(共16张PPT)
感知文体常识
写一篇影评
影评(a film review),即电影评论,属于夹叙夹议的议论文,就是观众在观看完电影后的所感所想,主要以一般现在时介绍剧情内容及发表自己的看法。此类文章通常采用第一人称和第三人称。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.masterpiece n.杰作
2.be directed by由……导演
3.learn from...从……中学习
4.be set in以……为背景
5.romantic scenes浪漫的场景
6.be based on以……为基础
7.play the part of扮演
8.special effects 特效
9.the fight scene 打斗场景
10.be popular with...受……欢迎
(二)精彩句型
1.The new Chinese TV series is making waves in China and abroad.There must be more stories behind the scenes.
这部新的中国电视剧在国内外掀起了波澜,其幕后一定有更多故事。
2.The action takes place on Peking rooftops,and in places as far away as the deserts of western China.
故事发生在北京的(建筑物)房顶上和遥远的中国西部的沙漠。
3.The film was adapted from a novel,which told that a couple adopted a flexible way to bring up their adopted son,who gradually adapted to his new family.
这部电影是由一部小说改编来的,它讲述的是,一对夫妇采用一种灵活的方法来抚养他们收养的儿子,使他逐渐适应了他的新家庭。
4.This film tells us a story about how a common panda becomes a real dragon warrior.
这部电影为我们讲述了一个平凡的熊猫是怎样成为一个真正的龙武士的。
5.The film is well worth seeing,as it conveys that justice can always defeat evil.
这部电影很值得观看,因为它表达了正义一定会战胜邪恶的思想。
6.What I have to admit is that this movie has many advantages,such as its advanced digital video effects and the worry about the future of human beings.
我不得不承认的是这部电影有很多优点,比如它先进的数字视频特效和对于人类未来的担忧。
7.This movie tells us that every difficulty can be overcome as long as you try your utmost persistently.
这部电影告诉我们,只要你坚持不懈地努力,任何困难都能克服。
8.Kung Fu Panda is a great animated film.It is elegantly drawn and the action sequences are packed with energy.Teenagers,even adults,like watching it.
《功夫熊猫》是一部很棒的动画电影,它画面优雅,动作充满了活力。青少年,甚至是成年人,都喜欢看它。
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
根据以下关于电影《哈利·波特》的简介,写一篇80词左右的英文影评。
1.根据英国作家J.K.Rowling的小说改编,由Chris Columbus执导。
2.哈利失去双亲,在姨母家受虐待,11岁生日时被邀请到Hogwarts魔法学校上学。
3.Hogwarts是一个神奇莫测的魔幻世界,在那里哈利学习了魔法,经历了许多冒险和神奇的事,并交了一些好朋友,同时学会了怎样获得真正的友谊,学会了勇敢。
4.这是一部非常成功的电影,风靡全世界。通过这部电影,我们学会了相信自己和帮助别人。
【审题谋篇】
体裁 议论文
人称 第一、三人称
时态 一般现在时为主
话题 电影影评
框架 第一段 引入话题,电影简介
第二段 剧情简介
第三段 结论,发表评论
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1)be based on以……为基础
(2)be directed by由……执导
(3)fortunately adv.幸运地
(4)adventurous adj.勇于冒险的;充满惊险的
(5)be worth doing值得被做
(6)believe in相信;信任
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①《哈利·波特》是根据英国作家J.K.Rowling的小说改编的电影。
Harry Potter is a movie.It the novel of the English writer J.K.Rowling.
②哈利的父母已经去世,他在姨妈家受到了虐待。
Harry’s parents are dead he at his aunt’s home.
is based on
and is badly treated
③这是一个充满魔法和奇迹的世界。哈利在这里学习魔法,有许多冒险和美妙的经历,并结交了几个好朋友。
It is a world .There Harry learns magic,has many adventurous and wonderful experiences,and makes several good friends.
④他也学会了如何获得真正的友谊和如何变得勇敢。
He also learns and .
full of magic and wonders
how to get true friendship
how to be brave
(2)句式升级
⑤用过去分词短语升级句①
⑥用定语从句升级句②
⑦用非限制性定语从句升级句③
Harry Potter is a movie based on the novel of the English writer J.K.Rowling.
Harry,whose parents are dead,is badly treated at his aunt’s home.
It is a world full of magic and wonders,where Harry learns magic,has many adventurous and wonderful experiences and makes several good friends.
【妙笔成篇】
Harry Potter is a movie which is based on the novel of the English writer J.K.Rowling and directed by Chris Columbus.
In the movie,Harry,whose parents are dead,is badly treated at his aunt’s home.But fortunately,on his eleventh birthday,he is invited to go to Hogwarts,a magic school.
It is a world full of magic and wonders,where Harry learns magic,has many adventurous and wonderful experiences and makes several good friends. He also learns how to get true friendship and how to be brave.
The movie Harry Potter is a great success and it is well received by people all over the world.It’s well worth seeing.By watching this movie,we learn to believe in ourselves and help others.
针对训练
请根据以下关于电影《ET外星人》的简介,用英语写一篇电影评论。
片名(Name):《ET外星人》(ET)
导演(Director):史蒂文·斯皮尔伯格(Steven Spielberg)
剧情梗概:外星人(ET)误留在地球上,Elliott (Henry Thomas饰)把他秘密留在家里躲避成年人。ET和Elliott成为好朋友,分享痛苦与快乐,最后几个孩子准备冒险送ET返回自己的星球。
评价:本片美丽而感人;告诫人们友谊和爱是人生最重要的。
注意:词数80左右。
A Film Review
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A Film Review
ET is a film directed by Steven Spielberg.It is about a story that a creature, ET,is mistakenly left behind on the Earth.A boy called Elliott,acted by Henry Thomas,hides ET secretly in his house to protect ET from the cold world of grown-ups.They become good friends,sharing sorrow and happiness,and at last some children decide to take the risk of sending ET back to his planet.
The film is moving and beautiful,which shows us that friendship and love are the most important things in life.(共17张PPT)
感知文体常识
写一封推荐信
推荐信是常用的一种书信文体,它可以向某人或某个组织推荐某物或某人。一般来说,作者推荐的物或者人都具有鲜明突出的特征和优秀品质。推荐信的用语要简洁,具有说服力且内容要真实可信。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.would like to想要
2.recommend推荐
3.express my views concerning...就……发表我的观点
4.be beneficial to.../be of benefit to...对……有益
5.arouse our curiosity激发我们的好奇心
6.as far as I’m concerned我认为……
7.classic works经典作品
8.consider my recommendation考虑我的推荐
(二)精彩句型
1.I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
很高兴收到你就……征求我的建议的来信。
2.Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help you.
这里有帮助你的一些建议。
3.It would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music.By doing this,you will calm yourself down.
如果你看书或听音乐,这将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做,你会使自己平静下来。
4.As time goes on,people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above advice.
如果你能遵从以上建议,随着时间的推移,人们会更加了解你,会愿意和你交朋友的。
5.In a word,he would be a good choice.I would be grateful if you would like to consider my recommendation.
总之,他会是一个不错的选择。如果您能考虑我的推荐,我将不胜感激。
6.I hope that you would take my recommendation into consideration/account.
我希望你能考虑我的建议。
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
假如你是晨光中学的李华,你的英国外教Alex打算在寒假里发起“英语经典诵读(English Classics for Recitation)”活动,现就诵读书目征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Alex写一封电子邮件:
1.你打算推荐的一本书;
2.推荐的原因;
3.希望从活动中有何收获。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【审题谋篇】
体裁 应用文——推荐信
人称 第一人称
时态 一般现在时
话题 推荐一本书
框架 第一段 引入话题:推荐书目
第二段 介绍细节:说明书中值得学习的地方
第三段 表达希望
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1)launch v.发动
(2)intend v.打算,想要
(3)honoured adj.荣幸的
(4)recommend v.推荐
(5)exist v.存在
(6)contribute to 促成,导致
(7)be of great benefit 有很大的好处
(8)broaden one’s horizon 拓宽视野
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①我听说你打算开展一项名为“英语经典诵读”的活动。
I heard that you an activity called English Classics for Recitation.
②能有机会发表我的意见,我感到非常荣幸。
I .
③它的语言和简的性格都很美。
Its Jane are both beautiful.
intend to launch
feel much honoured to have the chance to make my voice heard
language and the characteristic of
④她的勤奋、善良和独立促成了她最后的幸福。
Her diligence,kindness and independence .
⑤我希望这次活动对我们的成长非常有益。
I hope the activity will .
⑥它不仅可以给我们很多知识,而且可以拓宽我们的视野。
It will .
contributed to her final happiness
be of great benefit to our growth
not only give us much knowledge but also broaden our horizons
(2)句式升级
⑦用分词作状语合并句①和句②
⑧用not only...but also...改写句③
⑨用强调句式改写句④
Hearing that you intend to launch an activity called English Classics for Recitation,I feel much honoured to have the chance to make my voice heard.
Its beauty not only lies in the language,but also exists in the characteristic of Jane.
It was her diligence,kindness and independence that contributed to her final happiness.
【妙笔成篇】
Dear Alex,
I’m Li Hua,a student at Chenguang High School.Hearing that you intend to launch an activity called English Classics for Recitation,I feel much honoured to have the chance to make my voice heard.
The book I’d like to recommend is Jane Eyre,one of the classic novels published in the 19th century.Its beauty not only lies in the language,but also exists in the characteristic of Jane.It was her diligence,kindness and independence that contributed to her final happiness.
I hope the activity will be of great benefit to our growth.It will not only give us much knowledge but also broaden our horizons.
Thank you for your time.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
针对训练
假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将从广州出发到北京进行为期一周的旅游,发邮件请你推荐合适的交通方式及北京的景点。请你回复邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐从广州到北京的交通方式;
2.推荐两三处北京景点;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Terry,
Knowing that you’re going to Beijing for vacation,I’m more than pleased to give you some advice.
_______________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Terry,
Knowing that you’re going to Beijing for vacation,I’m more than pleased to give you some advice.
I suggest taking the high-speed train to Beijing from Guangzhou.For one thing,it’s comfortable and convenient.For another,you can enjoy the wonderful scenery along the way.
After you arrive in Beijing,the first place I recommend you to go is the Great Wall.As a symbol of ancient Chinese civilization,it is one of the world’s oldest and most magnificent man-made scenes.The next place of interest you cannot miss is the Summer Palace,which is the largest and best-preserved royal garden in the world.
May you have an unforgettable tourist experience!
Yours,
Li Hua(共17张PPT)
感知文体常识
写一封鼓励朋友体育锻炼的邮件
本单元的写作话题涉及运动锻炼和健康方面的内容,对应了课程标准中“人与自我”这一主题语境,要求考生能够就“运动和锻炼”表达自己的想法。体裁可以是应用文、议论文等。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.regularly adv.定期地
2.routine n.惯例,常规
3.physical adj.身体的
4.energetic adj.精力充沛的
5.work out锻炼
6.of great benefit有益的
7.build up one’s body强健身体
8.in good health健康状况良好
(二)精彩句型
1.It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on...
能为你提供关于……的一些建议是我的荣幸。
2.I am writing to express my views concerning...
我写信是想表达我对……的观点。
3.In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following steps.
在我看来,采取以下措施是明智的。
4.I think it would be more helpful/beneficial if you could...
我认为,如果你能……可能会更有帮助/更有益。
5.It might be a good idea to find a partner with whom you can exercise.
找一个可以和你一起锻炼的搭档或许是个好主意。
6.I suggest that you should choose an activity that you like.
我建议你选择一个你喜欢的活动。
7.I hope you will consider my suggestions.
我希望你会考虑我的建议。
8.I will appreciate your consideration of my advice/suggestions/tips.
如果你能考虑我的建议,我会很感激。
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
假定你是李华,你的笔友林涛来信说,因学习忙、锻炼少,他最近经常生病,这也影响了他的学习。请根据提示写一封英文回信。要点包括:
1.锻炼的重要性;
2.提出锻炼建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Lin Tao,
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Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【审题谋篇】
体裁 应用文
人称 第一人称
时态 一般现在时
话题 提出健康方面的建议
框架 第一段 写信的目的
第二段 具体建议:每天锻炼一小时,参加俱乐部,用app监测自己
第三段 表达期望
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1)under the weather略有不适,不舒服
(2)ease v.减轻,放松
(3)in good health健康状况良好
(4)efficiency n.效率
(5)make a detailed schedule制定详细的进度表
(6)stick with持续,坚持
(7)routine n.常规,惯例
(8)last but not least最后但同样重要的是
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①我了解到你身体不适好几天了。
I have known that you have been for days.
②我写信给你一些建议。
I am writing to .
③你只有在健康的时候才能继续学习并提高学习效率。
You can only and ____________________________ when you are .
④参加你学校里的健身俱乐部可能是个好主意。
might be a good idea .
under the weather
give you some advice
carry on studying
increase your study efficiency
in good health
It
to join a sports club in your school
(2)句式升级
⑤用非谓语动词作状语合并句①和句②
⑥用倒装句改写句③
Having known that you have been under the weather for days,I am writing to give you some advice.
Only when you are in good health,can you carry on studying and increase your study efficiency.
【妙笔成篇】
Dear Lin Tao,
_______________________________________________________________
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______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
Dear Lin Tao,
Having known that you have been under the weather for days,I am writing to give you some advice.
Exercise can improve your physical conditions and ease your mind.Only when you are in good health,can you carry on studying and increase your study efficiency.First of all,I suggest that you take at least one hour’s exercise every day,and make a detailed schedule for your exercise,which can help you stick with an exercise routine.Besides,it might be a good idea to join a sports club in your school,which costs little or none.Last but not least,you can download an app to monitor your exercise.
I hope you will find the advice helpful.I would be very pleased to see you have a stronger body.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
针对训练
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友James由于不爱运动、吃垃圾食品上瘾等原因陷入了肥胖的困扰。请你通过电子邮件给他提一些建议,帮助他减肥。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear James,
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______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear James,
I have received your email telling me that you are not interested in taking exercise and that you are addicted to eating junk food.Now you are worried about gaining weight.If you want to lose weight,the first thing you should do is to find out why you are overweight.
From your email,it seems that there are two reasons for being fat:a lack of exercise and an unbalanced diet.I have two suggestions.First,set aside some time to exercise regularly.Only in this way,can you keep slim.Second,eat more healthy food and stay away from junk food.
I hope my suggestions are helpful.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua(共18张PPT)
感知文体常识
介绍传统节日
介绍中国的传统节日,属于“人与社会”主题语境中“不同民族文化习俗与传统节日”的范畴。主要从传统节日的名称、庆祝时间、节日由来、风俗习惯或庆祝活动、节日的重要性及其意义等方面来写。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.tradition n.传统
2.celebrate v.庆祝
3.do some cleaning做大扫除
4.fall on适逢,正当;发生
5.get together聚会
6.family dinner家庭聚餐
7.visit relatives and friends走亲访友
8.lucky money压岁钱
9.sweet dumplings元宵,汤圆
10.give new year’s greetings拜年
11.the Spring Festival春节/the Lantern Festival元宵节/the Double Ninth Festival重阳节/the Mid-Autumn Day中秋节/the Qingming Festival 清明节
(二)精彩句型
1.The Chinese Spring Festival falls on the first day of the Chinese Lunar Year.
中国春节在中国农历的第一天。
2.It is festivals that make us reunite.
节日让我们重聚在一起。
3.It is our duty to promote the development of traditional festivals.
促进传统节日的发展是我们的责任。
4.Promoting traditional festivals helps spread knowledge about our national history.
推广传统节日有助于传播我们国家的历史知识。
5.Traditional festivals enable us to learn more about fine Chinese values.
传统节日使我们了解更多优秀的中国价值观。
6.Celebrating festivals is a good way to hand down the tradition.
庆祝节日是传承传统的好方法。
7.The Spring Festival is traditional Chinese culture with a long history.On this day,people will eat together,stick on couplets,set off firecrackers and do other activities.
春节是中国的传统文化,有着悠久的文化历史。在这一天,人们会在一起吃饭、贴春联、放鞭炮以及进行一些其他活动。
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
假定你是李华,你的笔友Susan写信给你,想要了解中国的传统节日。请根据写作提纲给她回信,介绍你喜欢的传统节日——春节。
内容包括:
1.春节的重要性;
2.主要庆祝活动和风俗习惯;
3.邀请她来中国体验春节。
注意:词数80左右。
参考词汇:对联couplet;压岁钱lucky money
Dear Susan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【审题谋篇】
体裁 应用文
人称 第一人称
时态 一般现在时
话题 介绍中国的一个传统节日
框架 第一段 引入话题:指出自己愿意为她介绍春节
第二段 介绍春节细节:介绍节庆活动、风俗习惯及其意义
第三段 表达希望:邀请她来中国体验春节
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1)occasion n.时刻;特殊场合
(2)reunion n.聚会;团圆
(3)traditional adj.传统的
(4)celebration n.庆祝
(5)be decorated with 装饰
(6)lantern n.灯笼
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①它也被称为中国新年。
Chinese New Year.
②这是一个家庭团聚的伟大时刻。
This is .
③它也通过各种庆典和活动帮助我们记住我们的传统文化。
It also helps us by
and activities.
It is also called
a great occasion for the family reunion
remember our traditional culture
various celebrations
④许多地方都装饰着红灯笼、气球和鲜花。
Many places red lanterns,balloons and flowers.
⑤孩子们可以从父母和亲戚那里得到压岁钱。
Children can parents and relatives.
⑥这是他们最快乐的时候。
This is for them.
are decorated with
get lucky money from
the happiest time
(2)句式升级
⑦用定语从句升级句①、②
⑧用并列句升级句⑤、⑥
It is also called Chinese New Year,which is a great occasion for the family reunion.
Children can get lucky money from parents and relatives,so it’s the happiest time for them.
【妙笔成篇】
Dear Susan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Susan,
I am glad to tell you something about our Spring Festival.
It is also called Chinese New Year,which is a great occasion for the family reunion.It also helps us remember our traditional culture by various celebrations and activities,such as cleaning up houses and putting up “Fu” and red couplets to welcome the new year.Many places are decorated with red lanterns,balloons and flowers.They all bring a festival atmosphere.Children can get lucky money from parents and relatives,so it’s the happiest time for them.
I am looking forward to your coming to China and experiencing our Spring Festival with me.
Yours,
Li Hua
针对训练
你校英文报中华文化专栏正在征集文章,请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.你最喜爱的节日;
2.喜欢的原因;
3.庆祝节日的活动。
注意:词数80左右。
My Favourite Festival
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My Favourite Festival
Festivals and celebrations make our lives colourful.So I like festivals very much,especially the Mid-Autumn Festival.
On the Mid-Autumn Festival,families always get together.Everyone is willing to see each other on that special day.People enjoy the delicious moon cakes and admire the beauty of the moon.The most important part is that people can have fun in chatting and staying with their family.
This is my favourite festival.It sounds great,doesn’t it
