题型16 说明文
第一段 提出文章的主题，也就是说，文章想要阐述、说明的主要内容
第二段 文章的主体，可由若干个段落组成，对文章的主题进行展开说明;
第三段 对文章的主题进行归纳总结。
【满分词汇模板】
短语 on the contrary恰恰相反； however然而； compare…to/with…和......相比； in contrast to和......相反； the same as,和......一样； similar to和......相似； different from和......不同； more than不仅仅； in a word/in short总之； generally speaking一般来说；
【满分句型模板之说明方位句】
. .. is located at the foot of/by the side of/to the east of/to the north of ......
......位于…的底部，北面的北面。
In front of it is ..., with ... on its left and ... on its right.
在它的前面是……，与…在它的左边和…在它的右边。
Turning to the left, you will see ..., behind which is ...
转到左边，你会看到……，后面是。
Walking past ..., you will see the building that appears in front of you is ...
走过……，你会看到出现在你面前的建筑是。。
Along the road are lines of trees, casting dense shade on the sidewalk.
沿路是一排排的树木，在人行道上投下了茂密的阴影。
【满分句型模板之说明现象句】
1. Nowadays more and more people are suffering...
如今,越来越多的人正遭受着…
2. With the development of..., there is an increasing need for...people to know how to...
随着……的发展,越来越多的人需要知道如何……
3. As far as I'm concerned, there are several reasons for...
在我看来，……的原因有几个。
4. Owing to air pollution, many people have health problems.
由于空气污染,很多人有健康问题。
5.Everything has both advantages and disadvantages. The negative aspects are also apparent.
一切都有利有弊。负面的因素也很明显。
On the whole, its advantages can be seen as follows.
总的来说，其优点如下。
【满分句型模板之问题方法句】
The answer to the problem involves many factors.
这个问题的答案涉及很多方面。
To ensure success, there is one more thing that you must bear in mind, which is...
为了确保成功,你心中还需记住一点,那就是……
Then, by what means shall we solve the problem
那么我们应该采取什么措施来解决这个问题
In this way, you'll feel relaxed and refreshed.
通过这种方式,你将会感觉到放松和振作。
5. Therefore, find an effective way that is suitable for you, and you will have a wonderful life.
所以,找到一种适合你的有效的方法,那么你的生活也会多姿多彩的。
6. It is high time that something should be done...
是我们做些什么来……的时候了。
7.The change in… largely results from the fact that…
8. There are several causes for this significant growth in …
这种显著的增长有几个原因。
With the functions of ...,it enables us to...
具有……的功能，它使我们能够。
【满分句型模板之数据分析句】
1.The bar chart describes significant changes in the...
该柱形图描述了……的显著变化。
According to the result of the survey, more than half. About60% of the students like.... while only 30% say they are inr terested in...
根据调查结果可知,有超过半数即大约60%的学生喜欢……,而只有30%的学生说他们对…感兴趣。
Judging from these figures. we can draw the conclusion that...
根据这些数字判断,我们可以得出结论
4.More students, around 58%, however, insist that...
然而更多的学生,约58%,坚持认为......
The table/chart shows that …
表格/图表显示
As can be seen from the chart…
从图表中可以看出。
From the table/chart/forms, we can see…
从表格/图表/表格中我们可以看到......。
【满分作文模板一 事物介绍】
What I have known about is that __________________.(具体描述某事物)
First of all, __________________ (具体阐述要点一) . What’s more, __________________ (具体阐述要点二). As a college student, __________________ (结合自身描述要点三).
In conclusion, __________________ (做出总结) . Therefore, we should __________________(提出建议).
【满分作文模板二 问题方法介绍】
In recent days, there has been a problem , which is becoming more and more serious.（说明问题及其现状）
To begin with, __________________. What’ s more, __________________.（进一步阐释现状）We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, __________________. For another thing, ________. Finally,__________________.（列举解决该问题的方法）
Personally, I believe that __________________/Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because __________________.（结尾段，归纳信心及理由）
【满分作文模板三 路线、方位介绍】
Located in the __________________（方位）， _______________(某地）covers an area of_______________________(面积).
Entering _______________(某地）, you can see a big flower bed in front of you, and _____________________（建筑一）on your left. Walking on further, you’ll find_____________________（建筑二）. ______________________（方位介词短语），there is__________（地点二）. Behind it, there lies__________________（地点二）.
All the buildings are surrounding by trees and flowers. It’s really a beautiful school.
1．假定你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国新近出现的一种共享单车“shared bikes”很感兴趣，并请你做个简要介绍。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：
1. 这种单车的使用方法（如：APP查看车辆、扫码开锁等）；
2. 这种单车的优势；
3. 你对这种单车的看法。
注意：
1. 词数大约100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：智能手机 smartphone, 二维码 the QR code
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of shared bike “shared bikes” mentioned in your latest letter.
It’s very convenient to use if you have a smartphone. What you do is to find a nearest shared bike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip.
Compared to other forms of sharing bike, the greatest advantage of mobike is that you can easily find one and never worry about where to park it. It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well.
Hope to ride a shared bike with you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Jim写封信，给他简要介绍共享单车的使用方法、优势和你对这种单车的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对比：compare→contrast
趋势：trend→tendency
缓解：relieve→ease
压力：pressure→stress
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of shared bike “shared bikes” mentioned in your latest letter.
拓展句：I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of shared bike “shared bikes” which was mentioned in your latest letter.
【点睛】[高分句型1] What you do is to find a nearest shared bike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, and enjoy your trip. (运用了what引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2] It is becoming a new trend as a means of transportation, which relieves the traffic pressure and does good to the environment as well. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Chris正在学习汉语。他得知你校在钉钉(DingTalk)软件开设了线上中国诗词课程教学，他非常感兴趣并想参加学习，便写信给你，希望你介绍相关情况。请根据以下提示给他写一封回信。
内容包括：
(1)使用钉钉(DingTalk)的方法：
(2)在线中国诗词课程的特色。
注意：
(1)词数100左右：
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m glad that you show great interest in Chinese culture. The course of Chinese poetry online attracted lots of students in our school and aroused our passion for traditional Chinese culture.
The using methods, DingTalk, are simple and convenient. First, download this application and enter the class group. Next, click the button of “class online” and find the live telecast to learn the class online.
The course of Chinese poetry online has many advantages. Not only can you play it again and again, but also you can pause and go back at any time if you don’t understand what teachers say. I hope what I say can be helpful for you.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。给好朋友Chris介绍线上中国诗词课程教学的一些基本情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
传统的：traditional→conventional
许多：many→plenty of
回复：reply→response
希望：hope→expect
2.句式拓展
句式升级
原句：The using methods, DingTalk, are simple and convenient.
拓展句：The using methods, which are called DingTalk, are simple and convenient.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Not only can you play it again and again, but also you can pause and go back at any time if you don’t understand what teachers say. (运用了部分倒装结构)
[高分句型2] I hope what I say can be helpful for you. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
3．假如你是某国际学校的学生李华，你最近使用了一本XX英英词典，感觉非常实用，请你利用班会时间向同学们推荐它。内容要点如下：
1. 特色（如词汇量、用法、例句等方面）；
2. 使用心得。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone!
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【答案】
Hello, everyone!
I’d like to spend few minutes in this class meeting introducing an English-English dictionary to you.
First and foremost, it has a large vocabulary, with more than 1,000 new words added, which is indeed a help to us. As the explanations of the words are of great accuracy, it will be easy for us to understand and we will have a better understanding of a certain word.
Moreover, the usages of the words are listed in detail, with many vivid examples. And I really appreciate these examples, for they can give me an authentic taste of this language. Still, the variety of the structures used in the example sentences benefits me greatly.
All in all, this dictionary really serves as a good tool for my English study. I strongly recommend you have one.
Thank you for your listening.
【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求推荐一本词典。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求推荐一本词典：假如你是某国际学校的学生李华，你最近使用了一本XX英英词典，感觉非常实用，请你利用班会时间向同学们推荐它。内容要点如下：1. 特色（如词汇量、用法、例句等方面）；2. 使用心得。
时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：English-English dictionary（英英词典），vocabulary（词汇量），explanation（解释），accuracy（准确性），understanding（理解），vivid（生动的）及authentic（可信的）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有First and foremost（首要的是），be of+n.（具有……），have a better understanding of（与对……有更好的理解），in detail (详细地)以及 serves as（充当……），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“it has a large vocabulary, with more than 1,000 new words added, which is indeed a help to us.”状语从句 “And I really appreciate these examples, for they can give me an authentic taste of this language.”，形式主语“it will be easy for us to understand and we will have a better understanding of a certain word”，非谓语动词“Still, the variety of the structures used in the example sentences benefits me greatly.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
4．假设你是明启中学的李华，你们学校正在开展“花香进校园”活动，一方面开设园艺选修课，让学生了解花的习性；另一方面人人动手实践，用花装扮校园，创建优美的生活学习环境。请你写一封邮件给你的英国笔友Jim, 介绍此次活动。
你的邮件须包括：
1. 对该活动的简要描述；
2. 举例说明该活动对你的影响。
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【答案】
Dear Jim,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to introduce a unique and fragrant activity happening at my school, the “Flowers and Fragrance into School” activity.
As part of this activity, our school has opened up a gardening optional course that teaches us about the habits and characteristics of different flowers. The course aims to enhance our understanding and appreciation of flowers. Additionally, we are encouraged to participate in hands-on activities by using our creativity to decorate our school campus with flowers, creating a beautiful and fragrant environment for our learning and living.
Personally, this activity has had a profound impact on me. Not only have I learned a lot about flowers and gardening, but also, the activity has taught me the importance of patience, attention to detail, and the appreciation of nature’s beauty.
I hope this activity can also be implemented in your school to enhance the learning and living environment.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校正在开展“花香进校园”活动，一方面开设园艺选修课，让学生了解花的习性；另一方面人人动手实践，用花装扮校园，创建优美的生活学习环境。要求考生写一封邮件给你的英国笔友Jim, 介绍此次活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
独特的：unique→ distinctive
芳香的：fragrant→ aromatic
提高：enhance→ improve
此外：additionally→ in addition
2.同义句转换
原句：Additionally, we are encouraged to participate in hands-on activities by using our creativity to decorate our school campus with flowers, creating a beautiful and fragrant environment for our learning and living.
拓展句：Additionally, we are encouraged to participate in hands-on activities by using our creativity to decorate our school campus with flowers, which creates a beautiful and fragrant environment for our learning and living.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As part of this activity, our school has opened up a gardening optional course that teaches us about the habits and characteristics of different flowers.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Additionally, we are encouraged to participate in hands-on activities by using our creativity to decorate our school campus with flowers, creating a beautiful and fragrant environment for our learning and living.（运用了动名词using作宾语和现在分词creating作状语）
5．假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近在一份英语杂志上读到一篇题为The impact of information technology on our life的文章，你对此话题颇感兴趣，写一封信给该杂志，内容须包括：
1)你认为信息时代对我们日常生活带来了怎样的影响；
2)用具体事例说明这一影响。
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【答案】
Dear Editor,
I am Li Ming, a student from Mingqi High School. I recently read an article in your magazine titled “The Impact of Information Technology on Our Life” and found it very interesting.
In my opinion, the information age has had a profound impact on our daily lives. With the development of technology, we can now access information more easily and quickly than ever before. The internet has connected people from all over the world, enabling us to communicate and share information with each other in real time.
One specific example of this impact is the use of smartphones. Nowadays, people can use their smartphones to do almost everything, such as shopping, paying bills, and booking tickets. Mobile apps have also made it easier for us to stay connected with friends and family, and to access a wide range of entertainment and information.
In conclusion, I believe that the information age has brought many benefits and changes to our lives.
Yours,
Li Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的稿件。要求考生以“The impact of information technology on our life”为主题给一份英语杂志写篇文章。
【详解】1.词汇积累
在我看来： in my opinion→from my point of view
对……有影响：have an impact on → have an influence on
使用：use → employ/make use of
最后：in conclusion→ to conclude
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I recently read an article in your magazine titled “The Impact of Information Technology on Our Life” and found it very interesting.
拓展句：I recently read an article in your magazine which was titled “The Impact of Information Technology on Our Life” and found it very interesting.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The internet has connected people from all over the world, enabling us to communicate and share information with each other in real time.（运用了现在分词担当状语）
【高分句型2】In conclusion, I believe that the information age has brought many benefits and changes to our lives.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
6．面临季节交替，流感病毒肆虐，许多同学病倒。为此，你校英语报征集稿件，题为“How to Prevent a Cold”。请你为校报投稿，建议同学们如何防控流感。
内容包括：1.说明现象；
2.提出建议（至少两点）。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
提示词：
流感病毒： flu virus
How to Prevent a Cold
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【答案】 How to Prevent a Cold
Winter is around the corner now, so flu virus is spreading quickly and many students have fallen ill. Here are a few tips to help you away from flu.
First, keep away from the crowded public places if possible. Such places are often polluted, which provide the best condition for viruses to reproduce. Second, avoid being tired. When tired, your defense system will lose its power and make it easy for you to be attacked by viruses. Most importantly, get rid of your bad living habits, and make a fixed time to sleep, get up and study.
If ill, don’t worry. Set aside your study, sleep more and rest well. You should take note that foods with vitamins can help you fight against virus.
Follow the above tips, and you will have a defense system strong enough to keep you healthy.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“How to Prevent a Cold”为题，就现在季节交替，流感病毒肆虐，许多同学病倒的情况写一篇稿件参加校英语报的征稿活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
即将来临：around the corner →on the way
生病：fall ill →fall sick
远离：keep away from →keep off
健康的：healthy →fit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Here are a few tips to help you away from flu.
拓展句：Here are a few tips to help you away from flu, which can help you away from flu.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Such places are often polluted, which provide the best condition for viruses to reproduce.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】When tired, your defense system will lose its power and make it easy for you to be attacked by viruses.（运用了状语从句中的省略和it作形式宾语，不定式短语作真正宾语的结构）
7．假定你是李华，你的外教老师Peter为了提高英语课堂效率，准备组织一些课堂活动，正在向同学们征集建议。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 列举课堂存在的问题；
2. 建议有效的课堂活动并说明理由。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
How are you doing To make our class more productive, I’d like to voice my ideas.
I’ve noticed that many of us are hesitant to speak up, probably due to fear of making mistakes. To approach this, I strongly recommend organizing group discussions and role-play activities, where the relaxed atmosphere will inspire more active participation and motivate us to speak confidently. Additionally, our vocabulary and grammar exercises could be more engaging. Interactive games, like word puzzles and grammar challenges, would make our learning fun and memorable. Such activities can foster a sense of competition and teamwork, contributing to a more dynamic and interactive learning environment.
Please take my tips into consideration at your convenience. Hopefully, they will be of great help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的外教老师Peter为了提高英语课堂效率，准备组织一些课堂活动，正在向同学们征集建议。请你给外教写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
因为：due to→because of
建议：recommend→suggest
有益的：be of great help→be helpful
考虑：take into consideration→take into account
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Such activities can foster a sense of competition and teamwork, contributing to a more dynamic and interactive learning environment.
拓展句：Not only can such activities foster a sense of competition and teamwork, but also they can contribute to a more dynamic and interactive learning environment.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’ve noticed that many of us are hesitant to speak up, probably due to fear of making mistakes. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] To approach this, I strongly recommend organizing group discussions and role-play activities, where the relaxed atmosphere will inspire more active participation and motivate us to speak confidently.(运用了where引导非限制性定语从句)
8．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 John 要来苏州参观游览，请给他写信简单介绍一下苏州。内容包括：
1. 简要介绍苏州(地理位置、气候)；
2. 苏州吸引人之处(建筑、历史、小吃等)；
3. 你的期待。
注意：1.词数 80 左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear John,
Hearing that you are going to travel in Suzhou, I’d like to inform you of some information about it. Located in the southeast of Jiangsu province in Eastern China, Suzhou has a mild and humid climate with four distinct seasons.
Suzhou is a well- known tourist destination, which is considered to be Venice in the East. It is a city with a long history of about two thousand and five hundred years, where many ancient buildings are preserved well by the local government and kept in a state of what it was centuries ago. Walking through Suzhou city, you will come across attractions here and there.
As you can see, Suzhou city is really a coexistence of the modern and the ancient. I am sure you will fall in love with the magical city. Looking forward to meeting with you in China.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给要来苏州参观游览的英国朋友John写信简单介绍一下苏州的地理位置、气候、苏州吸引人之处(建筑、历史、小吃等)以及自己的期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
坐落于……的：located→situated
有名的：well-known→renowned
真正的：really→truly
保护；维护：preserve→maintain
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Walking through Suzhou city, you will come across attractions here and there.
拓展句：If you walk through Suzhou city, you will come across attractions here and there.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Suzhou is a well- known tourist destination, which is considered to be Venice in the East.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Located in the southeast of Jiangsu province in Eastern China, Suzhou has a mild and humid climate with four distinct seasons.(运用了形容词短语作状语)
9．假设你是晨光中学的李津，我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一下国内你喜欢或去过的地方（如天路The Sky Railway、龙脊梯田Longji Rice Terraces、故宫博物院The Palace Museum、四川省Sichuan Province等）。
内容包括：
1. 该地方的基本情况（如名称、地理位置等）
2. 该地方的特色（如文化、景点等）
3. 你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意：
1.词数不少于100；
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯
A Beautiful Place in China
November 13th, 2023
By Li Jin
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【答案】 A Beautiful Place in China
November 13th,2023
By Li Jin
Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What's more, walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas and golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
I'm convinced that the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiuzhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给某英文网站的《最美中华》栏目投稿，介绍一下国内喜欢或去过的地方（如天路The Sky Railway、龙脊梯田Longji Rice Terraces、故宫博物院The Palace Museum、四川省Sichuan Province等）。
【详解】1.词汇积累
位于：locate→situate
机会：chance→opportunity
著名的：famous→noted
此外：what’s more→besides
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
拓展句：Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China, which enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
【点睛】[高分句型1] What's more, walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas and golden monkeys. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] I'm convinced that the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiuzhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
10．有效的课后作业能激发学生的学习兴趣，丰富学习经历，提升综合素养，并在知识与生活之间架起一座桥梁。假如你是李华，你校为减轻学生的负担，改进作业布置的方式，针对“你最喜欢的一种英语课后作业类型”，对全校1000名学生进行了问卷调查。请你根据下面图表信息，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；
2. 从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的作业类型，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种作业的好处。
要求：
(1)词数不少于80；
(2)文中不得出现真实的校名和人名等；
(3)字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，条理清楚；
(4)参考词汇仅供参考。
参考词汇：arouse interst 激发兴趣 enrich experiences 丰富经历 promote competence 提升素养
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【答案】
Our school did a survey among 1000 students about their favorite kinds of English homework. Here are the results. 42% of the students like listening and speaking homework best, and 29% enjoy reading and writing. The percentage of the students who like the hands-on project is 22% and 7% choose other kinds of homework.
As for me, I like the hands-on project best because it connects what I’ve learnt with real life in an interesting way. Three weeks ago, we were asked to make an English poster about Dragon Boat Festival. Then I collected lots of information about the festival. Finally, not only did I finish the task perfectly, but also I got a deeper understanding of our colorful culture. In my opinion, it’s the hands-on project that arouses my interest in English and enriches my experiences in learning.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表类写作。要求考生根据对全校1000名学生进行的主题为“你最喜欢的一种英语课后作业类型”问卷调查结果，写一篇英语短文。简要说明调查结果并介绍自己喜欢的作业类型。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最后：finally→ at last
大量的：lots of → a lot of/a great amount of
完成：finish → complete
在我看来：in my opinion→ from my point of view
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：42% of the students like listening and speaking homework best, and 29% enjoy reading and writing.
拓展句：42% of the students like listening and speaking homework best, while 29% enjoy reading and writing.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The percentage of the students who like the hands-on project is 22% and 7% choose other kinds of homework.（运用了who引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】As for me, I like the hands-on project best because it connects what I’ve learnt with real life in an interesting way.（运用了because引导的状语从句和what引导的宾语从句）题型16 说明文
第一段 提出文章的主题，也就是说，文章想要阐述、说明的主要内容
第二段 文章的主体，可由若干个段落组成，对文章的主题进行展开说明;
第三段 对文章的主题进行归纳总结。
【满分词汇模板】
短语 _________________恰恰相反； _________________然而； _________________和......相比； _________________和......相反； _________________和......一样； _________________和......相似； _________________和......不同； _________________不仅仅； _________________总之； _________________一般来说；
【满分句型模板之说明方位句】
. .. is located at the foot of/by the side of/to the east of/to the north of ......
......位于…的底部，北面的北面。
In front of it is ..., with ... on its left and ... on its right.
在它的前面是……，与…在它的左边和…在它的右边。
Turning to the left, you will see ..., behind which is ...
转到左边，你会看到……，后面是。
Walking past ..., you will see the building that appears in front of you is ...
走过……，你会看到出现在你面前的建筑是。。
Along the road are lines of trees, casting dense shade on the sidewalk.
沿路是一排排的树木，在人行道上投下了茂密的阴影。
【满分句型模板之说明现象句】
1. Nowadays more and more people are suffering...
如今,越来越多的人正遭受着…
2. With the development of..., there is an increasing need for...people to know how to...
随着……的发展,越来越多的人需要知道如何……
3. As far as I'm concerned, there are several reasons for...
在我看来，……的原因有几个。
4. Owing to air pollution, many people have health problems.
由于空气污染,很多人有健康问题。
5.Everything has both advantages and disadvantages. The negative aspects are also apparent.
一切都有利有弊。负面的因素也很明显。
On the whole, its advantages can be seen as follows.
总的来说，其优点如下。
【满分句型模板之问题方法句】
The answer to the problem involves many factors.
这个问题的答案涉及很多方面。
To ensure success, there is one more thing that you must bear in mind, which is...
为了确保成功,你心中还需记住一点,那就是……
Then, by what means shall we solve the problem
那么我们应该采取什么措施来解决这个问题
In this way, you'll feel relaxed and refreshed.
通过这种方式,你将会感觉到放松和振作。
5. Therefore, find an effective way that is suitable for you, and you will have a wonderful life.
所以,找到一种适合你的有效的方法,那么你的生活也会多姿多彩的。
6. It is high time that something should be done...
是我们做些什么来……的时候了。
7.The change in… largely results from the fact that…
8. There are several causes for this significant growth in …
这种显著的增长有几个原因。
With the functions of ...,it enables us to...
具有……的功能，它使我们能够。
【满分句型模板之数据分析句】
1.The bar chart describes significant changes in the...
该柱形图描述了……的显著变化。
According to the result of the survey, more than half. About60% of the students like.... while only 30% say they are inr terested in...
根据调查结果可知,有超过半数即大约60%的学生喜欢……,而只有30%的学生说他们对…感兴趣。
Judging from these figures. we can draw the conclusion that...
根据这些数字判断,我们可以得出结论
4.More students, around 58%, however, insist that...
然而更多的学生,约58%,坚持认为......
The table/chart shows that …
表格/图表显示
As can be seen from the chart…
从图表中可以看出。
From the table/chart/forms, we can see…
从表格/图表/表格中我们可以看到......。
【满分作文模板一 事物介绍】
What I have known about is that __________________.(具体描述某事物)
First of all, __________________ (具体阐述要点一) . What’s more, __________________ (具体阐述要点二). As a college student, __________________ (结合自身描述要点三).
In conclusion, __________________ (做出总结) . Therefore, we should __________________(提出建议).
【满分作文模板二 问题方法介绍】
In recent days, there has been a problem , which is becoming more and more serious.（说明问题及其现状）
To begin with, __________________. What’ s more, __________________.（进一步阐释现状）We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, __________________. For another thing, ________. Finally,__________________.（列举解决该问题的方法）
Personally, I believe that __________________/Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because __________________.（结尾段，归纳信心及理由）
【满分作文模板三 路线、方位介绍】
Located in the __________________（方位）， _______________(某地）covers an area of_______________________(面积).
Entering _______________(某地）, you can see a big flower bed in front of you, and _____________________（建筑一）on your left. Walking on further, you’ll find_____________________（建筑二）. ______________________（方位介词短语），there is__________（地点二）. Behind it, there lies__________________（地点二）.
All the buildings are surrounding by trees and flowers. It’s really a beautiful school.
1．假定你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国新近出现的一种共享单车“shared bikes”很感兴趣，并请你做个简要介绍。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：
1. 这种单车的使用方法（如：APP查看车辆、扫码开锁等）；
2. 这种单车的优势；
3. 你对这种单车的看法。
注意：
1. 词数大约100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：智能手机 smartphone, 二维码 the QR code
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Chris正在学习汉语。他得知你校在钉钉(DingTalk)软件开设了线上中国诗词课程教学，他非常感兴趣并想参加学习，便写信给你，希望你介绍相关情况。请根据以下提示给他写一封回信。
内容包括：
(1)使用钉钉(DingTalk)的方法：
(2)在线中国诗词课程的特色。
注意：
(1)词数100左右：
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．假如你是某国际学校的学生李华，你最近使用了一本XX英英词典，感觉非常实用，请你利用班会时间向同学们推荐它。内容要点如下：
1. 特色（如词汇量、用法、例句等方面）；
2. 使用心得。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone!
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4．假设你是明启中学的李华，你们学校正在开展“花香进校园”活动，一方面开设园艺选修课，让学生了解花的习性；另一方面人人动手实践，用花装扮校园，创建优美的生活学习环境。请你写一封邮件给你的英国笔友Jim, 介绍此次活动。
你的邮件须包括：
1. 对该活动的简要描述；
2. 举例说明该活动对你的影响。
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5．假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近在一份英语杂志上读到一篇题为The impact of information technology on our life的文章，你对此话题颇感兴趣，写一封信给该杂志，内容须包括：
1)你认为信息时代对我们日常生活带来了怎样的影响；
2)用具体事例说明这一影响。
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6．面临季节交替，流感病毒肆虐，许多同学病倒。为此，你校英语报征集稿件，题为“How to Prevent a Cold”。请你为校报投稿，建议同学们如何防控流感。
内容包括：1.说明现象；
2.提出建议（至少两点）。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
提示词：
流感病毒： flu virus
How to Prevent a Cold
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7．假定你是李华，你的外教老师Peter为了提高英语课堂效率，准备组织一些课堂活动，正在向同学们征集建议。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 列举课堂存在的问题；
2. 建议有效的课堂活动并说明理由。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 John 要来苏州参观游览，请给他写信简单介绍一下苏州。内容包括：
1. 简要介绍苏州(地理位置、气候)；
2. 苏州吸引人之处(建筑、历史、小吃等)；
3. 你的期待。
注意：1.词数 80 左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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9．假设你是晨光中学的李津，我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一下国内你喜欢或去过的地方（如天路The Sky Railway、龙脊梯田Longji Rice Terraces、故宫博物院The Palace Museum、四川省Sichuan Province等）。
内容包括：
1. 该地方的基本情况（如名称、地理位置等）
2. 该地方的特色（如文化、景点等）
3. 你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意：
1.词数不少于100；
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯
A Beautiful Place in China
November 13th, 2023
By Li Jin
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10．有效的课后作业能激发学生的学习兴趣，丰富学习经历，提升综合素养，并在知识与生活之间架起一座桥梁。假如你是李华，你校为减轻学生的负担，改进作业布置的方式，针对“你最喜欢的一种英语课后作业类型”，对全校1000名学生进行了问卷调查。请你根据下面图表信息，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；
2. 从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的作业类型，结合自己的经历，谈谈这种作业的好处。
要求：
(1)词数不少于80；
(2)文中不得出现真实的校名和人名等；
(3)字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，条理清楚；
(4)参考词汇仅供参考。
参考词汇：arouse interst 激发兴趣 enrich experiences 丰富经历 promote competence 提升素养
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