人教版（2019）必修 第一册Unit 5 Languages around the world单元话题写作（含解析）
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人教版（新课标）必修一UNIT5langes around the world +单元话题写作（含解析 高分句型 词汇）
考试范围：xxx；考试时间：100分钟；命题人：xxx
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
题号 一 总分
得分
一、书面表达：本大题共9小题，共225分。
1. 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter想提高中文水平，进一步了解中国文化。请给他写一封信，推荐学习资源（resource）。内容包括：
(1)学习资源：报纸、杂志及其他途径；
(2)推荐理由；
(3)表达祝愿。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I am glad to hear that you are eager to improve your Chinese and know more about Chinese culture. It's my pleasure to recommend you some resources.
①Reading some popular newspapers and magazines, such as Southern Weekly, is the first choice, from which you can get lots of information about Chinese customs. Besides, there are other ways to experience the Chinese language and culture on the Internet, on TV or with some apps. ②The interesting news and stories in these resources are so amazing that you will never feel bored. I am sure you can benefit a lot from them.
I sincerely hope that you can make great progress in learning Chinese and have a better understanding of Chinese culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇文字提示类作文。需要写的内容以提纲形式已经给出，但写作时不要拘泥于对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使行文连贯，文章看起来更充实。文章多用现在时，注意时态灵活变化，语句衔接连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①be eager to do sth.渴望做某事
②benefit from得益于
【高分句型】
①Reading some popular newspapers and magazines, such as Southern Weekly, is the first choice, from which you can get lots of information about Chinese customs.（动名词作主语；介词+which引导非限制性定语从句）
②The interesting news and stories in these resources are so amazing that you will never feel bored.（so...that...引导结果状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：介绍写信的目的
中心：推荐学习资源
结尾：表达祝愿
【拓展词汇】
①pick up偶然习得
②refer to/consult a dictionary查词典
③have a good command of精通
【拓展句型】
①The reason why I recommend sth. is that ...我推荐某物的原因是……
②As the saying goes, "Practice makes perfect." Only by practicing will we make greater progress.俗话说“熟能生巧”。只有通过练习我们才会取得更大的进步。
2.假定你是李华，新学期你校来了一位英国留学生Mark。他希望有人能帮助他提高普通话（Mandarin）水平，他以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给他写封电子邮件，内容包括：
(1)表达你的意愿；
(2)说明你的优势；
(3)提出你学英语的需求。
注意：
(1)词数80左右；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________________
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【答案】Dear Mark,
①Learning that you want to improve your Mandarin, I'm writing to offer my help.
For one thing, I have a good command of Chinese and I got the first prize in Mandarin speaking contest. For another, I am willing to help others. Meanwhile, I want to speak fluent English. ②If you could help me with my oral English, we can improve ourselves together. It would be a win-win choice. If you agree, we can meet face to face to talk about the details.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为推荐自己帮助Mark提高普通话。并希望能学习英语，写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①have a good command of对……掌握熟练
②face to face面对面
【高分句型】
①Learning that you want to improve your Mandarin, I'm writing to offer my help.（动词的-ing形式作状语；宾语从句）
②If you could help me with my oral English, we can improve ourselves together.（if引导的条件状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：写信的目的
中心：介绍能够胜任的原因，并表达自己的需求
结尾：期待回复
【拓展词汇】
1. consideration考虑
2. be qualified/suitable/fit for适合
3. live up to one's expectations不辜负某人的期望
【拓展句型】
1. I am confident that I am suitable for .../I am qualified to do .../I am equal to doing ...我相信我适合……/有做……的资格/能胜任做……
2. If you think I am the perfect person for ..., please contact me at your earliest convenience.如果您认为我是……的最佳人选，请尽早联系我。
3. Not only am I good at ... but also I am experienced in ...我不仅擅长……而且在……方面有经验。
3.假定你是李华，是某国际学校的学生。学校计划面向全校国际交换生举办汉语才艺（talent）秀，请给刚来到你校的交换生Peter写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加此次活动。内容包括：
(1)活动的时间和地点；
(2)活动的内容和要求；
(3)报名方式和截止日期。
注意：(1)词数80左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________
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【答案】Dear Peter,
A Chinese Talent Show is to be held on December 20 for international exchange students in our school and I'm writing to invite you to take part in it.
The show is expected to last from 9:00 am to 11:30 am in the school hall. Each student has three to five minutes to perform. You can sing a Chinese song or recite a Chinese poem. If interested, please sign up by sending an email to chinesetalentshow@ before December 12.
I am looking forward to your participation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为邀请参加才艺秀，写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
sign up报名
【高分句型】
If interested, please sign up by sending an email to chinesetalentshow@ before December 12.（省略句）
【结构布局】
引言：提出举办活动及写信目的
中心：活动细节
结尾：提出期盼
【拓展词汇】
①invitation 邀请
②confirm one's participation确认参加
【拓展句型】
①It's my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to join us in...我非常高兴/荣幸的邀请您和我们一起……
②Some details about...are as follows.……的细节如下。
4.假如你是高一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。
(1)对英语学习的认识；
(2)自己目前的英语水平；
(3)自己英语学习存在的主要问题。
注意：(1)词数80左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Ms Li,
I am very happy to have you as our English teacher.
As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window .
My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words.
Thank you !
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】略
5.假如你是李华，寒假期间你准备和家人去香港迪士尼乐园玩，你想了解有关订票方面的具体情况，例如，可否在网上订票？团体购票是否可以打折？可否因故取消订票？请给迪士尼乐园发一封邮件，询问有关情况。
注意：
1．词数：80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
How are you getting on？I'm going to visit the Disneyland with my family this winter holiday.I'm writing to ask something about the tickets.（写信目的）
Here are my questions.First,shall I book the tickets on the Internet？（可否在网上订票？）Second,whether can group tickets be discounted？（团体购票是否可以打折？）Third,can I cancel my booking for some reason？（可否因故取消订票？）My family and I have been longing to visit the nice place for years.I'm sure that we will have a good time there.【高分句型一】（展望）
I would appreciate it if you could offer me some other useful advice about this visit.【高分句型二】（感谢）
Looking forward to your early reply.（盼望）
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】高分句型一：I'm sure that we will have a good time there.
译文：我相信我们在那里会玩得很开心。
分析：这句话使用了that引导宾语从句。
高分句型二：I would appreciate it if you could offer me some other useful advice about this visit.
译文：如果你能就这次访问向我提供一些其他有用的建议，我将不胜感激。
分析：这句话使用了appreciate it if+从句，意为"如果...我会很感激"。
开放类作文的特点
1）文章扣题：
描述有的放矢，突出主题；
2）思维活跃：
发散思维空间，学生从不同的、全新的角度看待分析一个事物或现象。
3）内容健康充实：
内容要点乐观向上，以积极的态度进行表达。
6.进入高中后，丰富多彩的英语课堂活动一定给你留下了许多难忘的印象。学校英语报社以“What should we do in English class ”为题征文。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文，谈谈在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做，才能使英语学习更有效。
1.认真倾听老师，记好笔记；
2.积极参与英语课堂活动；3.自信，不怕犯错。
注意：
1.文稿须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3.词数：100左右。
【答案】 What should we do in English class In order to learn English effectively, the most important thing we should do in English class is to listen to the teacher carefully. ①There is no doubt that the more carefully you listen, the more useful information you can get. ②Besides, taking notes is also a good way to make you concentrate on the class.
In addition, we are supposed to take part in all kinds of class activities. For example, we need to work in groups with our classmates and talk with them in English.
Last but not least, it is very important for us to be confident. As a proverb goes, confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success. We shouldn't be afraid of making mistakes in class. Only in this way can we improve our English.
③In a word, I believe as long as we remember all these tips , we will surely make progress in English and learn English well.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文为命题写作，要求以“What should we do in English class ”为题写一篇征文，谈谈在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做，才能使英语学习更有效。注意提示和要求，尽量用自己熟悉的词汇和句型来表达，同时也要适当运用一些高级词汇和复合句，为文章增添色彩。
【亮点词汇】
1.In order to为了
2.concentrate on集中注意力于
3.be supposed to do sth.应该做某事
【高分句型】
1.There is no doubt that the more carefully you listen, the more useful information you can get.（that引导的同位语从句；the more....the more...句型）
2.Besides, taking notes is also a good way to make you concentrate on the class.（动词-ing形式作主语）
3.In a word, I believe as long as we remember all these tips , we will surely make progress in English and learn English well.（省略that的宾语从句；as long as引导的条件状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：引入主题
中心：提出观点
结尾：总结
【拓展词汇】
1.absorb吸收，理解
2.grasp掌握
3.usage用法
4.pronunciation发音
5.express oneself in English fluently用英语流利地表达自己
【拓展句型】
1.We are supposed to learn English well, because having a good command of English means more opportunities in the future. 我们应该学好英语，因为精通英语意味着在将来有更多的机会。
2.By learning English we can have our horizons broadened and our knowledge increased in various fields. 通过学习英语，我们能开阔并增加我们在各领域的知识。
7. 假定你是李华，在新西兰做交换生（exchange student）。你得知你所在学校的老师Mr Smith想找一位中国学生教他上小学的女儿中文。请给他写一封信，内容包括：
(1)简单的自我介绍；
(2)个人优势；
(3)自己的空闲时间。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出。
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【答案】Dear Mr Smith
I'm Li Hua, a Chinese exchange student in the school where you work. I got to know you want a Chinese student to teach your daughter Chinese. I think I can be fit for it and I'm sure I'll be your best choice.
Firstly, I have a good knowledge of Chinese culture, so I can help your daughter love leaming Chinese
Secondly, I'm outgoing, so there's no need for you to worry about our communication. ①Besides, I've had some experience from teaching several British primary students, which will make me know how to teach your daughter. Lastly, I'm free on Wednesday afternoons, Thursday afternoons and weekends
②I'd appreciate it if you can give me an early reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，要求写一封自荐信，要点已给出，应以一般现在时为主，写作时注意不要遗漏要点，添加适当的过渡词使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
1.have a good knowledge of 通晓......;
2.there's no need for you to do sth 对某人来说没有必要做某事.
【高分句型】
①Besides, I've had some experience from teaching several British primary students, which will make me know how to teach your daughter.(which引导非限制定语从句）
②I'd appreciate it if you can give me an early reply.（it 形式宾语，if引导的真正的宾语从句）
【结构布局】
开头：自我介绍，表明想教对方女儿汉语的意图。
中心：介绍个人优势，空闲时间等。
结尾：盼望对方给予答复。
8. 你校即将举办“中美汉语桥”，旨在帮助美国友好学校的同学们了解汉语和中国文化。现招募志愿者，假如你是李华，你想报名参加，请你写一封英文自荐信。内容应包括：
（1) 申请理由；
（2) 个人特长（语言、书法等）；
（3) 期待回复。
注意：
（1) 词数100词左右；
（2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3) 开头已为你写好。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm more than pleased to learn that volunteers are wanted for the "Sino-US Chinese Bridge". I'm writing to ______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm more than pleased to learn that volunteers are wanted for the "Sino-US Chinese Bridge". I'm writing to apply for the job.
I'm Li Hua, a passionate student and keen learner, willing to grasp the opportunity to gain some practical experiences.① Not only will serving as a volunteer cultivate communication skills, but also it is beneficial to broaden my horizons.
I'm confident to be the most appropriate candidate for this exchange activity.②I can speak fluent English, which makes it possible to get along well with others. Besides, I'm an enthusiast for Chinese traditional cultures and calligraphy so that I can share what I've learned with our American friends. I do believe I'm capable of making a modest contribution to strengthening the bonds between Chinese and American students.
Your favorable consideration of my application will be highly appreciated. I'm looking forward to the reply at your earliest convenience
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一封自荐信，要求报名参加“中美汉语桥”志愿者活动。全文应用一般现在时，注意词汇和句型的准确使用；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①more than，很，非常......
②apply for申请
③be willing to do sth.乐意干某事
④be beneficial to对......有益
⑤make a...contribution to 对......做出贡献
⑥at one's convenience在某人方便时
【高分句型】
①Not only will serving as a volunteer cultivate communication skills, but also it is beneficial to broaden my horizons.（not only引导的部分倒装句）
②I can speak fluent English, which makes it possible to get along well with others. (which引导的非限制性定语从句；it作形式宾语）
【结构布局】
引言：申请理由；
中心：个人特长；
结尾：期待回复。
9. 12月3日是世界助残日（the World Disability Day）。请你以学校英语俱乐部的名义向同学们写一封倡议书，内容包括：
（1）今年活动的主题：我为残疾人做点什么？
（2）活动安排：助残日当天，访问残疾人。
（3）呼吁：积极加入俱乐部今后的助残活动。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
The Students English Club
【答案】 Dear friends,
December 3, the World Disability Day, is around the corner. ①To show our great concern about the disabled, we Students English Club will organize an activity with the theme "What can we do for the disabled". Anyone who volunteers can join us. ②On that day, we will visit some disabled people near our school, doing some work for them, such as cleaning their houses and washing clothes.
In the future, our club will stick at this kind of voluntary activity on a long-term basis to make it a rule. Everyone of us is welcome to get a disabled person as a partner. Let's work together to promote the well-being of persons with disabilities. ③Whatever little help you can give will make a big difference.
The Students English Club
【解析】【审题谋篇】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为在世界助残日发出“我为残疾人做点什么”的倡议，写作时要注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一些衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【结构布局】
引言：表明发出倡议的原因
中心：介绍主题以及活动安排
结尾：呼吁和期待
【亮点词汇】
①around the corner即将到来
②such as例如
③stick at 坚持
④promote促进，发扬
⑤make a big difference起很大的作用
【高分句型】
①To show our great concern about the disabled, we Students English Club will organize an activity with the theme "What can we do for the disabled". （动词不定式表目的）
②On that day, we will visit some disabled people near our school, doing some work for them, such as cleaning their houses and washing clothes.（动词的-ing形式作状语）
③Whatever little help you can give will make a big difference.（whatever引导的主语从句）
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考试范围：xxx；考试时间：100分钟；命题人：xxx
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
题号 一 总分
得分
一、书面表达：本大题共9小题，共225分。
1. 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter想提高中文水平，进一步了解中国文化。请给他写一封信，推荐学习资源（resource）。内容包括：
(1)学习资源：报纸、杂志及其他途径；
(2)推荐理由；
(3)表达祝愿。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I am glad to hear that you are eager to improve your Chinese and know more about Chinese culture. It's my pleasure to recommend you some resources.
①Reading some popular newspapers and magazines, such as Southern Weekly, is the first choice, from which you can get lots of information about Chinese customs. Besides, there are other ways to experience the Chinese language and culture on the Internet, on TV or with some apps. ②The interesting news and stories in these resources are so amazing that you will never feel bored. I am sure you can benefit a lot from them.
I sincerely hope that you can make great progress in learning Chinese and have a better understanding of Chinese culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇文字提示类作文。需要写的内容以提纲形式已经给出，但写作时不要拘泥于对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使行文连贯，文章看起来更充实。文章多用现在时，注意时态灵活变化，语句衔接连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①be eager to do sth.渴望做某事
②benefit from得益于
【高分句型】
①Reading some popular newspapers and magazines, such as Southern Weekly, is the first choice, from which you can get lots of information about Chinese customs.（动名词作主语；介词+which引导非限制性定语从句）
②The interesting news and stories in these resources are so amazing that you will never feel bored.（so...that...引导结果状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：介绍写信的目的
中心：推荐学习资源
结尾：表达祝愿
【拓展词汇】
①pick up偶然习得
②refer to/consult a dictionary查词典
③have a good command of精通
【拓展句型】
①The reason why I recommend sth. is that ...我推荐某物的原因是……
②As the saying goes, "Practice makes perfect." Only by practicing will we make greater progress.俗话说“熟能生巧”。只有通过练习我们才会取得更大的进步。
2.假定你是李华，新学期你校来了一位英国留学生Mark。他希望有人能帮助他提高普通话（Mandarin）水平，他以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给他写封电子邮件，内容包括：
(1)表达你的意愿；
(2)说明你的优势；
(3)提出你学英语的需求。
注意：
(1)词数80左右；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Mark,
①Learning that you want to improve your Mandarin, I'm writing to offer my help.
For one thing, I have a good command of Chinese and I got the first prize in Mandarin speaking contest. For another, I am willing to help others. Meanwhile, I want to speak fluent English. ②If you could help me with my oral English, we can improve ourselves together. It would be a win-win choice. If you agree, we can meet face to face to talk about the details.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为推荐自己帮助Mark提高普通话。并希望能学习英语，写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①have a good command of对……掌握熟练
②face to face面对面
【高分句型】
①Learning that you want to improve your Mandarin, I'm writing to offer my help.（动词的-ing形式作状语；宾语从句）
②If you could help me with my oral English, we can improve ourselves together.（if引导的条件状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：写信的目的
中心：介绍能够胜任的原因，并表达自己的需求
结尾：期待回复
【拓展词汇】
1. consideration考虑
2. be qualified/suitable/fit for适合
3. live up to one's expectations不辜负某人的期望
【拓展句型】
1. I am confident that I am suitable for .../I am qualified to do .../I am equal to doing ...我相信我适合……/有做……的资格/能胜任做……
2. If you think I am the perfect person for ..., please contact me at your earliest convenience.如果您认为我是……的最佳人选，请尽早联系我。
3. Not only am I good at ... but also I am experienced in ...我不仅擅长……而且在……方面有经验。
3.假定你是李华，是某国际学校的学生。学校计划面向全校国际交换生举办汉语才艺（talent）秀，请给刚来到你校的交换生Peter写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加此次活动。内容包括：
(1)活动的时间和地点；
(2)活动的内容和要求；
(3)报名方式和截止日期。
注意：(1)词数80左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________
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【答案】Dear Peter,
A Chinese Talent Show is to be held on December 20 for international exchange students in our school and I'm writing to invite you to take part in it.
The show is expected to last from 9:00 am to 11:30 am in the school hall. Each student has three to five minutes to perform. You can sing a Chinese song or recite a Chinese poem. If interested, please sign up by sending an email to chinesetalentshow@ before December 12.
I am looking forward to your participation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为邀请参加才艺秀，写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
sign up报名
【高分句型】
If interested, please sign up by sending an email to chinesetalentshow@ before December 12.（省略句）
【结构布局】
引言：提出举办活动及写信目的
中心：活动细节
结尾：提出期盼
【拓展词汇】
①invitation 邀请
②confirm one's participation确认参加
【拓展句型】
①It's my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to join us in...我非常高兴/荣幸的邀请您和我们一起……
②Some details about...are as follows.……的细节如下。
4.假如你是高一年级新生李华。开学之初，你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。
(1)对英语学习的认识；
(2)自己目前的英语水平；
(3)自己英语学习存在的主要问题。
注意：(1)词数80左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________
【答案】Dear Ms Li,
I am very happy to have you as our English teacher.
As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window .
My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words.
Thank you !
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】略
5.假如你是李华，寒假期间你准备和家人去香港迪士尼乐园玩，你想了解有关订票方面的具体情况，例如，可否在网上订票？团体购票是否可以打折？可否因故取消订票？请给迪士尼乐园发一封邮件，询问有关情况。
注意：
1．词数：80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
How are you getting on？I'm going to visit the Disneyland with my family this winter holiday.I'm writing to ask something about the tickets.（写信目的）
Here are my questions.First,shall I book the tickets on the Internet？（可否在网上订票？）Second,whether can group tickets be discounted？（团体购票是否可以打折？）Third,can I cancel my booking for some reason？（可否因故取消订票？）My family and I have been longing to visit the nice place for years.I'm sure that we will have a good time there.【高分句型一】（展望）
I would appreciate it if you could offer me some other useful advice about this visit.【高分句型二】（感谢）
Looking forward to your early reply.（盼望）
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】高分句型一：I'm sure that we will have a good time there.
译文：我相信我们在那里会玩得很开心。
分析：这句话使用了that引导宾语从句。
高分句型二：I would appreciate it if you could offer me some other useful advice about this visit.
译文：如果你能就这次访问向我提供一些其他有用的建议，我将不胜感激。
分析：这句话使用了appreciate it if+从句，意为"如果...我会很感激"。
开放类作文的特点
1）文章扣题：
描述有的放矢，突出主题；
2）思维活跃：
发散思维空间，学生从不同的、全新的角度看待分析一个事物或现象。
3）内容健康充实：
内容要点乐观向上，以积极的态度进行表达。
6.进入高中后，丰富多彩的英语课堂活动一定给你留下了许多难忘的印象。学校英语报社以“What should we do in English class ”为题征文。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文，谈谈在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做，才能使英语学习更有效。
1.认真倾听老师，记好笔记；
2.积极参与英语课堂活动；3.自信，不怕犯错。
注意：
1.文稿须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3.词数：100左右。
【答案】 What should we do in English class In order to learn English effectively, the most important thing we should do in English class is to listen to the teacher carefully. ①There is no doubt that the more carefully you listen, the more useful information you can get. ②Besides, taking notes is also a good way to make you concentrate on the class.
In addition, we are supposed to take part in all kinds of class activities. For example, we need to work in groups with our classmates and talk with them in English.
Last but not least, it is very important for us to be confident. As a proverb goes, confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success. We shouldn't be afraid of making mistakes in class. Only in this way can we improve our English.
③In a word, I believe as long as we remember all these tips , we will surely make progress in English and learn English well.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文为命题写作，要求以“What should we do in English class ”为题写一篇征文，谈谈在英语课堂上学生应该怎样做，才能使英语学习更有效。注意提示和要求，尽量用自己熟悉的词汇和句型来表达，同时也要适当运用一些高级词汇和复合句，为文章增添色彩。
【亮点词汇】
1.In order to为了
2.concentrate on集中注意力于
3.be supposed to do sth.应该做某事
【高分句型】
1.There is no doubt that the more carefully you listen, the more useful information you can get.（that引导的同位语从句；the more....the more...句型）
2.Besides, taking notes is also a good way to make you concentrate on the class.（动词-ing形式作主语）
3.In a word, I believe as long as we remember all these tips , we will surely make progress in English and learn English well.（省略that的宾语从句；as long as引导的条件状语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：引入主题
中心：提出观点
结尾：总结
【拓展词汇】
1.absorb吸收，理解
2.grasp掌握
3.usage用法
4.pronunciation发音
5.express oneself in English fluently用英语流利地表达自己
【拓展句型】
1.We are supposed to learn English well, because having a good command of English means more opportunities in the future. 我们应该学好英语，因为精通英语意味着在将来有更多的机会。
2.By learning English we can have our horizons broadened and our knowledge increased in various fields. 通过学习英语，我们能开阔并增加我们在各领域的知识。
7. 假定你是李华，在新西兰做交换生（exchange student）。你得知你所在学校的老师Mr Smith想找一位中国学生教他上小学的女儿中文。请给他写一封信，内容包括：
(1)简单的自我介绍；
(2)个人优势；
(3)自己的空闲时间。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出。
______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Mr Smith
I'm Li Hua, a Chinese exchange student in the school where you work. I got to know you want a Chinese student to teach your daughter Chinese. I think I can be fit for it and I'm sure I'll be your best choice.
Firstly, I have a good knowledge of Chinese culture, so I can help your daughter love leaming Chinese
Secondly, I'm outgoing, so there's no need for you to worry about our communication. ①Besides, I've had some experience from teaching several British primary students, which will make me know how to teach your daughter. Lastly, I'm free on Wednesday afternoons, Thursday afternoons and weekends
②I'd appreciate it if you can give me an early reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，要求写一封自荐信，要点已给出，应以一般现在时为主，写作时注意不要遗漏要点，添加适当的过渡词使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
1.have a good knowledge of 通晓......;
2.there's no need for you to do sth 对某人来说没有必要做某事.
【高分句型】
①Besides, I've had some experience from teaching several British primary students, which will make me know how to teach your daughter.(which引导非限制定语从句）
②I'd appreciate it if you can give me an early reply.（it 形式宾语，if引导的真正的宾语从句）
【结构布局】
开头：自我介绍，表明想教对方女儿汉语的意图。
中心：介绍个人优势，空闲时间等。
结尾：盼望对方给予答复。
8. 你校即将举办“中美汉语桥”，旨在帮助美国友好学校的同学们了解汉语和中国文化。现招募志愿者，假如你是李华，你想报名参加，请你写一封英文自荐信。内容应包括：
（1) 申请理由；
（2) 个人特长（语言、书法等）；
（3) 期待回复。
注意：
（1) 词数100词左右；
（2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3) 开头已为你写好。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm more than pleased to learn that volunteers are wanted for the "Sino-US Chinese Bridge". I'm writing to ______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm more than pleased to learn that volunteers are wanted for the "Sino-US Chinese Bridge". I'm writing to apply for the job.
I'm Li Hua, a passionate student and keen learner, willing to grasp the opportunity to gain some practical experiences.① Not only will serving as a volunteer cultivate communication skills, but also it is beneficial to broaden my horizons.
I'm confident to be the most appropriate candidate for this exchange activity.②I can speak fluent English, which makes it possible to get along well with others. Besides, I'm an enthusiast for Chinese traditional cultures and calligraphy so that I can share what I've learned with our American friends. I do believe I'm capable of making a modest contribution to strengthening the bonds between Chinese and American students.
Your favorable consideration of my application will be highly appreciated. I'm looking forward to the reply at your earliest convenience
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一封自荐信，要求报名参加“中美汉语桥”志愿者活动。全文应用一般现在时，注意词汇和句型的准确使用；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①more than，很，非常......
②apply for申请
③be willing to do sth.乐意干某事
④be beneficial to对......有益
⑤make a...contribution to 对......做出贡献
⑥at one's convenience在某人方便时
【高分句型】
①Not only will serving as a volunteer cultivate communication skills, but also it is beneficial to broaden my horizons.（not only引导的部分倒装句）
②I can speak fluent English, which makes it possible to get along well with others. (which引导的非限制性定语从句；it作形式宾语）
【结构布局】
引言：申请理由；
中心：个人特长；
结尾：期待回复。
9. 12月3日是世界助残日（the World Disability Day）。请你以学校英语俱乐部的名义向同学们写一封倡议书，内容包括：
（1）今年活动的主题：我为残疾人做点什么？
（2）活动安排：助残日当天，访问残疾人。
（3）呼吁：积极加入俱乐部今后的助残活动。
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear friends,
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
The Students English Club
【答案】 Dear friends,
December 3, the World Disability Day, is around the corner. ①To show our great concern about the disabled, we Students English Club will organize an activity with the theme "What can we do for the disabled". Anyone who volunteers can join us. ②On that day, we will visit some disabled people near our school, doing some work for them, such as cleaning their houses and washing clothes.
In the future, our club will stick at this kind of voluntary activity on a long-term basis to make it a rule. Everyone of us is welcome to get a disabled person as a partner. Let's work together to promote the well-being of persons with disabilities. ③Whatever little help you can give will make a big difference.
The Students English Club
【解析】【审题谋篇】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为在世界助残日发出“我为残疾人做点什么”的倡议，写作时要注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一些衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【结构布局】
引言：表明发出倡议的原因
中心：介绍主题以及活动安排
结尾：呼吁和期待
【亮点词汇】
①around the corner即将到来
②such as例如
③stick at 坚持
④promote促进，发扬
⑤make a big difference起很大的作用
【高分句型】
①To show our great concern about the disabled, we Students English Club will organize an activity with the theme "What can we do for the disabled". （动词不定式表目的）
②On that day, we will visit some disabled people near our school, doing some work for them, such as cleaning their houses and washing clothes.（动词的-ing形式作状语）
③Whatever little help you can give will make a big difference.（whatever引导的主语从句）
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