备战2024年高考英语答题技巧与模板构建：记叙文（含答案）
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题型14 记叙文
第一步 认真审题。首先要看题目的汉语要求或提示，通常包括审文体、审时态审人称和定写作要点。
第二步 列出要点。在看懂要求的基础上，在草稿纸上逐条列出要点，以免遗漏。若是图画，要列出各图的大意，然后将所列要点用完整地道的英语句子表达出来。
第三步 连句成篇。首先，在理清句子之间的关系后选用恰当的关联词语，把句子连接成文。其次，要结合生活经验，适当发挥想象，增加合理细节，使文段衔接自然，行文流畅。文末应尽量加上适当的结束语，以使文章结构完整。
3个注意 1.主题句：文章展开关键句，交代文章主题（写事的记叙文一般表述事件发生的时间、地点、人物、起因和结果(5”W”+1”H”)），以及感受。 2.主体段：紧扣主题句展开（写事的记叙文通常叙述事情经过、发展及结果，可按时间，地点和事件发展为线索）。 3.结尾句：事件带来的感想体会。
【满分词汇模板】
常用短语 early in the morning/in the early morning； in the middle of the day/at noon； late in the afternoon/in the late afternoon； far/deep into the night；in the past/at present/in the future；first，second，next，then，finally； at first，in the beginning；at last，in the end； shortly afterwards， at once，immediately，all of a sudden，suddenly， soon；the moment，as soon as， the first time，not until，next time，before，after，etc. For one thing, … For another thing, … Some...the others... The rest of us/them... last Friday, On the morning of May 8
【满分句型模板之写人写事佳句】
写人篇
1. ...was born in a poor family.
·····出生在一个贫穷的家庭。
2. He is always ready to help those in trouble.
他总是乐于助人。
3 .She has set a good example for us.
她给我们树立了一个榜样。
4 .Some were doing... some were doing... while others were doing...
有些人在做······,有些人在做······,而其他人在做·····
5. The old man thanked her again and again.
这个老人一次又一次地感谢她。
6. Li Hua, who is a famous young writer, was born in...
李华，一位著名的年轻作家，出生于···..
7 .He is not very strong but healthy and full of energy.
他不是很强壮，但是健康，充满活力。
8 . He is a kind and warm-hearted old man.
他是一位和蔼、热心的老人。
叙事篇
1 .Everyone has an unforgettable memory and cannot remove it.
每个人都有一个挥之不去的难忘记忆。
2. What impressed me most is that...
令我印象最深刻的是··..
3 . Upon arrival, we began to work.
我们一到达就马上开始工作。
4 .Last week, I was on my way home when something terrible happened.
上周，在我回家的路上发生了一件可怕的事情。
5. On my way to the park, I saw a group of young men...
在我去公园的路上，我看到一群年轻人··..
6. How he regretted what he had done!
他多么后悔他所做的事！
7. The air is filled with the scent of roses.
空气中弥漫着玫瑰的芬芳。
8. I could hardly believe my eyes.
我简直不敢相信我的眼睛。
9 .To tell the truth, we were frightened at that moment.
老实说，我们当时吓坏了。
10 .Tired as I was, I was happy that I did a good deed.
虽然我很累，但我很高兴，我做了一件好事。
11 .This is really an unforgettable experience.
这真是一次难忘的经历。
12. It was the most exciting moment that I have ever experienced.
这是我经历过的最激动人心的时刻。
13 .Among various kinds of experiences in my mind,... is the most unforgettable one.
在我脑海里的各种经历中，·····是最令人难忘的。
This will be an unforgettable experience.
这将是一次难忘的经历。
Last Sunday，my mother and I were doing...when we saw/heard...
上周日，我和母亲正在做……突然这时我们看到/听到……
16．About...o'clock one evening in...，my...was doing...
大约在晚上……点，在……，我的……正在做……
17.Without delay/hesitation，I dialed 120/119.
毫不犹豫，我拨打了120/119。
After a while，many people came to help us.
过了一会儿，许多人过来帮我们。
It wasn't long before an ambulance/a fire engine arrived.
不久，一辆救护车/消防车到了。
【满分作文写人模板】
__________,（姓名）__________,（年龄）from__________,（籍贯）is a__________（职业）________________________________________（个人成就）Why can she/he make such brilliant achievements with the disadvantage of？__________（弱势）His/ Her hard work and determination to succeed helped him/her to overcome many disadvantages.
__________.（语句一）__________.（语句二）__________.（语句三）
On his/her way to success, he/she proved that__________（关键词） was nothing and hard work was everything.
【满分作文叙事模板一】
In order to encourage the students to_____________ ,（目的） our school organized_____________（活动）Hundreds of us took part in it.
It was a nice day. At_____________,（时间）we gathered at_____________（地点）and set out for_____________.（目的地）_____________ (活动详细介绍）
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it_____________,（活动的意义一）it also_____________（活动的意义二）What a wonderful time!
【满分作文模板二】
When it comes to one of the most impressive things in my life, it suddenly occurred to me that we took part in ______________(活动) ……with my friends ________________（时间） in the ___________(地点), which was a fantastic experience.
In the morning we arrived at_______________（地点）.Meanwhile, I _____________（具体事项）.In the end, all of us not only gained ……, but also learnt __________________（收获）.
What a wonderful time we had! It was a very meaningful activity and not only can I have some new discoveries but also I experience the joy of labor and enrich my knowledge.
1．（2023年浙江卷1月）
上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动的过程；
2. 收获与感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
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【答案】 Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
参与：participate in → attend
开始：begin → start
观察，调查：observe → survey
震惊：strike → astonish/surprise
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.
拓展句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union, which benefited me a lot.
【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句）
2.（2023·全国甲卷）你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹；
2. 意义或启示。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
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【答案】
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.
The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.
Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
著名的：well-known → famous
人物：figure → person
强调：emphasize → stress
基础：foundation → basis
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge.
拓展句：His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, which fostered respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. (运用了现在分词作伴随状语)
【高分句型2】 He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
（2023·全国乙卷）
请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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【答案】
When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. That was the first time I watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply.
I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. In the beginning, it was quite difficult to read the notes on the stave. However, it did not demoralize me. I spent most of my leisure hours to practice piano. Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely.
Even though I will not pursue as my life career, I will still continue learning and playing piano as my hobby. It is simply because music is the best medication for my soul.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
机会：opportunity → chance
使沮丧：demoralize → discourage
满意的：satisfied → content
空闲的：leisure → spare
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The fantastic players touched me deeply. I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner.
拓展句：The fantastic players touched me deeply, so I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner.
点睛
【高分句型1】When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)
4.假如你是李华，上周你校学生会组织了一次徒步旅行，旨在调动高一学生的学习积极性，增强学生毅力。请你根据以下内容，写一篇记叙文记录此次活动：
1. 出发前，校长发表演讲，高一学生宣誓；
2. 学生徒步约20公里到达沙湖；
3. 你对此次活动的感想。
注意：1. 写作词数应为100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：宣誓 make a pledge; 沙湖 the Sand Lake 毅力perseverance
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【答案】
Last week, the Students’ Union of our school launched an activity of hiking with the intention of arousing students' enthusiasm for study. Here follow the details.
At 7:00 a.m., we gathered at the playground, where our principal delivered an inspiring speech and students of Grade 1 made a pledge together. Afterwards, we went on a hiking of about 20 kilometers to the Sand Lake. All students involved went back with refreshed mind and thoroughly understood the meaning of perseverance.
This activity proved to be a success, strengthening our willpower and making us more confident about our future study.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文中的报道。要求写篇短文记录学校组织的徒步旅行活动并发表感想。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目的：intention→aim
鼓舞人心的：inspiring→encouraging
彻底地：thoroughly→completely
证明：prove→turn out
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last week, the Students’ Union of our school launched an activity of hiking with the intention of arousing students' enthusiasm for study.
拓展句：Last week, the Students’ Union of our school launched an activity of hiking,which aimed to arouse students' enthusiasm for study.
【点睛】【高分句型1】At 7:00 a.m., we gathered at the playground, where our principal delivered an inspiring speech and students of Grade 1 made a pledge together.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】This activity proved to be a success, strengthening our willpower and making us more confident about our future study.（运用了现在分词作状语）
5．假定你是李华，请根据以下提示词用英语写一篇短文，记叙上周日发生在你家的一件趣事。提示词：stay up; father,wake up; practise; play the piano; sleep; mother, play football; get up; run away 注意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Something interesting happened to my parents and me at home last Sunday.
I stayed up late on Saturday night, so the next morning I didn’t wake up until my father called me. He asked me to get up and practise playing the piano. With my eyes closed, I begged my father to allow me to sleep some more. In fact, it was just because I didn’t want to practise playing the piano. My father had no choice but to leave my bedroom. Soon, my mother came in and asked me to get up to play football. Hearing this, I immediately jumped out of my bed, dressed myself and washed my face quickly. After that, I ran away carrying my football. I didn’t know how my father would feel when he returned to my bedroom and found I had left .
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据提示词描述周日在家的一件趣事。
【详解】1.词汇积累
实际上：in fact→as a matter of fact
别无选择只好：have no choice but to do→can do nothing but do
立刻：immediately→at once
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hearing this, I immediately jumped out of my bed, dressed myself and washed my face quickly.
拓展句：When I heard this, I immediately jumped out of my bed, dressed myself and washed my face quickly.
【点睛】【高分句型1】With my eyes closed, I begged my father to allow me to sleep some more.（运用了with的复合结构）
【高分句型2】Hearing this, I immediately jumped out of my bed, dressed myself and washed my face quickly. （运用了现在分词作状语）
6．假定你是李华，你校英文报“学生园地”栏目拟刊登一篇关于旅行的文章，请你用英语记叙你和家人在假期旅游的经历并投稿。内容包括：
1. 旅行时间和路线；
2. 旅行的经过；
3. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
During the last summer holiday, my parents and I took a road trip along China National Highway 318 (G318).
Known as the longest national highway in China, G318 starts from Shanghai and runs through many provinces. At first, I felt at ease when we set off from Shanghai. Next, appreciating the landscape along the way, I was deeply impressed by what we saw. As we approached our destination in Tibet, we enjoyed fantastic scenery there, which made our trip more worthwhile.
This was the first time that I had got so close to nature, and it was really an unforgettable trip.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生用英语记叙自己和家人在假期旅游的经历并向校英文报“学生园地”栏目投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
假期：holiday→vacation
旅行：trip→travel
开始：start→begin
欣赏：enjoy→appreciate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：During the last summer holiday, my parents and I took a road trip along China National Highway 318 (G318).
拓展句：During the last summer holiday, my parents and I took a road trip along China National Highway 318 (G318), which was great.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Known as the longest national highway in China, G318 starts from Shanghai and runs through many provinces. (运用了非谓语动词过去分词作状语)
【高分句型2】As we approached our destination in Tibet, we enjoyed fantastic scenery there, which made our trip more worthwhile. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7．假如你是李华，你所在的班级在上周末以“Our Delicate World”为主题组织了一次社会实践活动。请写一篇记叙文记录活动的整个过程，要点如下：
（1）参观当地自然保护公园，聆听关于生态系统（ecosystem）问题的讲座；
（2）在工作人员的带领下进行分组实践，如观察和学习一些动植物样本、检测水质、清理园区内的垃圾等；
（3）合作完成活动海报，向公众宣传维护生态系统平衡的重要性；
（4）本次活动的心得。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Our Delicate World
Last week, our class organized a social practice on the theme of “Our Delicate World”. The practice was meaningful and brought us lots of benefits.
Upon arriving at the local nature reserve park, we were given a warm welcome and shown around the park, which is home to various animals and plants in the local ecosystem. Meanwhile, we were arranged to listen to a lecture on ecosystem issues.
With the staff patiently teaching and guiding, we were divided into groups and did some sorts of practice, such as observing and learning some plant and animal samples, testing water quality, cleaning up garbage in the park and so on. What’s more, we worked with the staff , completing posters to inform the public about the importance of maintaining the balance of the ecosystem.
From the practice, I sincerely felt it greatly important to protect our living world.
【导语】这是一篇记叙文。要求考生对班级上周末以“Our Delicate World”为主题组织了一次社会实践活动，写一篇记叙文记录活动的整个过程。
【详解】1.词汇积累
组织、安排：organise→arrange
到达、抵达：arrive at→reach
测试：test→put...to the test
保持平衡：maintain the balance→keep the balance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last week, our class organized a social practice on the theme of “Our Delicate World”. The practice was meaningful and brought us lots of benefits.
拓展句：Last week, our class organized a social practice on the theme of “Our Delicate World”,which was meaningful and brought us lots of benefits.
【点睛】[高级句型1]Upon arriving at the local nature reserve park, we were given a warm welcome and shown around the park, which is home to various animals and plants in the local ecosystem. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高级句型2]What’s more, we worked with the staff , completing posters to inform the public about the importance of maintaining the balance of the ecosystem.（运用了现在分词作状语）
8．假设你是某校高三学生，周三下午你校举办了“爱我中华”的学生合唱比赛（a campus chorus contest）。请你写一篇英文周记，叙述活动的全过程。
写作要点：1.比赛情况；
2.你的感想和收获。
注意：1.短文词数不少于100词；
2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
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【答案】
Our school organised a campus chorus contest on Wednesday afternoon, the theme of which is “Love Our Motherland”.
As scheduled, the contest took place in the school hall, lasting two hours from 4:00 pm to 6:00 pm. Twenty groups took part in the activity and we sang songs about the beauty of our motherland with enthusiasm .We also expressed our pride in our great mother’s achievements in all aspects in our songs.My class eventually won the first place in the fierce competition.
The activity is of great significance. First of all, I really experienced a feast for the eyes and ears. Besides, it provided us with a platform to explore our country, its culture, its long history and great achievements.
【分析】本文是一篇记叙文。假设你是某校高三学生，周三下午你校举办了“爱我中华”的学生合唱比赛（a campus chorus contest）。请你写一篇英文周记，叙述活动的全过程。写作要点：比赛情况；你的感想和收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累（4个以上）
比赛：contest→ competition
发生：take place→happen→ break out→ come about→ occur
参加：take part in→join in
另外，此外：besides→in addition→ what’s more→futhermore→moreover
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As scheduled, the contest took place in the school hall, lasting two hours from 4:00 pm to 6:00 pm.
拓展句：As scheduled, the contest took place in the school hall, which lasted two hours from 4:00 pm to 6:00 pm.
【点睛】[高分句型1 ] Our school organised a campus chorus contest on Wednesday afternoon, the theme of which is “Love Our Motherland”.句中which引导非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型2 ] As scheduled, the contest took place in the school hall, lasting two hours from 4:00 pm to 6:00 pm.句中现在分词作伴随状语。
9．请你用英语写一篇短文与你的留学生朋友分享你的一次难忘的旅游经历，要点包括：
1. 旅游过程；
2. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I’m glad to share a truly unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you.
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【答案】
I’m glad to share a truly unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you.
On July 7, my parents and I took a bus to Leshan, Sichuan Province, which is famous for its Buddha. The Buddha is really big and looking up at the large head and down at the large feet, I felt I was so small. The next day, we climbed Mount Emei, where there are many old temples and wild monkeys.
The naughty monkeys were the most exciting things I experienced there. Towards evening, we made our way back. We were all tired, but our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable.
This is what I want to share with you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语写一篇短文与留学生朋友分享一次难忘的旅游经历。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
因...而出名：be famous for→be known for
令人激动的：exciting→thrilling
疲惫的：tired→exhausted
2. 句式拓展
简单句变为复合句
原句：We were all tired, but our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable.
拓展句：Although we were all tired, the trip to Leshan was really unforgettable.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m glad to share a truly unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you.(that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]The next day, we climbed Mount Emei, where there are many old temples and wild monkeys.(where引导的非限制性定语从句)
10．你校在上周六组织师生徒步去国家森林公园 (National Forest Park)进行班级团建活动， 请你为校英语报写一篇英文短文，记叙此次活动。
内容包括：
1. 活动时间、地点及目的；2. 活动内容； 3. 你的感想。
注意：1. 写作词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
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【答案】
With the purpose of cultivating our team spirit, our school organized some teachers and students to go hiking in the National Forest Park last Saturday.
As scheduled, we set off at 8:00 a. m. and walked 8 kilometers to the park. Upon our arrival, we were divided into groups and participated in some team building activities, including an obstacle course and a tug of war. After that, we had a one-hour free activity. Some students were taking photos, capturing the beauty of nature while others were exploring the forest park to learn about various plant species. At last, each group shared what they had learned happily.
Challenging as it was, the hiking trip was really enjoyable and meaningful. Not only can the hiking trip strengthen our perseverance, but it can enhance our friendship and team spirit.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生为校英语报写一篇英文短文，记叙学校在上周六组织师生徒步去国家森林公园进行的班级团建活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
出发：set off→start
步行：walk→go on foot
照片：photo→picture
提高：enhance→improve
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：After that, we had a one-hour free activity.
拓展句：After that, we had a one-hour free activity, which made us very cheerful.
【点睛】【高分句型1】At last, each group shared what they had learned happily. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Challenging as it was, the hiking trip was really enjoyable and meaningful. (运用了as引导让步状语从句的倒装句式)
第一步 认真审题。首先要看题目的汉语要求或提示，通常包括审文体、审时态审人称和定写作要点。
第二步 列出要点。在看懂要求的基础上，在草稿纸上逐条列出要点，以免遗漏。若是图画，要列出各图的大意，然后将所列要点用完整地道的英语句子表达出来。
第三步 连句成篇。首先，在理清句子之间的关系后选用恰当的关联词语，把句子连接成文。其次，要结合生活经验，适当发挥想象，增加合理细节，使文段衔接自然，行文流畅。文末应尽量加上适当的结束语，以使文章结构完整。
3个注意 1.主题句：文章展开关键句，交代文章主题（写事的记叙文一般表述事件发生的时间、地点、人物、起因和结果(5”W”+1”H”)），以及感受。 2.主体段：紧扣主题句展开（写事的记叙文通常叙述事情经过、发展及结果，可按时间，地点和事件发展为线索）。 3.结尾句：事件带来的感想体会。
【满分词汇模板】
常用短语 early in the morning/in the early morning； in the middle of the day/at noon； late in the afternoon/in the late afternoon； far/deep into the night；in the past/at present/in the future；first，second，next，then，finally； at first，in the beginning；at last，in the end； shortly afterwards， at once，immediately，all of a sudden，suddenly， soon；the moment，as soon as， the first time，not until，next time，before，after，etc. For one thing, … For another thing, … Some...the others... The rest of us/them... last Friday, On the morning of May 8
【满分句型模板之写人写事佳句】
写人篇
1. ...was born in a poor family.
·····出生在一个贫穷的家庭。
2. He is always ready to help those in trouble.
他总是乐于助人。
3 .She has set a good example for us.
她给我们树立了一个榜样。
4 .Some were doing... some were doing... while others were doing...
有些人在做······,有些人在做······,而其他人在做·····
5. The old man thanked her again and again.
这个老人一次又一次地感谢她。
6. Li Hua, who is a famous young writer, was born in...
李华，一位著名的年轻作家，出生于···..
7 .He is not very strong but healthy and full of energy.
他不是很强壮，但是健康，充满活力。
8 . He is a kind and warm-hearted old man.
他是一位和蔼、热心的老人。
叙事篇
1 .Everyone has an unforgettable memory and cannot remove it.
每个人都有一个挥之不去的难忘记忆。
2. What impressed me most is that...
令我印象最深刻的是··..
3 . Upon arrival, we began to work.
我们一到达就马上开始工作。
4 .Last week, I was on my way home when something terrible happened.
上周，在我回家的路上发生了一件可怕的事情。
5. On my way to the park, I saw a group of young men...
在我去公园的路上，我看到一群年轻人··..
6. How he regretted what he had done!
他多么后悔他所做的事！
7. The air is filled with the scent of roses.
空气中弥漫着玫瑰的芬芳。
8. I could hardly believe my eyes.
我简直不敢相信我的眼睛。
9 .To tell the truth, we were frightened at that moment.
老实说，我们当时吓坏了。
10 .Tired as I was, I was happy that I did a good deed.
虽然我很累，但我很高兴，我做了一件好事。
11 .This is really an unforgettable experience.
这真是一次难忘的经历。
12. It was the most exciting moment that I have ever experienced.
这是我经历过的最激动人心的时刻。
13 .Among various kinds of experiences in my mind,... is the most unforgettable one.
在我脑海里的各种经历中，·····是最令人难忘的。
This will be an unforgettable experience.
这将是一次难忘的经历。
Last Sunday，my mother and I were doing...when we saw/heard...
上周日，我和母亲正在做……突然这时我们看到/听到……
16．About...o'clock one evening in...，my...was doing...
大约在晚上……点，在……，我的……正在做……
17.Without delay/hesitation，I dialed 120/119.
毫不犹豫，我拨打了120/119。
After a while，many people came to help us.
过了一会儿，许多人过来帮我们。
It wasn't long before an ambulance/a fire engine arrived.
不久，一辆救护车/消防车到了。
【满分作文写人模板】
__________,（姓名）__________,（年龄）from__________,（籍贯）is a__________（职业）________________________________________（个人成就）Why can she/he make such brilliant achievements with the disadvantage of？__________（弱势）His/ Her hard work and determination to succeed helped him/her to overcome many disadvantages.
__________.（语句一）__________.（语句二）__________.（语句三）
On his/her way to success, he/she proved that__________（关键词） was nothing and hard work was everything.
【满分作文叙事模板一】
In order to encourage the students to_____________ ,（目的） our school organized_____________（活动）Hundreds of us took part in it.
It was a nice day. At_____________,（时间）we gathered at_____________（地点）and set out for_____________.（目的地）_____________ (活动详细介绍）
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it_____________,（活动的意义一）it also_____________（活动的意义二）What a wonderful time!
【满分作文模板二】
When it comes to one of the most impressive things in my life, it suddenly occurred to me that we took part in ______________(活动) ……with my friends ________________（时间） in the ___________(地点), which was a fantastic experience.
In the morning we arrived at_______________（地点）.Meanwhile, I _____________（具体事项）.In the end, all of us not only gained ……, but also learnt __________________（收获）.
What a wonderful time we had! It was a very meaningful activity and not only can I have some new discoveries but also I experience the joy of labor and enrich my knowledge.
1．（2023年浙江卷1月）
上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动的过程；
2. 收获与感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
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【答案】 Getting to Know the Plants Around Us
Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.
The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species. We then went on a natural walk to observe and collect samples of different plants. Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals. I also gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.
Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
参与：participate in → attend
开始：begin → start
观察，调查：observe → survey
震惊：strike → astonish/surprise
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union.
拓展句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Union, which benefited me a lot.
【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a local botanist, who taught us about the different characteristics and uses of various plant species.（运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Throughout the event, I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes, as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句）
2.（2023·全国甲卷）你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹；
2. 意义或启示。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
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【答案】
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.
The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.
Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
著名的：well-known → famous
人物：figure → person
强调：emphasize → stress
基础：foundation → basis
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge.
拓展句：His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, which fostered respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. (运用了现在分词作伴随状语)
【高分句型2】 He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
（2023·全国乙卷）
请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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【答案】
When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. That was the first time I watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply.
I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. In the beginning, it was quite difficult to read the notes on the stave. However, it did not demoralize me. I spent most of my leisure hours to practice piano. Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely.
Even though I will not pursue as my life career, I will still continue learning and playing piano as my hobby. It is simply because music is the best medication for my soul.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
机会：opportunity → chance
使沮丧：demoralize → discourage
满意的：satisfied → content
空闲的：leisure → spare
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The fantastic players touched me deeply. I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner.
拓展句：The fantastic players touched me deeply, so I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner.
点睛
【高分句型1】When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)
4.假如你是李华，上周你校学生会组织了一次徒步旅行，旨在调动高一学生的学习积极性，增强学生毅力。请你根据以下内容，写一篇记叙文记录此次活动：
1. 出发前，校长发表演讲，高一学生宣誓；
2. 学生徒步约20公里到达沙湖；
3. 你对此次活动的感想。
注意：1. 写作词数应为100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：宣誓 make a pledge; 沙湖 the Sand Lake 毅力perseverance
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【答案】
Last week, the Students’ Union of our school launched an activity of hiking with the intention of arousing students' enthusiasm for study. Here follow the details.
At 7:00 a.m., we gathered at the playground, where our principal delivered an inspiring speech and students of Grade 1 made a pledge together. Afterwards, we went on a hiking of about 20 kilometers to the Sand Lake. All students involved went back with refreshed mind and thoroughly understood the meaning of perseverance.
This activity proved to be a success, strengthening our willpower and making us more confident about our future study.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文中的报道。要求写篇短文记录学校组织的徒步旅行活动并发表感想。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目的：intention→aim
鼓舞人心的：inspiring→encouraging
彻底地：thoroughly→completely
证明：prove→turn out
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last week, the Students’ Union of our school launched an activity of hiking with the intention of arousing students' enthusiasm for study.
拓展句：Last week, the Students’ Union of our school launched an activity of hiking,which aimed to arouse students' enthusiasm for study.
【点睛】【高分句型1】At 7:00 a.m., we gathered at the playground, where our principal delivered an inspiring speech and students of Grade 1 made a pledge together.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】This activity proved to be a success, strengthening our willpower and making us more confident about our future study.（运用了现在分词作状语）
5．假定你是李华，请根据以下提示词用英语写一篇短文，记叙上周日发生在你家的一件趣事。提示词：stay up; father,wake up; practise; play the piano; sleep; mother, play football; get up; run away 注意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Something interesting happened to my parents and me at home last Sunday.
I stayed up late on Saturday night, so the next morning I didn’t wake up until my father called me. He asked me to get up and practise playing the piano. With my eyes closed, I begged my father to allow me to sleep some more. In fact, it was just because I didn’t want to practise playing the piano. My father had no choice but to leave my bedroom. Soon, my mother came in and asked me to get up to play football. Hearing this, I immediately jumped out of my bed, dressed myself and washed my face quickly. After that, I ran away carrying my football. I didn’t know how my father would feel when he returned to my bedroom and found I had left .
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据提示词描述周日在家的一件趣事。
【详解】1.词汇积累
实际上：in fact→as a matter of fact
别无选择只好：have no choice but to do→can do nothing but do
立刻：immediately→at once
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hearing this, I immediately jumped out of my bed, dressed myself and washed my face quickly.
拓展句：When I heard this, I immediately jumped out of my bed, dressed myself and washed my face quickly.
【点睛】【高分句型1】With my eyes closed, I begged my father to allow me to sleep some more.（运用了with的复合结构）
【高分句型2】Hearing this, I immediately jumped out of my bed, dressed myself and washed my face quickly. （运用了现在分词作状语）
6．假定你是李华，你校英文报“学生园地”栏目拟刊登一篇关于旅行的文章，请你用英语记叙你和家人在假期旅游的经历并投稿。内容包括：
1. 旅行时间和路线；
2. 旅行的经过；
3. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
During the last summer holiday, my parents and I took a road trip along China National Highway 318 (G318).
Known as the longest national highway in China, G318 starts from Shanghai and runs through many provinces. At first, I felt at ease when we set off from Shanghai. Next, appreciating the landscape along the way, I was deeply impressed by what we saw. As we approached our destination in Tibet, we enjoyed fantastic scenery there, which made our trip more worthwhile.
This was the first time that I had got so close to nature, and it was really an unforgettable trip.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生用英语记叙自己和家人在假期旅游的经历并向校英文报“学生园地”栏目投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
假期：holiday→vacation
旅行：trip→travel
开始：start→begin
欣赏：enjoy→appreciate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：During the last summer holiday, my parents and I took a road trip along China National Highway 318 (G318).
拓展句：During the last summer holiday, my parents and I took a road trip along China National Highway 318 (G318), which was great.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Known as the longest national highway in China, G318 starts from Shanghai and runs through many provinces. (运用了非谓语动词过去分词作状语)
【高分句型2】As we approached our destination in Tibet, we enjoyed fantastic scenery there, which made our trip more worthwhile. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7．假如你是李华，你所在的班级在上周末以“Our Delicate World”为主题组织了一次社会实践活动。请写一篇记叙文记录活动的整个过程，要点如下：
（1）参观当地自然保护公园，聆听关于生态系统（ecosystem）问题的讲座；
（2）在工作人员的带领下进行分组实践，如观察和学习一些动植物样本、检测水质、清理园区内的垃圾等；
（3）合作完成活动海报，向公众宣传维护生态系统平衡的重要性；
（4）本次活动的心得。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Our Delicate World
Last week, our class organized a social practice on the theme of “Our Delicate World”. The practice was meaningful and brought us lots of benefits.
Upon arriving at the local nature reserve park, we were given a warm welcome and shown around the park, which is home to various animals and plants in the local ecosystem. Meanwhile, we were arranged to listen to a lecture on ecosystem issues.
With the staff patiently teaching and guiding, we were divided into groups and did some sorts of practice, such as observing and learning some plant and animal samples, testing water quality, cleaning up garbage in the park and so on. What’s more, we worked with the staff , completing posters to inform the public about the importance of maintaining the balance of the ecosystem.
From the practice, I sincerely felt it greatly important to protect our living world.
【导语】这是一篇记叙文。要求考生对班级上周末以“Our Delicate World”为主题组织了一次社会实践活动，写一篇记叙文记录活动的整个过程。
【详解】1.词汇积累
组织、安排：organise→arrange
到达、抵达：arrive at→reach
测试：test→put...to the test
保持平衡：maintain the balance→keep the balance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last week, our class organized a social practice on the theme of “Our Delicate World”. The practice was meaningful and brought us lots of benefits.
拓展句：Last week, our class organized a social practice on the theme of “Our Delicate World”,which was meaningful and brought us lots of benefits.
【点睛】[高级句型1]Upon arriving at the local nature reserve park, we were given a warm welcome and shown around the park, which is home to various animals and plants in the local ecosystem. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高级句型2]What’s more, we worked with the staff , completing posters to inform the public about the importance of maintaining the balance of the ecosystem.（运用了现在分词作状语）
8．假设你是某校高三学生，周三下午你校举办了“爱我中华”的学生合唱比赛（a campus chorus contest）。请你写一篇英文周记，叙述活动的全过程。
写作要点：1.比赛情况；
2.你的感想和收获。
注意：1.短文词数不少于100词；
2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
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【答案】
Our school organised a campus chorus contest on Wednesday afternoon, the theme of which is “Love Our Motherland”.
As scheduled, the contest took place in the school hall, lasting two hours from 4:00 pm to 6:00 pm. Twenty groups took part in the activity and we sang songs about the beauty of our motherland with enthusiasm .We also expressed our pride in our great mother’s achievements in all aspects in our songs.My class eventually won the first place in the fierce competition.
The activity is of great significance. First of all, I really experienced a feast for the eyes and ears. Besides, it provided us with a platform to explore our country, its culture, its long history and great achievements.
【分析】本文是一篇记叙文。假设你是某校高三学生，周三下午你校举办了“爱我中华”的学生合唱比赛（a campus chorus contest）。请你写一篇英文周记，叙述活动的全过程。写作要点：比赛情况；你的感想和收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累（4个以上）
比赛：contest→ competition
发生：take place→happen→ break out→ come about→ occur
参加：take part in→join in
另外，此外：besides→in addition→ what’s more→futhermore→moreover
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As scheduled, the contest took place in the school hall, lasting two hours from 4:00 pm to 6:00 pm.
拓展句：As scheduled, the contest took place in the school hall, which lasted two hours from 4:00 pm to 6:00 pm.
【点睛】[高分句型1 ] Our school organised a campus chorus contest on Wednesday afternoon, the theme of which is “Love Our Motherland”.句中which引导非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型2 ] As scheduled, the contest took place in the school hall, lasting two hours from 4:00 pm to 6:00 pm.句中现在分词作伴随状语。
9．请你用英语写一篇短文与你的留学生朋友分享你的一次难忘的旅游经历，要点包括：
1. 旅游过程；
2. 你的感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I’m glad to share a truly unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you.
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【答案】
I’m glad to share a truly unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you.
On July 7, my parents and I took a bus to Leshan, Sichuan Province, which is famous for its Buddha. The Buddha is really big and looking up at the large head and down at the large feet, I felt I was so small. The next day, we climbed Mount Emei, where there are many old temples and wild monkeys.
The naughty monkeys were the most exciting things I experienced there. Towards evening, we made our way back. We were all tired, but our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable.
This is what I want to share with you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语写一篇短文与留学生朋友分享一次难忘的旅游经历。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
因...而出名：be famous for→be known for
令人激动的：exciting→thrilling
疲惫的：tired→exhausted
2. 句式拓展
简单句变为复合句
原句：We were all tired, but our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable.
拓展句：Although we were all tired, the trip to Leshan was really unforgettable.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m glad to share a truly unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you.(that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]The next day, we climbed Mount Emei, where there are many old temples and wild monkeys.(where引导的非限制性定语从句)
10．你校在上周六组织师生徒步去国家森林公园 (National Forest Park)进行班级团建活动， 请你为校英语报写一篇英文短文，记叙此次活动。
内容包括：
1. 活动时间、地点及目的；2. 活动内容； 3. 你的感想。
注意：1. 写作词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
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【答案】
With the purpose of cultivating our team spirit, our school organized some teachers and students to go hiking in the National Forest Park last Saturday.
As scheduled, we set off at 8:00 a. m. and walked 8 kilometers to the park. Upon our arrival, we were divided into groups and participated in some team building activities, including an obstacle course and a tug of war. After that, we had a one-hour free activity. Some students were taking photos, capturing the beauty of nature while others were exploring the forest park to learn about various plant species. At last, each group shared what they had learned happily.
Challenging as it was, the hiking trip was really enjoyable and meaningful. Not only can the hiking trip strengthen our perseverance, but it can enhance our friendship and team spirit.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。要求考生为校英语报写一篇英文短文，记叙学校在上周六组织师生徒步去国家森林公园进行的班级团建活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
出发：set off→start
步行：walk→go on foot
照片：photo→picture
提高：enhance→improve
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：After that, we had a one-hour free activity.
拓展句：After that, we had a one-hour free activity, which made us very cheerful.
【点睛】【高分句型1】At last, each group shared what they had learned happily. (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Challenging as it was, the hiking trip was really enjoyable and meaningful. (运用了as引导让步状语从句的倒装句式)