(共11张PPT)
应用文写作
假如你是李华,你的加拿大朋友Peter想在春节来中国旅游,让你为他推荐一个城市。请根据以下提示给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 推荐城市;
2. 推荐的原因。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
推荐信
1) 篇章布局(三段式写作)
Para 1: background(想来中国旅游)+writing purpose (推荐城市);
Para 2: reasons for your recommendation(what to recommend);
Para 3: open ending(祝愿和希望/ 愿意提供更多帮助或信息)。
【任务分析】
完成背景信息和要点1
完成要点2(注意层次性和逻辑性,详略得当)
[任务分析]
2) 句子结构--
P1-background+writing purpose
非谓语开篇/情感式开篇:Hearing that...., I'm writing .../ Delighted and excited to know..., I can't wait to...
P2-reasons for recommendation
地位/景点(典型景点)/收获好处:高级句型:非谓语/强调句/定语从句/ 名词性从句/倒装句/ withOC等.
P3-open ending
祝福希望:Wish.../ I do hope.../
P1-背景信息+写作目的
PARA 1: 情感导入式
高兴且兴奋地知道你计划在春节期间来中国旅游,我迫不及待向你推荐西安作为理想的目的地。
__________________ to know that you want to visit China during Spring Festival, I _________ ________recommend Xi’an as your ideal destination.
非谓语导入式
听说你计划在春节期间来中国旅游,我带着激动的心情,写信向你推荐西安作为你理想的旅游目的地。
_________ that you want to visit China during Spring Festival, I_________________________ to recommend Xi’an as your ideal destination.
Delighted and excited
can hardly
wait to
Knowing
am writing with excitement
PARA 2: 推荐原因
非谓语动词表达地理位置:Located in the center of China
【地理位置+中心句】位于中国中心,西安在国内外游客中享有极高的欢迎度,有着很多吸引人的风景点。
_________ in the central China, Xi’an enjoys great popularity among tourists __________ ________ with __________ attractive sights.
located
at home and
abroad
numerous
It was not until the 1970s that people in modern times knew about it.
【兵马俑介绍】尤其令人惊喜的是兵马俑。追溯到公元前3世纪,兵马俑由8000多个像真人士兵的复制品一样的雕塑组成。直到20世纪70年代,现代人类才知道它们。
完全倒装句
Especially amazing is the Terracotta Amry.
非谓语动词
Dating back to the third century BCE, the Terracotta Army is made up of over 8,000 statues as copies of real soldiers.
倒装句
Not unitil the 1970s did people in modern times know about it.
强调句
PARA 2: 推荐原因(值得推荐的兵马俑)
PARA 2: 推荐内容
非谓语+倒装句:When travelling in Xi’an, not only can you get a better understanding of this city but also enjoy delicious local snacks unique to Xi’an.
【总结+收获】当旅行在西安,你不仅能对这个古都有深入了解,挖掘其内在文化,而且还能享受到西安特有的美味当地小吃。
get a better understanding of its history.
deeply unearth the culture of this city.
have a great feast on local food...
当出现两个或者两个以上并列元素表达时,可采用:Not only...., but also...(倒装句)
PARA 3:祝福结尾/ 期待回信
Wish you an unforgettable and meaningful trip in China.
Wish you have fun travelling in China.
祝你拥有一个难忘且有意义的中国之行。
如果你对我的推荐有任何疑问,不要犹豫/ 随时联系我哦。
题目要求有祝福:
Don’t hesitate/ Feel free to contact me/ Drop me a line if you have any problems concerning this recommendation.
题目没有要求祝福:
试水作文
Excited to know you intend to travel in China during Spring Festival, I’m writing to recommend Xi’an as your ideal destination.
Located in central China, Xi’an has numerous attractive sites. The Shaanxi History Museum, Known as Chinese treasure houses, is a must-go sight that you may look forward to. Especially amazing is the Terracotta Amry, which is made up of over 8,000 statues as copies of real soldiers. I do believe this trip in Xi'an will give you a deep understanding of Chinese history and rich culture.
Wish you an unforgettable trip in China.
Dear Peter,
Yours,
Li Hua