(共14张PPT)
Unit 4 Everyday economics
写作指导 写一篇关于非现金支付的文章
感知文体常识
关于非现金支付的文章属于议论文,在写议论文时,可以对某种事物从优势与弊端两个方面进行介绍,在写作的结尾陈述个人观点。写作中重要的是要做到立意清晰、论证充分、有说服力。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.advantages and disadvantages 利弊
2.vary from...to...从……到……不同
3.worry about 担心
4.lead to 引起,导致
5.approve of 同意,赞同
6.personally speaking 就个人来说,就自己而言
7.as far as I’m concerned 就我而言
(二)精彩句型
1.Driven by the explosive growth of online shopping as well as Internet financial services,mobile payment is becoming more and more popular.
在网上购物和互联网金融服务爆炸式增长的驱动下,移动支付越来越受欢迎。
2.More and more people use Alipay and WeChat to pay bills,no matter where they go.
无论在哪里,越来越多的人使用支付宝和微信付款。
3.Online payment has been advocated around the world,which is the future way to pay bills.
全世界都在提倡网上支付,这是未来支付账单的方式。
4.According to the research,most people leave little cash in their wallets.Some even don’t use it for a long time.
根据调查,大多数人的钱包里几乎没有现金,有些人甚至很长时间都不用。
5.With the development of new applications,our life will be more convenient.
随着新应用的发展,我们的生活将更加方便。
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
下面这幅图片反映了现在日渐盛行的一种购物方式——网上购物,请你结合图片内容,写一篇80词左右的英语短文,谈谈你对网上购物的看法,并陈述自己的理由。
【审题谋篇】
体裁 议论文
人称 第一人称和第三人称
时态 一般现在时
话题 网购
框架 第一段 介绍网购现象的流行
第二段 分析网购的利弊
第三段 提出自己的观点
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1) v.购买
(2) n.方便,便利
(3) 在网络上
(4) 上网
(5) 以……为代价
(6) 欠债
purchase
convenience
on the Internet
surf the Internet
at the expense of
go into debt
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①通过互联网人们不必出门就可以购买自己想要的东西。
People can buy through the Internet without going out.
②这给他们带来了更多的便利。
This .
③他们可以通过上网购买顶级品牌。
They can shop for the top brands .
what they want
brings them more convenience
by surfing the Internet
④在互联网上,新品牌一登广告,他们就可以选择自己需要的产品。
On the Internet,they can choose what they need .
⑤说实话,我现在几乎是在网上购买所有我需要的东西。
To tell the truth, on the Internet now.
immediately the new brands are advertised
I buy almost everything I need
(2)句式升级
⑥用非限制性定语从句合并句①和句②
⑦用定语从句合并句③和句④
⑧用强调句型改写句⑤,强调地点状语
People can buy what they want through the Internet without going out,which brings them more convenience.
They can shop for the top brands by surfing the Internet,where they can choose what they need immediately the new brands are advertised.
To tell the truth,it is on the Internet that I buy almost everything I need now.
【妙笔成篇】
With the development of the Internet,shopping on the Internet is becoming more popular.People can buy what they want through the Internet without going out,which brings them more convenience.
Shopping on the Internet is of great benefit to the customers.First,they can shop for the top brands by surfing the Internet,where they can choose what they need immediately the new brands are advertised.Second,they can get the goods at the best prices.
In my opinion,it is good to shop on the Internet.To tell the truth,it is on the Internet that I buy almost everything I need now.
针对训练
假定你是李华,某英文报社正在就“刷脸支付(face-scanning payment)的利弊”这一话题进行征文。请用英语写一篇短文并投稿,内容包括:
1.分析利弊;
2.展望前景。
注意:请在相应位置作答。
Nowadays,face-scanning payment is very popular among customers,but it has both advantages and disadvantages.
As for its advantages,first,the payment can be completed quickly,thus avoiding long-time waiting in line.Second,customers don’t have to carry a mobile phone or a bank card,which makes payment more convenient.When it comes to its disadvantages,the most worrying thing is that face recognition hasn’t reached 100% accuracy,which might lead to payment risks.In addition, customers’ personal information may be revealed illegally.
Imperfect as it is,I believe with the improvement of face recognition technology,face-scanning payment will surely become more and more popular.(共12张PPT)
Unit 6 Space and beyond
写作指导 写一篇太空生活日记
感知文体常识
本单元的写作目标是写一篇“太空生活日记”,记录自己一天在太空的生活场景,让大家对太空生活有一定的了解。这样的日记应该按时间顺序展开,记述这一天中发生的事情,但要注意详略得当。在具体的写作过程中要注意把太空生活与地球生活进行对比,让大家了解太空生活的奇妙之处,以引起读者的兴趣。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
in order to,stimulate one’s enthusiasm,a stimulated experience of spaceship,space exploration,in space,feel like,get used to,turn out,devote...to,make contributions to,come true
(二)精彩句型
1.As there is no gravity,life in space can be very different from that on Earth.
由于没有重力,太空中的生活与地球上的生活大不相同。
2.During the visit,we first had the experience of flying in a simulated spaceship in the city space museum.
在参观过程中,我们首先在城市空间博物馆里体验了在模拟宇宙飞船里飞行的感觉。
3.The experience helps stimulate our enthusiasm for learning science and space.
这种经历有助于激发我们学习科学和太空的热情。
4.It is difficult,but I enjoy it very much.
这很难,但我非常喜欢它。
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
假如你是李华,有幸参加了一个太空旅行项目,已经在太空生活了几天。请你用英语写一篇日记,向地球上的朋友们简单介绍一下你在太空第一天的生活场景,要包括吃饭、锻炼以及睡觉等几个方面。
【审题谋篇】
体裁 记叙文
人称 第一人称为主
时态 一般过去时为主
话题 介绍太空生活
框架 第一段 应开门见山,直入主题
第二段 按时间先后描述这一天发生的事情,注意详略得当
第三段 发表一下自己的感受以及对太空生活的看法
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1)引力 n.
(2)简单的 adj.
(3)由……组成
(4)锻炼
(5)保持肌肉强壮
(6)把……系在……上
gravity
straightforward
consist of
work out
keep the muscles strong
tie...to...
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①由于没有重力,地球上最简单的日常工作在太空中可能会非常困难。(as 引导原因状语从句)
,the most straightforward daily tasks on the earth can be very difficult in space.
②起床后,我开始吃早餐。它包括一些面包和一袋果汁。
After getting up,I began to have breakfast.It consisted of .
③工作了两个小时后,我需要锻炼一段时间来保持肌肉强壮。
After I worked for two hours,I to keep my muscles strong.
As there is no gravity
some bread and a bag of fruit juice
needed to work out for some time
(2)句式升级
④用独立主格结构改写句①。
⑤用非限制性定语从句改写句②。
⑥用现在分词短语作时间状语改写句③。
There being no gravity,the most straightforward daily tasks on the earth can be very difficult in space.
After getting up,I began to have breakfast,which consisted of some bread and a bag of fruit juice.
Having worked for two hours,I needed to work out for some time to keep my muscles strong.
【妙笔成篇】
There being no gravity,the most straightforward daily tasks on the earth can be very difficult in space.
After getting up,I began to have breakfast,which consisted of some bread and a bag of fruit juice.I had to fetch a straw to drink the juice,otherwise it would float around in the spacecraft.Having worked for two hours,I needed to work out for some time to keep my muscles strong.I tied my feet to a special machine so that I wouldn’t float away.When it was time to go to bed,I went into a small cupboard,got into a sleeping bag and tied it to the wall.I think I must look like a big sausage.It is so funny,isn’t it
Living in space is rather difficult but fun.I enjoy it very much.
针对训练
假定现在是2050年,你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。你们在火星上到处参观,与外星人(alien)举行聚会……总之,你们玩得很愉快。请根据以上材料,以“An Exciting Space Trip”为题,描述一下你的火星之旅。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
An Exciting Space Trip
An Exciting Space Trip
It is the year of 2050.Our school organized a great trip to Mars a few days ago.We went to Mars by space shuttle.On Mars we visited everywhere,and found a lot of things different from our earth.After that,we invited many aliens to our party,which was held in our space shuttle.They danced and sang with us together.Their songs were so awesome that all of us screamed.
We all had a good time on Mars.The trip was very interesting and I hope to travel to Mars again soon.(共14张PPT)
Unit 3 The world meets China
写作指导 推荐文化圣地
感知文体常识
本单元的写作任务是写一封推荐景点的信。景点一般由若干活动项目组合而成。介绍时可依照先概述景点,再分述活动项目,最后总述的顺序。分述活动项目可依照游玩路线进行。
介绍景点以说明为主,在说明中可以穿插描写和叙述。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.at one’s request 应某人的请求
2.take a trip 旅行
3.recommend sth to sb 向某人推荐某物
4.date back to 追溯到
5.be considered as被看作,被认为是
6.be located in 坐落于
7.be designed for 目的是,旨在
8.have a history of有……的历史
9.an unforgettable trip 一次难忘的旅行
10.have a good time玩得愉快
(二)精彩句型
1.Learning that you are coming to visit China,I would like to recommend several places of interest to you.
听说你要来中国旅游,我想向你推荐几处名胜。
2.Having learnt that our library is planning to buy new books,I am willing to recommend some books to you.
了解到我们图书馆正计划购买新书,我愿意向您推荐一些书。
3.Delighted to know that you are traveling in Shanghai,I think it a good choice to visit the Huangpu River.
很高兴知道你来上海旅游,我认为游览黄浦江是一个不错的选择。
4.I recommend it mainly for the following two reasons.
我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。
5.The reason why I recommend the book is that it attaches great importance to good habits.
我推荐这本书的原因是它非常重视良好的习惯。
6.I recommend that you sleep in a tent at night so that you can get close to nature.
我建议你晚上睡在帐篷里,这样你就可以接近自然。
7.I do hope you can find my recommendation beneficial.
我希望我的推荐能对您有所帮助。
8.I will be overjoyed if you can take my recommendation into consideration.
如果您能考虑我的推荐,我将非常高兴。
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack对你居住的北京感兴趣,尤其是其古迹。请给他写一封电子邮件,介绍北京的基本情况,内容包括:
1.北京是中国的首都,是国家的政治和文化中心;
2.主要文化遗迹有长城、故宫、颐和园等,它们均被列入了世界遗产名录;
3.游客众多。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
【审题谋篇】
体裁 说明文
人称 第三人称为主
时态 一般现在时为主
话题 推荐文化圣地
框架 第一段 北京是著名的古都
第二段 主要景点
第三段 发出邀请,盼望对方到来
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1) adj.辉煌的
(2) adj.人造的
(3) n.杰作
(4) 旅游景点
(5) 国内外
glorious
man-made
masterpiece
tourist attraction
at home and abroad
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①北京是全国的政治和文化中心。
Beijing is .
②它有着悠久而辉煌的历史。
It history.
③长城是世界上最长的人造建筑。
The Great Wall is the longest man-made structure .
the political and cultural centre of the country
has a long and glorious
ever built in the world
④颐和园是中国古代园林的杰作。
The Summer Palace is .
⑤还有许多其他的旅游景点供游客参观。
There are many .
⑥每年,数以百万计的国内外游客被吸引来参观我们的城市。
Every year,millions of visitors,both at home and abroad,
.
a masterpiece of China’s ancient gardens
other tourist attractions for visitors to visit/explore
are attracted to come to visit our city
(2)句式升级
⑦用定语从句合并句①和句②
Beijing is the political and cultural centre of the country,which has a long and glorious history.
【妙笔成篇】
Dear Jack,
I’m glad that you are interested in Beijing,the capital of China.
Beijing is the political and cultural centre of the country,which has a long and glorious history.There are many ancient cultural heritages in Beijing.The Great Wall is the longest man-made structure ever built in the world.The Palace Museum is one of the largest and most complete ancient wooden-structure buildings in the world.The Summer Palace is a masterpiece of China’s ancient gardens.They are all on the World Heritage List.Of course, there are many other tourist attractions for visitors to explore.Every year, millions of visitors,both at home and abroad,are attracted to come to visit our city.
I hope that you’ll come in the future,and I’ll show you around our city.
Yours,
Li Hua
针对训练
假定你是李华,你的新西兰笔友 Sophia计划来中国游玩,想让你给她推荐一处文化景点。请根据以下要点提示给她回封邮件:
1.推荐景点:云冈石窟(Yungang Grottoes);
2.景点介绍:
(1)位于山西省大同市,是中国四大石窟艺术宝库之一;
(2)于北魏年间开始修建,历时60余年;
(3)有53个主要洞窟,以及51 000个存放同样数量佛像的壁龛(niche);于2001年被列入世界遗产名录;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sophia,
I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to China for a trip and I’d like to recommend the Yungang Grottoes to you.
Located in Datong,Shanxi Province,the Yungang Grottoes are regarded as one of the four grotto art treasures of China.Actually,the construction of the caves first began in the Northern Wei Dynasty and lasted for more than 60 years.There are 53 major caves,along with 51,000 niches housing the same number of Buddha statues.Due to its cultural values,it was added to the World Heritage List in 2001 and has attracted millions of tourists from all over the world.
I wish you a very good journey.
Yours,
Li Hua(共14张PPT)
Unit 1 Looking forwards
写作指导 写一封申请信
感知文体常识
本单元的作文是写一封申请信,申请信是书信的一种。在写申请信时,我们应该从写信目的、个人情况、申请原因以及个人优势等方面进行介绍。其中的个人情况和个人优势是申请信的重要组成部分,直接关系到申请的成功率。这两部分虽然重要,但写作时切忌啰嗦,注意言简意赅。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.in response to 对……做出回应
2.be willing to 乐意……
3.be interested in 对……感兴趣
4.apply for 申请
5.deal with 应对,处理
6.hear from 收到某人来信
7.look forward to 期盼,盼望
8.take...into consideration 把……考虑在内
(二)精彩句型
1.I am glad that I feel quite qualified for the position you advertised.
很高兴我觉得自己有资格担任贵公司广告上的职位。
2.I hope you can give/offer me a chance to realize my dream.
我希望你能给我一个实现梦想的机会。
3.In addition,I can speak English fluently/fluent English.
此外,我还能说一口流利的英语。
4.I will enclose my resume for your kind consideration and reference.
随信附上我的简历,以供参考。
5.If you need to know any more about me,please contact me.
如果你想知道更多关于我的信息,请联系我。
6.I shall be much obliged if you offer me a precious opportunity for an interview.
如果您能给我一个宝贵的面试机会,我将不胜感激。
7.I’d be very thankful to you if I can be offered the position in your company.
如果贵公司能给我提供这个职位,我将不胜感激。
8.I will be quite appreciative if I am offered the opportunity.Thank you for your consideration.I wish to get your answer soon.
如果能给我这个机会,我会非常感激。谢谢您的考虑。我希望尽快得到您的答复。
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
假定你是李华,暑期在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.个人优势;
3.能做的事情。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
【审题谋篇】
体裁 应用文
人称 第一人称和第二人称
时态 一般现在时为主
话题 申请做志愿者
框架 第一段 写信目的
第二段 自己的优势
第三段 表达期望
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1) v. 申请
(2) adj. 有益的
(3) n.熟悉
(4) 对……精通
(5) 把……考虑在内
(6) 期盼,盼望
apply
beneficial
amiliarity
have a good command of
take...into consideration
look forward to
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①我听说一场中国画展将在这个城市举行,所以我写信来申请成为你们团队的志愿者。
I hear that a Chinese Painting Exhibition in this local city so I to be a volunteer of your team.
②在中国生活了16年,从小就学习英语,我精通英语和汉语。
and having learnt English since I was a child,I English and Chinese.
will be held
am writing to apply
Having lived in China for sixteen years
have a good command of
③这对介绍中国画是有益的。
for introducing Chinese paintings.
④因为我对中国画文化比较熟悉,所以我可以让外国人和当地人对中国画有更多的了解。
Because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture,I can get foreigners and the locals it.
⑤如果您能考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激。
you could take my application into consideration.
It is beneficial
to know more about
I would appreciate it if
(2)句式升级
⑥用现在分词的完成式改写句①
⑦用非限制性定语从句合并句②和句③
Having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city,I am writing to apply to be a volunteer of your team.
Having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child,I have a good command of English and Chinese,which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.
【妙笔成篇】
Dear Sir,
I’m Li Hua,an outgoing boy,who is studying in London.Having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibition will be held in this local city,I am writing to apply to be a volunteer of your team.I have some advantages for the job.
First of all,having lived in China for sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child,I have a good command of English and Chinese,which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.Besides,because of my familiarity with Chinese painting culture,I can get foreigners and the locals to know more about it.
I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
针对训练
假定你是李华,你在一家英语杂志上看到了下面的一则招聘广告。请根据广告内容,写一封申请信申请该职位。
Writers wanted
We need writers who can contribute regularly to our blog for our popular “Connections” website,presenting articles of interest to young people worldwide.Successful candidates should have some writing experience and an awareness of young people’s interests and concerns.
If you are qualified for it,send us your application where you should explain why you think you are suitable and describe one or two subjects you would like to write about.
注意:请在相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing in response to your advertisement which expects people to contribute to the blog on your website “Connections”.
I’m a Chinese senior high student and I have written various articles for our school magazine on subjects like exam stress and friendship,samples of which have been sent as an attachment.One of the topics I would like to write about is Chinese culture,and I’m also interested in environmental issues.I would be grateful if you could take my application into consideration and I look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua(共16张PPT)
Unit 5 Into the unknown
写作指导 写一篇有关未解之谜的文章
感知文体常识
本单元要求写一篇与自然之谜有关的文章。介绍自然之谜属于说明类文章,是高考英语书面表达中一种常见的考查形式。它要求从科学文献或权威机构搜集相关资料,并加以调查、整理,清楚地介绍自然之谜发生的时间、地点、经过等情况,使读者对此有一个完整、准确的了解。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.in person 亲自;当面
2.in shape在外形上
3.out of sight看不见;在视野之外
4.look into 调查
5.check out 看看,检验
6.throw oneself into 积极从事……
7.throw light on使……显得清楚;阐明……
(二)精彩句型
1.The largest pyramid of all,also known as the Great Pyramid of Cheops(or Khufu),was built around 5,000 years ago.
其中最大的金字塔,也被称为基奥普斯大金字塔(或胡夫),建于大约5 000年前。
2.It is the size of a 40-storey building and covers an area big enough to fit 10 football fields in it.Experts reckon it took 400,000 men some 20 years to complete.
它有40层楼那么高,占地面积足以容纳10个足球场。专家估计,40万人花了大约20年的时间才完成。
3.In the 1940s,a French hardware dealer spotted some mummified animals exactly one-third up the height of the pyramid.
在20世纪40年代,一个法国五金商人发现一些动物的木乃伊正好在金字塔高度的三分之一处。
4.The remarkable thing was they showed no signs of decomposition.
值得注意的是,它们没有腐烂的迹象。
5.He deducted that the pyramid shape was responsible for preserving these creatures.
他推断金字塔的形状是保护这些生物的原因。
6.A Czech radio engineer conducted a series of experiments in which he placed a brand new razor blade inside a 1:1 000 scale model of Cheops.
一位捷克无线电工程师进行了一系列的实验,他将一个全新的剃须刀片放入1:1 000比例的胡夫模型中。
7.It took him 10 years to obtain a patent for this remarkable device,which still has no scientific explanation today.
他花了10年的时间为这个了不起的装置取得了专利,直到今天也没有科学的解释。
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
下表是关于自然界之谜“百慕大三角(Bermuda Triangle)”的一些信息,请根据此表写一篇英语短文,介绍“百慕大三角”。
地理位置 发生的怪事 人们的猜测
位于百慕大和佛罗里达之间的大西洋西部。 自1945年以来,数以百计的船只和飞机,以及一千多人在这里神秘失踪,没留下任何痕迹。 外星人在作怪;当地特殊的天气条件;没人给出让人信服的理由。
注意:请在相应位置作答。
参考词汇:残骸wreckage
【审题谋篇】
体裁 说明文
人称 第三人称为主
时态 一般现在时和一般过去时为主
话题 介绍百慕大三角
框架 第一段 介绍百慕大三角的位置
第二段 解释神秘的现象
第三段 列举神秘现象的原因
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1) n.谜
(2) n.事件
(3) adj.令人不安的
(4) 逃跑
(5) 调查
mystery
incident
disturbing
make a getaway
look into
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①这片区域位于百慕大和佛罗里达之间的大西洋西部。
between Bermuda and Florida.
②在这个地区发生了一些奇怪的事情。
in this area.
③自1945年开始,数以百计的船只和飞机,以及一千多人在这里失踪。
Since 1945,____________________________________________________
.
This is an area of the western Atlantic
Some strange incidents happened
hundreds of ships and planes and over a thousand people have
disappeared
④没有留给他们逃跑的机会。
No chance for them to .
⑤很多专家一直在调查这些奇怪的事情,但是没有科学的发现。
Many experts the strange incidents,but no scientific findings.
⑥人们给出了许多理由来解释这些令人不安的事件。
Some reasons have been given .
⑦这些令人不安的事件发生在百慕大三角地区。
The disturbing incidents Bermuda Triangle.
make a getaway was left
have been looking into
to explain the disturbing incidents
occurred in the area of
(2)句式升级
⑧用定语从句合并句①和句②。
⑨用现在分词作状语合并句③和句④。
This is an area of the western Atlantic between Bermuda and Florida,where some strange incidents happened.
Since 1945,hundreds of ships and planes and over a thousand people have disappeared,leaving no chance for them to make a getaway.
⑩用定语从句合并句⑥和句⑦。
Some reasons have been given to explain the disturbing incidents that occurred in the area of Bermuda Triangle.
【妙笔成篇】
There are many unexplained mysteries in the natural world,of which the Bermuda Triangle is a particular one.This is an area of the western Atlantic between Bermuda and Florida,where some strange incidents happened.Since 1945,hundreds of ships and planes and over a thousand people have disappeared,leaving no chance for them to make a getaway.
Many experts have been looking into the strange incidents,but no scientific findings.However,some reasons have been given to explain the disturbing incidents that occurred in the area of Bermuda Triangle.Some think aliens might have arrived there and taken everything away.Others believe they might be caused by special weather there.But no one can give a believable reason.
Maybe in the future we can find the answer with the development of science and technology.
针对训练
假定你是李华,你的新西兰笔友Fred发来邮件,说他对大自然中的一些未解之谜很感兴趣,并希望你能把你了解的未解之谜介绍给他。请给他回信,介绍喜马拉雅山“雪人Yeti”。要点如下:
1.出现地点:喜马拉雅山;
2.相关信息:
(1)传说它们体型巨大,全身长毛,能像人一样行走。
(2)科学家曾发现“雪人”的毛发和脚印,猜想它们是古老北极熊的后代(descendant)。
3.研究结论:尚无科学证据证实其真实存在。
注意:请在相应位置作答。
Dear Fred,
At your request,I’m writing to introduce the Yeti,a mysterious wild creature found in the Himalayas,to you.
Actually,people have never stopped the search for the wild creatures which are said to be large,hairy animals with the ability to walk like human beings.So far,scientists have made several scientific searches for the Yetis but they only found some indirect evidence such as hair and footprints,which made them guess the Yetis might be the descendants of ancient polar bears.Though there have been various statements and arguments about the real existence of the Yeti,no scientific evidence has proved it.People still hope to throw some light on this mystery.
That’s what I know about the Yeti and I hope you will be interested in it.
Yours,
Li Hua(共16张PPT)
Unit 2 Lessons in life
写作指导 写一篇剧情概要
感知文体常识
剧情概要是对剧本或文学作品概要的描述。它的基本内容包括主要人物、时间、地点、情节发展和结局等。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇
1.tell the story of 讲述……故事
2.start with 以……开始
3.grow up 长大
4.be concerned with 对……关心
5.regardless of 不管,不顾
6.lead to 导致,引起
7.be considered as 被看作,被认为
8.in pursuit of 追求
(二)精彩句型
1.开头常用语句
(1)The book by Oscar Wilde tells the story of Dorian Gray.
奥斯卡·王尔德的书讲述了多里安·格雷的故事。
(2)The story starts with young Dorian having his portrait painted.
这个故事从年轻的多里安让人画他的肖像画开始。
2.主体常用语句
(1)He is a very handsome young man who spends his life only concerned with his own pleasure,regardless of the suffering he brings to others.
他是一个非常英俊的年轻人,他一生只关心自己的快乐,而不管他给别人带来的痛苦。
(2)Dorian wishes he could remain young and good-looking always,with his portrait growing old instead of him.
多里安希望他能永远保持年轻和英俊,他的肖像越来越老,而不是他。
(3)Soon afterwards,Dorian is surprised to find his wish has come true,after he meets Sybil,an innocent actress who falls in love with him.
不久之后,多里安惊讶地发现,在他遇到西比尔之后,他的愿望已经实现,这个纯真的女演员爱上了他。
(4)When he learns that Sybil has killed herself,Dorian finds his face in the painting has taken on a cruel look.
当他得知西比尔自杀时,多里安发现他在画中的脸呈现出一种残酷的表情。
(5)He hides the painting away so that no one else may see it.
他把画藏起来,免得别人看见。
3.结尾常用语句
(1)In the story,what matters most to Dorian Gray is that he is good-looking,not that he has a good heart.
在故事中,多里安·格雷最重视的是他长得很好看,而不是他有一颗善良的心。
(2)He sacrifices his true self in pursuit of physical beauty and pleasure,which leads to his destruction in the end.
他为了追求身体的美和快乐而牺牲真实自我,这最终导致了他的毁灭。
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】
英语课上,老师要求同学们阅读莎士比亚的《威尼斯商人》并写一篇剧情概要。
【审题谋篇】
体裁 说明文
人称 第三人称为主
时态 一般现在时为主
话题 写一篇《威尼斯商人》的剧情概要
框架 第一段 简要介绍戏剧内容
第二段 戏剧的细节及高潮
第三段 自己的观点及看法
【遣词造句】
1.词汇
(1) adj.高贵的
(2) v.投资
(3) v.帮助
(4) 专注于
(5) 依某人看
noble
invest
assist
focus on
in one’s opinion
2.句式
(1)要点翻译
①巴萨尼奥是威尼斯的一个破落贵族,他向朋友安东尼奥借钱。
Bassanio,a noble but penniless Venetian, .
②巴萨尼奥可以向鲍西娅求婚。
Bassanio woo Portia.
③为了能够帮助巴萨尼奥,他向夏洛克借钱。
He borrows money from Shylock Bassanio.
asks his friend Antonio for a loan
can propose to
in order to assist
④如果安东尼奥不能及时偿还贷款,他将给夏洛克一磅肉。
If Antonio ,he will give Shylock a pound of flesh.
⑤最后,消息传来,安东尼奥的一些船只已安全抵达。
The play that some of Antonio’s ships have arrived safely.
⑥在我看来,这部戏剧主要集中在几个主题上,比如巴萨尼奥和安东尼奥之间的深厚友谊,女性克服当时社会限制的坚强性格,等等。
This play,in my opinion, ,such as the strong friendship between Bassanio and Antonio,the strength of women’s character of overcoming the restraints set by society of that time,and so on.
cannot pay the loan in time
ends with the news
focuses on several main themes
(2)句式升级
⑦用so that引导的结果状语从句合并句①和句②。
⑧用被动句改写句④。
Bassanio,a noble but penniless Venetian,asks his friend Antonio for a loan so that Bassanio can propose to woo Portia.
If the loan cannot be repaid in time,Antonio will give Shylock a pound of flesh.
【妙笔成篇】
The Merchant of Venice is one of Shakespeare’s plays.Bassanio,a noble but penniless Venetian,asks his friend Antonio for a loan so that Bassanio can propose to woo Portia.Antonio borrows money from Shylock in order to assist Bassanio.However,if the loan cannot be repaid in time,Antonio will give Shylock a pound of flesh.
News arrives that Antonio’s ships have been lost at sea.Unable to get his money back,Shylock attempts to use justice to enforce a terrible revenge on Antonio:he demands his pound of flesh.Shylock’s revengeful plan is foiled by Portia,who turns the tables on Shylock by an argument:he must take flesh
only,and Shylock must die if any blood is spilled.Thus,the contract is cancelled. The play ends with the news that,in fact,some of Antonio’s ships have arrived safely.
This play,in my opinion,focuses on several main themes,such as the strong friendship between Bassanio and Antonio,the strength of women’s character of overcoming the restraints set by society of that time,and so on.
针对训练
根据下列要点提示,介绍马克·吐温的作品《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》。
(1)马克·吐温(Mark Twain),美国作家。他出生于密西西比河(Mississippi River)畔的一座小城。
(2)他的代表作之一是《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》(Adventures of Huckleberry Finn)。它讲述了哈克贝利·费恩从家中逃走,和吉姆在密西西比河流浪的故事。
(3)哈克贝利·费恩遇见的人物涵盖了社会所有阶层,因此这部小说生动地反映了当时的社会状况。
(4)《哈克贝利·费恩历险记》在美国文学史上一直被称为“最伟大的作品之一”。
Mark Twain,who is an American writer is famous for writing stories.
A small town on the banks of Mississippi River saw the growth of him,one of whose masterpieces is Adventures of Huckleberry Finn.The novel tells a story that Huckleberry Finn runs away from home and wanders down Mississippi River with a boy named Jim.But it is more than that.The people the boy meets are from all walks of life.As a result,the novel vividly reflects the society at that time.
Adventures of Huckleberry Finn has been considered as one of the greatest novels in the history of American literature.
