Module 2 Experiences Writing (A Trip)写作指导 课件

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Module 2 Experiences
Writing (A Trip)
模块话题和写作指导
本模块以“个人经历”为话题，与之相关的话题作文主要体现为“描写旅行经历”，围绕这一话题来谈论自己去过的某处名胜古迹，记述自己的一次旅行经历或朋友介绍朋友的旅行计划等。
Where have you ever been to
The Great Wall
Tian’anmen Square
Tianyahaijiao
Nanshan Temple
Canton Tower
Terra Cotta Warriors
How did you go there
by bike
by car
by plane
by train
by bus
Take photos
Go shopping
Climb
Enjoy food
What did you do there
Trip
who
weather
Trip:
tiring
exciting...
cool /warm/
sunny...
when
（how)feeling
People :
friendly,helpful...
last summer/
last month
my parents/
my friends/
classmates...
1. have/has been to ＋地点名词 去过某地
2. have visited/seen/travelled...
3. in the north/south of China 在中国北/ 南方
4. thousands of 成千上万的
5. be famous for 以……而出名
6. arrive at/in ＋地点名词 到达某地
7. take photos of ... 和......拍照
8. try different kinds of food 尝试不同种类的食物
9. many places of interest 许多名胜古迹
10. have a good time/ have fun/ enjoy oneself 玩得开心
11. be proud of... 为......感到自豪
12. a woderful experience 一次美好的经历
【旅游经历的素材积累——短语篇】
(1)每年有数以千计的游客来北京旅游。
　 　 　 　 visitors travel to Beijing every year.
(2)我去过北京很多次。
I 　 　 　 　 　 　 Beijing many times.
(3)我和我的家人乘飞机去的那里。
I went there 　　 　 　 with my family .
(4)我们在那里拍了很多相片。
We 　 　 　 　 　 there.
(5)我们参观了许多名胜古迹。
We visited many 　 　 　 　 　 　.
(6)我和我的家人玩得很开心。
I　 　 　 　 　 　 　 with my family.
Thousands
of
by
plane
took
photos
places
of
interest
have
been
to
a
lot
of
had　
a
good
time
【旅游经历的素材积累——句型篇】
(7)我们在那里尝试了各种不同种类的食物。
We have tried 　 　 　 food there.
(8)总之,这是一次难忘的经历。
　 　 　 　,this is an unforgettable experience.
(9)我真的很想再次去那里旅行一次。
I really want to 　 　 　 　 .
different
kinds
of
In
short
travel
there
again
请以“My trip to Beijing”为题，根据以下提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，记叙你的一次旅行。
提示：颐和园(the Summer Palace);故宫(the Palace Museum );北京烤鸭(Beijing Roast Duck)
【小试身手】
审题指导（把握中心，得分方向）
1. 根据题目，我们知道本文应该用第一人称，时态以一般过去时为主，根据实际表 达搭配使用现在完成时等。
2. 开篇点名旅游地点，旅游方式，旅伴和时间等。
3. 主体部分叙述旅游过程，包括对景点的描写，发生的具体事情以及自己的感受等。
“一点
二记
三感受法”
一点
（开篇点题）
...has always been my dream place to visit.
I have a chance to...
I have been to many places so far.
Last...I went there by...
二记
（记录经历）
I have visted many famous places of interest,such as....
I have done so many things.I （have ）climbed...And I （have ）visited...I have also seen...I ate ...It tasted...
三感受
（表达感受）
I felt...but...What a wonderful trip.
I am looking forward to visiting it again.
I will never forget the wonderful trip.
写作技法（学会方法，巧得高分）
My trip to________ 1.When did you go there
2. How did you get there
3.Who did you go with
4.What’s the weather like
5. What did you do
6.What food did you eat
7. How did you feel
My friends/parents.
By train/plane.
Last summer.
Sunny/Warm/Cool.
Climb the mountain/Go shopping/Take photos.
Beijing Roast Duck.
Excited/Tired.
Beijing
My visit to Beijing
Beijing is in the north of China. It is the capital of China. Thousands of people visit it every year.
I have been to Beijing many times. I have climbed the Great Wall, visited the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. I have tried different kinds of Beijing food, especially Beijing Roast Duck. It’s very delicious. I have taken lots of photos in Beijing. I have talked to foreigners there. I think it’s helpful to my English study.
Beijing is a beautiful and old city. I am proud of it. And It was a wonderful experience for me. I really want to travel there again.
【范文】
查（check by yourself）
Read your passage aloud, then check it by yourself.
1.要点齐了吗？
2.句子结构对了吗？
3.句子连贯吗？
4.单词都写对了吗？
5.有没错误的语法？
6.书写整洁吗？
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