专题09纲作文高分宝典之求助信、感谢信
目录
1.三年高考考情透析，把握高考风向标；
2评分标准早知道，明确得分失分点；
3.高分技巧心中有，"一式、两头、三写、四关"；
4.素材宝库赋能，句型模板全面掌握；
5.高考真题精讲，写作思路一目了然；
6.名校模拟提升，好题新题举一反三。
新高考写作第一节的命题形式主要是提纲式作文，主要文体形式包括投稿征文、演讲稿、通知、倡议书、活动介绍、电子邮件、书信 等。作文所涉及的话题贴近学生生活，富有时代气息，体现了新课程标准的要求，能唤起考生强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。
年份 卷区 话题
2021年 全国甲卷 帮助了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人
2020年 全国III卷 寻求外教Miss Evans帮助指导课本改编短剧
2019年 浙江卷 向朋友表达感谢
一、评分细则
1.本题总分为15分，分五个档次进行评分。
2.评分时应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。具体为：
(1)对于内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。
(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4.评分时还应注意：
(1)词数少于60的，酌情扣分。
(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。书写较差，以致影响交际的将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(13-15分)：雅—能写明全部要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达无误。
第四档(10-12分)：达—能写明全部或绝大部分要点，语言有少量错误，行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚。
第三档(7-9分)： 信—能写明基本要点，语言虽有较多错误，但能基本达意。
第二档(4-6分)：能写出部分要点，语言错误多，影响意思表达。
第一档(1-3分)：只能写出一两个要点，里面错误很多，只有个别句子正确。
零分：未作答，所写内容无法评判；所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。
总之，考生应该注意"有话好好说"：体现出词语的魅力，展示精彩的语句；"有话慢慢说"：要点齐全，叙述从容，运用一定的过渡词语。平时注意积累并背诵各种写作素材的"万能模板"并学会灵活运用，这样才能在有限的时间内提升写作能力，在考场上挥洒自如，如鱼得水。
根据考生书面表达常见错误及评卷要求，我们总结出行之有效的"一式、两头、三写、四关"高分技巧，即写对格式、写好两头、写美卷面、破关夺隘。
一式：写对格式 确定主题，记住所写文体的基本格式和特点。
两头：写好两头 要求灵活运用熟悉的句式结构和表达手法，使文章开头和结尾的表达生动准确，引人入胜，耐人寻味。
三写：写美卷面 行文时书写规范化，力求卷面整洁美观。单词的拼写、字母的大小写符合英语书写要求。
四关：破关夺隘 以主题为纲，进一步思考其内涵和外延，联系自己的学习、生活实际，凸显时代性。突破内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关以及习惯表达关。
求助信结构：开头表明写信意图，发出请求
主体描述困难，恳求帮助
结尾寻求帮助，表示感谢，期盼回复。
求助信模板
Dear XXX '
How are you doing these days It ' s almost two months since we met each other last time . The reason why
I ' m writing this letter is that I wonder if it ' s possible for me to seek your assistance in improving my English .
What bothers me is that _________________. First,______________________________________.
Besides ,_____________________________________.What ' s more ________________________________.
Therefore , would you be kind enough to offer me some instructions
_____________________________________________.
I would be grateful if you could give me some advice / help .
Best wishes !
感谢信结构：首段：表达真挚谢意
中间段：解释感谢的原因或对方的帮助给自己带来的好处
结尾段：再次感谢
感谢信模板
Dear XXX ,
How are you getting on with your life and work I ' m writing to express my sincere thanks for _______. I could not have ___________________without your help . Thank you so much.
I still remember what you have devoted to improving____________. Additionally, you ______________________..Another thing that I can ' t forget is that you ___________________________. All in all,words fail to convey my gratitude to you . it is your kindness and help that _____________________.Now I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely support and assistance .
Thank you / Thanks a lot for your help again .
Best wishes .
1.（2021·全国甲卷）假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1．阐明写信事由；
2．征求建议；
3．表示感谢。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【范文赏析】
Dear Chris，
How are you doing these days I’m writing to ask you for some advice.
In order to promote Chinese traditional culture and post some class meetings on English websites, our school is going to organize class meetings, the theme of which is traditional Chinese culture. We can choose a variety of themes, such as calligraphy, martial arts, oil paintings, paper cutting and so on. I’m wondering if you could let me know which of them you like best and which of them people from outside of China are more likely to be interested in.
Thank you for your help. I’d appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.
Yours，
Li Hua
1. 词汇积累
建议：suggestion→ advice
提高：heighten→ promote
各种各样： all kinds of→ a variety of
选择：select→ choose
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We can choose a variety of themes, such as calligraphy, martial arts, oil paintings, paper cutting and so on.
拓展句：We can choose a variety of themes, which include calligraphy, martial arts, oil paintings, paper cutting and so on.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] In order to promote Chinese traditional culture and post some class meetings on English websites, our school is going to organize class meetings, the theme of which is traditional Chinese culture..（介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] I’m wondering if you could let me know which of them you like best and which of them people from outside of China are more likely to be interested in.（if引导的宾语从句）
2.（2020·全国新课标III卷）假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
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【范文赏析】
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.
We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details
Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。
结构：总分总法
第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
write to；according to ；combine ； adaption ；challenge；attached to ；convenient
第三步：连词成句
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details 这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3.（2019·浙江卷第二次高考）假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3. 临别祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【范文赏析】
Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
1. 审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。
2.谋篇布局
书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助；最后一段表达祝愿。
3. 关键词和句子
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：leaving for the United States soon，express my heartfelt gratitude，unbelievable progress，cheer me up。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了Alex对自己的帮助，详略得当，内容完整，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇：eagerly，heartfelt gratitude，Honestly speaking，professional guidance等；高级句式：Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence.使用了让步状语从句和定语从句。这些都提升了文章的档次
一、感谢信
1.（2023下·甘肃定西·高二甘肃省临洮中学校考阶段练习）假定你是李华，教了你一年的美国老师Marry即将离职回国，为表达离别之情，请给她写一封感谢信。
要点如下：
1．回顾你们之间的点点滴滴；
2．表示感激与期待。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【范文赏析】
Dear Marry,
When I look back on the past year, I am filled with gratitude for all the wonderful memories that we have created together.
Your passion for teaching and your dedication to our education have truly made a difference in our lives. From your engaging lessons to the interesting discussions we had in class, every day with you was a learning adventure.
I am greatly grateful for your patience and guidance. These have motivated me to strive for excellence. Our classroom will never be the same without you. Although it’s sad to say goodbye, I am excited for the new students who will have the privilege of being taught by you. Undoubtedly, wherever you go, you will continue to inspire and make a positive impact.
I wish you all the best in your future endeavors, and I hope our paths cross again someday.
Yours,
Li Hua
1. 词汇积累
感激：gratitude→gratefulness, thankfulness
美好的：wonderful→marvelous, magnificent
热情：passion→enthusiasm, keenness
激励：motivate→encourage, inspire
追求：strive for→pursue, go after
毫无疑问：undoubtedly→undeniably, unquestionably
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I am greatly grateful for your patience and guidance. These have motivated me to strive for excellence.
拓展句：I am greatly grateful for your patience and guidance, which have motivated me to strive for excellence.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When I look back on the past year, I am filled with gratitude for all the wonderful memories that we have created together. (运用了When引导时间状语从句、that引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] Although it’s sad to say goodbye, I am excited for the new students who will have the privilege of being taught by you. (运用了Although引导让步状语从句、who引导定语从句)
[高分句型3] Undoubtedly, wherever you go, you will continue to inspire and make a positive impact. (运用了wherever引导让步状语从句)
2．（2023下·云南文山·高一统考期末）假定你是国际学校的李华，昨天不慎将自己的英语笔记弄丢，恰巧被你校英国留学生David捡到并及时归还于你。请根据以下要点提示用英语给David写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 表达感谢；
2. 陈述丢笔记的过程；
3. 表达祝福。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear David,
My name is Li Hua. I am writing to express my appreciation for your returning my English notebook.
Yesterday, after I had dinner, I left my notebook behind by accident. It was not until I wanted to take notes that I found it missing. You could imagine how annoyed I was. Thanks to you, you found it and returned it to me in time. You really did me a big favour. What a good example you have set for me to learn from!
Thank you again. Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
感激：appreciation→ gratitude
偶然：by accident→ accidentally
恼怒的：annoyed→ irritated
由于：thanks to → due to /owing to/because of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to express my appreciation for your returning my English notebook.
拓展句：I am writing to express my appreciation because you returned my English notebook.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It was not until I wanted to take notes that I found it missing.（运用了强调句型强调not until引导的状语从句）
【高分句型2】You could imagine how annoyed I was.（运用了how引导的宾语从句）
3．（2023·浙江绍兴·统考模拟预测）假设你是李华，某国际学校校书画社主席，昨天下午外教Mr. Black应邀给书画社作题为“A Short History of Western Painting”的讲座。请你给外教写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 感谢对方作讲座；
2. 同学们的收获；
3. 希望有机会再次邀请。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Black,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Mr. Black,
First of all, I would like to thank you for your lecture entitled “A Short History of Western Painting”.
The lecture was very informative, through which the students have a deeper understanding of the history of Western painting. The students’ interest and enthusiasm for western painting have been greatly improved, and some students even make up their minds to go abroad to learn Western painting.
All the students hope that we can invite you to give us more lectures.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
热情：enthusiasm→passion
提高：improve→enhance
首先：first of all→in the first place
决定做某事：make up one’s mind to do→be determined to do
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：First of all, I would like to thank you for your lecture entitled “A Short History of Western Painting”.
拓展句：First of all, I would like to thank you for your lecture which was entitled “A Short History of Western Painting”.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The lecture was very informative, through which the students have a deeper understanding of the history of Western painting. (运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] All the students hope that we can invite you to give us more lectures. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
4．（2024下·山西大同·高三统考期末）假定你是李华，最近赴英国伦敦参加短期交流项目。期间受到当地学生Susan的热情接待和关照。请你给她写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 表达谢意；
2. 感谢的原因。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Susan,
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Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Susan,
I’m writing to thank you for those wonderful days in London. I will never forget my visit.
I was a little anxious before I arrived in London because I didn’t know what to expect. But when I arrived, I knew there’s no need to worry. You gave me a very warm welcome and made me feel at home very quickly. I will always remember your kindness and hospitality. And thank you also for arranging so many interesting activities, which I know took a great deal of your precious time.
It was very kind of you to do so much for me and I appreciate it more than I can say.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
到达：arrive in→reach
迅速：quickly→rapidly
记得：remember→keep in mind
宝贵的：precious→valuable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It was very kind of you to do so much for me and I appreciate it more than I can say.
拓展句：It was very kind of you to do so much for me, which I appreciate more than I can say.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I was a little anxious before I arrived in London because I didn’t know what to expect.（运用了before和because引导的状语从句）
【高分句型2】And thank you also for arranging so many interesting activities, which I know took a great deal of your precious time.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
二、求助信
1．（2023上·安徽合肥·高一合肥市第三中学校考阶段练习）假定你是高一(1)班的李华，刚升入一所新的学校，你在生活和学习方面遇到了一些困难和挑战，请给English Weekly的编辑写一封求助信。要点如下：
1. 自我介绍；
2. 遇到的困难；
3. 希望得到的建议和帮助。
注意：1.词数80词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【范文赏析】
Dear Editor,
I am Li Hua, a new student of senior high school. I have some trouble in the study and life. I hope you can give me some useful advice.
The problems I am facing now are as follows. I have plenty of new knowledge to learn, so I have no time to do sports. I think it’s not good for our health or study. I don’t know how to make good plans for my study and how to make use of time reasonably. I become worried and afraid that I will fall behind in the class, which will eventually prevent me from going to college. Besides, I find it difficult to get on well with new classmates. How can I make friends in the campus
Could you help me, please I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
1. 词汇积累
在……有困难：have some trouble in→have some difficulty in
建议：advice→suggestion
利用：make use of→make the best of
此外：besides→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am Li Hua, a new student of senior high school.
拓展句：I am Li Hua, who is a new student of senior high school.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I don’t know how to make good plans for my study and how to make use of time reasonably.(运用了疑问词+不定式作宾语)
[高分句型2]I become worried and afraid that I will fall behind in the class, which will eventually prevent me from going to college.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2．（2023上·云南红河·高三开远市第一中学校校考阶段练习）假如你是李华，本学期你校开设了外教授课的英语口语课，由于你英语听说方面较薄弱，上课听不懂。你决定给外教Chris写一封求助信。要点如下：
1.英语听说方面有困难;
2.希望得到的帮助。
注意：1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours ,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Chris,
I am Li Hua, one of your students in Oral English class. I’m writing to seek help from you.
I’m quite poor in both listening and speaking. That’s because I come from a school where teachers don’t speak much English in class. As a result, I find it really hard to follow you in class. I hope that you can recommend some listening materials to me. Besides, could you be so kind to give me some suggestions on spoken English
I would be grateful if you could lend me a helping hand.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
寻找：seek→ look for
此外：Besides→ What’s more
建议：suggestions→ advice
感激的：grateful→ thankful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am Li Hua, one of your students in Oral English class.
拓展句：I am Li Hua, who is one of your students in Oral English class.
【点睛】【高分句型1】That’s because I come from a school where teachers don’t speak much English in class.（运用了连接副词because引导的表语从句以及关系副词where引导的定语从句。）
【高分句型2】I would be grateful if you could lend me a helping hand.（运用了连词if引导的条件状语从句。）
3．（2022上·吉林长春·高三长春外国语学校校考期中）假设你是学生李华，你家乡的雾凇(rime)久负盛名，你写了一篇英文宣传稿，想请外籍教师Bob帮助润色。请根据提示，用英语给Bob写一封求助信。内容包括：
1.求助事由；
2.求助内容；
3.表达感激。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Bob,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor.
When it comes to rime, there is no denying that it enjoys a great reputation in my hometown. For a long time I have been longing to write an appealing article to make it better known. However, only when I put the idea into practice did I find that my English is far from satisfaction. As I know, you have a good command of written English, which impresses me a lot. Would you like to do me a favor to have my draft polished I will pay you a visit at your earliest convenience.
I would appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
帮助某人：do sb. a favor→give sb. a hand
渴望做某事：long to do sth.→be eager to do sth.
吸引人的：appealing→attractive
考虑某事： take sth. into consideration→ take sth. into account
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Would you like to do me a favor to have my draft polished I will pay you a visit at your earliest convenience.
拓展句：If you would like to do me a favor to have my draft polished, I will pay you a visit at your earliest convenience.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When it comes to rime, there is no denying that it enjoys a great reputation in my hometown.(运用了that引导同位语从句)
[高分句型2] However, only when I put the idea into practice did I find that my English is far from satisfaction. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句和倒装句)
4．（2022上·广东梅州·高三梅州市曾宪梓中学校考阶段练习）假设你是李华，将参加下个月的运动会，尽管你已做了准备，但仍感觉训练不得要领。请你就此给外籍教练Mr. Smith写一封求助信。内容包括：
1. 求助事由；
2. 求助内容；
3. 表达感激
注意：
1、词数80词左右，开头结尾不计入总词数；
2、适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student. These days a problem has been bothering me a lot, so I’m writing to ask you for help.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student. These days a problem has been bothering me a lot, so I’m writing to ask you for help.
Two weeks ago, my classmate recommended me to take part in the high-jump in the sports meeting which is to be held next month. In his view, I’m tall and athletic and I’m equal to it. As a result, encouraged by him, I have made some preparations for it and have spared more time to practice. However, I still have no confidence in myself because I have made some mistakes in the training. And even I have failed several times. It seems that I haven’t acquired the key point of doing high-jump. How can I jump higher Would you like to give me some specific and professional guidance The more details you offer, the more improvement I’ll get.
I would appreciate it if you could lend me a hand. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
参加：take part in →participate in
观点：view→perspective
获得：acquire →obtain
帮某人：lend sb a hand→do sb a favor
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： And even I have failed several times.
拓展句： And even I have failed several times, which discouraged me deeply
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Two weeks ago, my classmate recommended me to take part in the high-jump in the sports meeting which is to be held next month. （运用了which引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】It seems that I haven’t acquired the key point of doing high-jump. （运用了固定句型it seems that...）
5．（2023下·湖北武汉·高一武汉市第四十九中学校联考期中）你是一名高中学生李华，在浏览网页时发现华南虎的数量以惊人速度下降，为此深感痛惜，决定给世界自然基金会(WWF)写一封求助信。内容包括：
1. 华南虎现状；
2. 你的提议；
3. 请求帮助。
注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 词左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯
Dear Sir/ Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a student from China. I’m writing to ask you for help in saving South China Tigers.
Their population is dropping at an alarming rate as their living spaces are becoming smaller and smaller due to the cutting of trees. Also, they are being hunted illegally for their valuable fur, skin and bones.Personally, some efforts can be made to help them. Above all, we should raise people’s awareness by turning to the social media for help. We can post some pictures to remind people of their serious situations. What’s more, it would be a good idea if the government could pass laws to stop people hunting and buying tiger products. More importantly, nature reserves should also be set up to protect the endangered species .
I sincerely hope you will take my proposals into consideration and help to protect these animals for their benefit and for the benefit of us all.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
帮助：help→assistance
由于：due to→on account of
不同的：different→various
考虑……：take…into consideration→take…into account
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Personally, some efforts can be made to help rescue the endangered tigers.
拓展句：As far as I’m concerned, some efforts can be made to help rescue the endangered tigers.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Only when buying stops will the hunting be stopped completely. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句和部分倒装)
【高分句型2】 More importantly, they can start national protection programs, where nature reserves are set up to place the endangered species and volunteers are gathered to watch over them. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
6．（2023下·四川德阳·高三校考期中）假如你是李华，最近你在学习上遇到了问题，你无法解决，你给你校的外籍心理医生Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：
1. 描述事件的起因、经过和结果；
2. 希望得到Kate的帮助。
要求：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Kate,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文赏析】
Dear Kate,
I’m very nervous these days, and I found it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So I’m writing to turn to you for help.
As the mid-term examination is coming, I’m always under great pressure with the high expectation from my parents and the teachers, which makes it difficult for me to fall asleep almost every night. As a result, I can’t focus on what the teacher says in class and become worried day by day.
I’m anxious to get your help. Could you please give me some advice on how to solve the problem Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
困难的：hard→difficult, tough, demanding
专心于：concentrate on→focus on, pay attention to
临近：come→approach, near
因此，结果：as a result→as a consequence, consequently
渴望：be anxious to→be eager to, long to
建议：advice→suggestion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Could you please give me some advice on how to solve the problem
拓展句：Could you please give me some advice on how I can solve the problem
【点睛】[高分句型1] As the mid-term examination is coming, I’m always under great pressure with the high expectation from my parents and the teachers, which makes it difficult for me to fall asleep almost every night. (运用了as引导时间状语从句、which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] As a result, I can’t focus on what the teacher says in class and become worried day by day. (运用了what引导名词性从句作介词on的宾语)专题09纲作文高分宝典之求助信、感谢信
目录
1.三年高考考情透析，把握高考风向标；
2评分标准早知道，明确得分失分点；
3.高分技巧心中有，"一式、两头、三写、四关"；
4.素材宝库赋能，句型模板全面掌握；
5.高考真题精讲，写作思路一目了然；
6.名校模拟提升，好题新题举一反三。
新高考写作第一节的命题形式主要是提纲式作文，主要文体形式包括投稿征文、演讲稿、通知、倡议书、活动介绍、电子邮件、书信 等。作文所涉及的话题贴近学生生活，富有时代气息，体现了新课程标准的要求，能唤起考生强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。
年份 卷区 话题
2021年 全国甲卷 帮助了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人
2020年 全国III卷 寻求外教Miss Evans帮助指导课本改编短剧
2019年 浙江卷 向朋友表达感谢
一、评分细则
1.本题总分为15分，分五个档次进行评分。
2.评分时应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。具体为：
(1)对于内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。
(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4.评分时还应注意：
(1)词数少于60的，酌情扣分。
(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。书写较差，以致影响交际的将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(13-15分)：雅—能写明全部要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达无误。
第四档(10-12分)：达—能写明全部或绝大部分要点，语言有少量错误，行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚。
第三档(7-9分)： 信—能写明基本要点，语言虽有较多错误，但能基本达意。
第二档(4-6分)：能写出部分要点，语言错误多，影响意思表达。
第一档(1-3分)：只能写出一两个要点，里面错误很多，只有个别句子正确。
零分：未作答，所写内容无法评判；所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。
总之，考生应该注意"有话好好说"：体现出词语的魅力，展示精彩的语句；"有话慢慢说"：要点齐全，叙述从容，运用一定的过渡词语。平时注意积累并背诵各种写作素材的"万能模板"并学会灵活运用，这样才能在有限的时间内提升写作能力，在考场上挥洒自如，如鱼得水。
根据考生书面表达常见错误及评卷要求，我们总结出行之有效的"一式、两头、三写、四关"高分技巧，即写对格式、写好两头、写美卷面、破关夺隘。
一式：写对格式 确定主题，记住所写文体的基本格式和特点。
两头：写好两头 要求灵活运用熟悉的句式结构和表达手法，使文章开头和结尾的表达生动准确，引人入胜，耐人寻味。
三写：写美卷面 行文时书写规范化，力求卷面整洁美观。单词的拼写、字母的大小写符合英语书写要求。
四关：破关夺隘 以主题为纲，进一步思考其内涵和外延，联系自己的学习、生活实际，凸显时代性。突破内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关以及习惯表达关。
求助信结构：开头表明写信意图，发出请求
主体描述困难，恳求帮助
结尾寻求帮助，表示感谢，期盼回复。
求助信模板
Dear XXX '
How are you doing these days It ' s almost two months since we met each other last time . The reason why
I ' m writing this letter is that I wonder if it ' s possible for me to seek your assistance in improving my English .
What bothers me is that _________________. First,______________________________________.
Besides ,_____________________________________.What ' s more ________________________________.
Therefore , would you be kind enough to offer me some instructions
_____________________________________________.
I would be grateful if you could give me some advice / help .
Best wishes !
感谢信结构：首段：表达真挚谢意
中间段：解释感谢的原因或对方的帮助给自己带来的好处
结尾段：再次感谢
感谢信模板
Dear XXX ,
How are you getting on with your life and work I ' m writing to express my sincere thanks for _______. I could not have ___________________without your help . Thank you so much.
I still remember what you have devoted to improving____________. Additionally, you ______________________..Another thing that I can ' t forget is that you ___________________________. All in all,words fail to convey my gratitude to you . it is your kindness and help that _____________________.Now I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely support and assistance .
Thank you / Thanks a lot for your help again .
Best wishes .
1.（2021·全国甲卷）假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1．阐明写信事由；
2．征求建议；
3．表示感谢。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2.（2020·全国新课标III卷）假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
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3.（2019·浙江卷第二次高考）假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3. 临别祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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一、感谢信
1.（2023下·甘肃定西·高二甘肃省临洮中学校考阶段练习）假定你是李华，教了你一年的美国老师Marry即将离职回国，为表达离别之情，请给她写一封感谢信。
要点如下：
1．回顾你们之间的点点滴滴；
2．表示感激与期待。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．（2023下·云南文山·高一统考期末）假定你是国际学校的李华，昨天不慎将自己的英语笔记弄丢，恰巧被你校英国留学生David捡到并及时归还于你。请根据以下要点提示用英语给David写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 表达感谢；
2. 陈述丢笔记的过程；
3. 表达祝福。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3．（2023·浙江绍兴·统考模拟预测）假设你是李华，某国际学校校书画社主席，昨天下午外教Mr. Black应邀给书画社作题为“A Short History of Western Painting”的讲座。请你给外教写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 感谢对方作讲座；
2. 同学们的收获；
3. 希望有机会再次邀请。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Black,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．（2024下·山西大同·高三统考期末）假定你是李华，最近赴英国伦敦参加短期交流项目。期间受到当地学生Susan的热情接待和关照。请你给她写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 表达谢意；
2. 感谢的原因。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Susan,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
二、求助信
1．（2023上·安徽合肥·高一合肥市第三中学校考阶段练习）假定你是高一(1)班的李华，刚升入一所新的学校，你在生活和学习方面遇到了一些困难和挑战，请给English Weekly的编辑写一封求助信。要点如下：
1. 自我介绍；
2. 遇到的困难；
3. 希望得到的建议和帮助。
注意：1.词数80词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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2．（2023上·云南红河·高三开远市第一中学校校考阶段练习）假如你是李华，本学期你校开设了外教授课的英语口语课，由于你英语听说方面较薄弱，上课听不懂。你决定给外教Chris写一封求助信。要点如下：
1.英语听说方面有困难;
2.希望得到的帮助。
注意：1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours ,
Li Hua
3．（2022上·吉林长春·高三长春外国语学校校考期中）假设你是学生李华，你家乡的雾凇(rime)久负盛名，你写了一篇英文宣传稿，想请外籍教师Bob帮助润色。请根据提示，用英语给Bob写一封求助信。内容包括：
1.求助事由；
2.求助内容；
3.表达感激。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．（2022上·广东梅州·高三梅州市曾宪梓中学校考阶段练习）假设你是李华，将参加下个月的运动会，尽管你已做了准备，但仍感觉训练不得要领。请你就此给外籍教练Mr. Smith写一封求助信。内容包括：
1. 求助事由；
2. 求助内容；
3. 表达感激
注意：
1、词数80词左右，开头结尾不计入总词数；
2、适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student. These days a problem has been bothering me a lot, so I’m writing to ask you for help.
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2023下·湖北武汉·高一武汉市第四十九中学校联考期中）你是一名高中学生李华，在浏览网页时发现华南虎的数量以惊人速度下降，为此深感痛惜，决定给世界自然基金会(WWF)写一封求助信。内容包括：
1. 华南虎现状；
2. 你的提议；
3. 请求帮助。
注意：1. 写作词数应为 80 词左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯
Dear Sir/ Madam,
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
6．（2023下·四川德阳·高三校考期中）假如你是李华，最近你在学习上遇到了问题，你无法解决，你给你校的外籍心理医生Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：
1. 描述事件的起因、经过和结果；
2. 希望得到Kate的帮助。
要求：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Kate,
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Yours,
Li Hua
