(共31张PPT)
Unit 3 The Internet
Reading for Writing
How to write a blog post
What is a blog post
A blog post is an entry (article) that you write on a blog. It can include content in the form of text, photos, infographics (信息图), or videos.
Organization of a blog post
navigation bar导航条
title
body
ending
introduction
comment area
主页
页数
分类
图片(库)
联系
Read paragraph 1 and find out what it is about
Today I thought I'd blog about a question that has been asked many times—how do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet I'm not an expert, but many years as a blogger have taught me a thing or two.
Introduction Tell the reader about yourself and the topic of the post.
_______ _____________ 。
Online Safety/Stay Safe Online
He/She is not an _________, but an experienced ___________.
What information about the author can we get
expert
blogger
being a blogger for many years
Tip 1: Ask a question to introduce the topic.
p2
What guidelines(准则) does the author provide for staying safe online
Linking words
first of all, to begin with, firstly, first, in the first place, on top of the list, for a start
Besides, in addition, additionally, moreover, what's more, furthermore
Lastly, finally, in the end, consequently, last but not least
How are the guidelines connected
Tip3:Use linking words to express ideas clearly and coherently (连贯地).
Tip2:Use imperative sentences(祈使句) to
make the language powerful.
Who are the online troublemakers the blog post mentions
definition
comparison
Tip 4: Add details and use skills such as explanation、definition and comparison to make the information clear and understandable.
Three kinds of people: an identity thief (身份盗窃),
a troll(网络挑事者)
and a cyberbully(网络暴力).
call for comments
different comments
Why do we have comments in a blog
to hear different voices from the outside world
to get heads together and come up with more ideas
Headline
标题醒目
Introduction
引入话题+背景
Ending
邀请评论
How to write a blog post
Organization of a blog post
博文结构
Body
围绕话题提出建议
Title
Beginning
Body
Ending
Comment
Tip 1: Use as few words as possible to catch the attention of the readers.
Tip 2: Ask a question to introduce the topic.
Tip3: Use linking words to express ideas clearly and coherently.
Tip4: Use imperative sentences to make the language powerful.
Tip 5: Add details and use skills such as explanation、definition and comparison to make the information clear and understandable.
Summary
Introduce the golden tips of the Internet to the other readers.
Class survey
1. How many students in our class surf the internet
2. How often do you use it
3. What do you mainly use it for E- mail Chatting Or looking up the information
Discussion
1. What are the merits of surfing the internet
2. What are the drawbacks of surfing the interne
Merits
releax your mood
shop onine
transmit information
make more friends
Drawbacks
Cyberbullying
Information leakage
Wire Fraud (电信诈骗)
Identity theft (身份盗窃)
Troll (网络挑事者)
Conclusion
Use what you have learnt to write a blog post about online safety.
Online shopping sites
Use a website you are familiar with.
Use strong passwords.
Don’t use public computers.
Social networking apps
Don’t post personal information.
Don’t believe everything.
Be polite.
Online chat rooms
Don’t give out too much information.
Never meet someone you met online alone.
Choose one of the topics below and use the notes to draft your blog post.
Writing
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谋篇布局
就本单元的写作任务而言,可以分为三部分:
第一部分:提出话题——网络安全的重要性;
第二部分:主体——对网络安全的建议;
第三部分:结尾——征求读者意见并欢迎留言。
Para1: introduction ①当谈及网上购物安全,作为一个有经验的网民,我确信对此我还是略知一二的。
①When it comes to online shopping safety, as an experienced netizen, I am sure that I know one thing or two.
transitional sentences(过渡句)
①当你在网上购物时,这些简单的建议能够帮助你避免一些糟糕的购物体验。
1.When you shop online, these simple suggestions can help avoid some terrible experiences.
2.It is recommended that it is necessary to read the following advice before shopping online, which makes your online shopping risk-free.
第一,挑选熟悉的购物网站。最好在你了解且信任的网站上购物,它会保护好你的隐私。
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第二,当你上网购物时,使用较为复杂的密码并保管好。
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第三,勿使用公共网络购物。使用公共网络购物有着巨大的风险。//千万不要使用公共电脑上网购物,否则你的隐私会被记录在电脑里。或者,可以将你想要购买的商品加入购物车,直到回家后再去购买。
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最后,安装防火墙来保护您的信息。防火墙是一种保护你使用互联网的软件。
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First of all, choose the website you are familiar with. It’s best to shop from the website you know and trust, because it can protect your privacy.
What’more, when registering a shopping website, you should use a strong password and keep it well.
Last but not least, don’t shop on public network because shopping on public Wifi is a huge risk.// never use public computers to shop online, or your privacy will be recorded in the computers. Or, add those items that you want to buy into your shopping cart and buy them when you are at home.
Last, install a firewall to watch over your information. A firewall is a kind of software to protect your using Internet.
Ending(ask others to give comments)
①你有什么关于安全网上购物的建议吗?欢迎在下方评论!
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①Do you have any good tip about shopping online safely Your ideas are welcomed below!
②You are welcomed to share your stories and make any comment on online shopping safety!
Online shopping Safety
Today, I want to blog about online shopping safety, which has caused a wide attention nowadays. Many years as an online shopper have taught me a thing or two about this topic.
First of all, you'd better use the website you are familiar with. It is easy for us to be open-minded and try a new website, but for the sake of (为了...起见) safety, shopping at a familiar website is a better choice. Second, avoid shopping online with public computers. The more cautious you are online, the less likely you are to become the easy target of hackers. A computer hacker is someone who tries to break into computer systems, especially in order to get secret information. Therefore, it's much safer to shop at home. Besides, remember to use a strong password, avoiding using common information like your birthday or your phone number. It's better to use a mix of numbers and letters.
Do you have some good advice to share with us You can post your comments below.
□1. Does the writer tell the reader what he/she knows about the topic
□2. Are the tips and suggestions well organized
□3. Has the writer defined the new words
□4. Does the author include examples, comparisons, or explanations
□5. Does the writer end by asking readers to leave comments and/or suggestions
□6. Can you find any grammar or spelling mistakes?
Let's polish the passage.
writing
互联网现在在人们生活中不可或缺 ,它已经成为人们生活的一部分。但网络有利有弊,请在你的博客上写一篇关于“网络利弊”的文章 并提出你的观点或建议。
注意:1、字数 80字左右;
2、 不出现真实人名与地名。
Recently, the problem of ... has drawn wide attention.
It is commonly believed that ... /It is a common belief that ...
Many people insist that ... /hold the belief that ...
With the development of science and technology, an increasing number of people believe that ...
1. 最近,...的问题引起了广泛的关注。
2. 普遍认为,...
3. 很多人坚持认为...
4. 随着科技的发展,越来越多人相信...
Introduction:
/has been brought into focus.
上网互联网的利
上网互联网的利: 1.带来益处,使学习更加便利Surfing the Internet can bring us much more benefits and make our study more convenient.
2.资源丰富There are a wide range of learning resources on the Internet.
3.和家人、朋友联系It is greatly convenient for us to keep in touch with our family and friends by the Internet.
上网互联网的弊
1.访问不良网站:Students may be accessible to or visit unhealthy websites.
2.花费过多时间、精力,影响学习
Surfing the Internet may take a lot of time and energy, which will have an adverse effect on their study.
1. 发表关于...的博客_____________
2. 网上购物安全___________________
3.对....熟悉__________________
4. 这是一个好的选择________________
5.避免使用这个密码_________________________
6. 越复杂,越安全_____________________________
7. 在公共场所__________________
8.在家购物__________________
It's a good choice.
avoid using this password
be familiar with
the more difficult.... the safer...
shop at home
write/post a blog about ....
online shopping safety
in public places
遣词
黄金原则
发布言论
公布信息
对他人无礼/刻薄
成为网络霸凌的对象
在网上挑起事端
针对特定的人
golden rules/guidelines
post negative comments/remarks
give out information
be rude/mean to others
become a target for a troll or cyberbully
stir up trouble
be directed at particular people
I am not an expert, but many years as a blogger/ netizen have taught me a thing or two.
The more polite you are, the less likely it is you will be attacked.
Murphy's law: 越担心的事情越有可能发生
Better safe than sorry.
《庄子语录》:小心驶得万年船。
The more you worry about sth, the more likely it is to happen.
The more cautious you are, the less likely it is for you to become an easy target.
Thank You!