专题04提纲作文高分宝典之通知
目录
1.三年高考考情透析,把握高考风向标;
2评分标准早知道,明确得分失分点;
3.高分技巧心中有,“一式、两头、三写、四关”;
4.素材宝库赋能,句型模板全面掌握;
5.高考真题精讲,写作思路一目了然;
6.名校模拟提升,好题新题举一反三。
新高考写作第一节的命题形式主要是提纲式作文,主要文体形式包括投稿征文、演讲稿、通知、倡议书、活动介绍、人物介绍、日记/周记或书信等。作文所涉及的话题贴近学生生活,富有时代气息,体现了新课程标准的要求,能唤起考生强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。近三年没有考到通知的作文。
一、评分细则
1.本题总分为15分,分五个档次进行评分。
2.评分时应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。具体为:
(1)对于内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。
(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时,先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量确定或调整档次,最后给分。
4.评分时还应注意:
(1)词数少于60的,酌情扣分。
(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面,评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑,英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。书写较差,以致影响交际的将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(13-15分):雅—能写明全部要点,语言基本无误,行文连贯,表达无误。
第四档(10-12分):达—能写明全部或绝大部分要点,语言有少量错误,行文不够连贯,表达基本清楚。
第三档(7-9分): 信—能写明基本要点,语言虽有较多错误,但能基本达意。
第二档(4-6分):能写出部分要点,语言错误多,影响意思表达。
第一档(1-3分):只能写出一两个要点,里面错误很多,只有个别句子正确。
零分:未作答,所写内容无法评判;所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。
总之,在写通知时,考生应该注意“有话好好说”:体现出词语的魅力,展示精彩的语句;“有话慢慢说”:要点齐全,叙述从容,运用一定的过渡词语。平时注意积累并背诵各种写作素材的“万能模板”并学会灵活运用,这样才能在有限的时间内提升写作能力。在考场上挥洒自如,如鱼得水。
根据考生书面表达常见错误及评卷要求,我们总结出行之有效的“一式、两头、三写、四关”高分技巧,即写对格式、写好两头、写美卷面、破关夺隘。
一式:写对格式 确定主题,记住通知的基本格式和特点。
两头:写好两头 要求灵活运用熟悉的句式结构和表达手法,使文章开头和结尾的表达生动准确,引人入胜,耐人寻味。
三写:写美卷面 行文时书写规范化,力求卷面整洁美观。单词的拼写、字母的大小写符合英语书写要求。
四关:破关夺隘 以主题为纲,进一步思考其内涵和外延,联系自己的学习、生活实际,凸显时代性。突破内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关以及习惯表达关。
通知行文结构:
通知是上级对下级、组织对成员布置工作、传达情况或告诉公众某件事情等情况时使用的一种应用文体,通常分为口头通知和书面通知两种。具体写作结构为:
通知形式:口头通知、书面通知
通知内容:时间、地点、人物、事由、注意事项等
结束语:多是呼吁通知的对象参加某活动
注意:英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主,多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。层次一定要清晰,一个层次要表达一件事情,使人看起来一目了然。
1.通知语料库
1.提醒和引入话题常用语
1).May I have/call your attention, please
请大家注意一下,好吗?
2.)Attention, please, everybody!
请大家注意!
3.)I have an announcement(宣布,通知) to make.
我有一件事情要宣布。
4.)I have something to tell you.
我要告诉大家一些事情。
5.)Ladies and gentlemen , may I have your attention , please I have an announcement to make .
女士们,先生们,请大家注意一下,好吗?我要宣布一件事。
6.)Attention, please . I have something important to announce .
请注意。我有重要的事情要宣布。
2.通知具体事项部分常用语
1.)There will be a talk(或者speech contest) this afternoon.
今天下午将有一场讨论会(演讲比赛)。
2.)The Student Union has decided that ...
学生会已决定……
3.)We shall have a lecture on ...
我们将举行关于……的研讨会。
4.)It has been decided that we'll pay a visit to ...
已经决定我们将参观……
5.)In order to improve students ' spoken English and arouse their interest in studying English , an English speech contest organized by the English Club of our school will be held next Friday .
为了提高学生的英语口语,激发他们学习英语的兴趣,下周五我们学校英语俱乐部将组织一场英语演讲比赛。
6. )To promote cultural exchange between China and other countries , the local TV station will organize a Chinese Character Dictation Competition , I ' d like to inform you of some details as follows .
为了促进中国和其他国家之间的文化交流,当地电视台将举办一场汉字听写比赛。我想通知你如下一些相关细节。
3.结尾部分常用语
1)Please attend it on time and don't be late.
请按时到场,不要迟到。
2)I hope you can have a good time.
我希望你们玩得开心。
3)Everyone is welcome to attend/take part in it.
欢迎所有人参加。
That's all.Thank you.
就这些,谢谢。
5). Everyone is welcome to take part in it .
欢迎所有人参加。
Your participation will surely make a difference .
你的参与将意义非凡。
All the students are welcome to attend it .
欢迎所有学生参与
Please gather at … am / pm in / at ….
请在早上/下午…点于…集合
I am sure you will have a good time .我相信你会玩得很开心。
2.写作模板
模板①
Notice
An exciting / interesting event “ (给定的活动名称)” is around the corner / is coming / drawing closer / taking place. Every one of /All of you is / are expected to be part of / participate in / take part in the event which (举办活动的目的/益处等)
①You are required / asked / demanded to do / that you (should) do (活动要求).
②You'll do (活动内容). (此处①②取二者之一即可)
The event will be held / take place (活动时间、地点). For any questions, call / ring (联系人) at (联系的电话号、QQ号、地址等)
Li Hua
模板②
Notice
An exciting / interesting event “ (给定的活动名称)” is around the corner / is coming / drawing closer / taking place. Every one of /All of you is / are expected to be part of / participate in / take part in the event which (举办活动的目的/益处等)
①You are required / asked / demanded to do / that you (should) do (活动要求).
②You'll do (活动内容). (此处①②取二者之一即可)
The event will be held / take place (活动时间、地点). For any questions, call / ring (联系人) at (联系的电话号、QQ号、地址等)
Li Hua
(2018·全国新课标II卷)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together,内容包括:
(1)短片内容:学校的发展;
(2)放映时间、地点;
(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【范文赏析】
Boys and girls,
I have good news for you. The English film Growing Together made by our teachers and some senior students will be displayed this weekend. It shows us the whole history of school's development, which is I think the attraction to us. If you are curious about the history of our school or concerned about its future, you mustn't miss this excellent opportunity! Besides, all your suggestions and comments about this film will be welcome.
It will be displayed in the School Film Hall, from 9:00 am to 10:00 am, June 9th, Saturday.
That's all. Thank you.
The Students Union
June 8, 2018
1.(2023上·陕西西安·高二统考期中)你校计划在下学期利用校园内的空地以班级为单位举办“袖珍花园”竞赛活动。请你代表学生会在学校英语报上写一则通知,内容包括:
1.活动目的;2.活动要求。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice about “Pocket Garden”
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The Student Union
【范文赏析】
In order to inspire our students’ interest in growing green plants and beautify the campus environment, our school plans to hold “Pocket Garden” activity in the next term in the empty space of the campus. Anyone who can grow flowers or plants can join in the activity on a class basis. The name of the class should be hung on their plants so that all the teachers and students will choose the best one. If you want to participate, please contact the Student Union to arrange a specific location for planting.
The Student Union
1.词汇积累
为了:in order to→so as to
计划做某事:plan to do sth.→be scheduled to do sth.
举办:hold→host
参加:join in→take part in
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:The name of the class should be hung on their plants so that all the teachers and students will choose the best one.
拓展句:It is the name of the class that should be hung on their plants so that all the teachers and students will choose the best one.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Anyone who can grow flowers or plants can join in the activity on a class basis.(运用了who引导的限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】If you want to participate, please contact the Student Union to arrange a specific location for planting.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
2.(2023上·重庆·高二西南大学附中校考期中)假如你是学生会主席李华,你校即将举办英语歌曲比赛,请为校宣传栏“英语角”写一则通知,邀请大家观看。
内容包括:
1. 比赛主题:Voice Your Youth;
2. 观看时间和地点;
3. 观看要求。
注 意:1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Notice
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Student Union
【范文赏析】
Notice
Aimed to enrich students’ campus life and cultivate their interest in English, an English singing competition called Voice Your Youth will be launched by our school.
Scheduled to be held in the school hall at 2:30 p.m next Monday, the competition will last approximately 3 hours. With various well-prepared performances, this activity is bound to be a hit. So it’s recommended that you soak your body and soul in the charm of the competition for its performances are nothing but a feast for the ears. Moreover, our competition focuses on English songs, which can offer you a deep and profound insight into English culture.
What should be kept in mind is that all participants need to behave in a polite and orderly manner. Furthermore, your punctuality and wholehearted involvement are undoubtedly anticipated.
Student Union
1.词汇积累
安排:arrange → schedule
此外:besides → moreover
建议:suggest → recommend
比赛:game → competition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Aimed to enrich students’ campus life and cultivate their interest in English, an English singing competition called Voice Your Youth will be launched by our school.
拓展句:An English singing competition called Voice Your Youth will be launched by our school, which is aimed to enrich students’ campus life and cultivate their interest in English.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Moreover, our competition focuses on English songs, which can offer you a deep and profound insight into English culture.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】What should be kept in mind is that all participants need to behave in a polite and orderly manner.(运用了what引导的主语从句以及that引导的表语从句)
3.(2023上·辽宁鞍山·高二鞍山一中校考期中)假设你是摄影社社长李华,你校摄影社将举办“Capture the Beauty in Our Campus”微电影比赛,请你在校英文报“Super view”上写一则通知,并诚邀全校师生参加。内容包括:
1. 比赛目的;
2. 作品要求;
3. 比赛要求(截止时间,作品提交方式等)
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:微电影microfilm
Notice
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the Photography Club
【范文赏析】
Notice
To deepen the love for our school and enrich campus life by means of new media, the Photography Club is scheduled to hold a microfilm competition whose theme is Capture the Beauty in Our Campus.
It is a must to be original for each video works, which is limited to no more than 10 minutes, with opening, ending and subtitles. Featuring the campus unique scenery and architecture, the video may also be shot based on respectable people and impressive events. If interested, please email your works to our school website before Nov 30th.
Looking forward to your active participation.
The Photography Club
1.词汇积累
主题:theme→subject
凭借:by means of→with
独特的:unique→characteristic
可敬的:respectable→honorable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Featuring the campus unique scenery and architecture, the video may also be shot based on respectable people and impressive events.
拓展句:The video may also be shot based on respectable people and impressive events, which should feature the campus unique scenery and architecture.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To deepen the love for our school and enrich campus life by means of new media, the Photography Club is scheduled to hold a microfilm competition whose theme is Capture the Beauty in Our Campus. (运用了whose引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] It is a must to be original for each video works, which is limited to no more than 10 minutes, with opening, ending and subtitles. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] If interested, please email your works to our school website before Nov 30th. (运用了状语从句的省略)
4.(2023上·黑龙江哈尔滨·高二校考期中)假定你是李华,你所在的学校下周将组织一次跳绳比赛(rope skipping competition),请你以学生会的名义用英语写一则通知,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动安排;
3.注意事项。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
NOTICE
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The Students’ Union
【范文赏析】
NOTICE
To arouse our interest in exercise and build up our strength, our school is to hold a rope skipping competition tomorrow. All the students are to gather in the playground before 3:00 pm and stand in rows as usual. Then the competition will begin exactly at 3:00 pm.
The result of the competition counts on the numbers you skip within ten minutes. The prizes will be given to the top 10 winners of each class. You’re expected to wear school uniforms and comfortable shoes. Besides, do warm-up in advance.
The Students’ Union
1. 词汇积累
激发对……的兴趣:arouse our interest in→stimulate our interest in
增强:build up→enhance/strengthen
取决于:count on→depend on
提前:in advance→ahead of time
2. 句式拓展
简单句改为强调句
原句:The prizes will be given to the top 10 winners of each class.
拓展句:It is the top 10 winners of each class that/who the prizes will be given to.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To arouse our interest in exercise and build up our strength, our school is to hold a rope skipping competition tomorrow.(使用了不定式作目的状语和be to do结构表示将来)
【高分句型2】The result of the competition counts on the numbers you skip within ten minutes. (使用了省略关系词的定语从句)
5.(2024·海南·校联考一模)假定你是校学生会主席李华。你校打算在校园内开设几个“读书角”,号召同学们捐赠图 书。请写一则通知发表在校英文报上,内容包括:
1.读书角的目的;
2.捐书地点和方式。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
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The Student Union
【范文赏析】
Notice
Our school plans to set up several reading corners to enrich our after-class life and improve our reading ability. Entrusted by our school, the Student Union is now collecting spare books from students to keep the project running smoothly. Everyone in our school can donate classic books and magazines by dropping them off in Room 203.
We hope all the students will participate in the “Reading Corner” activities, become active in reading, fall in love with reading and benefit from reading for a lifetime.
The Student Union
1.词汇积累
提高:improve→enhance
收集:collect→gather
捐赠:donate→give away
参加:participate in→take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Our school plans to set up several reading corners to enrich our after-class life and improve our reading ability.
拓展句:Our school plans to set up several reading corners, the purpose of which is to enrich our after-class life and improve our reading ability.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Entrusted by our school, the Student Union is now collecting spare books from students to keep the project running smoothly. (运用了过去分词作状语)
[高分句型2] We hope all the students will participate in the “Reading Corner” activities, become active in reading, fall in love with reading and benefit from reading for a lifetime. (运用了that引导的宾语从句,省略了that)
6.(2023上·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·高三校联考阶段练习)假如你是李华,你校国际部下周将举办以“校园生活”为主题的绘画比赛,请用英语写一则通知,内容包括:
1. 活动安排;
2. 参赛要求;
3. 表达期待。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Notice
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【范文赏析】
Next week, our school will hold a painting competition with the theme of “campus life”. The details are as follows:
The competition will be held on Friday, April 23rd from 2:00 p.m. to 4:00 p.m. in the school auditorium. The competition is open to all students in the International Department. The painting should be an original creation and should reflect the theme of “campus life”.
We hope that all of our students will participate actively in this competition. You can express your understanding and feelings of campus life through your paintings.
1.词汇积累
举办:hold→host/launch
主题:theme → topic
比赛:competition→contest
希望:hope→ expect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Next week, our school will hold a painting competition with the theme of “campus life”.
拓展句:Next week, our school will hold a painting competition whose theme is “campus life”.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The competition will be held on Friday, April 23rd from 2:00 p.m. to 4:00 p.m. in the school auditorium.(运用了一般将来时的被动语态结构)
【高分句型2】We hope that all of our students will participate actively in this competition. (运用了that引导宾语从句的结构)
7.(2023上·四川成都·高二成都七中校考期中)假定你是李华, 你校高二年级将于 12 月举行英文戏剧大赛。请你代表学生会写一则英文通知, 发布在各班级电子班牌上,内容包括:
1. 活动简介;
2. 报名时间及方式。
注意: 1. 词数应为 80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上作答。
Notice
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Students’ Union
【范文赏析】
Notice
Are you an English fan Do you have a strong passion for English dramas Here’s the best chance ever! In order to enhance your understanding of English drama and improve your English skills, the English Drama Club will provide a stage for students where your talent can be recognized and confidence can be boosted. Scheduled to be held in December, our English drama club welcomes your registration and the deadline is next Friday. Don’t hesitate to enroll your names. Don’t miss it!
Students’ Union
1. 词汇积累
热情:passion→enthusiasm
提高:enhance→promote
理解:understanding→comprehension
举行、组织:hold→conduct
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Are you an English fan Do you have a strong passion for English dramas
拓展句:Are you an English fan who has a strong passion for English dramas
【点睛】[高分句型1]In order to enhance your understanding of English drama and improve your English skills, the English Drama Club will provide a stage for students where your talent can be recognized and confidence can be boosted. (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Scheduled to be held in December, our English drama club welcomes your registration and the deadline is next Friday. (运用了过去分词作状语)
8.(2023下·河南开封·高一校联考期末)假定你是校学生会主席李华,你校拟近期举办一场拔河比赛。请你代表学生会就此写一则书面通知,内容包括:
1. 比赛宗旨;
2. 比赛信息;
3. 欢迎参赛或观赛。
参考词汇:tug of war 拔河比赛
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
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【范文赏析】
Notice
I am much honourable to inform you that a tug-of-war will be held in our school. The match is scheduled to be held every afternoon from Monday to Friday this week in our school playground.10 boys and 10 girls from each class are organized to form one team. The competition shall be carried out by the method of two out of three elimination. The first, second and third prizes and Spiritual Civilization Awards will be presented. The purpose of the match is to strengthen the communication between classes and further improve the physical quality of students. Welcome to participate in and watch the competition.
That’s all. Thank you!
1.词汇积累
举行:hold→take place
颁发:present→award
目的:purpose→goal
加强:strengthen→build up
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The purpose of the match is to strengthen the communication between classes and further improve the physical quality of students.
拓展句:The match, whose purpose of the match is to strengthen the communication between classes and further improve the physical quality of students,is very meaningful.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am much honourable to inform you that a tug-of-war will be held in our school. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】The purpose of the match is to strengthen the communication between classes and further improve the physical quality of students.(运用了不定式作表语)
9.(2023上·湖南株洲·高一株洲二中校考阶段练习)假设你是学校英语沙龙的负责人,学校将在11月底举办一年一度的校园英语配音大赛 (Annual Dubbing Competition) , 请你写一个英文广播通知, 号召各班积极参加。
内容如下:
1. 比赛目的;
2. 参赛对象:各班推荐一个配音节目;
3. 配音要求 (如:吐词清楚流畅,情感表达准确等)
注意:1. 词数 100左右;
2. 开头语已为你写好。
参考词汇:推荐 v. recommend 选手 n. contestant 流畅的 adj. fluent
富有感情地 adv. Emotionally
Hi, everyone! Welcome to School English Broadcasting !
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Hi, everyone! Welcome to School English Broadcasting! Here is good news for English lovers. As we all know, the annual English Dubbing Contest is around the corner at the end of November. It is aimed to create a lively learning atmosphere as well as providing a stage for students to explore their potential and enjoy personal growth. Every class can recommend one dubbing team who can stand for their highest dubbing level. The contestants are required to display their performance clearly and fluently. Besides, of equal importance is proper emotion and gesture to show your interpretation of the characters.
So why not have a try and polish your speaking skills Just sign up and have fun! Thank you for your listening!
1.词汇积累
提供:provide→offer
选手:contestant→competitor
另外:besides→moreover
重要性:importance→significance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The contestants are required to display their performance clearly and fluently.
拓展句:It is required that the contestants should display their performance clearly and fluently.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As we all know, the annual English Dubbing Contest is around the corner at the end of November. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Every class can recommend one dubbing team who can stand for their highest dubbing level. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
10.(2019上·天津北辰·高三统考期中)为了让你校的外国留学生进一步了解中国文化,你校将开设两门选修课。请根据表格内容给你校的英文网站写一则通知,向同学们介绍这些课程。
课程 内容
诗歌鉴赏 唐宋诗词特点及欣赏
剪纸 介绍剪纸文化,传授剪纸技术
注意:(1) 词数不少于120词;
(2) 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 标题结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
参考词汇:选修课optional course
Notice
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For more information, please contact the Dean’s office.
【范文赏析】
Notice
In order to help foreign students learn more about Chinese culture, two optional courses are to be offered in our school. The courses will be open to any student who is interested in them.
If you want to experience the beauty of Chinese language, the appreciation of poetry is the right course. It focuses on introducing the characteristics of the poetry of Tang and Song dynasties and appreciating their beauty. The paper-cutting course is designed for those who love using their hands. By taking the course, you will not only learn how to make different types of paper-cutting but get familiar with its connection to Chinese culture.
For more information, please contact the Dean’s office.
1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣:be interested in→show an interest in
专注于:focus on→center on
种类:type→kind
和……联系:contact→get in touch with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In order to help foreign students learn more about Chinese culture, two optional courses are to be offered in our school.
拓展句:Two optional courses are to be offered in our school, which are aimed at helping foreign students learn more about Chinese culture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The courses will be open to any student who is interested in them.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】If you want to experience the beauty of Chinese language, the appreciation of poetry is the right course.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)专题04提纲作文高分宝典之通知
目录
1.三年高考考情透析,把握高考风向标;
2评分标准早知道,明确得分失分点;
3.高分技巧心中有,“一式、两头、三写、四关”;
4.素材宝库赋能,句型模板全面掌握;
5.高考真题精讲,写作思路一目了然;
6.名校模拟提升,好题新题举一反三。
新高考写作第一节的命题形式主要是提纲式作文,主要文体形式包括投稿征文、演讲稿、通知、倡议书、活动介绍、人物介绍、日记/周记或书信等。作文所涉及的话题贴近学生生活,富有时代气息,体现了新课程标准的要求,能唤起考生强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。近三年没有考到通知的作文。
一、评分细则
1.本题总分为15分,分五个档次进行评分。
2.评分时应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。具体为:
(1)对于内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。
(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时,先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量确定或调整档次,最后给分。
4.评分时还应注意:
(1)词数少于60的,酌情扣分。
(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面,评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑,英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。书写较差,以致影响交际的将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(13-15分):雅—能写明全部要点,语言基本无误,行文连贯,表达无误。
第四档(10-12分):达—能写明全部或绝大部分要点,语言有少量错误,行文不够连贯,表达基本清楚。
第三档(7-9分): 信—能写明基本要点,语言虽有较多错误,但能基本达意。
第二档(4-6分):能写出部分要点,语言错误多,影响意思表达。
第一档(1-3分):只能写出一两个要点,里面错误很多,只有个别句子正确。
零分:未作答,所写内容无法评判;所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。
总之,在写通知时,考生应该注意“有话好好说”:体现出词语的魅力,展示精彩的语句;“有话慢慢说”:要点齐全,叙述从容,运用一定的过渡词语。平时注意积累并背诵各种写作素材的“万能模板”并学会灵活运用,这样才能在有限的时间内提升写作能力。在考场上挥洒自如,如鱼得水。
根据考生书面表达常见错误及评卷要求,我们总结出行之有效的“一式、两头、三写、四关”高分技巧,即写对格式、写好两头、写美卷面、破关夺隘。
一式:写对格式 确定主题,记住通知的基本格式和特点。
两头:写好两头 要求灵活运用熟悉的句式结构和表达手法,使文章开头和结尾的表达生动准确,引人入胜,耐人寻味。
三写:写美卷面 行文时书写规范化,力求卷面整洁美观。单词的拼写、字母的大小写符合英语书写要求。
四关:破关夺隘 以主题为纲,进一步思考其内涵和外延,联系自己的学习、生活实际,凸显时代性。突破内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关以及习惯表达关。
通知行文结构:
通知是上级对下级、组织对成员布置工作、传达情况或告诉公众某件事情等情况时使用的一种应用文体,通常分为口头通知和书面通知两种。具体写作结构为:
通知形式:口头通知、书面通知
通知内容:时间、地点、人物、事由、注意事项等
结束语:多是呼吁通知的对象参加某活动
注意:英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主,多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。层次一定要清晰,一个层次要表达一件事情,使人看起来一目了然。
1.通知语料库
1.提醒和引入话题常用语
1).May I have/call your attention, please
请大家注意一下,好吗?
2.)Attention, please, everybody!
请大家注意!
3.)I have an announcement(宣布,通知) to make.
我有一件事情要宣布。
4.)I have something to tell you.
我要告诉大家一些事情。
5.)Ladies and gentlemen , may I have your attention , please I have an announcement to make .
女士们,先生们,请大家注意一下,好吗?我要宣布一件事。
6.)Attention, please . I have something important to announce .
请注意。我有重要的事情要宣布。
2.通知具体事项部分常用语
1.)There will be a talk(或者speech contest) this afternoon.
今天下午将有一场讨论会(演讲比赛)。
2.)The Student Union has decided that ...
学生会已决定……
3.)We shall have a lecture on ...
我们将举行关于……的研讨会。
4.)It has been decided that we'll pay a visit to ...
已经决定我们将参观……
5.)In order to improve students ' spoken English and arouse their interest in studying English , an English speech contest organized by the English Club of our school will be held next Friday .
为了提高学生的英语口语,激发他们学习英语的兴趣,下周五我们学校英语俱乐部将组织一场英语演讲比赛。
6. )To promote cultural exchange between China and other countries , the local TV station will organize a Chinese Character Dictation Competition , I ' d like to inform you of some details as follows .
为了促进中国和其他国家之间的文化交流,当地电视台将举办一场汉字听写比赛。我想通知你如下一些相关细节。
3.结尾部分常用语
1)Please attend it on time and don't be late.
请按时到场,不要迟到。
2)I hope you can have a good time.
我希望你们玩得开心。
3)Everyone is welcome to attend/take part in it.
欢迎所有人参加。
That's all.Thank you.
就这些,谢谢。
5). Everyone is welcome to take part in it .
欢迎所有人参加。
Your participation will surely make a difference .
你的参与将意义非凡。
All the students are welcome to attend it .
欢迎所有学生参与
Please gather at … am / pm in / at ….
请在早上/下午…点于…集合
I am sure you will have a good time .我相信你会玩得很开心。
2.写作模板
模板①
Notice
An exciting / interesting event “ (给定的活动名称)” is around the corner / is coming / drawing closer / taking place. Every one of /All of you is / are expected to be part of / participate in / take part in the event which (举办活动的目的/益处等)
①You are required / asked / demanded to do / that you (should) do (活动要求).
②You'll do (活动内容). (此处①②取二者之一即可)
The event will be held / take place (活动时间、地点). For any questions, call / ring (联系人) at (联系的电话号、QQ号、地址等)
Li Hua
模板②
Notice
An exciting / interesting event “ (给定的活动名称)” is around the corner / is coming / drawing closer / taking place. Every one of /All of you is / are expected to be part of / participate in / take part in the event which (举办活动的目的/益处等)
①You are required / asked / demanded to do / that you (should) do (活动要求).
②You'll do (活动内容). (此处①②取二者之一即可)
The event will be held / take place (活动时间、地点). For any questions, call / ring (联系人) at (联系的电话号、QQ号、地址等)
Li Hua
(2018·全国新课标II卷)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together,内容包括:
(1)短片内容:学校的发展;
(2)放映时间、地点;
(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【范文赏析】
Boys and girls,
I have good news for you. The English film Growing Together made by our teachers and some senior students will be displayed this weekend. It shows us the whole history of school's development, which is I think the attraction to us. If you are curious about the history of our school or concerned about its future, you mustn't miss this excellent opportunity! Besides, all your suggestions and comments about this film will be welcome.
It will be displayed in the School Film Hall, from 9:00 am to 10:00 am, June 9th, Saturday.
That's all. Thank you.
The Students Union
June 8, 2018
1.(2023上·陕西西安·高二统考期中)你校计划在下学期利用校园内的空地以班级为单位举办“袖珍花园”竞赛活动。请你代表学生会在学校英语报上写一则通知,内容包括:
1.活动目的;2.活动要求。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice about “Pocket Garden”
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The Student Union
2.(2023上·重庆·高二西南大学附中校考期中)假如你是学生会主席李华,你校即将举办英语歌曲比赛,请为校宣传栏“英语角”写一则通知,邀请大家观看。
内容包括:
1. 比赛主题:Voice Your Youth;
2. 观看时间和地点;
3. 观看要求。
注 意:1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Notice
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Student Union
3.(2023上·辽宁鞍山·高二鞍山一中校考期中)假设你是摄影社社长李华,你校摄影社将举办“Capture the Beauty in Our Campus”微电影比赛,请你在校英文报“Super view”上写一则通知,并诚邀全校师生参加。内容包括:
1. 比赛目的;
2. 作品要求;
3. 比赛要求(截止时间,作品提交方式等)
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:微电影microfilm
Notice
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the Photography Club
4.(2023上·黑龙江哈尔滨·高二校考期中)假定你是李华,你所在的学校下周将组织一次跳绳比赛(rope skipping competition),请你以学生会的名义用英语写一则通知,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动安排;
3.注意事项。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
NOTICE
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The Students’ Union
5.(2024·海南·校联考一模)假定你是校学生会主席李华。你校打算在校园内开设几个“读书角”,号召同学们捐赠图 书。请写一则通知发表在校英文报上,内容包括:
1.读书角的目的;
2.捐书地点和方式。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
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The Student Union
6.(2023上·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·高三校联考阶段练习)假如你是李华,你校国际部下周将举办以“校园生活”为主题的绘画比赛,请用英语写一则通知,内容包括:
1. 活动安排;
2. 参赛要求;
3. 表达期待。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Notice
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7.(2023上·四川成都·高二成都七中校考期中)假定你是李华, 你校高二年级将于 12 月举行英文戏剧大赛。请你代表学生会写一则英文通知, 发布在各班级电子班牌上,内容包括:
1. 活动简介;
2. 报名时间及方式。
注意: 1. 词数应为 80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上作答。
Notice
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Students’ Union
8.(2023下·河南开封·高一校联考期末)假定你是校学生会主席李华,你校拟近期举办一场拔河比赛。请你代表学生会就此写一则书面通知,内容包括:
1. 比赛宗旨;
2. 比赛信息;
3. 欢迎参赛或观赛。
参考词汇:tug of war 拔河比赛
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
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9.(2023上·湖南株洲·高一株洲二中校考阶段练习)假设你是学校英语沙龙的负责人,学校将在11月底举办一年一度的校园英语配音大赛 (Annual Dubbing Competition) , 请你写一个英文广播通知, 号召各班积极参加。
内容如下:
1. 比赛目的;
2. 参赛对象:各班推荐一个配音节目;
3. 配音要求 (如:吐词清楚流畅,情感表达准确等)
注意:1. 词数 100左右;
2. 开头语已为你写好。
参考词汇:推荐 v. recommend 选手 n. contestant 流畅的 adj. fluent
富有感情地 adv. Emotionally
Hi, everyone! Welcome to School English Broadcasting !
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10.(2019上·天津北辰·高三统考期中)为了让你校的外国留学生进一步了解中国文化,你校将开设两门选修课。请根据表格内容给你校的英文网站写一则通知,向同学们介绍这些课程。
课程 内容
诗歌鉴赏 唐宋诗词特点及欣赏
剪纸 介绍剪纸文化,传授剪纸技术
注意:(1) 词数不少于120词;
(2) 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 标题结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
参考词汇:选修课optional course
Notice
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For more information, please contact the Dean’s office.