(共39张PPT)
Describe a place that you like
Reading for Writing
Book 2 Unit 4
county
feast
roll
dot
cattle
roar
ocean
pub
wine
n. (一杯)啤酒
n. 炖菜 vt.&vi. 炖
n. 风俗;习俗
n. 气味
adj. 感觉的
adj. 引人注目的
n. 过度
n. 人群
beer
stew
custom
scent
sensory
striking
transition
crowd
n. (英国、爱尔兰的)郡
n. 盛宴;宴会
vi. &vt. (使)翻滚 n. 卷
n. 点
n. 牛
vi.&n. 吼叫
n. 大海
n. 酒吧
n. 葡萄酒
Words and Expressions
Enjoy the Beauty of Ireland
How would you describe Ireland
Lead-in
How would you describe the landscapes in Ireland
amazing
magnificent
fascinating
charming
impressive
breathtaking
stunning
marvelous
Emerald Isle
绿宝石岛
Look at the title and predict its main idea.
This passage mainly introduces the beautiful scenery/views and the traditions of Ireland.
P44 1
Prediction
Identify and underline the paragraph’s introductory sentence and the ending sentence.
Introductory sentence
Ending sentence
P44 1
Body
Read for structure
Read the text and discuss the questions in pairs.
1. What makes the Irish countryside exciting and inspiring
2. What are the best ways to experience some Irish traditions and culture
3. What is the meaning of “breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song”
4. What are the best ways to experience Chinese traditions and customs
Read for information
Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions. The country has a long history of producing great writers and poets. Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all, offering something for each of the senses. The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle. And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast. On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song. With all this beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing, and dining. To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew. If you are lucky, you might be able to enjoy some traditional music and the dancing, too. And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.
Read for information
1. What makes the Irish countryside exciting and inspiring
Why are there so many great writers and poets in Ireland
If a country produces sb with a special quality, the person comes from that country 栽培,培养
Oscar Wilde
奥斯卡 王尔德
James Joyce
詹姆斯 乔伊斯
William Butler Yeats
威廉 巴特勒 叶芝
Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions. The country has a long history of producing great writers and poets. Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all, offering something for each of the senses. The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle. And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast. On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song. With all this beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing, and dining. To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew. If you are lucky, you might be able to enjoy some traditional music and the dancing, too. And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.
Read for information
● sight ● smell ● taste ● hearing ● touch
What senses and places does the writer mention
What words does the writer use to describe sensory(感官的) details
How does the writer describe the senses
Find out the places, senses and the words used to describe the sensory details(感官细节).
The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
Places Senses Sensory details
in the green counties and hills
sight
a feast for the eyes;
rolling green hills;
dotted with...
Read and Think about the Language
“绿宝石(爱尔兰)岛”风光宁静秀美,郡县草木葱笼,青山连绵起伏,牛羊点缀其中,堪称一场名副其实的视觉盛宴。
sight
And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves
and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.
Places Senses Sensory details
hearing
down by the sea
the roar of ...
and cries of...
make up the music of …
Find out the places, senses and the words used to describe the sensory details(感官细节).
在海边,海浪的咆哮声和海鸟的啼叫声构成了海岸的音乐。
sight
On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.
Places Senses Sensory details
in the mountains
touch
feel the sun on your skin
smell
breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers
greet with morning song
hearing
What figure of speech( 修辞) is applied
personification
Find out the places, senses and the words used to describe the sensory details(感官细节).
在山区一个宁静的早晨,你可以感受到阳光照在你的皮肤上,呼吸着鲜花的芬芳,鸟儿用早晨的歌声来迎接新的一天。
Inspiration :
Writing techniques (写作技巧) of descriptive writing(描述性写作)
Use sensory details (感官细节)
Use figure of speech (修辞手法)
Use concrete(具体的) words
In what order is the beautiful view shown
topic sentences+ supporting sentences/examples
Inspiration: In a scenery description, it’s a good idea to organize information in the order of specific places.
What’s the structure of the description
topic sentence
supporting sentences/examples
Places.
Read and Think about the Structure
Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions. The country has a long history of producing great writers and poets. Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all, offering something for each of the senses. The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle. And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast. On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song. With all this beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing, and dining. To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew. If you are lucky, you might be able to enjoy some traditional music and the dancing, too. And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.
Read for information
What is the function
The beautiful countryside is a true feast for all senses.
transitional sentence(过渡句)
拥有如此美丽的美景,爱尔兰延续包括音乐、舞蹈和餐饮在内的强大传统也就不足为奇了。
Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions. The country has a long history of producing great writers and poets. Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all, offering something for each of the senses. The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle. And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast. On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song. With all this beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing, and dining. To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew. If you are lucky, you might be able to enjoy some traditional music and the dancing, too. And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.
Read for information
2. What are the best ways to experience some Irish traditions and culture
By stopping by a village pub and relaxing with a drink and traditional meal while listening to music and watching dancing.
or
By exploring all different parts of the country and experiencing what the country gives to all the senses.
为了有机会体验到这一点,可以在乡村酒吧停下来,然后喝上一杯葡萄酒或当地的啤酒放松二下。更好的是,享受美味的传统爱尔兰炖牛肉。如果幸运的话,你也许还可以欣赏到传统的音乐和舞蹈。如果你把自己介绍给一个友好的面孔,那么你更有可能亲身体验当地的文化和习俗。
Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions. The country has a long history of producing great writers and poets. Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all, offering something for each of the senses. The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle. And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast. On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song. With all this beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing, and dining. To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew. If you are lucky, you might be able to enjoy some traditional music and the dancing, too. And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.
Read for information
3. What is the meaning of “breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song”
It means to not just smell but also breathe in the smell of fresh flowers early in the morning as the birds sing their first song of the new day.
Discussion
4. What are the best ways to experience Chinese traditions and customs
By travelling to different places and using all your senses to experience everything and by interacting (互动) with local people.
When in Rome, do as Romans do.
Inspiration: How to make your description logical
Introductory sentence
Ending sentence
in the order of places
Topic sentence
Supporting sentences
contents respond to title
transitional sentence
课文原文:The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
珠江宁静的景色是一道真正的赏心悦目的美景,河岸两边点缀着五颜六色的小花。
The peaceful landscape of the Pearl River is a true feast for the eyes, with its both banks dotted with little colorful flowers.
春天来临时,鲜花点缀着田野。
The field is dotted with flowers when spring comes.
操场独特的蓝色跑道上,遍布学生运动的身姿。
The unique blue track of the playground is dotted with students doing exercises.
Micro-writing
Down by the sea, the roar of the ocean
waves and cries of the seabirds make up
the music of the coast.
What do you usually hear at school?
The sound of reading, cheers and laughter makes up the music of youth.
What do you usually hear at home
The cries, the shouts, the snap, the cheers and the laughter
make up the music of my daily life.
Micro-writing
On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.
Micro-writing
What do you want to eat most in summer
In a hot summer, breathe in sweet scent of chocolate ice-cream, have a lick of it and feel the cold on my tongue -- this is the most enjoyable moment .
清晨,漫步公园,沐浴在阳光下,感受微风拂面,听鸟语闻花香。
On a quiet morning, stroll around the park, be bathed in the golden glow of the sunshine, feel the gentle breeze kissing your face and listen to the birds singing and breathe in the scent of the flowers.
Micro-writing
introduction
body
ending
→make readers eager to read
→transitions / details and examples
→let readers know the passage ends
help readers remember your writing
1. Use sensory details
2. Do not use general words
3. Give examples
Describe a place
1. A striking image
2. Something surprising
3. A quote or question
描写一个城市或地点是一种描述性的说明文。它主要说明或解释某一城市或地点的地理位置、外貌、环境、经济、文化、交通、历史演变、发展展望等,使读者获取信息。
一般来说,描述性的说明文写作顺序主要有三种形式:时间顺序、空间顺序和逻辑顺序。
写说明文, 时态应以现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主。
◆写作指导
谋篇布局
开头: 介绍该地方的基本信息(位置,面积等);
主体: 描述该地方的一些具体信息(著名的景点,与众不同之处);
结尾: 作者对此地点的感受。
Beginning
It is located in .... / It lies in... with an area of... (位置;面积)
It covers an area of...with a history of ... (面积; 历史)
Located in...and covering an area of...,...is one of China’s most famous scenic spots.
.... is a city with a (large/small) population of... (人口)
The history of...dates back to... (历史)
It has become the most popular tourist attraction since...
布局谋篇
第一段简要介绍该地方的基本信息(位置,面积等);
Body
There are many places of interest, such as..., of which ... is the most famous.有许多景点……,其中……是最有名的。
You can enjoy...which has a high reputation both at home and abroad (国内外闻名).
...is/are attracting more and more tourists.
An interesting feature of... is....
With its pleasant climate, rich natural resources and beautiful scenery, ...is one of China’s major tourist cities.它有宜人的气候,丰富的自然资源和迷人的景色,是中国最重要的旅游城市之一。
A trip along...will enable you to get to know...
布局谋篇
第二段:描述该地一些具体信息(著名景点,不同之处)
Ending:
...is well worth visiting.
...is a place you have to visit and the extraordinary view will make you unwilling to leave.
布局谋篇
第三段:描述自己的总感受或评价。表达情感、寄予希望。
模板素材
特产特色
Specialty features
①名胜: places of interest
②著名的旅游景点之一:
one of the famous tourist attractions
③盛产……;在……方面丰富:
be rich in (natural resources/tourist attractions/..., such as/like...)
④因……而著名:
be famous/well known for...
Located in..., the city is a wonderful place for tourists to go sightseeing.
位于……,这个城市是游客观光的好地方。
The city is located in..., well-known for.../ which is well-known for...
这座城市坐落在…,因……而出名。
The city, with lots of special attractions and beautiful natural scenery, is worth visiting.
这个城市有许多特殊的景点和美丽的自然风光,值得一去。
What's more, the nice weather and convenience transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable.
更重要的是,这里的好天气和便利的交通可以让你的旅行更愉快。
To sum up, it's quite relaxing and enjoyable to travel there and I love this experience very much.
总之,那是一次很轻松愉快的旅行,我非常喜欢这样的经历。
2. Useful words and sentences.
sightseeing 观光
tourist attractions 旅游景点
charming/attractive/fantastic/impressive/amazing 迷人的
a variety of/ a wide range of 各种各样的
pleasant climate 宜人的气候
at home and abroad 国内外
a feast for your eyes 大饱眼福
Reading for Writing (P44-45)
1.对……有很大影响
2.有久远的……历史
3.视觉盛宴
4.起伏的绿色山丘
5.被……点缀着
6.海浪的咆哮声
7.海鸟的叫声
8.用清晨的歌声迎接新的一天
have a great influence on
a feast for the eyes
be dotted with
the roar of the ocean waves
the cries of the seabirds
have a long history of
rolling green hills
greet the new day with their morning song
Reading for Writing (P44-45)
9.毫不意外……
10.一杯葡萄酒
11.更好的是
12.非常可能做某事
13.亲身经历当地文化习俗
14.感官细节
15.震撼人心的画面
16.组成;构成
it is not surprising that
better yet
be more than likely to do sth
experience local culture and customs first-hand
sensory details
a striking image
a glass of wine
make up
1. crowd n.人群;一群人;民众 vt.挤满;使……拥挤
考点必记
a crowd of /crowds of 一群; 许多
crowd into… 挤进
crowd into one’s mind …涌上(某人心头); 涌入(某人的脑海)
crowded adj. 拥挤的
be crowded with 充满;挤满 =be full of
〖词汇拓展〗
crowded adj. 拥挤的
be crowded with =be full of 挤满
[巩固内化] 单句语法填空
① The crowd crowded _____ the stadium which was crowded _____ audience.
② A crowd _____ people were waiting for the bus when the accident happened.
③ He led me through the _________ (crowd) shop and to a bench with a large professional karaoke box on it.
④ The hungry refugees crowded ___________ the tractors.
into
of
crowded
with
around/round
[衔接写作] 补全句子
① The happy memory of getting along with my best friend ______ _______me. 我与最好的朋友相处的快乐回忆涌入我的脑海。
②He pushed his way __________________.
他在人群中往前挤。
③They had managed ______________ a train.
他们勉强挤上了一列火车。
crowded
through the crowd
to crowd into
in on
[衔接高考]
①(2017. 新课标卷II)It ran for just under seven kilometers and allowed people to avoid terrible _________ (crowd) on the roads.
②(2017.北京)People crowded_____the post office because they were curious about the telephone.
crowds
in