(共8张PPT)
审题谋篇
一、审题定调
观点对比类作文又称为正反观点类作文,主要是就社会上出现的某一个问题进行讨论。首先对问题进行客观的陈述;然后说明当前正反两方面的看法以及各自的理由;最后作者发表自己的观点。
二、谋篇布局
该写作任务可以分成三个部分。
第一部分:开门见山,直接说出观点;
第二部分:陈述赞成或者反对的理由;
第三部分:个人看法。
三、写作模板
There is a discussion about/on .
Opinions are divided on the question. agree,for they believe that .For one thing, .For another thing, .Furthermore/Besides, .However, disagree with .They hold the view that .First of all, .Moreover, .Most important of all, .
In my opinion/As far as I am concerned, .
四、组织语言
1.The topic of the discussion is becoming more and more popular recently.
讨论的话题最近变得越来越流行。
2.There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favourite.
关于这件事有两种观点。有些人说A是他们的最爱。
3.They hold their view for the reason of...
他们坚持他们的观点是因为……
4.While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.
而另一些人认为B是更好的选择,有以下三个原因。
5.From my point of view...
在我看来……
6.The reason is that...
原因是……
7.As a matter of fact,there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me,the former is surely a wise choice.
事实上,还有其他一些原因可以解释我的选择。对我来说,前者无疑是一个明智的选择。
8.Some people believe that...For example,they think...And it will bring them...
有些人认为……例如,他们认为……它会带给他们……
9.In my opinion,I never think this reason can be the point.
在我看来,我从来没有认为这个原因是关键。
10.From all that I have said,I agree to the thought that...
从我所说的一切来看,我同意……的想法。
针对训练
现在很多青少年出国留学,有的人认为这种做法是有益的,也有人认为这种做法不正确。请你以Views on Teenagers Studying Abroad为题,写一篇有关青少年出国留学的英语文章。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.谈谈自己的看法;
3.请在相应位置作答。
Views on Teenagers Studying Abroad
Recently,more and more teenagers choose to study abroad.
Many people think that it will certainly do good to the children because the independent life will make them learn confidence and perseverance.Moreover,the quality of overseas education is often higher,thus the child can get a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better job in the future.However,many others disagree with it.On the one hand,early independent life is not necessarily good.On the other hand,the educational quality is also a problem.
In my opinion,although studying abroad may bring favourable results,there are still a lot to worry about.It’s necessary for the parents and the young students to think twice before making the decision.(共8张PPT)
审题谋篇
一、审题定调
邀请信的内容主要包括邀请原因、活动地点和时间等,其特点是简短、热情,给人一种真诚、亲切的感觉。邀请信应使用第一人称,双方的名字都要写全名;一定要表达希望对方参加的诚意,同时也希望对方给予答复。
二、谋篇布局
本写作任务可以分成三个部分:
第一部分:引入话题(开门见山,直接说出邀请的目的);
第二部分:具体介绍(邀请项目的时间、地点、方式、注意点等);
第三部分:表达期待。
三、写作模板
Dear ,
①I’m writing to invite you to (邀请内容).② (内容) will be held at/in (地点) on (日期).③We would be honoured to have you there with us.
④The occasion will start at (具体时间).⑤This will be followed by a (进一步的安排).⑥At around (时间),
(另一个安排).
⑦We would appreciate it very much if you could accept our invitation.I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
四、精彩句型
(1)I am very pleased to invite you to participate in...我非常高兴地邀请您参加……
(2)It is my pleasure/a great honour to invite you to...我十分高兴/十分荣幸邀请您……
(3)Would you like to go swimming with me next Sunday 下个星期天你可以和我一起去游泳吗
(4)I should be very glad if you would come to...如果您能来……,我将非常高兴。
(5)It would be an honour to me if you would accept our invitation.如果您能接受我们的邀请,我将感到十分荣幸。
(6)We sincerely/faithfully hope you can attend...我们诚挚/真诚期待您能参加……
(7)We look forward to seeing you.我们期待您的光临。
(8)Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.请您尽早回复。
(9)If you can’t come,please let me know.如果您不能来,请通知我。
针对训练
假定你是李华,你所在城市的一家剧院将在本周末举办一场京剧演出,外教Charlie对此很感兴趣并向你询问相关事宜。请你用英语给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.简要介绍京剧;
2.邀请他前往观看。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请在相应位置作答 。
参考词汇:京剧 Peking Opera;脸谱 facial make-up;选段 selection
Dear Charlie,
I’m more than pleased to know that you are fond of Peking Opera.A performance of Peking Opera will be put on in a theatre this weekend.I’d like to share some relevant information with you.
Peking Opera has a long history.It has many types of facial make-ups,referring to different characters.Its music and singing are unique and the costumes are graceful,which have typical Chinese characteristics.I believe you will love it.
As the poster says,some popular selections will be performed this weekend and some famous actors will show a visual feast to the audience.So I invite you to go to the theatre with me,where you can appreciate the performances.It will be well worth watching.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua(共9张PPT)
审题谋篇
一、审题定调
生活故事是通过描写人物,即通过文字间接地把人物的外貌、性格等呈现给读者。生活故事的特点是通过某个故事用语言描绘人物的外表、行为、心理活动等。
二、谋篇布局
本写作任务可以分成三个部分:
第一部分——引入话题(开门见山,直接说出生活故事所涉及的人物的评价等);
第二部分——具体介绍(故事发生的时间、地点、方式、过程、结果等);
第三部分——呼应第一段,总体评价或作者的感想。
三、注意点
1.选好角度,顺序合理
角度是指用第一人称还是第三人称来描写人物。用第一人称时,主要是本人的经历或耳闻目睹之事;用第三人称时,则主要是他人的经历。顺序是指以怎样的顺序描写人物,刻画人物的性格。一般采用从外表到内心活动的叙述,把描写的重点放在与其他人物的不同之处上。
2.突出重点,选材精确
发生在一个人物身上的事很多,写作时,我们要抓住其显著的、与众不同的方面,也要抓住体现人物性格的主要活动和事件。
3.稍加评论,画龙点睛
在描述和叙述中,要叙述议论相结合,不要一味地叙述,要对人物事实评价,突出人物性格。
4.语言精练,时态准确
在生活故事人物描写中,语言要简短精练,生动感人。另外,时态的使用要视实际情况而定。
四、组织语言
1.He is not very strong but healthy and full of energy.
他不是很强壮,但很健康,充满活力。
2.He is easy to get along with.
他很容易相处。
3.He is not only tall but also strong.
他又高又壮。
4.Her dream is to be a dancer.
她的梦想是成为一名舞蹈演员。
5.She always smiles when she speaks to us.
当她和我们说话时,她总是微笑。
6.Sometimes she is very strict with us.
有时她对我们很严格。
7.I think that I’ll do well in the exam with Mr Li teaching me.
我想有李先生教我,我会考得很好。
8.Her behaviour makes everyone like having her class.
她的行为使每个人都喜欢上她的课。
9.My mother’s name is Nancy.She has long hair and two big eyes.
我妈妈的名字叫南希。她有一头长发和两只大眼睛。
10.My mother likes sports and shopping.Her favourite sports are football and yoga.And her favourite food is ice cream.She also likes dogs and cats.
我妈妈喜欢运动和购物。她最喜欢的运动是足球和瑜伽。她最喜欢的食物是冰激凌。她也喜欢狗和猫。
针对训练
请根据下面文字,写一篇生活小故事。
一名来自美国的男孩得到了许多警察的关爱。男孩的父亲是一名警察,他被派往国外执行任务时身亡。幸运的是小男孩父亲的同事们决定保护他、照顾他,直到他长大成人。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请在相应位置作答 。
Recently,I was moved by a piece of warming news.A boy from America was loved by a lot of policemen.
The boy’s father was a policeman and was sent to a foreign country. Unluckily,he died.The world was sad for him.This man left his wife and a small boy forever.The lucky thing for the little boy was that his father’s workmates decided to protect and love this boy until he grew up.
For most people,they are lucky to be loved by parents and friends,while for others,they get care from the public.No matter what kind of difficulty we will face,we can’t give up hope,because there is always someone who loves us.
