专题02 邮件回复
2020-2023年高考真题同类话题满分范文经典背诵
2023年天津卷第一次
假设你是晨光中学学生李津。你的英国朋友 Chris热爱学习汉语，上周他在邮件中向你询问“活雷锋”这一表达是什么意思。请根据以下提示回复邮件：
(1)解释“活雷锋”的意思；
(2)举一个身边“活雷锋”的例子；
(3)鼓励他继续学习汉语。
参考词汇：活雷锋 a living Lei Feng
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
Happy to hear from you.
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Sincerely yours;
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Happy to hear from you. I'm glad that you're interested in the expression “活雷锋”. In Chinese, “活雷锋” means a person who is kind, helpful, and selfless, just like the legendary hero Lei Feng. This expression is used to describe someone who is always ready to lend a helping hand to others without expecting anything in return.
To give you an example, let me introduce you to Zhang Jian, a student from our school. Zhang Jian is known as the “living Lei Feng” among his classmates and teachers. He is always the first one to offer help when someone is in need. Whether it's helping a classmate with their studies, assisting a teacher with classroom duties, or volunteering for community services, Zhang Jian is always there to lend a hand.
I encourage you to continue your study of Chinese language. I wish you all the best in your studies and hope to hear more from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是晨光中学学生李津。你的英国朋友 Chris热爱学习汉语，上周他在邮件中向你询问“活雷锋”这一表达是什么意思。
【详解】1.词汇积累
期待：expect→anticipate
提供帮助：lend a hand→give a hand
高兴的：glad→delighted
继续：continue→carry on with
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Zhang Jian is known as the “living Lei Feng” among his classmates and teachers. He is always the first one to offer help when someone is in need.
拓展句：Zhang Jian is known as the “living Lei Feng” among his classmates and teachers because he is always the first one to offer help when someone is in need.
【点睛】[高分句型1] This expression is used to describe someone who is always ready to lend a helping hand to others without expecting anything in return. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] He is always the first one to offer help when someone is in need.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
2023年浙江卷1月
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→tip
提供：offer→provide
开展：carry out→conduct
主题：theme→topic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
2022年浙江卷1月
假定你是李华，在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国，请你给他 写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 回忆活动经历；2. 分享个人收获；3. 希望保持联系。
注意：
1 . 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Chris,
How are you doing these days It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much. I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago. It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together, through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history. We really enjoyed ourselves there. What’s far more important is that we became good friends then. Though I felt a little sorry that you left China last year, I am pleased to know you are leading a happy life in your hometown.
I hope we can keep in touch often.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在文化节上结识的外国朋友写一封信叙旧。
【详解】1.词汇积累
返回：come back to → return to
思念：miss→ yearn
分享：share → exchange
玩得开心：enjoy oneself→ have a good time → have fun
开心的：pleased→ happy →delight→ content
过着快乐的生活：lead a happy life→ live a happy life
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much.
拓展句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland and I miss you so much.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago.（运用了定语从句）
【高分句型2】It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together, through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history.（运用了强调句型和定语从句）
【高分句型3】What’s far more important is that we became good friends then.（运用了主语从句和表语从句）
2021年全国甲卷
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1．阐明写信事由；
2．征求建议；
3．表示感谢。
注意：1.词数100左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Chris，
How are you doing these days I’m writing to ask you some advice.
In order to promote Chinese traditional culture and post some class meetings on English websites, our school is going to organise class meetings, the theme of which is traditional Chinese culture. We can choose a variety of themes, such as calligraphy, martial arts, oil paintings, papercutting and so on. I’m wondering if you could let me know which of them you like best and which of them people from outside of China are more likely to be interested in.
Thank you for your help. I’d appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.
Yours，
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议：suggestion→ advice
提高：heighten→ promote
各种各样： all kinds of→ a variety of
选择：select→ choose
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We can choose a variety of themes, such as calligraphy, martial arts, oil paintings, papercutting and so on.
拓展句：We can choose a variety of themes, which include calligraphy, martial arts, oil paintings, papercutting and so on.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In order to promote Chinese traditional culture and post some class meetings on English websites, our school is going to organise class meetings, the theme of which is traditional Chinese culture..（介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] I’m wondering if you could let me know which of them you like best and which of them people from outside of China are more likely to be interested in.（if引导的宾语从句）
2021年天津卷第二次
假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：
(1) 表示感谢并问候；
(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情；
(3) 你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
注意：
(1) 词数不少于100；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Nancy,
I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.
Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I'm going toTian 'anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy the elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for consultation. Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母 亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一 个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：表示感谢并问候；计划与家人一起做的事情；你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
【详解】1.词汇积累
照顾：take care of→look after
另外，此外：in addition→besides→what’s more
雇佣：employ→hire
既然：now that→since
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.
拓展句：As the Internet industry develops rapidly，the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. (运用了now that引导的原因状语从句)
2020年天津卷第二次
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍有关情况，内容包括:
(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像)；
(2)对活动的感受；
(3)对自己未来的展望。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行方连贯；
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony
新冠脑炎 COVID-19
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I am so glad to hear from you. The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8th this month. During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. After that, we all watched the video of alumnus fighting against the epidemic.
Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined. When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them. In the future, I will be a good doctor to heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devoting myself to my work.
Best wishes！
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。
【详解】第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你校于6月8号举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris 很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris 回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)2. 对活动的感受。3. 对自己未来的展望。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。
第二步:布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段:成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)。第二段:对活动的感受；对自己未来的展望。第三段，表达期望。
第三步:确定关键词汇和短语:congratulate sb on sth., be faced with, heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devote oneself to doing sth.；
第四步:确定较为高级的句子:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. that引导的表语从句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.
第五步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:After that, besides, however.
第六步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. that引导的表语从句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.等高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
2020年浙江卷7月
假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括:1. 询问近况；2. 分享班级最新消息；3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Peter,
I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now
I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease. Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there.
We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况，分享消息和表达祝愿。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构：三段式结构。第一段询问近况；第二段告知班级消息；第三段表达祝愿。
要求：1.询问近况（How are you feeling now ）
2.告知班级消息（my good news; performed a song which you taught us）
3.表达祝愿（wish you a quick and complete recovery）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause; recovery
第三步：连词成句
1. I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.
2. I hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease.
3. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause.
4. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：
I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.( 听说你请病假回家了，我很难过。)这句话运用了that 引导宾语从句。
Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival.(上个月，我们学校举办了英语节，我们班在节上表演了一首您教我们的歌曲。)这句话运用了which引导限制性定语从句。
As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause.(我们一唱完这首歌，所有的观众都给了我们热烈的掌声。)这句话中as soon as引导时间状语从句。
2.使用了一些固定词组，如be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。专题02 邮件回复
2020-2023年高考真题同类话题满分范文经典背诵
2023年天津卷第一次
假设你是晨光中学学生李津。你的英国朋友 Chris热爱学习汉语，上周他在邮件中向你询问“活雷锋”这一表达是什么意思。请根据以下提示回复邮件：
(1)解释“活雷锋”的意思；
(2)举一个身边“活雷锋”的例子；
(3)鼓励他继续学习汉语。
参考词汇：活雷锋 a living Lei Feng
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
Happy to hear from you.
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Sincerely yours;
Li Jin
2023年浙江卷1月
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Yours，
Li Hua
2022年浙江卷1月
假定你是李华，在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国，请你给他 写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 回忆活动经历；2. 分享个人收获；3. 希望保持联系。
注意：
1 . 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2021年全国甲卷
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1．阐明写信事由；
2．征求建议；
3．表示感谢。
注意：1.词数100左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2021年天津卷第二次
假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：
(1) 表示感谢并问候；
(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情；
(3) 你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。
注意：
(1) 词数不少于100；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
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Li Jin
2020年天津卷第二次
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍有关情况，内容包括:
(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像)；
(2)对活动的感受；
(3)对自己未来的展望。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行方连贯；
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony
新冠脑炎 COVID-19
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Jin
2020年浙江卷7月
假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括:1. 询问近况；2. 分享班级最新消息；3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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