Unit 4 Scientists who changed the world (译林版2020必修第三册)
单元写作指导&典题例析&跟踪训练(科技节制订的活动计划)
I. 单元写作指导
话题分析
本单元的主题语境是“人与社会”，话题是“著名人物科学家”。 单元写作的话题关于为科技节制订的活动和计划。文章是说明文，里面涉及到一些小发明创造,所以写作时要实事求是、言简意赅,语言较为正式。
2.话题词汇
(1)活动安排
①invite sb.to do sth. 邀请某人做某事
②be scheduled to do sth. 被安排做某事
③take place 发生;举行
④with the purpose of 目的是……
⑤take part in/participate in/join in 参加
(2)科技发明与创造
①introduce sth.to sb. 向某人介绍某物
②share sth.with sb. 与某人分享某物
③improve the quality of life 改善生活质量
④have a better understanding of 对……有更好的了解
⑤inspire sb.to do sth. 激励某人做某事
3. 句式整理
(1)开头
①The Science Festival is scheduled to take place on the playground from 8 a.m. to 11 a.m., lasting three hours.
科技节定于上午8点到11点在操场上举行，持续3个小时。
②I’m greatly honored to invite you to the Science Festival to be held in our school.
我非常荣幸地邀请您参加在我们学校举行的科技节。
(2)主体段落
①It goes without saying that modern technology brings us convenience and comfort in life.
毫无疑问，现代科技给我们的生活带来了方便和舒适。
②The purpose of the activity is to arouse the students’ interest in science.
这个活动的目的是激发学生对科学的兴趣。
③The gadget is of greatly practical use in daily life.
这种小工具在日常生活中很实用。
(3)结尾
①I would appreciate it if you could join in the coming Science Festival.
如果你能参加即将到来的科技节，我将不胜感激。
②Looking forward to your joining us.
期待您的加入。
II. 典题例析
假定你是李华,想邀请英国交换生Peter下周二参加你校举办的“科技节”，并观赏学生们的“科技小发明”。请给他写封邮件，内容包括:
1.写信意图；
2.活动时间和地点；
3.活动目的和内容；
4.表达希望。
注意:1.词数80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:科技小发明:technology gadgets
审核
体裁/话题 邀请参加科技节的文章(邀请信)
时态/人称 一般现在时/第一，三人称
文章结构 第一段：引入话题：写邀请信的目的 第二段：科技节的时间，地点，举办科技节的目的意义 第三段：再次邀请
核心要点 1.活动的时间，地点和意义， 2活动的内容和目的。
二. 造句
1. 科技节定于上午8点到11点在操场上举行。
→The Science Festival ____________________ on the playground from 8 a.m. to 11 a.m.
2. 科技节持续3个小时。
The Science Festival ____________________.
3. 它的目的是鼓励我们学生创造性地思考和与他人分享我们的作品。
____________________ as well as share our works with others.
4. 各种各样的小工具在我们的日常生活中用处很大。
Various gadgets are ____________________ in our daily life.
5. 一些优秀的学生发明家会介绍他们的技术小工具的功能,并当场示范。
Some excellent student inventors will ____________________.
6. 我认为这将是最令人兴奋的部分。(exciting)
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【答案】
1. is scheduled to take place
2. lasts three hours
3. Its purpose is to encourage us students to think creatively
4. of great use/useful
5. introduce the functions of their technology gadgets and perform them on the spot
6. I think it will be the most exciting part.
三. 句式升级
1.用分词作状语合并句1和句2。
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2.用定语从句合并句5和句6。
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【答案】
1. The Science Festival is scheduled to take place on the playground from 8 a.m. to 11 a.m., lasting three hours.
2. Some excellent student inventors will introduce the functions of their technology gadgets and perform them on the spot, which I think will be the most exciting part.
【参考范文】
Dear David,
I’m glad to invite you to the Science Festival to be held in our school next Monday to enjoy the students’ technology gadgets.
The Science Festival is scheduled to take place on the playground from 8 a.m. to 11 a.m., lasting three hours. Its purpose is to encourage us students to think creatively as well as share our works with others. At this festival, you can enjoy various gadgets which are of great use/greatly useful in our daily life. What’s more, some excellent student inventors will introduce the functions of their technology gadgets and perform them on the spot, which I think will be the most exciting part.
I would appreciate it if you could join in the coming Science Festival. Looking forward to your reply and expecting your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
III. 跟踪训练
应用文写作
A
(2023下·湖南岳阳·高一统考期末)假如你是李华，“学校科技节”即将到来，你校英文报正在开展主题为“Scientists who changed the world”的征文活动，请用英文写一篇文章，介绍你最崇拜的科学家。文章内容包括以下三个方面：
1.科学家的成就；
2.他(她)对世界的影响；
3.你崇拜他(她)的理由。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
My favourite scientist is Marie Curie, who was the first woman to receive a Nobel Prize.
Together with Pierre, she made several important scientific discoveries: she discovered radium and polonium, and she developed the theory of radioactivity. They were awarded the Nobel Prize in Physics in 1903. After her husband’s death in 1906, she continued their work and discovered that radium could be used to treat illnesses. I think that is her greatest contribution to science. In 1911, Marie received her second Nobel Prize-this time in Chemistry. To this day, no one else has received two Nobel Prizes in different sciences. Marie Curie also did a lot for other people. She helped injured soldiers during the First World War. She also founded the Curie Institutes in Paris and in Warsaw, which are still major centres of medical research today.
The reason I admire Marie Curie is that she showed the world that women can make important contributions to science. I hope that one day I can become a scientist like her.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生假如是李华，“学校科技节”即将到来，你校英文报正在开展主题为“Scientists who changed the world”的征文活动，请用英文写一篇文章，介绍你最崇拜的科学家。
【详解】1.词汇积累
疾病：illnesses → sickness
成立：found → establish
重要的：important → vital
继续：continue → run on
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：The reason I admire Marie Curie is that she showed the world that women can make important contributions to science.
拓展句：I admire Marie Curie because she showed the world that women can make important contributions to science.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]The reason I admire Marie Curie is that she showed the world that women can make important contributions to science. (运用了that引导表语从句)
[高分句型2]She also founded the Curie Institutes in Paris and in Warsaw, which are still major centres of medical research today. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
B
(2023上·甘肃兰州·高一校考阶段练习)假定你是李华，擅长体育运动，最近收到朋友 Jane 的来信,她在信中说自己苦恼于身体不够强壮。
1. 鼓励Jane参加跑步俱乐部。
2. 阐明跑步对于健身的积极作用。
3.分享一些科学跑步的建议。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 信的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Jane,
I am really sorry to hear that you are worrying about your weak body.
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jane,
I am really sorry to hear that you are worrying about your weak body. Recently, you have been wondering how to keep healthy. Since I have been trying to keep fit these days, I would like to share my experience with you.
Firstly, it is important for you to join a running club. Besides, it’s suggested that you should run three or four times a week so as to relax and make yourself energetic, and running is also beneficial for your mental health. In addition, running can keep yourself in a good state of mind. Last but not least, running in the morning is better for your health.
Only in this way can you keep healthy. I hope this advice will be helpful to you.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。 Jane 在信中说自己苦恼于身体不够强壮。要求考生李华鼓励Jane参加跑步俱乐部并分享一些科学跑步的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
分享：share → have a share in
此外：what’s more → besides
建议：suggestion → advice
参加：take part in → join
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In addition, running can keep yourself in a good state of mind.
拓展句：In addition, it is running that can keep yourself in a good state of mind.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Since I have been trying to keep fit these days, I would like to share my experience with you.(运用了since引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】I hope this advice will be helpful to you.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
C
(2023下·四川绵阳·高一统考期末)假定你是李华，与留学生朋友 Tom 约好一起去参加你校即将举行的科技节并为他做介绍，但你因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达歉意；
2. 说明原因；
3. 提出弥补措施。
注意： 1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I’m very sorry to tell you that I can’t keep the appointment and go to the Science Festival with you this Sunday.
The reason why I can’t make it is that I must take an important exam that day, which is closely connected with my college application. I’m sure you can understand, right If you don’t mind, how about going with my friend Liu Xing He knows a lot about the inventions at the Science Festival, and he can introduce them to you.
I really hope you can accept my apology. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给留学生朋友Tom写封邮件，因故不能与他一起去参加将举行的科技节并为他做介绍，向他表达歉意，解释原因并提出弥补措施。
【详解】1.词汇积累
告知：tell → inform
与……相关：be connected with → be related to
确信的：sure → convinced/certain
回复：reply → answer
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：He knows a lot about the inventions at the Science Festival, and he can introduce them to you.
拓展句：He knows a lot about the inventions at the Science Festival, who can introduce them to you.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The reason why I can’t make it is that I must take an important exam that day, which is closely connected with my college application. (运用了why引导的限制性定语从句、that引导的表语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I’m very sorry to tell you that I can’t keep the appointment and go to the Science Festival with you this Sunday. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
D
(2023下·河北石家庄·高一正定中学校考阶段练习)假定你是李华，请根据下列表格中的内容提示，为校报的“英语园地”写一篇英语短文，介绍你最崇拜的一位中国科学家。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：培育杂交水稻breed hybrid rice；产量output
姓名 袁隆平
出生年份 1930年
职业 科学家
工作经历 大学毕业后，从事农业教学和研究工作； 1975年，成功培育出了杂交水稻。
成就 提高了水稻产量，有助于消除世界饥饿； 被誉为“杂交水稻之父”。
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【答案】
Yuan Longping is an agricultural scientist, who was born in 1930. Since he graduated, he has been working on agricultural teaching and research.
After experiencing multiple failures, he finally succeeded in breeding hybrid rice in 1975, which has greatly increased rice output and helped eliminate hunger among people around the world. He is known as the “father of hybrid rice”.
Yuan is the Chinese scientist I admire the most. I want to make contributions to humanity like him when I grow up.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生写一篇短文介绍自己最崇拜的中国科学家。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最后：finally → at last
帮助：help → assist
全世界：around the world → all over the world
想要：want → would like
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句：Yuan Longping is an agricultural scientist, who was born in 1930.
拓展句：Yuan Longping, an agricultural scientist, was born in 1930.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Yuan Longping is an agricultural scientist, who was born in 1930. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】After experiencing multiple failures, he finally succeeded in breeding hybrid rice in 1975, which has greatly increased rice output and helped eliminate hunger among people around the world. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
E
(2023下·湖南长沙·高一长沙市明德中学校考阶段练习)假如你是李华，你的朋友国际交换生John报名参加了学校科技读书节的中文演讲比赛，比赛主题是 “低碳生活，绿色家园”。他很重视这个活动，但不知如何准备，故写信向你求助。请你给他回信提一些建议，内容包括：1. 表示支持；2. 具体建议；3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 考词汇：科技读书节 Science Technology and Reading Festival
低碳生活，绿色家园 Low carbon Life, Green Home
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【答案】
Dear John,
I’m glad to hear you’ll take part in the “Low carbon Life, Green Home” Chinese speech contest of Science Technology and Reading Festival. I’d like to offer you some practical suggestions.
As for the topic, I would like to recommend you talk about the protection of the environment in our daily life, such as electricity saving, water saving, fuel-efficient and so on. Besides, the global warming gets increasingly attention. The climate is becoming worse and worse day by day. What can we do to live in low carbon To do it well, how and what are we supposed to put the low carbon lifestyle into further practice What’s more, it would be wise to practise your spoken Chinese to express yourself more clearly and fluently.
I hope you will find my suggestions useful. Wish you a great success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。假如你是李华，你的朋友国际交换生John报名参加了学校科技读书节的中文演讲比赛，比赛主题是 “低碳生活，绿色家园”。他很重视这个活动，但不知如何准备，故写信向你求助。请你给他回信提一些建议，内容包括：1. 表示支持；2. 具体建议；3. 表达祝愿。注意：
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestions → advice
此外：Besides → In addition
应该：be supposed to → should
有用的：useful → helpful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’d like to offer you some practical suggestions.
拓展句：I’d like to offer you some practical suggestions, which can help you.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I’m glad to hear you’ll take part in the “Low carbon Life, Green Home” Chinese speech contest of Science Technology and Reading Festival. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】What’s more, it would be wise to practise your spoken Chinese to express yourself more clearly and fluently. (运用了it作形式主语，真正的主语是不定式)
F
(2023下·江苏连云港·高一统考期末)假定你是李华，你校学生会将举办一年一度的科技节活动，请你用英语写一个书面通知。内容包括：
1. 活动主题；
2. 内容安排；
3. 报名方式。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
Notice
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Students’ Union
【答案】
Notice
Our annual Science Festival, themed “Space”, will fall on May 26 this year.
In the lecture hall, from 10:00 a.m. to 12:00 a.m., a local professor is to deliver a speech about whether life can exist on other planets. In the afternoon, theme activities designed by different classes will be on display. And all the labs will be available for students to try different experiments.
If you’re interested in any program, sign up at the Students’ Union before May.
Students’Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校学生会将举办一年一度的科技节活动，用英语写一个书面通知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发表：deliver→ publish
对……感兴趣：be interested in → be keen on
展出，展示：on display→ on show
不同的：different→ diverse
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Our annual Science Festival, themed “Space”, will fall on May 26 this year.
拓展句：Our annual Science Festival, which is themed “Space”, will fall on May 26 this year.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】In the afternoon, theme activities designed by different classes will be on display.(运用了过去分词作后置定语)
【高分句型2】If you’re interested in any program, sign up at the Students’ Union before May.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A
(2023上·陕西宝鸡·高一统考期中)
SHOULD WE FIGHT NEW TECHNOLOGY
This morning, I saw the shocking headline: “Passenger Dies When Car Crashes in Driverless Mode”. In the article, various people said that the public should oppose the idea of developing driverless cars. They said that some advances in technology were unnecessary and could even be dangerous. Hence, we should cease accepting technology just because it is new. The newspaper reported that the car company had already apologized for the accident, but the families of the deceased said it was not enough. Nevertheless, the company still claimed that most people would be travelling in driverless cars one day soon.
On the one hand, there are many different groups of people around the world who live happily in the absence of new technology. Probably the most well-known are the Amish, a group of Christians living in rural America. They do not own or drive cars, watch TV, or use the Internet. They have lived mainly as farmers since the 18th century and they will probably be living the same way in the distant future. They advocate a simple life with an emphasis on hard work, family, and community. They think that is better than caring about luxuries or following the lives of the rich and famous. It could even be argued that the Amish’s quality of life is better since they live in and appreciate the natural environment rather than living in large, polluted cities.
注意：
1. 续写段落不少于150个词；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
参考词汇： the Internet keep in touch social media health monitor
Paragraph 1:
On the other hand, new technology has provided people everywhere with many benefits over the years. For example,
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Paragraph 2:
Personally, I have benefited quite a lot from technological advances.
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【答案】
On the other hand, new technology has provided people everywhere with many benefits over the years. For example, the latest weather-tracking computer programs give people lots of warnings about potential natural disasters, which saves many lives. Moreover, the Internet has made it possible for friends and family to keep in touch easily even if they are on opposite sides of the world. It has also made finding opportunities in life much easier, as it allows people to make larger networks of friends through using social media.
Personally, I have benefited quite a lot from technological advances. I found my career as an AI designer through a social media network. My health monitor, which I wear all the time, has also helped me get into the best shape of my life. Of course, when new technology changes the way we live, it can be a scary prospect. Nevertheless, I will always look on the positive side of change and accept it rather than resist it.
【导语】本文以“我们应该抵制新技术吗”为线索展开，作者通过无人驾驶汽车发生车祸引起很多人对这项新技术持否定态度引出话题。一方面，有的人确实可以在没有新技术的情况下仍然生活得更好；另一方面新技术也给各地的人们带来了很多好处。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“另一方面，新技术多年来为世界各地的人们提供了许多好处。例如，”可知，第一段可描写新技术给世界各地带来好处的例子，比如最新的天气跟踪计算机程序给人们许多关于潜在自然灾害的警告。还有互联网，使人们联系子在一起。
②由第二段首句内容“就我个人而言，我从技术进步中获益匪浅。”可知，第二段可描写“我”对新技术的看法。
2.续写线索：新技术有很多好处——举例子说明——表达“我”对新技术的看法
3.词汇激活行为类
①保持联系：keep in touch/stay in touch/keep contact
②看待：look on/view
③抵制：resist/boycott
情绪类
①吓人的：scary/frightening
【点睛】
[高分句型1]For example, the latest weather-tracking computer programs give people lots of warnings about potential natural disasters, which saves many lives.(由关系词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]My health monitor, which I wear all the time, has also helped me get into the best shape of my life.(由关系词which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3]Of course, when new technology changes the way we live, it can be a scary prospect.(由when引导的时间状语从句)
B
(2023上·云南·高三云南师大附中校考阶段练习)I was always the little girl who played with magnets on the kitchen floor. I pieced together model roller coasters and exhausted a lot of science kits. Learning from my dad as he designed robots, I formed my own ideas, including an automatic breakfast machine. At 14 years old, I applied to my high school’s Academy of Science, Engineering, and High Technology. As is unfortunately typical in engineering, female students were critically underrepresented in this academy-there were a mere twenty of us out of ninety total students. This was a tough challenge for me: as an ambitious female engineer, I needed to advocate my own talents and abilities in a field where women are often marginalized(边缘化).
Within the first month of the freshman year, we began our first project: a wooden can-crusher(压罐器).I had worked on projects with boys before， but those were nothing like this. The three of us had one month to research, design, build, and test our device-a month full of arguing and frustration. My suggestions were turned down. And I was assigned the “default(默认的)female role” of timekeeper and documentation. I wasn’t expected to be capable of contributing to anything else. We finished with a functional can-crusher, but I knew this was not how I wanted to continue as a female engineer.
By the time junior year rolled around, it was time to face the year-long Engineering Design and Development (EDD) project and state competition. When I agreed to work with two other girls, I had no idea that this would entirely change my perspective of my ability as a team member, a leader and an engineer. For this competition, we created a garage parking aidto help drivers prevent side-view mirror damage. Within our team, we created a safe space where we all valued each other’s input and carried equal responsibilities. After countless experiments and sleepless nights, we were awarded third place at EDD State, which helped me find the confidence I didn’t have before.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then came the final year-long project for me, an academy senior.
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Thanks to all these experiences, I’ve grown a lot.
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【答案】
Then came the final year-long project for me, an academy senior. I created a team of people whom I respected and who respected me in return. As a group of two guys and two girls, we all brainstormed, calculated, designed and constructed together. I remember the numerous times when we washed oil and metal remains off our hands together after the laborious work. I also remember we once got stuck with several technical problems, however, we spared no effort to tackle them. After what seemed like centuries, a two-passenger, gasoline-powered go-kart was completed. The other day, when we tested it out at the top speed of 27 mph, we felt excited. At that moment, I felt proud of my team. I felt proud I bravely soldiered on my dreams.
Thanks to all these experiences, I’ve grown a lot. I think I have gained the courage to stand up for myself and the abilities as a leader and a strong team member. In the process of growth, I learn to be patient. I understand the meaning of confidence and cooperation. I want to thank my dad for cultivating my interest in engineering. I know I will encounter many thistles and thorns in the future life, but I don’t fear. I have been determined to succeed as a biomedical engineer, designing and innovating medical equipment to improve healthcare and human life.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者从小喜欢创造，想要成为一名女工程师，经过努力，作者成功地申请了高中的科学、工程和高科技学院，在大一的一个木制压罐器的项目中还是因为是女性被边缘化，为了改变这种状况，作者在大三的时候再次和两个女孩合作研发了车库停车辅助装置，并且获得EDD州立大学第三名。在大学最后一年，作者和自己的团队建造了一辆卡丁车，这些经历也让作者成长了很多。作者决心成为一名成功的生物医学工程师，设计和创新医疗设备，以改善医疗保健和人类生活。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然后是我，一个学院的大四学生最后一年的项目”可知，第一段可描写作者最后一年的项目情况。
②由第二段首句内容“由于所有这些经历，我成长了很多”可知，第二段可描写作者从这些经历中得出的感悟。
2.续写线索：大四——创建团队——完成卡丁车——测试成功——感到骄傲自豪——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
处理：tackle /deal with
为……奋斗：soldier on /struggle for
尽力：spare no effort to /try one’s best to
情绪类
激动：excited /thrilled
感谢：thank /show gratitude to
【点睛】
[高分句型1]After what seemed like centuries, a two-passenger, gasoline-powered go-kart was completed. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]The other day, when we tested it out at the top speed of 27 mph, we felt excited. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)Unit 4 Scientists who changed the world (译林版2020必修第三册)
单元写作指导&典题例析&跟踪训练(科技节制订的活动计划)
I. 单元写作指导
话题分析
本单元的主题语境是“人与社会”，话题是“著名人物科学家”。 单元写作的话题关于为科技节制订的活动和计划。文章是说明文，里面涉及到一些小发明创造,所以写作时要实事求是、言简意赅,语言较为正式。
2.话题词汇
(1)活动安排
①invite sb.to do sth. 邀请某人做某事
②be scheduled to do sth. 被安排做某事
③take place 发生;举行
④with the purpose of 目的是……
⑤take part in/participate in/join in 参加
(2)科技发明与创造
①introduce sth.to sb. 向某人介绍某物
②share sth.with sb. 与某人分享某物
③improve the quality of life 改善生活质量
④have a better understanding of 对……有更好的了解
⑤inspire sb.to do sth. 激励某人做某事
3. 句式整理
(1)开头
①The Science Festival is scheduled to take place on the playground from 8 a.m. to 11 a.m., lasting three hours.
科技节定于上午8点到11点在操场上举行，持续3个小时。
②I’m greatly honored to invite you to the Science Festival to be held in our school.
我非常荣幸地邀请您参加在我们学校举行的科技节。
(2)主体段落
①It goes without saying that modern technology brings us convenience and comfort in life.
毫无疑问，现代科技给我们的生活带来了方便和舒适。
②The purpose of the activity is to arouse the students’ interest in science.
这个活动的目的是激发学生对科学的兴趣。
③The gadget is of greatly practical use in daily life.
这种小工具在日常生活中很实用。
(3)结尾
①I would appreciate it if you could join in the coming Science Festival.
如果你能参加即将到来的科技节，我将不胜感激。
②Looking forward to your joining us.
期待您的加入。
II. 典题例析
假定你是李华,想邀请英国交换生Peter下周二参加你校举办的“科技节”，并观赏学生们的“科技小发明”。请给他写封邮件，内容包括:
1.写信意图；
2.活动时间和地点；
3.活动目的和内容；
4.表达希望。
注意:1.词数80个左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:科技小发明:technology gadgets
审核
体裁/话题 邀请参加科技节的文章(邀请信)
时态/人称 一般现在时/第一，三人称
文章结构 第一段：引入话题：写邀请信的目的 第二段：科技节的时间，地点，举办科技节的目的意义 第三段：再次邀请
核心要点 1.活动的时间，地点和意义， 2活动的内容和目的。
二. 造句
1. 科技节定于上午8点到11点在操场上举行。
→The Science Festival ____________________ on the playground from 8 a.m. to 11 a.m.
2. 科技节持续3个小时。
The Science Festival ____________________.
3. 它的目的是鼓励我们学生创造性地思考和与他人分享我们的作品。
____________________ as well as share our works with others.
4. 各种各样的小工具在我们的日常生活中用处很大。
Various gadgets are ____________________ in our daily life.
5. 一些优秀的学生发明家会介绍他们的技术小工具的功能,并当场示范。
Some excellent student inventors will ____________________.
6. 我认为这将是最令人兴奋的部分。(exciting)
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【答案】
1. is scheduled to take place
2. lasts three hours
3. Its purpose is to encourage us students to think creatively
4. of great use/useful
5. introduce the functions of their technology gadgets and perform them on the spot
6. I think it will be the most exciting part.
三. 句式升级
1.用分词作状语合并句1和句2。
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2.用定语从句合并句5和句6。
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【答案】
1. The Science Festival is scheduled to take place on the playground from 8 a.m. to 11 a.m., lasting three hours.
2. Some excellent student inventors will introduce the functions of their technology gadgets and perform them on the spot, which I think will be the most exciting part.
【参考范文】
Dear David,
I’m glad to invite you to the Science Festival to be held in our school next Monday to enjoy the students’ technology gadgets.
The Science Festival is scheduled to take place on the playground from 8 a.m. to 11 a.m., lasting three hours. Its purpose is to encourage us students to think creatively as well as share our works with others. At this festival, you can enjoy various gadgets which are of great use/greatly useful in our daily life. What’s more, some excellent student inventors will introduce the functions of their technology gadgets and perform them on the spot, which I think will be the most exciting part.
I would appreciate it if you could join in the coming Science Festival. Looking forward to your reply and expecting your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
III. 跟踪训练
应用文写作
A
(2023下·湖南岳阳·高一统考期末)假如你是李华，“学校科技节”即将到来，你校英文报正在开展主题为“Scientists who changed the world”的征文活动，请用英文写一篇文章，介绍你最崇拜的科学家。文章内容包括以下三个方面：
1.科学家的成就；
2.他(她)对世界的影响；
3.你崇拜他(她)的理由。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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B
(2023上·甘肃兰州·高一校考阶段练习)假定你是李华，擅长体育运动，最近收到朋友 Jane 的来信,她在信中说自己苦恼于身体不够强壮。
1. 鼓励Jane参加跑步俱乐部。
2. 阐明跑步对于健身的积极作用。
3.分享一些科学跑步的建议。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 信的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Jane,
I am really sorry to hear that you are worrying about your weak body.
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
C
(2023下·四川绵阳·高一统考期末)假定你是李华，与留学生朋友 Tom 约好一起去参加你校即将举行的科技节并为他做介绍，但你因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达歉意；
2. 说明原因；
3. 提出弥补措施。
注意： 1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
D
(2023下·河北石家庄·高一正定中学校考阶段练习)假定你是李华，请根据下列表格中的内容提示，为校报的“英语园地”写一篇英语短文，介绍你最崇拜的一位中国科学家。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：培育杂交水稻breed hybrid rice；产量output
姓名 袁隆平
出生年份 1930年
职业 科学家
工作经历 大学毕业后，从事农业教学和研究工作； 1975年，成功培育出了杂交水稻。
成就 提高了水稻产量，有助于消除世界饥饿； 被誉为“杂交水稻之父”。
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E
(2023下·湖南长沙·高一长沙市明德中学校考阶段练习)假如你是李华，你的朋友国际交换生John报名参加了学校科技读书节的中文演讲比赛，比赛主题是 “低碳生活，绿色家园”。他很重视这个活动，但不知如何准备，故写信向你求助。请你给他回信提一些建议，内容包括：1. 表示支持；2. 具体建议；3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 考词汇：科技读书节 Science Technology and Reading Festival
低碳生活，绿色家园 Low carbon Life, Green Home
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F
(2023下·江苏连云港·高一统考期末)假定你是李华，你校学生会将举办一年一度的科技节活动，请你用英语写一个书面通知。内容包括：
1. 活动主题；
2. 内容安排；
3. 报名方式。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
Notice
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Students’ Union
读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A
(2023上·陕西宝鸡·高一统考期中)
SHOULD WE FIGHT NEW TECHNOLOGY
This morning, I saw the shocking headline: “Passenger Dies When Car Crashes in Driverless Mode”. In the article, various people said that the public should oppose the idea of developing driverless cars. They said that some advances in technology were unnecessary and could even be dangerous. Hence, we should cease accepting technology just because it is new. The newspaper reported that the car company had already apologized for the accident, but the families of the deceased said it was not enough. Nevertheless, the company still claimed that most people would be travelling in driverless cars one day soon.
On the one hand, there are many different groups of people around the world who live happily in the absence of new technology. Probably the most well-known are the Amish, a group of Christians living in rural America. They do not own or drive cars, watch TV, or use the Internet. They have lived mainly as farmers since the 18th century and they will probably be living the same way in the distant future. They advocate a simple life with an emphasis on hard work, family, and community. They think that is better than caring about luxuries or following the lives of the rich and famous. It could even be argued that the Amish’s quality of life is better since they live in and appreciate the natural environment rather than living in large, polluted cities.
注意：
1. 续写段落不少于150个词；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
参考词汇： the Internet keep in touch social media health monitor
Paragraph 1:
On the other hand, new technology has provided people everywhere with many benefits over the years. For example,
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Paragraph 2:
Personally, I have benefited quite a lot from technological advances.
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B
(2023上·云南·高三云南师大附中校考阶段练习)I was always the little girl who played with magnets on the kitchen floor. I pieced together model roller coasters and exhausted a lot of science kits. Learning from my dad as he designed robots, I formed my own ideas, including an automatic breakfast machine. At 14 years old, I applied to my high school’s Academy of Science, Engineering, and High Technology. As is unfortunately typical in engineering, female students were critically underrepresented in this academy-there were a mere twenty of us out of ninety total students. This was a tough challenge for me: as an ambitious female engineer, I needed to advocate my own talents and abilities in a field where women are often marginalized(边缘化).
Within the first month of the freshman year, we began our first project: a wooden can-crusher(压罐器).I had worked on projects with boys before， but those were nothing like this. The three of us had one month to research, design, build, and test our device-a month full of arguing and frustration. My suggestions were turned down. And I was assigned the “default(默认的)female role” of timekeeper and documentation. I wasn’t expected to be capable of contributing to anything else. We finished with a functional can-crusher, but I knew this was not how I wanted to continue as a female engineer.
By the time junior year rolled around, it was time to face the year-long Engineering Design and Development (EDD) project and state competition. When I agreed to work with two other girls, I had no idea that this would entirely change my perspective of my ability as a team member, a leader and an engineer. For this competition, we created a garage parking aidto help drivers prevent side-view mirror damage. Within our team, we created a safe space where we all valued each other’s input and carried equal responsibilities. After countless experiments and sleepless nights, we were awarded third place at EDD State, which helped me find the confidence I didn’t have before.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then came the final year-long project for me, an academy senior.
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Thanks to all these experiences, I’ve grown a lot.
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