(共18张PPT)
感知文体常识
活动计划
活动计划属于应用文,一般来说,它是一个活动的过程或行动。具体来说,它是一种列出实现目标所需步骤的文章。也就是说,一个活动计划阐明了需要做什么来达到这个目标,为任务制定一个时间表,并决定需要哪些成员来完成这一切。
活动计划包括完成项目目标必须完成的工作的详细清单。它概述了实现活动目标所需的资源和时间表,包括从活动开始到完成所涉及的任务等。
活动计划一般包括三个部分:第一部分涉及主题;第二部分是主体,涉及活动的具体安排等;第三部分涉及活动预计的效果等。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.conduct vt.组织,实施
2.illustrate vt.说明,解释
3.indicate v.表明;暗示
4.favour vt.较喜欢;偏袒;有助于
5.by accident偶然,意外地
6.with a bang很成功;引人注目,有强烈影响
(二)精彩句型
1.Our school will hold the annual “Science Day” next week.
我们学校下周将举办一年一度的“科技日”。
2.You are supposed to arrive there early to prepare for the activity.
你应该早点到那里为活动做准备。
3.There will be a variety of activities in the festival,which include...
节日里有各种各样的活动,包括……
4.Then we will start to have a try.
然后我们将开始试一试。
5.Anyone who is interested in knowing more about the great scientist is welcome to attend the lecture.
任何有兴趣了解这位伟大科学家的人都欢迎参加讲座。
6.Activities will surely provide us with chances to practice our critical thinking and problem solving abilities.
活动一定会给我们提供机会来锻炼我们的批判性思维和解决问题的能力。
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry在中国学习。他来邮件询问你校举办的“科技展”活动的情况,请回复邮件,内容包括:
1.科技展的时间和地点;
2.科技展的内容和意义;
3.发出邀请。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头与结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
3.请在相应位置作答。
参考词汇:科技展Science and Technology Exhibition
Dear Terry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【审题谋篇】
体裁 应用文
人称 第三人称
时态 一般现在时和一般将来时
话题 科技展
框架 第一段 引入话题:科技展的时间和地点;
第二段 介绍细节:科技展的内容和意义;
第三段 发出邀请
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1)通知
(2)以……为特色
(3)经历
(4)各种各样的
(5)有很大意义
(6)参加
inform
feature
experience
a variety of
be of great significance
participate
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①我写信是想通知您“科技展”的具体情况。科技展将由我校于2023年7月18日至8月15日在科学楼举办。
I am writing to of the “Science and Technology Exhibition”.It will from July 18 to August 15,2023,in the science building.
②参观者可以欣赏机器人模型、3D打印机等各种发明。
Visitors can enjoy ,such as robot models,3D printers,etc.
③参观者可以体验9D虚拟现实椅子。
Visitors can .
inform you of the details
be held by my school
a variety of inventions
experience the 9D Virtual Reality chair
(2)句式升级
④用动词不定式改写句①
⑤用not only(放于句首)...but also...合并句②和句③
I am writing to inform you of the details of the “Science and Technology Exhibition” to be held by my school from July 18 to August 15,2023,in the science building.
Not only can visitors enjoy a variety of inventions,such as robot models,3D printers,etc.,but they can also experience the 9D Virtual Reality chair.
【妙笔成篇】
Dear Terry,
So delighted am I to receive your letter.I am writing to inform you of the details of the “Science and Technology Exhibition” to be held by my school from July 18 to August 15,2023,in the science building.
The exhibition,including several themes like AI and VR,features a new collection of science books and videos.Not only can visitors enjoy a variety of inventions,such as robot models,3D printers,etc.,but they can also experience the 9D Virtual Reality chair.The activity is of great significance.Therefore,I sincerely invite you to participate in it.And I bet you will have an unforgettable experience.
Should you need any further information,please don’t hesitate to contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
针对训练
假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津,你校将于1月15日在学校体育馆举办校园科技节活动。请给外教Chris写一封邮件,简要介绍该活动并邀请他参加。
内容包括:
(1)活动的相关信息(时间、地点、活动目的等);
(2)活动内容(制作科技小发明,开展科技相关的讲座、机器人比赛等);
(3)说明你发出邀请的原因;
(4)征询对方的意向。
注意:
(1)词数不少于80;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)文章中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名;
(4)邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:科技节Science Festival 学校体育馆school gymnasium 机器人比赛the robot competition
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jin
Dear Chris,
I hope that everything goes on well with you.I’m writing to invite you to join in the Science Festival to be held in our school.
We’ll feel honored if you are present.The activity is scheduled on January 15th in the school gymnasium,aiming to enrich students’ knowledge of modern science and technology.It involves various activities,ranging from the exhibition of students’ scientific and technological inventions to lectures on technological advances and the robot competition.
As we consider that you can give us some valuable suggestions on the Science Festival,we sincerely hope that you can come to join us.
Would you be kind enough to spare some time for us Thank you in advance.I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Jin(共13张PPT)
感知文体常识
调查报告
调查报告是通过对典型问题、情况、事件的深入调查,把通过调查所获取的观点、想法和数据,经过分析、综合,揭示出客观规律的书面报告。最后还可以提出自己的观点和建议。调查报告一般由标题、概况、调查内容、结论和落款组成。具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”,具体为:
第一段:说明调查的目的、对象、时间、经过和调查的问题。
第二段:调查报告的核心,也是对调查研究结果的具体引证、说明。
第三段:总结全文,发表个人的观点,提出改进措施等,要求简明扼要,一语中的。作者就某一个问题或一些现象表达自己的关心,发表自己的一些看法,并提出可行的解决办法。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.percentage n.百分率,百分比
2.survey n.调查
3 comment n.议论,评论
4.belong to属于,归……所有
5.be lost in全神贯注
6.cut back on减少,削减
(二)精彩句型
1.As is demonstrated in the bar chart,great mind worship occupies 47% of the idol worship,followed by celebrity worship which gains 38%.11% of the students surveyed adore people around them,for instance,teachers,parents or friends.
正如柱状图所示,伟大的心灵崇拜占偶像崇拜的47%,其次是名人崇拜,占38%。11%的受访学生崇拜他们身边的人,比如老师、父母或朋友。
2.Apparently,idol worship has become a common social phenomenon among the adolescents.
显然,偶像崇拜在青少年中已经成为一种普遍的社会现象。
3.There is no denying that idol worship inspires us to focus on their achievements,which come from diligence,effort and persistence.
不可否认,偶像崇拜激励我们关注他们的成就,这些成就来自勤奋、努力和坚持。
4.However,blind worship is not supposed to be advocated because it will lead to extreme behaviors easily.
但是,盲目崇拜是不应该被提倡的,因为它很容易导致极端行为。
5.As far as I am concerned,we should avoid blind worship and learn to worship our idols rationally.
在我看来,我们应该避免盲目崇拜,学会理性地崇拜我们的偶像。
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
目前,网络语言(Internet Slang)在青少年中极为盛行,你校学生会在同学中就对网络语言的看法进行了调查,调查结果见下面饼状图(pie chart)。请根据图中信息,用英语写一篇短文,介绍同学们的看法,并表达你自己的观点。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
【审题谋篇】
体裁 说明文
人称 第一、三人称
时态 一般现在时
话题 调查网络语言
框架 第一段 引入话题:调查目的
第二段 介绍细节:调查网络语言盛行现象
第三段 提出个人观点
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1)普及,受欢迎
(2)反对
(3)时尚的
(4)方便的
(5)实施
(6)支持,赞成
popularity
oppose
fashionable
convenient
carry out
in favor of
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①随着网络用语在青少年中越来越流行,我们学校开展了一项调查。
teenagers ,our school has carried out a survey.
②一些学生赞成。一些学生反对。
Some students are .Some are opposed to it.
③四分之一的学生持有这个观点。
A quarter of the students .
④使用网络语言更方便。
to use Internet Slang.
As Internet Slang among
becomes popular
in favor of it
hold the opinion
It is more convenient
(2)句式升级
⑤用with的复合结构改写句①
,our school has carried out a survey.
⑥用并列句合并句②
⑦用名词性从句合并句③和句④
With the increasing popularity of Internet Slang among teenagers
Some students are in favor of it while some are opposed to it.
A quarter of the students hold the opinion that it is more convenient to use Internet Slang.
【妙笔成篇】
With the increasing popularity of Internet Slang among teenagers,our school has carried out a survey.The results are as follows.
Some students are in favor of it while some are opposed to it.35% students feel it active and fashionable to say Internet Slang.And 33% students think it is full of humor and wisdom.A quarter of the students hold the opinion that it is more convenient to use Internet Slang.While 7% students view it as a simple thing,they think Internet Slang wasn’t used by most people and if it is used too often,it will cause misunderstanding.
As far as I am concerned,Internet Slang is a double-edged sword.If we use it in a proper way,our online communication will be more colorful.
针对训练
你校高三英文社团就“What is the most effective way to ease stress ”话题进行了一次调查,请根据下面调查结果写一篇调查报告,内容包括:
1.简述调查结果;
2.分析原因。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
THE MOST EFFECTIVE WAY TO EASE STRESS
According to the pie chart,students have a variety of ways to ease their stress.
As is shown in the chart,about 40% of the students choose to listen to music,while 25% of them prefer to do physical exercise to make them relaxed.Meanwhile,18% of the students tend to surf the Internet as their recreation way when facing the hardship in the study.By comparison,nearly 12% are fond of talking to friends and 5% of the students choose other activities to help relieve stress.
From my point of view,the reason why the majority of students accounting for almost 65% in the diagram choose more positive ways is that they focus much on their health.Students clearly concentrate on building a well-developed body so that they will make progress in their study.(共21张PPT)
感知文体常识
续写故事
续写故事属于记叙文。
续写故事的要求:首先,通读全文,读懂原文。搞清楚文章中的人物、时间、地点、起因、发生的事情。把文章的意思读清楚,知道文章表达的意思。
其次,构思故事情节,谋篇布局。在了解原文的基础上,构建故事的走向,运用自己的理解,谋划故事发展的方向和结局。
最后,理清逻辑,组织语言,把要续写的情节和描写的场景条理化,按照事物发展的一般规律有条有理地续写。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.unbearable adj.难耐的,无法忍受的
2.rescue n.& v.救援,营救,抢救
3.distance n.遥远,久远;距离;差异;疏远
4.far and wide 到处,各处
5.break out 突然开始,爆发
6.run out of 用完,耗尽
(二)精彩句型
1.He was too shocked to speak a word out.
他震惊得说不出一个字。
2.He dashed out of the house.
他冲出了房子。
3.Curious,but somewhat disappointed,he opened the box.
好奇但是有点失望,他打开了这个盒子。
4.He stood silently,tears rolling down his cheeks.
他沉默地站着,泪水滚落他的脸颊。
5.Frozen with fear,he stood rooted to the spot.
他因恐惧而呆住,站在原地一动不动。
6.To my surprise,he didn’t come.
令我吃惊的是,他没有来。
7.She started to cry when she heard the news.
当听到这个消息时,她开始哭起来。
8.It was freezing cold and what was worse was that they lost their way.
天气极冷,更糟糕的是他们迷路了。
9.Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.
她脸色苍白站在那里,说不出话来。
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was still living in Peru when the earthquake happened.I had had a fight with my parents till midnight the day before because I thought they didn’t understand me.Therefore,I was still sleeping in the afternoon.Suddenly,I was woken up by my dog barking at the shaking window next to me.Small quick earthquakes are very common in Peru,especially in the coastal regions,so I ignored it and tried to calm my dog so I could fall asleep again.I had walked 4 steps from the sofa to get her when the whole wall-length window broke in front of me,huge sharp pieces falling right into the sofa I had been lying in just seconds before.
Fully woken up,I could hear what sounded like a million car alarms ringing from the ground.My parents were still at work,and I was alone in a 10-floor flat with a panicking dog running circles around me,so I forced myself to get it together.I lifted my giant dog in my arms and ran into the emergency stairs.I just ran and ran until I could see some street lights since the building had no emergency lights and everything was dark.When I finally rushed through the door of the hall,I could see the road below me breaking and trees shaking from their roots up.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
I stayed in the streets for about half an hour until my parents arrived.
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After the earthquake,I had a heart-to-heart talk with my parents.
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【审题谋篇】
体裁 记叙文
人称 第一人称
时态 一般过去时
话题 地震后平安无事以及生活价值观
框架 第一段 地震后的安全:我和父母团聚时的场景
第二段 地震后的感悟
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1)压力
(2)幸运的
(3)幸存
(4)跑着穿过
(5)回家
stress
fortunate
survive
run across
return home
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①我发现他们还活着。我的兴奋之情溢于言表。
I found them alive. my excitement.
②他们听到了我作为一名青少年的压力和焦虑。
They heard as a teenager.
③我也能感受到他们作为成年人的压力和责任。
I got as adults.
Nothing could ever describe
my stresses and anxieties
their pressures and responsibilities
(2)句式升级
④用时间状语从句改写句①
⑤not only(放于句首)...but also...合并句②和句③
Nothing could ever describe my excitement when I found them alive.
Not only did they hear my stresses and anxieties as a teenager but also I got their pressures and responsibilities as adults.
【妙笔成篇】
I stayed in the streets for about half an hour until my parents arrived.Nothing could ever describe my excitement when I found them alive.The world was still shaking but we ran across the fallen trees towards each other without any hesitation.The moment my parents hugged me tightly in their arms,tears of joy ran down our cheeks like rivers that wouldn’t stop flowing.With Dad leading the way through the ruins,the fear I had before was disappearing.Finding a corner to stay,we held our hands and waited until the earthquake passed.
After the earthquake,I had a heart-to-heart talk with my parents.It was the first time in years that we truly had listened to each other with patience.Not only did they hear my stresses and anxieties as a teenager but also I got their pressures and responsibilities as adults.Honestly speaking,the earthquake has changed my values of life.Roads could be rebuilt,houses repaired and trees planted.However,lost family members would never return.Seeing so many loving families torn apart,I found myself extremely lucky to have my family survive.It was only after this terrible disaster that I realized nothing mattered more than the safety and happiness of my family.
针对训练
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Located halfway up the Apennine Mountain in Italy,about 100 miles northeast of Rome,the Hotel Rigopiano has never been easy to reach.But its isolation(隔绝) only adds to its appeal,attracting a great number of tourists.
Snow began to fall across the Apennines in January and lasted for days. From his home in the Rome suburbs,Matrone watched the weather with concern.He and his wife,Cicioni,had planned an overnight getaway to the hotel.But now he wondered whether they should go.After phoning the hotel,they decided to make the trip.By the time they neared the hotel six hours later,they were battling a snowstorm.When they finally arrived,they were both cold and exhausted.They checked into their room and went to bed early.
As they awoke the next day,they discovered that their difficulty had worsened overnight.The cars in the parking lot were invisible.The phone and power lines were down.They were having breakfast when the hotel began to shake.An earthquake with a magnitude(震级) of 5.7 had struck the mountain.“Get out of here!” Matrone shouted to his wife.They headed quickly to the parking lot,where others were digging their cars.Fifteen minutes after the first earthquake,another quake hit,this one measuring 5.6.
With a dozen vehicles freed by noon,the guests set off down the driveway. But when they reached the main road,the path was blocked by a six-foot-high wall of snow.Matrone climbed out of his car and investigated it.There was no road in sight.“We’re trapped!”he told his wife.So they had no choice but to make their way back to the hotel.
As it was getting dark,they managed to be back.That was when the snow on the mountain began to slide.They heard the avalanche(雪崩) before they saw it.The avalanche gathered speed and size,grabbing rocks and trees and anything else in its way down the mountain,tearing the hotel from its foundation.When the avalanche came to a stop,those caught inside the hotel were left buried in the icy rocks and ruins.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
When Matrone came to himself,he was stuck in the darkness.
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It was not until the next morning that the rescuers finally arrived.
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When Matrone came to himself,he was stuck in the darkness.Lying on his stomach,he realized with horror that he was under something heavy and couldn’t move at all.“Cicioni! Cicioni!” he called,but there was no response.He could hear nothing of what was happening at the surface.The whole world was dead still.What he had to face was a terrible reality—they were buried alive.Despair washed over him.He asked himself again and again,“Who is going to save us ”
It was not until the next morning that the rescuers finally arrived.Without any hesitation they got down to detecting the remains of the hotel and they were delighted to discover there was sign of life beneath.With great efforts they removed the thick snow and began cutting the roof.Then they carefully lowered themselves through the hole they’d made.Suddenly,they heard someone crying for help in a weak voice.It was Matrone.Later all the survivors were rescued including Matrone’s wife.The couple felt really lucky to be still alive!(共18张PPT)
感知文体常识
倡议信
倡议信属于应用文,是作者就某一个问题或一些现象,表达自己的关心,发表自己的一些看法,并提出可行的解决办法。
倡议信可以写给个人,也可以写给报社或者某个集体或者组织,与一般信件的格式相同。写作时,要明确写信的目的,语气要中肯,文章结构要紧凑。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.variety n.不同种类
2.survive vi.生存,存活
3.disappear v.消失
4.due to 由于,因为
5.come up with 想出,想到
6.get rid of 摆脱,丢弃,扔掉
(二)精彩句型
1.I am writing to express my deep sympathy/care for you.
我写这封信是为了表达我对你的深切同情/关心。
2.With the development of society,people now desire more.
随着社会的发展,现在人们的欲望越来越大。
3.With no food to eat and no place to live in,many animals are dying out.
由于没有食物吃,没有地方住,许多动物正在灭绝。
4.It’s high time that we paid much attention to protecting our environment.
该是我们重视保护环境的时候了。
5.Only in this way can we live in harmony with the animals.
只有这样,我们才能与动物和谐相处。
6.It’s true that attitude decides everything.So you should never give up no matter what happens.
的确,态度决定一切。 所以无论发生什么,你都不应该放弃。
7.I hope what I said can comfort you a little.
我希望我说的话能让你感到些许安慰。
8.As far as I’m concerned,if everyone could contribute a little,the Earth we live on will definitely have a brighter future!
就我而言,如果每个人都能贡献一点,我们生活的地球一定会有一个更光明的未来!
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
5月22日是“国际生物多样性日”。据报道,世界上有许多珍稀植物濒临灭绝。你想以校英语社团的名义写一封倡议信,呼吁全校同学“保护生物,爱护环境”。内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.分析原因并提出建议;
3.你的呼吁。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Dear schoolmates,
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The School English Club
【审题谋篇】
体裁 说明文
人称 第一人称
时态 一般现在时和现在完成时
话题 如何开展活动表达想法
框架 第一段 引入话题:保护生物、爱护环境
第二段 介绍细节:分析原因给出建议
第三段 表达呼吁
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1)呼吁,恳求
(2)合作
(3)经常
(4)灭绝,绝迹
(5)尽力
(6)用尽
appeal
cooperation
regularly
extinction
do one’s bit
give out
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①从今年的“国际生物多样性日”我们知道,有十种稀有植物似乎都濒临
灭绝。
there are ten rare plants appearing endangered altogether.
②这是物种灭绝的关键原因。
This is the .
③我们人类总是污染太多,过度破坏森林来获取燃料。
We human beings are always_______________________________________
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We know from this year’s International Day for Biological Diversity that
key reason for the extinction
polluting too much and over destroying forests
for fuel
(2)句式升级
④用定语从句改写句①
⑤用名词性从句合并句②和句③
As we know from this year’s International Day for Biological Diversity,there are ten rare plants appearing endangered altogether.
The key reason for the extinction is that we human beings are always polluting too much and over destroying forests for fuel.
【妙笔成篇】
Dear schoolmates,
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The School English Club
Dear schoolmates,
International Day for Biological Diversity is on 22nd,May every year.Now I am writing to appeal for your cooperation in conservation of creatures in the world.
As we know from this year’s International Day for Biological Diversity,there are ten rare plants appearing endangered altogether.The key reason for the extinction is that we human beings are always polluting too much and over destroying forests for fuel.To save the world’s creatures,we should do our bit to advertise a low-carbon life and try to avoid giving out gas and littering around.
Here,we sincerely advocate that we go to school on foot or by bike as much as possible every day.Furthermore,we had better make sure people are informed of the danger of creatures’ extinction.
The School English Club
针对训练
假如你是高一学生李华,听说巴黎圣母院(Notre Dame in Paris)发生火灾。请你给《21世纪英文报》写一封邮件,强调保护文化遗产的重要性,呼吁人们采取具体措施保护文化遗产。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
3.请在相应位置作答。
Dear editor,
I’m a Senior 1 student.I’m sorry to hear that the fire broke out at Notre Dame in Paris.___________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear editor,
I’m a Senior 1 student.I’m sorry to hear that the fire broke out at Notre Dame in Paris.It shocked the whole world and rang the warning bell for us,so I am writing to appeal to all of us to protect the cultural relics.
As we all know,cultural relics,usually rare and valuable,are symbols of human civilization.Their safety is a red line that can never be crossed,which is a global and serious issue.So it is of importance to protect them.Firstly,it’s necessary that the government should take some measures,for example,making some policies to regulate people’s behaviour,and not overdeveloping the tourism there.As individuals,we should strengthen the awareness of protection and improve our behaviour while visiting.With our joint efforts,more and more people will become concerned about them.
I really hope you can take these suggestions into consideration.Wish our cultural relics a better future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
