2024届高考英语二轮复习读后续写个人成长类--假发女孩重获新生 讲义
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续写：友谊让假发女孩重获新生
Donna is my sister, and I had always considered her beautiful. Our father called her his princess, and in high school, she was known as the school babe. Our parents were protective of us, particularly our father, who kept close watch over the friends she made.
唐娜是我的妹妹，我一直认为她很漂亮。我们的父亲称她为他的公主，在高中时，她被称为学校的宝贝。我们的父母保护我们，尤其是我们的父亲，他密切关注着她结交的朋友。
One Saturday in April, a boy invited Donna to a park with four other friends. Unfortunately, on their way to the park, their car crashed into a guardrail and flipped over three times before it came to a stop on its roof. Donna was pulled from the car and rushed to the hospital without delay.
四月的一个星期六，一个男孩邀请唐娜和其他四个朋友去公园。不幸的是，在去公园的路上，他们的车撞上了护栏，翻了三次，然后停在了车顶上。唐娜被从车里拖了出来，立即被送往医院。
Donna was in the hospital for two weeks. Many of her friends went to see her, especially Claudia, who was there a lot. However, Mom and Dad never liked Claudia. I don't really know why. They just didn't like her being around.
唐娜在医院住了两个星期。她的许多朋友都去看她，尤其是克劳迪娅，她经常去。然而，爸爸妈妈从来都不喜欢克劳迪娅。我真的不知道为什么。他们只是不喜欢她在身边。
Donna returned home with the entire top half of her head shaved. She had hundreds of stitches （缝线）, some of which came across her forehead and between her left eye and eyebrow. Knowing Donna's concern for her appearance, Mom found her a human hair wig （假发） that perfectly matched her hair.
唐娜回到家时，整个上半部分都剃光了。她缝了几百针(缝线）, 其中一些穿过了她的前额，在左眼和眉毛之间。妈妈知道唐娜很在意自己的外表，就给她找了一顶假发(假发）与她的头发非常相配。
Donna finally recovered and went back to school. But she never felt good in school. There was a very loud-mouthed, self-centered girl in Donna's class who took great pleasure in teasing her. This girl, seated behind Donna, would pull slightly on Donna's wig and mockingly said, "Hey, Wiggy, let's see your scars（伤疤）". Then she would laugh.
唐娜终于康复并回到学校。但她在学校的感觉从来都不好。唐娜的班上有一个声音很大、以自我为中心的女孩，她非常喜欢取笑她。这个女孩坐在唐娜身后，轻轻地扯着唐娜的假发，嘲讽地说：“嘿，威吉，让我们看看你的伤疤(伤疤）”。然后她会笑。
Donna endured this mistreatment in silence until the day she told Claudia. From then on, Claudia kept a close eye on my sister, preventing anyone from bothering her. There was something about Claudia that was frightening, even to the worst kids in school. Nobody messed with her. Unfortunately, though, Claudia wasn't always around, and the teasing and name-calling continued.
唐娜默默地忍受着这种虐待，直到她告诉克劳迪娅的那一天。从那时起，克劳迪娅一直密切关注着我妹妹，不让任何人打扰她。克劳迪娅身上有些可怕的东西，甚至对学校里最糟糕的孩子来说也是如此。没人惹她。然而，不幸的是，克劳迪娅并不总是在身边，嘲笑和谩骂仍在继续。
Paragraph1: One day, Claudia came to our home with a special surprise.
Paragraph2: Donna and Claudia wore their wigs for over a year.
故事大意：
Donna被家人和同龄人认为很漂亮，她的父亲特别保护她。四月的一个星期六，唐娜和一个男孩以及其他四个朋友去公园。他们的车撞上护栏翻了个身，最后撞到了车顶上。唐娜被从车上拖下来后立即被紧急送往医院。她在医院住了两个星期，尤其是很多朋友都来看望她。她的父母不喜欢克劳迪娅，原因不明。唐娜回家时剃了上半个光头，戴上了假发。回到学校，唐娜被一个嘲笑她的假发的同学取笑。克劳迪娅开始保护唐娜，阻止其他人取笑她。尽管有克劳迪娅的保护，但当她不在身边时，玩笑仍在继续。
续写情节发展：
First paragraph:
(1) The surprise was that Claudia also shaved off her own hair.
(2) Our family, especially Donna's reaction.
(3) Claudia explained to Donna the reason for doing so.
(4) The next day, when the two of them went to school with wigs, most of their classmates and teachers reacted.
(5) The girl who kept mocking Donna stopped her behavior and explained the reason.
Second paragraph:
(1) Donna's change in mindset during this period is to regain confidence and become stronger.
(2) One day, Donna mustered up the courage to enter the campus without wearing a wig and calmly accepted the gaze of others.
(3) The change in my parents' perception of Claudia.
(4) After this incident, Donna and Claudia's friendship deepened.
参考答案：
Paragraph1:
One day, Claudia came to our home with a special surprise. Sensing how terrible Donna felt about her hair, she had shaved off her own beautiful long brown hair to inspire Donna and put herself in Donna’s shoes. At the sight of the scene,Donna was deeply struck by her warm move.The next day, they went shopping, selecting identical blond and brown wigs. When they went to school as usual, Claudia was ready for being made fun of by other students. People who are ready to tease my sister know they will provoke Claudia. Soon, this news quickly spread throughout the campus.
Paragraph2:
Donna and Claudia wore their wigs for over a year. They patiently waited until they felt at ease showing their natural hair. Donna, having grown to be a stronger confidence and acceptance, ultimately went to school without the wigs wearing a bright smile. With Claudia’s firm support as the bright spot, Donna survived the darkest moment in school, graduated from high school, got married to his beloved husband, and is now a mother of two. Thirty years after the accident, Donna and Claudia remain good friends, sharing happiness as well as sorrow and facing the challenges in life together, embracing a promising future together.
Donna is my sister, and I had always considered her beautiful. Our father called her his princess, and in high school, she was known as the school babe. Our parents were protective of us, particularly our father, who kept close watch over the friends she made.
唐娜是我的妹妹，我一直认为她很漂亮。我们的父亲称她为他的公主，在高中时，她被称为学校的宝贝。我们的父母保护我们，尤其是我们的父亲，他密切关注着她结交的朋友。
One Saturday in April, a boy invited Donna to a park with four other friends. Unfortunately, on their way to the park, their car crashed into a guardrail and flipped over three times before it came to a stop on its roof. Donna was pulled from the car and rushed to the hospital without delay.
四月的一个星期六，一个男孩邀请唐娜和其他四个朋友去公园。不幸的是，在去公园的路上，他们的车撞上了护栏，翻了三次，然后停在了车顶上。唐娜被从车里拖了出来，立即被送往医院。
Donna was in the hospital for two weeks. Many of her friends went to see her, especially Claudia, who was there a lot. However, Mom and Dad never liked Claudia. I don't really know why. They just didn't like her being around.
唐娜在医院住了两个星期。她的许多朋友都去看她，尤其是克劳迪娅，她经常去。然而，爸爸妈妈从来都不喜欢克劳迪娅。我真的不知道为什么。他们只是不喜欢她在身边。
Donna returned home with the entire top half of her head shaved. She had hundreds of stitches （缝线）, some of which came across her forehead and between her left eye and eyebrow. Knowing Donna's concern for her appearance, Mom found her a human hair wig （假发） that perfectly matched her hair.
唐娜回到家时，整个上半部分都剃光了。她缝了几百针(缝线）, 其中一些穿过了她的前额，在左眼和眉毛之间。妈妈知道唐娜很在意自己的外表，就给她找了一顶假发(假发）与她的头发非常相配。
Donna finally recovered and went back to school. But she never felt good in school. There was a very loud-mouthed, self-centered girl in Donna's class who took great pleasure in teasing her. This girl, seated behind Donna, would pull slightly on Donna's wig and mockingly said, "Hey, Wiggy, let's see your scars（伤疤）". Then she would laugh.
唐娜终于康复并回到学校。但她在学校的感觉从来都不好。唐娜的班上有一个声音很大、以自我为中心的女孩，她非常喜欢取笑她。这个女孩坐在唐娜身后，轻轻地扯着唐娜的假发，嘲讽地说：“嘿，威吉，让我们看看你的伤疤(伤疤）”。然后她会笑。
Donna endured this mistreatment in silence until the day she told Claudia. From then on, Claudia kept a close eye on my sister, preventing anyone from bothering her. There was something about Claudia that was frightening, even to the worst kids in school. Nobody messed with her. Unfortunately, though, Claudia wasn't always around, and the teasing and name-calling continued.
唐娜默默地忍受着这种虐待，直到她告诉克劳迪娅的那一天。从那时起，克劳迪娅一直密切关注着我妹妹，不让任何人打扰她。克劳迪娅身上有些可怕的东西，甚至对学校里最糟糕的孩子来说也是如此。没人惹她。然而，不幸的是，克劳迪娅并不总是在身边，嘲笑和谩骂仍在继续。
Paragraph1: One day, Claudia came to our home with a special surprise.
Paragraph2: Donna and Claudia wore their wigs for over a year.
故事大意：
Donna被家人和同龄人认为很漂亮，她的父亲特别保护她。四月的一个星期六，唐娜和一个男孩以及其他四个朋友去公园。他们的车撞上护栏翻了个身，最后撞到了车顶上。唐娜被从车上拖下来后立即被紧急送往医院。她在医院住了两个星期，尤其是很多朋友都来看望她。她的父母不喜欢克劳迪娅，原因不明。唐娜回家时剃了上半个光头，戴上了假发。回到学校，唐娜被一个嘲笑她的假发的同学取笑。克劳迪娅开始保护唐娜，阻止其他人取笑她。尽管有克劳迪娅的保护，但当她不在身边时，玩笑仍在继续。
续写情节发展：
First paragraph:
(1) The surprise was that Claudia also shaved off her own hair.
(2) Our family, especially Donna's reaction.
(3) Claudia explained to Donna the reason for doing so.
(4) The next day, when the two of them went to school with wigs, most of their classmates and teachers reacted.
(5) The girl who kept mocking Donna stopped her behavior and explained the reason.
Second paragraph:
(1) Donna's change in mindset during this period is to regain confidence and become stronger.
(2) One day, Donna mustered up the courage to enter the campus without wearing a wig and calmly accepted the gaze of others.
(3) The change in my parents' perception of Claudia.
(4) After this incident, Donna and Claudia's friendship deepened.
参考答案：
Paragraph1:
One day, Claudia came to our home with a special surprise. Sensing how terrible Donna felt about her hair, she had shaved off her own beautiful long brown hair to inspire Donna and put herself in Donna’s shoes. At the sight of the scene,Donna was deeply struck by her warm move.The next day, they went shopping, selecting identical blond and brown wigs. When they went to school as usual, Claudia was ready for being made fun of by other students. People who are ready to tease my sister know they will provoke Claudia. Soon, this news quickly spread throughout the campus.
Paragraph2:
Donna and Claudia wore their wigs for over a year. They patiently waited until they felt at ease showing their natural hair. Donna, having grown to be a stronger confidence and acceptance, ultimately went to school without the wigs wearing a bright smile. With Claudia’s firm support as the bright spot, Donna survived the darkest moment in school, graduated from high school, got married to his beloved husband, and is now a mother of two. Thirty years after the accident, Donna and Claudia remain good friends, sharing happiness as well as sorrow and facing the challenges in life together, embracing a promising future together.