦恼。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.肯定短视频在某些方面的好处；
2.你的建议；
3.表达祝愿。
注意： 1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jeff,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(
【答案】
Dear
Jeff,
I’m sorry to hear that you are addicted to short
videos
and
lack
interest
in
learning.
I’m
writing
to
offer you
some suggestions.
Short videos do have some benefits. We can release pressure, s
hare
good times,
cherish memories,
etc.
However, in my opinion, firstly, you should strik
e
a balance between
leisure
activities
and
learning.
Only
on
the
premise
of
self
-
consciousness
can
we
benefit
from
modern
technologies
rather
than
being
slaves
of
such
new
technologies. You should focus on study, and
don’t waste your
time
on
distr
actions.
Secondly,
you
can
join
your
friends in playing various sports activities, such as running,
c
ycling
or playing basketball,
etc.
I hope my suggestions will be of
some help for you. I believe you can
make
it.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，
要求考生给英国朋友
Jeff
写封信， 肯定短视频在某些方面的好处，
对
他沉迷刷短视频提点建议，并表达祝愿。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
提供：
offer→provide
建议：
suggestion→advice
然而：
however→nevertheless
各种各样的：
various→a variety of
)
(
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
Secondly, you can
join your friends in playing various sports
act
ivities,
such
as
running,
cycling
or playing
basketball, etc.
拓展句：
Secondly, you can
join your friends in playing various sports activities, which
include
running,
cycling
or
playing basketball, etc.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] I’m sorry to
hear that you are addicted to
short videos
and
lack
interest
in
learning.
(
运用了
that
引导的宾语从句
)
[
高分句型
2] Only on the premise of
self-consciousness can we benefit from modern technologies
rather than
being slaves of
such new technologies. (
运用了部分倒装句
)
)
13 ．（2023·广东韶关 · 统考二模）假定你是李华, 你的英国笔友 Mike 所在的学校将开设汉语选修课。他来
信咨询如何布置一间教室来营造良好的汉语学习氛围。请给他回信，提出建议并说明理由。
注意： 1. 写作词数应为 80 左右。 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
Greetings from China!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
(
【答案】参考范文
Dear Mike
，
Greetings from China! Hearing that the Chinese languag
e will be an
optional
course
in
your
school,
I’m
writing delightedly to gave some practical advice on the decoration
of
your
classroom.
I think it would be a good idea to put up some unique traditio
nal
Chinese
elements
like paper-cuts
and
calligraphy works. Not only can they make the classroom more attractive, but they
also
carry rich
Chinese
cultural
and historical information. Furthermore, you can put a book shelf
at the back of
the classroom,
where
students
can
get easy access to the
Ch
inese language.
I firmly believe that if
you decorate the classroom that way, it will
sure
ly
create
an
amazing
Chinese
learning
)
(
atmosphere.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely.
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生
给英国笔友
Mike
写一封回信，告诉他关于如何布置一间教
室来营造良好的汉语学习氛围的建议并说明理由。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
高兴地：
delightedly
→joyfu
lly
建议：
advice →suggestion
吸引人的：
attractive →appealing
此外：
furthermore →what’s m
ore
2.
句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：
Hearing that the Chinese language will be an optional course
in
y
our
school,
I’m
writing
delightedly
to
gave
some
practical
advice
on
the
decoration
of
your
classroom
拓展句：
Because I hear that
the Chinese language will be
an
optional
course
in your
school,
I’m
writing
delightedly to gave some practical advice on the decoration
of
your classroom
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
Not only
can they make the classroom more attractive, but they also
carry rich
Chinese
cultural and historical inf
ormation.
（运用了倒装句）
【高分句型
2
】
Furthermore, you can put a book shelf
at the back of
the classroom, where
students can
get
easy
access to the Chinese language.
（运用了
where
引导的非限制性定语从句）
)
