应用文写作
根据新高考三年的考情分析，应用文是每年高考考查频率最高的体裁之一，其中以书信、电子邮件最为常见。从内 容上看，近几年高考书信写作主要包括致歉信、致谢信、笔友信、慰问信、投诉信、邀请信、介绍信、求职信、读
者请求的解答信及其答复读者的信等。
预计 2024 年高考应用文写作考查形式仍以书信开放性为主。
(
近
3
年新高考应用文写作数据分析
)
试卷类型 年份 体裁 话题
新高考 I 卷 2023 建议信 分组练习口语
新高考 II 卷 2023 建议信 分组练习口语
新高考 I 卷 2022 邀请信 邀请外教做访谈
新高考 II 卷 2022 邀请信 邀请外教做访谈
新高考 I 卷 2021 投稿短文 读报经历
新高考 II 卷 2021 投稿短文 读报经历
01/词汇升级
多使用高级词汇，高级词汇指的是大纲中没有列入或没有识记要求，但在实际运用中却出现比较频繁的词汇，比如
frustration, awkward, awfully, concern 等。这些词汇为作文增添光彩，从而使考生稳拿高分。
02/句式升级
写作中精彩句式的合理使用会使文章读起来抑扬顿挫。固定句式(如感叹句、复合结构、强调句型等)、定语从句、
现在分词短语等都属于较复杂的语法结构。这些结构的正确使用，可以使文章的语言充满层次感，从而较好地反映
出考生的语言运用能力。
03/逻辑升级
衔接过渡词能使语言连贯性得以实现。句与句、段与段之间恰当地使用衔接过渡词不仅可以起到承上启下的作
用，也可以使文章脉络走向更为清晰明朗。所以在写作中运用过渡词，对写好文章有着重要意义。
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典例分析
)
典例一
（2023 年新高考 I 卷） 假定你是李华， 外教 Ryan 准备将学生随机分为两人一组， 让大家课后练习口语， 你认为这
样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
典例二
（2022 年新高考 I 卷）假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华， 请给外教 Caroline 写邮件邀请她做
一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
（建议用时：20 分钟/篇）
1 ．（2023·广东梅州 ·广东梅县东山中学校考模拟预测） 假如你是李华， 你校英语报“头脑风暴”版块中提到一个社会现 象：Artificial Intelligence and robots can do various things for humans, thus making a number of people lose their jobs. 请你
写一篇短文，谈谈你对该现象的看法，内容包括：
1. 介绍该社会现象；
2. 谈谈你对该现象的看法；
3. 应对措施。
注意：词数 100 左右。
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2 ．（2023·广东佛山 · 统考模拟预测） 你校英语角将举办英语演讲比赛。请你“Develop a Reading Habit”为题写一篇发言
稿参赛，内容包括：
1. 养成阅读习惯的重要性；
2. 你的建议。
注意：
1. 词数应为 80 左右；
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Develop a Reading Habit
A reading habit is important for us.
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3 ．（2023·江苏 · 统考模拟预测）假定你是高三学生李华，在上周的年级读后续写竞赛中，你的续写得分为 16 分（满
分 25 分），你觉得此分数偏低不太合理。请你给评委 Mr. Davis 用英语写一份邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 给出理由。
参考词汇：读后续写 continuation writing
Dear Mr. Davis,
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Yours sincerely, 4 ．（2023·江苏扬州 · 江苏省高邮中学校考模拟预测） 你校上周与新华中学举办了一场篮球比赛， 你校以一分的优势险
胜对方。请你用英语写一份广播稿，在校广播站英语新闻栏目向全校师生广播。内容包括：
1 ．比赛概况; 2 ．简短评论。
注意： 1 ．写作词数应为 80 左右; 2 ．请按如下格式作答。
Hello, everyone! Here comes the school English News.
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That’s the news of the hour.
5 ．（2023·江苏镇江 · 统考模拟预测） 假如你是某国际学校学生李华， 在过去的一个月里， 你多次参加所在社区的社区
服务活动，现向校英文报投稿，内容包括：
1 ．服务经历；
2 ．你的感受。
注意：
1 ．写作词数应为 80 左右；
2 ．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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6 ．（2023·江苏苏州 · 统考模拟预测） 假定你是李华， 是校学生会主席， 你校将参观苏州古城墙遗址。请你以学生会名
义写一篇倡议书号召全校同学保护古城墙遗址。内容包括：
1. 古城墙遗址的重要性；
2. 保护古城墙遗址的倡议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
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Students’ Union
7 ．（2023·浙江杭州 · 校联考模拟预测）你校英语俱乐部拟创办校英文刊物，将召开俱乐部成员会议，商讨刊物栏目 (columns)。假如你是成员李华，请你写一份会议发言稿，提议开设一个栏目。内容包括：1. 栏目名称；2.开设理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hello, my dear fellows!
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8 ．（2023·江苏扬州 · 统考模拟预测） 假定你所在的城市正在创建全国文明城市， 请写一篇演讲稿， 呼吁全体同学行动
起来，为创建文明城市作出自己的贡献。
内容包括：
1.创建文明城市的内容与意义；
2.呼吁同学们从身边小事做起(不少于两点)。
词汇：文明城市 civilized city
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Boys and girls,
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Thank you.
9 ．（2023·江苏 · 统考二模） 假如你是李华， 你刚刚参观了你市博物馆举办的一次“遇见艺术家” 的展览， 请为你校英文
报写一则评论，内容包括：
1. 展览概况；
2. 观展感受；
3. 意见建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 为使行文连贯，可以适当增加细节。
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10 ．（2023·江苏南京 · 统考二模） 假定你是校学生会主席李华， 外教 Mike 被评为本学期“最受欢迎教师”。请写一份颁
奖词，内容包括：
1.回顾 Mike 的工作； 2.简述他获奖的理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右； 2.结束语已为你写好，不计字数； 3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear all,
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Now let’s welcome our principal to present this award to Mike!
11 ．（2023·江苏 · 统考二模） 每年的 3 月 22 日是“世界水日”(World Water Day)，上周日上午你校学生会组织部分青年
志愿者走上街头开展公益宣传活动。假定你是李华，请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动内容；
3. 活动反响。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
A Youth Volunteer Activity Celebrating World Water Day
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12 ．（2023·浙江温州 · 统考三模） 你校英文报正面向高三学生征稿， 以呈现三年校园生活中促进个人成长的难忘时刻。
请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.难忘经历；
2.难忘原因。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。
A Memorable Moment
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13 ．（2023·福建厦门 · 统考模拟预测）你校英文报正在开展以“传承中华优秀文化”为主题的诗歌评论征集活动。请你
写一则诗评投稿，内容包括：
1. 诗歌简介；
2. 诗歌赏析；
3. 个人感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
14 ．（2023·福建 · 统考一模）假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了以“The Power of Voluntary Work”为主题的演讲比赛，
请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.参加人员；
2.比赛过程；
3.活动反响。
注意： 1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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15 ．（2023·山东淄博 · 统考一模） 为帮助英国留学生更好地了解春节，学校英语口语社打算录制一段英文短视频。请
你按照以下提示，撰写该视频的文字稿：
1 ．介绍除夕习俗；
2 ．提醒禁放爆竹。
注意： 1 ．写作词数应为 80 左右；
2 ．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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16 ．（2023·山东枣庄 · 统考一模）假定你是李华，你校英文报正在开展“The Sports I Like”征文比赛。请用英语写一篇
短文投稿。内容包括：
1.喜爱的体育运动；
2.喜爱的原因；
3.运动的收获。
注意：词数 80 左右；
The Sports I Like
17 ．（2023·湖南常德 · 统考模拟预测）假如你是李华，上周末你校组织了一次“感恩父母行” 的活动，请你为学校英文
报写一篇短文，内容包括：
1.活动目的;
2.你的行动;
3.你的感受。
注意： 1.写作词数应为 80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Gratitude to my parents
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18 ．（2023·广东 · 校联考三模）假定你是李华，你校英语角上个月举办了为期一个月的关于二十四节气(24 solar terms)
的系列讲座。请你为校英文报写一篇短文报道此事，内容包括：
1 ．活动的目的；
2 ．活动的内容；
3 ．活动的反响。
注意：
1 ．写作词数应为 80 左右；
2 ．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Series of Lectures on the 24 Solar Terms
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19 ．（2023·广东梅州 · 统考二模） 你校将以“关爱健康”为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.保持健康的重要性； 2.保持健康的方法(至少两条)。
注意： 1.写作词数应为 80 左右； 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Keep healthy
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20 ．（2023·广东深圳 · 统考一模） 你校和外国一所高中为姊妹学校。该校想了解你校成功开展优秀社团活动的情况。
请写一篇推荐短文，内容如下：
1. 你推荐社团活动的内容及原因；
2. 对于姊妹学校开展该社团活动的建议。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 短文题目已为你写好。
3. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Club Activity Recommendation应用文写作
根据新高考三年的考情分析，应用文是每年高考考查频率最高的体裁之一，其中以书信、电子邮件最为常见。从内 容上看，近几年高考书信写作主要包括致歉信、致谢信、笔友信、慰问信、投诉信、邀请信、介绍信、求职信、读
者请求的解答信及其答复读者的信等。
预计 2024 年高考应用文写作考查形式仍以书信开放性为主。
(
近
3
年新高考应用文写作数据分析
)
试卷类型 年份 体裁 话题
新高考 I 卷 2023 建议信 分组练习口语
新高考 II 卷 2023 建议信 分组练习口语
新高考 I 卷 2022 邀请信 邀请外教做访谈
新高考 II 卷 2022 邀请信 邀请外教做访谈
新高考 I 卷 2021 投稿短文 读报经历
新高考 II 卷 2021 投稿短文 读报经历
01/词汇升级
多使用高级词汇，高级词汇指的是大纲中没有列入或没有识记要求，但在实际运用中却出现比较频繁的词汇，比如
frustration, awkward, awfully, concern 等。这些词汇为作文增添光彩，从而使考生稳拿高分。
02/句式升级
写作中精彩句式的合理使用会使文章读起来抑扬顿挫。固定句式(如感叹句、复合结构、强调句型等)、定语从句、
现在分词短语等都属于较复杂的语法结构。这些结构的正确使用，可以使文章的语言充满层次感，从而较好地反映
出考生的语言运用能力。
03/逻辑升级
衔接过渡词能使语言连贯性得以实现。句与句、段与段之间恰当地使用衔接过渡词不仅可以起到承上启下的作
用，也可以使文章脉络走向更为清晰明朗。所以在写作中运用过渡词，对写好文章有着重要意义。
(
典例分析
)
典例一
（2023 年新高考 I 卷） 假定你是李华， 外教 Ryan 准备将学生随机分为两人一组， 让大家课后练习口语， 你认为这
样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I
think
it
’s
not
a
good
idea
to
randomly
pair
up
students
for
the
spoken
English
training
after
class.
The reasons are as
follows.
To
begin
with,
randomly
pairing
up
s
tudents
may
lead
to
unbalanced
language
abilities
within
the
groups.
This
can
hinder
the
progress
of students
as
the
more
a
dvanced
one
may
dominate
the
conversation,
leaving
little
room
for
the
other
students to
improve.
Besides,
students may
feel uncomfortable
or
less motivated
if
paired
with
someone
who
they
don’t
get
along with or have difficulty communicat
ing with.
My
suggestion
is
to
group
students
based
on
their
language
abilities
or
to
let
students
choose
their
own
partners
.
This
way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their
spoke
n
English
together.
)
(
Thank you for considering my sug
gestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，
要求考生给外教写一封邮件， 告诉他将学生随机分为两
人一组，
让大家课后练习口语，
你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
首先：
to begin with →
first
of
all
提高：
improve → progress
建议：
suggestion →
advice
选择：
choose
→
select
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
My suggestion is to group students base
d on
their
language
abilities
or to
let
students
choose
their
own
partners.
拓展句：
My
suggestion is that we
are
supposed to group
students
based
on
their
language
abilities
or
to
let
students
choose
their own partners.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1]
This can hinder the progress of
students as the more advanced
one
may
dominate
the
conve
rsation,
leaving
little
room
for
the
other students to improve.
（运用了现在分词作状语）
[
高分句型
2]
Besides,
Students
may
feel
un
comfortable
or
less
motivated
if paired
with
someone
who
they
don’t
get
along
with
or
have
difficulty communicating with.
（运用了
省略句和
who
引导定语从句）
)
典例二
（2022 年新高考 I 卷）假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华， 请给外教 Caroline 写邮件邀请她做
一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(
【答案】
Dear Caroline,
)
(
This
is my
first time that
I have
inv
ited
you
to
attend
our
program
—Talk
and
Talk.
It
is
ten
years
since
Talk
and
Talk
was
established.
This
is
an
amazing
program
where
you
can
share
your
ideas
with
students.
Now,
when
having
trouble
in
learning
English
well,
plenty
of students
urge
to
know
how
to
de
al
with
it.
As
our
distinguished
foreign
language
teacher,
your
aid
can help us
a
lot.
If
you
are
available
on this
Sunday,
I tog
ether
with
the
whole
Talk
and
Talk
staff am
waiting
for
your coming. I’d appreciate it if
you take my invitation into
consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件邀请你的外教
Caroline
来你校的广播站英语节目
“
Talk
and
Talk”
做一次访谈。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
参加：
attend→participate in
建立：
establish→set up
帮助：
aid→assistance
许多：
plenty of→a lot
of
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid
can help us
a
lot.
拓展句：
You are our distinguished foreign
language teacher,
whose
aid
can
help
us
a
lot.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1]This is an amazing program where
you
can
share
your
ideas
with
students.(
运用了
where
引导的限
制性定语从句
)
[
高分句型
2]
Now
,
when
having
trouble
in
learning
English
well
,
plenty
of
students
urge
to
know
how
to
deal
with
it
.(
运用
了
when
引导的时间状语从句的省略结构
)
)
（建议用时：20 分钟/篇）
1 ．（2023·广东梅州 ·广东梅县东山中学校考模拟预测） 假如你是李华， 你校英语报“头脑风暴”版块中提到一个社会现 象：Artificial Intelligence and robots can do various things for humans, thus making a number of people lose their jobs. 请你
写一篇短文，谈谈你对该现象的看法，内容包括：
1. 介绍该社会现象；
2. 谈谈你对该现象的看法；
3. 应对措施。
注意：词数 100 左右。
(
【答案】
Nowadays
,
Artificial
Intelligence
,
short
for
AI
,
has
been
widely
applied
to
many
aspects
in
our
life
.
Many
people
are concerned that AI will replace human labor in the future
and
ca
use
job
loss.
【介绍社会现象】
It
cannot
be
denied
that
AI
will
definitely
replace
human
labor
in
some
industries,
but
it’s
unlikely
to
be
used
in
all
works
of life.
In
some
special
fields, robots
can’t
do the highly
demanding task
because
t
hey
are
programmed,
not
creative.
What’s more, AI technology still has a long way to
go to
full
maturity,
so
it’s
unnecessary
to
worry
about
the
job
losses.
【对
社会的看法】
As
students, we
should
develop
our
creativity. A
fter
all,
it
is the
ability to
create
something
new
that
makes
us
smarter
than robots.
【应对措施】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你校英语报
“
头脑风暴
”
版块
中提到一个社会现象：
Artificial Intelligence
and
robots
can
do
various
things
for
humans
,
thus
making
a
number
of
people
lose
their
jobs
.
请考生写一篇短
文，谈谈对该现象的看法。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
代替：
replace→ take the place
of
不可能的：
unlikely
→
impossible
此外：
What’s more→ Besides
担心：
worry about→ be anxious
about
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
Nowadays, Artificial Intelligence, short for AI, has been wid
ely applied to many
aspects in
our
life.
拓展句：
Nowadays,AI, which is short for Artificial Intelligence, has been widely
applied to
many
aspects
in
our
life.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
Many people
are concerned that AI will replace
human
labor
in
the
future
and
cause
job
loss.
（运
用了
that
连接宾语从句）
【高分句型
2
】
After all, it is the
ability to create
something
new
that
makes us
smarter
than
robots.
（运用了
it
作形式主语，
不定式作真正的主语和
that
引导的定语从句）
)
2 ．（2023·广东佛山 · 统考模拟预测） 你校英语角将举办英语演讲比赛。请你“Develop a Reading Habit”为题写一篇发言
稿参赛，内容包括：
1. 养成阅读习惯的重要性；
2. 你的建议。
注意：
1. 词数应为 80 左右；
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Develop a Reading Habit
A reading habit is important for us.
(
【答案】
One possible version:
Develop a Reading H
abit
A
reading
habit
is
important
for
us.
Undoubtedly,
reading
helps
to
expand
ou
r
knowledge
and
understanding
of the
world. By reading books on different topics, we
can
gain
insights
into
different
cult
ures, histories,
and
perspectives.
This
can
help us to become more
empathetic
and
open-minded individuals.
Moreover, reading
is
a
great
way
to
relax.
When
we
read,
we can escape from the stresses of
everyday
life
and
enter in
to
a
different
world,
which
can
improve
our
mental
health.
To develop a reading habit, it
is
important to
set
aside
some
time
each
day
for
reading.
Start
with
short
books
or
articles
that
interest
you
and
gradually
increase
the
reading
time.
Joining
a
book
club
or
finding
a
reading
buddy
can
also
motivate
you to read more.
It is never too late to start reading, so let’s take
the
time
to
enjoy
the pleasure
and b
enefits
of
reading.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生以
“
Develop
a
Reading
Habit
”
为题写一篇英语演讲比
赛的发言稿，
需阐述养成阅读习惯的重要性，并分享自己
的建议。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
毫无疑问：
undoubtedly→doubtlessly, unquestionably
思想开明的：
open-minded→broad-minded, open, receptive
此外：
moreover→in addition,
additionally, besides
改善：
improve→sharpen
, enhance
重要的：
important→essential, crucial, significa
nt, vital
从
……
开始：
start with→begin with, commence with
使
……
感兴趣，吸引：
interest→attract, intrigue, fascinate
激励：
motivate→inspire, stimulate
2.
句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：
By reading books on different topics, we can gain insights
into
differ
ent
cultures,
histories,
and perspectives.
This
can
help us to become more empathetic and open-minded individua
ls.
拓展句：
By reading books on different topics, we can gain insights
into
different
cultures, hi
stories,
and perspectives, which
can help us to become more empathetic and open-minded ind
ividuals.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
When we read, we
c
an
escape
from
the
stresses
of everyday
life
and
enter
into
a
different world,
which can improve our mental hea
lth.
（运用了
When
引导时间状语从句及
which
引导非限制性定语从句）
)
(
【高分句型
2
】
Start
with
short
books
or
articles
that
interest
you
and
gradually
increase
the
reading
time
.
（运用了
that
引
导限制性定语从句）
)
3 ．（2023·江苏 · 统考模拟预测）假定你是高三学生李华，在上周的年级读后续写竞赛中，你的续写得分为 16 分（满
分 25 分），你觉得此分数偏低不太合理。请你给评委 Mr. Davis 用英语写一份邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 给出理由。
参考词汇：读后续写 continuation writing
Dear Mr. Davis,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Davis,
I am Lihua, a participant in you continuation writing competition. Having scored only 16 for my continuation writing, I felt
it unfair, so I am writing to you to state my reasons.
For my writing, I felt it totally meets the requirement put forward in the contest. To begin with, the structure of my composition is definitely clear and the plot develops reasonably, no prolixity at all. Additionally, the words and sentences used are colorful, without repeatedly using the same word again and again. I even wrote some compound sentences to update my writing, such as attributive clause, the emphatic pattern, inverted sentence and so on. Finally, a well-known saying is
used to end my article, which I think is a perfect highlight of the passage.
In a word, with the merits mentioned above, I wonder why I got such a low score. If it is convenient for you, please give me
an explanation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生代替李华给续写竞赛的评委老师写一封邮件， 陈述自己续写得分为 16
分，觉得此分数偏低不太合理的理由。
【详解】 1.词汇积累：
陈述： state→make a statement of
而且： additionally→what’s more/in addition/furthermore
完美的： perfect→excellent/outstanding
2.句式拓展：
同义句转换
原句： To begin with, the structure of my composition is definitely clear and the plot develops reasonably, no prolixity at all.
拓展句：To begin with, the structure of my composition is definitely clear, with the plot developing reasonably, no prolixity
(
at
all.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
Having scored only
16 for my con
tinuation writing, I
felt
it unfair,
so
I
am
writing
to
you
to
state
my
reasons.(
运用了现在分
词作状语
)
【高分句型
2
】
Finally
,
a
well
-
known
saying
was
used
to
end
my
article
,
which
I
think
is
a
perfect
highlight
of
the
passage
.(
运用了
which
引导非限制性定语从句
)
)
4 ．（2023·江苏扬州 · 江苏省高邮中学校考模拟预测） 你校上周与新华中学举办了一场篮球比赛， 你校以一分的优势险
胜对方。请你用英语写一份广播稿，在校广播站英语新闻栏目向全校师生广播。内容包括：
1 ．比赛概况; 2 ．简短评论。
注意： 1 ．写作词数应为 80 左右; 2 ．请按如下格式作答。
Hello, everyone! Here comes the school English News.
(
That
’
s
the
news
of
the
hour
.
【答案】
Hello,
everyone!
Here
comes
the
school
English
News.
The
City
Stadium
witnessed
a
basketball
game
b
etween
Xinhua Middle
School and our scho
ol last
Saturday, and
our team narrowly won by
one
score.
In
the
first
half,
our
team
was
at
a
disadvantage
but
all
players
cooperated
perfectly
and
tried
their
best
to
score
and
block the opponent team. At the last moment, we won with a perfect shot.
It
was
really
a
fantastic
close
game,
which
has
not
only
strengthened
the
friendship
between
the
two
schools
but
encouraged
us
not
to
give
up
in
face
of
adversity
.
That
’
s
the
news
of
the
hour
.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。你校上周与新华中学举办了一场篮球比赛，你校以一分的优势险胜对
方。请你用英语
写一份广播稿，在校广播站英语新闻栏目向全校师生广播。内容包括：
1.
比赛概况；
2.
简短评论。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
见证：
witness→see
比赛：
game→competition
尽力做：
try one’s best to do
sth→spare no
effort
to
do
sth
很棒的：
fantastic→fabulous
2.
句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：
The City
Stadium witnessed a basketba
ll game
between
Xinhua
Middle
School
and
our
school
last
Saturday,
and
our
team narrowly won by one sc
ore.
拓展句：
The City
Stadium witnessed a basketball game betw
een Xinhua
Middle
School
and
our
school
last
Saturday,
when
)
(
our team narrowly won by o
ne score.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
In the
first half,
our team was
at
a
disadvantage but
all players
cooperated perfectly
and
tried
their
best to score and block the opponent team. (
运用了
but
连接的并列句
)
【高分句型
2
】
It was really a fantastic close game, which has
not
only
strengthened
the
friends
hip
between
the
two
schools
but encouraged us not to give up in face of
adversity. (
运用了
which
引导的非限制性定语从句
)
)
5 ．（2023·江苏镇江 · 统考模拟预测） 假如你是某国际学校学生李华， 在过去的一个月里， 你多次参加所在社区的社区
服务活动，现向校英文报投稿，内容包括：
1 ．服务经历；
2 ．你的感受。
注意：
1 ．写作词数应为 80 左右；
2 ．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
(
【答案】
Last month I took part in a community service project organized, which proved to be
a
truly
re
warding
experience.
To help young
people
develop
a better
sense
of social responsibility
and
contribute
more
to
our
community,
a
series
o
f
activities
were
conducted.
For
instan
ce,
we
paid
regular
visits
to
the
nursing
home
to
keep
the
seniors
company.
We
also
handed out leaflets to passers-by to raise people’s awareness of
environmental protection.
By volunteering in those activities, I
clearly understand
that
everyone
can
do
their part
to
make
a
positive
impact
on
the
lives
of
others
.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生向校英文报投稿，介绍自己参加所在社区的社区服
务活动的经历和感
受。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
参加：
take part in→participate in
帮助：
help→assist
例如：
for instance→for examp
le
积极的：
positive→active
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
We also handed out leaflets to passers-by to raise people’s awareness of
environmental protec
tion.
拓展句：
We also handed out leaflets to passers-by,which aimed to
raise
people’s
awareness
of
environmental
p
rotection.
【
点睛】【
高分句型
1
】
Last
month
I
took
part
in
a
comm
unity
service
project
organized,
which
proved
to
be
a
truly
)
(
rewarding experience. (
运用了
which
引导的非限制性定语从句
)
【高分句型
2
】
To help young people develop a better sense
of social responsibility
and
contribute more
to
our
community,
a series of
activities were conducted. (
运用了非谓语动词不定式作目的状语
)
)
6 ．（2023·江苏苏州 · 统考模拟预测） 假定你是李华， 是校学生会主席， 你校将参观苏州古城墙遗址。请你以学生会名
义写一篇倡议书号召全校同学保护古城墙遗址。内容包括：
1. 古城墙遗址的重要性；
2. 保护古城墙遗址的倡议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
Students’ Union
【答案】One possible version:
Dear fellow students,
With our visit to “Suzhou Ancient City Walls” approaching, I call on everyone to take an active part in protecting them.
Ancient city walls are of critical importance because they are witnesses to our splendid and profound culture.
Meanwhile, ancient city walls are a crystallization of wisdom of past generations and an irreplaceable source of inspiration.
Thus, it is imperative to protect them.
We should behave properly when stepping on these time-honored walls. Littering and scribbling on walls are strictly
prohibited. Let’s work together to make sure the ancient walls remain their original look.
Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生写一篇倡议书号召同学保护古城墙遗址，需阐明古城墙遗址的重
要性，并说明保护古城墙遗址的具体倡议。
【详解】 1. 词汇积累
呼吁： call on→appeal to, urge
参与： take part in→participate in, engage in
关键的： critical→crucial, decisive
灿烂的： splendid→glorious, magnificent, spectacular
同时： meanwhile→meantime, at the same time
无法取代的： irreplaceable→unique, incomparable
因此： thus→as a result, consequently, therefore
(
必要的：
imperative→essential, vital
禁止：
prohibit→forbid, ban
2.
句式拓展
同义句
原句：
With
our
visit
to
“Suzhou
Ancient
City
Walls”
appro
aching,
I
call
on
everyone
to
take
an
active
part
in
protecting
them.
拓展句：
As
our
visit
to
“Suzhou
Ancient
City
Walls”
approaches,
I
call
on
everyone
to
take
an
active
part
in
protecting
them.
【
点
睛】【
高分句
型
1
】
Ancient
city
walls
are
of
critical
importance
because
they
are
witnesses
to
our
splendid
and
profound culture.
（运用了从属连词
because
引导原因状语从句）
【高分句型
2
】
Let
’
s
work
together
to
make
sure
the
ancient
walls
remain
their
original
look
.
（运用了不定式短语
to
make…
作目的状语、连接词
that
引导名
词性从句作
make sure
的宾语并被省略）
)
7 ．（2023·浙江杭州 · 校联考模拟预测）你校英语俱乐部拟创办校英文刊物，将召开俱乐部成员会议，商讨刊物栏目 (columns)。假如你是成员李华，请你写一份会议发言稿，提议开设一个栏目。内容包括：1. 栏目名称；2.开设理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hello, my dear fellows!
(
【答案】范文
Hello, my dear fellows. I’m really excited to be
informed that
we
are
going
to
start
an
E
nglish
journal
together,
which
is
definitely
a wonderful
idea.
It’s
such
a
golden
opportunity to
enhance
students’
English
capability
and
appreciate the
charm
of
the
English
language
.
As
for proposals, I’d like to recommend
“Students’
Vo
ice”
as
a
distinctive
column.
As
studying
is
always
students’
top
priority,
we
students
are
under
great
pressure
and
lack
opportunities
to
be
listened
to.
Why
not
help
students
voice
inner
feelings
and
have
a
good
mood
to
embrace
the
tough
yet
bright
future
This
column,
I
promise,
is
bound
to
be
a
precious
outlet and a stepping stone to
comm
unicating
fluently in
English.
That’s all for my adv
ice!
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校英语俱乐部拟创办校英文刊物，将召开俱乐部成员会议，商讨刊物栏目
(columns)
。假如你是成员李华，请你写一份会议发言稿，提议开设一个栏目。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
压力：
pressure→stress
)
(
拥抱：
embrace→hug
绝对：
definitely→absolutely
机会：
opportunity→chance
2.
句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：
Why not help students voice inner feelings a
nd have a
good
mood
to
embrace
the
tough
yet
bright
future
拓展句：
It will be helpful for students to voice
i
nner
feelings
and have
a
good mood
to
embrace
the
tough
yet bright
future.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1]
I’m
really
excited
to
be
informed
that
we
are
going
to
start
an
English journal
together,
which
is
definitely a wonderful idea. (
运用了
that
引导宾语从句和关系代词
which
引导非限制性定语从句
)
[
高分句型
2] As
studying
is
always
students’ top priority, we
students
are under
great p
ressure
and
lack
opportunities
to
be
listened to. (
运用了
as
引导原因状语从句
)
)
8 ．（2023·江苏扬州 · 统考模拟预测） 假定你所在的城市正在创建全国文明城市， 请写一篇演讲稿， 呼吁全体同学行动
起来，为创建文明城市作出自己的贡献。
内容包括：
1.创建文明城市的内容与意义；
2.呼吁同学们从身边小事做起(不少于两点)。
词汇：文明城市 civilized city
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Boys and girls,
(
Thank you.
【答案】
Boys and girls,
As
has
been
promoted
by
our
school,
we
are
to
build
a
civilized
city,
in
which
case
our
city
can
be
cleane
r
and
more
competitive
,
and
all
the
residents
will
be
better
off
.
On
campus, we
should pick up
litter while
we
walk
around,
or
help
others
when
nece
ssary.
At
home,
we
can
persuade
our
parents
to
quit
smoking
and
get
along
well
with
neighbors.
Besides,
the
core
socialist
values
ought
to
be
put
into
practice.
Thank you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生
演讲稿，呼吁全体同学行动起来，为创建文明城市作出自己的贡献。
)
(
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
建设：
build →set up
应该：
should → be
supposed
to
放弃：
quit
→give up
此外：
besides →what’s more
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
Besides, the core socialist values ought to be put into practice
拓展句：
Besides, the
core
socialist values
ought to be put
into practice,
which
I
think
is
essential
for
us
to
build
a
civilized
city.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
As has been promoted by our
school, we
are to
build
a
civilized
city,
in
which
case
our
city
can
be
cleaner and more competitive, and all the residents will be better off.
（运用
as
和
“
介词
+which”
引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型
2
】
On campus, we
should pick up litter while we walk around,
o
r help
others
when
necessary.
（运用了
while
引导的时间状语从句以及状语从句的省略）
)
9 ．（2023·江苏 · 统考二模） 假如你是李华， 你刚刚参观了你市博物馆举办的一次“遇见艺术家” 的展览， 请为你校英文
报写一则评论，内容包括：
1. 展览概况；
2. 观展感受；
3. 意见建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 为使行文连贯，可以适当增加细节。
(
【答案】
Last
Saturday,
I just
visited
an
exhibition
titled
“Meeting
Artists”
held
b
y
our
city’s
museum.
The
exhibition
attracted
many
masters
and
amateurs
at
home
and
abroad.
Many
artworks
including
Chinese
handwriting
and
landscape
paintings from ancient and modern times
were
on
show.
The host
explained
every
work
in
details
on
the
spot.
The
exhibition
left a deep impression
on me.
In
my
view,
it
not
only
promoted
the
inheritance
of Chinese tradit
ional
culture
but
strengthened our national pride as well. I hope there will be more activit
ies like this
in the
future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则关于刚刚参观的市博物馆举办的一次
“
遇见艺
术家
”
展览的评论。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
参观：
visit→pay a visit to
)
(
举办：
hold→throw
展览：
on
show→on display
详细地：
in
details→detailedly
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
Last
Saturday, I
just visited an exhibition titled “Meeting Art
ists” held by our
city’s
museum.
拓展句：
Last
Saturday, I
just visited an exhibition which was titled
“Meeti
ng Artists”
held by
our
city’s
museum.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
In my view, it not only promoted the inheritance of
Chinese
traditional
culture but
stre
ngthened
our
national pride as well.
（由
n
ot only…but
引导的并列句结构）
【高分句型
2
】
I hope there will be more activities like this in t
he
future.
（由省略连词
that
引导的宾语从句）
)
10 ．（2023·江苏南京 · 统考二模） 假定你是校学生会主席李华， 外教 Mike 被评为本学期“最受欢迎教师”。请写一份颁
奖词，内容包括：
1.回顾 Mike 的工作； 2.简述他获奖的理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右； 2.结束语已为你写好，不计字数； 3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear all,
(
Now let’s welcome our principal to present this award to Mike!
【答案】
Dear all,
I’m honored to announce that this semester’s “Most popular teacher” goes to
Mike!
He
gives
our
grade
oral
English,
encouraging
us
to
speak
more.
Besides,
he
is
responsible
for
our
Drama
Club,
where
we rehearse together and present marvelous plays under his professional guidan
ce.
Mike is worthy of
this award. His exceptional teaching ability has gre
atly boosted our confidence in expressing
ourselves.
What’s
more,
his
passion
for
teaching
and
friendliness
to
students
make
learning
with
him
a
really
enjoyable
experience.
Now let’s welcome our principal to present this award to Mike!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。外教
Mike
被评为本学期
“
最受欢迎教师
”
，要求考生写一份颁奖词。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
此外：
besides → what’s more
精彩的：
marvelous →wonderful
增强：
boost →
improve
愉快的：
enjoyable
→pleasant
)
(
2.
句式拓展
合并简单句
原句
：
Mike
is
worthy
of this
award.
His
exceptional
teaching
ability
has
greatly
boos
ted
our
confidence
in
expressing
ourselves.
拓
展
句
：
Mike
is
worthy
of
this
award
be
cause
his
exceptional
teaching
ability
has
greatly
boosted
our
confidence
in
expressing ourselves.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
I’m honor
ed to announce that this
semester’s “Most
popular
teacher”
goes
to
Mike!
（运用了
that
引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型
2
】
Besides
,
he
is
responsible
for
our
Drama
Club
,
where
we
rehearse
together
and
present
marvelous
plays
under his professional guidance.
（运用了
where
引导的非限定性定语从句）
)
11 ．（2023·江苏 · 统考二模） 每年的 3 月 22 日是“世界水日”(World Water Day)，上周日上午你校学生会组织部分青年
志愿者走上街头开展公益宣传活动。假定你是李华，请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动内容；
3. 活动反响。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
A Youth Volunteer Activity Celebrating World Water Day
(
【答案】
A Youth Volunteer Activity Celebrating World Water Day
World Water Day
falls
on March 22
every year.
Last
Sund
ay,
some
young
student
volunteers,
organized
by
the
student
union, took to the streets to celebrate and advertise World Water Da
y.
Firstly,
they
handed
o
ut
leaflets
to
the
citizens
to
lecture
about
World
Water
Day.
Later,
public
speeches
about
the
importance of
protecting water resources were given by some volunteers. Not
only
did these
activities
aroused people’s
great interest
in
World
Water
Day,
but
also
raised
their
awa
reness
of water
resources
protection.
This
activity
turned
out
to
be
a
huge
success.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道。要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道，报道上周日上午校学生会
组织青年志愿者
走上街头开展的
“
世界水日
”
公益宣传活动。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
分发：
hand out →
distri
bute
传单：
leaflet
→
flyer
)
(
重要性：
importance
→
significance
保护：
protect → preserve
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
Firstly, they handed out leaflet
s to the citizens to lecture
about World
Water
Day.
拓展句：
Firstly
,
they
handed
out
leaflets
,
which
were
designed
by
the
students
themselves
,
to
the
citizens
to
lecture
about
World Water Day.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1]
Last
Sunday
,
some
young
student
volunteers
,
organized
by
the
student
union
,
took
to
the
streets
to
celebrate and advertise World Water Day. (
运用了过去分
词短语作后置定语
)
[
高
分
句
型
2]
Not
only
did
these
activities
aroused
people’s
gr
eat
interest
in
World
Water
Day,
but
also
raised
their
awareness of
water resources protection. (
运用了倒装句型
)
)
12 ．（2023·浙江温州 · 统考三模） 你校英文报正面向高三学生征稿， 以呈现三年校园生活中促进个人成长的难忘时刻。
请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.难忘经历；
2.难忘原因。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。
A Memorable Moment
(
【答案】
A Memorable Moment
There
are
so many memorable moments
in my
three
years
of campus
life, which
promote
my
personal
g
rowth.
I’d
like
to share
one with you.
I
still remember the moment when I
stepped i
nto
the
new
school
as
a
freshman.
Faced
with
everything
unfamiliar,
I
felt
anxious
and
lonely.
I
couldn’t
adapt
to
the
new
school.
Seeing
my
anxiety,
my
English
teacher
encourag
ed
me
to
face
everything courageously. And my classmates volunteered to talk with me.
Their
kindness
made
me
rel
axed
and
warm
so
that
I quickly fit in the new environment. Also, it promotes my
growth. Never
will I
forget
the moment.
【导语】本文是开放作文。你校英文报正面向高三学生征稿，以呈现三年校
园生活中促进个人成长的难忘时刻。请
你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：难忘经历；难忘原因。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
面对：
(be) faced with→face
)
(
迈进：
step into→set
foot
in
和某人谈话：
talk with
sb. →have a talk with
sb.
勇敢地：
courageously→bravely
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
Faced with everything unfamiliar, I felt anxious and
lonely.
拓展句：
When I was faced with everything unfamiliar,
I
felt
anxious
and
lonely.
【
点
睛
】
[
高分句
型
1]
There
are
so
many
memorable
moments
in
my
three
years
of
campus
life,
which
promote
my
personal growth. (
运用了
which
引导的非限制性定语从句
)
[
高分句型
2] I
still remember the moment when I
stepped
into
the
new
school
as
a
freshman.
(
运用了
when
引导的限制性
定语从句
)
[
高分句型
3] Their kindness made me relaxed and warm so that I
quickly
fit
in the new
environment.(
运用了
so
that
引导的
结果状语从句
)
)
13 ．（2023·福建厦门 · 统考模拟预测）你校英文报正在开展以“传承中华优秀文化”为主题的诗歌评论征集活动。请你
写一则诗评投稿，内容包括：
1. 诗歌简介；
2. 诗歌赏析；
3. 个人感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
(
【答案】
One possible version:
“
Thoughts
on
a
Tranquil
Night
”
is
a
masterpiece
written
by
Li
Bai
,
one
of
the
most
celebrated
poets
in
Chinese
history
.
The poem vividly describes the poet’s melancholy mood as he gazes at the bright moo
n on
a
tranquil
night.
At the beginning, the imagery creates a
serene
and
peaceful
atmosphere,
making
the
reader
feel
as
if
they
are
there
with
the
poet,
experiencing
the
beauty
of the
night.
As
the
poem
progresses,
the
poet
reveals
his
inner
t
urmoil,
expressing
his
longing
for
his
homeland
and
his
sadness
at
being
far
away.
This
poem
shows
the
poet’s
deep
sense
of
nostalgia
and
homesickness, which is a common theme in Chinese poet
ry.
In my opinion, this poem is so beautiful and poignant
that it
is
a timeless
classic.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。题目要求考生选择一首中国古诗写一则诗评，需包括诗歌
简介、诗歌赏析
和个人的感受。
)
(
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
著名的：
celebrated→eminent, prestigiou
s, distinguished
描述：
describe→narrate, recount, r
elate
首先：
at the beginning→to begin with, at first
似乎：
as
if→as though
经历：
experience→undergo, encounter, meet
展示：
reveal→show, disclose, uncover, display
在我看来：
in my opinion→from my per
spective,
as
far as
I
am
concerned
令人沉痛的：
poignant→touching, moving, miserable
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
“Thoughts on a Tranquil Night” is a masterpiece written by Li
Bai,
one
of
the most
celebr
ated
poets
in
Chinese
history.
拓展句
：
“Thoughts
on
a
Tranquil
Night”
is
a
ma
sterpiece
written
by
Li
Bai,
who
is
one
of the
most
celebrated
poets
in
Chinese history.
【
点睛】【
高分句型
1
】
The
poem
vividly
des
cribes
the
poet’s
melancholy
mood
as
he
gazes
at
the
bright
moon
on
a
tranquil night.
（运用了
as
引导时间状语从句）
【高分句型
2
】
At the beginning, the imagery creates a serene and
peaceful
atmosphere, making the
reader
feel
as
if
they
are
there with the poet, experiencing the beauty of
t
he night.
（运用了现在分词短语作状语和
as if
引导方式状语从句）
【高分句型
3
】
This poem show
s the poet’s deep sense of
nostalgia and homesickness,
which
is
a
common
theme
in
Chinese
poetry.
（运用了
which
引导非限制性定语从句）
)
14 ．（2023·福建 · 统考一模）假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了以“The Power of Voluntary Work”为主题的演讲比赛，
请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.参加人员；
2.比赛过程；
3.活动反响。
注意： 1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
(
【答案】
One possible version
：
Last
week,
an
English
speech
contest
on
“The
Power
of
Voluntary
Work”
was
held
in
our
school.
Students
from
different
grades
participated
in
the
competition.
By
sharing
som
e
of their
most
unforgettable
volunteering
experiences,
20
)
(
contestants
deeply
impressed
the
audience
with
their
vivi
d
stories,
feelings
and
insights.
The
judges,
consisting
of
our
headmaster and teachers, also commented on each student’s performance
and
finally
selected
the best
three.
The
activity,
as
one
of the
students
says, will be very helpful
for the
better
understanding
of
volunteering
work
among
middle school students, and more activities of
this kind
are
expected.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生为
校英文报写一篇报道，就学校上周日举办的以
“
The
Power
of
Voluntary Work”
为主题的演讲比赛进行报道，内容包括：参赛人员、比赛过程和活动反响。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
比赛：
contest→competition
参赛者：
contestant→competitor
参加：
participate in→take part in
选择：
select→choose
种类：
kind→sort
2.
句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：
The judges,
consisting
of our
headmaster
and
teachers,
also
commented
on
each
student’s
performance
and
f
inally
selected the best three.
拓展句：
The judges,
who
consisted
of our
headmaster
and
teachers,
also
commented
on
each
student’s
perf
ormance
and
finally selected the b
est three.
【
点
睛】【
高分句
型
1
】
By
sharing
some
of their
most
unforgettable
volunteering experiences,
20
contestants
deeply
impressed the audience with their vivid stor
ies, feelings and
insights.
（运用了介词后接动名词短语的形式作方式状语）
【高分句型
2
】
The
activity
,
as
one
of
the
students
says
,
will
be
very
helpful
for
the
better
understanding
of
volunteering work
among
middle
school
students
,
and
more
activities
of
this
kind
are
expected
.
（运用了以
as
引导的状语从句作插入
语的结构和以
and
引导的并列句）
)
15 ．（2023·山东淄博 · 统考一模） 为帮助英国留学生更好地了解春节，学校英语口语社打算录制一段英文短视频。请
你按照以下提示，撰写该视频的文字稿：
1 ．介绍除夕习俗；
2 ．提醒禁放爆竹。
注意： 1 ．写作词数应为 80 左右；
2 ．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
(
【答案】
Hello
,
everyone
!
As
a
member
of
the
Spoken
English
Club
, I’
m
here
to
help
you
have
a
better
understanding
of
the
)
(
Chinese
Spring Festival.
Varieties
of food
will
be
prepared
for
the
reun
ion
dinner
on
the
eve
of the
Spring
Festival.
It’s
a
good
opportunity
to
have
the
whole
family
gathered
to
gether.
All
family
members
would
sit
around
the
table,
tasting
delicious
dumplings,
watching performances and chatting happi
ly.
Setting
off firecrackers
is
now
banned
i
n
our
city
for
the
sake
of environmental
protection.
You
may
feel
the
Chinese
Spring
Festival
is
becoming
a
global
celebration
of
joy
and
love
.
【导语】这是一篇说明文。为帮助英国留学生更好地了解春节，学校英语口语社打算录制一段英文
短视频。请考生
按照以下提示，撰写该视频的文字稿：
1
．介绍除夕习俗；
2
．提醒禁放爆竹。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
各种各样的：
varieties of→a variety of
机会：
opportunity→chance
聚集：
gather→get together
愉快地：
happliy→delightedly
2.
句型拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
Setting off
firecrackers is now banned in our city
for the
sa
ke
of
environmental
protection.
拓展句：
Setting off
firecrackers is now banned in
our
city, the purpose
of
which
is
t
o
protect
the
environment.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1]
All
family
members
would
sit
around
the
table
,
tasting
delicious
dumplings
,
watching
performances
and chatting happily.
（运用了现在分词作状语）
[
高分句型
2]Setting off
firecrackers is now banned in our city for the
sake
of
environmental protection.
（运用了动名词作
主语）
)
16 ．（2023·山东枣庄 · 统考一模）假定你是李华，你校英文报正在开展“The Sports I Like”征文比赛。请用英语写一篇
短文投稿。内容包括：
1.喜爱的体育运动；
2.喜爱的原因；
3.运动的收获。
注意：词数 80 左右；
The Sports I Like
(
【答案】
The
Sport I Like
When
it
comes
to
sports,
I
like basketball best.
It
is
a ball
game between
two
t
eams,
each
consisting
of five
players.
It
)
(
requires speed, strength,
talent as
well
as
skills.
Basketball has been
an important part in
my
life
ever
sin
ce
I
was
introduced
to
it
at
the
age
of 9. For
one
thing,
it
helps
build
up
my
body,
enabling
me
t
o
be
energetic
and
dynamic
all
the
time.
For
another,
it
has
taught
me
to
value
teamwork
over individual per
formance.
Basketball fills my days with wonders and challenges. I will keep playing basketball in
the
rest
of
my
lif
e.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇说明文，要求考生介绍一项自己喜欢的运动并陈述理由。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
由
……
组成：
consist of→be
made up
of
重要的：
important→significant
珍惜：
value→cherish
个人的：
individual→personal
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
For one thing, it helps build up
my body, enabling me to be energetic
all
the
time.
拓展句：
For one thing, it helps bui
ld up my body, which enables
me
to
be
energetic
all
the
time.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1]Basketball
has
been
an
important
part
in
my
life
ever
since
I
was
introduced
t
o
it
at
the
age
of 9.
（
ever since
引导时间状语从句）
[
高分句型
2]For one thing, it helps build up
my body, enabling me to be energetic
all
the
time.
（现在分词作状语）
)
17 ．（2023·湖南常德 · 统考模拟预测）假如你是李华，上周末你校组织了一次“感恩父母行” 的活动，请你为学校英文
报写一篇短文，内容包括：
1.活动目的;
2.你的行动;
3.你的感受。
注意： 1.写作词数应为 80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Gratitude to my parents
(
【答案】参考范文
Gratitude to my parents
In order to arouse our awareness of
being grateful to
our parents,
our
schoo
l held
an
activity
last weekend.
To
show my thanks, I decided to
do
som
ething
for my parents.
Getting
up
earlier
than
usual
last
Saturday,
I
spent
much
time preparing their breakfast and then I began to help do cleaning in
our house,
which
m
ade
me
tired
and
exhausted.
When
I
)
(
saw my parents’ satisfied smiles, I felt that my labor w
as
worthwhile.
Through this activity, I’ve learnt that it is not
easy
for m
y parents
to
work
and
take
care
of
us
at
the
same
time.
It
is
their
selfless and unconditional love that
l should
appreciate.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校英文报写一篇短文，介绍上周末学校组织了一次
“
感
恩父母行
”
的活动，内容包括活动的目的、行动和对活动的感受。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
感激的：
grateful
→thankful
开始：
begin →set
out
筋疲力尽的：
exhausted →worn out
值得的：
worthwhile →rewarding
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
In order to arouse our awareness of
being grateful
to
our
parents,
our
school
held
an
activity
last
weekend.
拓展句：
Our school held an activity last we
ekend, which is
aimed
at
arousing
our awareness
of
being
grateful
to
our parents.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
Getting up
earlier than usual
las
t
Saturday,
I
spent much time
preparing
their
breakfast
and
then
I
began
to
help
do
cleaning
in
our
house
,
which
made
me
tired
and
exhausted
.
（运用了现在分词作状语以及
which
引
导的
非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型
2
】
It is their
selfless and unconditional love that l
should
appreciate.
（运用了强调句型强调句子宾语）
)
18 ．（2023·广东 · 校联考三模）假定你是李华，你校英语角上个月举办了为期一个月的关于二十四节气(24 solar terms)
的系列讲座。请你为校英文报写一篇短文报道此事，内容包括：
1 ．活动的目的；
2 ．活动的内容；
3 ．活动的反响。
注意：
1 ．写作词数应为 80 左右；
2 ．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Series of Lectures on the 24 Solar Terms
(
【答案】
A
Series of
Lectures on the
24
Solar Terms
To make lovers of
Chinese traditional culture have
a
deep understanding
of
the
24
solar terms,
the
Englis
h
corner
in
our
school hosted a series of
lectures
last mon
th.
)
(
English
teachers
in
our
school
gave
eight
splendid
lectures
from
4:00
pm
to
5:00
pm
every
Th
ursday
and
Friday.
The
lectures
covered
a
fund
of knowledge,
including
their
historical
origins,
climate
changes
and
farming
activities
during
each
solar term and customs in differen
t provinces.
Students
thought
highly
of the
lectures,
from
which
they
learned
a
lot.
They
realized
Chinese
traditional
culture
was
attractive. They wish there will be more lectures
about it.
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生写一篇关于学校举办的为期一个月的关于二十四节气的系列讲座的报道。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
深刻理解：
have a deep understanding of→understand..
.deeply
举办：
host→conduct
不同的：
different→diverse
意识到：
realize (that)→be
aware that
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
To make
lovers
of Chinese traditional
culture have
a
deep understanding
of
the 24
solar
terms,
the
English
corner
in
our school hosted a series
of
lectures
last
month.
拓展句：
The
English
corner
in
our
school
hosted
a
series
of lectures
last
month,
whose
aim
is
t
o
make
lovers
of Chinese
traditional
culture
have
a
deep
understanding
of
the
24
solar
terms
.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
Students thought highly of
the lecture
s, from which they learned
a
lot.
(
由介词
+which
引导的非限
制性定语从句
)
【高分句型
2
】
They realized Chinese traditiona
l culture was attractive. (
由省略连词
that
引导的宾语从句
)
)
19 ．（2023·广东梅州 · 统考二模） 你校将以“关爱健康”为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.保持健康的重要性； 2.保持健康的方法(至少两条)。
注意： 1.写作词数应为 80 左右； 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Keep healthy
(
【答案】
One possible version:
Keep healthy
It is very important for us to keep healthy, because a healthy bod
y will ensure
a happy
life
and
smooth
work.
There
are
many
ways
to
keep
healthy.
We’d
better
eat
more
fruits
and
vegetables
and
less
meat.
Take
exercise
for
at
least
one
hour
every
day.
We
need
enough
sleep
and
rest,
so
it
is
impo
rtant
to
go
to
bed
early
and
get
up
early.
We
should
wash our hands as often as possible to keep away
from b
acteria
or viruses.
In addition, we mustn’t drink wine or smoke. The
y
are bad
for our
health.
)
(
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于你校将以
“
关爱健康
”
为主题，举办英语征文比赛，写一篇短
文投稿。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
重要的：
important→
vital
确保：
ensure →
make
sure
足够的：
enough→
sufficient
此外：
In addition→ What’s m
ore
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
In addition, we mustn’t drink wine or smoke.
They
are bad
for
our health.
拓展句：
In addition, we mustn’t drink wine or
smoke because
they
are bad
for
our
health.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
It
is
very
important
for
us
to
keep
healthy
,
because
a
healthy
body
will
ensure
a
happy
life
and
smooth work.
（运用了
because
引导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型
2
】
We need enough sleep and rest,
so it
is
important
to
go
to
bed
early
and
get
up
early.
（运用了
it
is+
形容词
+to do
sth
的固定句型）
)
20 ．（2023·广东深圳 · 统考一模） 你校和外国一所高中为姊妹学校。该校想了解你校成功开展优秀社团活动的情况。
请写一篇推荐短文，内容如下：
1. 你推荐社团活动的内容及原因；
2. 对于姊妹学校开展该社团活动的建议。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 短文题目已为你写好。
3. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Club Activity Recommendation
(
【答案】
Club Activity Recommendation
It’s a pleasure to share my recommendation—the reading club activities which I have been part
icipating
in
for
two
years.
As
a
proud
and
active
member,
not
only
can
I
appreciate
literary
works
during
the
weekly
gathering,
but
I
ca
n
also
share
insightful ideas and make like-minded friends. Besides, I also benefit tremend
ously:
from
the
rewarding
life
lessons
I
learn
to
the upgraded reading
skills now I have.
Whenever
I
am
going
through
a
tough
time,
it
is
the
mental
support
gained
from
the
club activities that leads me out of
the dark. That’s why
it
comes
first
on my
list
of
recom
mendation.
When
it
comes
to
the
suggestion
of the
club
activities
in
your
school,
I
strongly
recommend
giving
students
more
free
)
(
choices in selecting and exchanging their own favorite boo
ks.
By
doing
so,
young
readers
can
greatly
extend
their
knowledge
of
life and benefit from each
other.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。在本校成功开展优秀社团活动后，要求考生给一所外国的姊
妹学校推荐社团，
列出该推荐社团活动的内容及原因，对姊妹学校开展该社团活动提出建议
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
欣赏：
appreciate→enjoy
此外：
besides →what’s more
选择：
choice→option
经受：
go through→undergo
2.
句式拓展
简单句变倒装句
原句：
By doing so, young readers can greatly extend
their
knowledge
of
life
and benefit
from
each
other.
拓展句：
Only by doing so can young readers
greatly
extend
their
knowledge
of
life
and benefit
from
each
other.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
As a proud and a
ctive member, not only can I appreciate
literary
works
during
the
weekly
gathering,
but I can also share insightful ideas
and
make
like-
minded
friends.
（运用了倒装句）
【高分句型
2
】
Whenever I am going through a tough time, it
is
the
mental
support
gained
from
the
club
activities
that
leads
me out of
the dark.
（运用了
whenever
引导
的让步状语从句，强调句，过去分词作后置定语）
)
