人物介绍之应用文写作
纵览高考命题思路， 2023 年全国甲卷应用文写作中考到人物介绍的话题， 虽然新高考卷没有出现， 但是人 物介绍依然是写作的热点话题，人物介绍主要要写该人物是谁，主要贡献是什么，该人物的影响等，所以
平常考生要多积累人物介绍的素材，才能在考试中游刃有余。
（一）人物简介的写作步骤；(概,貌,育,平,估)
1）概.age, sex, birth-place, background
2）貌,.)appearance ,character
3）育,education
4）平, big events in his or her life ( in order of time )
5）估.evaluation
(二) 语法，句法高分技巧
A. 概况 （尽量用同位语结构，分词)
B ．外貌,性格 (巧用 with 做定语)
C. 教育经历 (注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼)
D ．生平 (尽量用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章)
E ．评估 （注意运用一些动词,形容词等短语，词组）
典例分析
（2023·浙江丽水 · 统考期末） 假定你是李华， 将参加学校举行的以“The Person I am Especially Moved by”为主
题的英文演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1. 人物介绍；
2. 感动原因；
3. 对你的影响。
注意： 1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
(
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear fellow
students,
It’s my privilege to deliver a
speech here. Of
all
the
most
respectable
people,
I
am
especially
mo
ved
by
Zhong
Nanshan
.
This
85-year-old man with gray hair
works
really
hard, for the
people, f
or the
motherland, for his
responsibility
.
He
is
one
of
Chinese
heroes
volunteering
many
times
to
fight
against
pandemics
.
The
picture
of
him
resting
on
the
high-speed
rail
seat
made
us
touched
and
tearful.
Such
great
contribution
did
he
make
that
he
was
awarded the Medal of
the Republic. His deeds and spirit
do make
a
great
difference
to
me.
Thank you.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为即将参加学校举行的英文演讲比赛写一篇英文演讲稿，主
题为
“The Person I am Esp
ecially Moved by”
，内容包括：人物介绍；感动原因；对你的影响。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
荣耀：
privilege→honor
发表演讲：
deliver a speech
→make a
speech
祖国：
motherland→homeland
责任：
responsibility→duty
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原
句
：
This 85-year-old man w
ith gray hair works really hard, for the people, for the motherland, for his
responsibility.
拓展句：
This
85-year-old
man
whose
hair
is
gray
works
really
h
ard,
for
the
people,
for
the
motherland,
for
his
responsibility.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] He is one of
Chinese heroes volunteering many times to fight
against pandemics.
(
运用了非
谓语动词做后置定语
)
[
高分句型
2]
Such great contribution did he make that he was awarded the Medal
of
the Republic.
(
运用了倒装句，
即在
“such…that+
句子
”
句型中，
such
位于句首，该部分用部分倒装
)
)
（建议用时：25 分钟/篇）
1 ．（2023 上 · 山东 · 高三校联考开学考试）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 对中国文学作品感兴趣，来
信请你介绍一位中国古代文学作家及其作品，请你给他写一封 e-mail，内容如下：
1.介绍一位中国古代文学作家及其作品；
2.说明你喜欢的理由。
注意： 1、词数 80 左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2 ．（2023·浙江金华 · 统考模拟预测）下周，你将参与你校与英国友好学校举办的“我最喜爱的艺术家”线上
交流活动。请你准备一篇英语发言稿。内容包括：
1.介绍你最喜爱的艺术家及其代表作；
2.说明理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
3 ．（2023 上 ·湖北襄阳 · 高三校联考期中） 假如你是红星中学校报记者李华，请你为中学生英语报社写一篇
新闻报道，内容包括：
人物 王宗源，男， 2001 年 10 月 24 日出生于湖北襄阳
事件 杭州亚运会获得两枚跳水金牌。六岁前学习体操， 游泳， 后转跳水， 2017 年进国家跳水队。曾获
2021 年东京奥运会男子跳水冠军。
个人感 想 ……
注意： 1 ．写作字数 80 左右；
2 ．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
4 ．（2023 上 · 山东潍坊 · 高三统考阶段练习）假定你是李华，你班本周 Class Report 的主题是 A Man of
Perseverance。请你写一篇发言稿。内容包括：
1. 人物事迹简介；
2. 给你的启示。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone. Today, I’d like to share a story about a man of perseverance.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your listening.
5 ．（2023 下 ·湖北襄阳 · 高三襄阳市襄州区第一高级中学校考开学考试） 进入新时代，我们的身边涌现出了 许多青年榜样：如零零后消防员， 零零后志愿者等。为了向青年榜样们学习， 你校组织了主题为“We Should
Shoulder the Responsibility”的英语征文活动，请你投稿。
内容包括：
1. 青年榜样的突出品质；
2. 他们对你的影响；
3. 呼吁年轻人向他们学习。
注意： 1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We Should Shoulder the Responsibility
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
6 ．（2023·河北 · 校联考三模）假定你是李华，受校英文报约稿，请你写一篇介绍某位名人的英语短文，刊
登在校英文报 People 专栏，内容包括：
1. 该人物的生平；
2. 他的主要事迹；
3. 你的评价。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
7 ．（2023·湖南邵阳 · 统考二模）在 2022 年 8 月发生的重庆山火和 2023 年 1 月发生的泸定地震中涌现出了 很 多青年逆行者榜样人物 ：00 后消 防 员 ，00 后 志愿者等 。你校正在组织 “We Should Shoulder the
Responsibility”英语征文活动，请你投稿。
内容包括： 1 ．青年榜样的突出品质；
2 ．他们对你的影响；
3 ．呼吁年轻人向他们学习。
注意： 1 ．词数 80 左右；
2 ．参考词汇： 00 后： post-2000s generation／post-00s；
3 ．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We Should Shoulder the Responsibility
8 ．（2023 上 · 安徽 · 高三校联考期末） 假定你是李华，你们班本周将举行一次英文主题班会，介绍为人类做
出突出贡献的人物。请你写一篇短文，内容包括：
1.人物简介；
2.做出的贡献；
3.你的感想。
注意：
1.词数 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
9 ．（2022·辽宁 · 校联考模拟预测） 我们身边有许许多多值得我们学习的榜样。请你以“The Power of an Example”
为题写一篇短文,投稿于你校英文报。内容包括：
1.你的学习榜样；
2.该榜样对你的影响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Power of an Example
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________人物介绍之应用文写作
纵览高考命题思路， 2023 年全国甲卷应用文写作中考到人物介绍的话题， 虽然新高考卷没有出现， 但是人 物介绍依然是写作的热点话题，人物介绍主要要写该人物是谁，主要贡献是什么，该人物的影响等，所以
平常考生要多积累人物介绍的素材，才能在考试中游刃有余。
（一）人物简介的写作步骤；(概,貌,育,平,估)
1）概.age, sex, birth-place, background
2）貌,.)appearance ,character
3）育,education
4）平, big events in his or her life ( in order of time )
5）估.evaluation
(二) 语法，句法高分技巧
A. 概况 （尽量用同位语结构，分词)
B ．外貌,性格 (巧用 with 做定语)
C. 教育经历 (注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼)
D ．生平 (尽量用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章)
E ．评估 （注意运用一些动词,形容词等短语，词组）
(
典例分析
)
（2023·浙江丽水 · 统考期末） 假定你是李华， 将参加学校举行的以“The Person I am Especially Moved by”为主
题的英文演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1. 人物介绍；
2. 感动原因；
3. 对你的影响。
注意： 1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
(
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear fellow
students,
It’s my privilege to deliver a
speech here. Of
all
the
most
respectable
people,
I
am
especially
mo
ved
by
Zhong
Nanshan
.
This
85-year-old man with gray hair
works
really
hard, for the
people, f
or the
motherland, for his
responsibility
.
He
is
one
of
Chinese
heroes
volunteering
many
times
to
fight
against
pandemics
.
The
picture
of
him
resting
on
the
high-speed
rail
seat
made
us
touched
and
tearful.
Such
great
contribution
did
he
make
that
he
was
awarded the Medal of
the Republic. His deeds and spirit
do make
a
great
difference
to
me.
Thank you.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为即将参加学校举行的英文演讲比赛写一篇英文演讲稿，主
题为
“The Person I am Esp
ecially Moved by”
，内容包括：人物介绍；感动原因；对你的影响。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
荣耀：
privilege→honor
发表演讲：
deliver a speech
→make a
speech
祖国：
motherland→homeland
责任：
responsibility→duty
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原
句
：
This 85-year-old man w
ith gray hair works really hard, for the people, for the motherland, for his
responsibility.
拓展句：
This
85-year-old
man
whose
hair
is
gray
works
really
h
ard,
for
the
people,
for
the
motherland,
for
his
responsibility.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] He is one of
Chinese heroes volunteering many times to fight
against pandemics.
(
运用了非
谓语动词做后置定语
)
[
高分句型
2]
Such great contribution did he make that he was awarded the Medal
of
the Republic.
(
运用了倒装句，
即在
“such…that+
句子
”
句型中，
such
位于句首，该部分用部分倒装
)
)
（建议用时：10 分钟/篇）
1 ．（2023 上 · 山东 · 高三校联考开学考试）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter 对中国文学作品感兴趣，来
信请你介绍一位中国古代文学作家及其作品，请你给他写一封 e-mail，内容如下：
1.介绍一位中国古代文学作家及其作品；
2.说明你喜欢的理由。
注意： 1、词数 80 左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear peter,
(
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to know that you are interested in Chines
e
classic works. Now I
am
writing
to
introduce
Sushi
and
his
works to you.
Sushi
lived
in
Song
Dynasty
in
ancient
China.
During
his
life,
he
created
many
works,
inclu
ding
poems
and
many
essays. I have read a lot
of
his
works,
and
one
poem
called
Ode
to
Chibi
is
my
favorite,
which
described
one
big war breaking out on the Yangtze River.
I admire
Sushi for his great co
ntributions
to
the
literature
and
his
high
spirit
when
facing
challenges.
I
am
sure
you will also like his wor
ks.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友
Peter
写封
e-
mail
，介绍一位中国古代文学作家及
其作品。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
高兴的：
glad→delighted
给
……
取名：
call→name
肯定的：
sure→certain
对
……
感兴趣：
be interested in→show interest
in
)
(
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
During his life, h
e created many works, including poems and many
essays.
拓展句：
During his life, he
created many works, which included poems
and
many
essays.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] I’m glad to know that you are interested in
Chinese
c
lassic works.
(
运用了
that
引导的宾语
从句
)
[
高分句型
2] I have read a lot of
his
works,
and
one
poem
called
Ode
to
Chibi
is
my
favorite,
which
described
one
big war breaking out on the Yangtze Ri
ver. (
运用了
which
引导的非限制性定语从句
)
)
2 ．（2023·浙江金华 · 统考模拟预测）下周，你将参与你校与英国友好学校举办的“我最喜爱的艺术家”线上
交流活动。请你准备一篇英语发言稿。内容包括：
1.介绍你最喜爱的艺术家及其代表作；
2.说明理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
(
【答案】
Dear all,
It
is my pleasure to
share with
you
to
day
about
my
favorite
artist,
Vincent
van
Gogh.
Van
Gogh
was
a
Dutch
post
-
impressionist
painter
,
best
known
for
his
vivid
and
expressive
use
of
color
.
One
of
his
most
famous
works
is “Starry Night”, which depicts the night
sky over a
village
in
France.
The
swirling
stars
and bold
brushstrokes
make
the painting come to life, conveying a sense of
movement
and
emo
tion.
I
admire
van
Gogh
because
of his
ability
to
convey
intense
emotions
through
his
art.
He
had
a
difficult
life,
struggling
with
mental
illness
and
poverty,
but
he
found
comfort
and
meaning
in
his
painting.
His
dedication
and
passion for art are truly
inspir
ing to
me.
Thank you for listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将与英国友好学校举办的
“
我最喜爱的艺术家
”
线上交流活动，
要求
考生准备一篇英语发言稿，介绍自己最喜爱的艺术家及其代表作，并说
明理由。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
乐事：
pleasure → enjoyment/delight
知名的：
known → renowned
/famous
描绘：
depict →
portray
)
(
因为：
because of
→ due to
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
Van Gogh was a Dutch post-impressionist painter, best known for his vivid and
expres
sive use
of
color.
拓展句：
Van
Gogh
,
who
is
best
known
for
his
vivid
and
expressive
use
of
color
,
was
a
Dutch
post
-
impressionist
painter
.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] One of
his most famous works is
“Starry Night”,
which
depicts
the
night
sky
over
a
village
in France. (
运用了
which
引导非限制性定语从
句
)
[
高
分句
型
2]
The
swi
rling
stars
and
bold
brushstrokes
make
the
painting
c
ome
to
life,
conveying
a
sense
o
f
movement and emotion. (
运用了现在分词作伴随
状语
)
)
3 ．（2023 上 ·湖北襄阳 · 高三校联考期中） 假如你是红星中学校报记者李华，请你为中学生英语报社写一篇
新闻报道，内容包括：
人物 王宗源，男， 2001 年 10 月 24 日出生于湖北襄阳
事件 杭州亚运会获得两枚跳水金牌。六岁前学习体操， 游泳， 后转跳水， 2017 年进国家跳水队。曾获 2021 年东京奥运会男子跳水冠军。
个人感 想 ……
注意： 1 ．写作字数 80 左右；
2 ．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
(
【答案】
Among the
outstanding
figures
shining
at the Hangzhou Asian
Games,
Wang
Zongyuan
is
absolutely
an
impressive
one,
who
demonstrated
his exceptional
power
and
won
2 diving
gold
medals for
China.
Born on
October 24th, 2001, Wang Zongyuan
spent
most
of his childhood
practicing
gymnastics
in
his
hometown,
Xiangyang,
hubei
province.
Then
he
was
discovered
as
a
talented
diver.
After joining
in
the
national
swimming
team
in
2017,
Wang
got
his
first
world
champion
in
Tokyo
Olympics
in
2001,
which
opened
his
remarkable
journey
in
the
swimming
world
.
Not only does Wang Zongyuan devote his own
power
to
the
diving
eve
nt
of
China,
but
he
also
sets
a
good
example
to the young swimme
rs in
China.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给中学生英语报社写一篇新闻报道，报道杭州
亚运会两枚跳
水金牌获得者王宗源的事迹。
)
(
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
优秀的：
outstanding
→
superb
完全地：
absolutely→
completely
表现，显露：
demonstrate →show
非凡的：
remarkable →extraordinary
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句
：
Born
on
October
24th,
2001,
Wang
Zongyuan
spent
most
of his
child
hood
practicing
gymnastics
in
his
hometown, Xiangyang, hubei provin
ce.
拓展句：
Wang Zongyuan ,who was born on October 2
4th, 2001,
spent most of
his
childhood practicing
gymnastics
in his hometown, Xiangyang, hubei pr
ovince.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
Among the
outstanding figures shining at the Hangzhou Asian Games,
Wang
Zongyuan
is
absolutely
an
impressive
one,
who
demonstrated
his
exceptional
power
and
won
2
diving
gold
medals
for
China.
(
运用了
who
引导的非限制性定语从句
)
【高分句型
2
】
Not only does Wang Zongyuan devote his own power to the diving
event
of
Chi
na, but
he
also
sets
a good example to the young swimmers i
n China.
(
运用了部分倒装句
)
)
4 ．（2023 上 · 山东潍坊 · 高三统考阶段练习）假定你是李华，你班本周 Class Report 的主题是 A Man of
Perseverance。请你写一篇发言稿。内容包括：
1. 人物事迹简介；
2. 给你的启示。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone. Today, I’d like to share a story about a man of perseverance.
(
Thanks for your listening.
【答案】
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone. Today, I’d like to share a
story
abo
ut
a
man
of
perseverance.
Thomas
Edison,
the
great
inventor,
faced
numerous
failures
before
his
groundbreaking
success.
He
made
countless
attempts
to
invent
the
elec
tric
light
bulb,
experiencing
over
a
thousand
failures.
However,
instead
of
giving
up,
he
famously
said,
“I
have
not
failed.
I’ve just
found 10,000
ways
that
won’t
work.”
His
tenacity
and
refusal to accept defeat ultimately led him to success, forever
changing
the
world.
)
(
This
story
teaches
me
a
valuable
lesson
about
perseverance.
It
reminds
me
that
failure
is
not
a
reason
to
quit
but
an
opportunity
to
learn
and
grow.
It
is
through
persistence
that
we
can
overcome
obstacles
and
achieve
our
goals.
In conclusion, let us remember the words of
Thomas Edison and embrace persevera
nce
in
our
own
lives.
Thanks for your listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生写一篇主题为
A
Man
of
Perseverance
的发言稿参加本周
的课堂报告，需简要介绍人物事迹，并分享自己得到的启示。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
无数的：
numerous→countless, num
berless, innumerable
经历：
experience→under
go, go through
放弃：
give up→quit, abandon
宝贵的：
valuable→precious,
treasurable
战胜：
overcome→conquer, surm
ount
阻碍：
obstacle→barrier, impediment
实现：
achieve→accomplish, obtain
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
His tenacity and refusal to accept defeat ultimatel
y led him to
success,
forever
changing the
world.
拓展句：
His
tenacity
and
refusal
to
accept
defeat
ultimately
led
him
to
success,
which
has
forever
changed
the
world.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] It reminds me th
at failure is not a reason to quit but
an
opportunity
to
learn
and
grow.
(
运用
了连接词
that
引导宾语从句
)
[
高分句型
2] It is through persistence that we can
overcome
obstacles
and
achieve
our
goals.
(
运用了
It
is…that
…
强调句型
)
)
5 ．（2023 下 ·湖北襄阳 · 高三襄阳市襄州区第一高级中学校考开学考试） 进入新时代，我们的身边涌现出了 许多青年榜样：如零零后消防员， 零零后志愿者等。为了向青年榜样们学习， 你校组织了主题为“We Should
Shoulder the Responsibility”的英语征文活动，请你投稿。
内容包括：
1. 青年榜样的突出品质；
2. 他们对你的影响；
3. 呼吁年轻人向他们学习。
注意： 1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We Should Shoulder the Responsibility
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】We Should Shoulder the Responsibility
Nowadays, many young role models have emerged in various fields: post-00s firefighters, post-00s volunteers,
etc. They demonstrate their bravery and ambition, especially, their sense of responsibility.
They make me think about our responsibility. As a student, study is our priority and we should shoulder the
responsibility to complete our studies seriously and do solid work. Only if we are equipped with knowledge can we
better serve our country. Meanwhile, we have to grow up with physical and mental health, which is what our
beloved parents expect. That’s why we should not shirk any responsibility of love and care.
To conclude, I appeal to all the young people to learn from them and shoulder the responsibility.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作，现要求考生写一篇“We Should Shoulder the Responsibility”英语征文投稿。 其内容包括：青年榜样的突出品质、他们对你的影响以及呼吁年轻人向他们学习。
【详解】 1.词汇积累
很多： many→plenty of
特别： especially →in particular
考虑： think about→reflect on
应该： should→be supposed to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： They make me think about our responsibility. 复合句： What they did made me think about our responsibility.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Only if we are equipped with knowledge can we better serve our country.（only if 放在
句首的倒装句）
【高分句型 2】That’s why we should not shirk any responsibility of love and care.（why 引导的表语从句）
6 ．（2023·河北 · 校联考三模）假定你是李华，受校英文报约稿，请你写一篇介绍某位名人的英语短文，刊 登在校英文报 People 专栏，内容包括： 1. 该人物的生平； 2. 他的主要事迹； 3. 你的评价。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为 80 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
(
【答案】
One possible version:
Yuan Longping, known as the “father of
hybrid rice”, is one
of
China’s most
famous
scientists.
Yuan
Longping
was
born
in September 1930 and died in 2021,
aged
91.
He
c
ultivated
the
world’s
first
high
-
yielding
hybrid
rice
,
which
has
helped
feed
nearly
one
-
fifth
of
the
world
’
s
population
.
After
fighting
China’s
food
shortages,
he
turned
his
attention
to
a
much
bigger
challenge,
solving
world
hunger.
Since
the
1980s,
Yuan’s
team
has
offered
training
courses
in
dozens
of countries
in
Africa,
the
Americas
and Asia, providing a huge food source in areas with high risks
of
fami
ne.
Yuan Longping’s legacy is not
only the
progress
of
hybrid
rice-his
curiosity,
devotion,
courage,
perseverance,
diligence, cooperation and selflessness have left an indel
ible
spiritual wealth
to
us
all.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于受校英文报约稿这一情况，写一篇介
绍某位名人的
英语短文，刊登在校英文报
People
专栏。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
培育：
cultivated→ breed
提供：
offer
→provide
巨大的：
huge→
enormous
财富：
wealth→ treasure
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
Yuan Longping, known as the “father of
hybrid rice”, is one
of
China’s mos
t
famous
scientists.
拓展句：
Yuan Longping, who is known as the “father
of
hybrid rice”,
is
o
ne
of
China’s
most
famous
scientists.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
He
cultivated
the
world
’
s
first
high
-
yielding
hybrid
rice
,
which
has
helped
feed
nearly
one-fifth of
the world’s population.
（运用了
which
引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型
2
】
Since
the
1980s,
Yuan’s
team
has
offered
training
courses
in
dozens
of countries
in
Af
rica,
the
Americas and Asia,
providing a huge food source in
areas
with
high
risks
of
famine.
（运用了现在分词作状语）
)
7 ．（2023·湖南邵阳 · 统考二模）在 2022 年 8 月发生的重庆山火和 2023 年 1 月发生的泸定地震中涌现出了 很 多青年逆行者榜样人物 ：00 后消 防 员 ，00 后 志愿者等 。你校正在组织 “We Should Shoulder the
Responsibility”英语征文活动，请你投稿。
内容包括： 1 ．青年榜样的突出品质；
2 ．他们对你的影响；
3 ．呼吁年轻人向他们学习。
注意： 1 ．词数 80 左右；
2 ．参考词汇： 00 后： post-2000s generation／post-00s；
3 ．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We Should Shoulder the Responsibility
【答案】One possible version:
We Should Shoulder the Responsibility
Recently many young role models emerged in the mountain fire in Chongqing and the Luding earthquake, in which post-00s firefighters, post-00s volunteers showed their bravery and ambition, especially, their sense of
responsibility.
What they did made me think about our responsibility. As young people, we have to work hard to serve the country. As a student, we have a responsibility to complete our studies seriously and steadfastly, enduring all kinds
of hardship. We should not escape any responsibility of love and care.
In a word, all of us young people should learn from them and shoulder our responsibility.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校组织的以“We Should Shoulder the Responsibility”为题的
英语征文活动投稿，内容包括青年榜样的品质、影响并呼吁学生向他们学习。
【详解】 1.词汇积累
承担，肩负： shoulder →undertake
完成： complete →finish
忍受： endure →bear
总之： in a word →in short
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： As young people, we have to work hard to serve the country.
拓展句： As young people, we have to work hard to serve the country, which can show our love for our country.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】What they did made me think about our responsibility.(运用了 what 引导主语从句)
【高分句型 2】As a student, we have a responsibility to complete our studies seriously and steadfastly, enduring
all kinds of hardship.(运用了现在分词短语作伴随状语)
8 ．（2023 上 · 安徽 · 高三校联考期末） 假定你是李华，你们班本周将举行一次英文主题班会，介绍为人类做
出突出贡献的人物。请你写一篇短文，内容包括：
1.人物简介；
2.做出的贡献；
3.你的感想。
注意：
1.词数 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
(
【答案】
Tu Youyou
Tu Youyou is a great Chinese
medical
scientist.
Determined
to
help
those
suffering
from
malaria,
T
uYouyou
devoted
most
of her
time
to
finding
the
cure.
Luckily, her
efforts paid
off.
In
2015,
she was
awarded the Nobel
P
rize
in
Physiology
or
Medicine
for
discovering
artemisinin, which
is the key to the
treatment
of
malaria.
Behind
her
success
were
numerous
failures
and
setbac
ks,
but never did she
give
up.
So
great
is
her
contribution
to
the
wo
rld
that
she
has
become
an
idol
of many people,
including
me.
Inspired
by her story, I decide to study ha
rder
so
as to realize
my
dream.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文，介绍一位为人类做出突出贡献的人物，包括人物简介及
其所做贡献并
分享自己的感想。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
下定决心的：
determined→resolved
幸运地：
luckily→fortunately
努力：
effort→endeavor
无数的：
numerous→countless
实现：
realize→achieve
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
Determined to help those suffering from malaria, TuYouyou devoted most
of
her time
to
finding
the
cure.
拓展句
：
As
she
was
determined
to
help
those
suffering
from
malaria,
TuYouyou
devoted
most
of her
time
to
finding the cure.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
In
2015,
she
was
awarded
the
Nobel
Prize
in
Physiology
or
Medicine
for
discovering
artemisinin, which is the key to the treatment of
malaria.
（运用了
which
引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型
2
】
Behind her success were numerous failures and setbacks,
but
never
did
she
give
up.
（运用了介词
短语置于句首的全部倒装及否定词位于句首的部分倒装）
)
(
【高分句型
3
】
So great is her contribution to the world that
she has become
an
idol
of
many people,
including me.
（运用了
so+
形容词前置的倒装及
so... that...
引导的结果状语从句）
)
9 ．（2022·辽宁 · 校联考模拟预测） 我们身边有许许多多值得我们学习的榜样。请你以“The Power of an Example”
为题写一篇短文,投稿于你校英文报。内容包括：
1.你的学习榜样；
2.该榜样对你的影响。
注意:
1.写作词数应为 80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Power of an Example
(
【答案】
One possible version:
The
Power
of
an
Example
Comrade Lei Feng, who served people wholeheartedly, is the best
example that
I
determine to
follow.
March
5
is the “Learn from Lei Feng Da
y”. People used to
sing
the
song
“Learn
from
Lei
Feng's
good
example”and
do
good
deeds
that
day
,
which
influenced
several
generations
of
people
.
As
for me,
I
impress
on myself
that we
live to
better
others'
lives.
Tha
t
way
I
will
do
all
in
my
power
to
help
the people
in
need
as
well
as
make
the
most
of my
time
to
do
well
in
all
my
subjects
at
school.
All
in
all,
I
am
to
have the “screw spirit” of
creating extraordinary achievements in
ordinary
work ba
sed
on my
own
duties.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。我们身边有许许多多值得我们学习的榜样
.
请考生以
“The
Power of
an Example”
为
题写一篇短文。投稿于你校英文报。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
影响：
affect→ influence
充分利用：
make the most of
→make
the
best
of
全心全意地：
with heart and soul→ wholeheartedly
帮助：
assist→ help
2.
句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：
In
conclusion, we
should have
a
good understanding
of its
advantages
and
di
sadvantages
and
find
a proper
way to make our study more
efficient.
拓展句：
In conclusion, we should have a good understanding of
its advant
ages
and
disadvantages,
finding
a proper
way to make our study more
efficient.
【
点
睛
】
[
高
分
句
型
rade
Lei
Feng,
who
served
people
wholeheartedly,
is
the
best
example
that
I
)
(
determine to follow.
（
who
引导的非限
制性定语从句）
[
高分句型
2].
People
used
to
sing
the
song
“Learn
from
Lei
Feng's
good
example”and
do
good
deeds
that
day,
which influenced several generations of
people.
（
wh
ich
引导的非限制性定语从句）
)
