专题02提纲作文高分宝典之发言稿
目录
1.三年高考考情透析，把握高考风向标；
2.评分标准早知道，明确得分失分点；
3.高分技巧心中有，“一式、两头、三写、四关”；
4.素材宝库赋能，句型模板全面掌握；
5.高考真题精讲，写作思路一目了然；
6.名校模拟提升，好题新题举一反三。
新高考写作第一节的命题形式主要是提纲式作文，主要文体形式包括投稿征文、演讲稿、通知、倡议书、活动介绍、人物介绍、日记/周记或书信等。作文所涉及的话题贴近学生生活，富有时代气息，体现了新课程标准的要求，能唤起考生强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。
年份 卷区 话题 命题形式
2021年 全国乙卷 以Be smart online learners为题写发言稿 提纲类
浙江卷1月 新西兰学生访问你校致辞 提纲类
一、评分细则
1.本题总分为15分，分五个档次进行评分。
2.评分时应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。具体为：
(1)对于内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。
(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4.评分时还应注意：
(1)词数少于60的，酌情扣分。
(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。书写较差，以致影响交际的将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(13-15分)：能写明全部要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达无误。
第四档(10-12分)：能写明全部或绝大部分要点，语言有少量错误，行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚。
第三档(7-9分)：能写明基本要点，语言虽有较多错误，但能基本达意。
第二档(4-6分)：能写出部分要点，语言错误多，影响意思表达。
第一档(1-3分)：只能写出一两个要点，里面错误很多，只有个别句子正确。
零分：未作答，所写内容无法评判；所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。
总之，在写演讲稿时，考生应该注意“有话好好说”：体现出词语的魅力，展示精彩的语句；“有话慢慢说”：要点齐全，叙述从容，运用一定的过渡词语。平时注意积累并背诵各种写作素材的“万能模板”并学会灵活运用，这样才能在有限的时间内提升写作能力。在考场上挥洒自如，如鱼得水。
根据考生书面表达常见错误及评卷要求，我们总结出行之有效的“一式、两头、三写、四关”高分技巧，即写对格式、写好两头、写美卷面、破关夺隘。
一式：写对格式 确定主题，记住发言稿、演讲稿的基本格式和特点。
两头：写好两头 要求灵活运用熟悉的句式结构和表达手法，使文章开头和结尾的表达生动准确，引人入胜，耐人寻味。
三写：写美卷面 行文时书写规范化，力求卷面整洁美观。单词的拼写、字母的大小写符合英语书写要求。
四关：破关夺隘 以主题为纲，进一步思考其内涵和外延，联系自己的学习、生活实际，凸显时代性。突破内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关以及习惯表达关。
演讲稿一般由呼语、正文和结束语三个部分组成，大多分为三种，一种是活动组织者的演讲（例如运动会前主席的演讲）；一种是作为活动参与者的演讲（例如竞选）；第三种是就社会热点话题的观点表达，可以参照议论文。而演讲稿的内容大多是在题干已经给出，所以演讲稿的结构较为简单，可以两段式，也可以三段式。
第一部分：自我介绍，开门见山地提出本人要谈的问题和看法
第二部分：活动组织者需要对活动进行介绍，可以参照如下顺序：名称，举办方，意义目的，时间地点，活动评价，参与感受，活动的特别要求。如果是活动参与者，需要写出参与原因和目的，个人优势等。如果是热点话题的观点表达，可以按照议论文的内容结构。
第三部分：照应开头，总结全文，谈谈自己的感想或期望
发言稿典型特征要记牢：
1.称呼语： Good morning,ladies and gentlemen / my dear friends / hello,everyone
2.开头句： It is my great honor to be here to talk to you /deliver a speech on....
I feel greatly honored to ....
I am highly honored to stand here to share my views on ....with you
On behalf of…I am delighted to welcome all of you to…
3.主体： The topic of my speech today is ....
Today, I'm very glad to have the opportunity to talk about my career with you
4.结尾: We wish…a pleasant journey home and good health.
To sum up/To conclude/All in all/In conclusion, let's take action from this very moment to enhance our a awareness of wetland protection.
Thank you for your listening/attention.（以上内容也适用于发言稿、广播稿）
写作模板
Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen,
It's a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech._________（表示荣幸）My name is __________.（自我介绍）The topic of my speech is ___________.（提出演讲主题）
To begin with, many people suggest that ___________.（话题或现象列举）Secondly, ___________. Thirdly, ___________ .
What I want to stress is that ___________.（重申主题）For one thing, . For another, . Besides, ___________.（原因或重要性列举）In a word, ___________.（总结）
Thank you for your listening/attention.
（2021年全国乙卷）你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1. 分析优势与不足
2．你的学习建议。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Be Smart Online Learners
Good morning, everyone,
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【参考答案】
Be Smart Online Learners
Good morning, everyone,
It's my great honor to share my views about being smart online learners.
Learning online has become popular these days. On the one hand, it provides us great convenience to study and saves us lots of time. On the other hand, it does unavoidable harm to our eyesight. What's worse, it's really hard for those lacking self-control to acquire what they want.
As far as I'm concerned, we should make a practical learning plan, create an appropriate environment for learning, and above all have strict self-discipline. Only in this way can we make the network serve us to the most extent.
Thank you!
1.词汇积累
分享：share → exchange
流行的：popular → gain popularity
提供：provide → offer → give
损害：do harm to → harm→ do damage to
获得：acquire → obtain→ gain
就我而言：as far as I'm concerned → from the point of my view → in my opinion
合适的：appropriate→ proper
最重要的是：above all → the most importantly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：What's worse, it's really hard for those lacking self-control to acquire what they want.
拓展句：What's worse, it's really hard for those who lack self-control to acquire what they want.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It's my great honor to share my views about being smart online learners.
（运用了It is +adj+(for sb) to do sth的句式。）
【高分句型2】Only in this way can we make the network serve us to the most extent.（运用了部分倒装句）
（2021年浙江卷）假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇 发言稿，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；2. 介绍活动安排；3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考答案】
Distinguished guests:
On behalf of our school, I would like to convey my sincere welcome for your visiting.
At first, it is of significance to fully understand the school. As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum, which contains the splendid history of our school. Furthermore, our classes are worthy of being attended, because you can appreciate the differences between Chinese and western teaching methods. After that, it is at canteen that you can have a special lunch with our students.
As mentioned above, I extremely expect your coming. May you have an unforgettable experience.
1.词汇积累
代表：on behalf of
传达：convey → send →express
按计划：as scheduled →as planned
此外： Furthermore→what's more → in addition
2.句式拓展
【点睛】【高分句型1】it is of significance to fully understand the school （it is of +n. for sb.to do句式）
【高分句型2】As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum, which contains the splendid history of our school.
1.（2023淄博市一模）为帮助英国留学生更好地了解春节，学校英语口语社打算录制一段英文短视频。请你按照以下提示，撰写该视频的文字稿：
1．介绍除夕习俗；
2．提醒禁放爆竹。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【参考答案】
Hello , everyone ! As a member of the Spoken English Club , I ' m here to help you have a better understanding of the Chinese Spring Festival.（介绍背景信息及目的）
Varieties of food will be prepared for the reunion dinner on the eve of the Spring Festival It ' s a good opportunity to have the whole family gathered together . All family members would sit around the table tasting delicious dumplings watching performances and chatting happily .（要点一）
Setting off firecrackers is now banned in our city for the sae of environmental protection . You may feel the Chinese Spring Festival is becoming a global celebration of joy and love.（要点二及拓展）
2.（2023秋·四川遂宁·高三射洪中学校考开学考试）近年来，科技的高速发展给人们的生活带来了巨大的改变。假设你是李华，有意参加你校将举办的 TECH TALK 活动。请以“Technology and Lifestyles”为题，写一篇演讲稿，内容如下：
1. 科技的重要性
2. 举例说明科技对人类生活的积极影响
3. 你对科技应用的态度
注意：词数120字左右。
Ladies and gentlemen,
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【参考答案】
Ladies and Gentlemen,
I'm Li Hua. I am delighted to speak on the topic of “Technology and Lifestyles” at the TECH TALK event.
The development of technology has brought a massive transformation to our lives. Technology has impacted our lives in so many areas, including healthcare, communication, and transportation. For example, medical technology has advanced treatments, allowing us to save more munication technology enables us to connect across the globe, further expanding our horizons. Additionally, transportation technology has made travel more efficient and cost-effective.
However, in spite of its many advances, technology has some limitations and negative impacts. Over-dependence on technology can create social and personal problems, such as addiction and mental issues.
To conclude, technology plays a critical role in society, and we must use it wisely and responsibly. We must utilize the benefits of technology while also being mindful of its potential negative consequences. By working together, we can create a healthier and more sustainable future.
1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted →pleased
大量的：massive → plenty of
影响：impacted→ influenced
总之：To conclude→ In a word
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：For example, medical technology has advanced treatments, allowing us to save more lives.
拓展句：For example, medical technology has advanced treatments, which allow us to save more lives.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Communication technology enables us to connect across the globe, further expanding our horizons.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语。）
【高分句型2】However, in spite of its many advances, technology has some limitations and negative impacts.（运用了However 副词的转折，以及in spite of的介词短语作状语。）
3．（2023·天津河西·统考三模）假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津，下周你校将与英国姊妹校线上“云”交流校园生活。高中三年即将结束，回顾丰富多彩的校园生活，哪一次校园活动给你留下了美好而深刻的印象呢 请你以“The Most Impressive School Activity”为题写一篇发言稿。
内容包括：
1.介绍活动过程;
2.分享个人感受。
注意：短文不少于100词。
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【参考答案】
I'm Li Jin, a senior three student from Chenguang high school. I'm more than delighted to communicate with the classmates from the sister school in Britain online about campus life. Looking back, I find the past days have witnessed plenty of memorable activities. And the one that impressed me most is the coming-of-age ceremony.
The meaningful event was held on May 4th to honor the students who had turned 18. We gathered at the stadium, wearing traditional dresses. First, our principal sincerely extended his congratulations on us becoming grown-ups. And we reviewed our high school life together, which was full of happiness. Then followed the Confucian-style coming-of-age ceremonies —Ji Li (for girls) and Guan Li (for boys). Finally, we made a solemn vow to shoulder the responsibilities of an adult.
Personally, this activity not only exposed us to traditional Chinese culture, but also motivated us to embrace the new identity and live up to our promise. We, 18-year-olds, should cherish our youth.
That's all. Thank you.
1.词汇积累：
高兴的：delighted→pleased/cheerful
回顾：review→look back/retrospect
激励：motivate→inspire/stimulate
2.句式拓展：
原句：Personally, this activity not only exposed us to traditional Chinese culture, but also motivated us to embrace the new identity and live up to our promise.
拓展句：Personally, not only did this activity expose us to traditional Chinese culture, but also it motivated us to embrace the new identity and live up to our promise.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Looking back, I find the past days have witnessed plenty of memorable activities.(运用了现在分词作状语。)
【高分句型2】
And we reviewed our high school life together, which was full of happiness.(运用which引导非限制性定语从句)
4．（2023·江西九江·统考二模）为了给正在迎战高考的高三学子加油鼓劲，你校拟举行一场英语演讲比赛，请你结合自身或者身边人的经历，以“Positive Attitude Makes Perfect”为题写一篇演讲稿。要点如下：
1. 高三学生学习现状；
2. Positive attitude 的力量；
3. 表达祝福。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头已为你写好，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Positive Attitude Makes Perfect
Dear teachers and students,
I am so honored to have a chance to deliver a speech here,
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【参考答案】
Positive Attitude Makes Perfect
Dear teachers and students,
I am so honored to have a chance to deliver a speech here, where I want to share my journey of “Positive Attitude Makes Perfect”.
Though knowing nothing is more important than diligence and persistence in Senior 3, I still feel frustrated when faced with seemingly endless obstacles in my study. Without a positive attitude, I would surrender to them at any time. What I bear in mind is to be positive about everything, which not only inspires me to brave difficulty in my way but also helps me make great progress.
A positive attitude is a lighthouse guiding us to our destination and a warrior protecting us from failure, with which I firmly believe that we can have a bright future. May we succeed!
1.词汇积累
机会：chance →opportunity
屈服，让步：surrender →give in
记住：bear in mind →keep in mind
取得很大进步：make great progress →make great advances
2.句式拓展
宾语从句变同位语从句
原句：A positive attitude is a lighthouse guiding us to our destination and a warrior protecting us from failure, with which I firmly believe that we can have a bright future.
拓展句：A positive attitude is a lighthouse guiding us to our destination and a warrior protecting us from failure, with which I hold the firm belief that we can have a bright future.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am so honored to have a chance to deliver a speech here, where I want to share my journey of “Positive Attitude Makes Perfect”（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】What I bear in mind is to be positive about everything, which not only inspires me to brave difficulty in my way but also helps me make great progress.（运用了what引导的主语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句和并列连词“not only…but also…”连接两个并列结构）
5．（2023秋·天津·高三统考期末）假定你是晨光中学的李津，你校将举办以生态旅游为话题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“Let's Promote Ecotourism”为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1.当前趋势;
2.你的观点(良好旅游体验、生态友好可持续发展、促进经济发展等等);
3.你的倡议。
注意：
1.词数100以上;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.开头已给出，不计入总数。
Let's Promote Ecotourism
Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I'd like to take this opportunity to talk about ecotourism.
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【参考答案】
Let's Promote Ecotourism
Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I'd like to take this opportunity to talk about monly regarded as low impact travel to undisturbed places, ecotourism has become increasingly popular these year.
As for me, ecotourism is a true eco-friendly trip. With the aim of sustainable development, ecotourism calls on tourists to enjoy the scenery without damaging the natural environment. Therefore, it does little harm to the environment. By being exposed to natural areas, tourists can have a pleasant experience to get close to nature. Meanwhile, ecotourism benefits the economic development of local communities.
Ecotourism means responsible and sustainable travel. We have only one planet. To protect our planet, I do hope we can live in harmony with nature and make sure that ecotourism can provide positive experiences for both visitors and hosts.
Thanks for listening.
1.词汇积累：
目的：aim→purpose/intention
伤害：do harm to→be harmful to/harm
对……有益：benefit→be beneficial to
确保：make sure→ensure/guarantee
2.句式拓展：
合并简单句
原句：As for me, ecotourism is a true eco-friendly trip. With the aim of sustainable development, ecotourism calls on tourists to enjoy the scenery without damaging the natural environment.
拓展句：As for me, ecotourism is a true eco-friendly trip, which calls on tourists to enjoy the scenery without damaging the natural environment with the aim of sustainable development.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Commonly regarded as low impact travel to undisturbed places, ecotourism has become increasingly popular these year.(运用了过去分词作状语)
【高分句型2】
To protect our planet, I do hope we can live in harmony with nature and make sure that ecotourism can provide positive experiences for both visitors and hosts.(运用了动词不定式作目的状语和that引导宾语从句)
6．（2023·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨市第六中学校校考一模）假设你是红星中学的李华。近期，你校正在开展“捐献一本书，奉献一份爱”的主题活动，以帮助贫困地区的孩子体会阅读的乐趣。你将作为学生代表面向交换生进行英文演讲，号召大家积极参与活动。演讲内容如下：
1. 活动简介；
2. 活动意义；
3. 发出号召。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear fellow schoolmates,
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【参考答案】
Dear fellow schoolmates,
Do you have books piling up in corners, stacked in piles on desks, or overflowing from your bookshelves An activity entitled “Devote Your Love by Donating a Book” held by our school this month can help you find a perfect destination for these used books.
As its name suggests, to participate in this activity, all you need is books. A stand has been set up at the entrance to the teaching building, where volunteers will be collecting books. These donated books will finally be packed and delivered to children with a burning passion for reading.
Dedicated to helping children in poverty-stricken areas to enjoy the fun of reading, this activity is worth your attention. Due to poverty, these children are unlikely to access the outside world. Books, however, can better link them with the world, igniting their passion for knowledge and inspiring them with
hope.
One book may seem trivial, but one book per student in our school can make a big difference. Do you want to share the joy of reading with them Do you want to give them a chance to broaden their horizons Please join us in this empowerment activity.
1.词汇积累
堆积：pile up→ heap up
参与：participate in→ take part in
强烈的爱：a burning passion→ an intense love
致力于：Dedicated to→ Devoted to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Dedicated to helping children in poverty-stricken areas to enjoy the fun of reading, this activity is worth your attention.
拓展句：Because it is dedicated to helping children in poverty-stricken areas to enjoy the fun of reading, this activity is worth your attention.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Dedicated to helping children in poverty-stricken areas to enjoy the fun of reading, this activity is worth your attention.（运用了过去分词导语充当句子原因状语）
【高分句型2】Books, however, can better link them with the world, igniting their passion for knowledge and inspiring them with hope.（运用了现在分词短语充当伴随状语）
7．（2023·四川凉山·统考二模）假定你是李华, 你校下周即将举行成人礼仪式，你有幸被选为学生代表发言，请用英语写一篇发言稿，主要内容如下：1. 成人礼的意义；2. 感恩老师；3. 告别同学并祝福。
注意：字数100左右。 参考词汇：the coming-of-age ceremony 成人礼仪式
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【参考答案】
Dear teachers and my fellow students,
I'm honored to be chosen as the speaker of the coming-of-age ceremony on behalf of our classmates. The ceremony is a grand occasion when we are announced to be grown-up, who must take on the responsibility of our home and country as an adult.
How time flies! My dear teachers, it seems like yesterday when I first stepped into the classroom, greeted by your caring eyes and encouraging smiles. Upon our graduation, what pops up from my deepest heart is the endless gratitude for your company during my facing different challenges in the past three years.
I'm convinced that each of us has some bittersweet memories with our desk mates, roommates and classmates. Now as we set sail ahead, I wish you to be admitted into your ideal university. And in your long life journey, I also wish you to be embraced warmly in the world.
That's all. Thanks.
1. 词汇积累：
选择：choose→select
成年人：grown-up→adult
感谢、感激：gratitude→appreciation
旅行：journey→tour
拥抱：embrace→hug
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I'm honored to be chosen as the speaker of the coming-of-age ceremony on behalf of our classmates.
拓展句：I'm honored that I am chosen as the speaker of the coming-of-age ceremony on behalf of our classmates.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The ceremony is a grand occasion when we are announced to be grown-up, who must take on the responsibility of our home and country as an adult.（运用了以关系副词when引导的限制性定语从句和以关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句。）
【高分句型2】 Upon our graduation, what pops up from my deepest heart is the endless gratitude for your company during my facing different challenges in the past three years.（运用了以连接代词what引导的主语从句。）
8．（2023·河南·校联考模拟预测）你校将于下周举办题为I have a dream的英语演讲比赛，请你准备一篇演讲稿。内容包括：
1. 你的梦想；
2. 实现梦想的措施。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I have a dream
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【参考答案】
I have a dream
Hello, my dear teachers and fellow students,
I am very happy to stand here to talk about my dream. I am sure that everyone has his or her dream. Our dreams are like a lighthouse, without which we might get lost in our lives.
My dream is to be a teacher and devote myself to the education in the countryside. From now on, I will try my best to read as many books as I can in order to broaden my horizons. Though difficult it might be, I will never give up until my dream comes true.
That's all. Thanks!
1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→glad/delighted
确信： be sure →make sure
为了：in order to→so as to
放弃：give up→abandon
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：From now on, I will try my best to read as many books as I can in order to broaden my horizons.
拓展句：From now on, I will try my best to read as many books as I can for the purpose that I can broaden my horizons.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sure that everyone has his or her dream. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Our dreams are like a lighthouse, without which we might get lost in our lives.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3]Though difficult it might be, I will never give up until my dream comes true. (运用了倒装句)
9．（2023·青海西宁·统考一模）假定你是李华，你校英语角将举办主题为“Sharing”的英语沙龙活动，并特邀你在活动中发言。请你写一篇发言稿谈谈分享的益处。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone!
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All in all, sharing makes us have a better life. Thank you for listening!
【参考答案】
Good morning, everyone!
Sharing brings me a lot. Self-confidence is the most precious thing it brings.
As I entered the third grade of junior high school, I was in a new class. I often shared all the changes after the first exam with my new friends. The competitive atmosphere made me nervous. I failed my world with low scores until my best friend put his hand on my shoulder. When I share my feelings with him, I feel very relaxed. His words of encouragement help me regain my confidence. Encouraging words can help people in difficulties to tide over difficulties.
All in all, sharing makes us have a better life. Thank you for listening!
1.词汇积累
紧张的：nervous→stressed
度过：tide over→get through
获得：regain→obtain
宝贵的：precious→valuable
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I often shared all the changes after the first exam with my new friends. The competitive atmosphere made me nervous.
拓展句：Although the competitive atmosphere made me nervous, I often shared all the changes after the first exam with my new friends.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I failed my world with low scores until my best friend put his hand on my shoulder. (运用了until引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] As I entered the third grade of junior high school, I was in a new class. (运用as引导时间状语从句)
10．（2023·陕西宝鸡·统考模拟预测）假设你是李华。近期，你校英语俱乐部将举办迎新派对，请你代表高三学长发言，向来自高一的新成员分享你的高中生活以及给他们的建议。请你根据以下要点写一篇发言稿。
1. 你的高中生活回忆；
2. 给高一新成员的建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good afternoon! My dear new friends,
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That's all! Thank you for your listening!
【参考答案】
Good afternoon! My dear new friends, now I feel honored to share something about my senior high school life with you.
Actually, there are lots of precious memories in this school. But what I want to share most is my experience of being a member of the English Club. During the last two years, I've participated in many interesting and meaningful activities, such as English speech competition, from which I've not only gained knowledge and skills, but also made some friends.
In my opinion, to enjoy a wonderful senior high school life, firstly, you should have clear goals. What's more, make sure you have a reasonable plan and manage your time well. Of course, don't be afraid of asking for help whenever you have trouble. And I am always here ready to help you!
That's all!That's all! Thank you for your listening!
1.词汇积累
许多：lots of→a great number of
珍贵的，有价值的：precious →valuable
参加：participate in →take part in
获得：gain→acquire
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Actually, there are lots of precious memories in this school.
拓展句：Actually, there are lots of precious memories in this school, which make a deep impression on me and are unforgettable.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
But what I want to share most is my experience of being a member of the English Club.（运用了what 引导的主语从句）
【高分句型2】
During the last two years, I've participated in many interesting and meaningful activities, such as English speech competition, from which I've not only gained knowledge and skills, but also made some friends.（运用了介词+关系代词引导的非限定性定语从句）专题02提纲作文高分宝典之发言稿
目录
1.三年高考考情透析，把握高考风向标；
2.评分标准早知道，明确得分失分点；
3.高分技巧心中有，“一式、两头、三写、四关”；
4.素材宝库赋能，句型模板全面掌握；
5.高考真题精讲，写作思路一目了然；
6.名校模拟提升，好题新题举一反三。
新高考写作第一节的命题形式主要是提纲式作文，主要文体形式包括投稿征文、演讲稿、通知、倡议书、活动介绍、人物介绍、日记/周记或书信等。作文所涉及的话题贴近学生生活，富有时代气息，体现了新课程标准的要求，能唤起考生强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。
年份 卷区 话题 命题形式
2021年 全国乙卷 以Be smart online learners为题写发言稿 提纲类
浙江卷1月 新西兰学生访问你校致辞 提纲类
一、评分细则
1.本题总分为15分，分五个档次进行评分。
2.评分时应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。具体为：
(1)对于内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。
(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4.评分时还应注意：
(1)词数少于60的，酌情扣分。
(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。书写较差，以致影响交际的将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(13-15分)：能写明全部要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达无误。
第四档(10-12分)：能写明全部或绝大部分要点，语言有少量错误，行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚。
第三档(7-9分)：能写明基本要点，语言虽有较多错误，但能基本达意。
第二档(4-6分)：能写出部分要点，语言错误多，影响意思表达。
第一档(1-3分)：只能写出一两个要点，里面错误很多，只有个别句子正确。
零分：未作答，所写内容无法评判；所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。
总之，在写演讲稿时，考生应该注意“有话好好说”：体现出词语的魅力，展示精彩的语句；“有话慢慢说”：要点齐全，叙述从容，运用一定的过渡词语。平时注意积累并背诵各种写作素材的“万能模板”并学会灵活运用，这样才能在有限的时间内提升写作能力。在考场上挥洒自如，如鱼得水。
根据考生书面表达常见错误及评卷要求，我们总结出行之有效的“一式、两头、三写、四关”高分技巧，即写对格式、写好两头、写美卷面、破关夺隘。
一式：写对格式 确定主题，记住发言稿、演讲稿的基本格式和特点。
两头：写好两头 要求灵活运用熟悉的句式结构和表达手法，使文章开头和结尾的表达生动准确，引人入胜，耐人寻味。
三写：写美卷面 行文时书写规范化，力求卷面整洁美观。单词的拼写、字母的大小写符合英语书写要求。
四关：破关夺隘 以主题为纲，进一步思考其内涵和外延，联系自己的学习、生活实际，凸显时代性。突破内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关以及习惯表达关。
演讲稿一般由呼语、正文和结束语三个部分组成，大多分为三种，一种是活动组织者的演讲（例如运动会前主席的演讲）；一种是作为活动参与者的演讲（例如竞选）；第三种是就社会热点话题的观点表达，可以参照议论文。而演讲稿的内容大多是在题干已经给出，所以演讲稿的结构较为简单，可以两段式，也可以三段式。
第一部分：自我介绍，开门见山地提出本人要谈的问题和看法
第二部分：活动组织者需要对活动进行介绍，可以参照如下顺序：名称，举办方，意义目的，时间地点，活动评价，参与感受，活动的特别要求。如果是活动参与者，需要写出参与原因和目的，个人优势等。如果是热点话题的观点表达，可以按照议论文的内容结构。
第三部分：照应开头，总结全文，谈谈自己的感想或期望
发言稿典型特征要记牢：
1.称呼语： Good morning,ladies and gentlemen / my dear friends / hello,everyone
2.开头句： It is my great honor to be here to talk to you /deliver a speech on....
I feel greatly honored to ....
I am highly honored to stand here to share my views on ....with you
On behalf of…I am delighted to welcome all of you to…
3.主体： The topic of my speech today is ....
Today, I'm very glad to have the opportunity to talk about my career with you
4.结尾: We wish…a pleasant journey home and good health.
To sum up/To conclude/All in all/In conclusion, let's take action from this very moment to enhance our a awareness of wetland protection.
Thank you for your listening/attention.（以上内容也适用于发言稿、广播稿）
写作模板
Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen,
It's a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech._________（表示荣幸）My name is __________.（自我介绍）The topic of my speech is ___________.（提出演讲主题）
To begin with, many people suggest that ___________.（话题或现象列举）Secondly, ___________. Thirdly, ___________ .
What I want to stress is that ___________.（重申主题）For one thing, . For another, . Besides, ___________.（原因或重要性列举）In a word, ___________.（总结）
Thank you for your listening/attention.
（2021年全国乙卷）你校将举办英语演讲比赛，请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1. 分析优势与不足
2．你的学习建议。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Be Smart Online Learners
Good morning, everyone,
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1.词汇积累
分享：share → exchange
流行的：popular → gain popularity
提供：provide → offer → give
损害：do harm to → harm→ do damage to
获得：acquire → obtain→ gain
就我而言：as far as I'm concerned → from the point of my view → in my opinion
合适的：appropriate→ proper
最重要的是：above all → the most importantly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：What's worse, it's really hard for those lacking self-control to acquire what they want.
拓展句：What's worse, it's really hard for those who lack self-control to acquire what they want.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It's my great honor to share my views about being smart online learners.
（运用了It is +adj+(for sb) to do sth的句式。）
【高分句型2】Only in this way can we make the network serve us to the most extent.（运用了部分倒装句）
（2021年浙江卷）假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇 发言稿，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；2. 介绍活动安排；3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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1.词汇积累
代表：on behalf of
传达：convey → send →express
按计划：as scheduled →as planned
此外： Furthermore→what's more → in addition
2.句式拓展
【点睛】【高分句型1】it is of significance to fully understand the school （it is of +n. for sb.to do句式）
【高分句型2】As scheduled, all of you will visit the museum, which contains the splendid history of our school.
1.（2023淄博市一模）为帮助英国留学生更好地了解春节，学校英语口语社打算录制一段英文短视频。请你按照以下提示，撰写该视频的文字稿：
1．介绍除夕习俗；
2．提醒禁放爆竹。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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2.（2023秋·四川遂宁·高三射洪中学校考开学考试）近年来，科技的高速发展给人们的生活带来了巨大的改变。假设你是李华，有意参加你校将举办的 TECH TALK 活动。请以“Technology and Lifestyles”为题，写一篇演讲稿，内容如下：
1. 科技的重要性
2. 举例说明科技对人类生活的积极影响
3. 你对科技应用的态度
注意：词数120字左右。
Ladies and gentlemen,
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1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted →pleased
大量的：massive → plenty of
影响：impacted→ influenced
总之：To conclude→ In a word
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：For example, medical technology has advanced treatments, allowing us to save more lives.
拓展句：For example, medical technology has advanced treatments, which allow us to save more lives.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Communication technology enables us to connect across the globe, further expanding our horizons.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语。）
【高分句型2】However, in spite of its many advances, technology has some limitations and negative impacts.（运用了However 副词的转折，以及in spite of的介词短语作状语。）
3．（2023·天津河西·统考三模）假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津，下周你校将与英国姊妹校线上“云”交流校园生活。高中三年即将结束，回顾丰富多彩的校园生活，哪一次校园活动给你留下了美好而深刻的印象呢 请你以“The Most Impressive School Activity”为题写一篇发言稿。
内容包括：
1.介绍活动过程;
2.分享个人感受。
注意：短文不少于100词。
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1.词汇积累：
高兴的：delighted→pleased/cheerful
回顾：review→look back/retrospect
激励：motivate→inspire/stimulate
2.句式拓展：
原句：Personally, this activity not only exposed us to traditional Chinese culture, but also motivated us to embrace the new identity and live up to our promise.
拓展句：Personally, not only did this activity expose us to traditional Chinese culture, but also it motivated us to embrace the new identity and live up to our promise.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Looking back, I find the past days have witnessed plenty of memorable activities.(运用了现在分词作状语。)
【高分句型2】
And we reviewed our high school life together, which was full of happiness.(运用which引导非限制性定语从句)
4．（2023·江西九江·统考二模）为了给正在迎战高考的高三学子加油鼓劲，你校拟举行一场英语演讲比赛，请你结合自身或者身边人的经历，以“Positive Attitude Makes Perfect”为题写一篇演讲稿。要点如下：
1. 高三学生学习现状；
2. Positive attitude 的力量；
3. 表达祝福。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头已为你写好，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Positive Attitude Makes Perfect
Dear teachers and students,
I am so honored to have a chance to deliver a speech here,
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1.词汇积累
机会：chance →opportunity
屈服，让步：surrender →give in
记住：bear in mind →keep in mind
取得很大进步：make great progress →make great advances
2.句式拓展
宾语从句变同位语从句
原句：A positive attitude is a lighthouse guiding us to our destination and a warrior protecting us from failure, with which I firmly believe that we can have a bright future.
拓展句：A positive attitude is a lighthouse guiding us to our destination and a warrior protecting us from failure, with which I hold the firm belief that we can have a bright future.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am so honored to have a chance to deliver a speech here, where I want to share my journey of “Positive Attitude Makes Perfect”（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】What I bear in mind is to be positive about everything, which not only inspires me to brave difficulty in my way but also helps me make great progress.（运用了what引导的主语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句和并列连词“not only…but also…”连接两个并列结构）
5．（2023秋·天津·高三统考期末）假定你是晨光中学的李津，你校将举办以生态旅游为话题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“Let's Promote Ecotourism”为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1.当前趋势;
2.你的观点(良好旅游体验、生态友好可持续发展、促进经济发展等等);
3.你的倡议。
注意：
1.词数100以上;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3.开头已给出，不计入总数。
Let's Promote Ecotourism
Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I'd like to take this opportunity to talk about ecotourism.
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1.词汇积累：
目的：aim→purpose/intention
伤害：do harm to→be harmful to/harm
对……有益：benefit→be beneficial to
确保：make sure→ensure/guarantee
2.句式拓展：
合并简单句
原句：As for me, ecotourism is a true eco-friendly trip. With the aim of sustainable development, ecotourism calls on tourists to enjoy the scenery without damaging the natural environment.
拓展句：As for me, ecotourism is a true eco-friendly trip, which calls on tourists to enjoy the scenery without damaging the natural environment with the aim of sustainable development.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Commonly regarded as low impact travel to undisturbed places, ecotourism has become increasingly popular these year.(运用了过去分词作状语)
【高分句型2】
To protect our planet, I do hope we can live in harmony with nature and make sure that ecotourism can provide positive experiences for both visitors and hosts.(运用了动词不定式作目的状语和that引导宾语从句)
6．（2023·黑龙江哈尔滨·哈尔滨市第六中学校校考一模）假设你是红星中学的李华。近期，你校正在开展“捐献一本书，奉献一份爱”的主题活动，以帮助贫困地区的孩子体会阅读的乐趣。你将作为学生代表面向交换生进行英文演讲，号召大家积极参与活动。演讲内容如下：
1. 活动简介；
2. 活动意义；
3. 发出号召。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear fellow schoolmates,
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1.词汇积累
堆积：pile up→ heap up
参与：participate in→ take part in
强烈的爱：a burning passion→ an intense love
致力于：Dedicated to→ Devoted to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Dedicated to helping children in poverty-stricken areas to enjoy the fun of reading, this activity is worth your attention.
拓展句：Because it is dedicated to helping children in poverty-stricken areas to enjoy the fun of reading, this activity is worth your attention.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Dedicated to helping children in poverty-stricken areas to enjoy the fun of reading, this activity is worth your attention.（运用了过去分词导语充当句子原因状语）
【高分句型2】Books, however, can better link them with the world, igniting their passion for knowledge and inspiring them with hope.（运用了现在分词短语充当伴随状语）
7．（2023·四川凉山·统考二模）假定你是李华, 你校下周即将举行成人礼仪式，你有幸被选为学生代表发言，请用英语写一篇发言稿，主要内容如下：1. 成人礼的意义；2. 感恩老师；3. 告别同学并祝福。
注意：字数100左右。 参考词汇：the coming-of-age ceremony 成人礼仪式
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1. 词汇积累：
选择：choose→select
成年人：grown-up→adult
感谢、感激：gratitude→appreciation
旅行：journey→tour
拥抱：embrace→hug
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I'm honored to be chosen as the speaker of the coming-of-age ceremony on behalf of our classmates.
拓展句：I'm honored that I am chosen as the speaker of the coming-of-age ceremony on behalf of our classmates.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The ceremony is a grand occasion when we are announced to be grown-up, who must take on the responsibility of our home and country as an adult.（运用了以关系副词when引导的限制性定语从句和以关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句。）
【高分句型2】 Upon our graduation, what pops up from my deepest heart is the endless gratitude for your company during my facing different challenges in the past three years.（运用了以连接代词what引导的主语从句。）
8．（2023·河南·校联考模拟预测）你校将于下周举办题为I have a dream的英语演讲比赛，请你准备一篇演讲稿。内容包括：
1. 你的梦想；
2. 实现梦想的措施。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I have a dream
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1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→glad/delighted
确信： be sure →make sure
为了：in order to→so as to
放弃：give up→abandon
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：From now on, I will try my best to read as many books as I can in order to broaden my horizons.
拓展句：From now on, I will try my best to read as many books as I can for the purpose that I can broaden my horizons.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am sure that everyone has his or her dream. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Our dreams are like a lighthouse, without which we might get lost in our lives.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3]Though difficult it might be, I will never give up until my dream comes true. (运用了倒装句)
9．（2023·青海西宁·统考一模）假定你是李华，你校英语角将举办主题为“Sharing”的英语沙龙活动，并特邀你在活动中发言。请你写一篇发言稿谈谈分享的益处。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone!
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All in all, sharing makes us have a better life. Thank you for listening!
1.词汇积累
紧张的：nervous→stressed
度过：tide over→get through
获得：regain→obtain
宝贵的：precious→valuable
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I often shared all the changes after the first exam with my new friends. The competitive atmosphere made me nervous.
拓展句：Although the competitive atmosphere made me nervous, I often shared all the changes after the first exam with my new friends.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I failed my world with low scores until my best friend put his hand on my shoulder. (运用了until引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] As I entered the third grade of junior high school, I was in a new class. (运用as引导时间状语从句)
10．（2023·陕西宝鸡·统考模拟预测）假设你是李华。近期，你校英语俱乐部将举办迎新派对，请你代表高三学长发言，向来自高一的新成员分享你的高中生活以及给他们的建议。请你根据以下要点写一篇发言稿。
1. 你的高中生活回忆；
2. 给高一新成员的建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good afternoon! My dear new friends,
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That's all! Thank you for your listening!
1.词汇积累
许多：lots of→a great number of
珍贵的，有价值的：precious →valuable
参加：participate in →take part in
获得：gain→acquire
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Actually, there are lots of precious memories in this school.
拓展句：Actually, there are lots of precious memories in this school, which make a deep impression on me and are unforgettable.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
But what I want to share most is my experience of being a member of the English Club.（运用了what 引导的主语从句）
【高分句型2】
During the last two years, I've participated in many interesting and meaningful activities, such as English speech competition, from which I've not only gained knowledge and skills, but also made some friends.（运用了介词+关系代词引导的非限定性定语从句）
