(共11张PPT)
写作要求
如何写议论文
克隆人这一话题在世界上引起了激烈的争论。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇题为“On Human Cloning”的短文。
赞同 1.克隆人是一个科学突破;
2.能制造出拯救生命的人体组织和器官;
3.对无生育能力的人来说是一个喜讯。
反对 1.克隆人是违背伦理的;
2.无权用人类做实验;
3.不应该干预大自然;
4.担心造成超人种。
你的观点 人类应将重点放在对人类有益的动物和干细胞的研究上。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:干扰 interfere with
审题谋篇
一、审题定调
1.确定体裁:本文是一篇对热议话题发表个人观点的议论文。
2.确定人称:本文的主要人称为第一和第三人称。
3.确定时态:以一般现在时为主。
二、谋篇布局
第一段:提出一种论点或一个问题。
第二段:论点提出后,我们就要根据汉语提示部分提供的事实,针对不同的观点进行分析、论证,使论点得到足够的支持。
第三段:得出结论并发表自己的观点。
遣词造句
一、核心词汇
1.a scientific breakthrough科学突破
2.tissues and organs组织和器官
3.experiment with以……做实验
4.replace vt.取代
5.focus one’s efforts on将某人的努力集中于
二、连词成句
1.它能制造出有价值的人体组织和器官。
It can produce valuable tissues and organs.
2.这些人体组织和器官能用来拯救生命。
These tissues and organs can be used to save human lives.
3.我们担心我们可能会制造出超人种。
We are worried that we may produce a superhuman race.
4.这种超人种可能会取代我们。
The superhuman race may replace us.
5.这样我们才能使之有益于人类。
We can make it beneficial to mankind in this way.
三、句式升级
1.用含有过去分词短语作后置定语的句子合并句1和句2
2.用what引导的主语从句合并句3和句4
3.用only开头的倒装句改写句5
It can produce valuable tissues and organs used to save human lives.
What worries us is that the superhuman race that we produce may replace us.
Only in this way can we make it beneficial to mankind.
妙笔成篇
On Human Cloning
Cloning is producing an exact copy of a plant or an animal by using its cells.However,human cloning has caused much debate.
Some believe it is a wonderful scientific breakthrough.It can produce valuable tissues and organs used to save human lives.It is good news for those who can’t have babies.However,others think cloning humans is totally immoral and against nature.We have no rights to experiment with humans.If we interfere with nature,many problems may arise.What worries us is that the superhuman race we produce may replace us.
In my opinion,cloning is really a wonderful scientific breakthrough.We should focus our efforts on cloning animals and stem cells to be used in medical research.Only in this way can we make it beneficial to mankind.
针对训练
你们班即将开展班会,班会上要求学生就“What leads to success”这个话题谈谈看法。请你就此话题表达自己的观点,内容包括:
1.描述你所认为成功的要素;
2.请结合自己或他人的经历来说明你的观点。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
The most important factor of success,in my opinion,is time management. It is of great assistance not only in our current learning but also in the future when we approach the workplace.
As in my case,the abilities of time management really benefited me a lot in adapting myself to the new learning model.I arranged sufficient time for reviewing and previewing,which helped improve my study efficiency and consolidate the knowledge.What’s more,with a sensible time schedule,my hours of work were spent more effectively.On numerous occasions,I found myself free in the afternoon and enjoyed one of my favourite novels leisurely since I had already completed the tasks for the day.
For reasons above,I am convinced that time management is to an individual what wind is to the sailing boat.Therefore,there is no denying that it is wise time management that will lead to success.(共10张PPT)
写作要求
如何写人物介绍
请根据提示信息,写一篇介绍史蒂夫·乔布斯的文章向校报投稿。要点如下。
1.史蒂夫·乔布斯(Steve Jobs),生于1955年2月24日。
2.主要经历:1976年,成立苹果公司(Apple Inc.);1985年,乔布斯离开苹果公司;1997年,回到苹果公司担任行政总裁(CEO)职务;2011年8月24日,辞去苹果公司行政总裁职务;2011年10月5日逝世。
3.主要成就:乔布斯被视作iPad、iPhone等知名电子产品的缔造者,这些电子产品改变了现代通信、娱乐乃至人们的生活方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
一、审题定调
1.确定体裁:本文是人物介绍类的记叙文,主要写史蒂夫·乔布斯的生平以及事迹。
2.确定时态:本文的时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主,按时间顺序来写。
3.确定人称:本文的人称使用第三人称。
二、谋篇布局
第一段:乔布斯的概况及经历。
第二段:乔布斯的主要成就及人们的评价。
遣词造句
一、核心词汇
1.be born on/in出生于
2.serve/work as担任
3.at the age of在……岁时
4.digital products电子产品
5.communication通信
6.entertainment娱乐
二、连词成句
1.1976年,他21岁,在那时成立了苹果公司。
In 1976,he was 21 years old.At that time he set up Apple Inc.
2.史蒂夫·乔布斯被视作iPad、iPhone等知名电子产品的缔造者。
People all think Steve Jobs is the founder of iPad,iPhone and some other famous digital products.
三、句式升级
1.用状语从句升级句1
2.用被动语态和高级短语regard...as...升级句2
In 1976,when he was 21 years old,he set up Apple Inc.
Steve Jobs is regarded as the founder of iPad,iPhone and some other famous digital products.
妙笔成篇
Steve Jobs was born on February 24,1955.In 1976,when he was 21 years old,he set up Apple Inc.Steve Jobs left the Apple Inc.in 1985 and twelve years later,in 1997 he returned and served as the CEO of the Apple Inc.In 2011,he declared he would no longer serve as the CEO.On October 5,2011,he died at the age of 56.
Steve Jobs is regarded as the founder of iPad,iPhone and some other famous digital products.These products have changed the way of modern communication and entertainment,even the lifestyle of people.
针对训练
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack想了解中国的科学。你决定用英语向他介绍屠呦呦。请根据以下要点,写一封回信。
1.对屠呦呦的介绍:发现了青蒿素,为人类防治疟疾做出了巨大的贡献,并因此于2015年获得诺贝尔医学奖。她所研究的药物挽救了数百万人的生命,于2019年被BBC评为二十世纪世界最伟大的人物之一。
2.屠呦呦对你的影响。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词:疟疾malaria;青蒿素artemisinin
Dear Jack,
I am glad to know that you are interested in Chinese great scientists.____
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope her story can have a positive effect on you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jack,
I am glad to know that you are interested in Chinese great scientists.I am more than happy to introduce to you my favourite scientist,whose name is Tu Youyou.
Tu Youyou,a great scientist,devoted most of her time to finding the cure for malaria.In 2015,she was awarded the Nobel Prize in medicine for discovering artemisinin,which is the key to the treatment of malaria.And in 2019,she was elected as one of “the Greatest Persons of the 20th Century” by BBC.So great is her contribution to the world that she has become an idol of many people,including me.Inspired by her story,I am determined to study harder so as to realize my dream.
I hope her story can have a positive effect on you.
Yours,
Li Hua(共10张PPT)
写作要求
如何写新闻报道
假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了一次户外徒步活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动时间;
2.活动的过程;
3.活动的意义。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
一、审题定调
1.确定体裁:本文为应用文中的新闻报道。
2.确定人称:本文的主要人称应为第三人称。
3.确定时态:以一般过去时态为主。
二、谋篇布局
第一段:活动时间、地点、内容。
第二段:徒步旅行的过程。
第三段:徒步旅行的意义。
遣词造句
一、核心词汇
1.hold v. 举行
2.set off 动身
3.exhausted adj. 筋疲力竭的
4.keep up with 跟上
5.give up放弃
6.make it to 到达
7.be enthusiastic about 对……充满热情
8.relieve v.减轻,缓解
9.strengthen v. 增强
municate with 和……交流
二、高级句式
1.为了丰富学生的课外活动,我们学校上周日举行了一次徒步旅行活动,这对学生的学习和生活有着很大的影响。(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
In order to enrich students’ extra-curricular activities,our school held a hiking activity last Sunday,which has a great effect on students’ study and life.
2.6点,一个简短的开幕式后,所有的学生和老师出发了。(it强调句)
It was at 6 o’clock that all the students and teachers set off after a short opening ceremony.
3.过了一段时间,一些学生太累了,他们无法跟上他们的同学。(so...that...倒装句)
After a while,so tired were some students that they couldn’t keep up with their classmates.
4.他们没有放弃,而是在老师和同学的帮助以及许多行人的鼓励下继续行走。(with复合结构)
Instead of giving up,they carried on walking,with the teachers and classmates’ help and many pedestrians’ encouragement.
5.更重要的是,他们有机会强化自己的意志,在他们的青春记忆中留下一次快乐的经历。(现在分词作状语)
More importantly,they had a good chance to strengthen their will,leaving a happy experience in their youthful memories.
妙笔成篇
A Hiking Activity
In order to enrich students’ extra-curricular activities,our school held a hiking activity last Sunday,which has a great effect on students’ study and life.
It was at 6 o’clock that all the students and teachers set off after a short opening ceremony was performed.They walked in order,chatting and singing happily.After a while,so tired were some students that they couldn’t keep up with their classmates.Instead of giving up,they carried on walking,with the teachers and classmates’ help and many pedestrians’ encouragement.The hiking lasted for about four hours,and all the students and teachers made it to the destination.
The activity relieved students’ mental pressure.More importantly,they had a good chance to strengthen their will,leaving a happy experience in their youthful memories.
针对训练
你校上周举办了以“Learn to Be Grateful”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你为学校英语角写一篇报道介绍该活动,内容包括:
1.活动的时间和地点;
2.活动的过程;
3.活动的意义。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
In order to encourage the students to have a grateful heart,an English speech contest named Learn to Be Grateful was organized by our school last Friday.
All the students in the senior grades went to watch it in the school hall. The judges were made up of 5 experienced English teachers from our school. There were 20 competitors,in total,attending it.They did an excellent job and the top 3 competitors were awarded.
The contest is really meaningful and instructive.To be grateful is a traditional virtue of our nation,with which the world will be more harmonious.
