备战2024年高考英语名校模拟真题速递专题08 ：书面表达15篇(第二期)(新高考专用)（含解析）
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备战2024年高考英语名校模拟真题速递(新高考专用)
第二期
专题08 书面表达15篇
一、其他应用文
1．（2023春·河北石家庄·高三石家庄二中校考阶段练习）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter结束了在中国的学习即将回国，你打算为他写一个扇面“锲而不舍”送给他作为纪念。请你附一篇短文告知他此礼物的含义。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Hearing you are scheduled to return home, I’d like to give you a folding fan featuring a Chinese idiom “锲而不舍” on it as a souvenior.
“shan” is a symbol of kindness in Chinese, which is also a reminder of our forever friendship. Four Chinese characters express the great spirit of persistence. “锲(qie)” means “the act of carving” and “不舍(bùshě)” means “not giving up”. This idiom, as a whole, suggests if we keep carving, we will eventually turn a metal or stone piece into an artwork, however hard it pared with carving metal or stone, this idiom highlights the moral that if we don’t quit, we will achieve our goal one day.
At last, I’ll extend my best wishes to you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给结束了在中国学习即将回国的美国朋友Peter写一个扇面“锲而不舍”送给他作为纪念并附一篇短文告知他此礼物的含义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想要做某事：would like to do sth.→feel like doing sth.
表达：express→deliver/convey
实现：achieve→fulfil
放弃：quit→give up
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing you are scheduled to return home, I’d like to give you a folding fan featuring a Chinese idiom “锲而不舍” on it as a souvenior.
拓展句：Hearing you are scheduled to return home, I’d like to give you a folding fan which features a Chinese idiom “锲而不舍” on it as a souvenior.
【点睛】【高分句型1】“shan” is a symbol of kindness in Chinese, which is also a reminder of our forever friendship. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】This idiom, as a whole, suggests if we keep carving, we will eventually turn a metal or stone piece into an artwork, however hard it is. (运用了省略了that的宾语从句，if引导的条件状语从句，however引导的让步状语从句)
2．（2023秋·云南保山·高三统考期末）假定你是李华，你想让交换生Peter介绍一位他的同学作你的笔友，内容包括:
1. 你对笔友的要求；
2. 期待早日交到笔友。
注意:
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
Does everything go well with you I want to have a pen pal with interests similar to me, hopefully a boy in your high school.
As far as I am concerned, he’d better be fond of travelling and doing sports. Besides, it would be better for him to have a pet dog as I have. With such a pen friend, I can share my experiences with him in travelling, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in common. I believe I can improve my English by doing so.
I’d appreciate it if you could help me find one. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生让交换生Peter介绍一位他的同学作你的笔友。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜爱：be fond of→ like
此外：Besides → What’s more
提高，改善：improve→ enhance
感谢：appreciate→ thank
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I want to have a pen pal with interests similar to me, hopefully a boy in your high school.
拓展句：I want to have a pen pal, who has the similar interests to me, hopefully a boy in your high school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’d appreciate it if you could help me find one.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句。）
【高分句型2】Besides, it would be better for him to have a pet dog as I have.（运用了it作形式主语，动词不定式to do作真正的主语。）
3．（2022秋·四川内江·高三四川省资中县第二中学校考阶段练习）假定你是李华。你的美国朋友Jack发来邮件，想了解中国茶文化。现在请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.中国茶文化简介；
2.饮茶的好处；
3.邀请他来中国体验茶文化。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. And now I’m very happy to share something about Chinese tea culture in reply to your last e mail.
Chinese tea culture started about 4,000 years ago and drinking tea gradually became an amazing tradition. In China, people drink tea almost everywhere and in most of their spare time. Some Chinese believe that tea benefits people’s health a lot. Drinking a cup of tea makes people relaxed and refreshed. Others treat guests or friends to tea drinking in social communication.
Probably, you’ve got a general picture of tea culture after my introduction. Then, how about coming to China to experience it yourself Maybe, you will fall in love with it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Jack回一封邮件，向他介绍中国茶文化。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
作为……的答复：in reply to→in answer to
空闲时间：spare time→free time
亲自：yourself→in person
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Probably, you’ve got a general picture of tea culture after my introduction.
拓展句：Probably, you’ve got a general picture of tea culture after I introduced it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Some Chinese believe that tea benefits people’s health a lot.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Drinking a cup of tea makes people relaxed and refreshed.（运用了非谓语动词作主语）
4．（2021秋·广东·高三校联考阶段练习）假定你是李华，上周五你参加了学校组织的开心农场活动，请你用英语向校刊投稿，报道活动的内容和感受，要点包括：
1.活动的内容;
2.你的感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
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【答案】Last Friday our school organized the social activity in the happy farm, deeply impressing us.
On our arrival at the destination after a one-hour trip, we were warmly welcomed by the local farmers. Enthusiastic and hospitable, they firstly shared with us great changes and the development in the past two years and then showed us around their farmhouses. What impressed us most was that in the afternoon we were arranged to help the farmers pick vegetables and fruits, experiencing and enjoying the pleasure of the harvest.
We are very appreciative to be provided with such a valuable opportunity to help us value what the farmers have made and it also strengthens our sense of social responsibility.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语向校刊投稿，报道上周五你参加的学校组织的开心农场活动，包括活动的内容和感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助：help →assist
被提供：be provided with →be supplied with
机会：chance →opportunity
增强：strengthen →enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last Friday our school organized the social activity in the happy farm, deeply impressing us.
拓展句：Last Friday our school organized the social activity in the happy farm, which deeply impressed us.
【点睛】[高分句型1] What impressed us most was that in the afternoon we were arranged to help the farmers pick vegetables and fruits, experiencing and enjoying the pleasure of the harvest. (运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
[高分句型2] We are very appreciative to be provided with such a valuable opportunity to help us value what the farmers have made and it also strengthens our sense of social responsibility. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
5．（2023秋·江苏镇江·高三统考开学考试）假如你是李华，来自英国的友好学校师生一行10人上周末到你校进行交流访问。请你为校英文报写一篇关于接待活动的报道，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动内容；
3.活动反响。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
An Inter-school Exchange
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【答案】Last weekend, our school had the pleasure of welcoming a group of ten teachers and students from a friendly school in the UK. The aim of the visit was to promote cultural understanding and exchange between our two schools.
On arrival, they were given a tour of our campus, which included a visit to our library and an insight into our classroom-based activities. Later, they attended a performance put on by our school’s drama club, giving them a taste of traditional Chinese culture.
The UK guests were impressed with the friendliness and hospitality of our students and staff, and were eager to continue the exchange.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。来自英国的友好学校师生一行10人上周末到校进行交流访问，要求考生为校英文报写一篇关于接待活动的报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目标：aim → goal/purpose
促进：promote → advance/facilitate
包含：include → contain
渴望做某事：be eager to do sth.→ desire to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Later, they attended a performance put on by our school’s drama club, giving them a taste of traditional Chinese culture.
拓展句：Later, they attended a performance which was put on by our school’s drama club, giving them a taste of traditional Chinese culture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] On arrival, they were given a tour of our campus, which included a visit to our library and an insight into our classroom-based activities. (运用了关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Later, they attended a performance put on by our school’s drama club, giving them a taste of traditional Chinese culture. (运用了过去分词作后置定语和现在分词作结果状语)
6．（2023秋·湖南·高三湖南师大附中校考阶段练习）假定你是李华，上周你校成功举办了一场关于中华传统手工艺的活动。请你为校英文报撰写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；2. 活动内容；3. 活动反响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Getting to know traditional Chinese handicrafts
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【答案】Getting to know traditional Chinese handicrafts
Last week, our school launched a traditional Chinese handicraft campaign aimed at increasing students’ knowledge and confidence in this art form. The campaign was a great success and left a lasting impression on all who participated.
The highlight of the campaign was a lecture by experts on traditional Chinese handicrafts. They introduced students to various representative forms, such as paper-cutting, Chinese knots and clay sculpture. The experts explained the origin, development, and current status of each craft, and showcased some of their best works of art which were exquisite and impressive.
The event ended with a hands-on session where students had the opportunity to create their own works of art.
This immersive and inspirational experience sparked an interest in traditional Chinese handicrafts among the students who are now eagerly anticipating the next campaign.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于上周你校成功举办了一场关于中华传统手工艺的活动这一情况，为校英文报撰写一篇报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
演讲：lecture→ speech
机会：opportunity→ chance
各种各样的：various→ all kinds of
渴望地：eagerly→ longingly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last week, our school launched a traditional Chinese handicraft campaign aimed at increasing students’ knowledge and confidence in this art form.
拓展句：Last week, our school launched a traditional Chinese handicraft campaign, which was aimed at increasing students’ knowledge and confidence in this art form.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This immersive and inspirational experience sparked an interest in traditional Chinese handicrafts among the students who are now eagerly anticipating the next campaign.（运用了关系代词who引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】The event ended with a hands-on session where students had the opportunity to create their own works of art.（运用了关系副词where引导的限制性定语从句）
7．（2023·重庆·重庆市育才中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，是学校公众号的英语栏目的编辑，学校学生会将举行“一起阅读(Read Together)”活动，请你写一则倡议，内容包括：
(1)活动目的；
(2)活动内容；
(3)呼吁参加。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80左右；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Read Together
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【答案】Read Together
I’m excited to announce that our school student union will organize a special event called “Read Together”.
The purpose of this activity is to promote the love for reading among students, as well as to enhance their language skills and broaden their horizons. In the activity, we will have a book fair where students can explore and purchase their favorite books,and we will also have a series of reading workshops, where experienced teachers and students can share their reading experiences and recommend good books.
We sincerely invite all students to join us in this exciting event. See you there!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校学生会将举行“一起阅读(Read Together)”活动，要求考生写一则倡议，介绍活动的目的和内容，并呼吁学生们参加。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：organize→hold
目的：purpose→aim
拓宽眼界：broaden horizon→ expand horizon
真挚地：sincerely→genuinely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We sincerely invite all students to join us in this exciting event.
拓展句：We sincerely invite all students to join us in this exciting event, where you are sure to have a rich harvest.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m excited to announce that our school student union will organize a special event called “Read Together”.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】In the activity, we will have a book fair where students can explore and purchase their favorite books, and we will also have a series of reading workshops, where experienced teachers and students can share their reading experiences and recommend good books.（运用了where引导的定语从句，and构成并列结构）
8．（2023秋·河南焦作·高三统考开学考试）你校将举办英语夏令营活动，请你作为学生代表以Goals为题写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1.树立目标的意义；
2.如何确定目标。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Goals
It is a great honor for me to stand here to share my opinions about goals.
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Thank you for listening!
【答案】 Goals
It is a great honor for me to stand here to share my opinions about goals. As we all know, without a goal, our study and even life will be like a chicken with its head cut off. So, it is significant that we should make goals for ourselves.
We can have short-term and long-term goals. For example, if we just want to set a goal for a day or a week, we can make it a short one, which can create fulfilling days. Instead, we ought to think it carefully and make a long-term goal. Then we can be determined and perseverant to achieve our goals.
Thank you for listening!
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生作为学生代表以Goals为题写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
众所周知：as we all know→as is known to us all
目标：goal→aim
因此：so→therefore
重要的：significant→important
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Instead, we ought to think it carefully and make a long-term goal. Then we can be determined and persevering to achieve our goals.
拓展句：Instead, we ought to think it carefully and make a long-term goal so that we can be determined and perseverant to achieve our goals.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As we all know, without a goal, our study and even life will be like a chicken with its head cut off.（由as引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】So, it is significant that we should make goals for ourselves.（由that引导的主语从句）
二、建议信
9．（2023秋·山东泰安·高三统考阶段练习）某国际学校拟建立一个英语阅读室，现向学生征求建议。假如你是李华，请给学校负责人Mr. Wilson写一封信，内容包括：
1. 表达自己的看法；
2. 给出建议和理由。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Wilson,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】 I am very delighted to know that an English reading room is about to be established in our school. This reading room will bring great convenience to students. We will have easier access to English books and broaden our horizons. Now I’m writing to give some suggestions.
Firstly, I suggest that the reading room should have a complete range of books, because they will meet various needs of students and attract more students to read books here. Besides, It is strongly recommended that some reading exchange activities be held regularly. By doing this, students can better understand the books they read.
I hope this English reading room can be built as soon as possible to serve the students.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对学校即将建立的英语阅览室提出意见。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→tip
各种各样的：various→a variety of
除此之外：besides→in addition
定期地：regularly→on a regular basis
2.句型拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Now I’m writing to give some suggestions.
拓展句：Now I’m writing to give some suggestions, which will be useful to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I am very delighted to know that an English reading room is about to be established in our school.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】 Besides, It is strongly recommended that some reading exchange activities be held regularly. （it作形式主语，that引导的主语从句）
10．（2023秋·湖北·高三统考阶段练习）假定你是李华，为了适应英语听力中的英美混合播音，你给外教 Smith写封邮件，希望他在口语课上提供针对性的帮助。内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 你的建议。
注意：1. 词数80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Smith,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students. In order to adjust to the mixed accents of British and American English in listening practice, I’m wondering if you could accept the following suggestions I would like to offer on our oral English lessons.
First of all, we would greatly appreciate it if you could provide some pronunciation rules which can help us sharpen our listening skills. Additionally, it would help to introduce us to some useful materials, such as English songs, fun dubbing, or film clips where we can be exposed to various accents. I am firmly convinced that we will make great progress with your aid.
Thank you for your attention to this letter! Looking forward to your support and guidance!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“为了适应英语听力中的英美混合播音”一事，给外教 Smith写封邮件，希望他在口语课上提供针对性的帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助某人做某事：help sb. do sth.→ assist sb. to do sth.
此外：additionally → in addition
有用的：useful → practical
各种各样的：various → a variety of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m Li Hua, one of your students.
拓展句：I’m Li Hua, one of your students who are very interested in English.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In order to adjust to the mixed accents of British and American English in listening practice, I’m wondering if you could accept the following suggestions I would like to offer on our oral English lessons. (运用了if引导的宾语从句和省略关系代词引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I am firmly convinced that we will make great progress with your aid. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
11．（2023秋·江苏连云港·高三连云港高中校考阶段练习）假如你是李华，你的朋友David发现同学们都有自己爱好和特长，而他只会学习，他感到有点小嫉妒，有点不知所措，写信向你求助。请根据以下提示给他回信：
1.表示安慰；
2.提出建议。
注意：1.词数80字左右；
2.可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I am sorry to hear that you feel a bit jealous of seeing your classmates having their own hobbies and specialties while you only learn.
First of all, please remember that nothing is as important as focusing on your studies. However, I believe there are many other things besides academics to explore and discover. Why not take the initiative to talk to people Your friends may have interesting hobbies which may inspire you. Additionally, you could find something that suits your interests on the internet or by reading books. Use this as an opportunity to explore and uncover the hidden potential that lies within you. I believe that you’ll eventually find what you are looking for.
I hope my suggestions are helpful and I wish you the best of luck.
Your friend,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一封建议信。要求考生以李华的身份给你的朋友David写一封信，对于爱好和特长问题给他一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
得知：hear→ be made aware
看见：see → spot
重要的：important→ significant
有益的：be helpful→ be beneficial
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：I believe there are many other things besides academics to explore and discover.
拓展句：It is my belief that there are many other things besides academics to explore and discover.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am sorry to hear that you feel a bit jealous of seeing your classmates having their own hobbies and specialties while you only learn.（使用了that引导宾语从句、现在分词作宾补）
【高分句型2】Your friends may have interesting hobbies which may inspire you.（使用了which引导限制性定语从句）
12．（2023秋·广东·高三校联考阶段练习）假如你是李华，你的好友Caroline即将参加你们学校举办的留学生中文写作大赛的决赛，写信询问你的建议。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达祝贺；2. 提供建议；3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Caroline,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Caroline,
I am more than delighted to know that you have entered the Chinese composition final. Congratulations! To help you do better in it, I’m writing to offer my suggestions, which are listed as follows.
First of all, it is recommended that your handwriting should be tidy and beautiful so as to leave a good impression on the judges. What’s more, in order to catch the judges’ eyes, you’d better make your writing content as real and interesting as possible. In addition, it’s a good idea for the language to be vivid and humorous, enabling your composition to stand out easily.
Hopefully, you can find my suggestions helpful. Wish you a great success in the final.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给即将参加留学生中文写作大赛的决赛的好友Caroline写信，需向她表示祝贺，分享建议，并表达祝愿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→happy, pleased, glad
建议：suggestion→advice
比赛：composition→match, contest
给某人留下好印象：leave a good impression on sb→make a good impression on sb, give sb a good impression
此外：in addition→besides, furthermore, additionally
使能够：enable→allow
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I am more than delighted to know that you have entered the Chinese composition final.
拓展句：Knowing that you have entered the Chinese composition final, I am more than delighted.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To help you do better in it, I’m writing to offer my suggestions, which are listed as follows. (运用了不定式短语To help…作目的状语、which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In addition, it’s a good idea for the language to be vivid and humorous, enabling your composition to stand out easily. (运用了现在分词短语enabling…作结果状语)
13．（2023秋·湖南益阳·高三南县第一中学校考阶段练习）假定你是李华，你英国高三的笔友Tom来信告诉你上周他妈妈发现他偷玩手机游戏两小时后没收了他的手机，他很生气，拒绝和妈妈沟通。你认为他这样有问题。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.说明问题；2.提出建议。 (注意 1.信的格式已给出，答题卡上不要写。写作词数应为 80 个左右)
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】 Dear Tom,
I am sorry to know that you often play games on your phone and your mom took your phone away, which made you upset. I can understand you but you should pay attention to the damage of the mobile phone.
For one thing, not only can they harm your eyes, but they can also affect your brain.For another, it is a waste of time to use phone too much, which will make you addicted.
So I advise that you should give up playing games on phone and make an apology to your mom.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Tom写一封回信，为他妈妈没收了他的手机而感到很苦恼给予安慰并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不高兴的：upset →joyless
影响：affect →influence
上瘾的：addicted→addictive
建议：advise→suggest/recommend
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：So I advise that you should give up playing games on phone and make an apology to your mom.
拓展句：What you should do is give up playing games on phone and make an apology to your mom.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I am sorry to know that you often play games on your phone and your mom took your phone away, which made you upset.（运用了that引导的宾语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】For one thing, not only can they harm your eyes, but they can also affect your brain.（运用了not only置于句首引起的部分倒装）
14．（2023秋·河南洛阳·高三校联考开学考试）假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Jack对电脑设计很感兴趣。Jack的父母担心他的学习会因此受影响，不同意他继续学习电脑设计。为此，他感到十分烦恼。请你就此给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.对他的兴趣进行肯定；
2.合理分配时间，把学习放第一位；
3.和父母好好沟通。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to know that you’re interested in computer design but quite upset because of your parents’ objection. Here is my advice.
First of all, it is great to have such enthusiasm in computer design. We should make full use of our interest to enrich our spare time. Then, it is necessary for you to manage your time well. It’s better to set a reasonable time for computer design and make sure you can finish your schoolwork first. Finally, a heart-to-heart talk with your parents is highly recommended. You can tell them frankly your hobby and explain how it can benefit you.
I hope these suggestions can be of some help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Jack对电脑设计很感兴趣。Jack的父母担心他的学习会因此受影响，不同意他继续学习电脑设计。为此，他感到十分烦恼。请你就此给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.对他的兴趣进行肯定；2.合理分配时间，把学习放第一位；3.和父母好好沟通。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→have an interest in
充分利用：make full use of→make the most of
真诚地：frankly→sincerely
有帮助的：of help→helpful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Then, it is necessary for you to manage your time well.
拓展句：Then, it is necessary that you should manage your time well.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to know that you’re interested in computer design but quite upset because of your parents' objection. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】You can tell them frankly your hobby and explain how it can benefit you.(运用了how引导的宾语从句)
三、申请信
四、告知信/通知
15．（2023秋·河北石家庄·高三石家庄一中校考开学考试）假定你是李华。请给你在美国的好友Bob写一封邮件。介绍你在假期中学到的一项生存技能或生活技能。内容包括：1. 技能的名称； 2. 如何学的；3. 学习感悟。
注意： 1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Bob,
How is everything going
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Bob,
How is everything going I wanted to share with you a skill I learned during my vacation-- cooking.
I took a cooking class and learned how to make a few simple yet delicious dishes. I learned how to chop vegetables, season meat, and cook rice perfectly. It was a fun and rewarding experience, and I feel more confident in the kitchen now.
I realized that cooking is not only a useful skill but also a great way to relax and express creativity. It's also a healthier and more budget-friendly alternative to eating out.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生向美国的好友Bob写一封邮件，介绍自己在假期中学到的一项生存技能或生活技能。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有趣的：fun→ amusing
值得的：rewarding → worthwhile
很好的：great → wonderful
选择：alternative→ choice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I took a cooking class and learned how to make a few simple yet delicious dishes.
拓展句：I took a cooking class and learned how I could make a few simple yet delicious dishes.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I wanted to share with you a skill I learned during my vacation-- cooking.（运用了省略关系代词的定语从句）
【高分句型2】I realized that cooking is not only a useful skill but also a great way to relax and express creativity.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
第二期
专题08 书面表达15篇
一、其他应用文
1．（2023春·河北石家庄·高三石家庄二中校考阶段练习）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter结束了在中国的学习即将回国，你打算为他写一个扇面“锲而不舍”送给他作为纪念。请你附一篇短文告知他此礼物的含义。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Hearing you are scheduled to return home, I’d like to give you a folding fan featuring a Chinese idiom “锲而不舍” on it as a souvenior.
“shan” is a symbol of kindness in Chinese, which is also a reminder of our forever friendship. Four Chinese characters express the great spirit of persistence. “锲(qie)” means “the act of carving” and “不舍(bùshě)” means “not giving up”. This idiom, as a whole, suggests if we keep carving, we will eventually turn a metal or stone piece into an artwork, however hard it pared with carving metal or stone, this idiom highlights the moral that if we don’t quit, we will achieve our goal one day.
At last, I’ll extend my best wishes to you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给结束了在中国学习即将回国的美国朋友Peter写一个扇面“锲而不舍”送给他作为纪念并附一篇短文告知他此礼物的含义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想要做某事：would like to do sth.→feel like doing sth.
表达：express→deliver/convey
实现：achieve→fulfil
放弃：quit→give up
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing you are scheduled to return home, I’d like to give you a folding fan featuring a Chinese idiom “锲而不舍” on it as a souvenior.
拓展句：Hearing you are scheduled to return home, I’d like to give you a folding fan which features a Chinese idiom “锲而不舍” on it as a souvenior.
【点睛】【高分句型1】“shan” is a symbol of kindness in Chinese, which is also a reminder of our forever friendship. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】This idiom, as a whole, suggests if we keep carving, we will eventually turn a metal or stone piece into an artwork, however hard it is. (运用了省略了that的宾语从句，if引导的条件状语从句，however引导的让步状语从句)
2．（2023秋·云南保山·高三统考期末）假定你是李华，你想让交换生Peter介绍一位他的同学作你的笔友，内容包括:
1. 你对笔友的要求；
2. 期待早日交到笔友。
注意:
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
Does everything go well with you I want to have a pen pal with interests similar to me, hopefully a boy in your high school.
As far as I am concerned, he’d better be fond of travelling and doing sports. Besides, it would be better for him to have a pet dog as I have. With such a pen friend, I can share my experiences with him in travelling, taking care of pets, or whatever we have in common. I believe I can improve my English by doing so.
I’d appreciate it if you could help me find one. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生让交换生Peter介绍一位他的同学作你的笔友。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜爱：be fond of→ like
此外：Besides → What’s more
提高，改善：improve→ enhance
感谢：appreciate→ thank
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I want to have a pen pal with interests similar to me, hopefully a boy in your high school.
拓展句：I want to have a pen pal, who has the similar interests to me, hopefully a boy in your high school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’d appreciate it if you could help me find one.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句。）
【高分句型2】Besides, it would be better for him to have a pet dog as I have.（运用了it作形式主语，动词不定式to do作真正的主语。）
3．（2022秋·四川内江·高三四川省资中县第二中学校考阶段练习）假定你是李华。你的美国朋友Jack发来邮件，想了解中国茶文化。现在请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.中国茶文化简介；
2.饮茶的好处；
3.邀请他来中国体验茶文化。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. And now I’m very happy to share something about Chinese tea culture in reply to your last e mail.
Chinese tea culture started about 4,000 years ago and drinking tea gradually became an amazing tradition. In China, people drink tea almost everywhere and in most of their spare time. Some Chinese believe that tea benefits people’s health a lot. Drinking a cup of tea makes people relaxed and refreshed. Others treat guests or friends to tea drinking in social communication.
Probably, you’ve got a general picture of tea culture after my introduction. Then, how about coming to China to experience it yourself Maybe, you will fall in love with it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Jack回一封邮件，向他介绍中国茶文化。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
作为……的答复：in reply to→in answer to
空闲时间：spare time→free time
亲自：yourself→in person
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Probably, you’ve got a general picture of tea culture after my introduction.
拓展句：Probably, you’ve got a general picture of tea culture after I introduced it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Some Chinese believe that tea benefits people’s health a lot.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Drinking a cup of tea makes people relaxed and refreshed.（运用了非谓语动词作主语）
4．（2021秋·广东·高三校联考阶段练习）假定你是李华，上周五你参加了学校组织的开心农场活动，请你用英语向校刊投稿，报道活动的内容和感受，要点包括：
1.活动的内容;
2.你的感受。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
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【答案】Last Friday our school organized the social activity in the happy farm, deeply impressing us.
On our arrival at the destination after a one-hour trip, we were warmly welcomed by the local farmers. Enthusiastic and hospitable, they firstly shared with us great changes and the development in the past two years and then showed us around their farmhouses. What impressed us most was that in the afternoon we were arranged to help the farmers pick vegetables and fruits, experiencing and enjoying the pleasure of the harvest.
We are very appreciative to be provided with such a valuable opportunity to help us value what the farmers have made and it also strengthens our sense of social responsibility.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英语向校刊投稿，报道上周五你参加的学校组织的开心农场活动，包括活动的内容和感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助：help →assist
被提供：be provided with →be supplied with
机会：chance →opportunity
增强：strengthen →enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last Friday our school organized the social activity in the happy farm, deeply impressing us.
拓展句：Last Friday our school organized the social activity in the happy farm, which deeply impressed us.
【点睛】[高分句型1] What impressed us most was that in the afternoon we were arranged to help the farmers pick vegetables and fruits, experiencing and enjoying the pleasure of the harvest. (运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
[高分句型2] We are very appreciative to be provided with such a valuable opportunity to help us value what the farmers have made and it also strengthens our sense of social responsibility. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
5．（2023秋·江苏镇江·高三统考开学考试）假如你是李华，来自英国的友好学校师生一行10人上周末到你校进行交流访问。请你为校英文报写一篇关于接待活动的报道，内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动内容；
3.活动反响。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
An Inter-school Exchange
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【答案】Last weekend, our school had the pleasure of welcoming a group of ten teachers and students from a friendly school in the UK. The aim of the visit was to promote cultural understanding and exchange between our two schools.
On arrival, they were given a tour of our campus, which included a visit to our library and an insight into our classroom-based activities. Later, they attended a performance put on by our school’s drama club, giving them a taste of traditional Chinese culture.
The UK guests were impressed with the friendliness and hospitality of our students and staff, and were eager to continue the exchange.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。来自英国的友好学校师生一行10人上周末到校进行交流访问，要求考生为校英文报写一篇关于接待活动的报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目标：aim → goal/purpose
促进：promote → advance/facilitate
包含：include → contain
渴望做某事：be eager to do sth.→ desire to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Later, they attended a performance put on by our school’s drama club, giving them a taste of traditional Chinese culture.
拓展句：Later, they attended a performance which was put on by our school’s drama club, giving them a taste of traditional Chinese culture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] On arrival, they were given a tour of our campus, which included a visit to our library and an insight into our classroom-based activities. (运用了关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Later, they attended a performance put on by our school’s drama club, giving them a taste of traditional Chinese culture. (运用了过去分词作后置定语和现在分词作结果状语)
6．（2023秋·湖南·高三湖南师大附中校考阶段练习）假定你是李华，上周你校成功举办了一场关于中华传统手工艺的活动。请你为校英文报撰写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；2. 活动内容；3. 活动反响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Getting to know traditional Chinese handicrafts
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【答案】Getting to know traditional Chinese handicrafts
Last week, our school launched a traditional Chinese handicraft campaign aimed at increasing students’ knowledge and confidence in this art form. The campaign was a great success and left a lasting impression on all who participated.
The highlight of the campaign was a lecture by experts on traditional Chinese handicrafts. They introduced students to various representative forms, such as paper-cutting, Chinese knots and clay sculpture. The experts explained the origin, development, and current status of each craft, and showcased some of their best works of art which were exquisite and impressive.
The event ended with a hands-on session where students had the opportunity to create their own works of art.
This immersive and inspirational experience sparked an interest in traditional Chinese handicrafts among the students who are now eagerly anticipating the next campaign.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于上周你校成功举办了一场关于中华传统手工艺的活动这一情况，为校英文报撰写一篇报道。
【详解】1.词汇积累
演讲：lecture→ speech
机会：opportunity→ chance
各种各样的：various→ all kinds of
渴望地：eagerly→ longingly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last week, our school launched a traditional Chinese handicraft campaign aimed at increasing students’ knowledge and confidence in this art form.
拓展句：Last week, our school launched a traditional Chinese handicraft campaign, which was aimed at increasing students’ knowledge and confidence in this art form.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This immersive and inspirational experience sparked an interest in traditional Chinese handicrafts among the students who are now eagerly anticipating the next campaign.（运用了关系代词who引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】The event ended with a hands-on session where students had the opportunity to create their own works of art.（运用了关系副词where引导的限制性定语从句）
7．（2023·重庆·重庆市育才中学校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，是学校公众号的英语栏目的编辑，学校学生会将举行“一起阅读(Read Together)”活动，请你写一则倡议，内容包括：
(1)活动目的；
(2)活动内容；
(3)呼吁参加。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80左右；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Read Together
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【答案】Read Together
I’m excited to announce that our school student union will organize a special event called “Read Together”.
The purpose of this activity is to promote the love for reading among students, as well as to enhance their language skills and broaden their horizons. In the activity, we will have a book fair where students can explore and purchase their favorite books,and we will also have a series of reading workshops, where experienced teachers and students can share their reading experiences and recommend good books.
We sincerely invite all students to join us in this exciting event. See you there!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校学生会将举行“一起阅读(Read Together)”活动，要求考生写一则倡议，介绍活动的目的和内容，并呼吁学生们参加。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：organize→hold
目的：purpose→aim
拓宽眼界：broaden horizon→ expand horizon
真挚地：sincerely→genuinely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We sincerely invite all students to join us in this exciting event.
拓展句：We sincerely invite all students to join us in this exciting event, where you are sure to have a rich harvest.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m excited to announce that our school student union will organize a special event called “Read Together”.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】In the activity, we will have a book fair where students can explore and purchase their favorite books, and we will also have a series of reading workshops, where experienced teachers and students can share their reading experiences and recommend good books.（运用了where引导的定语从句，and构成并列结构）
8．（2023秋·河南焦作·高三统考开学考试）你校将举办英语夏令营活动，请你作为学生代表以Goals为题写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1.树立目标的意义；
2.如何确定目标。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Goals
It is a great honor for me to stand here to share my opinions about goals.
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Thank you for listening!
【答案】 Goals
It is a great honor for me to stand here to share my opinions about goals. As we all know, without a goal, our study and even life will be like a chicken with its head cut off. So, it is significant that we should make goals for ourselves.
We can have short-term and long-term goals. For example, if we just want to set a goal for a day or a week, we can make it a short one, which can create fulfilling days. Instead, we ought to think it carefully and make a long-term goal. Then we can be determined and perseverant to achieve our goals.
Thank you for listening!
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生作为学生代表以Goals为题写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
众所周知：as we all know→as is known to us all
目标：goal→aim
因此：so→therefore
重要的：significant→important
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Instead, we ought to think it carefully and make a long-term goal. Then we can be determined and persevering to achieve our goals.
拓展句：Instead, we ought to think it carefully and make a long-term goal so that we can be determined and perseverant to achieve our goals.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As we all know, without a goal, our study and even life will be like a chicken with its head cut off.（由as引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】So, it is significant that we should make goals for ourselves.（由that引导的主语从句）
二、建议信
9．（2023秋·山东泰安·高三统考阶段练习）某国际学校拟建立一个英语阅读室，现向学生征求建议。假如你是李华，请给学校负责人Mr. Wilson写一封信，内容包括：
1. 表达自己的看法；
2. 给出建议和理由。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Wilson,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】 I am very delighted to know that an English reading room is about to be established in our school. This reading room will bring great convenience to students. We will have easier access to English books and broaden our horizons. Now I’m writing to give some suggestions.
Firstly, I suggest that the reading room should have a complete range of books, because they will meet various needs of students and attract more students to read books here. Besides, It is strongly recommended that some reading exchange activities be held regularly. By doing this, students can better understand the books they read.
I hope this English reading room can be built as soon as possible to serve the students.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对学校即将建立的英语阅览室提出意见。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→tip
各种各样的：various→a variety of
除此之外：besides→in addition
定期地：regularly→on a regular basis
2.句型拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Now I’m writing to give some suggestions.
拓展句：Now I’m writing to give some suggestions, which will be useful to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I am very delighted to know that an English reading room is about to be established in our school.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】 Besides, It is strongly recommended that some reading exchange activities be held regularly. （it作形式主语，that引导的主语从句）
10．（2023秋·湖北·高三统考阶段练习）假定你是李华，为了适应英语听力中的英美混合播音，你给外教 Smith写封邮件，希望他在口语课上提供针对性的帮助。内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 你的建议。
注意：1. 词数80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Smith,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students. In order to adjust to the mixed accents of British and American English in listening practice, I’m wondering if you could accept the following suggestions I would like to offer on our oral English lessons.
First of all, we would greatly appreciate it if you could provide some pronunciation rules which can help us sharpen our listening skills. Additionally, it would help to introduce us to some useful materials, such as English songs, fun dubbing, or film clips where we can be exposed to various accents. I am firmly convinced that we will make great progress with your aid.
Thank you for your attention to this letter! Looking forward to your support and guidance!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“为了适应英语听力中的英美混合播音”一事，给外教 Smith写封邮件，希望他在口语课上提供针对性的帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助某人做某事：help sb. do sth.→ assist sb. to do sth.
此外：additionally → in addition
有用的：useful → practical
各种各样的：various → a variety of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m Li Hua, one of your students.
拓展句：I’m Li Hua, one of your students who are very interested in English.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In order to adjust to the mixed accents of British and American English in listening practice, I’m wondering if you could accept the following suggestions I would like to offer on our oral English lessons. (运用了if引导的宾语从句和省略关系代词引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I am firmly convinced that we will make great progress with your aid. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
11．（2023秋·江苏连云港·高三连云港高中校考阶段练习）假如你是李华，你的朋友David发现同学们都有自己爱好和特长，而他只会学习，他感到有点小嫉妒，有点不知所措，写信向你求助。请根据以下提示给他回信：
1.表示安慰；
2.提出建议。
注意：1.词数80字左右；
2.可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I am sorry to hear that you feel a bit jealous of seeing your classmates having their own hobbies and specialties while you only learn.
First of all, please remember that nothing is as important as focusing on your studies. However, I believe there are many other things besides academics to explore and discover. Why not take the initiative to talk to people Your friends may have interesting hobbies which may inspire you. Additionally, you could find something that suits your interests on the internet or by reading books. Use this as an opportunity to explore and uncover the hidden potential that lies within you. I believe that you’ll eventually find what you are looking for.
I hope my suggestions are helpful and I wish you the best of luck.
Your friend,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一封建议信。要求考生以李华的身份给你的朋友David写一封信，对于爱好和特长问题给他一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
得知：hear→ be made aware
看见：see → spot
重要的：important→ significant
有益的：be helpful→ be beneficial
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：I believe there are many other things besides academics to explore and discover.
拓展句：It is my belief that there are many other things besides academics to explore and discover.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am sorry to hear that you feel a bit jealous of seeing your classmates having their own hobbies and specialties while you only learn.（使用了that引导宾语从句、现在分词作宾补）
【高分句型2】Your friends may have interesting hobbies which may inspire you.（使用了which引导限制性定语从句）
12．（2023秋·广东·高三校联考阶段练习）假如你是李华，你的好友Caroline即将参加你们学校举办的留学生中文写作大赛的决赛，写信询问你的建议。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达祝贺；2. 提供建议；3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Caroline,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Caroline,
I am more than delighted to know that you have entered the Chinese composition final. Congratulations! To help you do better in it, I’m writing to offer my suggestions, which are listed as follows.
First of all, it is recommended that your handwriting should be tidy and beautiful so as to leave a good impression on the judges. What’s more, in order to catch the judges’ eyes, you’d better make your writing content as real and interesting as possible. In addition, it’s a good idea for the language to be vivid and humorous, enabling your composition to stand out easily.
Hopefully, you can find my suggestions helpful. Wish you a great success in the final.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给即将参加留学生中文写作大赛的决赛的好友Caroline写信，需向她表示祝贺，分享建议，并表达祝愿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→happy, pleased, glad
建议：suggestion→advice
比赛：composition→match, contest
给某人留下好印象：leave a good impression on sb→make a good impression on sb, give sb a good impression
此外：in addition→besides, furthermore, additionally
使能够：enable→allow
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I am more than delighted to know that you have entered the Chinese composition final.
拓展句：Knowing that you have entered the Chinese composition final, I am more than delighted.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To help you do better in it, I’m writing to offer my suggestions, which are listed as follows. (运用了不定式短语To help…作目的状语、which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In addition, it’s a good idea for the language to be vivid and humorous, enabling your composition to stand out easily. (运用了现在分词短语enabling…作结果状语)
13．（2023秋·湖南益阳·高三南县第一中学校考阶段练习）假定你是李华，你英国高三的笔友Tom来信告诉你上周他妈妈发现他偷玩手机游戏两小时后没收了他的手机，他很生气，拒绝和妈妈沟通。你认为他这样有问题。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.说明问题；2.提出建议。 (注意 1.信的格式已给出，答题卡上不要写。写作词数应为 80 个左右)
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】 Dear Tom,
I am sorry to know that you often play games on your phone and your mom took your phone away, which made you upset. I can understand you but you should pay attention to the damage of the mobile phone.
For one thing, not only can they harm your eyes, but they can also affect your brain.For another, it is a waste of time to use phone too much, which will make you addicted.
So I advise that you should give up playing games on phone and make an apology to your mom.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Tom写一封回信，为他妈妈没收了他的手机而感到很苦恼给予安慰并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
不高兴的：upset →joyless
影响：affect →influence
上瘾的：addicted→addictive
建议：advise→suggest/recommend
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：So I advise that you should give up playing games on phone and make an apology to your mom.
拓展句：What you should do is give up playing games on phone and make an apology to your mom.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I am sorry to know that you often play games on your phone and your mom took your phone away, which made you upset.（运用了that引导的宾语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】For one thing, not only can they harm your eyes, but they can also affect your brain.（运用了not only置于句首引起的部分倒装）
14．（2023秋·河南洛阳·高三校联考开学考试）假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Jack对电脑设计很感兴趣。Jack的父母担心他的学习会因此受影响，不同意他继续学习电脑设计。为此，他感到十分烦恼。请你就此给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.对他的兴趣进行肯定；
2.合理分配时间，把学习放第一位；
3.和父母好好沟通。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to know that you’re interested in computer design but quite upset because of your parents’ objection. Here is my advice.
First of all, it is great to have such enthusiasm in computer design. We should make full use of our interest to enrich our spare time. Then, it is necessary for you to manage your time well. It’s better to set a reasonable time for computer design and make sure you can finish your schoolwork first. Finally, a heart-to-heart talk with your parents is highly recommended. You can tell them frankly your hobby and explain how it can benefit you.
I hope these suggestions can be of some help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Jack对电脑设计很感兴趣。Jack的父母担心他的学习会因此受影响，不同意他继续学习电脑设计。为此，他感到十分烦恼。请你就此给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.对他的兴趣进行肯定；2.合理分配时间，把学习放第一位；3.和父母好好沟通。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣：be interested in→have an interest in
充分利用：make full use of→make the most of
真诚地：frankly→sincerely
有帮助的：of help→helpful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Then, it is necessary for you to manage your time well.
拓展句：Then, it is necessary that you should manage your time well.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to know that you’re interested in computer design but quite upset because of your parents' objection. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】You can tell them frankly your hobby and explain how it can benefit you.(运用了how引导的宾语从句)
三、申请信
四、告知信/通知
15．（2023秋·河北石家庄·高三石家庄一中校考开学考试）假定你是李华。请给你在美国的好友Bob写一封邮件。介绍你在假期中学到的一项生存技能或生活技能。内容包括：1. 技能的名称； 2. 如何学的；3. 学习感悟。
注意： 1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Bob,
How is everything going
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Bob,
How is everything going I wanted to share with you a skill I learned during my vacation-- cooking.
I took a cooking class and learned how to make a few simple yet delicious dishes. I learned how to chop vegetables, season meat, and cook rice perfectly. It was a fun and rewarding experience, and I feel more confident in the kitchen now.
I realized that cooking is not only a useful skill but also a great way to relax and express creativity. It's also a healthier and more budget-friendly alternative to eating out.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生向美国的好友Bob写一封邮件，介绍自己在假期中学到的一项生存技能或生活技能。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有趣的：fun→ amusing
值得的：rewarding → worthwhile
很好的：great → wonderful
选择：alternative→ choice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I took a cooking class and learned how to make a few simple yet delicious dishes.
拓展句：I took a cooking class and learned how I could make a few simple yet delicious dishes.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I wanted to share with you a skill I learned during my vacation-- cooking.（运用了省略关系代词的定语从句）
【高分句型2】I realized that cooking is not only a useful skill but also a great way to relax and express creativity.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）