(共15张PPT)
UNIT 4 INFORMATION TECHNOLOGY
写 作 指 导
写作要求
如何写好个人简介
假设你是来自晨光中学的李华,报纸上的一则招聘小学生英语夏令营志愿者的广告引起了你的兴趣,请你结合个人条件及优势,写一封英文自荐信。主要内容如下:
1.表示对该夏令营很感兴趣;
2.介绍你的优势(年龄、性格、语言及类似的经历);
3.参加夏令营的目的。
注意:
1.词数不少于80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Dear Sir,
I’m Li Hua from Chenguang Middle School._______________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
审题谋篇
一、审题定调
1.确定体裁:本单元的写作任务是写申请信中的人物简介。本次写作任务是申请信,申请成为一名志愿者。所以写自己的简介时首先要将自己的优势说清楚,其次要阐明自己想要做志愿者的理由。
2.确定人称:本文的主要人称为第一人称。
3.确定时态:由于本文是申请信,记述的是现在或将来的事情,所以时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
二、谋篇布局
为使文章连贯通顺,写作内容应包括以下三个方面:
1.陈述写信的目的和申请职位的原因;
2.介绍自己具备的条件和优势;
3.表达希望被录用的强烈愿望。
三、组织语言
1.核心词汇及短语
build sb up使某人健康或强壮
devote all one’s energies to全力以赴
a good command of精通
enable sb to do sth使某人能够做某事
have the ability to do sth有做某事的能力
outgoing外向的
take...into account将……考虑进去
2.高级句式
(1)作为一个18岁的男孩,我性格外向且容易相处。
As an 18-year-old boy,I am outgoing and easy to get along with.
(2)最重要的是,我有和孩子们一起工作的经验,因为我在小学的时候参加过两次类似的夏令营。(because引导原因状语从句;when引导时间状语从句)
Above all,I have experience of working well with children because I took part in similar camps twice when I was in primary school.
(3)同时,我不仅有能力组织活动,我也活泼开朗、精力充沛。(not only...but also...)
Meanwhile,not only do I have the ability to organize activities,but also I am outgoing and energetic.
(4)综合考虑,我认为我很适合这个职位。(独立主格结构)
Everything taken into account,I think I am a good fit for the position.
(5)如果你能考虑给我这样一个机会,我会万分感激。(I would appreciate it if...)
I would appreciate it if you could offer me the opportunity.
妙笔成篇
Dear Sir,
I’m Li Hua from Chenguang Middle School.Reading your advertisement in the newspaper,I am quite interested in it.That is the reason why I recommend myself to you without hesitation.
As an 18-year-old boy,I am outgoing and easy to get along with.In addition,I am fond of English and good at spoken English.Meanwhile,not only do I have the ability to organize activities,but also I am outgoing and energetic. Above all,I have experience of working well with children because I took part in similar camps twice when I was in primary school.
Everything taken into account,I think I am a good fit for the position.I would appreciate it if you could offer me the opportunity.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
针对训练
今年7月,上海将举办2023年国际茶业交易博览会(Shanghai International Tea Trade Expo 2023),现正在招募英语口译志愿者。假如你是李华,请你用英文写一封申请信。内容包括:
1.表达申请意愿;
2.说明胜任理由;
3.希望申请成功。
参考词汇:interpreter(口译者)
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.请在相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua,a senior 3 student from Shanghai.Learning that Shanghai International Tea Trade Expo 2023 will be held in Shanghai in July,I really hope to be one of the interpreters for it.
I believe I’m the right person for the job.First of all,I have a good command of English,which allows me to communicate with foreigners with no barriers.Besides,I have participated in some activities to serve as an interpreter, which gives me valuable experience.Furthermore,I have a good knowledge of the local tea history and culture.So I’m qualified to be an interpreter for the festival.
I’d appreciate it if I could get your offer.Thank you very much!
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua (共13张PPT)
UNIT 5 HUMANS AND NATURE
写 作 指 导
写作要求
如何写灾难求生的文章
北京时间2013年4月20日8时02分,四川省雅安市庐山县发生了7.0级地震,地震造成了包括房屋倒塌、人员伤亡等在内的一系列的不良后果。地震发生后,四川省立刻启动一级应急程序。近几年全球地震频发,所以在地震发生时如何保护自己便成了一个重要的话题。请你以“How to Survive in an Earthquake”为题写一篇文章。
内容要点:
1.地震来临时请不要惊慌,如果在室外请远离大树、高楼、高压线等物;
2.如果在室内,要尽量躲在床、柜等坚固家具下面以及房屋内侧的墙角,并且注意保护好头部;
3.逃生时千万不要选择乘坐电梯。
注意:
1.词数80左右,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
2.请在相应位置作答。
审题谋篇
一、审题定调
1.确定体裁:本单元的写作任务是写灾难求生的文章,属于说明文。所以写作的关键是语言要简明易懂条理,还要清晰地表达遇到危险时该怎么做,达到指导的效果。因为本文属于说明文,所以提倡使用祈使句。
2.确定人称:本文的主要人称为第二人称。
3.确定时态:由于本文是说明文,记叙的事情是现在随时有可能发生的事情,所以以一般现在时为主。
二、谋篇布局
为使文章能够连贯通顺,写作内容应包括以下三个方面:
1.描述题目要求中所提到的事件,引出话题;
2.主体部分,说明在地震发生时如何保护自己;
3.最后总结概括全文。
三、组织语言
1.核心短语
cause significant damage 造成重大损失
keep safe 保持安全
keep calm 保持冷静
get into an open area进入开阔地带
stay away from 远离
move to a safe place 转移到安全的地方
cover...with...用……护住……
protect...from...保护……免受……
reduce the damage 减少损失
take right measures 采取合理的措施
2.高级句式
(1)在2013年4月20日,四川省雅安市庐山县发生了大地震。(when,where and what)
On April 20,2013 a big earthquake hit Lushan County of Ya’an City,Sichuan Province.
(2)地震造成了很大的损失。(高级词汇significant;新学词汇damage)
The earthquake has caused significant damage.
(3)因此,如何在地震中保持安全已成为一个重要的问题。(“疑问词+不定式”作主语;高级词汇issue)
So how to keep safe during an earthquake has become an important issue.
(4)这里有一些指导方针。(指导建议类文章的常用句型)
Here are some guidelines.
(5)首先,不要紧张,保持冷静。(祈使句的肯定和否定形式)
Firstly,don’t be nervous and keep calm.
(6)如果在户外,尽量去远离树木、建筑物、墙壁、标志、电线以及可能坠落物体的开阔地带。(if引导条件状语从句;定语从句)
Try to get into an open area away from trees,buildings,walls,signs,power lines and anything else that might fall on you if outdoors.
(7)其次,如果你在室内,待在那里。(条件状语从句)
Secondly,if you are indoors,stay there.
(8)迅速转移到安全的地方,比如在一张结实的桌子下面。(such as)
Quickly move to a safe place such as under a strong desk.
(9)用胳膊护住你的头和脖子,保护你自己不受落物的伤害。(cover...with...)
Cover your head and neck with your arms to protect yourself from falling objects.
(10)尽管我们无法阻止地震,如果我们采取正确的措施,就能减少地震给我们带来的损失。(though引导让步状语从句;if引导条件
状语从句;定语从句)
Though we can’t stop earthquakes,we can reduce the damage that earthquakes bring us if we take right measures.
妙笔成篇
How to Survive in an Earthquake
On April 20,2013 a big earthquake hit Lushan County of Ya’an City, Sichuan Province.The earthquake has caused significant damage.So how to keep safe during an earthquake has become an important issue.Here are some guidelines.
Firstly,don’t be nervous and keep calm.Try to get into an open area away from trees,buildings,walls,signs,power lines and anything else that might fall on you if outdoors.Secondly,if you are indoors,stay there.Quickly move to a safe place such as under a strong desk.Cover your head and neck with your arms to protect yourself from falling objects.Thirdly,never go to the lift.
Though we can’t stop earthquakes,we can reduce the damage that earthquakes bring us if we take right measures.
针对训练
上周日下午,你和你的朋友在河边散步时,听到河中有人在喊救命。于是你们迅速地救起了他,并对他实施了必要的急救。请你就此事写一篇80词左右的短文,投递到学校英文报Youth,主要内容包括:
1.描述事故发生的过程;
2.实施急救的过程(让他平躺;实施口对口人工呼吸;联系救护车和他的家人);
3.简要表达你对掌握一定急救知识的重要性的想法。
Last Sunday afternoon,my friend and I were walking along the river when we heard someone screaming for help in the river.Seeing a drowning person,we jumped into the river at once and lifted him out.
We gave first aid to him right away.We put him in place and applied the mouth-to-mouth rescue breathing over and over again.Meanwhile,my friend called an ambulance.He came to himself before the doctors arrived,who praised us for our timely help.
Through this accident,we realized that a knowledge of first aid could make a real difference.(共14张PPT)
UNIT 6 THE ADMIRABLE
写 作 指 导
写作要求
如何写概要写作
请再次阅读“The Superhero Behind Superman”,按照教材概要写作的示例、要求和提示,写一篇内容概要。
审题谋篇
一、审题定调
概要写作是读写结合的题型,既考查学生理解文章主旨和段落大意的能力,又考查学生用正确的语法形式、合适的语言表达主旨的能力。概要写作一般以自然段为基础概括要点。有些段落有主题句,学生需要对主题句进行改写和调整,有些段落没有明显的主题句,需要学生自己归纳要点。通常的步骤如下:
1.通读课文,把课文分成几部分;
2.用一两个涵盖关键信息的句子概括每一部分;
3.避免加入事例和解释性的部分;
4.避免加入自己的观点;
5.注意衔接词的使用。
二、谋篇布局
本篇课文共有六段,每一段的要点如下:
Paragraph 1:Christopher Reeve is a hero in films as well as in real life.
Paragraph 2:His birth;his beginning of acting;his lead role
Paragraph 3:His success in films and good causes
Paragraph 4:His disaster;his injuries;his feelings;his will to live and walk again
Paragraph 5:His returning;his inspiring story;his influence
Paragraph 6:His death
三、组织语言
Paragraph 1:Christopher Reeve is a hero in films as well as in real life.
Paragraph 2:Born on 25 September,1952,he found his passion in acting early and eventually was offered the lead role in a Superman film.
Paragraph 3:His roles in Superman films gave him the opportunity to raise awareness for good causes.
Paragraph 4:Unfortunately,disaster struck Reeve in 1995.His neck was broken, leaving him no movement or feeling in his body at all.With little chance of survival,he was once depressed.Luckily,supported by his loved one,he found the will to live and walk again.
Paragraph 5:He engaged in exercises to rebuild muscle and made progress.He even managed to return to his film career and charity work.His positive attitude inspired many people like him.
Paragraph 6:Sadly he passed away in 2004,but he will be remembered as a superhero—both in the films and in real life.
妙笔成篇
Born on 25 September,1952,Christopher Reevee found his passion in acting early and eventually was offered the lead role in a Superman film.His roles in Superman films gave him the opportunity to raise awareness for good causes.
Unfortunately,disaster struck Reeve in 1995.His neck was broken,leaving him no movement or feeling in his body at all.With little chance of survival,he was once depressed.Luckily,supported by his loved one,he found the will to live and walk again.He engaged in exercises to rebuild muscle and made progress.He even managed to return to his film career and charity work.His positive attitude inspired many people like him.
Sadly he passed away in 2004,but he will be remembered as a superhero—both in the films and in real life.
针对训练
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Who is in control of your life Who is pulling your strings For the majority of us,it’s other people—society,colleagues,friends,or our family.We learned this way of operating when we were very young,of course.We were brainwashed.We discovered that feeling accepted was a nice experience and so we learned to do everything we could to make other people like us.As Oscar Wilde puts it,“Most people are other people.Their thoughts are someone else’s opinions,their lives a mimicry (模仿),their passions a quotation.”
When people tell us how wonderful we are,it makes us feel good.We long for this good feeling like a drug—we are addicted to it and seek it out wherever we can.Therefore,we are so eager for the approval of others that we live unhappy and limited lives,failing to do the things we really want to.Just as drug addicts and alcoholics live worsened lives to keep getting their drug,we worsen our own existence to get our own constant drug of approval.
But,just as with any drug,there is a price to pay.The price of the approval drug is freedom—the freedom to be ourselves.The truth is that we cannot control what other people think.Everyone has a different way of thinking,and people change their opinions all the time.Moreover,people have their own business,and in the end,they’re more interested in themselves than in you.The person who tries to please everyone will only end up getting exhausted and probably pleasing no one in the process.
So how can we take back control I think there’s only one way—make a conscious decision to stop caring what other people think.We should guide ourselves by means of a set of values—not values imposed (强加) from the outside by others,but values which come from within.If we are driven by these values and not by the changing opinions and value systems of others,we will live a more authentic,effective,purposeful and happy life.
It is common that our life is controlled by other people around us.(要点1) That’s because we attach great importance to being approved of by them.(要点2)Sadly,their recognition costs us our freedom to be who we are,whereas their changeable thoughts are uncontrollable.(要点3)However,we can still be our own masters by ignoring opinions of others and sticking to our inner values,thus making our life cheerful and meaningful.(要点4)
