2024年中考英语总复习课件(共50张PPT)：专项六 书面表达

(共50张PPT)
专项六 书面表达
书面表达题分值为15分。书面表达是通过文字传递信息和表达思想
的一种交际活动。书面表达题注重考查学生在特定情景中综合运用语言
进行书面表达的能力，以控制性写作为主。命题形式以汉语提示为主，
以英语和图文提示为辅。本大题要求学生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇
80—120个单词的短文，情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等。
提供情景的形式有提纲、表格、图画、说明等。
书面表达是考查学生综合运用英语能力的一种题型，它要求学生根
据所给情景和要求写一篇短文，文章内容要符合所给的情景和要求。文
章句子要通顺，它既像作文又不完全是作文，因为书面表达有提示和要
求两部分。“提示”一般包括与写作内容紧密相关的信息。“要求”一般包
括对短文的文体、格式及字数的要求。我们不能离开情景和要求自行立
意、选材，随意发挥。它类似汉译英，但又不同于汉译英，因为我们必
须根据所给材料适当进行发挥，切中题意，语言准确，条理清楚，书写
规范。为此我们要做到以下几点，按要求完成题目，以取得良好的成绩。
一、审题要仔细
仔细阅读“书面表达”的提示及要求，有给文字背景材料的，有看图
作文的，还有两者兼而有之的。对于文字材料，我们要仔细阅读其内容，
并对材料中所给的信息进行筛选，抓住重点，进行立意，否则，会导致
书面表达的错误率升高，甚至逻辑不清，文不对题。对于看图作文，我
们将画面联系起来，若是图画式的，一般主题鲜明，图画中多余的内容
很少，读起来比较容易理解；若是写实式的，图画中与主题无关的内容
较多，有时容易被细小问题所干扰而不能明确主题。所以要仔细审题，
领会作者究竟想表达一个什么样的中心思想，然后再分别去描述。
二、行文要正确
读完提示与要求之后，就要对提供的信息或画面进行语言上的组织，
要用英语思维来思考，有的学生习惯用汉语打底稿，再逐句翻译，这样
一方面浪费时间，另一方面容易写成汉语式的英语。要学会用英语思维，
直接用英语表达，使文章意思连贯、语言流畅、逻辑严谨。
三、语言要严谨
尽量使用自己熟悉的已经掌握的词汇和句型，长短句子要结合，尽
量使用简单句，正确选择人称和时态。若一时想不起某个单词的拼写，
可“绕道而行”，用同义词或近义词来代替， 也可使用同义句或者正话
反说。如“他英语学得很好” ，可以说“He studies English very well. /
He is good at English. / He does well in English.”或者“His English
isn't poor.”。这是关键的一步，只要把握好这一关，就能有效地减少错
误的发生。
四、适当发挥
适当发挥但不能脱离中心， 还要符合字数要求，字数并非多多益
善。古人云“言多必失”，你写得越多，出错的概率就越大，所以不可画
蛇添足。为了语言的连贯性，可以适当使用过渡词，如and、then、so、
or、but等，可使文章锦上添花。
五、书写要规范
卷面要清晰，书写要规范。卷面就像是人的脸面，干干净净，清清
爽爽最好。干净整洁的卷面首先你就能得到一些感情分，即便有些错误，
阅卷者也不会扣太多分。相反，字迹潦草，涂涂改改，肯定要被扣分，
另外书写时要压格，这样会使字迹看起来更清楚、更漂亮。
六、成文多查看
文章写完后， 一定要回过头来认真检查，检查时注意以下要点：1.
文章是否符合题意要求，要点有无遗漏；2.语言是否流畅，语法是否正
确，包括单词拼写、大小写，标点符号，动词时态，语态，名词单复数，
所有格，主谓一致，词语搭配等。
总之，英语书面表达能力的提高是一个从量变到质变的过程，需要
我们平时在学习中多注意、多练习、多积累，从根本上解决存在的问题，
这样才有“一分耕耘，一分收获”，也才能让自己“下笔如有神”。
书面表达近5年江西中（学）考的题材及时态分析：
年份 题材 主要考查时态 人称
2023年 基于阅读理解A篇的文章的 话题拓展、征文稿 一般现在时、将来 时 第一人称
2022年 基于完形填空B）部分的文 章的话题拓展、演讲稿 一般现在时、将来 时 第一人称及
第三人称
年份 题材 主要考查时态 人称
2021年 基于阅读理解B）部分的文 章的话题拓展、夹叙夹议文 一般现在时、过去 时、现在完成时及 将来时 第一人称
2020年 议论文 过去时、一般现在 时及将来时 第一人称
2019年 基于完形填空A）部分的文 章的话题拓展、议论文 一般现在时及过去 时 第一人称
及第三人称
续表
【真题示例】（2023 年江西学考题）
通过阅读理解A篇我们感受到户外活动的有趣。本月底你校将举办
一次户外活动，为了更好地开展这次活动，校英语社团正在向学生征集
意见。假设你是张华，请根据表格内容写一篇短文（先介绍你喜欢的户
外活动，再说明理由，最后就活动安排提出合理的建议），向社团投稿。
写作要点 参考句型
1.What outdoor activity do you like We'd better…
Maybe we can…
It'll be better
if… …
2.Why do you like it
3.How do you arrange （安排） it （when, where, what to do… ）
（备注：如果出现地名，请以East____代替，例如：East Mountain…）
要求：
1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数80—120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir,
I'm happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity in our school
at the end of this month.
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I like climbing mountains with my classmates. We can enjoy the
beauty of nature. We can also make friends and help each other on
the way.
To make the activity more interesting, I hope to go to East
Mountain on June 25th. Since it's a little far, we'd better meet at the
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Hope my suggestions help.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
school gate at 7:30 a. m. and go there by bus. We can collect some
history stories about the famous mountain so that we can share them
together. It'll be nice if we can try some local food for lunch there. In
the afternoon, we can pick up the rubbish to protect the environment.
Then we can go home at 4:30 p. m. We're sure to have great fun.
【解析】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇书信类征文作文；
②时态：一般现在时、一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加
细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍你喜欢的户外活动。
第二步，说明理由。
第三步，就活动安排提出合理的建议。
题组一
（时间：20分钟 总分：15分）
实际用时：____ 得分：____
职业教育（vocational education）是现代国民教育体系的重要组成
部分，在实施科教兴国战略和人才强国战略中有特殊的重要地位。大力
发展职业教育，既是当务之急，又是长远大计。但很多学生和家长都对
职业教育的认识不够全面，每个人的看法不一。请你仔细思考下列问题
并就职业教育谈谈自己的看法。
写作要点：
1. Is the vocational education important in China
2.Do you know any different opinions about the vocational education
3.What do you think of the vocational education
要求：
1.短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名与地名；
3.词数80—120，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
With the rapid development of China, vocational education is
obviously becoming more and more important.
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China is expected to face a shortage of skilled workers who are
able to control robots and high-tech machines. I think it's a chance for
some students who are good at controlling machines to meet this
demand. Some parents and students think it's good for them to find a
good job in the future. However, other parents don't want their
children to learn it.
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So, follow the policy. If we think it properly, we will make a
choice wisely.
But I believe it's a chance to choose the proper job that fits
different students. As President Xi Jinping said, vocational education
has a bright future. He called for speeding up the development of the
vocational education system in order to train more skilled workers as
fast as possible.
题组二
（时间：20分钟 总分：15分）
实际用时：____ 得分：____
在中国传统文化中，“团圆（reunion）”是一个永恒的话题。在中国
传统的节假日里，许多在外工作的人们都会回家与家人团圆，一起吃团
圆饭（reunion dinner）。请你以“Reunion”为题，写一篇英语短文，让
外国朋友了解中国文化中的“团圆”。
Reunion Spring Festival / Mid-Autumn Festival…
a big family meal…
happy / relaxed /…
…
要求：
1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数80—120。
Reunion
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In China, reunion is considered as an important activity in all
families. It is pronounced tuanyuan in Chinese, and the family
members get together to celebrate some traditional festivals such as
Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and so on.
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According to Chinese traditional customs, no matter how far and
how busy they are, all the family members will come home and eat
the reunion dinner. We all know that the reunion dinner gives us a
chance to communicate with each other. It's also happy and relaxing
for people to be with families and makes people be closer.
题组三
（时间：20分钟 总分：15分）
实际用时：____ 得分：____
家乡是我们的故土，每个人都希望自己的家乡越来越好。请你以
“My Hometown”为题，写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍自己眼中的家乡、
家乡的发展及自己对家乡发展的建议和憧憬。
写作要点:
1. Where is your hometown
2.Have any changes taken place in your hometown
3.What do you think it will be like in the future
4.How do you make it more…
要求：
1.短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名与地名；
3.词数80—120，文章结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My Hometown
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My hometown Nanchang is the capital city of Jiangxi Province.
This is a beautiful and civilized city. There are many famous places of
interest to visit and much delicious food to eat in it.
In these days, many great changes have taken place in my
hometown. Streets are becoming much cleaner. The transportation is
getting a lot more convenient and so on. I expect that it will be
stronger and stronger, and people will be happier and healthier in the
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I love my hometown, and I hope it will be more beautiful in the
future.
future. And we teenagers should make an effort to play a part in
making our hometown more beautiful in our daily life， such as
protecting the environment, following the traffic rules and so on.
题组四
（时间：20分钟 总分：15分）
实际用时：____ 得分：____
即将进入高中的你是否有些激动？是否对未来生活充满着憧憬？是
否对未知有着担忧？假如你是李华，请你给未来的学习和生活列出一些
合理的计划和安排，与你的笔友Paul进行分享，并寻求一些合适的建议。
写作要点：
1. What do you worry about
2.What's your plan
3.What do you expect to do
要求：
1.短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名与地名；
3.词数80—120，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Paul,
I'm so excited to tell you that I will get into the Senior High
School. But I also have something to worry about.
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As you know, I am not an outgoing girl, but in the new school,
the things are all new to me. I have no friends there. I'm afraid to
deal with so many courses in the new term.
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Yours,
Li Hua
At the same time, I'm also looking forward to the new life in the
high school because I can have the chance to challenge myself, to
improve my independence and so on. I'd like to make a new plan to
help myself, such as searching some information about my new school
on the Internet and trying to find out if any of my friends are in the
same school. Do you have any advice for me Waiting for your letter.
题组五
（时间：20分钟 总分：15分）
实际用时：____ 得分：____
作为青春期的孩子，你的身心各方面都处在迅速发展阶段中，情绪
情感的变化会时刻影响着你。对于这方面的变化，你有什么需要帮助的
吗？或者你在遇到这些情绪变化的时候，是如何应对的呢？现学校正征
集一些文章，帮助其他的同龄人及时排忧解虑，希望你能写一篇文章进
行投稿。
写作要点：
1. What are the emotional changes in teenagers
2.What are the differences between girls and boys
3.What should you do when you meet these emotional changes
要求：
1. 语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3.80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Youth is a precious gift and a golden time in our life. When we
are young, we are strong and healthy. It is time for us to prepare
ourselves to become responsible citizens.
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However, middle school students have come into a sensitive stage,
our bodies grow so fast and our minds have to keep up with the
change. The boys and girls start to realize the gender difference.
The
troubled annoys many teenagers. For the girls, they want to look as
beautiful as the commercial models, so they go on a diet and struggle
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The troubles teenagers meet are very typical, and we can talk to
our teachers or go to see the psychologist.
with hunger. For the boys, they want to be as cool as the heroes on
TV, so they pretend to care about nothing and go against the school
regulations.
题组六
（时间：20分钟 总分：15分）
实际用时：____ 得分：____
请结合自身经历介绍一下你日常学习或生活中经常使用的一项新发
明，说说你对它的评价以及它给你生活带来的影响和改变。
写作要点：
1. What new invention do you use in your daily life？
2.What do you think of it？
3.How does it affect your life？
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数80—120，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Technology plays an important role in our daily life.
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We benefit from it a lot and it is changing our life greatly. Of
hundreds of technological inventions， I like the high-speed train
best．
In the past， it took me about 20 hours from Shenzhen to
Shanghai. But now it only takes me about 4 hours. This saves me a
lot of time. Moreover， it's comfortable to take the high-speed train
because it moves smoothly， and I can do some reading and watch
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What a creative invention it is!
movies easily. I can not only enjoy the view out of the windows but
also have a relaxing time on the train. Many people choose to take
the high-speed train because of the lower price than the plane. And it
is very convenient.
题组七
（时间：20分钟 总分：15分）
实际用时：____ 得分：____
假如你是李华，Peter是来自英国友好学校的交换生。请给Peter写一
封邮件，邀请他参加关于垃圾分类的线上班会，并告诉他班会的具体时
间、目的和具体安排，以及他要准备的东西。请结合以下写作要点和提
示词语写一封邮件。
写作要点：
1. When will the online class meeting be held？
2.What are the purposes and the plans about the class meeting？
3.What should Peter prepare for？
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数80—120，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词语：sort the garbage， recycle， call on， protect the
environment， share…
Dear Peter，
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I'm writing to invite you to take part in our Garbage Sorting
Activity. We are going to organize the online class meeting next Friday
afternoon. I will share the advantages and meaning of garbage sorting
with classmates so that they know the importance of protecting the
environment. Then we will show how to sort and recycle the garbage.
Besides， there will be a talent show during the activity. I hope you
can learn more about garbage sorting by having this kind of activity.
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Yours，
Li Hua
Please let me know if there is anything more that I can help
you．
You should prepare some publicity materials to call on people to sort
the garbage. I'm looking forward to your early reply．
题组八
（时间：20分钟 总分：15分）
实际用时：____ 得分：____
假如你是李华，最近你结识了一位新朋友，通过和他相处你发现了
你们之间的异同。你准备和你的笔友Dave分享此事。请根据以下写作要
点写一封邮件发送给Dave。
写作要点：
1. What's your new friend's name？
2.In what ways are you simi-lar？
3.In what ways are you different？
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数80—120，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hi， Dave!
I am happy to say that I made a new friend．
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Yours，
Li Hua
His name is Tom. He is similar to me in some ways. We both
like music. Both of us truly care about others and we are good
listeners. But we have some differences， too. He often wears cooler
clothes than me. At school， he is not as hard-working as I am， but
he is more popular than me because he is funnier than me. He likes
to do some reading in free time， but I like playing sports. That's my
new friend. Do you want to make friends with him？