人教版（2019）选择性必修 第三册Unit 2 Healthy Lifestyle Reading for writing课件(共44张PPT)

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Unit 2 Healthy Lifestyle
Reading for Writing
Write A Letter To The Editor About Your Lifestyle
参加夏令营
缺乏热情
得/患流感
激发某人的积极性
肉干
酣睡
不再
患……病;遭受
流感病毒
最好的是
参与;参加
焦虑不安;心力交瘁
日日夜夜;夜以继日
筋疲力尽的;疲惫的
对……着迷;热衷于……
成功做某事
(去)攀岩
提高(某人的)生活品质
增加幸福感
试用;测试;试验
attend a summer camp
lack passion
get the flu
stimulate sb’s motivation
dried meat
sleep soundly★
no longer / not ... any longer ★
suffer from ★
a flu virus
best of all
take part / participate / be / get involved in★
stressed out ★
day and night / night and day
worn out
be mad for / about / on
succeed in doing sth★
(go) rock climbing
enhance the quality of (one’s) life
increase sb's happiness
try out ★
Prep for Writing
说服某人做某事
对……造成损害
压力大/小
与长期的压力作斗争
培养一种新爱好
踩滑板
打保龄球
化解压力
使某人不再去想(担忧)某事
集中精力于
使某人从某事物中解脱出来;使某人摆脱某事
do damage to
persuade sb to do sth ★
serious / minor stress
fight long-term stress
take up a new hobby
ride a skateboard
go bowling
absorb stress
take sb’s mind off sth
concentrate / focus on ★
free sb from sth
Prep for Writing
Lead-in
What bad habits do you have about your lifestyle
Overeating Unhealthy Food
Drink milktea often
drink and smoke
play cellphone in bed
too stressed out
Staying up Late
My ideal lifestyle
eat healthy food
go to bed early
do exercise regularly
What is your ideal lifestyle
Do you know how to change them into good ones
If there is a summer camp organised by the magazine , would you like to join Why or why not What do you expect to learn
July 1st to 21st!
Want to get rid of your bad habits
Come and join us!
Our activities help you find a better self!
VS
Wang Lu
George Fielding
After the summer camp organised by the magazine Healthy Life, the two students changed a lot. Read the letters and find out their efforts and the results.
What is the basic structure of a letter
Dear Editor,
Yours truly,/Sincerely,
signature
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
body
Complimentary close 信尾敬语
Salutation 称呼
To whom
who
Reading for writing
Divide each letter into four parts and try to match the main ideas below to each part.
identify problems
consider what to do
describe what he / she has done to change
give the results
Problem
Decision
Action(s)
Result(s)
Problem-solution pattern
Problem
Problem
Decision
Decision
Action(s)
Action(s)
Result(s)
Result(s)
What is the main idea of these two passages (P8)
Problem
Decision
Action(s)
Result(s)
Problem
Decision
Action(s)
Result(s)
These are two _________ from _______and_________, who attended , to the editor to inform the editor of their_________, _________, ___________and___________.
the summer camp
Wang Lu
George
problems
decisions
actions
results
letters
Read these two passage carefully and finish the table on P21.
Reading for details
Reading for details
sleepy and dizzy
passion
flu easily
many toothaches
eat no sugar
exercise regularly
buying sweets, biscuits, and sugary drinks
at least 30
minutes and did something active
dynamic and stronger
both body and mind
soundly
suffers from flu
or toothaches
in control of her own life
well
Reading for details
stressed out
worn out
playing computer games
take control of his life and
find other ways to relax
rock climbing monthly with
his dad
energetic
change himself for the better
Read and Think (Language features)
Past tense
Past tense
Past tense
Present tense
(Letter 1)
Read and Think (Language features)
Past tense
Past tense
Past tense
Past tense
(Letter 2)
What was the problem
How did the author decide to change that
What did the author do to change that
(action)
What is the result
Past tense
Past tense
Past tense
Present tense
Language features
Preparations for the writing.
Write a letter to the editor about one aspect of your own lifestyle that you would like to change.
structure
Problem
Decision
Action
Result
What lifestyle habit you would like to change
Why you want to change
How you plan to change
What result you hope to see
past tense
present
tense
1.曾几何时There was a time when
2.更糟糕地是Worse still
3.依赖……做某事 rely on...to do sth.
4.决定；选定 decide on
5.约束自我discipline myself
6.下定决心做某事 make up one’s mind to do sth.
7.立即；马上 straight away
8.筋疲力尽的；疲惫的 be worn out
9.焦虑不安的；心力交瘁 stressed out
10.提高质量 enhance the quality of
11.恢复精力 get refreshed
Wang Lu and George Fielding attended the summer camp 1 ____________（organize） by the magazine Healthy Life. At the end of the camp，what Wang Lu heard stimulated her 2____________（motivate）. She made up her mind 3_________ （eat） nothing with sugar and to exercise regularly. Now she sleeps soundly at night and feels 4__________________（dynamic） than ever.
In the meanwhile，George Fielding has changed himself 5_________the better. He used to get so absorbed 6_________he played the games day and night. However，after the camp，he 7_________（take） control of his life though it was 8_________ big struggle not to play online games. Now he and his dad go rock climbing together 9　_________（month）. It has enhanced the quality of his life，10___________　（improve） his health and increasing his happiness.
　
organized
motivation
to eat
more dynamic
for
that
took
a
monthly
improving
Filling in the blanks and feel the tenses in the passage
Writing
Now you are going to join the camp. Write a letter to the editor to tell him your own lifestyle that you want to change.
本单元的写作任务是写一封关于健康生活方式的信。这类文章属于说明文，正文部分主要包括problem, decision, actions, results等。基本框架第一段：写信的目的第二段：介绍自己的问题，决定，行动和结果第三段：收获和期望时态：一般现在时，一般过去时人称：第一人称
原文关于问题，决定，行动和结果的分析：
一、原文Letter 1的问题：I realized hardly ever felt well, either physically or mentally. I often felt sleepy and dizzy, and lacked passion. I got the flu easily and experienced many toothaches.简化问题（增加原因）：我过去常吃太多的糖分，以至于我常常觉得困倦，头晕目眩，并且经常牙疼。______________________________________________________________________________
原文Letter 2的问题：After starting high school, I felt stressed out and always relaxed by playing computer games. I got so absorbed that I played the games day and night. Playing was fun, but I felt even more worn out afterwards!简化问题：我过去常沉迷于电脑游戏，以至于我经常感到疲惫。_____________________________________________________________________句型：Sb. used to ..., so that ... 某人过去常常......, 以致于......
二、原文1决定：I made up my mind to change two things in my life: to eat nothing with sugar and to exercise regularly.原文2决定：I decided to take control of my life and find other ways to relax.句型：I made up my mind to ... / I decided to ...
三、原文1行为：After that I stopped buying all the sweets, biscuits, and sugary drinks that I used to have every day. (举例: Whenever I went out with friends, brought snacks from home, things that didn’t have and added sugar: fruit, nuts, dried meat, etc. )I went outside every day for at least 30 minutes and did something active. (举例: Sometimes I played table tennis or badminton with my cousins. Other times I jumped on my skateboard and rode around my neighbourhood, or just took a long walk.)原文2行为：Now my dad and I go rock climbing together monthly! (好处: It has enhanced the quality of life, improving my health and increasing my happiness. I get refreshed through climbing, spend more time with my dad, and get to meet new friends.)
四、原文1结果：The results have been fantastic: I feel more dynamic and stronger than ever, in both body and mind. I sleep soundly at night now. I sleep soundly at night now. I no longer suffer from a flu virus or toothaches either. I feel like I'm in control of my own life. 原文2结果：After six months of trying out new ways of relaxing, I feel much more energetic. I feel that I can change myself for the better.
连接词的使用：首先：Firstly, First of all, To begin with, ...其次：Secondly, What’s more, In addition, Moreover, Furthermore, Besides, ...最后：Lastly, Finally, Last but not least, ...
参加有关个人生活选择的夏令营后，我意识到我沉迷于电子设备，在玩的时候让我娱乐，但是之后更精疲力尽。
After I attended your summer camp about health and lifestyle choices, I realized I was addicted to digital devices,which entertained me when I was playing, but wore me out afterwards.
仿写Problem:
My motivation stimulated, I made up my mind to get rid of bad habits and take control of my life.
我的动力被激发，我下定决心摆脱坏习惯，掌控自己的生活。
仿写：Decision
参加完夏令营后，你努力摆脱digital addiction，请写信给编辑，描述你的问题，决定，行动，结果。
仿写练习
Whenever I wanted to play computer games, I went jogging instead, which not only enhanced my quality of life but also improved my health.
仿写：每次我想玩电脑游戏的时候，我就出去慢跑。这不仅提高了我的生活质量，也改善了我的身体状况。
仿写：Action
仿写：结果是极好的。我在身体和精神上精力充沛。更好的是，我感觉我可以让自己变得更好。
The results have been fantastic. I get more dynamic, refreshed and energetic both physically and mentally. Better yet, I feel that I can change myself for the better.
仿写：Result
仿写Problem:
参加完夏令营后，你努力摆脱digital addiction，请写信给编辑，描述你的问题，决定，行动，结果。
1.参加有关个人生活选择的夏令营后，我意识到我沉迷于电子设备，在玩的时候让我娱乐，但是之后更精疲力尽。
2.我的动力被激发，我下定决心摆脱坏习惯，掌控自己的生活。
3.每次我想玩电脑游戏的时候，我就出去慢跑。这不仅提高了我的生活质量，也改善了我的身体状况。
4.结果是极好的。我在身体和精神上精力充沛。更好的是，我感觉我可以让自己变得更好。
Writing 合作探究，突破难点
Dear editor,
After I attended your summer camp about health and lifestyle
choices, I realized I was addicted to digital devices，which entertained me when I was playing, but wore me out afterwards.
After the camp, my motivation stimulated, I made up my mind to get rid of bad habits and take control of my life. Whenever I wanted to play computer games, I went jogging instead, which not only enhanced my quality of life but also improved my health. The results have been fantastic. I get more dynamic, refreshed and energetic both physically and mentally. Better yet, I feel that I can change myself for the better.
This experience benefited me a lot. And if that’s true for all of us, then it might truly be possible to change the world for the better.
Yours,
连句成篇
How to write a good feedback letter
A good feedback
letter
Who
To whom
Beginning:
(Background, purpose)
Body:
(problems+decisions+
actions+results )
Ending:
(Inspire others to take action)
Language features
Tense (Past tense+Present tense)
words and phrases
Advanced expressions of identifying problems, decribing decisions, actions and results.
...
…
structure
Useful expressions
What lifestyle habit you would like to change
Computer Game Addiction
Overeating Unhealthy Food
Staying up Late
Overspending
have difficulty in waking up early
be also constantly late
overeat and snack frequently
lose track of time and fall asleep in the early hours of the morning with my phone
After I attended your summer camp about health and lifestyle choices, I realised...
I felt ... and lacked ...
be always tired during the day and often feel worn out
be stressed under time pressure all day long
be struggling to keep up with my peers
want to get my life back on track
want to find the discipline to change my sleeping habits and overcome my phone addiction
also want to find a healthier eating and exercise regime and stick to it
Why you want to change
would like to attend your boot camp
take the steps necessary to firstly reduce my dependency on my phone
adopt a more healthy diet and eliminate comfort eating
become a better time manager balancing exercise with study commitments
stimulated my decision.
I made up my mind to ...
I decided to ...
Some times I... Other times I...
How you plan to change
a better and more refreshing sleeping pattern
What result you hope to see
Gain time to focus on my studies
have a healthy work-life balance
The results have been fantastic.
2.I no longer suffer from ...
3. I feel like I’m in control of own life.
实战演练：为了帮助中学生健康成长,某英文报开设了“Live a healthy life”专栏。假定你是李华,曾因身体肥胖感到烦恼,影响了正常的学习和生活。请你给该栏目的编辑写一封信,分享自己的经历,内容包括:(1)过去的生活情况; (2)改变与做法; (3)感受与期待。注意: (1)词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Editor，
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
明确体裁、话题
书信；健康的生活方式
确定时态、人称
一般过去时和现在时为主；第一人称
布局文章架构
第一段：表明写信的目的；
第二段：说明自己生活方式的变化；
第三段：表达祝愿
列出核心要点
1. 过去吃垃圾食品，体重超重；
2. 对身体健康的追求使自己作出改变；
3. 措施：改变饮食习惯和进行体育锻炼；
4. 表达自己的感受
【写作架构】
Go for Writing
Dear Editor,
I was walking past a shop window the other day when I saw my reflection. At first, I didn't realise it was me. When I saw it was me, I felt sad as I was overweight. I didn't realise how I looked, and now I really want to change. I really like eating, but I realise I eat too much, and I don't eat good things.
I want to change because I want to be able to look at myself and feel happy with how I look. I also want to be healthy.
My plan is to change my diet and exercise regularly. I will stop eating sugar, and only eat at mealtimes rather than eating snacks during the day. I will focus on healthy foods. Then I will exercise every day. I will walk to school and back, and on the weekend, I will go swimming.
I have only been doing my plan for a week, but I'm already starting to feel better. I haven't lost a lot of weight yet, but I feel positive. I feel confident that I will reach my goal!
Yours sincerely,
A. Smith
problem
decision
result
action
summary
Dear Editor,
①Knowing that letter are wanted , I’d like to share my story with you. ②As my studies grew, I was stressed out and worn out. There was a time when I suffered a poor sleep. Worse still, the addiction to smoking brought me a negative effect physically and mentally.
③Suddenly,I became aware that if left unchecked, my bad habits would make me accomplish nothing , I made up my mind to change myself straight away. ④Whenever I wanted to smoke, I tried to discipline myself by doing other things to get refreshed. I chose to work out regularly, which enhanced my quality of life.
⑤ Now, there is no doubt that I am more dynamic, with my motivation stimulated.
Yours, Li Hua
审题构思：第一段：简单自我介绍+根据自己的经历分享自己关于健康生活的看法第二段：1. 问题：曾因身体肥胖感到烦恼,影响了正常的学习和生活2. 决定：决定减肥，做些改变3. 行动：（1）戒掉垃圾食品和含糖饮料，多喝开水，多吃蔬菜水果 （2）多做运动，如和朋友踢足球或打篮球 （3）保持良好的情绪4. 结果：成功减肥，感觉更加精力充沛，感觉自己掌控了自己的生活，觉得自己可以变得更好第三段：表达对对方的期望和祝愿(1)I hope that you can have a healthy body.希望你拥有健康的身体。(2)I hope that my experience will be of great help to you.希望我的经历对你能有帮助。
Write a letter to the editor about one aspect of your own lifestyle that you would like to change.
【遣词造句】
与不健康的生活方式相关：unhealthy, fast food, snack, fat, salt, sugar, stay up,
take little exercise, watch TV for a long time ...
与疾病相关：toothache, high blood pressure, heart disease, overweight, nearsightedness ...
与健康的生活方式相关：have a balanced diet, take exercise regularly,
eat more fresh fruit and vegetables, go to bed early, have meals on time ...
【句式】
I realized that …
I made up my mind to …
To keep fit, we should…
I feel more …
As far as I’m concerned, we should…
I decided to …
What worries me most is…
Go for Writing
【遣词造句】
1.使用一般过去时介绍自己以前的不良生活习惯。
①过去我喜欢垃圾食品。
In the past I liked junk food.　
②我过去超重。
In the past I was overweight.　
2.使用恰当的修饰语表达针对个人问题作出的决定。
③我对完美身材的热情驱使我改变我的生活方式。
My great passion for a well-shaped body drove me to change my lifestyle.　
④我的计划是改变不合理的饮食和定期锻炼。
My plan is to change my improper diet and exercise regularly.　
3.根据提示介绍针对个人问题采取的行动。
⑤在健身房锻炼是我的惯常做法。（动词-ing短语作主语）
Working out in the gym is my routine.　
⑥保持均衡的饮食对我来说是必须做的事情。（it作形式主语； a must）
It is a must for me to keep a balanced diet.　
Go for Writing
【段落衔接】
三、恰当衔接，自然过渡
1.用and， therefore连接句①和句②
In the past I liked junk food and therefore I was overweight.　
2.用while连接句⑤和句⑥
Working out in the gym is my routine while it is a must for me to keep a balanced diet.　
3.用but连接句⑦和句⑧
I have only been carrying out my plan for several months， but I’m now starting to feel better.　
Go for Writing
【遣词造句】
4.使用不同的时态介绍现在的状况。
⑦我的计划仅仅进行了几个月。（现在完成进行时）
I have only been carrying out my plan for several months.　
⑧现在我开始感觉好多了。（现在进行时）
I’m now starting to feel better.　
⑨我有信心达到我的目标。（一般现在时；一般将来时）
I feel confident that I will reach my goal.　
Dear Editor，
I am writing to tell you the changes of my lifestyle. 　
　In the past I liked junk food and therefore I was overweight. My great passion for a well-shaped body drove me to change my lifestyle. My plan is to change my improper diet and exercise regularly. Working out in the gym is my routine while it is a must for me to keep a balanced diet. I have only been carrying out my plan for several months， but I’m now starting to feel better. I feel confident that I will reach my goal.　
Best wishes.　
　 Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
Go for Writing
GOOD BYE!
Good habits makes a lifetime, and bad habits destroy a person’s future.