专题03提纲作文高分宝典之活动报道
目录
1.三年高考考情透析，把握高考风向标；
2.评分标准早知道，明确得分失分点；
3.高分技巧心中有，“一式、两头、三写、四关”；
4.素材宝库赋能，句型模板全面掌握；
5.高考真题精讲，写作思路一目了然；
6.名校模拟提升，好题新题举一反三。
新高考写作第一节的命题形式主要是提纲式作文，主要文体形式包括投稿征文、演讲稿、通知、倡议书、活动介绍、人物介绍、日记/周记或书信等。作文所涉及的话题贴近学生生活，富有时代气息，体现了新课程标准的要求，能唤起考生强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。
年份 卷区 命题形式 话题
2023年 浙江卷1月 提纲类 校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动
一、评分细则
1.本题总分为15分，分五个档次进行评分。
2.评分时应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。具体为：
(1)对于内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。
(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4.评分时还应注意：
(1)词数少于60的，酌情扣分。
(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。书写较差，以致影响交际的将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(13-15分)：能写明全部要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达无误。
第四档(10-12分)：能写明全部或绝大部分要点，语言有少量错误，行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚。
第三档(7-9分)：能写明基本要点，语言虽有较多错误，但能基本达意。
第二档(4-6分)：能写出部分要点，语言错误多，影响意思表达。
第一档(1-3分)：只能写出一两个要点，里面错误很多，只有个别句子正确。
零分：未作答，所写内容无法评判；所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。
总之，在写活动报道时，考生应该注意“有话好好说”：体现出词语的魅力，展示精彩的语句；“有话慢慢说”：要点齐全，叙述从容，运用一定的过渡词语。平时注意积累并背诵各种写作素材的“万能模板”并学会灵活运用，这样才能在有限的时间内提升写作能力。在考场上挥洒自如，如鱼得水。
根据考生书面表达常见错误及评卷要求，我们总结出行之有效的“一式、两头、三写、四关”高分技巧，即写对格式、写好两头、写美卷面、破关夺隘。
一式：写对格式 确定主题，记住报道的基本格式和特点。
两头：写好两头 要求灵活运用熟悉的句式结构和表达手法，使文章开头和结尾的表达生动准确，引人入胜，耐人寻味。
三写：写美卷面 行文时书写规范化，力求卷面整洁美观。单词的拼写、字母的大小写符合英语书写要求。
四关：破关夺隘 以主题为纲，进一步思考其内涵和外延，联系自己的学习、生活实际，凸显时代性。突破内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关以及习惯表达关。
报道是记叙文的一种，其特点是以事实为依据，对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。语言要准确、简练、通俗易懂。还要明确时态，一般是对过去事件的报道，所以多用一般过去时。
时态： 一般过去时
写作结构：首段即导语，集中阐释所报道事件的来龙去脉，要讲清what、when、where和who。
主体详细描写所报道时间的起因，经过和结果
结语对该事件进行简要总结或评论
【开头黄金表达要记牢】
1.To enhance mutual understanding , today we had an online class with Hampton School, our sister school in the UK , introducing our traditional festivals to each other .
为了增进相互了解，今天我们与英国的姐妹学校汉普顿学校进行了在线课程，介绍了我们的传统节日。
2.In order to enrich our campus life , our school organized a 5 km cross - country running race last Sunday .
为了丰富我们的校园生活，我校于上周日组织了一场5公里越野跑比赛。
3.An activity , whose theme was protecting the environment / with the theme of protecting the environment , was held by the Students ' Union .
学生会举办了一场以保护环境为主题的活动。
4.In order to raise students' awareness of earthquake emergency evacuation, all the students, with the guide of the teachers, engaged in an evacuation drill organized by our school in the school playground.
为了提高同学们的地震应急疏散意识，全体同学在老师的带领下，在学校操场上组织了一次疏散演习。
5.Aiming to build up health, students from HongXing Middle School participated in a mountain-climbing activity organized by the Students' Union last Monday morning.
为了增强体质，上周一上午，红星中学的学生参加了由学生会组织的登山活动。
6.Organized by our school, all the students paid a visit to Xiwang Agricultural Ecology Garden on the morning of April 29th, aiming to savor the experience of nature and broaden their horizons.
4月29日上午，我校组织全体同学参观了希望农业生态园，体验自然，开阔视野。
7.On arriving at the destination, students, guided by the owner, were taken to admire the breathtaking beauty of various plants, followed by a quiz about distinguishing the name of the plants. After that, they embarked on operating the planting machine by themselves.
到达目的地后，在厂主的带领下，学生们被带着欣赏各种植物令人惊叹的美丽，然后进行分辨这些植物名称的小测验。从那以后，他们开始自己操作种植机器。
【结尾画龙点睛】
1.Many students wish that they could pay a visit to the space station one day and do the wonderful experiments there in person .
许多学生希望有一天他们能去太空站，亲自做美妙的实验。
2.It was through this activity that we fully realized that the awareness of respecting the old should be raised .
正是通过这次活动，我们充分认识到应该提高尊老意识。
3.This activity proved to be a success, strengthening our willpower and making us more confident about our future study.
这次活动很成功，增强了我们的意志力，让我们对未来的学习更有信心。
4.Through this activity, students gained a better understanding of modern agriculture, broadening their horizons and raised their awareness of green life as well.
通过这次活动，同学们对现代农业有了更深入的了解，开阔了眼界，也提高了对绿色生活的认识。
5.This activity benefited students a lot, helping them to know the society better and how to help people around.
这次活动让学生们帮助他们更好地了解社会，帮助周围的人，受益匪浅。
6.Undoubtedly / Unquestionably, this activity proved meaningful and beneficial for students to get involved in.
毫无疑问，对学生来说这次活动是非常有意义的。
7.By uniting their purposes and efforts to tackle concrete project, students become increasingly aware of the significance of cooperation and teamwork.
通过联合他们的目的和努力来解决具体的项目，学生们越来越意识到合作和团队合作的重要性。
写作模板
1、活动类
（标题）
（导语）In order to encourage the students to _______. Our school organized a _______ on _______（时间）at _______(地点），which _______.
（正文）It was a _______ day（介绍天气）. First of all,_______. Then_______（介绍活动的过程）.Finally, _______.
（评价）_________ benefited us a lot. Not only did it_______, it also _______. What a (n) _______activity!
2、事故类
（标题）
（导语）It is reported that a _______（事件）broke out on/at_______（地点）_______(时间）.
（正文）It was a _______ day（介绍天气）. First of all,_______. Then_______（介绍活动的过程）.
（评价）From the report, we learned a lot. Not only did it _______, it also _______.As a result, we should improve awareness doing sth.
(2023浙江一月)上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1.活动的过程；
2.收获与感想。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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【满分范文欣赏】
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organized by our Students’ Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristic
and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
1. 词汇积累
参与：participate in → attend
开始：begin → start
观察，调查：observe → survey
震惊：strike → astonish/surprise
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.
拓展句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union, which benefited me a lot.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句）
1．（2023·新疆·校联考二模）假定你是校英语报的记者，上周末你校举办了“校园十佳歌手”大赛。请你为校英文报写一篇报道。
内容包括：1.活动主题及参加人员；
2.活动详情；
3.活动反响。
注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；
2.可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。
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【满分范文欣赏】
Campus Top Ten Singers Competition, whose theme was to enrich school life and give full play to youth as well as their positive outlook, was launched last weekend. We students and all teaching staff gave an active response as well as a big applause to this event.
Those who are enthusiastic about singing participated in the competition, which was full of climax and splendor. The contestants’ singing styles are diverse, expressing their love for music and their declaration of youth. After fierce competition, the top ten singers came out in public. It not only opens a grand event for teachers and students but also attracts students to speak out for their dreams. We students will continue to follow the beat of youth and feel the life of culture and art.
1.词汇积累
主题：theme→subject
反应：response→reaction
充满：be full of→be filled with
各种各样的：diverse→varied
2.句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句：After fierce competition, the top ten singers came out in public.
拓展句：It was after fierce competition that the top ten singers came out in public.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Campus Top Ten Singers Competition, whose theme was to enrich school life and give full play to youth as well as their positive outlook, was launched last weekend. (运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] The contestants’ singing styles are diverse, expressing their love for music and their declaration of youth. (运用了现在分词作状语)
2．（2023·甘肃·统考三模）假定你是李华，上周末你校举办了为期两天的美食节。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.活动准备；
2.活动现场概述；
3.活动反响。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
A Two-day Food Festival
An annual food festival was held last weekend in our school.
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【满分范文欣赏】
A Two-day Food Festival
An annual food festival was held last weekend in our school. Before the festival, every one of us launched into setting up tents and posting our menus.
There’s nothing better than the senses we experienced at a food festival—the rows of food trucks and tents as far as the eye could see, the rhythmic sound we heard from cooking, the smells of dozens of delicious food being prepared around us and of course the taste of everything we could stomach. However, what impressed me most was in fact the cultures behind the food vividly introduced by the cooks. Also, wonderful background music and colorful flags added to the pleasure of the occasion.
It was everyone’s joint efforts that made the activity such a big success and it’s the cultures behind the food that made the festival special. Every one of us sang high praise for the event.
1.词汇积累
开始着手、积极投入：launch into → put into
极目望去：as far as the eye could see → in sight
美味的：delicious → tasty
赞不绝口：sing high praise for → speak highly of
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：However, what impressed me most was in fact the cultures behind the food vividly introduced by the cooks.
拓展句：However, what left the biggest impression on me was the vivid introduction of the cultures behind the food by the cooks.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】However, what impressed me most was in fact the cultures behind the food vividly introduced by the cooks.（运用了what引导的主语从句，过去分词短语作后置定语）
【高分句型2】It was everyone’s joint efforts that made the activity such a big success and it’s the cultures behind the food that made the festival special.（运用了强调句型，“make+宾语+补语”结构）
3．（2023·河北石家庄·正定一中校考模拟预测）上周你校组织了“捐赠旧书”的主题活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.活动的目的；
2.活动的主要内容；
3.活动反响。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
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【满分范文欣赏】
Last week, our school organized an activity themed “donating old books”, which was intended to encourage students to make the best use of old books.
Thanks to the participation of a majority of students, a large number of old books were collected and then donated to a school in a small village, which showed deep and sincere gratitude for our generous act.
The activity turned out to be a great success. Almost all the participants spoke highly of the activity because they thought it raised their awareness of cherishing books and spreading kindness.
1.词汇积累
目的是：be intended to→ be aimed at
鼓励：encourage →inspire
充分利用：make the best use of →make full use of
高度评价：speak highly of→ think highly of
2.句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句：The activity turned out to be a great success.
拓展句：It is the activity that turned out to be a great success.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Last week, our school organized an activity themed “donating old books”, which was intended to encourage students to make the best use of old books.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Almost all the participants spoke highly of the activity because they thought it raised their awareness of cherishing books and spreading kindness.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
4．（2023·山东潍坊·统考模拟预测）你校最近举办了为期一个月的读书节活动，请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1.活动过程；
2.收获与感想。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Reading Festival
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【满分范文欣赏】
Our school held a Reading Festival that lasted a month, which turned out to be a great success.
We read a lot, from poems in both Chinese and English to classics all over the world. The reading opened the doors to different styles of the writers as well as different cultures. We also organized a book exchange to share our books and thoughts with each other. Finally,a wonderful show was held in the school hall, where we showed our achievements in various forms including recitations and play performances.
The Reading Festival was truly a fruitful activity. Not only did we gain more knowledge,but also it enriched our school life and inspired us to keep on reading.
1.词汇积累
重大的：great→ significant
不相同的：different → contrasting
展览：show→ exhibition
活动：activity→ pursuit
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：The reading opened the doors to different styles of the writers as well as different cultures.拓展句：The reading exposed us to different styles of the writers as well as different cultures.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Our school held a Reading Festival that lasted a month, which turned out to be a great success.（非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Not only did we gain more knowledge,but also it enriched our school life and inspired us to keep on reading.（not only…but also结构）
5．（2023·湖北·校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华，上周你班举行了一场主题为“人工智能(AI)与英语学习”的讨论，请为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.讨论目的;
2.讨论内容;
3.你的收获。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
AI and English Learning
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【满分范文欣赏】
AI and English Learning
In order to explore the impact of AI on English learning and exchange ideas about its advantages and disadvantages, our class hosted a discussion on “AI and English Learning” last week.
Many students noted the potential benefits of AI, such as providing personalized learning and instant feedback. However, some also expressed concerns about the negative effects on traditional teaching methods and interpersonal communication.
From my perspective, this was a thought—provoking discussion which inspired me to ponder the role of AI in English learning and how we can strike a balance between technology and human communication.
Overall, this discussion highlighted the need for continued examination of AI’s role in English learning as we strive to create effective and engaging learning environments.
1.词汇积累：
为了：in order to→in a gesture to/with the aim of
在我看来：from my perspective→as far as I am concerned/as I see it
强调：highlight→lay emphasis on/stress
影响：impact→influence/effect
2.句式拓展：
简单句变复合句
原句：In order to explore the impact of Al on English learning and exchange ideas about its advantages and disadvantages, our class hosted a discussion on “AI and English Learning” last week.
拓展句：A discussion on “AI and English Learning” was held by our class, with the aim of exploring how AI has an impact on English learning and exchanging ideas about its advantages and disadvantages.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】From my perspective, this was a thought—provoking discussion which inspired me to ponder the role of AI in English learning and how we can strike a balance between technology and human communication.(运用了which引导定语从句和how引导宾语从句。)
【高分句型2】
Overall, this discussion highlighted the need for continued examination of AI’s role in English learning as we strive to create effective and engaging learning environments.(运用了as引导状语从句。)
6．（2023·陕西西安·西安中学校考模拟预测）假定你是校英文报的记者李华，上周五你校学生会在体育场刚举办了一场“慈善义卖”(Charity Sale)活动，请你写一篇英语报道。要点如下：
1. 活动目的和过程;
2. 活动反响及意义。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【满分范文欣赏】
Aimed at helping the students from poverty-stricken areas, the Student Union launched a grand Charity Sale last Friday at our school’s stadium, which witnessed the kindness and generosity of all the students and teachers present.
As scheduled, the activity began at 3:00 p.m., lasting three hours. What came first was a moving speech delivered by a volunteer, mirroring the authentic life of the needy students and kindling the kindness. What subsequently followed was the exciting sales section where many second-hand items, ranging from electronic devices to old fancy clothes, were sold at a pretty low price. So enthusiastic were our schoolmates and teachers that all goods were snapped up within hours. All the money raised would be sent to the Red Cross and distributed to those needy students.
This Charity Sale proved successful and meaningful. Not only did we students promote our social responsibilities, but we also understood every bit of our kindness could pile up enormous strength.
1.词汇积累
见证：witness →see
按计划：as scheduled →as planned
令人感动的：moving →touching
证明是：prove →turn out
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：All the money raised would be sent to the Red Cross and distributed to those needy students.
拓展句：All the money which was raised would be sent to the Red Cross and distributed to those needy students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Aimed at helping the students from poverty-stricken areas, the Student Union launched a grand Charity Sale last Friday at our school’s stadium, which witnessed the kindness and generosity of all the students and teachers present.（运用了过去分词短语作状语以及which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】So enthusiastic were our schoolmates and teachers that all goods were snapped up within hours.（运用了so…that…引导结果状语从句以及倒装句）
7．（2023·四川成都·成都七中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华。近期，你所在的城市向中学生发起了“最美汉字”投票活动。请阅读下面一则新闻报道，以“The Most Beautiful Chinese Character”为题，向学校 New Babel 英文杂志投稿。内容包括：
1.简要概括这则新闻；
2.简述你最想推荐的汉字及理由；
3.谈谈你对该活动的感想。
注意：
词数 100 词左右。
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
The Most Beautiful Chinese Character
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【满分范文欣赏】
The Most Beautiful Chinese Character
Recently, some high school students have conducted a poll to choose the most beautiful Chinese character. Among tens of thousands of characters, “ren, ai, yi, meng, xiao” are strongly recommended. Obviously, most students think the five characters carry typical Chinese culture in terms of traditional beliefs and core values concerning morality and ethics.
Of these characters, I put meng on the top of my list. Holding meng, which means best wishes for the future, one is not only to seek for opportunities for a better life, but also to create brand-new things for people around the world.
Personally, Chinese characters are so charming that they are treasures of human cultures. With deep love for Chinese culture, we should strive to promote them to the world.
1.词汇积累
组织，进行：conduct →carry out
显然：obviously →apparently
关于：concerning →with regard to
在我看来：personally →from my point of view
2.句型拓展
合并句子
原句：Among tens of thousands of characters, “ren, ai, yi, meng, xiao” are strongly recommended. Obviously, most students think the five characters carry typical Chinese culture in terms of traditional beliefs and core values concerning morality and ethics.
拓展句：Among tens of thousands of characters, “ren, ai, yi, meng, xiao” are strongly recommended, which most students think carry typical Chinese culture in terms of traditional beliefs and core values concerning morality and ethics.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Holding meng, which means best wishes for the future, one is not only to seek for opportunities for a better life, but also to create brand-new things for people around the world.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Obviously, most students think the five characters carry typical Chinese culture in terms of traditional beliefs and core values concerning morality and ethics.（运用了that引导宾语从句，that已省略）
8．（2023·广东广州·统考二模）为庆祝4月20日中文语言日，你校举办了主题活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内 容包括：
1. 活动内容；
2. 活动反响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Chinese Language Day Celebrations on Campus
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【满分范文欣赏1】
Chinese Language Day Celebrations on Campus
April 20, the birthday of Chinese characters’ creator Cang Jie, witnessed the great success of our school’s first ever Chinese Language Day Celebrations.
On that day, more than 20 events were organized around the campus, offering the fullest experience of the beauty of our mother tongue. Among those most popular events were the live Chinese calligraphy show from our teachers, and the paper-cutting contest, with participants demonstrating delicately designed patterns of Chinese idioms. What won the most applause was the contest of tongue twisters, attracting visiting foreign students to showcase their wonderful oral Chinese.
The celebrations have had a positive effect on every participant. “Chinese language is so beautiful and interesting, I’ll definitely carry on my study into it,” one visiting student from France told the reporter.
【满分范文欣赏2】
Chinese Language Day Celebrations on Campus
To help students fully understand and appreciate the beauty of our mother tongue, our school held series of celebrations on April 20th, the Chinese Language Day. Participants include language experts and all the school teachers and students.
The celebrations include various wonderful activities. Language experts were invited to write Chinese calligraphy on the scene, winning whole-hearted praises from the audience. There were also speeches given by our teachers on how the Chinese language had thrived all the way through into modern times. The most impressive part was the students’ poetry recitation competition, fully displaying the rhythm and image of Chinese literary works.
Our Chinese Language Day Celebrations proved to be a huge success. Participants thought highly of it, saying that the celebrations helped them see into our language in a more comprehensive and deeper angle.
1.词汇积累
创造者：creator→inventor
母语：mother tongue→native tongue/mother language
比赛：contest→game/match/competition
展现：showcase→show/demonstrate/display
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：On that day, more than 20 events were organized around the campus, offering the fullest experience of the beauty of our mother tongue.
拓展句：On that day, more than 20 events were organized around the campus, which offered the fullest experience of the beauty of our mother tongue.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
Among those most popular events were the live Chinese calligraphy show from our teachers, and the paper-cutting contest, with participants demonstrating delicately designed patterns of Chinese idioms.(使用了with的复合结构)
【高分句型2】What won the most applause was the contest of tongue twisters, attracting visiting foreign students to showcase their wonderful oral Chinese. (使用了What连接主语从句)
9．（2023春·河南焦作·高三博爱县第一中学校考开学考试）为了让学生近距离接近大自然，上周六你们班组织了一次春游踏青活动，请你写一篇文章报道此次活动，内容包括：
1. 具体的活动安排；
2. 活动的意义；
3. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 词数不少于100字；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【满分范文欣赏】
A Spring Outing
Spring is a good time for outing. Aiming to understand each other better and build up our bodies, our class had a spring outing last Saturday.
As scheduled, we gathered together at 8: 30 am at the gate of our school. We went to our destination by bus, laughing and singing all the way. Much to our delight, the trip involved mountain climbing as well as a picnic. Hardly had we reached the top of the mountain when we enjoyed an awesome view of the whole city.
Exhausted as we were on the way back to school, we all regarded this outing as an unforgettable experience, for it not only made us get close to nature with fresh air and fantastic scenery, but also enhance the friendship between us students and promote our mutual cooperation.
1.词汇积累
旨在：aim to do→be intended to do
包含：involve→include
让人惊叹的：awesome→amazing
看待：regard→view
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Aiming to understand each other better and build up our bodies, our class had a spring outing last Saturday.
拓展句：Our class had a spring outing last Saturday, which is aim to understand each other better and build up our bodies,
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Hardly had we reached the top of the mountain when we enjoyed an awesome view of the whole city. (运用了部分倒装)
[高分句型2] Exhausted as we were on the way back to school, we all regarded this outing as an unforgettable experience, for it not only made us get close to nature with fresh air and fantastic scenery, but also enhance the friendship between us students and promote our mutual cooperation. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句的倒装结构和not only...but also...句式)
10．（2023·重庆·统考模拟预测）上周末你校地理社(The Geography Society)组织了主题为探索城市的City Walk 活动，请你给校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动的过程；
2. 收获与感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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【满分范文欣赏】
Last weekend The Geography Society hosted a City Walk entitled “Exploring Chongqing.” This activity provided a rare/golden opportunity for participants to delve into the rich cultural heritage of this historic city in China.
The event kicked off with an informative introduction to the city’s rich history and cultural heritage, followed by a guided tour of its historic streets and alleyways. Participant explored traditional local markets, marveled at the stunning architecture of traditional residential buildings, and gained insight into the daily life of Chongqing’s residents. The city is also famous for its spicy cuisine, and participants had a chance to taste the local flavors.
Not only was the event a fantastic opportunity to learn about the city’s history and culture, but it also allowed participants to fully immerse themselves in the local atmosphere and connect with the local community. The City Walk was a great success, with all participants thoroughly enjoying themselves and gaining valuable knowledge and memories.
1.词汇积累
命名：entitle →name
机会：chance → opportunity
非常：thoroughly →very
玩得愉快：enjoy oneself → have fun
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last weekend The Geography Society hosted a City Walk entitled “Exploring Chongqing.”
拓展句：Last weekend The Geography Society hosted a City Walk which was entitled “Exploring Chongqing.”
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The City Walk was a great success, with all participants thoroughly enjoying themselves and gaining valuable knowledge and memories.（运用了with复合结构）
【高分句型2】Not only was the event a fantastic opportunity to learn about the city’s history and culture, but it also allowed participants to fully immerse themselves in the local atmosphere and connect with the local community.（运用了部分倒装结构）专题03提纲作文高分宝典之活动报道
目录
1.三年高考考情透析，把握高考风向标；
2.评分标准早知道，明确得分失分点；
3.高分技巧心中有，“一式、两头、三写、四关”；
4.素材宝库赋能，句型模板全面掌握；
5.高考真题精讲，写作思路一目了然；
6.名校模拟提升，好题新题举一反三。
新高考写作第一节的命题形式主要是提纲式作文，主要文体形式包括投稿征文、演讲稿、通知、倡议书、活动介绍、人物介绍、日记/周记或书信等。作文所涉及的话题贴近学生生活，富有时代气息，体现了新课程标准的要求，能唤起考生强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。
年份 卷区 命题形式 话题
2023年 浙江卷1月 提纲类 校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动
一、评分细则
1.本题总分为15分，分五个档次进行评分。
2.评分时应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。具体为：
(1)对于内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。
(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4.评分时还应注意：
(1)词数少于60的，酌情扣分。
(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。书写较差，以致影响交际的将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(13-15分)：能写明全部要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达无误。
第四档(10-12分)：能写明全部或绝大部分要点，语言有少量错误，行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚。
第三档(7-9分)：能写明基本要点，语言虽有较多错误，但能基本达意。
第二档(4-6分)：能写出部分要点，语言错误多，影响意思表达。
第一档(1-3分)：只能写出一两个要点，里面错误很多，只有个别句子正确。
零分：未作答，所写内容无法评判；所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。
总之，在写活动报道时，考生应该注意“有话好好说”：体现出词语的魅力，展示精彩的语句；“有话慢慢说”：要点齐全，叙述从容，运用一定的过渡词语。平时注意积累并背诵各种写作素材的“万能模板”并学会灵活运用，这样才能在有限的时间内提升写作能力。在考场上挥洒自如，如鱼得水。
根据考生书面表达常见错误及评卷要求，我们总结出行之有效的“一式、两头、三写、四关”高分技巧，即写对格式、写好两头、写美卷面、破关夺隘。
一式：写对格式 确定主题，记住报道的基本格式和特点。
两头：写好两头 要求灵活运用熟悉的句式结构和表达手法，使文章开头和结尾的表达生动准确，引人入胜，耐人寻味。
三写：写美卷面 行文时书写规范化，力求卷面整洁美观。单词的拼写、字母的大小写符合英语书写要求。
四关：破关夺隘 以主题为纲，进一步思考其内涵和外延，联系自己的学习、生活实际，凸显时代性。突破内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关以及习惯表达关。
报道是记叙文的一种，其特点是以事实为依据，对人的经历或事实给予明确的、实事求是的报道。语言要准确、简练、通俗易懂。还要明确时态，一般是对过去事件的报道，所以多用一般过去时。
时态： 一般过去时
写作结构：首段即导语，集中阐释所报道事件的来龙去脉，要讲清what、when、where和who。
主体详细描写所报道时间的起因，经过和结果
结语对该事件进行简要总结或评论
【开头黄金表达要记牢】
1.To enhance mutual understanding , today we had an online class with Hampton School, our sister school in the UK , introducing our traditional festivals to each other .
为了增进相互了解，今天我们与英国的姐妹学校汉普顿学校进行了在线课程，介绍了我们的传统节日。
2.In order to enrich our campus life , our school organized a 5 km cross - country running race last Sunday .
为了丰富我们的校园生活，我校于上周日组织了一场5公里越野跑比赛。
3.An activity , whose theme was protecting the environment / with the theme of protecting the environment , was held by the Students ' Union .
学生会举办了一场以保护环境为主题的活动。
4.In order to raise students' awareness of earthquake emergency evacuation, all the students, with the guide of the teachers, engaged in an evacuation drill organized by our school in the school playground.
为了提高同学们的地震应急疏散意识，全体同学在老师的带领下，在学校操场上组织了一次疏散演习。
5.Aiming to build up health, students from HongXing Middle School participated in a mountain-climbing activity organized by the Students' Union last Monday morning.
为了增强体质，上周一上午，红星中学的学生参加了由学生会组织的登山活动。
6.Organized by our school, all the students paid a visit to Xiwang Agricultural Ecology Garden on the morning of April 29th, aiming to savor the experience of nature and broaden their horizons.
4月29日上午，我校组织全体同学参观了希望农业生态园，体验自然，开阔视野。
7.On arriving at the destination, students, guided by the owner, were taken to admire the breathtaking beauty of various plants, followed by a quiz about distinguishing the name of the plants. After that, they embarked on operating the planting machine by themselves.
到达目的地后，在厂主的带领下，学生们被带着欣赏各种植物令人惊叹的美丽，然后进行分辨这些植物名称的小测验。从那以后，他们开始自己操作种植机器。
【结尾画龙点睛】
1.Many students wish that they could pay a visit to the space station one day and do the wonderful experiments there in person .
许多学生希望有一天他们能去太空站，亲自做美妙的实验。
2.It was through this activity that we fully realized that the awareness of respecting the old should be raised .
正是通过这次活动，我们充分认识到应该提高尊老意识。
3.This activity proved to be a success, strengthening our willpower and making us more confident about our future study.
这次活动很成功，增强了我们的意志力，让我们对未来的学习更有信心。
4.Through this activity, students gained a better understanding of modern agriculture, broadening their horizons and raised their awareness of green life as well.
通过这次活动，同学们对现代农业有了更深入的了解，开阔了眼界，也提高了对绿色生活的认识。
5.This activity benefited students a lot, helping them to know the society better and how to help people around.
这次活动让学生们帮助他们更好地了解社会，帮助周围的人，受益匪浅。
6.Undoubtedly / Unquestionably, this activity proved meaningful and beneficial for students to get involved in.
毫无疑问，对学生来说这次活动是非常有意义的。
7.By uniting their purposes and efforts to tackle concrete project, students become increasingly aware of the significance of cooperation and teamwork.
通过联合他们的目的和努力来解决具体的项目，学生们越来越意识到合作和团队合作的重要性。
写作模板
1、活动类
（标题）
（导语）In order to encourage the students to _______. Our school organized a _______ on _______（时间）at _______(地点），which _______.
（正文）It was a _______ day（介绍天气）. First of all,_______. Then_______（介绍活动的过程）.Finally, _______.
（评价）_________ benefited us a lot. Not only did it_______, it also _______. What a (n) _______activity!
2、事故类
（标题）
（导语）It is reported that a _______（事件）broke out on/at_______（地点）_______(时间）.
（正文）It was a _______ day（介绍天气）. First of all,_______. Then_______（介绍活动的过程）.
（评价）From the report, we learned a lot. Not only did it _______, it also _______.As a result, we should improve awareness doing sth.
(2023浙江一月)上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1.活动的过程；
2.收获与感想。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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1．（2023·新疆·校联考二模）假定你是校英语报的记者，上周末你校举办了“校园十佳歌手”大赛。请你为校英文报写一篇报道。
内容包括：1.活动主题及参加人员；
2.活动详情；
3.活动反响。
注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；
2.可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。
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2．（2023·甘肃·统考三模）假定你是李华，上周末你校举办了为期两天的美食节。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.活动准备；
2.活动现场概述；
3.活动反响。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
A Two-day Food Festival
An annual food festival was held last weekend in our school.
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3．（2023·河北石家庄·正定一中校考模拟预测）上周你校组织了“捐赠旧书”的主题活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.活动的目的；
2.活动的主要内容；
3.活动反响。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
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4．（2023·山东潍坊·统考模拟预测）你校最近举办了为期一个月的读书节活动，请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1.活动过程；
2.收获与感想。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Reading Festival
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5．（2023·湖北·校联考模拟预测）假定你是李华，上周你班举行了一场主题为“人工智能(AI)与英语学习”的讨论，请为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1.讨论目的;
2.讨论内容;
3.你的收获。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
AI and English Learning
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6．（2023·陕西西安·西安中学校考模拟预测）假定你是校英文报的记者李华，上周五你校学生会在体育场刚举办了一场“慈善义卖”(Charity Sale)活动，请你写一篇英语报道。要点如下：
1. 活动目的和过程;
2. 活动反响及意义。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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7．（2023·四川成都·成都七中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华。近期，你所在的城市向中学生发起了“最美汉字”投票活动。请阅读下面一则新闻报道，以“The Most Beautiful Chinese Character”为题，向学校 New Babel 英文杂志投稿。内容包括：
1.简要概括这则新闻；
2.简述你最想推荐的汉字及理由；
3.谈谈你对该活动的感想。
注意：
词数 100 词左右。
可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
The Most Beautiful Chinese Character
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8．（2023·广东广州·统考二模）为庆祝4月20日中文语言日，你校举办了主题活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内 容包括：
1. 活动内容；
2. 活动反响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Chinese Language Day Celebrations on Campus
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9．（2023春·河南焦作·高三博爱县第一中学校考开学考试）为了让学生近距离接近大自然，上周六你们班组织了一次春游踏青活动，请你写一篇文章报道此次活动，内容包括：
1. 具体的活动安排；
2. 活动的意义；
3. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 词数不少于100字；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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10．（2023·重庆·统考模拟预测）上周末你校地理社(The Geography Society)组织了主题为探索城市的City Walk 活动，请你给校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动的过程；
2. 收获与感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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