专题07提纲作文高分宝典之建议信
目录
1.三年高考考情透析，把握高考风向标；
2评分标准早知道，明确得分失分点；
3.高分技巧心中有，"一式、两头、三写、四关"；
4.素材宝库赋能，句型模板全面掌握；
5.高考真题精讲，写作思路一目了然；
6.名校模拟提升，好题新题举一反三。
新高考写作第一节的命题形式主要是提纲式作文，主要文体形式包括投稿征文、演讲稿、通知、倡议书、活动介绍、电子邮件、书信 等。作文所涉及的话题贴近学生生活，富有时代气息，体现了新课程标准的要求，能唤起考生强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。
年份 卷区 话题
2023年 新高考I&II卷 对学生分组提出建议
2023年 北京卷 "绿色北京"为主题的社团活动
2021年 北京卷 周末外出
一、评分细则
1.本题总分为15分，分五个档次进行评分。
2.评分时应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。具体为：
(1)对于内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。
(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4.评分时还应注意：
(1)词数少于60的，酌情扣分。
(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。书写较差，以致影响交际的将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(13-15分)：雅—能写明全部要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达无误。
第四档(10-12分)：达—能写明全部或绝大部分要点，语言有少量错误，行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚。
第三档(7-9分)： 信—能写明基本要点，语言虽有较多错误，但能基本达意。
第二档(4-6分)：能写出部分要点，语言错误多，影响意思表达。
第一档(1-3分)：只能写出一两个要点，里面错误很多，只有个别句子正确。
零分：未作答，所写内容无法评判；所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。
总之，在写建议信时，考生应该注意"有话好好说"：体现出词语的魅力，展示精彩的语句；"有话慢慢说"：要点齐全，叙述从容，运用一定的过渡词语。平时注意积累并背诵各种写作素材的"万能模板"并学会灵活运用，这样才能在有限的时间内提升写作能力。在考场上挥洒自如，如鱼得水。
根据考生书面表达常见错误及评卷要求，我们总结出行之有效的"一式、两头、三写、四关"高分技巧，即写对格式、写好两头、写美卷面、破关夺隘。
一式：写对格式 确定主题，记住建议信的基本格式和特点。
两头：写好两头 要求灵活运用熟悉的句式结构和表达手法，使文章开头和结尾的表达生动准确，引人入胜，耐人寻味。
三写：写美卷面 行文时书写规范化，力求卷面整洁美观。单词的拼写、字母的大小写符合英语书写要求。
四关：破关夺隘 以主题为纲，进一步思考其内涵和外延，联系自己的学习、生活实际，凸显时代性。突破内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关以及习惯表达关。
1.语料库
① 首段：
a. 简介自己，不要罗嗦；
b. 说明目的，注意语气。
② 主体：
a. 提出具体建议；
b. 首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则会变成投诉信；
c. 经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文。
③尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，使对方易于接受。
开头句
1.I have learned that you have some trouble in …and I would like to give you the following suggestions 我知道你在…方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议。
2. You've asked me for advice with regard to / regarding / on … and I ' ll try to make some useful / helpful / practical suggestions are as follows .关于…你向我征求建议，在此，我尽量提出一些有用的／有帮助的／实用的建议。
3.When it comes to , the following are my suggestions .
当涉及…，我的建议如下．
篇中句
1.In my opinion / As far as I ' m concerned / Personally , it would be wise to take the following suggestions .
在我看来，采取如下建议是明智的。
2.I think it would be of benefit if you
…我认为如果你…，将会受益。
3 Doing is a good / better choice .
做…是一个好的／更好的选择。
4.When it comes to , I would like to advise / recommend you should …
当涉及／关于…，我建议你应该．
结尾句
1.I will be glad if you will take my advice / suggestions into consideration .如果你能考虑我的建议我将非常高兴。
2.I hope you will find my suggestions helpful / useful / practical / beneficial .我希望你认为我的建议有帮助／有用／实用／有益．
2.写作模板
Dear XXX ,
I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in .... However , the situation is easy to change if you take my advice . Here are some tips to help you .
To begin with , why not ......... In addition , wouldn't it be a good idea if you....... Just as a saying goes, "No pains no gains". Last but not least , if I were you , I would .......
I hope you will find these ideas useful/ I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you .（希望这些建议对你有用。）
Yours ,
XXX
1.【2023新高考I&II卷】假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3. I think it's not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the
spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within
the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don't get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1. 词汇积累
首先：to begin with → first of all
提高：improve → progress
建议：suggestion → advice
选择：choose → select
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]
Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don't get along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）
2．（2023·北京·统考高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以"绿色北京"为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Yours，
Li Hua
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of "Green Beijing" and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of "Green Beijing" through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of "Green Beijing".
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→tip
提供：offer→provide
开展：carry out→conduct
主题：theme→topic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of "Green Beijing" and need my d help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of "Green Beijing" and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of "Green Beijing" and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of "Green Beijing" through getting involved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
3．（2021·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Jim,
I'm sorry to inform you that I can't go out with you this weekend. I've just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. I hope the change won't cause you too much trouble.
How about going out next Saturday morning If it's convenient for you, let's meet at the school gate at 9: 00. Please let me know what time suits you best. I should be available anytime next weekend.
In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers together.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
通知：tell→inform
除此之外：in addition→besides
适合：fit→suit
有空的：available→free
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers together.
拓展句：In addition, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park next Saturday, when we can go to see the flowers together.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm sorry to inform you that I can't go out with you this weekend.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I've just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
1．（2023上·福建福州·高一福建省福州第八中学校考期中）假设你是李华，是一名高中生。最近，你的英国朋友Amy来信说她因发胖而感到非常苦恼。请你根据下列要点给她写一封建议信。
内容包括：1.对其烦恼表示安慰；
2.提出建议及理由(至少两点建议)
3.期待和祝福
注意：
1.词数80左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Amy,
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Yours,
Li Hua【范文赏析】
Dear Amy,
I'm more than sorry to learn that you're extremely upset about putting on weight. The following are some practical tips on how to keep fit.
First of all, it is a good idea to have a balanced diet that includes grain, meat, milk, fruit and vegetables to get enough energy. What's more, you'd better play sports with your classmates in your spare time, which can help you lose weight and develop a pleasant relationship with them. More importantly, for the sake of your health, ensuring enough sleep and rest is essential. Sleeping more will make it happen for you to stay thin.
I'd be delighted if you could find my advice useful. Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
建议：tips → suggestions
此外：What's more → Besides
健康的：fit → healthy
帮助某人做某事：help sb. do sth. → assist sb. to do sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The following are some practical tips on how to keep fit.
拓展句：The following are some practical tips, which is about how to keep fit.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What's more, you'd better play sports with your classmates in your spare time, which can help you lose weight and develop a pleasant relationship with them. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I'm more than sorry to learn that you're extremely upset about putting on weight. (运用了连词that引导的宾语从句)
2．（2023上·浙江·高一校联考期中）假定你是李华，得知你的朋友Jack由于期中考试临近，身心压力较大，复习效率低下。请你根据实际情况给他写一封建议信。内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.提出建议；
3.表达期望。
注意：1.写作词数应为80词左右;
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Jack,
I'm terribly sorry to learn that you are so anxious about the coming mid-term examination that you are suffering from bad sleep and inefficient reviewing. I'd like to share some suggestions with you.
First of all, I think making a reasonable and practical plan is of great benefit, which will remind you to do something regularly so as to fundamentally reduce your stress. Meanwhile, don't forget to spare a certain period of time for daily exercise to relax yourself both physically and mentally, which will in turn ensure a good sleep. Last but not the least, do have self-confidence. As long as we have made every effort to study, it will pay off finally.
I hope my advice will get you through the challenging moment. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
压力：stress→pressure
合理的：reasonable→advisable
效率低的：inefficient→ineffective
同时：meanwhile→at the same time
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I'd like to share some suggestions with you.
拓展句：I'd like to share some suggestions with you, which are beneficial to you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I'm terribly sorry to learn that you are so anxious about the coming mid-term examination that you are suffering from bad sleep and inefficient reviewing. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Meanwhile, don't forget to spare a certain period of time for daily exercise to relax yourself both physically and mentally, which will in turn ensure a good sleep. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
3．（2023上·广西南宁·高一校考期中）假定你是李华，你的朋友Alice因为节食生病在家，请给她写一封建议信，帮助她走出困境。要 点包括：
1.表示宽慰；
2.提出建议；
3.表达期望。
注意：1.词数80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Alice,
I'm sorry to learn that you're sick from going on a diet at home. Here I'm writing to share my opinions with you.
Firstly, it's common for girls to love beauty and keep slim, but it is important to love and accept yourself as you are. A balanced diet will also work better, which provides you with necessary nutrition to keep healthy and energetic. Lastly, regular exercise is a must so that you can have a healthy state of body and mind.
I hope the suggestions above will be of help to you. Looking forward to your return soon.
Yours;
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
观点：opinion→view
重要的：important→vital
为某人提供某物：provide sb with sth→offer sb sth
建议：suggestion→advice
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句：Firstly, it's common for girls to love beauty and keep slim, but it is important to love and accept yourself as you are.
同义句：While it is common for girls to have an inclination for beauty and maintaining a slim figure, it is crucial to embrace and appreciate oneself just the way they are.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I'm sorry to learn that you're sick from going on a diet at home.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】A balanced diet will also work better, which provides you with necessary nutrition to keep healthy and energetic.(运用了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型3】Lastly, regular exercise is a must so that you can have a healthy state of body and mind. (运用了so that 引导的目的状语从句)
4．（2022上·黑龙江牡丹江·高一牡丹江市第二高级中学校考期中）你是张伟的好朋友Li Hua，张伟即将参加学校的英语朗诵比赛，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。
1. 比赛之前：认真准备，如平时可对着镜子练习；用语简练，使评委印象深刻。
2. 比赛时：保持微笑；忘词时不要紧张，继续演讲。
注意：词数100左右。
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【范文赏析】
Dear Zhang Wei,
You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you.
In my opinion, you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practising before a mirror. Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. In addition, when you are giving the speech, remember to keep smiling and even if you forget your words, don't be panic and just continue your speech, because no one will notice it.
Wish you success in the speech.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
比赛：contest→competition
另外：besides→moreover
在我看来：in my opinion→as far as I can see
另外：in addition→what's more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In my opinion, you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practising before a mirror.
拓展句：In my opinion, you should practise before a mirror, throught which you can get well prepared before the speech.
【点睛】[高分句型1] You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
5．（2023上·河北石家庄·高一阶段练习）假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Alice来信说她因为要参加一次重要考试，最近出现了头晕、睡眠不好的焦虑症状。请根据以下要点，给她回信并提出一些建议。信的内容应包括下列要点：
1. 正确认识考试；
2. 积极为考试做准备；
3. 注意劳逸结合。
注意;
1. 词数为80 字左右；
2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数)。
Dear Alice,
I am sorry to hear that you are anxious about the coming exam.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Alice,
I am sorry to hear that you are anxious about the coming exam. In my opinion, it's important for you to have a right attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how you are getting along with your studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. You should study hard every day and make good preparations for exams. In this way you can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.
Besides, you'd better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercise so that you can keep yourself relaxed and then concentrate on exams. What's more, having enough sleep can make you energetic and enable you to perform well in exams.
I wish you success in the exam.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
在我看来：in my opinion→In my point of view
重要的：important→significant
担心：worry→concern
压力：pressure→stress
2.句型拓展
陈述句变倒装句
原句：In this way you can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.
拓展句：Only in this way can you avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.
【点睛】【高分句型1】They are only a means of checking how you are getting along with your studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. （运用了how引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Besides, you'd better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercise so that you can keep yourself relaxed and then concentrate on exams.（运用了so that引导的目的状语从句）
6．（2023上·广西南宁·高一校考阶段练习）假定你是李华。你的好友Lucy刚上高中，她来信告诉你说她不善于和同学交流，交不到朋友，觉得孤独，想请你给她一些建议。请根据以下提示，用英语给她写封建议信。
1. 多参与同学之间的讨论。
2. 了解同学喜好。
3. 主动提出帮助。
要求: 1、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2、词数: 80 词左右
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【范文赏析】
Dear Lucy,
I'm sorry to hear you're feeling worried for failing to make friends. Some tips below may be helpful to you.
First, take an active part in activities, such as sports, games, travels, parties, etc. This way, you'll get more chances to communicate with others. Second, try to learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes, for it helps strengthen your ties with classmates and lots of misunderstandings can be avoided. Third, be kind, friendly and polite to others and always ready to help others, through which you'll get well paid. Besides, it is also very important that friends should be faithful to each other.
Anyhow, there are many ways to develop a good friendship. Hope you will get along well with your classmates.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
担心的：worried→concerned
建议：tips→suggestions
有帮助的，有益的：helpful→beneficial
乐于做某事：be ready to do→be willing to do
2.句型拓展
合并简单句
原句：First, take an active part in activities, such as sports, games, travels, parties, etc. This way, you'll get more chances to communicate with others.
拓展句：First, take an active part in activities, such as sports, games, travels, parties, etc, through which you'll get more chances to communicate with others.
【点睛】 【高分句型1】Second, try to learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes, for it helps strengthen your ties with classmates and lots of misunderstandings can be avoided. （运用了for引导原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】Third, be kind, friendly and polite to others and always ready to help others, through which you'll get well paid.（运用了介词+关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句）
7．（2023上·广东惠州·高一校联考阶段练习）假定你是李华，据中国地震台网报道，8月6日2时33分在山东德州市平原县发生5.5级地震。地震发生后，你给暑假中的同学们写了一封如何在地震中求生的建议信并发在学校网站上。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：magnitude震级 load-bearing wall承重墙
Dear students,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear students,
It's very important for us to learn some knowledge about earthquake, which will benefit us a lot when a disaster happens. Here are some suggestions as follows.
First, pay attention to some basic experience about how to escape from natural disasters. In addition, keep calm. When you are in trouble, a relaxing mind will surely help you a lot. More importantly, stay in a small room or stand beside the load-bearing walls. Please keep the suggestions above in mind. The more knowledge of earthquake you know, the safer you will be.
I hope you will find the suggestions useful.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
重要：important →significant
发生：happen→ occur
首先：first→to begin with
安全：safe→secure
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：More importantly, stay in a small room or stand beside the load-bearing walls.
拓展句：It is important that you are supposed to stay in a small room or stand beside the load-bearing walls.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 It's very important for us to learn some knowledge about earthquake, which will benefit us a lot when a disaster happens. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】 The more knowledge of earthquake you know, the safer you will be.（运用了The+比较级，the+比较级的句型）
8．（2023上·河北石家庄·高一河北师范大学附属中学校考阶段练习）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Adams前不久写信告诉你，他对学校新开的汉语课很不适应，学习上感到吃力，向你咨询如何才能学好汉语。请你根据以下要点提示给他写一封建议信。
要点:(1)说明收到来信;
(2)具体建议内容：
(3)表达愿望。
注意:(1)词数：80左右;
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Adams,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are my suggestions.
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Adams,
In glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are my suggestions.
To begin with, it is a good idea to take a Chinese course, where you can follow the teacher and get help from your classmates. Next, reading some Chinese books and magazines will help you to improve your reading ability. You can also watch some Chinese programs on TV, which will improve your listening ability. To make sure that learning Chinese isn't too dull, it would be a good idea to learn to sing some Chinese songs. Last but not least, if possible, make some Chinese friends, so that you can learn languages from each other.
I hope you will find my suggestions beneficial and make great progress in Chinese. Looking forward to receiving your letter written in Chinese.
Yours' truly,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
首先：To begin with→ First of all
提高，改善：improve → enhance
建议：suggestions→ proposals
有益的，有帮助的：beneficial→ helpful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To make sure that learning Chinese isn't too dull, it would be a good idea to learn to sing some Chinese songs.
拓展句：It would be a good idea to learn to sing some Chinese songs, which can make sure that learning Chinese isn't too dull.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You can also watch some Chinese programs on TV, which will improve your listening ability.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Last but not least, if possible, make some Chinese friends, so that you can learn languages from each other.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句和省略用法，以及so that引导的目的状语从句。）
9．（2023上·天津静海·高三静海一中校考阶段练习）假如你是李津，你的英国朋友Tom被选为交换生，目前在北京就读。Tom向你寻求在北京出行的建议。请你用英文给他写一封建议信，内容包括：
(1)表示祝贺
(2)提出建议(交通方式、景点推荐、美食推荐等)以及理由
注意：词数不少于100字; 可适当加入细节，使行文连贯。
参考词汇：北京烤鸭：Peking duck
Dear Tom,
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Sincerely Yours,
Li Jin
【范文赏析】
Dear Tom,
Congratulations! I'm more than delighted to know that you were chosen as the exchange student in Beijing. You wrote to ask for advice on how to get around in Beijing. The following are my suggestions.
To begin with, when you travel in Beijing, it is a wise choice to get around in subway, so that you can avoid being caught in the heavy traffic jam. What's more, there are so many tourist attractions that you can fully enjoy yourself when traveling in Beijing. The Great Wall is a place that can't be missed. As the saying goes, he who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man. In addition, I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to the Forbidden City, where you can appreciate the charm of traditional Chinese culture. Last but not least, you are welcome to taste the delicious Peking duck, which is the symbol of Beijing Cuisine.
I sincerely hope that these suggestions are of great benefit to you. May you have a good time in Beijing!
Yours sincerely,
Li Jin
1.词汇积累
高兴：delighted→glad
建议：advice→suggestion
而且：what's more →moreover
很多：many→plenty of
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句：The Great Wall is a place that can't be missed. （定语从句）
转换句： what can't be missed is the Great Wall. （主语从句）
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I'm more than delighted to know that you were chosen as the exchange student in Beijing. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Last but not least, you are welcome to taste the delicious Peking duck, which is the symbol of Beijing Cuisine.（运用which引导的非限制性定语从句）
10．（2023上·江苏扬州·高一扬州中学校考阶段练习）假如你是李华，现在伦敦某中学做交换生，该校要开设一个中国书房，现向中国留学生征集建议。请你给负责人Smith写一封建议信，内容包括：
1.设计风格；
2.书籍类型；
3.活动形式。
注意：1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Smith,
I'm more than pleased to know that we are planning to open a Chinese study in our school. As an exchange student from China, I'm happy to give my suggestions.
Firstly, the study can be designed in traditional Chinese style, providing readers with a strong Chinese cultural atmosphere. Secondly, it may be helpful to offer some excellent books that reflect Chinese culture to help readers raise their reading interest and broaden their cultural horizons. In addition, holding regular reading exchange meetings or lectures on traditional Chinese culture will also make the study more appealing.
Hope my ideas will be helpful!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
非常：more than→extremely/very/terribly
开心的：happy → delighted
建议：suggestion→ recommendation/advice
吸引人的：appealing→ attractive
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, the study can be designed in traditional Chinese style, providing readers with a strong Chinese cultural atmosphere.
拓展句：Firstly, the study can be designed in traditional Chinese style, which will provide readers with a strong Chinese cultural atmosphere.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, the study can be designed in traditional Chinese style, providing readers with a strong Chinese cultural atmosphere.（运用了现在分词作伴随状语）
【高分句型2】 In addition, holding regular reading exchange meetings or lectures on traditional Chinese culture will also make the study more appealing.（运用了动名词作主语）专题07提纲作文高分宝典之建议信
目录
1.三年高考考情透析，把握高考风向标；
2评分标准早知道，明确得分失分点；
3.高分技巧心中有，"一式、两头、三写、四关"；
4.素材宝库赋能，句型模板全面掌握；
5.高考真题精讲，写作思路一目了然；
6.名校模拟提升，好题新题举一反三。
新高考写作第一节的命题形式主要是提纲式作文，主要文体形式包括投稿征文、演讲稿、通知、倡议书、活动介绍、电子邮件、书信 等。作文所涉及的话题贴近学生生活，富有时代气息，体现了新课程标准的要求，能唤起考生强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。
年份 卷区 话题
2023年 新高考I&II卷 对学生分组提出建议
2023年 北京卷 "绿色北京"为主题的社团活动
2021年 北京卷 周末外出
一、评分细则
1.本题总分为15分，分五个档次进行评分。
2.评分时应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。具体为：
(1)对于内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。
(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4.评分时还应注意：
(1)词数少于60的，酌情扣分。
(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。书写较差，以致影响交际的将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(13-15分)：雅—能写明全部要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达无误。
第四档(10-12分)：达—能写明全部或绝大部分要点，语言有少量错误，行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚。
第三档(7-9分)： 信—能写明基本要点，语言虽有较多错误，但能基本达意。
第二档(4-6分)：能写出部分要点，语言错误多，影响意思表达。
第一档(1-3分)：只能写出一两个要点，里面错误很多，只有个别句子正确。
零分：未作答，所写内容无法评判；所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。
总之，在写建议信时，考生应该注意"有话好好说"：体现出词语的魅力，展示精彩的语句；"有话慢慢说"：要点齐全，叙述从容，运用一定的过渡词语。平时注意积累并背诵各种写作素材的"万能模板"并学会灵活运用，这样才能在有限的时间内提升写作能力。在考场上挥洒自如，如鱼得水。
根据考生书面表达常见错误及评卷要求，我们总结出行之有效的"一式、两头、三写、四关"高分技巧，即写对格式、写好两头、写美卷面、破关夺隘。
一式：写对格式 确定主题，记住建议信的基本格式和特点。
两头：写好两头 要求灵活运用熟悉的句式结构和表达手法，使文章开头和结尾的表达生动准确，引人入胜，耐人寻味。
三写：写美卷面 行文时书写规范化，力求卷面整洁美观。单词的拼写、字母的大小写符合英语书写要求。
四关：破关夺隘 以主题为纲，进一步思考其内涵和外延，联系自己的学习、生活实际，凸显时代性。突破内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关以及习惯表达关。
1.语料库
① 首段：
a. 简介自己，不要罗嗦；
b. 说明目的，注意语气。
② 主体：
a. 提出具体建议；
b. 首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则会变成投诉信；
c. 经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文。
③尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，使对方易于接受。
开头句
1.I have learned that you have some trouble in …and I would like to give you the following suggestions 我知道你在…方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议。
2. You've asked me for advice with regard to / regarding / on … and I ' ll try to make some useful / helpful / practical suggestions are as follows .关于…你向我征求建议，在此，我尽量提出一些有用的／有帮助的／实用的建议。
3.When it comes to , the following are my suggestions .
当涉及…，我的建议如下．
篇中句
1.In my opinion / As far as I ' m concerned / Personally , it would be wise to take the following suggestions .
在我看来，采取如下建议是明智的。
2.I think it would be of benefit if you
…我认为如果你…，将会受益。
3 Doing is a good / better choice .
做…是一个好的／更好的选择。
4.When it comes to , I would like to advise / recommend you should …
当涉及／关于…，我建议你应该．
结尾句
1.I will be glad if you will take my advice / suggestions into consideration .如果你能考虑我的建议我将非常高兴。
2.I hope you will find my suggestions helpful / useful / practical / beneficial .我希望你认为我的建议有帮助／有用／实用／有益．
2.写作模板
Dear XXX ,
I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in .... However , the situation is easy to change if you take my advice . Here are some tips to help you .
To begin with , why not ......... In addition , wouldn't it be a good idea if you....... Just as a saying goes, "No pains no gains". Last but not least , if I were you , I would .......
I hope you will find these ideas useful/ I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you .（希望这些建议对你有用。）
Yours ,
XXX
1.【2023新高考I&II卷】假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2．（2023·北京·统考高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以"绿色北京"为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
3．（2021·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
1．（2023上·福建福州·高一福建省福州第八中学校考期中）假设你是李华，是一名高中生。最近，你的英国朋友Amy来信说她因发胖而感到非常苦恼。请你根据下列要点给她写一封建议信。
内容包括：1.对其烦恼表示安慰；
2.提出建议及理由(至少两点建议)
3.期待和祝福
注意：
1.词数80左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Amy,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2023上·浙江·高一校联考期中）假定你是李华，得知你的朋友Jack由于期中考试临近，身心压力较大，复习效率低下。请你根据实际情况给他写一封建议信。内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.提出建议；
3.表达期望。
注意：1.写作词数应为80词左右;
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2023上·广西南宁·高一校考期中）假定你是李华，你的朋友Alice因为节食生病在家，请给她写一封建议信，帮助她走出困境。要 点包括：
1.表示宽慰；
2.提出建议；
3.表达期望。
注意：1.词数80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．（2022上·黑龙江牡丹江·高一牡丹江市第二高级中学校考期中）你是张伟的好朋友Li Hua，张伟即将参加学校的英语朗诵比赛，向你求助，请你根据以下内容给他写一封建议信。
1. 比赛之前：认真准备，如平时可对着镜子练习；用语简练，使评委印象深刻。
2. 比赛时：保持微笑；忘词时不要紧张，继续演讲。
注意：词数100左右。
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5．（2023上·河北石家庄·高一阶段练习）假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Alice来信说她因为要参加一次重要考试，最近出现了头晕、睡眠不好的焦虑症状。请根据以下要点，给她回信并提出一些建议。信的内容应包括下列要点：
1. 正确认识考试；
2. 积极为考试做准备；
3. 注意劳逸结合。
注意;
1. 词数为80 字左右；
2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总词数)。
Dear Alice,
I am sorry to hear that you are anxious about the coming exam.
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2023上·广西南宁·高一校考阶段练习）假定你是李华。你的好友Lucy刚上高中，她来信告诉你说她不善于和同学交流，交不到朋友，觉得孤独，想请你给她一些建议。请根据以下提示，用英语给她写封建议信。
1. 多参与同学之间的讨论。
2. 了解同学喜好。
3. 主动提出帮助。
要求: 1、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2、词数: 80 词左右
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7．（2023上·广东惠州·高一校联考阶段练习）假定你是李华，据中国地震台网报道，8月6日2时33分在山东德州市平原县发生5.5级地震。地震发生后，你给暑假中的同学们写了一封如何在地震中求生的建议信并发在学校网站上。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：magnitude震级 load-bearing wall承重墙
Dear students,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2023上·河北石家庄·高一河北师范大学附属中学校考阶段练习）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Adams前不久写信告诉你，他对学校新开的汉语课很不适应，学习上感到吃力，向你咨询如何才能学好汉语。请你根据以下要点提示给他写一封建议信。
要点:(1)说明收到来信;
(2)具体建议内容：
(3)表达愿望。
注意:(1)词数：80左右;
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Adams,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are my suggestions.
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
9．（2023上·天津静海·高三静海一中校考阶段练习）假如你是李津，你的英国朋友Tom被选为交换生，目前在北京就读。Tom向你寻求在北京出行的建议。请你用英文给他写一封建议信，内容包括：
(1)表示祝贺
(2)提出建议(交通方式、景点推荐、美食推荐等)以及理由
注意：词数不少于100字; 可适当加入细节，使行文连贯。
参考词汇：北京烤鸭：Peking duck
Dear Tom,
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Sincerely Yours,
Li Jin
10．（2023上·江苏扬州·高一扬州中学校考阶段练习）假如你是李华，现在伦敦某中学做交换生，该校要开设一个中国书房，现向中国留学生征集建议。请你给负责人Smith写一封建议信，内容包括：
1.设计风格；
2.书籍类型；
3.活动形式。
注意：1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
