人教版（2019）必修 第一册Unit 4 Natural disasters单元话题写作（含解析）

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人教版（新课标）必修一UNIT4natural disaster +单元话题写作（含解析 高分句型 词汇）
考试范围：xxx；考试时间：100分钟；命题人：xxx
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
题号 一 总分
得分
一、书面表达：本大题共12小题，共300分。
1.假定你是校英语报记者李华，今天你校开展了地震应急疏散演练活动，请你就此次活动写一篇新闻报道，内容包括：
(1)活动目的；
(2)活动过程；
(3)你的感受。
注意：(1)词数80左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
提示词汇：地震应急疏散演练earthquake emergency evacuation drill
【答案】 To make us students know about how to protect ourselves during an earthquake, our school organized an earthquake emergency evacuation drill today.
Before the drill started, our teachers gave us some basic and useful instructions on what to do during an earthquake. When the alarm rang, students left the teaching building in order. Within a minute, all of the students gathered in the playground, for which we were praised by our headmaster.
This drill is really meaningful and helpful, from which we have learned some related skills in dealing with emergencies in an earthquake.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇新闻报道，属于应用文。人称为第一人称，时态为一般过去式。要求学生根据所给内容提示完成写作，注意衔接词的使用，注意高级词汇和复合句的使用，尽量使用自己熟悉的句式。注意书写工整。
【亮点词汇】
1.in order按顺序；
2.deal with处理；应付。
【高分句型】
1.Within a minute, all of the students gathered in the playground, for which we were praised by our headmaster.（介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句）
2.When the alarm rang, students left the teaching building in order.（when引导的时间状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：写活动目的；
中心：写地震应急演练的活动过程；
结尾：谈谈自己的感受。
【拓展词汇】
1.out of order没有顺序；混乱
2.do with处理；对付
【拓展句型】
It is so meaningful and helpful that we have learned some related skills in dealing with emergencies in an earthquake.(使用句式so……that……）
2.现在城市空气污染越来越严重，为解决这个问题，作为校学生会主席，请你用英语写一份倡议书，号召全校师生保护城市空气。内容要点如下：
1.城市空气污染的危害；
2.解决该问题的建议；
3.发出号召。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头与结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and students,
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【答案】Dear teachers and students,
These days one major environmental problem in our city is air pollution. ①Every day we have to take in very dirty air, which does great harm to our health.②To make the air in the city fresher, we should keep the following in mind.
Firstly, we should take a bus or ride a bicycle instead of driving a car and try to use cleaner fuels. Secondly, we should not throw litter here and there but put it into the dustbin. Thirdly, some factories should be closed or moved out of the city. Finally, we need to plant more trees or grass to make the air fresh.
Let's take action and try our best to make the air in the city cleaner!
Thank you!
【解析】略【思路点拨】
本文要求写一封倡议书。话题为号召全校师生保护城市空气。本文主要以第一人称书写，以一般现在时为主。
【亮点词汇】
①take in吸入
②do harm to对……有害
【高分句型】
①Every day we have to take in very dirty air, which does great harm to our health.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②To make the air in the city fresher, we should keep the following in mind.（不定式作目的状语）
【结构布局】
引言：发出倡议的背景和原因
中心：解决问题的具体建议
结尾：发出倡议
【拓展词汇】
①call on呼吁，号召
②be responsible for/take responsibility for对……负责
③be of great importance很重要
【拓展句型】
①I'm appealing to all of you to do sth. as a way to fight with/against sth.我呼吁大家做某事来作为抵制某事的一种方式。
②Confronted with ..., we should take a series of effective measure to do sth.面对……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……
③Every effort counts/makes a difference.一切努力都很重要。
3.根据提示内容，写一篇完整的短文。
(1)今年来全球极端气候和重大自然灾害越来越频繁，其中很大一部分是由人类活动所造成的。
(2)自然灾害的频繁发生警示人们要保护环境。我们可以植树节能减排；企业也应技术革新；全社会必须遵循3R原则共同努力。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】 Over the past years, there has been frequent extreme weather and natural disasters, such as floods, earthquakes and so on, killing millions of people and destroying countless homes. Improper human activities contribute a lot to those disasters. ①What we do is threatening human survival and development.
② So it is high time that we protected our environment. We students are supposed to reduce the use of vehicles and save resources like water and electricity. The factories also have been taking various measures, including the use of new technologies, to reduce pollution. Therefore environmental protection has to be a community—wide effort, and everyone can help by following the golden rule: reduce, reuse and recycle.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇短文写作，话题为介绍全球极端气候和重大自然灾害，写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①such as例如
②contribute to造成，导致
③be supposed to do应该
【高分句型】
①What we do is threatening human survival and development.（what引导的主语从句）
②So it is high time that we protected our environment.（虚拟语气）
【结构布局】
引言：介绍自然灾害现象
中心：分析原因；采取的措施
结尾：表达愿望，共同努力
【拓展词汇】
①arouse/raise people's awareness of environmental protection激发人们的环保意识
②make an effort to do sth.努力做某事
【拓展句型】
①If we don't take action to protect the environment on which we are relying, we will have to face an increasingly terrible situation.如果我们再不采取措施保护我们赖以生存的环境，我们将不得不面对越来越糟糕的情况。
②Efforts are supposed to be made to remind the public of the importance of protecting the environment.应当努力唤醒公众，让大家认识到保护环境的重要性。
4.假设你是红星中学高一学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在邮件中提到他得知你在学习自然灾害，很感兴趣。请你给他回信，内容包括：
(1)你的收获；
(2)你的感受；
注意：(1)词数不少于50；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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【答案】Dear Jim,
How is it going I m very glad to hear from you. Now I will introduce what I have learned about Natural Disasters.
It is well-known that many disasters happen every year, which causes great damage. In my country, two high magnitude earthquakes happened in Sichuan Province. Too many people lost their lives and the survivors were also badly injured. Children were left without parents. Thanks to the rescue workers, they dug out the people who were trapped and buried the dead. Food and water were provided timely. Under the help of the government, people in the earthquake-hit area rebuilt their homeland and live a happy life.
In my mind, natural disasters can t be prevented, but we can make a good preparation to keep them from becoming disasters. Therefore, to be ready, we should make a safety list of what to do, where to go and who to contact in case that we meet a disaster.
Do you have any good tips on earthquake safety Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】略
5.在过去的几年中，自然灾害频频发生，如：洪水、干旱、雾霾（haze）、风暴、沙漠化等灾难，破坏我们的家园和良田，甚至导致很多伤亡。幸运的是，越来越多的人意识到了灾难的发生和人类自身的行为息息相关。正是由于我们砍掉了太多的树木，有太多的污染，我们的环境和气候才变得如此不正常（abnormal）。地球是我们唯一的家园，我们应该意识到保护环境既非常必要又迫在眉睫！
请根据以上提示，用英语给21世纪报写一篇100词左右的文章。
In the past few years, there have been frequent natural disasters, such as
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【答案】 In the past few years, there have been frequent natural disasters, such as floods, droughts, haze, windstorms and desertification. The disasters have destroyed countless houses, wiped out numerous pieces of fertile land. and even killed many people.
①Now more and more people become aware that those disasters have much to do with what we have done to the earth. We have cut down too many trees in the forests, and we have badly polluted the environment. As a result, climate becomes abnormal, rainwater rushes down hillsides angrily, and the underground energy goes up violently.
The earth is our only home planet. ②It is urgent for us to stop damaging it, and to do our best to protect it and make it a lovely place suitable to live in.
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇提示作文，话题是在自然灾害频发的背景下，如何通过人类自身的行为改善地球的环境。要点已给出，动笔前，应想好内容框架，而后用正确的单词和语法将内容表达清楚。时态可结合现在完成时和一般现在时。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①have much to do with与……有很大关系
②as a result结果是
③do our best to尽全力去做某事
【高分句型】
①Now more and more people become aware that those disasters have much to do with what we have done to the earth.（that引导宾语从句；what引导宾语从句）
②It is urgent for us to stop damaging it, and to do our best to protect it and make it a lovely place suitable to live in.（it作形式主语）
【结构布局】
引言：近年来自然灾害的后果
中心：人类行为及影响
结尾：倡议保护地球环境
【拓展词汇】
①take action采取行动
②as far as sb. be concerned依某人来看
【拓展句型】
①If we don't take action to protect the environment on which we are relying, we will have to face an increasingly terrible situation. 如果我们再不采取措施保护我们赖以生存的环境，我们将不得不面对越来越糟糕的情况。
②Now more and more people become aware that the present environment has much to do with what we have done to the earth. 现在，越来越多的人开始认识到，目前的环境与我们对地球的所作所为有很大关系。
6.假如你是李华，你将为全班同学做一次主题为“如何防范台风”的英语演讲。请根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿。内容要点如下：
(1)台风给人们的生命和财产带来损失；
(2)防台措施：
①密切关注有关台风的报道，及时采取防范措施；
②位于低洼地带的人们，务必撤离以防洪涝灾害；
③……
注意：
(1)词数80左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(2)演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：财产property；低洼地带low-lying areas
Good afternoon, everyone,
I'm Li Hua, and it's my honor to give a speech about typhoon prevention.
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I hope we can be less affected by typhoon in the future.
【答案】 Good afternoon, everyone,
I'm Li Hua, and it's my honor to give a speech about typhoon prevention. As we know, a typhoon is one natural disaster that often occurs. ①Every time it happens, it always results in heavy losses to people's life and property. It is vital for us to learn how to protect ourselves from its damages.
Firstly, before the coming of typhoon we are supposed to pay close attention to the reports about it and take preventive measures in advance. Secondly, the people living in the low-lying areas should leave there to protect themselves from the flood. ②Last but not least, when a typhoon comes, we had better stay indoors and make sure that the doors and windows are closed tightly.
I hope we can be less affected by typhoon in the future.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文写作，是以“如何防范台风”为主题的英语演讲。本文主要使用第一人称，一般现在时来叙述。内容须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺。
【亮点词汇】
①be supposed to do应当做某事
②take preventive measures采取预防措施
【高分句型】
①Every time it happens, it always results in heavy losses to people's life and property.（every time引导的时间状语从句）
②Last but not least, when a typhoon comes, we had better stay indoors and make sure that the doors and windows are closed tightly.（when引导的时间状语从句；that引导的宾语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：引出话题
中心：说明防范台风的具体措施
结尾：表达希望
【拓展词汇】
①at an end结束
②bring about造成
③take on a new look呈现新面貌
【拓展句型】
①It is really amazing that the once-ruined town has now been transformed into a beautiful place, full of life.曾经满目疮痍的城镇已经变为一个美丽的生机勃勃的地方，真是令人惊讶。
②The heavy storm destroyed power facilities and some houses, cutting off power supplies in many areas and making many people homeless.暴雨破坏了电力设施和一些房屋，许多地方的电力供应被中断，许多人无家可归。
7.假定你是李华，当前濒临灭绝的动物数量日益增长，你作为校报小记者，刚刚进行了一次动物生存状况的调查，发现日常生活中我们有很多东西都与杀戮动物有关。请你根据以下要点在校报刊物上给全人类写一封信，号召大家保护动物。
(1)很多人使用皮毛制品，靠猎杀动物挣钱；
(2)为保护动物提出自己的建议；
(3)发出倡议，号召大家一起行动起来保护动物。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear human beings，
It is known that at present more and more wildlife is in danger of dying out.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear human beings,
It is known that at present more and more wildlife is being in danger of dying out. ①According to my research, there are many reasons which lead to it. Some people like wearing clothes made from animals fur and others hunt animals without mercy to make money. And even some endangered species become our dishes.
In order to prevent animals from extinction. ②We should first say no to the fur, which is made into our clothes. In the second place, anyone who hunt animals for money should be punished. Finally, it is necessary that the government set up more reserves to protect endangered species.
③Last, I'd like to call on all of us pay more attention to animals living conditions and work together to make sure they will not die out.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是写一篇倡议书，话题为保护动物。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①die out 灭绝
②without mercy 残忍地；毫不留情地
③set up建立
【高分句型】
① According to my research, there are many reasons which lead to it.（which引导的定语从句）
② In the second place, anyone who hunt animals for money should be punished.（who引导的定语从句）
③Last, I'd like to call on all of us pay more attention to animals living conditions and work together to make sure they will not die out.(不定式作目的状语。）
【结构布局】
引言：写明现状
中心：提出自己的建议
结尾：号召大家保护动物
【拓展词汇】
①be responsible for/take responsibility for对……负责
② take measures/steps/action采取措施
【拓展句型】
①Every effort counts/makes a difference.一切努力都很重要。
② Confronted with ..., we should take a series of effective measure to do sth.面对……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……
8.假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地社区正在招募志愿者进行自然灾害知识宣传。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
(1)写信目的；
(2)个人优势；
(3)能做的事情。
注意：
(1)词数80左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I am Li Hua, a Chinese student studying in London. ①Knowing that you are launching a campaign to educate locals about natural disasters, I am writing to apply for the chance to become a volunteer.
I believe I am qualified. ②Firstly, having a good command of English, I'm capable of communicating with locals without difficulty. Secondly, equipped with necessary knowledge of natural disasters, if accepted, I can share with locals the causes, signs, consequences, and safety tips in the face of disasters, improving their environmental awareness and chances of surviving them.
I would appreciate it if you could give me a chance. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，要求写一封信申请做志愿者，根据题干要求，短文从三个方面进行写作，用一般现在时，人称代词以第一人称为主，要确保要点齐全，句子通顺。
【亮点词汇】
①apply for 申请
②have a good command of 精通；掌握
③be capable of 有……能力的
④be equipped with 装备着……
【高分句型】
①Knowing that you are launching a campaign to educate locals about natural disasters, I am writing to apply for the chance to become a volunteer.（动词的-ing形式作状语；that引导宾语从句）
②Firstly, having a good command of English, I'm capable of communicating with locals without difficulty.（动词的-ing形式作状语）
【结构布局】
引言：表明写信目的
中心：介绍个人优势和才能
结尾：提出希望
【拓展词汇】
①consideration 考虑
②responsibility 责任
③qualification 资格
④be qualified/suitable/fit for 适合
⑤live up to one's expectations 不辜负某人的期望
【拓展句型】
①I request an interview, and assure you that if appointed, I will do my best to give you satisfaction.恳请惠予面试之荣，入蒙录用，本人必竭尽全力，以符厚望。
②I have been studying in physical geography since high school, and have therefore gained rich knowledge and experience in this field.自从上高中以来，我一直在学习研究自然地理，因此获得了与该领域相关的丰富的知识和经验。
9.最近学校正在展开一场急救知识普及活动，就此你所在的班级举行了一场讨论会，并提出以下几点建议。现请你根据以下要点以First Aid in Fires为题写一篇文章，说明发生火灾时要注意的几点事项，贴在班级的板报上。
注意事项：
(1)不要惊慌，保持冷静；
(2)室内有浓烟时，身体尽量低一些，用湿毛巾捂住鼻子和嘴巴逃出；
(3)不要乘坐电梯或从高层跳下；
(4)你自己还有什么好的建议。
注意：
(1)词数80个左右；
(2)可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
First Aid in Fires
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【答案】First Aid in Fires ①It is important to know what to do when you are in dangerous situations such as a fire.
When you are caught in a fire, don't panic. Firstly, you should call 119 and report it to firemen at once. ②If you are in thick smoke, keep close to the ground and use a wet towel to cover your mouth and nose. Secondly, don't take a lift or jump from a high building. Thirdly, don't be unwilling to leave your money or other things behind. You should try to get away from the fire as quickly as you can. After all, life is more important. Once you get out of the fire, don't go back into it again.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文话题为一篇建议，说明发生火灾时要注意的几点事项。写作时，应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，以充实文章内容。
【亮点词汇】
①in dangerous situations处于危险的情况
②be caught in...被困于......
③panic惊慌
④be unwilling to do...不愿意做......
⑤get away from...远离......
【高分句型】
①It is important to know what to do when you are in dangerous situations such as a fire.（it作形式主语；what引导宾语从句；when引导的时间状语从句）
②If you are in thick smoke, keep close to the ground and use a wet towel to cover your mouth and nose.（if引导的条件状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：说明建议的原因
中心：说明发生火灾时要注意的几点事项
结尾：自己的建议及总结
【拓展词汇】
①as far as sb. be concerned依某人来看
②be of some help to...对……有所帮助
③give/offer sb. advice/tips/suggestions on sth.在某方面给某人建议
【拓展句型】
①You may as well/had better do...（你不妨/最好做……）
②Confronted with dangerous situations, we should take a series of effective measure to ensure safety.（面对危险的处境，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来确保安全。）
10.期末考试即将来临，为了让大家缓解学习压力，上周末你班组织了一次“冬游西山”活动。请你就本次活动为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
(1)活动过程；
(2)个人感受。
注意：
(1)词数80左右，题目已写好；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
A Winter Outing to the West Hill
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【答案】A Winter Outing to the West Hill
①Last weekend, we took part in a winter outing to the West Hill organized by our class, which turned out to be so successful that it was highly thought of.
At 10 am, we gathered and began heading for our chosen destination—the Summer Palace of Emperor Wu. ②On the way, not only did we breathe fresh air but appreciated amazing scenery. ③Besides, we had many beautiful pictures taken and enjoyed a wonderful picnic, after which we played games. Everybody had lots of fun.
This activity rewarded us with an unforgettable memory. Our anxiety caused by the final examination has been relieved and the relationship among students also has been strengthened.
【解析】略【思路点拨】
本文是一篇命题写作，写一篇报道，写作时多以一般过去时为主，注意适当增加高级词汇和正确句式的使用，可适当增加衔接词以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①turn out结果是，证明是
②think highly of高度评价
③head for前往，出发
【高分句型】
①Last weekend, we took part in a winter outing to the West Hill organized by our class, which turned out to be so successful that it was highly thought of.（which引导的非限制性定语从句；so...that引导的结果状语从句）
②On the way, not only did we breathe fresh air but appreciated amazing scenery.（not only引导的句子主谓部分倒装）
③Besides, we had many beautiful pictures taken and enjoyed a wonderful picnic, after which we played games.（介词+关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：说明活动主题
中心：写出活动过程及具体内容
结尾：总结活动感受和意义
【拓展词汇】
①be in harmony with sb.与某人和谐相处
②promote/improve relationship/friendship促进/改善关系/友谊
③arouse one's interest激发某人的兴趣
【拓展句型】
①A wide variety of interests and hobbies will broaden our horizons, enrich the school life and make us relaxed.（丰富多彩的兴趣爱好让我们开阔眼界，充实学校生活，还能使我们得到放松。）
②Taking proper measures to deal with pressure is of great importance.（采取适当的措施处理压力很重要。）
11.洪水、火山爆发、地震和海啸等自然灾害经常会不期而至。面对自然灾害我们应该怎么做呢？请你根据以下要点提示以How to deal with natural disasters为题写一篇英语短文。
(1)自然灾害造成的损失惨重；
(2)我们应该掌握有关自然灾害的知识并做好充分准备；当自然灾害来临时，要坚定信念，并团结一致，保持镇静，努力自救和帮助他人。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】How to deal with natural disasters Natural disasters, such as floods, volcanic eruptions, earthquakes and tsunamis, can happen at any time. They often cause a sad loss of life and damage. How should we deal with them
First of all, we should master rich knowledge about natural disasters and make adequate preparations for them. Secondly, ①when natural disasters really happen, we should have a firm belief and unite to fight against them. As the old saying goes, "Many hands make light work." Moreover, we should keep calm and try to save ourselves and help others. ②Only in this way can we defeat natural disasters in the end.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文要求按照要点提示以How to deal with natural disasters为题写一篇英语短文。短文以一般现在时进行写作，人称代词以第一人称为主。要确保要点齐全，句子通顺。
【亮点词汇】
①deal with 处理/应对
②keep calm 保持冷静
③first of all 首先
【高分句型】
①when natural disasters really happen, we should have a firm belief and unite to fight against them.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Only in this way can we defeat natural disasters in the end.（only+状语位于句首的部分倒装）
【结构布局】
引言：自然灾害造成的损失惨重
中心：面对自然灾害的做法
结尾：战胜自然灾害的决心
【拓展词汇】
①gain a lot of knowledge of safety 获得大量的安全知识；
②at least 至少；
③pay more attention to 多加注意
【拓展句型】
①When caught in a flood, you should find a tall tree or walk onto a higher floor.（当遇到洪水时，你应该找到一棵大树或走到更高的楼层。）
②In conclusion, I believe human beings can win the war against natural disasters as long as we have a positive attitude.（总之，我相信人类可以战胜自然灾害，只要我们有一个积极的态度。）
12. 假如你是李华，上周末去某个岛上游玩，看见很多可爱的动物，听岛上的一位老人说，现在动物的数量日渐减少，如果不采取措施，有些动物可能会灭绝。回来后，你给校报写信，就保护野生动物提出一些建议。
注意：
(1)词数80左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Animals are our friends, which are very important to our world.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
①Animals are our friends, which are very important to our world. We should try our best to protect them.
However, some wild animals are in danger of extinction. ②It is human's activities that have damaged some animals' habitats. Some hunters harmed them to make a profit. In addition, some wild animals have died due to the terrible climate. As a consequence, many rare wild animals have disappeared from the earth.
It is time that we took some measures to protect the animals. The government should make some laws to protect them. It is our duty to make the earth a nice place for the wild animals to live in.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文要求给学校英文报纸写信，需写成书信体。写作的时候，注意把提示内容描写清楚，要点要全，可适当发挥。要做到层次清晰，表达准确、流畅。同时，为了提高文章档次，应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，让文章更上档次。本文应以一般现在时和第一人称为主，同时要使用合适的连接词，使句子与句子间更有条理、更流畅。
【亮点词汇】
①try one's best尽最大努力
②due to因为/由于
③as a consequence因此
【高分句型】
①Animals are our friends, which are very important to our world.（which引导的定语从句）
②It is human s activities that have damaged some animals habitats.（强调句型）
【结构布局】
引言：动物的重要性
中心：动物的现状
结尾：保护措施
【拓展词汇】
①with the development of... 随着……的发展
②in danger of extinction处于濒临灭绝的危险中
【拓展句型】
① Efforts are supposed to be made to remind the public of the importance of protecting the endangered animals. 应当努力唤醒公众，让大家认识到保护濒危动物的重要性。
②There is no immediate solution to the problem, but doing a bit by everyone must make a difference. 没有解决问题的快速办法，但每个人从小事做起会有作用。
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