-2024年新高考英语二轮复习重难点突破专题4.1 写作第一节之题型剖析(原卷版+解析版)

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专题4.1 写作第一节之题型剖析
-2024年新高考英语二轮复习重难点突破
年份 卷别 题干主要内容
2023 新高考I、II卷 假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习 口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件。 内容包括:1.说明问题;2.提出建议。
全国甲卷 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国 历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括:1.人物简介及事迹;2. 意义或启示。
全国乙卷 请以向学校英文报投稿的方式,用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中 获得的体验和感受。
2022 新高考I、II卷 假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline 写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。 内容包括:1.节目介绍;2.访谈的时间和话题。
全国甲卷 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文 投稿。 内容包括:1.海洋的重要性;2.保护海洋的倡议。
全国乙卷 学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括:1.学习活动状况描述;2.简单评论;3.你的建议。
2021 新高考I、II卷 你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括:1.读报的经历;2.喜爱的栏目;3.期望和祝福。
全国甲卷 假定你是李华,你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英语网站 上展示,请你给外国朋友Chris写封信,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引 外国朋友。 内容如下:1.阐明写信事由;2.征求建议;3.表达感谢。
全国乙卷 你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛。 内容包括:1.分析优势与不足;2.提出学习建议。
根据上述题干主要内容我们作出如下分类统计:
年份 卷别 文体 主题 题干形式
2023 新高考I、II卷 建议信(邮件) 对外教的口语练习分组提出建议 文字提纲
全国甲卷 短文投稿 用英文介绍一位中国历史人物 文字提纲
全国乙卷 短文投稿 分享自己在假期中学到的新技能 文字提纲
2022 新高考I、II卷 邀请信(邮件) 邀请外教参加电台访谈 文字提纲
全国甲卷 短文投稿 世界海洋日 文字提纲
全国乙卷 短文投稿 Learning English Beyond the Classroom 文字提纲+图表
2021 新高考I、II卷 短文投稿 庆祝创刊十周年 文字提纲
全国甲卷 咨询信(邮件) 询问哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人 文字提纲
全国乙卷 发言稿 Be smart online learners 文字提纲
根据上表,近三年全国高考九套试卷写作题特点概述如下:
1.书信体为三题,非书信体为六题,其中发言稿(又可称之为演讲稿)为一题,其余五题都是“用于投稿的短文”;
2.从广义上说,九套试卷写作题的体裁都是应用文。而从狭义上说,结合题干所给出的主要内容看,体
裁有说明、记叙(包括夹叙夹议)、议论文的元素或者兼而有之(如:2022全国乙卷的写作有记叙、有说明、还有议论);
3.除了2022全国乙卷是以“文字提纲+图表”的命题形式出题外,其余都是“文字提纲”式。以上两种题干都是以信息块(包括文字或文字+图表)的形式呈现材料,用简单笼统的文字信息或文字+图表信息给出写作内容和要求。它要求考生根据题干所给出的信息块,首先确定中心话题,然后紧紧围绕中心话题、适当增加细节展开写作,表达出题干所要求表达的全部意思。
由以上分析我们可以得出如下启示:在根据题干谋划具体表达内容的基础上,考生既要熟悉各类应用文的套句,还要借用说明、记叙(包括夹叙夹议)以及议论文的某些写作方法。
一、审读题干 把握重点
仔细审读题干:考生需要认真审读题干中的文字,包括图画、图表所表达或所反映的信息,确保审读题干做到位;把握以下重点:明确写作主题、写作要求、写作体裁以及确定谋篇布局。
二、谋划要点 扩展成句
谋划要点有两种情况:一是从题干中直接提炼要点,适当增加具体细节;二是根据题干中的“内容包括(笼统的要点)”中的几点内容进行充分的挖掘,通过合理的设想,扩充或补充细节将笼统的要点具体化(扩展成句),然后将具体化的要点表达出来。表达时,还要注意用好相关应用文的套句。
三、连句成篇 规范上卡
将扩展而成的句子衔接起来,谋篇布局形成段落式(一般为三段式)的短文。要注意使用一些表示并列、递进、让步、转折、因果等意义的关联词语,以增强文章的连贯性和流畅性。 有意识地将一些“低级词汇”转换成“高级词汇”,将一些“简单结构”转换成“高级结构”,以求语言表达的闪亮。最后规范上卡,要求达到书写倩丽,搏人眼球的高度。
【写作过程演示】
一、审读题干 把握重点
审读题干:审读文字和图表所给的信息。
把握重点:
体裁为说明文;
话题为课外学习英语的现状;
写作要求:学习活动状况描述;简单评论;你的建议。字数:100字左右(短文的题目和首句提示语
已写好);
谋篇布局:总体描述数据所反映的基本事实;陈述图表所显示的数据;就数据反映的特点进行简单评论,并提出自己的建议。
二、提炼要点 扩展成句
1.提炼要点
顺着首句提示语引出话题(课堂之外学生学习英语的方式多元化);
陈述图表所显示的数据(18%的学生读英语书籍;65%的学生听英语歌曲;50%的学生看英语电影;12%的学生浏览英语学习网站);
分析中学生课外学习英语的方式对数据发表评论;对中学生在课外学习英语的方式提出建议。
2.扩展成句
①如今,随着智能手机和电脑的日益普及,越来越多的学生在课堂之外以他们喜欢的各种方式
学习英语。
Nowadays, with the popularity of smartphones and computers growing, an increasing number of students learn English beyond the classroom in various ways they are fond of.
②如上述条状图所示,大约65%的学生喜欢听英语歌曲,而50%的学生选择看英语电影。
As the above bar conveys, there are roughly 65% of the students preferring to listen to English songs while 50% of the students choose to watch English movies.
③阅读英语书籍的学生比例只有18%,其次为通过英语学习网站学习英语的学生。
The percentage of students reading English books is only 18%, followed by 12% who study English via English learning websites.
④结果表明,大多数学生宁愿以更有趣的方式学习英语。
The results suggest that most students would rather study English in a more entertaining way.
⑤我们学生也应该考虑英语书籍和网站,从而为英语打下坚实的基础。
We students should also take English books and websites into consideration, thus laying a solid foundation for English.
三、连句成篇 规范上卡
【答案】
Nowadays, with the popularity of smartphones and computers growing, an increasing number of students learn English beyond the classroom in various ways they are fond of.
As the above bar conveys, there are roughly 65% of the students preferring to listen to English songs while 50% of the students choose to watch English movies. However, the percentage of students reading English books is only 18%, followed by 12% who study English via English learning websites.
The relevant results suggest that most students would rather study English in a more entertaining way. From my point of view, we should also take English books and websites into consideration, thus laying a solid
foundation for English.
一、邀请信
邀请信是写信人对收信人的一种盛情邀约,是邀请收信人参加某项活动、某个社团组织的书信。在写作时,要注意邀请信的交际性,语气要真挚,避免带有不礼貌或强人所难的字眼。谋篇布局如下:
谋篇布局 首段 (介绍自己),写信背景:简要说明活动;写信目的:邀请对方
中段 把要点进行细化增加具体的细节内容(活动的具体时间与地点,活动主题以及活动的意义等);必要时强调受邀人参加的理由
末段 期待对方接受邀请,期待对方尽快回复(并表示感谢)
I’m Li Hua from...School, the president of the Students’ Union. I am writing to invite you to...
我是来自……学校的李华,学生会主席。我写信邀请您……。
On behalf of ..., I am writing to invite you to be our gues.我代表……写信邀请您来作客。
It is a great privilege/honor for me to invite you to participate in...to be held in...on...
我很荣幸邀请您参加……于……在……举行的……。
I feel it a great honor on behalf of...to invite you to participate in...我很荣幸代表……邀请您参加……
A...club has been formed recently in our school. Learning you are enthusiastic about..., I’m writing to invite you to join it.我们学校最近成立了一个……俱乐部。知道您喜欢……,我写信邀请您加入俱乐部。
Informed of the exciting news that a party is to be held in..., I can’t wait to invite you to participate in it.
听到一场派对将在……举行这个令人激动的消息,我迫不及待想邀请你来参加。
It’s a pity that you have to go back to America soon. So a farewell party for you will be held in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come at 6: 00 p.m. 很遗憾你不久就要回美国了。所以,这周六晚在阳光俱乐部我们会为你举行一场欢送会。你能在下午六点来吗?
The English speech contest will be held in our school on August 6.英语演讲比赛将于8月6日在我校举行。
It will begin at 2: 00 p.m. and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.比赛将于下午两点开始,持续两个小时,在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
... has gained increasing popularity among ... ……在学生中越来越受欢迎。
... is intended to cover topics ranging from music, ... to ... ……旨在涵盖从……到……等主题。
This week we’d like to invite you to join ... and share with us some tips on how to ...
本周,我们想邀请您加入……,并与我们分享一些如何……的技巧。
We will start at 8: 00 a.m. and arrive there at 9: 00.我们将会在上午八点出发,九点到达那里。
By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 in front of your apartment and it will take you directly to the club.
顺便说一下,你可以乘坐你所住公寓前的322路公交车,它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
I wonder if you can come...我想知道您是否能来……。
How would you like to join us in... 您愿意跟我们一起加入/参加……吗?
You can reach me through my phone number...at your convenience.
您可以在您方便的时候打我的电话,号码是……
If you are interested in it, please let me know and I’ll send you more information about...
如果您对此感兴趣,请告诉我,我会给您发送更多有关……的信息。
Would you please drop me a line to let me know if you can come to...
您能给我写封信让我知道你是否能来……?
I would feel much honored if you could come.如果您能来,我将深感荣幸。
I would be looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.我非常高兴地期待着您的光临。
I’d appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.如果您能接受我的邀请,我将不胜感激。
Your participation will surely make the activity fruitful and meaningful. I would highly appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.
你的参与一定会使活动富有成效且有意义。如果您能尽早确认您的参与,我将不胜感激!
Looking forward to your reply.期待您的回复。
(2022新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。
内容包括:1.节目介绍; 
2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Dear Caroline,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Caroline,
On behalf of the English programme “Talk and Talk”, I’m writing to invite you to be our guest.
Since its launch, “Talk and Talk”, a weekly broadcast programme, has gained increasing popularity among students. It is intended to cover topics ranging from music, sports to study strategies, life in school, etc. This week we’d like to invite you to join the programme and share with us some tips on how to improve oral English. The programme is scheduled for 5 p. m. this Friday.
It would be highly appreciated if you could accept the invitation. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
二、建议信
建议信是向对方提出自己的合理建议的信件。建议信一般分为三类:一是给你熟悉的人就有关方面主动提供建议;二是对别人写信向你求助的回复,就其遇到的某个问题提出看法、建议等;三是写给某个组织或机构,就改进服务等方面提出建议或忠告。建议信要尽量简洁明确,理由充足,具有合理性和说服性。
谋篇布局 首段 介绍自己,写信目的或者意图
中段 提出具体建议,并阐述理由
末段 希望自己的建议被采纳,并表达愿望或者期盼对方回复
I am writing to express my concern about ...我写信是为了表达我对……的担忧。
I have received your letter saying you plan to visit China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful for you.
我已经收到了你的来信,信上说你打算下个月来中国参观十天。可能下面的建议会对你有所帮助。
I’m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in with the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.
很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活的建议。下面是我的一些建议。
I’m very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在,关于如何在高中学好英语,我写信给你一些建议。
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice suggestions on/about …
很高兴收到你的来信,征求我对……的建议。
I am writing to express my views /share with you some suggestions concerning...
我写信是想表达/与你分享我对……的看法/建议。
It is my pleasure/I’m glad to offer you some advice/suggestions only for your reference.
我很高兴给您提一些建议,仅供参考。
You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I will try to make some constructive suggestions.
你就……向我寻求建议,我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。
I have learned that you have some trouble in…and I would like to offer you the following tips.
我知道你在……方面有困难,因此我想给你提如下一些建议。
I’m so sorry/I feel so sorry to hear that you are having trouble… Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.很遗憾听说你在……方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
My suggestions are as follows./Here are a few suggestions./The following are my suggestions.我的建议如下。
In my opinion, you are supposed to...在我看来,你应该……
I’d like to suggest that.../I would like to make a recommendation that...我想建议……
If I were you, I would...如果我是你,我会……
You’d better do.../not do...你最好做/最好不做……
It’s necessary for you to...你有必要……
Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
既然你如此渴望提高英语,这会是一个很好的机会。
This will not only enhance ... effectiveness but also promote ... among students.
这不仅可以增加……的效果,还可以促进学生之间的……。
I believe it would be beneficial if you could follow my suggestions.
我相信如果你能听从我的建议,那将是非常有益的。
I’m sure you can make a wise decision.我相信你会做出明智的决定。
I will be glad/would appreciate it if you will/could take my advice/suggestions into consideration.
如果你能考虑我的建议我将非常高兴/感激。
I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.如果这方面有所改善我会很开心的。
I’m looking forward to receiving your good news.我期待着收到你的好消息。
Hope my advice can be of some help. If there is anything else I could do, please let me know.
希望我的建议能有所帮助。如果还有什么我能做的,请告诉我。
I hope these suggestions will be of use/useful/helpful to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way.
我希望这些建议会对你有用/有帮助。记住:有志者事竟成。
I believe that you will take my suggestions into consideration.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。
(2023新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件。
内容包括:1.说明问题;
2.提出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ___________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I am writing to express my concern about the upcoming spoken English programme.
As you said, you intend to have us randomly matched in pairs. This, however, may cause problems such as language barriers, mismatched learning goals, and lack of motivation, which may reduce the effectiveness of the programme.
A better way might be to have students practise with partners who have similar English proficiency and learning needs. This will not only enhance the programme effectiveness but also promote communication and cooperation among students.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
三、咨询信
咨询信是写信人就自己不太了解或不理解的事情、问题,向有关部门、专家或熟悉该情况的朋友寻求解答时所使用的一种书信。
谋篇布局 首段 自我介绍以表明自己的身份,叙述相关咨询背景(陈述写信目的)
中段 陈述咨询的具体内容
末段 表达强烈获取信息的愿望和感谢(必要时还要提供联系方式)
Word came that ... is going to hold ... whose topic is related to ...有消息说我们……要开……,主题是关于……的。
Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.
因为这次活动将在英文网站上发布,我真诚地希望你能给我一些建议。
I am writing to inquire about some relevant information.我写信是想询问一些相关的信息/细节。
I am writing to ask you for some details regarding/concerning it.我写信是想向您询问一些有关这方面的细节。
I am writing to inquire if it is possible for you to provide me with some information, regarding/concerning...
我写信来是想询问您是否可以提供一些关于……的信息。
I am writing to ask you some relevant information about...to be held next week.
我写信是想问你一些关于下周将举行的……的相关信息。
I’d like to know more information about...我想知道更多关于……的信息。
Would you mind giving some detailed information about... 你介意提供一些有关……详细的信息吗
I am not familiar with ..., so I would like to know about...我对……不熟悉,所以我想了解……的相关情况。
I am writing to ask for some information about the preparation of...我写信咨询你一些关于准备……的信息。
The following is my confusion.以下是我的困惑。
Since it is my first time to ..., I would like to know the details about...
由于这是我第一次……,我想知道的是关于……的细节
Moreover/Then/Besides/What’s more, I would like to...此外,我们想要……
I would be much appreciated if you can furnish me with the above information and you can contact me via...
如果您能向我提供上述信息,并通过……与我联系,我将不胜感激。
I would appreciate it very much if you could let me know the information above in detail. I’m looking forward to your early reply.如果您能让我详细了解上述信息,我将不胜感激。我期待着您的早日答复。
If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible.如果可能的话,您可以尽快回复我。
I will take your advice into consideration. I really appreciate your help.
我会考虑你的建议。我真的很感谢您的帮助。
(2021全国甲卷)假定你是李华,你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英语网站上展示,请你给外国朋友Chris写封信,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友。
内容如下:1.阐明写信事由;
2.征求建议;
3.表达感谢。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.
As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. In order to get more clicks, you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer. What’s more, if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements, what should I do Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.
If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible. I will take your advice into consideration. I really appreciate your help.
Yours,
Li Hua
四、申请信
申请信内容有求职、留学、志愿者、报考和参加某种活动等。申请的目的是让对方了解自己的能力、经验和成就,其中个人情况介绍(学业与特长、能力与经验、品德与爱好等)是申请信的核心内容,要尽可能说明申请人的优势,以便留下良好印象。
谋篇布局 首段 (自我介绍)。简要说明获得相关信息的来源,并说明想获得此次机会或 岗位
中段 突出表达自己的长处或优势,具体说明能胜任某个岗位或想获得此次机会的理由(介绍自己的学历或工作经历,本人的个性,已经取得的成绩,并说明为何对这一岗位或机会感兴趣等
末段 感谢对方、请求对方尽快答复并给予机会。视具体情况还可加上自己的感谢和期望乃至获准后的打算以及自己的联系方式等
Knowing that ... is looking for an editor responsible for the column “...”.
得知……正在招聘一位负责“……”专栏的编辑。
I’m a student who is studying in...School.我是一位在……学校学习的学生。
I graduated from...three years ago.我三年前从……毕业。
I won the first prize in...Competition.我曾经获得过……比赛的一等奖。
I am writing to apply for the job/position.我写信的目的是申请这个工作/职位。
I’mglad to learn that you want a .../I am really delighted to learn that a/an...is required, and I feel this position is specially tailored to me.我很高兴得知(你们)需要一名……,我觉得这个职位是专门为我量身定做的。
I’m interested in the post which you advertised in yesterday’s...Daily.
我对你们昨天在《……日报》上刊登的职位广告很感兴趣。
I am writing to apply for... advertised in... 我写信申请刊登在……上的……
I’m quite interested in this job.我对这个工作非常感兴趣。
I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for...
我认为我是……的合格人选,所以我写信推荐自己。
I have been working in... since my graduation, and I have gained rich experience in this field.
毕业后我一直在……工作,积累了该领域丰富的经验。
As an outgoing... I get along well with all my ... and am always ready to help others.
作为一名外向的……我和……相处融洽且总是乐于助人。
My advantage first lies in the fact that...我的优势首先在于……。
I have a good command of English, especially written English.我的英语掌握得很好,尤其是书面语。
I have taken the part-time job as ..., from which I have gained relevant experience.
我还兼职做过……,从中我获得了相关的经验。
I have a rich knowledge of traditional Chinese culture.我对中国传统文化有着丰富的了解。
I’m good at.../I do well in.../I master... well..., especially…我很擅长……/我精通……,尤其是……
I major in English/Computer/Chinese Medicine... so I have a good command of...
我所学专业是英语/计算机/中医……所以我很精通……
I have a good knowledge of/have a good command of...我对……掌握得很好/我很了解……。
I am well acquainted with/am familiar with…我对……很熟悉。
I am majoring in.../My major is...我的专业是…/我的专业是……。
I am experienced in...我在……方面很有经验。
I’ll be fit for the job/post/position.我会胜任这项工作的/这个职位/岗位。
I think I’m qualified for it.我认为我能胜任这项工作。
I think that I’mqualified for the position.我认为我能胜任这个职位。
I believe that both my education and experience are directly related to your requirements.
我相信我的教育和经验与您的要求直接相关。
I think I’m suited for the job. If you can let me have this chance I will try my best to do it well.
我认为我适合这份工作。如果您能给我这个机会,我会尽力去做的好
Once I am hired, I will work hard for...一旦我被录用,我将为……努力工作。
I’msure I can do the job well if I get the position.如果我得到这个职位,我确信我能做好。
I would appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.如果你能给我这个机会,我将不胜感激。
Thanks for considering my application and I am looking forward to your early reply.
感谢您考虑我的申请,并期待着您早日回复。
Thanks for considering my application and I am looking forward to your early reply.
谢谢您考虑我的申请,期待您的早日回复。
I would really appreciate it if I could be given the precious chance. I’m looking forward to your reply.
如果能给我这个宝贵的机会,我将不胜感激。我期待着你的答复。
Your early response will be much appreciated.如您能尽快回复,我将不胜感激。
If you need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me at any time at...
如果您需要了解更多关于我的信息,请随时与我联系。
(2023届安徽省阜阳市高三3月质量检测)假定你是李华,你校的英语报正在校内招募“中国传统文化”专栏的编辑。请你写封电子邮件申请。
内容包括:1.表明意图;
2.自身优势;
3.表达期望。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
Knowing that the school English newspaper is looking for an editor responsible for the column “Traditional Chinese Culture”, I’m writing to apply for the position.
I think I’m qualified for it. To begin with, I have a good command of English, especially written English. Besides, I have taken the part-time job as an English editor, from which I have gained relevant experience. More importantly, I have a rich knowledge of traditional Chinese culture.
I would really appreciate it if I could be given the precious chance. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hui
五、道歉信
道歉信通常是写信人因自己的不当言行、过失给他人带来麻烦、不便、损失或造成伤害并在自己发觉或他人指出的情况下,向对方表示歉意时所写的信件。写好道歉信的关键在于措辞要朴实委婉,语气要诚恳真挚,解释要详细明了。
谋篇布局 首段 表明写信的意图,对某事表示歉意
中段 说明道歉的具体原因(事情的来龙去脉)
末段 再次表明歉意,请求对方谅解,并提出某些补救措施
注意:如果你根本就不知道对方是谁,就要表明自己的身份、留下联系方式。请看下例:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China studying at Windmill College. I’m truly sorry that my bike scratched your car when I was riding to school this morning. I understand it will certainly put you in a very bad mood. I sincerely apologize for what I did and promise I will cover all the relevant costs. As school will start soon, I can’t wait on the scene for you. Please contact me at 589367 or linux@windmilloo.org. Many apologies again for all the inconvenience I have caused you.
Best regards!
Li Hua
I’m writing to express my sincere apology for the accidental damage to ...
我写信是为了对……的意外损坏表示诚挚的歉意。
I am extremely sorry that ... I’m writing to tell you the reason for it.非常抱歉……我现在写信告诉你原因。
I would like to express my deepest apology for not being able to...因为不能……我现在写信表达我深切的歉意。
I am writing this letter to apologize to you for...我现在写信是为了表达我……的歉意。
I would like to give you my apology for...我想……向你道歉。
I hope that this does not cause you too much inconvenience.我希望这不会给你造成太多不便。
I am writing this letter to express my regret.../to apologize for...我写这封信是想表达我的遗憾……/为……道歉。
I am writing you this letter to show my deep regret.我写这封信是为了表示我深深的歉意。
I must apologize about(not)doing sth. ...对于做了/没做……,我必须道歉。
Please accept my heartfelt apology.请接受我衷心的道歉。
Knowing how precious ... is to you, I’m terribly sorry for any inconvenience caused.
我知道……对你来说是多么珍贵,因此给你带来的不便,我深表歉意。
Due to... I have to...因为……我必须……
To make up for my fault, could you please... If so, I promise...
为了弥补我的过失,是否可以请你……?如果可以,我保证……
Would it be convenient for you... ……对你来说方便吗?
I would appreciate it if you allow me to...如果你允许我……,我会不胜感谢。
I expect to make it up to you by replacing ... with ...我希望把……换成……来补偿你。
Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience I caused.我对于我所造成的任何不便再次道歉。
I really hope that you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
希望你能够接受我的道歉并理解我的处境。
I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now and to assure you that it will not happen again.
我想让你知道我现在感觉多么遗憾,并且我保证这种情况以后不会再发生。
Please accept my sincere apology for...请接受我对于……的真诚道歉。
Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused/that has caused by me.对于所造成的任何不便我再次道歉。
I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.
我真诚的希望你能够站在我的位置想一想,并且接受我的道歉。
I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now.我想让你知道我现在感觉多么的遗憾。
I am sorry that I can’t...but trust that you will be able to understand.很抱歉我不能……,但我相信,你会理解的。
I hope this unfortunate incident won’t affect our friendship.我希望这次不幸的事件不会影响我们的友谊。
I hope the adjustment won’t put you into much more trouble.我希望这次调整不会给你带来更多的麻烦。
(2024上·山东菏泽高三统考期末)假定你是李华,留学生朋友Peter借给你一本英文名著《飘》(Gone with the Wind),可是你不小心损坏了。请你给他写封邮件。
内容包括:1.表示道歉;
2.解释损坏原因;
3.提出补救办法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to express my sincere apology for the accidental damage to the English classic Gone with the Wind you kindly lent me.
Yesterday evening I was absorbed in the book when I carelessly knocked down the cup, the hot water pouring over the book. I was upset that the whole book was in bad shape. Knowing how precious the book is to you, I’m terribly sorry for any inconvenience caused.
I expect to make it up to you by replacing the book with a new copy. I’ve purchased one online, which will be sent to you in 3 days. I hope this unfortunate incident won’t affect our friendship. Please accept my heartfelt apology.
Yours,
Li Hua
六、求助信
求助信是当个人遇到自己无法解决的问题或者无法克服的困难时向收信人寻求帮助,希望收信人就提
出的问题提供帮助或给出针对性的解决方法的信件。求助信要简明扼要,语气一定要委婉、真诚。
谋篇布局 首段 (问好、介绍自己)。说明事由,提出求助
中段 求助的内容以及遇到的具体困难
末段 表达期待、表达感谢
... will organize an “...” competition with the theme of “...” for ... next Monday.
下周一,……将为……组织一场以“……”为主题的“……”比赛。
Being the organizer of this competition, I have difficulty/trouble in ..., which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.作为这次比赛的组织者,我在……的方面有困难,这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向您求助。
Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you to do me a favour.面对诸多的困难,我不得不求您帮助我。
I’m writing to ask for/seek for your help/ask you for your help.我写信是为了寻求您的帮助。
I’m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor/give me a hand.我写信希望您能给我帮助。
I’m sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and need your help.
很抱歉打扰您,但我有些困难需要得到您的帮助。
I’m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to give me a hand with my English study.
我写信希望你能帮助我学习英语。
I’m writing in the hope of your assistance in preparing for...我写信是希望您能帮我为即将到来的……做准备。
I have trouble in getting along well with my classmates.我和同学们相处得不好。
I find it extremely hard for me to arrange and make good use of my everyday time for valuable things.
我发现我很难安排好每天的时间去做有价值的事情。
I find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been annoying me for a long time.
我发现自己进步得不像以前那么快了,这让我苦恼了很长时间。
I can’t be passionate and energetic all day long so as to make every moment meaningful and splendid.
我不能整天激情满怀、精力充沛去让每一刻都精彩、富有意义。
I would greatly appreciate it if I could get your help.如果能得到你的帮助,我将不胜感激。
I believe with your help, this competition will be a complete success.
我相信在你的帮助下,这次比赛一定会取得圆满成功。
I would be grateful if you could lend me a helping hand.如果你能帮我一把,我将不胜感激。
Your professional advice would be of great help to me. Looking forward to your early reply.
你的专业建议对我会有很大的帮助。期待您早日回复。
I’msure with your help I can make great progress. 我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。
I’d appreciate it if you'd like to offer me a helping hand. Looking forward to your reply.
如果您愿意伸出援手,我将不胜感激。期待您的回复。
(江西省南昌市新建区二中2023-2024学年高三期中)假定你是李华,下周一你校将组织以“梦想”为主题的“英文诗歌创作”比赛。请你给外教老师Jim写一封求助信,请求批改相关语法和诗歌规则的内容。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
Our school will organize an “English Poetry Creation” competition with the theme of “Dream” for our students next Monday. Being the organizer of this competition, I have difficulty in formulating the rules and evaluating entries. I hope you can help me out of your busy schedule.
Because of your professionalism, you can not only take responsibility for modifying the grammar and poetry rules of entries, but also give me some suggestions. I believe with your help, this competition will be a complete success.
I would greatly appreciate it if I could get your help.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
七、感谢信
感谢信是用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。信件要写明感谢他人的理由,行文要感情真挚,措辞得体。
谋篇布局 首段 (问好、介绍自己)。说明事由(包括写信的背景),表达谢意
中段 感谢的具体原因及事情的大体经过
末段 再次感谢,并表达回报对方的愿望
I am writing to inform you that I ...我写信告诉您你,我……
I am grateful for what you have done for me.我很感激你为我所做的一切。
Without your patient guidance and continuous encouragement, I could not have made it.
如果没有你耐心的指导和不断的鼓励,我不可能成功。
If it had not been for your... I wouldn't have...=But for/Without your..., I wouldn’t have...
如果不是你的……,我就不会……
I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt/sincere/earnest thanks/gratitude to you for your...
在这封信中,我要对您的……表示衷心的/真诚的/诚挚的感谢。
Having been thoroughly impressed with...I have received, I would like to extend my sincere gratitude/thanks to you for your...我对收到的……留下了深刻的印象,谨对您的……向您表示衷心的感谢。
Thank you very much for the...you sent me. It’s one of the most wonderful...I have ever got.
非常感谢您给我寄来的……。这是我收到的最好的……之一。
I am writing to convey/extend my heartfelt gratitude for your kind help during my stay..., without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed myself.我写这封信是为了表达我衷心的感谢,感谢您在我逗留……期间给予我的帮助,没有您的帮助,我就不会玩得那么开心了。
It’s considerate of you to do...for me and I do appreciate it more than I can say.
您为我做……真是体贴,我真的非常感激你。
I’d like to grasp/take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for...and...
我想借此机会对您的……和……表示衷心的感谢。
I am writing to express my sincere thanks for...我写信来表达我对……的衷心感谢。
I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for...
对于……在此封信中我谨向您表示衷心的感谢。
With deepest gratitude I write this letter to express...怀着最深切的感激之情,我写信给你是为了表达……
I’mextremely grateful to you for...我非常感谢你……
On behalf of my whole family, I would like to extend my sincere gratitude.我谨代表我们全家表示诚挚的谢意。
It was nice/kind/thoughtful of you to...你……真是太好/善良/体贴了。
Thank you very much for your hospitality and... 非常感谢您的盛情款待以及……
It was your kind help that...是你的善意帮助……
Thanks again for your generous help.再次感谢你的慷慨相助。
I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.我真的不知该如何感谢你的帮助。
Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.
请接受我对你的衷心感谢,我永远不会忘记你的帮助。
Thanks again and I hope that I will have the opportunity to return/repay your kindness.
再次感谢,希望有机会报答您。
I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by...
如果我有机会通过……报答您的好意,我会非常高兴。
I would like to thank you from the bottom of my heart for all that you have done for me.
我要衷心感谢您为我所做的一切。
It was kind and generous of you to do this for me, and I appreciate it more than I can say.
您对我如此的友好和慷慨,我真是感激不尽。
I wish there were a better word than “thanks” to express my appreciation for your generous help.
任何语言都不能表达我对您慷慨帮助的真挚谢意。
(2024·山东日照统考一模)假定你是校英文报编辑李华,最近英文报开设了“英文诗歌创作”专栏,外教Andy提供了很大的支持和帮助。请你给他写一封感谢信。
内容包括:1.表达感谢;
2.回顾所提供的帮助。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Andy,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Andy,
I am writing to inform you that I won the first prize in the “English poetry writing”column started by the English newspaper. I am grateful for what you have done for me. Without your patient guidance and continuous encouragement, I could not have made it.
It was kind of you to set aside half an hour every day from your busy schedule to teach me how to write a poem. Besides, after I wrote the poem, you revised my poem and gave me some advice.
Thanks again for your generous help.
Yours,
Li Hua
八、演讲稿(正文部分)
演讲稿是发言稿的一种,是在较为隆重的仪式上和某些公众场所发表的讲话文稿。演讲的目的要明确,针对不同的听众,内容有所不同。语言和内容要有吸引力,句子要求短小精悍、铿锵有力,要求态度明确、立场鲜明,不可拖泥带水。
谋篇布局 首段 自我介绍,引入主题/话题、交代背景、提出问题
中段 分析问题,展开论述,提出解决方法或期待
末段 总结演讲,并表达感谢、展望或鼓动等
Hello, everyone! My name is... Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this presentation. I will talk about...大家好!我是……今天很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我演讲的内容是……
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! It is my great honour to share with you my opinions on...
女士们,先生们,大家上午好!很荣幸能和你们分享一下我对于……的看法。
I am more than excited to deliver a short speech here. First of all, I'd like to give you a warm welcome.
我很激动能在这里发表一个简短的演讲。首先,我要向大家表示热烈的欢迎。
Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make a presentation/speech. The topic of my speech...
我是……今天很高兴能有机会发表演讲。我演讲的主题是……。
It is a great honor for me/I feel greatly honored to deliver/address my speech here, whose topic is about...
我很荣幸在这里发表演讲,我演讲的主题是……。
It is my great honor to share with you my opinions on...很荣幸能和你们分享一下我关于……的看法。
I’m greatly honoured to speak here on behalf of my school. I’m going to talk about ...
很荣幸代表我校在此演讲。我要谈论的是……
I would like to concentrate on the problem of...我想重点谈谈/我想把重点集中在……问题。
I will divide this topic into three main aspects.我将分三个主要方面谈论这个主题。
With the rapid development of ..., ... is becoming more and more popular.
随着……的快速发展,在线学习越来越普及。
I will give some detailed information to support my idea as follows.
我将提供如下一些详细的信息来支持我的观点。
...Online learning is playing a very important role in ...……在……中发挥着非常重要的作用。
... indeed have brought us a lot of surprises and benefits.……确实给我们带来了很多惊喜和好处。
... can provide flexible ... opportunities.……可以提供灵活的……机会。
Based on the above statements/Altogether, we can come to/draw a conclusion that...
基于以上陈述/总之,我们可以得出一个结论:……。
I hope I have made myself understood.希望我说的大家都能理解。
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak today.
我从心底感谢你们今天给了我这个演讲的机会。
Thank you all for being such an attentive audience.谢谢大家用心听我演讲。
That’s all/That’s all I want to say about this point.. Thanks for/Thank you for your attention/listening.
我的演讲到此结束/关于这一点,我就讲这些。谢谢你们的关注/倾听(谢谢大家)。
(改编自2021全国乙卷)你校将举办英语演讲比赛,请你以“Be Smart Online Learners”为题写一篇发言稿参赛。
内容包括:1.分析优势与不足;
2.提出学习建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Be smart online learners
It’s a great honor for me to deliver a speech titled “Be smart online learners”. _________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
It’s a great honor for me to deliver a speech titled “Be smart online learners”. With the rapid development of science and technology, online learning is becoming more and more popular.
Online learning is playing a very important role in education. Online courses indeed have brought us a lot of surprises and benefits. Online learning can provide flexible learning opportunities. Therefore, we don’t have to worry about missing any important points. However, everything has its two sides. While learning online, it’s difficult for me to interact with teachers, which means some problems can’t be solved in time. Some students might spend a lot of time playing computer games.
As far as I am concerned, we should be strict with ourselves while learning online. Try our best to be smart online learners and take advantage of the convenience of online learning. Thank you for your listening.
九、倡议书
倡议书又称倡议信,是公开提倡某种做法,倡导某项活动,鼓动别人响应的一种信函文书。倡议书分为个人倡议书和集体倡议书两种。
谋篇布局 开头 倡议的目的、意义和有关背景(介绍现象或问题,具体原因)
主体 倡议的主要内容、具体措施和简述其社会意义
结尾 倡议者的决心或希望,做出总结或再次呼吁大家采取行动
注意:1.开头要简明扼要地;
2.主体部分最好用条款式分别列出,交代清楚,让响应者有所遵循,清楚要做什么和怎么去做,要写得明确、清晰;
3.结尾部分要写得热情洋溢,富于鼓舞性,最好能提出一个能概括全文主旨的响亮、有力的口号,引起有关方面的人士的关注,让响应者容易记住倡议的主要内容,并受到鼓舞及积极响应。
With ... approaching, I’m writing to appeal to all of you to ...随着……的临近,我写信呼吁大家……。
To arouse our awareness of ..., ... is to launch a campaign against ...
为了唤起我们……的意识,……将发起一场……的运动。
Nowadays, people in many big cities are always complaining about the ...如今,许多大城市的人们总在抱怨……。
As everybody can see ... more and more people are concerned about ...
正如大家所看到的那样,越来越多的人关注……
I’m writing to call on everyone to take an active part in building a beautiful ...
我写信是为了号召大家积极参与建设一个美丽的……。
I am here to call on/appeal to all of you to...我在这里号召/呼吁你们所有人……
Faced with the serious problem, we should take effective measures before things get worse.
面对这个严重的问题,在事情进一步恶化之前,我们必须采取有效的措施。
In order to ..., all of us had better do as follows.为了……,我们所有的人最好做到以下几点。
Additionally, it’s necessary that we form the habit of ... every day.另外,我们有必要养成每天……的习惯。
In order to ease the present serious situation, all students had better do as follows.
为了缓和目前严峻的情况,所有学生最好做如下工作。
I think it is high time that we should stop doing things like the followings.
我认为现在是我们应该停止做以下事情的时候了。
It’s everyone’s responsibility to ... If we can ..., we can make a big difference to ...
……人人有责。如果我们能……,就能对……产生巨大的影响。
Without doubt, it’s high time that immediate measures should be taken to change the present situation.
毫无疑问,现在是时候立即采取措施改变现状了。
We students can also do our part. Let’s take action right now!
我们学生也可以尽自己的一份力量。让我们现在就行动起来!
Let’s join our hands and take action immediately.让我们立即携手行动起来。
Let’s take action right now! I’mconvinced that our efforts will eventually pay off.
让我们现在就行动起来!我相信我们的努力最终会有回报的。
As long as we work together, we can make the impossible possible.只要我们共同努力,就能把不可能变为可能。
Every effort counts/matters/makes a difference. Let’s work together to make the world a better place.
每一次努力都很重要。让我们一起努力,让世界变得更美好。
Let’s make joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment.
让我们共同努力,创造一个绿色和谐的环境。
Everyone ought to have a positive attitude toward/to the campaign.人人都应该对这项运动持积极态度。
It’s high time that we took measures to change the situation.该是我们采取措施改变这种局面的时候了。
Please keep in mind that a small action can make a huge difference.
请记住,一个小小的行动可以带来巨大的影响。
Let’s take action right now/from now on! I’m convinced our efforts will eventually pay off.
让我们现在/从现在开始就采取行动!我相信我们的努力最终会有回报的。
(改编自2023届辽宁省沈阳市等3地高三下学期三模)2024年5月19日是濒危物种日(Endangered Species Day 2024),为提高保护野生动植物的意识,你校学生会向全校师生发布了一条征文信息,请你按要求写一篇短文。
内容包括:1.保护野生动植物的重要性;
2.你校的宣传活动;
3.你的建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
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【答案】
Dear fellow students,
With Endangered Species Day 2024 approaching, I’m writing to appeal to all of you to protect wild animals and plants.
As we all know, we human beings can not live without wildlife, because they play an important role in keeping the balance of nature. Protecting them is actually protecting ourselves. We can put up some relevant posters around the school and hand out some leaflets in the neighbourhood. What's more, we can also attend some lectures to have a better understanding of wildlife and their situation.
We students can also do our part. Let’s take action right now!
十、通知
通知是上级对下级、组织对成员布置工作、平行单位之间部署工作、传达事情或告诉公众某件事情等
时使用的一种应用文体,通常分为口头通知和书面通知两种。口头通知和书面通知都是宣布即将发生的事情及其具体内容,因而多用将来时,一般用祈使句来强调。通知的语言要简洁明了,条理清晰,准确无误,特别是时间概念很重要,必须写得十分明确,不容丝毫含糊。
(口头通知)
谋篇布局 开头 提醒听众的开场白
主体 通知内容:时间、地点、对象、事件、要求、注意事项等
结尾 再次提醒注意,强调/欢迎哪些对象参加,并加上礼貌语
(书面通知)
谋篇布局 标题 在通知的首行中央写上NOTICE(Notice)/Announcement
主体 通知内容:时间、地点、对象、事件、要求、注意事项等
结尾 再次提醒注意,强调/欢迎哪些对象参加
落款 发布通知的单位和发布通知的日期写在正文结束的右下角
May I have/call your attention, please 请大家注意一下,好吗?
Attention, please, everybody!请大家注意!
Be quiet, please! There is something important I have to tell you.请安静!我有件重要的事要告诉你们。
Attention, please! I have an announcement to make.请注意!我要宣布一个通知。
I have an announcement to make.我有一件事情要宣布。
I have something important to tell you.我有重要的事情要告知你们。
As ... is around the corner, we are going to hold ... It is intended to help ... have a better understanding of ...
值此……来临之际,为了帮助留学生更好地了解中国文化,我们将举办一场新年联欢会。
In order to enrich the life of ..., ... has arranged a special activity for next Sunday.
为了……的生活,……在下周日安排了一项特别活动。
To make our school life colorful and keep us strong and healthy, we have decided to hold ... in .../the Students’ Union is to organize a ping-pong competition.为了使我们的校园生活更丰富/身体强壮,我们决定在……举办……/学生会要举办一次乒乓球比赛。
In order to raise our awareness of traditional culture, a ... design competition themed “...” is organized by the our school.为了提高我们对传统文化的认识,我们学校组织了一个主题为“……”的……设计比赛。
We will hold this contest on the afternoon of ... in ....我们将于……下午在……举行这场比赛。
... will be invited to work as judges and the top three competitors will be given prizes.
……将被邀请担任评委,前三名选手将获得奖品。
It has been decided that we’ll pay a visit to...已经决定我们将参观……
The Students’ Union has decided that...学生会已决定……
We shall have a lecture on...我们将举行关于……的讲座。
In the lecture, Mr Li will tell us... I suppose every audience will...
在讲座中,李先生将告诉我们……我想每个观众都会……
As scheduled, the contest is to be held on June 30. You are supposed to get well prepared before the contest.
按计划,比赛将于6月30日举行。请在比赛前做好充分准备。
All the students in our school are expected to take part in the activity.我校所有学生都要参加这次活动。
Everyone is welcome/expected to attend/take part in it.欢迎/期待所有人参加。
Above all, it’s recommended that you should...Please sign up for the contest as soon as possible.
首先建议你应该……请尽快报名参加比赛。
If you would like to have a try, please sign up at the Students’ Union by the end of ...
如果你想试试,请在……底前到学生会报名。
... are supposed to sign up in ...……应该在……报名。
Please make full use of this chance to improve your level of ...请充分利用这次机会提高你的……水平。
All the students are welcome to submit their entries to Pioneer@ before ...
欢迎所有学生将参赛作品于……之前提交至Pioneer@。
The winning works will be announced on ..., in ...获奖作品将于……在……公布。
Please attend it on time and don't be late.请按时到场,不要迟到。
Please be there on time/Do be present on time and don’t be late.请/务必准时到场,不要迟到。
All teachers and students will be required to…全体师生务必要……
All the students are encouraged to participate in this activity actively.鼓励所有学生积极参加这次活动。
For more information, please contact the Students’ Union.想了解更多信息,请联系学生会。
Everyone is asked to be there on time/punctually.请准时出席。
Looking forward to your participation.期待您的参加。
That’s all. Thank you.就这些(到此结束),谢谢。
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(中原名校2022-2023学年高三上学期质量考评三)假如你是李华,校学生会准备组织乒乓球比赛。请你用英文写一则口头通知。
内容包括:1.比赛目的;
2.报名时间与地点;
3.注意事项。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Boys and girls,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
【答案】
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please I have something important to tell you. In order to make our school life colorful and keep us strong and healthy, the Students’ Union is to organize a ping-pong competition. We will hold this contest on the afternoon of April 5 in the school hall. Five PE teachers will be invited to work as judges and the top three competitors will be given prizes. If you would like to have a try, please sign up at the Students’ Union by the end of March. All the students are encouraged to participate in this activity actively. Please make full use of this chance to improve your level of table tennis.
Thank you!
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(2023-2024·高三上山东青岛期末)假定你是校英文报编辑,学校计划举行以欢度春节(Happy Spring Festival)为主题的海报设计大赛,请你写一份通知。
内容包括:1.大赛目的;
2.作品要求;
3.参赛方式等。
注意:1.词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Notice
In order to raise our awareness of traditional culture, a poster design competition themed “Happy Spring Festival” is organized by the our school.
To begin with, originality, by all means, is the first requirement. Plus, the poster you design should be inspiring and thought-provoking, clearly illustrating the significance of Spring Festival and the way of celebrating it. Moreover, a powerful slogan is also preferred, which will make your work more persuasive and impressive. All the students are welcome to submit their entries to Pioneer@ before 10th January, 2024. Only one work per individual is allowed. The winning works will be announced on March 2nd, 2024, in this newspaper.
Looking forward to your participation.
The Students’ Union
十一、新闻报道
新闻报道是记叙文的一种,其特点是以事实为依据,对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。其目的是为人们提供最新的信息。写作时要突出主题,选取具有典型意义和吸引力的事件。写作方法以叙述为主,适当描写和议论。
谋篇布局 标题 浓缩概括全文的中心,拟写吸引读者的标题
导语 概括叙述所报道的事情(时间、人物、地点、事件)
主体 详细叙述所报道事情的起因、经过和结果/结局
结语 对所报道的事情进行简要的总结或评论(人物感受、活动意义、活动评价)
cLast Sunday witnessed an extraordinary ... race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher in our school.上周日,举行了一场非同寻常的……赛跑,几乎引起了每一位师生的注意。
In order to celebrate..., a party was held.为了庆祝……,举行了一个晚会。
... witnessed/saw/held/organized a “...” activity from ... to ...从……至……,……举办/组织了“……”活动。
In order to/Aiming to enrich/encourage/enhance/raise ..., an activity.
为了丰富/鼓励/增强/提高……,举行/组织了一次活动。
Last week, we paid a visit to...上周,我们参观了……
Aiming to raise our awareness of protecting the environment, a tree-planting activity with the theme of...was organized by...on Saturday afternoon last week.为了提高我们的环保意识,上星期六下午……组织了一次主题为……的植树活动。
On the afternoon of May 25 an charity sale was held by the Students’ Union in our school playground.
……下午,学生会在我们学校操场上举行了慈善义卖。
It was reported/learned/announced that... 据报道/据悉/据宣布……
... took an active part in/actively participated in the activity/attended the party.
……积极参加了这次活动/出席了这次晚会。
There are a series of activities/labor tasks.有一系列的活动/劳动任务。
All the way ... were chatting, singing and ..., enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.
一路上……聊天,唱歌,……,享受着新鲜的空气和美丽的风景。
The beach was bathed in the golden sunshine. We jumped and sang with joy.
海滩沐浴在金色的阳光里。我们高兴地又跳又唱。
In order to organize the charity sale successfully, we made full preparations. Before the sale... When the day came... At the end of the activity, we...
为了成功地组织这次慈善义卖,我们做了充分的准备。在义卖前……活动当天……活动结束时,我们……
They watched a short video which... They also took part in varieties of activities to have a better understanding of...
他们看了一个……短片。他们还参加了各种各样的活动,以更好地了解……
The students selected from every class took part in the competition.从每个班选出的学生都参加了比赛。
At 2: 00 p. m., the students and teachers from different grades actively participated in it, some digging, some planting and others watering. During the activity...
下午两点,各年级师生积极参与,一些人挖土,一些人栽种,其他人浇水。在活动期间……
The activity provided a platform for ... to ....这次活动为……提供了一个……平台。
With ... active participation and ... enthusiastic support, the activity/the party was undoubtedly a success.
在……的积极参与和……的热情支持下,这次活动/聚会无疑是成功的。
This activity benefited ... a lot.这次活动使……受益匪浅。
Not only can this activity/event enrich ..., but also offer ... opportunities to ...
这项活动不仅可以丰富……,还为……提供……的机会。
Not only did it get ... close to nature and give ... relaxation from heavy ..., it also promoted the friendship among ... What a wonderful time!它不仅让……亲近大自然,让……从繁重的……得到放松,还促进了……之间的友谊。多么美好的时光啊!
The activity was highly spoken of, because not only did it provide a chance for us to exercise, but also made us more closer together.这项活动受到了高度评价,因为它不仅为我们提供了锻炼的机会,而且还拉近了我们(之间)的距离。
This visit not only broadened our horizons, but also aroused our interest in science.
这次参观不但开阔了我们的视野,而且激发了我们对科学的兴趣。
It is such a meaningful activity that students are all looking forward to the next charity sale.
这是一个非常有意义的活动,学生们都期待着下一次慈善义卖。
Looking at the lines of young trees, tired as they were, they smiled delightedly.
尽管很累,但是看着一排排的小树,他们开心地笑了。
(2020·新高考全国I卷)假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道。
内容包括:1.参加人员;
2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下;
3.活动反响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
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A Cross-Country Running Race
Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school.
The students selected from every class took part in the competition. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessarily help as well as encouragement. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.
The activity was highly spoken of, because not only did it provide chance for us to exercise, but also brought us closer together.
十二、说明文(介绍说明类)
说明文是客观地说明事物或阐明事理的一种文体,目的在于给人以知识,一般包括事物说明文和事理说明文两类。常考的话题有:传统文化(节日/习俗)、美食小吃、旅游景点、虚拟家乡、公共场所布局等的说明或介绍。
写作路径 首段 引出被说明的对象
中段 按题干要求分层说明
末段 归纳主题,阐述意义
Knowing that you take a great fancy to Chinese culture, especially the ..., I would like to introduce it to you.
知道你非常喜欢中国文化,尤其是……节(日),我来给你介绍。
The ... Festival is one of the most important festivals for/to Chinese people.
……是中国人最重要的节日之一。
There are many traditional festivals in China, but I like the ... Festival most, because it means ...
中国有许多传统节日,但我最喜欢……节,因为它意味着……。
Spring Festival, known as the Chinese New Year, is the most important holiday in China.
春节,即中国的新年,是中国最重要的节假日。
The Spring Festival is celebrated on/falls on the first day of the lunar New Year.春节在农历新年的第一天。
From late January to early February, Chinese people are busy preparing for the New Year.
从一月末到二月初人们忙着为新年做准备。
To those who live far away from their home, this festival is also a family reunion occasion.
对那些远离家乡的人们,春节是一个合家团聚的时刻。
While celebrating the Spring Festival, families can not only reunite but also experience and enjoy traditional Chinese culture. That’s why I like it best.在庆祝春节的同时,一家人不仅可以团聚,还可以体验和享受中国传统文化。这就是为什么我最喜欢它的原因。
As one of the Chinese traditional festivals, the Mid-Autumn Festival, which falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar, has been enjoying great popularity in our country.作为中国传统节日之一,中秋节适逢农历八月十五,在我们国家非常受欢迎。
As one of the most significant festivals in China, the Lantern Festival falls/is on the 15th of the first lunar month.作为中国最重要的节日之一,元宵节在农历正月十五。
China’s traditional Qingming Festival dates back to the Zhou Dynasty, which usually falls on April 4, 5 and 6 in the Gregorian calendar each year, with a history of more than 2,500 years.
中国传统的清明节可以追溯到周朝,通常在每年公历的4月4日、5日和6日举行,已有2500多年的历史。
People celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival in honor of Qu Yuan, the great poet of ancient China.
人们庆祝端午节是为了纪念我国古代伟大的诗人——屈原。
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the eighth month in Chinese lunar calendar.
中秋节在中国农历八月十五。
The Double Ninth Festival falls on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month.重阳节在农历九月初九。
I’m glad to learn that you are coming to my hometown, I would like to introduce it to you.
听说你要来我的家乡,我很高兴。我来给你介绍。
... is one of the ... famous historical and cultural cities in China and one of the ... scenic spots as well.
是中国……个历史文化名城之一,也是……个风景名胜区之一。
There are many scenic spots in my hometown, such as ...我的家乡有很多景点,比如……
Every year the picturesque scenery attracts lots of visitors from home and abroad.
这种如画的风景每年吸引了国内外很多游客。
The average temperature ... is about 22 centigrade. The rainy season is between May and July.
……的平均气温约为22摄氏度。雨季在5月至7月之间。
Surrounded by mountains on three sides, the small village faces a clear river on the east.
这个小村庄三面环山,东临一条清澈的河流。
It is nestled in the mountains, with lush green hills and crystal-clear streams.
它坐落在群山之中,有郁郁葱葱的青山和清澈见底的溪流。
The town is famous for its ancient temples, some dating back hundreds of years. These temples are not only architecturally unique but are also a symbol of our rich cultural heritage.该镇以其古老的寺庙而闻名,有些寺庙可以追溯到数百年前。这些寺庙不仅在建筑上独树一帜,而且是我们丰富文化遗产的象征。
In ..., you are sure to have a good taste of ...在……,你一定会品尝到……
In addition, the local cuisine is a must-try, with its fresh and unique flavors.
此外,当地美食也是必尝之选,因为它有着新鲜独特的风味。
From here, you can appreciate breathtaking views of the sunrise and sunset, as well as the starry night skies.
从这里,你可以欣赏到日出和日落的壮丽景色,以及星空。
The city of ..., the capital of ..., is located/situated ... with a long history of about ... years. It has a population of ... million, covering an area of ... square kilometers.……市是……的首府,位于……,有着大约……年的悠久历史。人口……万,面积……平方公里。
It is rich in natural resources such as coal and gold and has mild weather.
它拥有丰富的自然资源,如煤炭和黄金,气候温和。
With the rapid development of economy, education and people’s livelihood have been greatly improved.
随着经济的快速发展,教育和民生得到了极大改善。
It is a place that is truly magical and one that I am proud to call my home.
这是一个真正神奇的地方,我很自豪能称之为我的家。
Our school, which takes up 63 thousand square metres, is very large in size.
我们学校占地6.3万平方米,规模很大。
All the buildings are surrounded by trees and flowers. It is really a beautiful school/place.
所有的建筑物都被花草树木包围着。这确实是一所美丽的学校/一处美丽的地方。
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(2023-2024·高三下陕西渭南开学考)你校正在举办以“用英语讲好中国故事”为主题的英语征文大赛,请以我最喜欢的中国传统节日为题,写一篇短文参赛。
内容包括:1.最喜欢的节日;
2.节日简介;
3. 喜欢的原因。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The Traditional Chinese Festival I Like Best
There are many tradition festivals in China. ____________________________________________________
专题4.1 写作第一节之题型剖析
-2024年新高考英语二轮复习重难点突破
年份 卷别 题干主要内容
2023 新高考I、II卷 假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习 口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件。 内容包括:1.说明问题;2.提出建议。
全国甲卷 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国 历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括:1.人物简介及事迹;2. 意义或启示。
全国乙卷 请以向学校英文报投稿的方式,用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中 获得的体验和感受。
2022 新高考I、II卷 假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline 写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。 内容包括:1.节目介绍;2.访谈的时间和话题。
全国甲卷 你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文 投稿。 内容包括:1.海洋的重要性;2.保护海洋的倡议。
全国乙卷 学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括:1.学习活动状况描述;2.简单评论;3.你的建议。
2021 新高考I、II卷 你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括:1.读报的经历;2.喜爱的栏目;3.期望和祝福。
全国甲卷 假定你是李华,你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英语网站 上展示,请你给外国朋友Chris写封信,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引 外国朋友。 内容如下:1.阐明写信事由;2.征求建议;3.表达感谢。
全国乙卷 你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛。 内容包括:1.分析优势与不足;2.提出学习建议。
根据上述题干主要内容我们作出如下分类统计:
年份 卷别 文体 主题 题干形式
2023 新高考I、II卷 建议信(邮件) 对外教的口语练习分组提出建议 文字提纲
全国甲卷 短文投稿 用英文介绍一位中国历史人物 文字提纲
全国乙卷 短文投稿 分享自己在假期中学到的新技能 文字提纲
2022 新高考I、II卷 邀请信(邮件) 邀请外教参加电台访谈 文字提纲
全国甲卷 短文投稿 世界海洋日 文字提纲
全国乙卷 短文投稿 Learning English Beyond the Classroom 文字提纲+图表
2021 新高考I、II卷 短文投稿 庆祝创刊十周年 文字提纲
全国甲卷 咨询信(邮件) 询问哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人 文字提纲
全国乙卷 发言稿 Be smart online learners 文字提纲
根据上表,近三年全国高考九套试卷写作题特点概述如下:
1.书信体为三题,非书信体为六题,其中发言稿(又可称之为演讲稿)为一题,其余五题都是“用于投稿的短文”;
2.从广义上说,九套试卷写作题的体裁都是应用文。而从狭义上说,结合题干所给出的主要内容看,体
裁有说明、记叙(包括夹叙夹议)、议论文的元素或者兼而有之(如:2022全国乙卷的写作有记叙、有说明、还有议论);
3.除了2022全国乙卷是以“文字提纲+图表”的命题形式出题外,其余都是“文字提纲”式。以上两种题干都是以信息块(包括文字或文字+图表)的形式呈现材料,用简单笼统的文字信息或文字+图表信息给出写作内容和要求。它要求考生根据题干所给出的信息块,首先确定中心话题,然后紧紧围绕中心话题、适当增加细节展开写作,表达出题干所要求表达的全部意思。
由以上分析我们可以得出如下启示:在根据题干谋划具体表达内容的基础上,考生既要熟悉各类应用文的套句,还要借用说明、记叙(包括夹叙夹议)以及议论文的某些写作方法。
一、审读题干 把握重点
仔细审读题干:考生需要认真审读题干中的文字,包括图画、图表所表达或所反映的信息,确保审读题干做到位;把握以下重点:明确写作主题、写作要求、写作体裁以及确定谋篇布局。
二、谋划要点 扩展成句
谋划要点有两种情况:一是从题干中直接提炼要点,适当增加具体细节;二是根据题干中的“内容包括(笼统的要点)”中的几点内容进行充分的挖掘,通过合理的设想,扩充或补充细节将笼统的要点具体化(扩展成句),然后将具体化的要点表达出来。表达时,还要注意用好相关应用文的套句。
三、连句成篇 规范上卡
将扩展而成的句子衔接起来,谋篇布局形成段落式(一般为三段式)的短文。要注意使用一些表示并列、递进、让步、转折、因果等意义的关联词语,以增强文章的连贯性和流畅性。 有意识地将一些“低级词汇”转换成“高级词汇”,将一些“简单结构”转换成“高级结构”,以求语言表达的闪亮。最后规范上卡,要求达到书写倩丽,搏人眼球的高度。
【写作过程演示】
一、审读题干 把握重点
审读题干:审读文字和图表所给的信息。
把握重点:
体裁为说明文+议论文;
话题为课外学习英语的现状;
写作要求:学习活动状况描述;简单评论;你的建议。字数:100字左右(短文的题目和首句提示语
已写好);
谋篇布局:总体描述数据所反映的基本事实;陈述图表所显示的数据;就数据反映的特点进行简单评论,并提出自己的建议。
二、提炼要点 扩展成句
1.提炼要点
顺着首句提示语引出话题(课堂之外学生学习英语的方式多元化);
陈述图表所显示的数据(18%的学生读英语书籍;65%的学生听英语歌曲;50%的学生看英语电影;12%的学生浏览英语学习网站);
分析中学生课外学习英语的方式对数据发表评论;对中学生在课外学习英语的方式提出建议。
2.扩展成句
①如今,随着智能手机和电脑的日益普及,越来越多的学生在课堂之外以他们喜欢的各种方式
学习英语。
Nowadays, with the popularity of smartphones and computers growing, an increasing number of students learn English beyond the classroom in various ways they are fond of.
②如上述条状图所示,大约65%的学生喜欢听英语歌曲,而50%的学生选择看英语电影。
As the above bar conveys, there are roughly 65% of the students preferring to listen to English songs while 50% of the students choose to watch English movies.
③阅读英语书籍的学生比例只有18%,其次为通过英语学习网站学习英语的学生。
The percentage of students reading English books is only 18%, followed by 12% who study English via English learning websites.
④结果表明,大多数学生宁愿以更有趣的方式学习英语。
The results suggest that most students would rather study English in a more entertaining way.
⑤我们学生也应该考虑英语书籍和网站,从而为英语打下坚实的基础。
We students should also take English books and websites into consideration, thus laying a solid foundation for English.
三、连句成篇 规范上卡
【答案】
一、邀请信
邀请信是写信人对收信人的一种盛情邀约,是邀请收信人参加某项活动、某个社团组织的书信。在写作时,要注意邀请信的交际性,语气要真挚,避免带有不礼貌或强人所难的字眼。谋篇布局如下:
谋篇布局 首段 (介绍自己),写信背景:简要说明活动;写信目的:邀请对方
中段 把要点进行细化增加具体的细节内容(活动的具体时间与地点,活动主题以及活动的意义等);必要时强调受邀人参加的理由
末段 期待对方接受邀请,期待对方尽快回复(并表示感谢)
I’m Li Hua from...School, the president of the Students’ Union. I am writing to invite you to...
我是来自……学校的李华,学生会主席。我写信邀请您……。
On behalf of ..., I am writing to invite you to be our gues.我代表……写信邀请您来作客。
It is a great privilege/honor for me to invite you to participate in...to be held in...on...
我很荣幸邀请您参加……于……在……举行的……。
I feel it a great honor on behalf of...to invite you to participate in...我很荣幸代表……邀请您参加……
A...club has been formed recently in our school. Learning you are enthusiastic about..., I’m writing to invite you to join it.我们学校最近成立了一个……俱乐部。知道您喜欢……,我写信邀请您加入俱乐部。
Informed of the exciting news that a party is to be held in..., I can’t wait to invite you to participate in it.
听到一场派对将在……举行这个令人激动的消息,我迫不及待想邀请你来参加。
It’s a pity that you have to go back to America soon. So a farewell party for you will be held in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come at 6: 00 p.m. 很遗憾你不久就要回美国了。所以,这周六晚在阳光俱乐部我们会为你举行一场欢送会。你能在下午六点来吗?
The English speech contest will be held in our school on August 6.英语演讲比赛将于8月6日在我校举行。
It will begin at 2: 00 p.m. and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.比赛将于下午两点开始,持续两个小时,在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
... has gained increasing popularity among ... ……在学生中越来越受欢迎。
... is intended to cover topics ranging from music, ... to ... ……旨在涵盖从……到……等主题。
This week we’d like to invite you to join ... and share with us some tips on how to ...
本周,我们想邀请您加入……,并与我们分享一些如何……的技巧。
We will start at 8: 00 a.m. and arrive there at 9: 00.我们将会在上午八点出发,九点到达那里。
By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 in front of your apartment and it will take you directly to the club.
顺便说一下,你可以乘坐你所住公寓前的322路公交车,它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
I wonder if you can come...我想知道您是否能来……。
How would you like to join us in... 您愿意跟我们一起加入/参加……吗?
You can reach me through my phone number...at your convenience.
您可以在您方便的时候打我的电话,号码是……
If you are interested in it, please let me know and I’ll send you more information about...
如果您对此感兴趣,请告诉我,我会给您发送更多有关……的信息。
Would you please drop me a line to let me know if you can come to...
您能给我写封信让我知道你是否能来……?
I would feel much honored if you could come.如果您能来,我将深感荣幸。
I would be looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.我非常高兴地期待着您的光临。
I’d appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.如果您能接受我的邀请,我将不胜感激。
Your participation will surely make the activity fruitful and meaningful. I would highly appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.
你的参与一定会使活动富有成效且有意义。如果您能尽早确认您的参与,我将不胜感激!
Looking forward to your reply.期待您的回复。
(2022新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。
内容包括:1.节目介绍; 
2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意:写作词数应为80左右。
Dear Caroline,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
二、建议信
建议信是向对方提出自己的合理建议的信件。建议信一般分为三类:一是给你熟悉的人就有关方面主动提供建议;二是对别人写信向你求助的回复,就其遇到的某个问题提出看法、建议等;三是写给某个组织或机构,就改进服务等方面提出建议或忠告。建议信要尽量简洁明确,理由充足,具有合理性和说服性。
谋篇布局 首段 介绍自己,写信目的或者意图
中段 提出具体建议,并阐述理由
末段 希望自己的建议被采纳,并表达愿望或者期盼对方回复
I am writing to express my concern about ...我写信是为了表达我对……的担忧。
I have received your letter saying you plan to visit China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful for you.
我已经收到了你的来信,信上说你打算下个月来中国参观十天。可能下面的建议会对你有所帮助。
I’m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in with the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.
很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活的建议。下面是我的一些建议。
I’m very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在,关于如何在高中学好英语,我写信给你一些建议。
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice suggestions on/about …
很高兴收到你的来信,征求我对……的建议。
I am writing to express my views /share with you some suggestions concerning...
我写信是想表达/与你分享我对……的看法/建议。
It is my pleasure/I’m glad to offer you some advice/suggestions only for your reference.
我很高兴给您提一些建议,仅供参考。
You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I will try to make some constructive suggestions.
你就……向我寻求建议,我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。
I have learned that you have some trouble in…and I would like to offer you the following tips.
我知道你在……方面有困难,因此我想给你提如下一些建议。
I’m so sorry/I feel so sorry to hear that you are having trouble… Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.很遗憾听说你在……方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
My suggestions are as follows./Here are a few suggestions./The following are my suggestions.我的建议如下。
In my opinion, you are supposed to...在我看来,你应该……
I’d like to suggest that.../I would like to make a recommendation that...我想建议……
If I were you, I would...如果我是你,我会……
You’d better do.../not do...你最好做/最好不做……
It’s necessary for you to...你有必要……
Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
既然你如此渴望提高英语,这会是一个很好的机会。
This will not only enhance ... effectiveness but also promote ... among students.
这不仅可以增加……的效果,还可以促进学生之间的……。
I believe it would be beneficial if you could follow my suggestions.
我相信如果你能听从我的建议,那将是非常有益的。
I’m sure you can make a wise decision.我相信你会做出明智的决定。
I will be glad/would appreciate it if you will/could take my advice/suggestions into consideration.
如果你能考虑我的建议我将非常高兴/感激。
I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.如果这方面有所改善我会很开心的。
I’m looking forward to receiving your good news.我期待着收到你的好消息。
Hope my advice can be of some help. If there is anything else I could do, please let me know.
希望我的建议能有所帮助。如果还有什么我能做的,请告诉我。
I hope these suggestions will be of use/useful/helpful to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way.
我希望这些建议会对你有用/有帮助。记住:有志者事竟成。
I believe that you will take my suggestions into consideration.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。
(2023新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件。
内容包括:1.说明问题;
2.提出建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ___________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
三、咨询信
咨询信是写信人就自己不太了解或不理解的事情、问题,向有关部门、专家或熟悉该情况的朋友寻求解答时所使用的一种书信。
谋篇布局 首段 自我介绍以表明自己的身份,叙述相关咨询背景(陈述写信目的)
中段 陈述咨询的具体内容
末段 表达强烈获取信息的愿望和感谢(必要时还要提供联系方式)
Word came that ... is going to hold ... whose topic is related to ...有消息说我们……要开……,主题是关于……的。
Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.
因为这次活动将在英文网站上发布,我真诚地希望你能给我一些建议。
I am writing to inquire about some relevant information.我写信是想询问一些相关的信息/细节。
I am writing to ask you for some details regarding/concerning it.我写信是想向您询问一些有关这方面的细节。
I am writing to inquire if it is possible for you to provide me with some information, regarding/concerning...
我写信来是想询问您是否可以提供一些关于……的信息。
I am writing to ask you some relevant information about...to be held next week.
我写信是想问你一些关于下周将举行的……的相关信息。
I’d like to know more information about...我想知道更多关于……的信息。
Would you mind giving some detailed information about... 你介意提供一些有关……详细的信息吗
I am not familiar with ..., so I would like to know about...我对……不熟悉,所以我想了解……的相关情况。
I am writing to ask for some information about the preparation of...我写信咨询你一些关于准备……的信息。
The following is my confusion.以下是我的困惑。
Since it is my first time to ..., I would like to know the details about...
由于这是我第一次……,我想知道的是关于……的细节
Moreover/Then/Besides/What’s more, I would like to...此外,我们想要……
I would be much appreciated if you can furnish me with the above information and you can contact me via...
如果您能向我提供上述信息,并通过……与我联系,我将不胜感激。
I would appreciate it very much if you could let me know the information above in detail. I’m looking forward to your early reply.如果您能让我详细了解上述信息,我将不胜感激。我期待着您的早日答复。
If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible.如果可能的话,您可以尽快回复我。
I will take your advice into consideration. I really appreciate your help.
我会考虑你的建议。我真的很感谢您的帮助。
(2021全国甲卷)假定你是李华,你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英语网站上展示,请你给外国朋友Chris写封信,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友。
内容如下:1.阐明写信事由;
2.征求建议;
3.表达感谢。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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四、申请信
申请信内容有求职、留学、志愿者、报考和参加某种活动等。申请的目的是让对方了解自己的能力、经验和成就,其中个人情况介绍(学业与特长、能力与经验、品德与爱好等)是申请信的核心内容,要尽可能说明申请人的优势,以便留下良好印象。
谋篇布局 首段 (自我介绍)。简要说明获得相关信息的来源,并说明想获得此次机会或 岗位
中段 突出表达自己的长处或优势,具体说明能胜任某个岗位或想获得此次机会的理由(介绍自己的学历或工作经历,本人的个性,已经取得的成绩,并说明为何对这一岗位或机会感兴趣等
末段 感谢对方、请求对方尽快答复并给予机会。视具体情况还可加上自己的感谢和期望乃至获准后的打算以及自己的联系方式等
Knowing that ... is looking for an editor responsible for the column “...”.
得知……正在招聘一位负责“……”专栏的编辑。
I’m a student who is studying in...School.我是一位在……学校学习的学生。
I graduated from...three years ago.我三年前从……毕业。
I won the first prize in...Competition.我曾经获得过……比赛的一等奖。
I am writing to apply for the job/position.我写信的目的是申请这个工作/职位。
I’mglad to learn that you want a .../I am really delighted to learn that a/an...is required, and I feel this position is specially tailored to me.我很高兴得知(你们)需要一名……,我觉得这个职位是专门为我量身定做的。
I’m interested in the post which you advertised in yesterday’s...Daily.
我对你们昨天在《……日报》上刊登的职位广告很感兴趣。
I am writing to apply for... advertised in... 我写信申请刊登在……上的……
I’m quite interested in this job.我对这个工作非常感兴趣。
I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for...
我认为我是……的合格人选,所以我写信推荐自己。
I have been working in... since my graduation, and I have gained rich experience in this field.
毕业后我一直在……工作,积累了该领域丰富的经验。
As an outgoing... I get along well with all my ... and am always ready to help others.
作为一名外向的……我和……相处融洽且总是乐于助人。
My advantage first lies in the fact that...我的优势首先在于……。
I have a good command of English, especially written English.我的英语掌握得很好,尤其是书面语。
I have taken the part-time job as ..., from which I have gained relevant experience.
我还兼职做过……,从中我获得了相关的经验。
I have a rich knowledge of traditional Chinese culture.我对中国传统文化有着丰富的了解。
I’m good at.../I do well in.../I master... well..., especially…我很擅长……/我精通……,尤其是……
I major in English/Computer/Chinese Medicine... so I have a good command of...
我所学专业是英语/计算机/中医……所以我很精通……
I have a good knowledge of/have a good command of...我对……掌握得很好/我很了解……。
I am well acquainted with/am familiar with…我对……很熟悉。
I am majoring in.../My major is...我的专业是…/我的专业是……。
I am experienced in...我在……方面很有经验。
I’ll be fit for the job/post/position.我会胜任这项工作的/这个职位/岗位。
I think I’m qualified for it.我认为我能胜任这项工作。
I think that I’mqualified for the position.我认为我能胜任这个职位。
I believe that both my education and experience are directly related to your requirements.
我相信我的教育和经验与您的要求直接相关。
I think I’m suited for the job. If you can let me have this chance I will try my best to do it well.
我认为我适合这份工作。如果您能给我这个机会,我会尽力去做的好
Once I am hired, I will work hard for...一旦我被录用,我将为……努力工作。
I’msure I can do the job well if I get the position.如果我得到这个职位,我确信我能做好。
I would appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.如果你能给我这个机会,我将不胜感激。
Thanks for considering my application and I am looking forward to your early reply.
感谢您考虑我的申请,并期待着您早日回复。
Thanks for considering my application and I am looking forward to your early reply.
谢谢您考虑我的申请,期待您的早日回复。
I would really appreciate it if I could be given the precious chance. I’m looking forward to your reply.
如果能给我这个宝贵的机会,我将不胜感激。我期待着你的答复。
Your early response will be much appreciated.如您能尽快回复,我将不胜感激。
If you need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me at any time at...
如果您需要了解更多关于我的信息,请随时与我联系。
(2023届安徽省阜阳市高三3月质量检测)假定你是李华,你校的英语报正在校内招募“中国传统文化”专栏的编辑。请你写封电子邮件申请。
内容包括:1.表明意图;
2.自身优势;
3.表达期望。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Dear Sir or Madam,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
五、道歉信
道歉信通常是写信人因自己的不当言行、过失给他人带来麻烦、不便、损失或造成伤害并在自己发觉或他人指出的情况下,向对方表示歉意时所写的信件。写好道歉信的关键在于措辞要朴实委婉,语气要诚恳真挚,解释要详细明了。
谋篇布局 首段 表明写信的意图,对某事表示歉意
中段 说明道歉的具体原因(事情的来龙去脉)
末段 再次表明歉意,请求对方谅解,并提出某些补救措施
注意:如果你根本就不知道对方是谁,就要表明自己的身份、留下联系方式。请看下例:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China studying at Windmill College. I’m truly sorry that my bike scratched your car when I was riding to school this morning. I understand it will certainly put you in a very bad mood. I sincerely apologize for what I did and promise I will cover all the relevant costs. As school will start soon, I can’t wait on the scene for you. Please contact me at 589367 or linux@windmilloo.org. Many apologies again for all the inconvenience I have caused you.
Best regards!
Li Hua
I’m writing to express my sincere apology for the accidental damage to ...
我写信是为了对……的意外损坏表示诚挚的歉意。
I am extremely sorry that ... I’m writing to tell you the reason for it.非常抱歉……我现在写信告诉你原因。
I would like to express my deepest apology for not being able to...因为不能……我现在写信表达我深切的歉意。
I am writing this letter to apologize to you for...我现在写信是为了表达我……的歉意。
I would like to give you my apology for...我想……向你道歉。
I hope that this does not cause you too much inconvenience.我希望这不会给你造成太多不便。
I am writing this letter to express my regret.../to apologize for...我写这封信是想表达我的遗憾……/为……道歉。
I am writing you this letter to show my deep regret.我写这封信是为了表示我深深的歉意。
I must apologize about(not)doing sth. ...对于做了/没做……,我必须道歉。
Please accept my heartfelt apology.请接受我衷心的道歉。
Knowing how precious ... is to you, I’m terribly sorry for any inconvenience caused.
我知道……对你来说是多么珍贵,因此给你带来的不便,我深表歉意。
Due to... I have to...因为……我必须……
To make up for my fault, could you please... If so, I promise...
为了弥补我的过失,是否可以请你……?如果可以,我保证……
Would it be convenient for you... ……对你来说方便吗?
I would appreciate it if you allow me to...如果你允许我……,我会不胜感谢。
I expect to make it up to you by replacing ... with ...我希望把……换成……来补偿你。
Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience I caused.我对于我所造成的任何不便再次道歉。
I really hope that you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
希望你能够接受我的道歉并理解我的处境。
I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now and to assure you that it will not happen again.
我想让你知道我现在感觉多么遗憾,并且我保证这种情况以后不会再发生。
Please accept my sincere apology for...请接受我对于……的真诚道歉。
Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused/that has caused by me.对于所造成的任何不便我再次道歉。
I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.
我真诚的希望你能够站在我的位置想一想,并且接受我的道歉。
I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now.我想让你知道我现在感觉多么的遗憾。
I am sorry that I can’t...but trust that you will be able to understand.很抱歉我不能……,但我相信,你会理解的。
I hope this unfortunate incident won’t affect our friendship.我希望这次不幸的事件不会影响我们的友谊。
I hope the adjustment won’t put you into much more trouble.我希望这次调整不会给你带来更多的麻烦。
(2024上·山东菏泽高三统考期末)假定你是李华,留学生朋友Peter借给你一本英文名著《飘》(Gone with the Wind),可是你不小心损坏了。请你给他写封邮件。
内容包括:1.表示道歉;
2.解释损坏原因;
3.提出补救办法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
六、求助信
求助信是当个人遇到自己无法解决的问题或者无法克服的困难时向收信人寻求帮助,希望收信人就提
出的问题提供帮助或给出针对性的解决方法的信件。求助信要简明扼要,语气一定要委婉、真诚。
谋篇布局 首段 (问好、介绍自己)。说明事由,提出求助
中段 求助的内容以及遇到的具体困难
末段 表达期待、表达感谢
... will organize an “...” competition with the theme of “...” for ... next Monday.
下周一,……将为……组织一场以“……”为主题的“……”比赛。
Being the organizer of this competition, I have difficulty/trouble in ..., which bothers me a lot. So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.作为这次比赛的组织者,我在……的方面有困难,这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向您求助。
Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you to do me a favour.面对诸多的困难,我不得不求您帮助我。
I’m writing to ask for/seek for your help/ask you for your help.我写信是为了寻求您的帮助。
I’m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor/give me a hand.我写信希望您能给我帮助。
I’m sorry to bother you, but I have some difficulties here and need your help.
很抱歉打扰您,但我有些困难需要得到您的帮助。
I’m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to give me a hand with my English study.
我写信希望你能帮助我学习英语。
I’m writing in the hope of your assistance in preparing for...我写信是希望您能帮我为即将到来的……做准备。
I have trouble in getting along well with my classmates.我和同学们相处得不好。
I find it extremely hard for me to arrange and make good use of my everyday time for valuable things.
我发现我很难安排好每天的时间去做有价值的事情。
I find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been annoying me for a long time.
我发现自己进步得不像以前那么快了,这让我苦恼了很长时间。
I can’t be passionate and energetic all day long so as to make every moment meaningful and splendid.
我不能整天激情满怀、精力充沛去让每一刻都精彩、富有意义。
I would greatly appreciate it if I could get your help.如果能得到你的帮助,我将不胜感激。
I believe with your help, this competition will be a complete success.
我相信在你的帮助下,这次比赛一定会取得圆满成功。
I would be grateful if you could lend me a helping hand.如果你能帮我一把,我将不胜感激。
Your professional advice would be of great help to me. Looking forward to your early reply.
你的专业建议对我会有很大的帮助。期待您早日回复。
I’msure with your help I can make great progress. 我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。
I’d appreciate it if you'd like to offer me a helping hand. Looking forward to your reply.
如果您愿意伸出援手,我将不胜感激。期待您的回复。
(江西省南昌市新建区二中2023-2024学年高三期中)假定你是李华,下周一你校将组织以“梦想”为主题的“英文诗歌创作”比赛。请你给外教老师Jim写一封求助信,请求批改相关语法和诗歌规则的内容。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
七、感谢信
感谢信是用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。信件要写明感谢他人的理由,行文要感情真挚,措辞得体。
谋篇布局 首段 (问好、介绍自己)。说明事由(包括写信的背景),表达谢意
中段 感谢的具体原因及事情的大体经过
末段 再次感谢,并表达回报对方的愿望
I am writing to inform you that I ...我写信告诉您你,我……
I am grateful for what you have done for me.我很感激你为我所做的一切。
Without your patient guidance and continuous encouragement, I could not have made it.
如果没有你耐心的指导和不断的鼓励,我不可能成功。
If it had not been for your... I wouldn't have...=But for/Without your..., I wouldn’t have...
如果不是你的……,我就不会……
I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt/sincere/earnest thanks/gratitude to you for your...
在这封信中,我要对您的……表示衷心的/真诚的/诚挚的感谢。
Having been thoroughly impressed with...I have received, I would like to extend my sincere gratitude/thanks to you for your...我对收到的……留下了深刻的印象,谨对您的……向您表示衷心的感谢。
Thank you very much for the...you sent me. It’s one of the most wonderful...I have ever got.
非常感谢您给我寄来的……。这是我收到的最好的……之一。
I am writing to convey/extend my heartfelt gratitude for your kind help during my stay..., without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed myself.我写这封信是为了表达我衷心的感谢,感谢您在我逗留……期间给予我的帮助,没有您的帮助,我就不会玩得那么开心了。
It’s considerate of you to do...for me and I do appreciate it more than I can say.
您为我做……真是体贴,我真的非常感激你。
I’d like to grasp/take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for...and...
我想借此机会对您的……和……表示衷心的感谢。
I am writing to express my sincere thanks for...我写信来表达我对……的衷心感谢。
I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for...
对于……在此封信中我谨向您表示衷心的感谢。
With deepest gratitude I write this letter to express...怀着最深切的感激之情,我写信给你是为了表达……
I’mextremely grateful to you for...我非常感谢你……
On behalf of my whole family, I would like to extend my sincere gratitude.我谨代表我们全家表示诚挚的谢意。
It was nice/kind/thoughtful of you to...你……真是太好/善良/体贴了。
Thank you very much for your hospitality and... 非常感谢您的盛情款待以及……
It was your kind help that...是你的善意帮助……
Thanks again for your generous help.再次感谢你的慷慨相助。
I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.我真的不知该如何感谢你的帮助。
Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.
请接受我对你的衷心感谢,我永远不会忘记你的帮助。
Thanks again and I hope that I will have the opportunity to return/repay your kindness.
再次感谢,希望有机会报答您。
I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by...
如果我有机会通过……报答您的好意,我会非常高兴。
I would like to thank you from the bottom of my heart for all that you have done for me.
我要衷心感谢您为我所做的一切。
It was kind and generous of you to do this for me, and I appreciate it more than I can say.
您对我如此的友好和慷慨,我真是感激不尽。
I wish there were a better word than “thanks” to express my appreciation for your generous help.
任何语言都不能表达我对您慷慨帮助的真挚谢意。
(2024·山东日照统考一模)假定你是校英文报编辑李华,最近英文报开设了“英文诗歌创作”专栏,外教Andy提供了很大的支持和帮助。请你给他写一封感谢信。
内容包括:1.表达感谢;
2.回顾所提供的帮助。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Andy,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
八、演讲稿(正文部分)
演讲稿是发言稿的一种,是在较为隆重的仪式上和某些公众场所发表的讲话文稿。演讲的目的要明确,针对不同的听众,内容有所不同。语言和内容要有吸引力,句子要求短小精悍、铿锵有力,要求态度明确、立场鲜明,不可拖泥带水。
谋篇布局 首段 自我介绍,引入主题/话题、交代背景、提出问题
中段 分析问题,展开论述,提出解决方法或期待
末段 总结演讲,并表达感谢、展望或鼓动等
Hello, everyone! My name is... Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this presentation. I will talk about...大家好!我是……今天很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我演讲的内容是……
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! It is my great honour to share with you my opinions on...
女士们,先生们,大家上午好!很荣幸能和你们分享一下我对于……的看法。
I am more than excited to deliver a short speech here. First of all, I'd like to give you a warm welcome.
我很激动能在这里发表一个简短的演讲。首先,我要向大家表示热烈的欢迎。
Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make a presentation/speech. The topic of my speech...
我是……今天很高兴能有机会发表演讲。我演讲的主题是……。
It is a great honor for me/I feel greatly honored to deliver/address my speech here, whose topic is about...
我很荣幸在这里发表演讲,我演讲的主题是……。
It is my great honor to share with you my opinions on...很荣幸能和你们分享一下我关于……的看法。
I’m greatly honoured to speak here on behalf of my school. I’m going to talk about ...
很荣幸代表我校在此演讲。我要谈论的是……
I would like to concentrate on the problem of...我想重点谈谈/我想把重点集中在……问题。
I will divide this topic into three main aspects.我将分三个主要方面谈论这个主题。
With the rapid development of ..., ... is becoming more and more popular.
随着……的快速发展,在线学习越来越普及。
I will give some detailed information to support my idea as follows.
我将提供如下一些详细的信息来支持我的观点。
...Online learning is playing a very important role in ...……在……中发挥着非常重要的作用。
... indeed have brought us a lot of surprises and benefits.……确实给我们带来了很多惊喜和好处。
... can provide flexible ... opportunities.……可以提供灵活的……机会。
Based on the above statements/Altogether, we can come to/draw a conclusion that...
基于以上陈述/总之,我们可以得出一个结论:……。
I hope I have made myself understood.希望我说的大家都能理解。
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak today.
我从心底感谢你们今天给了我这个演讲的机会。
Thank you all for being such an attentive audience.谢谢大家用心听我演讲。
That’s all/That’s all I want to say about this point.. Thanks for/Thank you for your attention/listening.
我的演讲到此结束/关于这一点,我就讲这些。谢谢你们的关注/倾听(谢谢大家)。
(改编自2021全国乙卷)你校将举办英语演讲比赛,请你以“Be Smart Online Learners”为题写一篇发言稿参赛。
内容包括:1.分析优势与不足;
2.提出学习建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Be smart online learners
It’s a great honor for me to deliver a speech titled “Be smart online learners”. _________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
九、倡议书
倡议书又称倡议信,是公开提倡某种做法,倡导某项活动,鼓动别人响应的一种信函文书。倡议书分为个人倡议书和集体倡议书两种。
谋篇布局 开头 倡议的目的、意义和有关背景(介绍现象或问题,具体原因)
主体 倡议的主要内容、具体措施和简述其社会意义
结尾 倡议者的决心或希望,做出总结或再次呼吁大家采取行动
注意:1.开头要简明扼要地;
2.主体部分最好用条款式分别列出,交代清楚,让响应者有所遵循,清楚要做什么和怎么去做,要写得明确、清晰;
3.结尾部分要写得热情洋溢,富于鼓舞性,最好能提出一个能概括全文主旨的响亮、有力的口号,引起有关方面的人士的关注,让响应者容易记住倡议的主要内容,并受到鼓舞及积极响应。
With ... approaching, I’m writing to appeal to all of you to ...随着……的临近,我写信呼吁大家……。
To arouse our awareness of ..., ... is to launch a campaign against ...
为了唤起我们……的意识,……将发起一场……的运动。
Nowadays, people in many big cities are always complaining about the ...如今,许多大城市的人们总在抱怨……。
As everybody can see ... more and more people are concerned about ...
正如大家所看到的那样,越来越多的人关注……
I’m writing to call on everyone to take an active part in building a beautiful ...
我写信是为了号召大家积极参与建设一个美丽的……。
I am here to call on/appeal to all of you to...我在这里号召/呼吁你们所有人……
Faced with the serious problem, we should take effective measures before things get worse.
面对这个严重的问题,在事情进一步恶化之前,我们必须采取有效的措施。
In order to ..., all of us had better do as follows.为了……,我们所有的人最好做到以下几点。
Additionally, it’s necessary that we form the habit of ... every day.另外,我们有必要养成每天……的习惯。
In order to ease the present serious situation, all students had better do as follows.
为了缓和目前严峻的情况,所有学生最好做如下工作。
I think it is high time that we should stop doing things like the followings.
我认为现在是我们应该停止做以下事情的时候了。
It’s everyone’s responsibility to ... If we can ..., we can make a big difference to ...
……人人有责。如果我们能……,就能对……产生巨大的影响。
Without doubt, it’s high time that immediate measures should be taken to change the present situation.
毫无疑问,现在是时候立即采取措施改变现状了。
We students can also do our part. Let’s take action right now!
我们学生也可以尽自己的一份力量。让我们现在就行动起来!
Let’s join our hands and take action immediately.让我们立即携手行动起来。
Let’s take action right now! I’mconvinced that our efforts will eventually pay off.
让我们现在就行动起来!我相信我们的努力最终会有回报的。
As long as we work together, we can make the impossible possible.只要我们共同努力,就能把不可能变为可能。
Every effort counts/matters/makes a difference. Let’s work together to make the world a better place.
每一次努力都很重要。让我们一起努力,让世界变得更美好。
Let’s make joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment.
让我们共同努力,创造一个绿色和谐的环境。
Everyone ought to have a positive attitude toward/to the campaign.人人都应该对这项运动持积极态度。
It’s high time that we took measures to change the situation.该是我们采取措施改变这种局面的时候了。
Please keep in mind that a small action can make a huge difference.
请记住,一个小小的行动可以带来巨大的影响。
Let’s take action right now/from now on! I’m convinced our efforts will eventually pay off.
让我们现在/从现在开始就采取行动!我相信我们的努力最终会有回报的。
(改编自2023届辽宁省沈阳市等3地高三下学期三模)2024年5月19日是濒危物种日(Endangered Species Day 2024),为提高保护野生动植物的意识,你校学生会向全校师生发布了一条征文信息,请你按要求写一篇短文。
内容包括:1.保护野生动植物的重要性;
2.你校的宣传活动;
3.你的建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
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十、通知
通知是上级对下级、组织对成员布置工作、平行单位之间部署工作、传达事情或告诉公众某件事情等
时使用的一种应用文体,通常分为口头通知和书面通知两种。口头通知和书面通知都是宣布即将发生的事情及其具体内容,因而多用将来时,一般用祈使句来强调。通知的语言要简洁明了,条理清晰,准确无误,特别是时间概念很重要,必须写得十分明确,不容丝毫含糊。
(口头通知)
谋篇布局 开头 提醒听众的开场白
主体 通知内容:时间、地点、对象、事件、要求、注意事项等
结尾 再次提醒注意,强调/欢迎哪些对象参加,并加上礼貌语
(书面通知)
谋篇布局 标题 在通知的首行中央写上NOTICE(Notice)/Announcement
主体 通知内容:时间、地点、对象、事件、要求、注意事项等
结尾 再次提醒注意,强调/欢迎哪些对象参加
落款 发布通知的单位和发布通知的日期写在正文结束的右下角
May I have/call your attention, please 请大家注意一下,好吗?
Attention, please, everybody!请大家注意!
Be quiet, please! There is something important I have to tell you.请安静!我有件重要的事要告诉你们。
Attention, please! I have an announcement to make.请注意!我要宣布一个通知。
I have an announcement to make.我有一件事情要宣布。
I have something important to tell you.我有重要的事情要告知你们。
As ... is around the corner, we are going to hold ... It is intended to help ... have a better understanding of ...
值此……来临之际,为了帮助留学生更好地了解中国文化,我们将举办一场新年联欢会。
In order to enrich the life of ..., ... has arranged a special activity for next Sunday.
为了……的生活,……在下周日安排了一项特别活动。
To make our school life colorful and keep us strong and healthy, we have decided to hold ... in .../the Students’ Union is to organize a ping-pong competition.为了使我们的校园生活更丰富/身体强壮,我们决定在……举办……/学生会要举办一次乒乓球比赛。
In order to raise our awareness of traditional culture, a ... design competition themed “...” is organized by the our school.为了提高我们对传统文化的认识,我们学校组织了一个主题为“……”的……设计比赛。
We will hold this contest on the afternoon of ... in ....我们将于……下午在……举行这场比赛。
... will be invited to work as judges and the top three competitors will be given prizes.
……将被邀请担任评委,前三名选手将获得奖品。
It has been decided that we’ll pay a visit to...已经决定我们将参观……
The Students’ Union has decided that...学生会已决定……
We shall have a lecture on...我们将举行关于……的讲座。
In the lecture, Mr Li will tell us... I suppose every audience will...
在讲座中,李先生将告诉我们……我想每个观众都会……
As scheduled, the contest is to be held on June 30. You are supposed to get well prepared before the contest.
按计划,比赛将于6月30日举行。请在比赛前做好充分准备。
All the students in our school are expected to take part in the activity.我校所有学生都要参加这次活动。
Everyone is welcome/expected to attend/take part in it.欢迎/期待所有人参加。
Above all, it’s recommended that you should...Please sign up for the contest as soon as possible.
首先建议你应该……请尽快报名参加比赛。
If you would like to have a try, please sign up at the Students’ Union by the end of ...
如果你想试试,请在……底前到学生会报名。
... are supposed to sign up in ...……应该在……报名。
Please make full use of this chance to improve your level of ...请充分利用这次机会提高你的……水平。
All the students are welcome to submit their entries to Pioneer@ before ...
欢迎所有学生将参赛作品于……之前提交至Pioneer@。
The winning works will be announced on ..., in ...获奖作品将于……在……公布。
Please attend it on time and don't be late.请按时到场,不要迟到。
Please be there on time/Do be present on time and don’t be late.请/务必准时到场,不要迟到。
All teachers and students will be required to…全体师生务必要……
All the students are encouraged to participate in this activity actively.鼓励所有学生积极参加这次活动。
For more information, please contact the Students’ Union.想了解更多信息,请联系学生会。
Everyone is asked to be there on time/punctually.请准时出席。
Looking forward to your participation.期待您的参加。
That’s all. Thank you.就这些(到此结束),谢谢。
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(中原名校2022-2023学年高三上学期质量考评三)假如你是李华,校学生会准备组织乒乓球比赛。请你用英文写一则口头通知。
内容包括:1.比赛目的;
2.报名时间与地点;
3.注意事项。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Boys and girls,
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Thank you!
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(2023-2024·高三上山东青岛期末)假定你是校英文报编辑,学校计划举行以欢度春节(Happy Spring Festival)为主题的海报设计大赛,请你写一份通知。
内容包括:1.大赛目的;
2.作品要求;
3.参赛方式等。
注意:1.词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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十一、新闻报道
新闻报道是记叙文的一种,其特点是以事实为依据,对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。其目的是为人们提供最新的信息。写作时要突出主题,选取具有典型意义和吸引力的事件。写作方法以叙述为主,适当描写和议论。
谋篇布局 标题 浓缩概括全文的中心,拟写吸引读者的标题
导语 概括叙述所报道的事情(时间、人物、地点、事件)
主体 详细叙述所报道事情的起因、经过和结果/结局
结语 对所报道的事情进行简要的总结或评论(人物感受、活动意义、活动评价)
cLast Sunday witnessed an extraordinary ... race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher in our school.上周日,举行了一场非同寻常的……赛跑,几乎引起了每一位师生的注意。
In order to celebrate..., a party was held.为了庆祝……,举行了一个晚会。
... witnessed/saw/held/organized a “...” activity from ... to ...从……至……,……举办/组织了“……”活动。
In order to/Aiming to enrich/encourage/enhance/raise ..., an activity.
为了丰富/鼓励/增强/提高……,举行/组织了一次活动。
Last week, we paid a visit to...上周,我们参观了……
Aiming to raise our awareness of protecting the environment, a tree-planting activity with the theme of...was organized by...on Saturday afternoon last week.为了提高我们的环保意识,上星期六下午……组织了一次主题为……的植树活动。
On the afternoon of May 25 an charity sale was held by the Students’ Union in our school playground.
……下午,学生会在我们学校操场上举行了慈善义卖。
It was reported/learned/announced that... 据报道/据悉/据宣布……
... took an active part in/actively participated in the activity/attended the party.
……积极参加了这次活动/出席了这次晚会。
There are a series of activities/labor tasks.有一系列的活动/劳动任务。
All the way ... were chatting, singing and ..., enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.
一路上……聊天,唱歌,……,享受着新鲜的空气和美丽的风景。
The beach was bathed in the golden sunshine. We jumped and sang with joy.
海滩沐浴在金色的阳光里。我们高兴地又跳又唱。
In order to organize the charity sale successfully, we made full preparations. Before the sale... When the day came... At the end of the activity, we...
为了成功地组织这次慈善义卖,我们做了充分的准备。在义卖前……活动当天……活动结束时,我们……
They watched a short video which... They also took part in varieties of activities to have a better understanding of...
他们看了一个……短片。他们还参加了各种各样的活动,以更好地了解……
The students selected from every class took part in the competition.从每个班选出的学生都参加了比赛。
At 2: 00 p. m., the students and teachers from different grades actively participated in it, some digging, some planting and others watering. During the activity...
下午两点,各年级师生积极参与,一些人挖土,一些人栽种,其他人浇水。在活动期间……
The activity provided a platform for ... to ....这次活动为……提供了一个……平台。
With ... active participation and ... enthusiastic support, the activity/the party was undoubtedly a success.
在……的积极参与和……的热情支持下,这次活动/聚会无疑是成功的。
This activity benefited ... a lot.这次活动使……受益匪浅。
Not only can this activity/event enrich ..., but also offer ... opportunities to ...
这项活动不仅可以丰富……,还为……提供……的机会。
Not only did it get ... close to nature and give ... relaxation from heavy ..., it also promoted the friendship among ... What a wonderful time!它不仅让……亲近大自然,让……从繁重的……得到放松,还促进了……之间的友谊。多么美好的时光啊!
The activity was highly spoken of, because not only did it provide a chance for us to exercise, but also made us more closer together.这项活动受到了高度评价,因为它不仅为我们提供了锻炼的机会,而且还拉近了我们(之间)的距离。
This visit not only broadened our horizons, but also aroused our interest in science.
这次参观不但开阔了我们的视野,而且激发了我们对科学的兴趣。
It is such a meaningful activity that students are all looking forward to the next charity sale.
这是一个非常有意义的活动,学生们都期待着下一次慈善义卖。
Looking at the lines of young trees, tired as they were, they smiled delightedly.
尽管很累,但是看着一排排的小树,他们开心地笑了。
(2020·新高考全国I卷)假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道。
内容包括:1.参加人员;
2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下;
3.活动反响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
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十二、说明文(介绍说明类)
说明文是客观地说明事物或阐明事理的一种文体,目的在于给人以知识,一般包括事物说明文和事理说明文两类。常考的话题有:传统文化(节日/习俗)、美食小吃、旅游景点、虚拟家乡、公共场所布局等的说明或介绍。
写作路径 首段 引出被说明的对象
中段 按题干要求分层说明
末段 归纳主题,阐述意义
Knowing that you take a great fancy to Chinese culture, especially the ..., I would like to introduce it to you.
知道你非常喜欢中国文化,尤其是……节(日),我来给你介绍。
The ... Festival is one of the most important festivals for/to Chinese people.
……是中国人最重要的节日之一。
There are many traditional festivals in China, but I like the ... Festival most, because it means ...
中国有许多传统节日,但我最喜欢……节,因为它意味着……。
Spring Festival, known as the Chinese New Year, is the most important holiday in China.
春节,即中国的新年,是中国最重要的节假日。
The Spring Festival is celebrated on/falls on the first day of the lunar New Year.春节在农历新年的第一天。
From late January to early February, Chinese people are busy preparing for the New Year.
从一月末到二月初人们忙着为新年做准备。
To those who live far away from their home, this festival is also a family reunion occasion.
对那些远离家乡的人们,春节是一个合家团聚的时刻。
While celebrating the Spring Festival, families can not only reunite but also experience and enjoy traditional Chinese culture. That’s why I like it best.在庆祝春节的同时,一家人不仅可以团聚,还可以体验和享受中国传统文化。这就是为什么我最喜欢它的原因。
As one of the Chinese traditional festivals, the Mid-Autumn Festival, which falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar, has been enjoying great popularity in our country.作为中国传统节日之一,中秋节适逢农历八月十五,在我们国家非常受欢迎。
As one of the most significant festivals in China, the Lantern Festival falls/is on the 15th of the first lunar month.作为中国最重要的节日之一,元宵节在农历正月十五。
China’s traditional Qingming Festival dates back to the Zhou Dynasty, which usually falls on April 4, 5 and 6 in the Gregorian calendar each year, with a history of more than 2,500 years.
中国传统的清明节可以追溯到周朝,通常在每年公历的4月4日、5日和6日举行,已有2500多年的历史。
People celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival in honor of Qu Yuan, the great poet of ancient China.
人们庆祝端午节是为了纪念我国古代伟大的诗人——屈原。
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th day of the eighth month in Chinese lunar calendar.
中秋节在中国农历八月十五。
The Double Ninth Festival falls on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month.重阳节在农历九月初九。
I’m glad to learn that you are coming to my hometown, I would like to introduce it to you.
听说你要来我的家乡,我很高兴。我来给你介绍。
... is one of the ... famous historical and cultural cities in China and one of the ... scenic spots as well.
是中国……个历史文化名城之一,也是……个风景名胜区之一。
There are many scenic spots in my hometown, such as ...我的家乡有很多景点,比如……
Every year the picturesque scenery attracts lots of visitors from home and abroad.
这种如画的风景每年吸引了国内外很多游客。
The average temperature ... is about 22 centigrade. The rainy season is between May and July.
……的平均气温约为22摄氏度。雨季在5月至7月之间。
Surrounded by mountains on three sides, the small village faces a clear river on the east.
这个小村庄三面环山,东临一条清澈的河流。
It is nestled in the mountains, with lush green hills and crystal-clear streams.
它坐落在群山之中,有郁郁葱葱的青山和清澈见底的溪流。
The town is famous for its ancient temples, some dating back hundreds of years. These temples are not only architecturally unique but are also a symbol of our rich cultural heritage.该镇以其古老的寺庙而闻名,有些寺庙可以追溯到数百年前。这些寺庙不仅在建筑上独树一帜,而且是我们丰富文化遗产的象征。
In ..., you are sure to have a good taste of ...在……,你一定会品尝到……
In addition, the local cuisine is a must-try, with its fresh and unique flavors.
此外,当地美食也是必尝之选,因为它有着新鲜独特的风味。
From here, you can appreciate breathtaking views of the sunrise and sunset, as well as the starry night skies.
从这里,你可以欣赏到日出和日落的壮丽景色,以及星空。
The city of ..., the capital of ..., is located/situated ... with a long history of about ... years. It has a population of ... million, covering an area of ... square kilometers.……市是……的首府,位于……,有着大约……年的悠久历史。人口……万,面积……平方公里。
It is rich in natural resources such as coal and gold and has mild weather.
它拥有丰富的自然资源,如煤炭和黄金,气候温和。
With the rapid development of economy, education and people’s livelihood have been greatly improved.
随着经济的快速发展,教育和民生得到了极大改善。
It is a place that is truly magical and one that I am proud to call my home.
这是一个真正神奇的地方,我很自豪能称之为我的家。
Our school, which takes up 63 thousand square metres, is very large in size.
我们学校占地6.3万平方米,规模很大。
All the buildings are surrounded by trees and flowers. It is really a beautiful school/place.
所有的建筑物都被花草树木包围着。这确实是一所美丽的学校/一处美丽的地方。
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(2023-2024·高三下陕西渭南开学考)你校正在举办以“用英语讲好中国故事”为主题的英语征文大赛,请以我最喜欢的中国传统节日为题,写一篇短文参赛。
内容包括:1.最喜欢的节日;
2.节日简介;
3. 喜欢的原因。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The Traditional Chinese Festival I Like Best
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(2023-2024·高二上内蒙古期中)假定你是李华,请你给某英文报社写一篇短文,介绍你的家乡或者你喜欢的一个地方,要点包括地理位置、著名景点、文化特色等。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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