新高考英语读后续写系统备考训练30
Cohesion & Coherence
语篇衔接与连贯性
词汇同现或词汇复现
●第一&二段开头→ 回应段首句的名词或动词→ 语义连贯
●第一段结尾→ 复现第二段首句的同词或同义词→ 无缝衔接
●第二段结尾→ 体现主题或回应伏笔→ 主题升华
Foreshadowing 伏笔:When an author mentions or hints at something that will happen later in the story.
Plot情节:Character+Action=Plot
【读后续写阅读填词篇】 Beauty not lies in perfection美不在于完美
Once upon a time, there lived a young boy _________(name) Ethan in a small village.With a passion for music, Ethan was _______________(enthusiasm) about playing the guitar. Every day after school, he would rush home, grab his guitar, and lose __________(he) in the melodies(乐曲) he created.
One summer, the village was hosting a talent show, and Ethan decided to participate. ___________, doubts started to flood into his mind. He began comparing himself to other ___________(talent) musicians and questioning his abilities.The fear of ___________(fail) began to consume him.
But Ethan's grandfather, ______ had always been his biggest supporter, ___________(notice) his grandson's inner struggle. He sat down with Ethan and shared a story from his own youth.
"When I was your age, I had a _________ of becoming a painter. But I was filled with self-doubt, just like you are now. I decided to seek ______________(guide) from a wise old__________ in a nearby town.
The old artist listened to my worries and offered me a ___________.He asked me to paint a picture on a large canvas in front of a crowd. _______________(Overwhelm) by the challenge, I hesitated.
The wise artist smiled and told me not to focus ____ what others might think. He asked me to paint from my heart and pour my soul into every stroke. The beauty lies not in perfection, _____ in the authenticity (真实性) of one's creation.
____________(Encourage) by these words, I accepted the challenge. I painted with passion, __________(let) my emotions guide my brush. _____________(Eventual), a beautiful masterpiece appeared on the canvas."
____________(Finish) the story, Ethan's grandfather said, "That day, I realized that success is not defined by how perfect we are or how we compare to others. It's about embracing our unique talents, _________(take) risks, and expressing ourselves with passion and authenticity."
___________(Inspire) by his grandfather's story, Ethan decided to give the talent show his all. He practiced every day, often for hours, ________ his fingers and back ached. He practiced ___________(tireless) and poured his heart into every note. When the day of the talent show arrived, Ethan took a deep breath, __________(step) on stage, and played his guitar like never before.The audience ___________________(fascinate) by his performance. Ethan's fingers danced on the strings, ____________(create) melodies that touched their hearts. At that moment, he realized that his self-doubts had held him back, but now he was free.
Ethan didn't pay much attention to the surroundings until he _________(hear) the ___________(applaud) at the end of his performance. He looked up and saw his grandfather ____________(smile) proudly at him from the audience. Ethan felt a surge of happiness and pride. His hard work and dedication had paid off, and he had finally overcome his self-doubts. He smiled, ___________(know) that this was just the ______________(begin) of his musical journey. Ethan never forgot the ___________ he learned from his grandfather's story: With hard work and dedication, one can achieve his dreams. Beauty not lies in perfection, but in the authenticity of your creation. He regarded this lesson _____ a constant reminder to never give up on his passions and dreams.
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【读后续写实战篇】
Once upon a time, there lived a young boy named Ethan in a small village.With a passion for music, Ethan was enthusiastic about playing the guitar. Every day after school,he would rush home, grab his guitar,and lose himself in the melodies(乐曲) he created.
One summer, the village was hosting a talent show, and Ethan decided to participate. However, doubts started to flood into his mind. He began comparing himself to other talented musicians and questioning his abilities.The fear of failure began to consume him.
But Ethan's grandfather, who had always been his biggest supporter, noticed his grandson's inner struggle. He sat down with Ethan and shared a story from his own youth.
"When I was your age, I had a dream of becoming a painter. But I was filled with self-doubt, just like you are now. I decided to seek guidance from a wise old artist in a nearby town.
The old artist listened to my worries and offered me a challenge.He asked me to paint a picture on a large canvas in front of a crowd. Overwhelmed by the challenge, I hesitated.
The wise artist smiled and told me not to focus on what others might think. He asked me to paint from my heart and pour my soul into every stroke. The beauty lies not in perfection, but in the authenticity(真实性) of one's creation.
Encouraged by these words, I accepted the challenge. I painted with passion, letting my emotions guide my brush. Finally, a beautiful masterpiece appeared on the canvas."
Finishing the story, Ethan 's grandfather said, "That day, I realized that success is not defined by how perfect we are or how we compare to others. It 's about embracing our unique talents,taking risks,and expressing ourselves with passion and authenticity."
注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph1: Inspired by his grandfather's story, Ethan decided to give the talent show his all. ____________________
Paragraph2: Ethan didn't pay much attention to the surroundings until he heard the applause at the end of his performance. _______________________________________________________________________________________