八年级下册 Unit 1 Helping those in need
组织活动申请信写作
假设你是初二(1)班的班长李华,请根据以下提示给初中部张校长写封申请信。
原因 同学张明家境贫寒,父亲又不幸身患重病,急需救助
计划 举办旧书义卖活动,为张明一家筹集善款 时间:下周二至周五放学后 地点:学校图书馆前及校门口 活动对象:全校师生
希望 得到校长的批准和支持
词数:80词左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数);
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I’m Li Hua, monitor of Class 1 Grade 8. I am writing to you about our plan to help our classmate Zhang Ming.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Class 1, Grade 8
参考范文:
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I am Li Hua, monitor of Class 1 Grade 8. I am writing to you about our class’s plan to help our classmate Zhang Ming. Zhang Ming's family is very poor. To make things worse, his father is suffering from serious illness. They are in great need of help.
We would like to organize a book sale to raise money for Zhang Ming and his family. The book sale will take place after school next Tuesday to Friday in front of the school library and school gate. We welcome all teachers and students to take part in it. (本段建议熟读成诵)
Could you please give us the permission to hold the event We hope that by working together, we can help Zhang Ming go through this difficult time. Thank you for your support!
常见问题要点:
1. 语言风格:给校长的申请信,应礼貌、正式,句式要完整,不用缩略语或口头话语言。
2. _____ a book fair “举办……”动词是什么? hold / host / organize / have(用词要具体)
3.“上周五、这周五、下周五”分别为last Friday, this Friday, next Friday(且前面不用介词) E.g. I read the book in last week. I’ll return it in next week. (next/last week前面不用in)
改错练习:I will see you on next Monday. _____________
4. 动词后面不能直接加动词原形,用V+ to do或者V+ doing
We need ______ raise money to Zhang Ming. (need和raise都是动词,中间要加to)
We want _____ organize an activity ... (want 和organize都是动词,中间加to)
We want to go swim ___________. (go和swim都是动词,把后面的swim改为swimming)
5. 家人是home还是family? Family指的是家人;home指的是家,是一家人住的地方。Family是一个集合名词,如果用复数families,强调家庭成员个体,且是多个家人。
6. 句子语序问题(不能中译英逐词翻译)
(1)比较中英文语序:
We are going to hold a charity book sale in order to raise money for Zhang Ming’s family.
我们将会举办一场慈善旧书义卖为张明的家人筹钱。
(2)观察下列句子的表达时间、地点的语序:
The book sale will take place after school next Tuesday to Friday in front of the school library and school gate.
(思考:一般时间和地点哪个在前面?)