专题06提纲作文高分宝典之电子邮件
目录
1.三年高考考情透析，把握高考风向标；
2评分标准早知道，明确得分失分点；
3.高分技巧心中有，“一式、两头、三写、四关”；
4.素材宝库赋能，句型模板全面掌握；
5.高考真题精讲，写作思路一目了然；
6.名校模拟提升，好题新题举一反三。
新高考写作第一节的命题形式主要是提纲式作文，主要文体形式包括投稿征文、演讲稿、通知、倡议书、活动介绍、电子邮件、书信 等。作文所涉及的话题贴近学生生活，富有时代气息，体现了新课程标准的要求，能唤起考生强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。
年份 卷别 命题形式 话题
2023年 新高考全国I卷 提纲式 对外教对学生的分组提出意见
2023年 新高考全国II卷 提纲式 对外教对学生的分组提出意见
2022年 北京卷 提纲式 你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流
2022年 浙江卷 提纲式 与爱尔兰结识的朋友分享收获
2021年 全国甲卷 提纲式 写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人
一、评分细则
1.本题总分为15分，分五个档次进行评分。
2.评分时应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。具体为：
(1)对于内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。
(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4.评分时还应注意：
(1)词数少于60的，酌情扣分。
(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。书写较差，以致影响交际的将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(13-15分)：雅—能写明全部要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达无误。
第四档(10-12分)：达—能写明全部或绝大部分要点，语言有少量错误，行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚。
第三档(7-9分)： 信—能写明基本要点，语言虽有较多错误，但能基本达意。
第二档(4-6分)：能写出部分要点，语言错误多，影响意思表达。
第一档(1-3分)：只能写出一两个要点，里面错误很多，只有个别句子正确。
零分：未作答，所写内容无法评判；所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。
总之，在写电子邮件时，考生应该注意“有话好好说”：体现出词语的魅力，展示精彩的语句；“有话慢慢说”：要点齐全，叙述从容，运用一定的过渡词语。平时注意积累并背诵各种写作素材的“万能模板”并学会灵活运用，这样才能在有限的时间内提升写作能力。在考场上挥洒自如，如鱼得水。
根据考生书面表达常见错误及评卷要求，我们总结出行之有效的“一式、两头、三写、四关”高分技巧，即写对格式、写好两头、写美卷面、破关夺隘。
一式：写对格式 确定主题，记住电子邮件的基本格式和特点。
两头：写好两头 要求灵活运用熟悉的句式结构和表达手法，使文章开头和结尾的表达生动准确，引人入胜，耐人寻味。
三写：写美卷面 行文时书写规范化，力求卷面整洁美观。单词的拼写、字母的大小写符合英语书写要求。
四关：破关夺隘 以主题为纲，进一步思考其内涵和外延，联系自己的学习、生活实际，凸显时代性。突破内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关以及习惯表达关。
1.倡议书语料库
常用开头语
(1) Haven't seen you for ages! 好久不见
(2) How are you these days？/How are you getting on these days？/How are you getting on with your work/studies？近来一切可好？
(3)Glad to hear from you. /I was so glad/pleased/happy to receive your letter. 很高兴收到你的来信。
(4) It is delightful news for me to learn that…/ I'm delighted to learn that…听到……的消息我太高兴了。
(5) Thank you for your wonderful gift/your interesting letter. 谢谢你精美的礼物/有趣的来信。
常用结尾篇
(1) I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. /Look forward to your favorite reply. 期盼尽快收到您的回信。
(2) I will appreciate it if you would give me…如果您能给我……我将非常感谢。
(3) That's all! Thank you. 就这么多，谢谢。
(4) Please give my respects to your family./ Please remember me to your whole family.请代我向你 的家人问好。
(5) Best wishes.万事如意
(6) Wish you a …祝你……。
(7) Thanks and all the best. 谢谢并祝万事如意。
(8) I would be very grateful if you would consider my…如果您考虑我……的话，我将非常感激。
2.写作模板
Dear ______ ,
①I am glad to receive your e-mail! ② And I am so pleased to hear that you are interested in________. ③You must be ______(表示心情). ④ And I feel very happy for you, too. Please accept my sincere congratulations on your______.
⑤______（所取得的成绩）is quite exciting news! ⑥I know more than anyone else how much effort you have put in and I am very proud of you for your achievement.⑦It is a reward for your ______（优点）. ⑧What's more, I hope you can ______（表达期望）and I also believe that ________ (表祝愿).
⑨ Best wishes for your further success.
Yours sincerely, ⑩ (签名)
1.（2023年新高考I卷）假定你是李华，你校Ryan外教准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你对这样分组有意见，请给外教写一封邮件，内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2.提出建议。注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【范文赏析】
Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua, one of your students. I would like to express my concerns regarding your plan to randomly divide students into pairs for post-class oral practice.
To begin with, I'm in favor of your decision to start a spoken English seminar, which will surely benefit us. However, I'm afraid it'd be less effective,for they couldn't cooperate well, if two students are randomly chosen. I think a set pair would be fine in the long run, for they could develop a close relationship during the practice. In the light of these concerns, I suggest allowing students to form teams voluntarily according to their interests ,learning goals or language abilities. Besides,we could divide students into different levels or categories based on their oral proficiency or other relevant criteria which would better cater to each student's needs.
I'd appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
1. 词汇积累
关于：about → regarding
赞成：agree → in favor of
2.句式拓展
原句：I think a set pair would be fine.
拓展句：I think a set pair would be fine in the long run, for they could develop a close relationship during the practice.
【高分句型1】In the light of these concerns, I suggest allowing students to form teams voluntarily according to their interests learning goals or language abilities.（本句虽然是简单句，但是句中使用较多高级短语，如in the light of鉴于，考虑到； suggest doing sth; according to按照等。）
2.（2023年新高考II卷）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3. I think it's not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don't get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1. 词汇积累
首先：to begin with → first of all
提高：improve → progress
建议：suggestion → advice
选择：choose → select
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don't get along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）
3.（2022·北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因；
2．交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Jim,
How's everything
I'm writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. Our classmates seem to be weak in organization. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay
The talk will last about an hour, and you can decide on a date at your convenience. Please let me know which platform you'll use. It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
最近好吗：How's everything → How's it going
提供、给予：give → offer / provide
不擅长：be weak in → be bad at / be poor in
建议：suggestion → advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I'm writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing.
拓展句：I'm writing to ask if it is convenient for you to offer us an online talk on English writing.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay (运用了疑问词+不定式作宾语)
【高分句型2】It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
4.（2022·浙江卷1月）假定你是李华，在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国，请你给他 写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 回忆活动经历；2. 分享个人收获；3. 希望保持联系。
注意：
1 . 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【范文赏析】
Dear Chris,
How are you doing these days It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much. I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago. It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together, through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history. We really enjoyed ourselves there. What's far more important is that we became good friends then. Though I felt a little sorry that you left China last year, I am pleased to know you are leading a happy life in your hometown.
I hope we can keep in touch often.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
返回：come back to → return to
思念：miss→ yearn
分享：share → exchange
玩得开心：enjoy oneself→ have a good time → have fun
开心的：pleased→ happy →delight→ content
过着快乐的生活：lead a happy life→ live a happy life
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland. I miss you so much.
拓展句： It has been a year since you came back to Ireland and I miss you so much.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago.（运用了定语从句）
【高分句型2】It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about your country together, through which I learned a lot about your food, culture and history.（运用了强调句型和定语从句）
【高分句型3】What's far more important is that we became good friends then.（运用了主语从句和表语从句）
5.（2021·北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Jim,
I'm sorry to inform you that I can't go out with you this weekend. I've just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. I hope the change won't cause you too much trouble.
How about going out next Saturday morning If it's convenient for you, let's meet at the school gate at 9: 00. Please let me know what time suits you best. I should be available anytime next weekend.
In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers together.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
通知：tell→inform
除此之外：in addition→besides
适合：fit→suit
有空的：available→free
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers together.
拓展句：In addition, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park next Saturday, when we can go to see the flowers together.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I'm sorry to inform you that I can't go out with you this weekend.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I've just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
6.（2021·全国甲卷）假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1．阐明写信事由；
2．征求建议；
3．表示感谢。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【范文赏析】
Dear Chris，
How are you doing these days I'm writing to ask you some advice.
In order to promote Chinese traditional culture and post some class meetings on English websites, our school is going to organize class meetings, the theme of which is traditional Chinese culture. We can choose a variety of themes, such as calligraphy, martial arts, oil paintings, paper cutting and so on. I'm wondering if you could let me know which of them you like best and which of them people from outside of China are more likely to be interested in.
Thank you for your help. I'd appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.
Yours'
Li Hua
1. 词汇积累
建议：suggestion→ advice
提高：heighten→ promote
各种各样： all kinds of→ a variety of
选择：select→ choose
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We can choose a variety of themes, such as calligraphy, martial arts, oil paintings, paper cutting and so on.
拓展句：We can choose a variety of themes, which include calligraphy, martial arts, oil paintings, paper cutting and so on.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] In order to promote Chinese traditional culture and post some class meetings on English websites, our school is going to organize class meetings, the theme of which is traditional Chinese culture..（介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] I'm wondering if you could let me know which of them you like best and which of them people from outside of China are more likely to be interested in.（if引导的宾语从句）
1．（2022上·山西大同·高一统考期中）假定你是李华，你的同学John因学习和生活问题感到身体不适，请你结合自己的生活体验，根据提示内容给他回复电子邮件，内容包括：
1．健康的重要性;
2．提出建议：平衡饮食、锻炼身体等至少两条建议。
注意：1．词数应为80左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数;
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
Learning that you have trouble in keeping healthy, I'm writing to offer you some practical suggestions.
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I do hope these advice will be helpful to you and you will lead a healthy and enjoyable life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear John,
Learning that you have trouble in keeping healthy, I’m writing to offer you some practical suggestions.
There is no doubt that health plays an important role in our daily life, without which one can hardly live a happy life. First of all, keeping a balanced diet is very important to our heath, which contains plenty of nutritious food, such as fish, beans, fresh fruit and vegetables. Besides, it is helpful to take physical exercise regularly to build up a strong body instead of studying all the time. What’s more, having enough sleep is another good choice as it can make you energetic.
I do hope these advice will be helpful to you and you will lead a healthy and enjoyable life.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
重要的：important→significant
建议：suggestions→tips
另外：besides→furthermore/moreover/in addition
做某事有困难：have trouble in doing→have difficulty in doing
2.句式拓展：
简单句变复杂句
原句：Learning that you have trouble in keeping healthy, I’m writing to offer you some practical suggestions.
拓展句：Learning that you have trouble in keeping healthy, I’m writing to offer you some practical suggestions, which I think will be of great help to you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] There is no doubt that health plays an important role in our daily life, without which one can hardly live a happy life. (运用了that引导的同位语从句和“without+which”引导的非限定性定语从句)
[高分句型2] First of all, keeping a balanced diet is very important to our heath, which contains plenty of nutritious food, such as fish, beans, fresh fruit and vegetables. (运用了动名词作主语和关系代词which引导的非限定性定语从句)
2．（2023上·河北石家庄·高一鹿泉区第一中学校联考期中）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Roy正在中国某城市作交换生，他因交不到朋友而苦恼，发来邮件向你求助。请你用英文给他写封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表示安慰；2.你的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Roy,
I am sorry to hear that you are having some trouble in making friends in China.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Roy,
I am sorry to hear that you are having some trouble in making friends in China. But take it easy. I believe with your sincerity and friendliness, you will make some friends.
Here are my suggestions. First, overcome your shyness. Try to be brave and open yourself up to others. Keep reminding yourself to wear a smile when meeting people. Besides, join in more activities, where you may meet people who like being with you. Last but not least, don’t try to fit in with everyone, and find people who share common interests with you.
I’m looking forward to hearing some stories about your new friends.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
相信：believe →hold the belief that
建议：suggestion→ advice
首先：first→to begin with
而且：besides→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First, overcome your shyness.
拓展句：First, it is essential that you should overcome your shyness.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I believe with your sincerity and friendliness, you will make some friends.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Besides, join in more activities, where you may meet people who like being with you.（运用了where引导非限制性定语从句）
3．（2023上·贵州贵阳·高二校联考阶段练习）假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡 (Singapore) 举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容包括：1.自我介绍（包括英语能力）；
2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）；
3.希望获准。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【范文赏析】
Dear sir,
I am Li Hua, a senior middle school student from China. I am interested in the advertisement you have posted on the Internet and I would like to be a member of the Summer Camp.
Having been learning English for 9 years, I have a good command of English. Besides, Chinese is my native language and I take great interest in Chinese history and have read a lot about Chinese culture. I think the Summer Camp will offer me a good chance to help foreigners learn about our country and introduce Chinese culture to the world. At the same time, that is a good chance for me to learn about the customs of other countries. That’s why I am writing to apply to join your camp.
I hope I will be accepted as a member of yours. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
母语：native language→mother tongue
掌握得好：have a good command of→have a good knowledge of
提供：offer→provide
申请：apply→subscribe
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Having been learning English for 9 years, I have a good command of English.
拓展句：Since I have been learning English for 9 years, I have a good command of English.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I think the Summer Camp will offer me a good chance to help foreigners learn about our country and introduce Chinese culture to the world. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] That’s why I am writing to apply to join your camp. (运用了why引导的表语从句)
4．（2021·辽宁·统考高考真题）假如你是李华，从互联网上得知Banks夫妇的西餐厅在登广告招聘兼职服务员。请你写一封电子邮件应聘。内容包括：
1. 发邮件的目的；
2. 自我介绍；
3. 应聘理由(可开阔视野、交到新朋友等)；
4. 表达自己的希望。
写作要求：
1. 应包含所给出的全部要点提示；
2. 字数80词左右；
3. 短文内不得出现真实的校名和姓名，否则不得分。
4. 开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr.and Mrs. Banks,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Regards,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Mr.and Mrs. Banks,
I’m Li Hua, who has just graduated from high school this summer. I know that you want some part-timers for your newly-opened western restaurant on the Internet and I’d like to be part of your team.
I’ve been learning English for 10 years, and I can express myself fluently. Besides, I’m diligent and healthy with a nice character, which helps me get along well with people with different backgrounds. What matters most is the opportunity of expanding my horizons as well as making more new friends. And it is the sense of commitment that I am eager to raise through such a valuable experience that inspires me to make this request.
An early reply at your convenience will be much appreciated if my qualifications meet with your approval.
Regards,
Li Hua
1. 词汇积累
学习：learning→gaining knowledge in
另外：besides→in addition
勤勉的：diligent→conscientious
扩宽视野：expanding my horizons→broadening my perspectives
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’ve been learning English for 10 years, and I can express myself fluently.
拓展句：I’ve been learning English for 10 years so that I can express myself fluently.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I know that you want some part-timers for your newly-opened western restaurant on the Internet and I’d like to be part of your team.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Besides, I’m diligent and healthy with a nice character, which helps me get along well with people with different backgrounds.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5．（2023上·北京·高三北京八中校考期中）假设你是红星中学高三(1)班班长李华。你班即将在12月3日国际残疾人日(International Day of Persons with Disabilities)开展关爱残疾人活动。请你给交换生Jim写一封电子邮件邀请他参加，内容包括：
1. 活动目的及安排；
2. 邀请参加。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Jim,
I am Li Hua, the monitor of Class 1, Senior 3 of Hongxing High School. I am writing to invite you to participate in our upcoming event on International Day of Persons with Disabilities.
Our class is organizing this event to raise awareness about the challenges faced by persons with disabilities and to show our support and care for them. The event will take place on December 3, 2023, starting at 9:00 a.m. and lasting until 5:00 p.m. We will begin with a short introduction to the history and purpose of the International Day of Persons with Disabilities.
We believe that your participation would be beneficial to our event.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
参加：participate in→take part in
活动：event→activity
提高：raise→promote
目的：purpose→aim
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The event will take place on December 3, 2023, starting at 9:00 a.m. and lasting until 5:00 p.m.
拓展句：The event will take place on December 3, 2023, which starts at 9:00 a.m. and lasts until 5:00 p.m.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Our class is organizing this event to raise awareness about the challenges faced by persons with disabilities and to show our support and care for them. (运用了不定式to raise作目的状语以及过去分词faced作后置定语)
[高分句型2] We believe that your participation would be beneficial to our event. (运用了链接代词that引导的宾语从句)
6．（2023下·贵州安顺·高二统考期末）假定你是李华，你校将举行一次讲座，主题为：《中国山水画Chinese Landscape Painting》，请你写一封英文电子邮件邀请你的外教David一同参加。
内容包括：1. 讲座的内容、意义； 2. 讲座的时间、地点。
注意：写作词数应为80词左右。
Dear David,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear David,
How are you doing I am writing to invite you to attend a lecture on Chinese Landscape Painting to be held at our school.
Firstly, the lecture will cover the importance and significance of Chinese landscape painting in Chinese art and culture, which I believe will be of great interest to you. Besides, the lecture is scheduled to take place on Friday, May 14th, at 2 pm in the school auditorium.
All in all, I really hope you can join us for this exciting event and learn more about the beauty and depth of Chinese art. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
举办：hold→host
首先：firstly→ first of all
此外：besides → what’s more
希望：hope→expect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to invite you to attend a lecture on Chinese Landscape Painting to be held at our school.
拓展句：I am writing to invite you to attend a lecture on Chinese Landscape Painting which will be held at our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Firstly, the lecture will cover the importance and significance of Chinese landscape painting in Chinese art and culture, which I believe will be of great interest to you. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】 All in all, I really hope you can join us for this exciting event and learn more about the beauty and depth of Chinese art. （运用了省略that引导的宾语从句）
7．（2023·四川成都·校联考三模）假如你是李华，你校英国交换生James希望体验你们骑游俱乐部的活动，请你写一封电子邮件邀请他参加。要点如下：
1. 邀请他参加本周末的骑游活动；
2. 活动的具体安排，包括时间、地点和路线等。
注意：
1. 词数：100左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：骑游俱乐部 the cycling club
Dear James,
How is everything going
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear James,
How is everything going I am writing to invite you to join our cycling club’s event this weekend.
The event is taking place on Saturday morning, starting at 9:00 a.m. We will meet at the clubhouse. We will set off on a circular route that takes us through some of the most picturesque parts of the city. The route is approximately 20 kilometers long and we should be able to complete it in about 2 hours. Along the way, you will have the chance to see our city from a unique perspective.
It’s a great opportunity for you to experience our club’s activities and make new friends. We hope to see you there.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
完成：complete→finish
大约：approximately→roughly
出发：set off→depart
机会：chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We will meet at the clubhouse, located on the outskirts of the city.
拓展句：We will meet at the clubhouse, which is located on the outskirts of the city.
【点睛】[高分句型1] We will set off on a circular route that takes us through some of the most picturesque parts of the city.（运用了that引导定语从句）
[高分句型2] Along the way, you will have the chance to see our city from a unique perspective. (运用了不定式作后置定语)
8．（2023·四川成都·校联考二模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Frank来信了解近来兴起的春节度假方式，请你写一封电子邮件予以回复。要点如下：
1. 传统的度假方式；
2. 兴起的度假方式；
3. 你下一个春节的度假安排。
注意：1. 词数：100左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：春节假期 the Spring Festival holiday
Dear Frank,
How is it going
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Frank,
How is it going I’m glad to learn that you are eager about the ways Chinese people spend the Spring Festival.
People usually have a week-long Spring Festival holiday. Traditionally, those working far away from their hometown will go back to reunite-with their family and have a good time together, visiting friends and enjoying the Gala. Now, as people have earned more money, many choose to drive or fly to tourist resorts with their family and friends to appreciate the beauty of our motherland. Also. many parents seize the opportunity to take their children to famous museums and historic places to broaden their children’s views.
For my next Spring Festival, my parents have promised to take me to London as long as I study hard and make progress in my studies. And I’m trying my best to turn it into a reality!
Looking forward to seeing-you in Britain!
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
机会：opportunity→ chance
著名的：famous→ well-known
只要：as long as→ since/provided that
取得进步：make progress in→ make advances in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Traditionally, those working far away from their hometown will go back to reunite-with their family and have a good time together, visiting friends and enjoying the Gala.
拓展句：Traditionally, those who work far away from their hometown will go back to reunite-with their family and have a good time together, visiting friends and enjoying the Gala.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Now, as people have earned more money, many choose to drive or fly to tourist resorts with their family and friends to appreciate the beauty of our motherland.(运用了as引导的状语从句)
【高分句型2】For my next Spring Festival, my parents have promised to take me to London as long as I study hard and make progress in my studies.(运用了as long as引导的状语从句)
9．（2023上·辽宁抚顺·高二校联考期中）假定你是李华，你的交换生同学William刚来学校，想了解一下学校图书馆的情况。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.基本情况；
2.开放时间；
3.注意事项。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear William,
How is everything going
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear William,
How is everything going Knowing that you’d like to know something about the school library, I am more than happy to share what I know with you.
The school library, located in the southeast of the school, is a building of 4-storeyed. There are wide varieties of books, which can meet the reading needs of the vast majority of students. It opens at 10: 00 am and closes at 9: 00 pm from Tuesday to Sunday every week. In the reading section, students are required to be quiet when reading and books are not allowed to be taken away without the librarian’s permission.
May you enjoy reading in the library. If you have any concerns, don’t hesitate to contact me.
Yours,
1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→delighted
同意：permission→approval
喜欢：enjoy→be fond of
与某人联系：contact sb→get in touch with sb
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The school library, located in the southeast of the school, is a building of 4-storeyed.
拓展句：The school library, which is located in the southeast of the school, is a building of 4-storeyed.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing that you’d like to know something about the school library, I am more than happy to share what I know with you.（运用了that和what引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】There are wide varieties of books, which can meet the reading needs of the vast majority of students.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
10．（2023上·浙江·高二校联考期中）假定你是李华，上星期你班召开了主题为“垃圾分类”的班会。你的英国笔友Mike发来电子邮件想了解班会的相关情况，请给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 班会的主题;
2. 班会的简要过程;
3. 班会的意义。
参考词汇：垃圾分类—waste sorting;班会—class meeting
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Mike,
How’s everything going I am writing to share some information about our class meeting with you.
To help the students develop the good habit of garbage classification, we held the class meeting whose topic was “waste sorting”. First, we watched a video about how to sort waste. Then, we were given questions to check whether we could classify waste correctly in daily life. The activity turned out to be meaningful, through which we not only acquired a good knowledge of waste sorting but also raised our awareness of protecting the environment.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
举行：hold→host
主题：topic→theme
提高：raise→promote
有意义的：meaningful→significant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First, we watched a video about how to sort waste.
拓展句：First, we watched a video, which showed us how to sort waste.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To help the students develop the good habit of garbage classification, we held the class meeting whose topic was “waste sorting”. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] The activity turned out to be meaningful, through which we not only acquired a good knowledge of waste sorting but also raised our awareness of protecting the environment. (运用了介词+关系代词结构非限制性定语从句)专题06提纲作文高分宝典之电子邮件
目录
1.三年高考考情透析，把握高考风向标；
2评分标准早知道，明确得分失分点；
3.高分技巧心中有，“一式、两头、三写、四关”；
4.素材宝库赋能，句型模板全面掌握；
5.高考真题精讲，写作思路一目了然；
6.名校模拟提升，好题新题举一反三。
新高考写作第一节的命题形式主要是提纲式作文，主要文体形式包括投稿征文、演讲稿、通知、倡议书、活动介绍、电子邮件、书信 等。作文所涉及的话题贴近学生生活，富有时代气息，体现了新课程标准的要求，能唤起考生强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。
年份 卷别 命题形式 话题
2023年 新高考全国I卷 提纲式 对外教对学生的分组提出意见
2023年 新高考全国II卷 提纲式 对外教对学生的分组提出意见
2022年 北京卷 提纲式 你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流
2022年 浙江卷 提纲式 与爱尔兰结识的朋友分享收获
2021年 全国甲卷 提纲式 写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人
一、评分细则
1.本题总分为15分，分五个档次进行评分。
2.评分时应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。具体为：
(1)对于内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。
(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4.评分时还应注意：
(1)词数少于60的，酌情扣分。
(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。书写较差，以致影响交际的将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(13-15分)：雅—能写明全部要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达无误。
第四档(10-12分)：达—能写明全部或绝大部分要点，语言有少量错误，行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚。
第三档(7-9分)： 信—能写明基本要点，语言虽有较多错误，但能基本达意。
第二档(4-6分)：能写出部分要点，语言错误多，影响意思表达。
第一档(1-3分)：只能写出一两个要点，里面错误很多，只有个别句子正确。
零分：未作答，所写内容无法评判；所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。
总之，在写电子邮件时，考生应该注意“有话好好说”：体现出词语的魅力，展示精彩的语句；“有话慢慢说”：要点齐全，叙述从容，运用一定的过渡词语。平时注意积累并背诵各种写作素材的“万能模板”并学会灵活运用，这样才能在有限的时间内提升写作能力。在考场上挥洒自如，如鱼得水。
根据考生书面表达常见错误及评卷要求，我们总结出行之有效的“一式、两头、三写、四关”高分技巧，即写对格式、写好两头、写美卷面、破关夺隘。
一式：写对格式 确定主题，记住电子邮件的基本格式和特点。
两头：写好两头 要求灵活运用熟悉的句式结构和表达手法，使文章开头和结尾的表达生动准确，引人入胜，耐人寻味。
三写：写美卷面 行文时书写规范化，力求卷面整洁美观。单词的拼写、字母的大小写符合英语书写要求。
四关：破关夺隘 以主题为纲，进一步思考其内涵和外延，联系自己的学习、生活实际，凸显时代性。突破内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关以及习惯表达关。
1.倡议书语料库
常用开头语
(1) Haven't seen you for ages! 好久不见
(2) How are you these days？/How are you getting on these days？/How are you getting on with your work/studies？近来一切可好？
(3)Glad to hear from you. /I was so glad/pleased/happy to receive your letter. 很高兴收到你的来信。
(4) It is delightful news for me to learn that…/ I'm delighted to learn that…听到……的消息我太高兴了。
(5) Thank you for your wonderful gift/your interesting letter. 谢谢你精美的礼物/有趣的来信。
常用结尾篇
(1) I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. /Look forward to your favorite reply. 期盼尽快收到您的回信。
(2) I will appreciate it if you would give me…如果您能给我……我将非常感谢。
(3) That's all! Thank you. 就这么多，谢谢。
(4) Please give my respects to your family./ Please remember me to your whole family.请代我向你 的家人问好。
(5) Best wishes.万事如意
(6) Wish you a …祝你……。
(7) Thanks and all the best. 谢谢并祝万事如意。
(8) I would be very grateful if you would consider my…如果您考虑我……的话，我将非常感激。
2.写作模板
Dear ______ ,
①I am glad to receive your e-mail! ② And I am so pleased to hear that you are interested in________. ③You must be ______(表示心情). ④ And I feel very happy for you, too. Please accept my sincere congratulations on your______.
⑤______（所取得的成绩）is quite exciting news! ⑥I know more than anyone else how much effort you have put in and I am very proud of you for your achievement.⑦It is a reward for your ______（优点）. ⑧What's more, I hope you can ______（表达期望）and I also believe that ________ (表祝愿).
⑨ Best wishes for your further success.
Yours sincerely, ⑩ (签名)
1.（2023年新高考I卷）假定你是李华，你校Ryan外教准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你对这样分组有意见，请给外教写一封邮件，内容包括:
1. 说明问题;
2.提出建议。注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
2.（2023年新高考II卷）假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3.（2022·北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因；
2．交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4.（2022·浙江卷1月）假定你是李华，在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国，请你给他 写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 回忆活动经历；2. 分享个人收获；3. 希望保持联系。
注意：
1 . 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5.（2021·北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6.（2021·全国甲卷）假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1．阐明写信事由；
2．征求建议；
3．表示感谢。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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1．（2022上·山西大同·高一统考期中）假定你是李华，你的同学John因学习和生活问题感到身体不适，请你结合自己的生活体验，根据提示内容给他回复电子邮件，内容包括：
1．健康的重要性;
2．提出建议：平衡饮食、锻炼身体等至少两条建议。
注意：1．词数应为80左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数;
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
Learning that you have trouble in keeping healthy, I'm writing to offer you some practical suggestions.
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I do hope these advice will be helpful to you and you will lead a healthy and enjoyable life.
Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2023上·河北石家庄·高一鹿泉区第一中学校联考期中）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Roy正在中国某城市作交换生，他因交不到朋友而苦恼，发来邮件向你求助。请你用英文给他写封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表示安慰；2.你的建议。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Roy,
I am sorry to hear that you are having some trouble in making friends in China.
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2023上·贵州贵阳·高二校联考阶段练习）假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡 (Singapore) 举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容包括：1.自我介绍（包括英语能力）；
2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）；
3.希望获准。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．（2021·辽宁·统考高考真题）假如你是李华，从互联网上得知Banks夫妇的西餐厅在登广告招聘兼职服务员。请你写一封电子邮件应聘。内容包括：
1. 发邮件的目的；
2. 自我介绍；
3. 应聘理由(可开阔视野、交到新朋友等)；
4. 表达自己的希望。
写作要求：
1. 应包含所给出的全部要点提示；
2. 字数80词左右；
3. 短文内不得出现真实的校名和姓名，否则不得分。
4. 开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr.and Mrs. Banks,
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Regards,
Li Hua
5．（2023上·北京·高三北京八中校考期中）假设你是红星中学高三(1)班班长李华。你班即将在12月3日国际残疾人日(International Day of Persons with Disabilities)开展关爱残疾人活动。请你给交换生Jim写一封电子邮件邀请他参加，内容包括：
1. 活动目的及安排；
2. 邀请参加。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2023下·贵州安顺·高二统考期末）假定你是李华，你校将举行一次讲座，主题为：《中国山水画Chinese Landscape Painting》，请你写一封英文电子邮件邀请你的外教David一同参加。
内容包括：1. 讲座的内容、意义； 2. 讲座的时间、地点。
注意：写作词数应为80词左右。
Dear David,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7．（2023·四川成都·校联考三模）假如你是李华，你校英国交换生James希望体验你们骑游俱乐部的活动，请你写一封电子邮件邀请他参加。要点如下：
1. 邀请他参加本周末的骑游活动；
2. 活动的具体安排，包括时间、地点和路线等。
注意：
1. 词数：100左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：骑游俱乐部 the cycling club
Dear James,
How is everything going
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Looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2023·四川成都·校联考二模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Frank来信了解近来兴起的春节度假方式，请你写一封电子邮件予以回复。要点如下：
1. 传统的度假方式；
2. 兴起的度假方式；
3. 你下一个春节的度假安排。
注意：1. 词数：100左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：春节假期 the Spring Festival holiday
Dear Frank,
How is it going
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．（2023上·辽宁抚顺·高二校联考期中）假定你是李华，你的交换生同学William刚来学校，想了解一下学校图书馆的情况。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.基本情况；
2.开放时间；
3.注意事项。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear William,
How is everything going
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．（2023上·浙江·高二校联考期中）假定你是李华，上星期你班召开了主题为“垃圾分类”的班会。你的英国笔友Mike发来电子邮件想了解班会的相关情况，请给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 班会的主题;
2. 班会的简要过程;
3. 班会的意义。
参考词汇：垃圾分类—waste sorting;班会—class meeting
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
