(共20张PPT)
写作要求
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2020·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)
The Meredith family lived in a small community.As the economy was in decline,some people in the town had lost their jobs.Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet.People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.
Mrs.Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman.She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor.She knew they had problems,and they needed all kinds of help.When she had time,she would bring food and medicine to them.
One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before.There was a man sick in bed,his wife,who took care of him and could not go out to work,and their little boy.The little boy—his name was Bernard—had interested her very much.
“I wish you could see him,”she said to her own children,John,Harry,and Clara.“He is such a help to his mother.He wants very much to earn some money,but I don’t see what he can do.”
After their mother left the room,the children sat thinking about Bernard.“I wish we could help him to earn money,”said Clara.“His family is suffering so much.”
“So do I,”said Harry.“We really should do something to assist them.”
For some moments,John said nothing,but,suddenly,he sprang to his feet and cried,“I have a great idea!I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成).”
The other children also jumped up all attention.When John had an idea,it was sure to be a good one.“I tell you what we can do,”said John.“You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us Well,we can make popcorn(爆米花), and put it into paper bags,and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea,she thought it was a good one, too.____________________________________________________________
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With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.________
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审题谋篇
一、审题定调
本文阅读部分为一篇350词左右的材料,要求考生依据其内容及所给段落开头语进行续写,将其发展成一篇与所给材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文,词数约150。
读后续写是一种将阅读和写作紧密结合的综合语言能力测试题。读是输入,要求考生能提取有效的文本信息;写是输出,要求考生将有效的文本信息组合并且做出合乎逻辑的推测,运用和原文文本一致的语言风格进行写作。此外,考生还要有语篇结构意识,续写的两段文字需要和原文及段首提示句保持逻辑一致性和语篇连贯性。
本文写作话题贴近生活,有一定趣味性,其主题是助人为乐。故事讲述三个孩子用爆米花帮助另一个孩子,侧重人物性格以及人物动作的描写。
二、谋篇布局
第一步:通读文本,理已知信息
人物 Mrs.Meredith,John,Harry,Clara,Bernard,the sick man and his wife
地点 a small community
故事
线索 文中Mrs.Meredith一直乐于助人。当她给她的孩子讲述了小男孩Bernard一家的情况,三个孩子(John,Harry和Clara)非常渴望帮助他,并且确实想出了一个好主意——做爆米花,让Bernard在社区售卖。
第二步:根据段首句,判未知走向
定主调 本文的主调:Love and Kindness。在社会经济萧条的环境下(故事背景),大家仍保持善良,互相帮助。一个充满爱心的妈妈身体力行,在自己的三个孩子心中播种了爱和善良的种子。
续写
第一段 Mrs.Meredith认为John出了个好主意。(已知)→Mrs.Meredith会说什么 (对话描写)→孩子们会如何行动 (动作、场景描写)→续写第二段首句提到Bernard,则续写第一段接下来就会涉及谁把计划告诉Bernard,他有什么反应 孩子们如何制作爆米花
续写
第二段 Bernard开始他的新营生 (已知)
→爆米花在哪里卖 卖给谁
→Bernard的收获及感受如何
遣词造句
项目 续写第一段 续写第二段
关键
词汇 人物:Mrs.Meredith,Clara,Harry,
John,Bernard
行为:encourage
→prepare
→make popcorn 人物:Bernard,the Meredith family
行为:sell popcorn→feel happy→earn money→show thanks to the Meredith family
项目 续写第一段 续写第二段
连词
成句 Mrs.Meredith encouraged the children to get started.Very soon,the children prepared the materials and learnt how to make popcorn.And then they told Bernard the plan.Bernard felt grateful to all of them for what they had done for him. A few hours later,he sold out all the popcorn.He was so happy that he could hardly speak.He showed thanks to the Meredith family.The children all learnt a lot from this experience.
高级
语段 表示感激:be grateful to sb for sth;one’s help is greatly appreciated; express one’s gratitude to
表示开心与兴奋:feel a thrill of excitement (感到一阵激动),a mixture of excitement and happiness,be delighted at,to one’s joy
妙笔成篇
范文1:(故事情节紧凑,立意积极向上,行文流畅)
When Mrs.Meredith heard of John’s idea,she thought it was a good one, too.Very soon,the children learnt how to pop the corn and then were busy in doing this “big” thing.At the same time,their mother went out to buy the paper bags that they needed.When she came back,she brought Bernard with her. Bernard felt grateful to all of them for what they had done for him.
With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.Much sooner than he had expected,he returned with an empty basket and so much money that he had never seen before.He was so delighted that he could hardly speak,but his bright smiling face spoke for himself.After that,he learnt to make popcorn by himself and make it taste better.Several years later,he grew up to be a remarkable man,but he didn’t forget the help of the Meredith family and always did what he could to help those in need.
范文2:(注重细节刻画,表达丰富、具体,语言地道、 生动)
When Mrs.Meredith heard of John’s idea,she thought it was a good one, too.She nodded with a smile and encouraged the children,“Let’s get started!” Immediately,Clara volunteered to find the materials to make popcorn.At the same time,John went to purchase some paper bags and arranged all the stuff in place.Harry ran to the Bernard’s and dragged him to the scene.After hearing the explanation,Bernard was overwhelmed by excitement and gratitude.Time went by quickly,and the children laughed,carrying out their great “project”.Joy filled the yard and everyone’s heart.
With everything ready,Bernard started out on his new business.Carrying all the paper bags,he called out,“Popcorn! 50 cents for one extra-large pack!” People started to gather around him,which drew even more people.Everyone was ready to buy one pack to support him.The air was full of happiness and kindness.Within no time,Bernard sold out all the popcorn and earned quite some money.On returning,he thanked the Meredith family with watery eyes. For Clara,Harry and John,it was an unforgettable experience as well.It turned out that they not only helped a boy in need,but also gave themselves the sweet taste of helping others.
针对训练
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Once there was a ship travelling on the tough sea and on the ship there was a couple.All of a sudden,the ship met with an accident and the couple had no choice but to run to the lifeboat without delay.After reaching there,they realised that there was space only for one person.At that very moment,the husband pushed his wife behind him and jumped onto the lifeboat himself, leaving his wife standing on the sinking ship and shouting something desperately to her husband with her eyes filled with tears.”
The teacher stopped her storytelling and asked her students,“Guys,guess what it was that she shouted.”Most students answered,“I hate you!”
After listening to this reply,the teacher glanced through the whole class again and noticed that there was a boy sitting silently throughout.Then she asked him the same question.
The boy answered,“I believe she would have shouted—take care of our child.”
Listening to his remark,the teacher was surprised and asked the boy doubtfully,“Have you heard of this story before ”
Shaking his head,the boy said softly and sadly,“No,I haven’t.But that’s what my mother said to my father before she died of a deadly disease.”
Moved and feeling sad,the teacher replied,“Your answer is absolutely right!”
Then she continued,“Let’s take up the story.The ship sank eventually and the husband went home and brought up their daughter alone.Many years later after the death of the man,their daughter was tidying up all his belongings when she found his diary.In his diary,she found that when her parents were on the ship,her mother had already been diagnosed(诊断) with advanced cancer and at the critical moment,the father rushed to the only chance of survival.”
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
In his diary,the man mentioned he wished to sink to the ocean with his wife but for their daughter he had to live.______________________________
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The story was finished and the class was silent._____________________
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In his diary,the man mentioned he wished to sink to the ocean with his wife but for their daughter he had to live.Without him,their little daughter would have become an orphan.He pulled through the painful days and learned how to raise their daughter.Whenever he encountered difficulties,he motivated himself with his wife’s words—“take care of our child”.Years later,their daughter grew up and he knew that he kept his promise successfully.If his wife had been alive,she would have been happy to see this.
The story was finished and the class was silent.Nobody talked or laughed as usual.Instead,it seemed that every student was lost in deep thought.They were touched by this special story,reflecting on their replies.Those who misunderstood the man in this story bowed their head in shame.They finally knew that sometimes what they saw was not the truth.They should not judge the man without understanding the whole story.(共11张PPT)
写作要求
请根据下面的提示写一篇电影《战狼Ⅱ》(Wolf Warriors Ⅱ)的影评。
1.吴京导演,吴京及其他著名演员主演。其中包括一名英国演员。
2.情景:主人公冷锋被军队开除后,意外卷入非洲某国家的叛乱。冷锋本能够安全离开,但他选择了冒险救人。
3.主题:强大的中国可以保护所有的中国人不受伤害。
注意:1.词数80左右；
2.请在相应位置作答。
提示词:叛乱rebellion
审题谋篇
一、审题定调
影评是对电影的情节构思、演员技巧、摄影技巧、蕴含的道理及影片的时代意义等进行分析和评论。写作通常分为三部分:
1.整体介绍:陈述所评论电影的基本信息,如电影名、电影类型、导演和主演等。
2.内容介绍:介绍要简明扼要,要清楚地交代故事的情节,尤其是与影评相关的内容。应力求客观,以使读者对故事情节有所了解。也可以从背景、情节、演技、音乐及主题等方面进行介绍评论。
3.结尾:给出自己或观众对该电影的评价,也可向读者推荐该电影作品。这一部分是写作的重点和升华。对电影所发表的观点通常用现在时态。要注意评论的公正性和客观性。
二、谋篇布局
本文可分为三段:
第一段:介绍《战狼Ⅱ》,让读者了解电影的大致情况。本段要点包括:由吴京导演;吴京及其他著名演员主演,其中包括一名英国演员。
第二段:内容简介。主人公冷锋被军队开除后,意外卷入非洲某国家的叛乱。冷锋本能够安全离开,但他选择了冒险救人。
第三段:发表评论。电影突显了“强大的中国可以保护所有的中国人不受伤害”的主题,这也是电影受欢迎的原因。
遣词造句
1.actor n.演员
2.actress n.女演员
3.character n.人物
4.scene n.场景
5.director n.导演;编剧
6.producer n.制片人
7.role n.角色
8.plot n.情景
9.remarkable adj.非凡的
10.masterpiece n.杰作
11.brilliant adj.绝妙的
12.ordinary adj.普通的
13.unusual adj.不寻常的
14.disappointing adj.令人失望的
15.breathtaking adj.激动人心的
16.shooting n.拍摄
17.star in主演
18.be set in以……为背景
19.be based on以……为基础
20.play the part/role of扮演……角色
21.come out发行
22.be adapted from改编自
23.be popular in 在……受欢迎
24.be dismissed from 被从……开除
25.be involved in 被卷入
26.in danger 处于危险中
27.protect...from...保护……免受……
28.The film was released on July 27,2017.
该电影于2017年7月27日发行。
29.The film is adapted from a famous novel.
这部电影改编自一部著名小说。
30.China is so strong that she can protect all the Chinese people from being hurt.
中国如此强大以至于她能保护所有中国人不受伤害。
31.This is the reason why so many people are fond of it.
这就是如此多的人喜欢这部电影的原因。
32.It is educational and encouraging to us students.
它对我们学生来说具有教育意义且鼓舞人心。
33.I recommend this film to you.
我把这部电影推荐给你。
34.On the whole,it’s worth watching.
总之,这部电影值得一看。
妙笔成篇
The film Wolf Warriors Ⅱ directed by Wu Jing was once very popular in China.Wu Jing and some other famous actors starred in it,including an English actor.
A soldier named Leng Feng was dismissed from the army.And he was about to begin a new life when he was involved in a rebellion in Africa.He could have left safely,but he chose to stay to save those in danger.
This film shows that China is so strong that she can protect all the Chinese people from being hurt,which is why so many people are fond of it.
针对训练
请根据下面的提示写一篇电影《功夫熊猫》(Kung Fu Panda)的影评。
1.动画电影《功夫熊猫》取材于中国文化,2008年6月上映。
2.情景:一个平凡的熊猫成为一个龙武士的故事。师傅起初不认为熊猫能成为龙武士,但是通过不断的努力,他最后得到了师傅的认可,并打败了他们的敌人——老虎。
3.主题:只要努力,每个人都能成功。
注意:1.词数80左右；
2.请在相应位置作答。
提示词:师傅master;龙武士 dragon warrior
Kung Fu Panda,a famous cartoon film with many Chinese elements,was released in June,2008.
This film tells us a story about how an ordinary panda becomes a real dragon warrior.At the beginning,the master did not believe the panda can be a dragon warrior.But with the panda’s hard work,he gained the master’s recognition.The master tried his best to train the panda into a real warrior. Finally,the panda defeated their biggest enemy,the tiger.
This film shows that as long as we work hard,everyone can succeed.(共12张PPT)
写作要求
请仔细观察下面的图画,按要求用英语写一篇短文。
内容要求:
1.描述画面;
2.概述其含义;
3.谈谈个人感想。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.题目和开头已写好,不计入总词数;
3.请在相应位置作答。
Roses given,fragrance in hand
As is vividly shown in the picture,_______________________________
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审题谋篇
一、审题定调
图画类作文主要以图画为载体,附带少量文字提示或说明,要求考生从观察入手,通过对画面内涵的理解,发挥想象力,按照一定的要求把图画内容准确、生动地加工成书面语言。写作时可遵循以下步骤:
Step 1:观察图片。要读懂图片,联想其背景,并了解其深层的含义。
Step 2:描述图片。简要描述图画的内容,为下文做好铺垫。
Step 3:说理议论。要联系现实,说清道理。针对图片进行联想,挖掘图中隐含的有教育意义的内容,联系现实生活进行说理,对人能够起到激励作用。此部分是文章的重点,切忌轻描淡写。
Step 4:升华结尾。结尾要言简意赅,画龙点睛,起到升华的作用。
Step 5:锤炼语言。使用高级词汇和句式,恰当运用连接词语与过渡句,增加文章的亮点。
二、谋篇布局
第一段:描述图画,点出寓意,提出讨论的主题。图画中有一朵玫瑰花和两只手。结合给出的标题“Roses given,fragrance in hand”可知,本文要表达“送人玫瑰,手留余香”的道理。
第二段:举例论证,发表观点。生活中,很多人不愿意帮助别人,怕惹来麻烦。其实,我们在帮助别人的同时,也是在帮助自己。而且帮助别人会给自己带来快乐。
第三段:总结全文,得出结论。当别人遇到困难时,我们不要犹豫,要积极主动地帮助别人,这样,我们的社会就会更加和谐美好。
遣词造句
1.as is shown in the picture正如图片所示
2.be beneficial to sb对某人有益
3.hold the view that...持有……的观点
4.cause trouble for sb给某人惹麻烦
5.be indifferent to sb对某人漠不关心
6.lend a hand to sb帮助某人
7.be concerned about sb关心某人
8.be in trouble处于困境中
9.make a difference起作用;有影响
10.take pleasure in doing sth从做某事中获得快乐
11.We should contribute more to building a harmonious society.
我们应该为建设和谐社会多做贡献。
12.It is a traditional virtue to help others.
帮助他人是传统美德。
13.Helping others is helping ourselves.
帮助别人就是帮助我们自己。
14.It’s a pity that people are becoming more and more indifferent to each other.
很遗憾,人们彼此之间变得越来越漠不关心。
15.A small act of kindness can make a great difference.
小的善举能产生巨大的影响。
妙笔成篇
Roses given,fragrance in hand
As is vividly shown in the picture,_______________________________
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Roses given,fragrance in hand
As is vividly shown in the picture,roses given,fragrance in hand,which means helping others is beneficial both to others and to ourselves.
It’s a pity that people are becoming more and more indifferent to each other.Some people hold the view that helping others will cause trouble to us.In my opinion,we should help others because everyone needs help.What’s more, we can take pleasure in offering help,which contributes to building a harmonious society.
Therefore,don’t hesitate to help others.A small act of kindness can make a great difference.
针对训练
如今随着智能手机和电子设备的普及,“低头族”现象兴起。人们沉溺于手机等电子设备,因而忽略了自己和他人的沟通交流,甚至在家庭聚会上也只顾玩手机而不和长辈聊天,使老人感到失落万分。
请根据图画写一篇英文短文。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
As can be seen from the picture,a big family gets together to have a big dinner.But the young just bury themselves in playing with their cellphones, totally ignoring their parents.
There is no doubt that cellphones have a negative effect on our lives. Heavy use of cellphones widens the distance between teenagers and their elders.Worse still,addiction to cellphones will lead to teenagers’ poor performance at school.
It’s time to limit the use of cellphones and communicate with our family members face to face,which helps build a harmonious family atmosphere.
