人教版（2019）必修 第一册Unit 2 Travelling around单元话题写作（含解析）

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人教版（新课标）必修一UNIT2traveling around +单元话题写作（含解析 高分句型 词汇）
考试范围：xxx；考试时间：100分钟；命题人：xxx
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
题号 一 总分
得分
一、书面表达：本大题共15小题，共375分。
1.假定你是李华，你的英国好友Peter 8月份打算来中国旅游，想先学习一些中文，却不知道如何入门。你决定帮助他，写一份邮件告诉他你的想法。要点如下：
1.你给他的学习建议；
2.介绍你的帮助计划；
3.对结果的展望。
注意：
1.词数100词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 邮件开头结尾已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
① I'm glad to hear that you are going to take a trip to China this November and don't know how to learn Chinese. I am writing to give you some advice.
First, I strongly recommend watching Chinese films. It is an interesting and effective way to improve spoken Chinese. Besides, it's also a good idea to learn Chinese songs. In that way, you can speak like a native speaker. ②Last but not least, you'd better find an online partner, with whom you can have a chat every day.
I hope my suggestions can be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文写作。话题为你的英国好友 Peter 8月份打算来中国旅游，想先学习一些中文，却不知道如何入门。你决定帮助他，写一份邮件告诉他你的想法。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯，文章主要用一般现在时。
【亮点词汇】
①in that way那样，以那种方式
②be helpful to对……有所帮助
【高分句型】
①I'm glad to hear that you are going to take a trip to China this November and don't know how to learn Chinese.（that引导宾语从句）
② Last but not least, you'd better find an online partner, with whom you can have a chat every day.（with whom引导非限制性定语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：说明写信目的
中心：介绍对学习中文的建议
结尾：表达期望
【拓展词汇】
①practical实用的
②take action采取行动
【拓展句型】
①I think you can make it if you follow the following advice below.如果您能听从以下建议，我认为您会成功的。
②Only in this way will you...只有用这种方式，你才能……
2.假如你是李华，上周日学校组织全校高一师生进行了一次春日户外郊游活动，受到了大家的一致好评。请你就本次活动给校园英语报写一篇报道。内容包括：
1.活动内容；
2.活动的意义。
注意：
1.词数 80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】 ①Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary outing, which successfully drew the attention of every student and teacher in senior 1.
Bathed in the warm spring sunshine, we managed to reach our destination on foot, talking and laughing. On our arrival, we enjoyed the fascinating scenery. We all thought it was a visual feast. ②What excited us most was the marvelous performances given by our classmates and teachers who lost the games, which made everybody burst into laughter.
By immersing everyone in the charming nature, this activity definitely offered relaxation to us. Not only did it strengthen our perseverance, but also enhanced our friendship.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达属于新闻报道，话题为上周日学校组织全校高一师生进行了一次春日户外郊游活动，受到了大家的一致好评，请你给校园英语报写一篇报道。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①draw the attention of引起……的注意
②managed to do sth.设法、努力（完成某事）
【高分句型】
①Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary outing, which successfully drew the attention of every student and teacher in senior 1.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②What excited us most was the marvelous performances given by our classmates and teachers who lost the games, which made everybody burst into laughter.（what引导的主语从句；who引导的限制性定语从句；which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：引入主题
中心：介绍活动内容
结尾：介绍活动的意义
【拓展词汇】
①broaden one's horizons 拓宽某人的视野
②have a better understanding of 对......有更好的了解
【拓展句型】
①To help students relax, our school organized an outing last Sunday.
（为了帮助学生放松，我们学校上周日组织了一次户外郊游的活动。）
②This activity not only offered us a chance to get close to nature, but also brought us closer to each other. （这项活动不仅让我们有机会接近大自然，也让我们彼此更亲近。）
3.假定你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Adam下个月要来中国进行为期一周的短暂游玩。他非常喜欢中国的历史和传统。请你给他推荐一座中国城市。内容包括：
1. 推荐的地方；
2. 推荐的理由。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Adam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Adam,
Knowing that you intend to pay a visit to China this winter, I'm more than delighted to recommend you a fascinating city—Dali.
①Dali, located in southwest of Yunnan province, is widely renowned for its comfortable warm climate, which can make your winter journey a good experience. Besides, its picturesque scenery must impress you profoundly, particularly Cangshan and Erhai. ②Finally, it is surely advisable for you to experience Dali's diverse culture and some historical sites in person, from which you can have a better understanding of Bai ethnic group's tradition.
I sincerely hope that you can enjoy yourself and if you have any problem, please feel free to contact me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
这篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信给你的加拿大朋友Adam推荐一座中国城市。写作时，主要采用第一人称和第二人称，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。写作过程中，注意涵盖所有要点，且使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接。
【亮点词汇】
①pay a visit to参观
②be widely renowned for因…而广为人知
【高分句型】
①Dali, located in southwest of Yunnan province, is widely renowned for its comfortable warm climate, which can make your winter journey a good experience. （which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②Finally, it is surely advisable for you to experience Dali's diverse culture and some historical sites in person, from which you can have a better understanding of Bai ethnic group's tradition. （from+which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：说明写信目的
中心：推荐的地方和理由
结尾：表达希望和祝愿
【拓展词汇】
①regarding关于
②consult咨询
③in advance提前
④specific具体的
【拓展句型】
①I recommend it mainly for the following two reasons. （我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。)
②If you need further information, don't hesitate to contact me. （如果您需要更多的信息，请联系我。)
4.假设你是李华，下周来自英国伦敦姐妹学校的师生交流团受邀来你的家乡游览，你作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一份发言稿，内容如下：
（1）表示欢迎；
（2）介绍家乡；
（3）表达祝愿。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为 80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear teachers and fellow student,
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【答案】Dear teachers and fellow students,
① I'm glad to know that you are interested in my hometown and will pay a visit to it in the summer holiday. Welcome to my hometown—Changchun.
Changchun City, the capital of Jilin Province, is located in the center of Songliao Plain in Northeast China. ②Although Changchun is a new city with only about 200 years of history, she is a very influential regional center city in China with high degree openness and advanced science and education now. I am proud of her because she has the characteristics of automobile city, forest city, film city and scientific and technological city.
Hope you can come to my hometown soon and I'd like to show you around the city!
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为欢迎致辞。写作时注意词汇的选择和句式的准确运用，可适当添加一些衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①pay a visit to参观
②show sb. around带某人四处参观
【高分句型】
①I'm glad to know that you are interested in my hometown and will pay a visit to it in the summer holiday. (that引导的宾语从句)
②Although Changchun is a new city with only about 200 years of history, she is a very influential regional center city in China with high degree openness and advanced science and education now. (although引导的让步状语从句)
【结构布局】
引言：表示欢迎
中心：介绍家乡
结尾：表达祝愿
【拓展词汇】
①on behalf of代表
②briefly简短地
【拓展句型】
①Some details about... are as follows.（……的细节如下。）
②I'm convinced that you can have a better understanding of...through the activities.（我相信通过这项活动你会对……有个更好的了解。）
5.你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
(1)你建议的线路；
(2)你的理由；
(3)你的祝愿。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I m happy to receive your letter and know you re coming to China.
Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.
Hope you ll have a good time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】略
6.假定你是李华。暑假期间你和父母一起游览了长城。现在你写一篇短文简单记述此次旅行的情况，内容包括：
(1)介绍旅游景点；
(2)记叙旅游经历；
(3)谈谈你的感受。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】 I went climbing the Great Wall with my parents during the summer vacation.
①The Great Wall is one of the greatest wonders of the world that attracts thousands of tourists every day. It is running across the mountains like a dragon. ②When we arrived there, we were so excited that we started climbing immediately. The steps sometimes were flat, but sometimes steep. After two hours of climbing, we finally got to the top.
I enjoyed the beauty of the mountains and took a lot of photos. I felt really proud and thought of the famous saying: ③"A man who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man."
【解析】【思路点拨】
本书面表达是一篇提纲作文。写作的时候注意以下几点：仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点词汇】
①thousands of成千上万的
②get to到达
③think of想起
【高分句型】
①The Great Wall is one of the greatest wonders of the world that attracts thousands of tourists every day.（that引导的定语从句）
②When we arrived there, we were so excited that we started climbing immediately.（When引导的时间状语从句；so...that...状语从句）
③A man who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.（谚语“不到长城非好汉”）
【结构布局】
①引言：首先表明游览时间和地点
②中心：介绍旅游景点和旅游经历
③结尾：谈谈你的感受
【拓展词汇】
①memorable难忘的
②places of interest名胜
③scenic spots风景区
④historic sites历史遗迹
【拓展句型】
①Located/Situated on ..., this beautiful old city has become a popular tourist attraction recently.位于……，这座美丽的古城最近成了受欢迎的胜地。
②We'll try out best to make your trip a pleasant experience.我们将尽力让你的旅行成为一段愉快的经历。
7.假定你是李华，你计划组织你们班进行一次远足，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：
(1)参加者；(2)时间、地点；(3)活动：登山、野餐等。
注意：(1)词数80左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Chris,
How is everything going these days I am writing to invite you to join my class in an outing organized by me this Saturday, June 10th. We will meet at 6 o'clock early in the morning at the school gate, and then take a bus to Yinling Mountain, where we will climb the mountain in the morning and then have a picnic at noon. If you could come, there is no need for you to take food but you'd better wear sports shoes and suitable clothes.
We will be really glad if you can come. I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】略
8.假定你是李华，你的新西兰笔友 Charlie打算今年7月到中国旅游，他发邮件向你询问有关情况，请根据以下要点用英语给他回复。
(1)高铁、飞机等交通方式方便且快捷；
(2)人脸识别即可进入景区;
(3)移动支付随处可用。
注意：
(1)词数 80 左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：人脸识别 facial recognition；高铁 high-speed railway；方便且快捷方式 quick and easy access；景区 tourist attraction； 移动支付 mobile payment
Dear Charlie,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Charlie，
How is everything I'm delighted to know you're planning a trip to China in July. Here is something about travelling.
①When in China, you can choose to travel by high-speed railway or plane, which allows quick and easy access to most big cities. ②More amazingly, unlike previous years when you got into some tourist attractions with the ID card, now you can make it just through a facial recognition app, which is more convenient. Besides, mobile payment instead of paying in cash is widely used. So, don't bother to take a lot of cash with you. With artificial intelligence, travelling in China will be an unforgettable experience.
Looking forward to your early arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为介绍说明，写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①be delighted to高兴
②tourist attractions旅游景点
③pay in cash用现金支付
【高分句型】
①When in China, you can choose to travel by high-speed railway or plane, which allows quick and easy access to most big cities. （when引导的省略句；which引导非限制性定语从句）
②More amazingly, unlike previous years when you got into some tourist attractions with the ID card, now you can make it just through a facial recognition app, which is more convenient.（when引导定语从句；which引导非限制性定语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：说明写信目的
中心：介绍主要信息
结尾：表达愿望，期待到来
【拓展词汇】
①appreciate感激
②relevant相关的
③punctual准时的
【拓展句型】
①Delighted to know you show great interest in ..., I'm writing to inform you of some relevant details. 很高兴得知你对……感兴趣，我写信来告诉你一些相关细节。
②As for your last letter asking about ..., I'm delighted to tell you something in detail. 对于你在上封信中问及的……，我很高兴告诉你一些详细的情况。
9.假定你是李华，要参加你校为留学生准备的“曲阜一日游”活动。请为此活动写一篇英文导游词，内容包括：
（1）简单介绍孔子；
（2）推荐游览“三孔”；
（3）表达祝愿。
注意：
（1）词数应为80左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
（3）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My dear friends,
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Yours,
LiHua

【答案】My dear friends,
It is my great honor to be your guide for this one-day tour.
Firstly, I'd like to talk about Confucius. The great philosopher and educator was born 2500 years ago and his great ideas influence the way people live, think and are educated. For a better understanding of him, there is no better place to go than his hometown, Qufu. ①Today we are going to visit the three most famous cultural sites, known as "San Kong", which attract visitors from home and abroad.
②I sincerely hope that you will have a wonderful trip.
Yours,
LiHua
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇应用文，以“曲阜一日游”活动为话题，写一篇英文导游词，写作要点已经给出，分析可用第一人称，考生结合所学知识，运用自己所熟知的单词和句型，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①talk about谈论
②have a wonderful trip有一个愉快的旅途
【高分句型】
①Today we are going to visit the three most famous cultural sites, known as "San Kong", which attract visitors from home and abroad. (which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②I sincerely hope that you will have a wonderful trip. (that引导的宾语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：表示庆幸当导游
中心：简单介绍孔子，推荐游览“三孔”
结尾：表达祝愿
【拓展词汇】
①typical典型的
②significant有意义的
③vital至关重要的
④broaden/widen one's horizons拓宽某人的视野
【拓展句型】
①We should take every possible opportunity to acquire more useful knowledge and get fully developed.我们应利用一切可以利用的机会去获取更多有用的知识并得到全面的发展。
②Aimed at promoting/improving/providing..., the activity is to be held/was held...致力于促进/改善/提供……，活动将于/已于……举行。
③Not only did the activity arouse students' interest in language, but it also cultivated students' love for Chinese.活动不仅激发了学生的语言兴趣，而且培养了学生对中文的热爱。
10.假如你是李华，刚去厦门旅游回来。你的英国笔友Henry写邮件询问你旅游情况及旅游感想。请根据以下内容给Henry回一封邮件。
位置 位于福建省东南部，四面环海

景点 鼓浪屿（最出名景点之一，每天有成千上万游客）
曾厝垵（品尝各种美味小吃）
厦门大学
活动 捡贝壳、追海浪、游泳
参考词汇：曾厝垵Zengcuoan；
鼓浪屿Gulangyu Island
注意：
(1)词数80左右；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Henry,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Henry,
How is it going I'm just back from Xiamen and ①I'm writing to share my travelling experience with you, which you mentioned/wondered/was curious about last email.
Located in the southeast of Fujian province, Xiamen is surrounded by the seas. There are various/a variety of tourist attractions there, among which Gulangyu Island is the most famous/outstanding. Thousands of tourists travel to Gulangyu Island to enjoy themselves. I went to Zengcuoan because of its a variety of delicious snacks. And I think it's a good choice for you as well. ②Besides, time permitting, I recommend that you visit Xiamen University, which is regarded as the most beautiful university of China. As the unique location of Xiamen, you can have fun collecting shells, surfing the waves or swimming there.
Xiamen is well worth travelling and I hope you can experience it on your own.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为向英国笔友Henry介绍自己的旅游情况及旅游感想。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接语，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①be curious about对……感到好奇；
②Thousands of成千上万的；
③be well worth doing...值得做某事。
【高分句型】
①I'm writing to share my travelling experience with you, which you mentioned/wondered/was curious about last email. (which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②Besides, time permitting, I recommend that you visit Xiamen University, which is regarded as the most beautiful university of China. (time permitting为独立结构；that引导宾语从句；which引导非限制性定语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：表明写信目的；
中心：介绍旅游情况和感想；
结尾：希望对方能够亲身体验。
【拓展词汇】
①memorable难忘的；
②local customs and practices风土人情；
③beyond description难以描述。
【拓展句型】
①Located/Situated on..., this beautiful old city has become a popular tourist attraction recently.位于……，这座美丽的古城最近成了受欢迎的旅游胜地。
②We'll try out best to make your trip a pleasant experience.我们将尽力让你的旅行成为一段愉快的经历。
11.假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jason计划在暑假期间和父母一起来中国旅游，想请你推荐一本有关中国旅游的书，请你给他回一封邮件。要点包括：
(1)表示欢迎；
(2)推荐图书：《中国最美的100个地方》（中英双语；插图精美）；
(3)其他建议。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jason,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jason,
I'm more than delighted to learn that you and your parents are planning a trip to Chinese during the summer holiday. Welcome!
To make your trip pleasant, I'd like to recommend to you the book The 100 Most Beautiful Places in China. ①It's written in both English and Chinese, which is of great help for you to learn Chinese. More importantly, it contains many colorful pictures and details. It can help you get general knowledge of the places of interest before you actually come to visit them. ②Time permitting, I hope you can spare some time to visit my city as well. I will surely treat you to delicious local foods.
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为推荐一本书，写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①recommend to sb.向某人推荐
②be of great help很大的帮助
③more importantly更重要的是
【高分句型】
①It's written in both English and Chinese, which is of great help for you to learn Chinese. (which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②Time permitting, I hope you can spare some time to visit my city as well.（独立主格结构；省略that的宾语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：说明写信目的
中心：说明推荐理由
结尾：表达愿望
【拓展词汇】
①abundant丰富的
②definitely/certainly一定地
③enrich丰富
④take... into consideration/account考虑……
【拓展句型】
①Glad/Pleased/Delighted to know that..., I think it a good choice to do sth.很高兴得知……，我认为做某事是个不错的选择。
②I'm more than glad/pleased/delighted to learn that..., and I'd like to offer my recommendation.得知……，我想向您提议。
③I do hope you can take my recommendations into account /consideration and make a final decision.我真心希望您能考虑我的建议并做出最后的决定。
12.假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的外教Mark或Ben写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：
(1)参加者；
(2)时间、地点；
(3)活动安排。
注意：(1)词数80左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Mark/Ben,
How is it going I am writing to invite you to an outing to Mount Qingcheng this Sunday. As planned, all the students in our grade will leave by bus at 7:30 am at the school gate. About two hours will be spent climbing the mountain. After that we will have a good taste of local snacks at the foot of the mountain. The breathtaking scenery on the way and a big feast of Chinese culture definitely won't let you down. Hope you will enjoy this joyful activity. Your attendance is greatly expected.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】略
13.假定你是李华，春节期间你参加了某旅行社组织的海南游。然而你对此次旅行经历很不满意，请你根据以下提示写一篇投诉信。
内容要点：
（1）宣传册上承诺的景点一个都没看到；
（2）所谓的五星级酒店又破又贵；
（3）强制消费。
注意：
（1）词数100左右：
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
（3）开头和结尾都已写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：赔偿，赔偿金compensation
Dear Mr. Wang,
I was one of your customers who joined the program to Hainan in your travel agency during the spring holiday.____________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】 Dear Mr. Wang,
I was one of your customers who joined the program to Hainan in your travel agency during the spring holiday. I am writing to express my disappointment about the services you provided.
In the first place, I was expected to see some beautiful scenic spots printed on your brochure. However, I did not see any of them at all. ①Additionally, the five-starred hotel that you had described to me turned out to be shabby but expensive. To make matters worse, the bus took us to some shopping malls where we were informed that we could leave only after making some purchases there.
②I think it is high time you realized the importance of credits in business. I'm expecting some compensation from you and I will really appreciate it. Otherwise, I will have no other choice but to take legal action.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为针对旅行经历的不满写一封投诉信。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①be expected to期望做某事
②have no other choice but to do除了做……别无选择
【高分句型】
①Additionally, the five-starred hotel that you had described to me turned out to be shabby but expensive.（that引导的限制性定语从句）
②I think it is high time you realized the importance of credits in business.（省略that的宾语从句；虚拟语气）
【结构布局】
引言：说明写信目的
中心：陈述不满的理由
结尾：表达诉求
【拓展词汇】
①make a complaint about投诉
②make up for弥补
③to one's disappointment令某人失望的是
【拓展句型】
①I'm most unwilling to complain, but sth./sb. is really annoying/annoyed.我非常不愿意投诉，但某事/某人确实让人恼火。
②I do hope you will give due attention to the matter.我真的希望对此事您能给予足够的重视。
③I trust/have great faith that you will take my complaints seriously.我相信您会认真对待我的投诉。
14.你是李华，上周你参加了美国某旅行社组织的加利福尼亚州七日游，但你对此次旅行感到很不满意。请你给该旅行社负责人写一封投诉信，内容包括：
(1)写信目的；
(2)不满之处；
(3)表达期望。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已为你写好。
参考词汇：加利福尼亚California；旅行社travel agency
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
①My name is Li Hun, a customer who took seven-day trip to California organized by your travel agency last week. I'm writing to express my dissatisfaction.
To begin with, the guide took us to so many different places to do shopping instead of visiting tourist attractions. ②Besides, I don't think the guide is fit for the job because she had little knowledge of the places we visited and was even impolite to us. What was worse, the food was really bad.
I sincerely hope that you can take all the problems into consideration and improve your service.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题是给旅行社负责人写一封投诉信。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接语，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
1.to begin with首先；
2.instead of代替；
3.is fit for对……合适；
4.take...into consideration考虑到。
【高分句型】
1.My name is Li Hun, a customer who took seven-day trip to California organized by your travel agency last week.（who引导的非限制性定语从句）
2.Besides, I don't think the guide is fit for the job because she had little knowledge of the places we visited and was even impolite to us.（because引导的原因状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：写信目的
中心：不满之处
结尾：表达期望
【拓展词汇】
1.give due attention to足够重视……
2.to one's disappointment令某人失望的是
【拓展句型】
1.I do hope you will give due attention to the matter.（我真的希望对此事您能给予足够的重视。）
2.To improve the situation, it is advisable for you to take the following measures.（为了改进这种情况，您最好采取以下措施。）
15.假如你是李华，你的加拿大好友Paul想要来中国旅游，你向他推荐了泉州。请根据以下提示写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
(1)表示欢迎；
(2)推荐理由；
(3)你的祝愿。
注意：
(1)词数80左右；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Paul,
I'm very glad to know that you will travel in China. I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to Quanzhou.
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Paul,
I'm very glad to know that you will travel in China. I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to Quanzhou.
Quanzhou is one of the most popular tourist destinations in China. ①It is not only a city with a long history but also has many wonderful places of interest, where you can enjoy yourself to the fullest. ②Besides, people in Quanzhou are very kind, friendly and willing to help, which will make your visit more comfortable. What's more, you will have a chance to enjoy delicious food there.
I do hope that you will have a good time in Quanzhou.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为推荐介绍，写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①pay a visit to参观
②to the fullest尽情地
【高分句型】
①It is not only a city with a long history but also has many wonderful places of interest, where you can enjoy yourself to the fullest. (where引导非限制性定语从句）
②Besides, people in Quanzhou are very kind, friendly and willing to help, which will make your visit more comfortable. (which引导非限制性定语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：说明写信目的
中心：可以介绍下列情况：(1)表示欢迎；(2)推荐理由
结尾：表达希望和祝愿
【拓展词汇】
①take...into consideration/account考虑……
②have a great fancy for喜爱
【拓展句型】
①I recommend it mainly for the following two reasons.（我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。）
②If you need further information, don't hesitate to contact me.（如果您需要更多的信息，请联系我。）
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