题型12 求助信
第一段 写给机构,需自我介绍。 写给友人或师长,需寒暄问候,再写出求助目的。
第二段 详述问题,提出要求。
第三段 表达感谢并期望得到回复。
【满分词汇模板】
短语 faced with...面对......困难 have trouble in communicating with others和别人交流有困难 meet problems遇到问题 come across difficulties遇到困难 turn to you for help向你求助 do me a favor 帮某人一个忙 feel greatly stressed 感到压力很大
【满分句型模板之开篇“风头”句】
I am writing to turn to you for help.
我信心向你寻求帮助
I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
我别无选择只能向你求助
I'm writing to ask you to do me a favor, as I meet with/ come across some problems while planning a Green Campus campaign.
我写信请你帮忙,因为我正在策划一个绿色校园运动时遇到了一些问题。
I am eager to get your timely help.
我渴望得到你及时的帮助。
5. The reason why I am writing to you is that I wonder if you could do me a favor.
我写信给你是想知道你能否帮我。
【满分句型模板之开篇“猪肚”句】
What bothers me is that I am a at loss / have no idea how to review what I have learned by myself at home.
让我困扰的是,我不知道如何回顾我自己在家里学到的东西。
2. Faced with so challenging a problem, I have no alternative but to turn to you for help.
面对这个难题,我只得向你求助.
I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice.
如果你能给我一些建议,我将不胜感激。
4. I would be more than happy if you could...
如果你能...我将非常高兴......
5. First and foremost, I have great difficulty in doing sth.
首先最重要的是,我做...有着很大的困难
6. Additionally, I find it's too challenging for me to do sth.
此外,我发现做...对我来说挑战太大
Last but certainly not least, doing sth is a big headache for me.
最后但同样重要的是,做...让我很头疼一、夺人眼球开头句(开篇表意)
8. I have much trouble in concentrating on online classes, making me really frustrated.
我很难专心上网课,使我很苦恼,
I am stuck and wondering if you could offer me some practical advice as I know you have
organized similar activities.
我被难住了,知道你组织过类似的活动,所以我想知道你是否可以给我一些实用的建议。
I feel greatly stressed, so would you be so kind enough to give me some advice on how to
relieve stress.
我现在压力很大,你能给我一些减压的建议吗
Learning you have rich experience in organizing opera performances, I was wondering if you could...
得知你在组织歌剧表演方面有丰富的经验,我想知道你是否可以。
【满分句型模板之结尾“豹尾”句】
Thanks for your kind consideration.
谢谢你的友好考虑。
I am looking forward to receiving your earliest reply.
我期待着最早收到你的来信。
3. I would be very grateful if you could take the trouble to help me deal with the problem.
如果你能费心帮我处理这个问题,我将不胜感激.
4. Your timely help will be highly appreciated.
非常感谢你及时的帮助。
I'd appreciate it if you could give me some guidance instructions.
如果你能给我一些指导,我将不胜感激。
Hopefully, your kind and timely help would be offered to me.
我希望,你可以提供给我及时善良的帮助。
【满分作文模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
My name is _____________. I’m writing ______________________.(表明写信目的)
Faced with _____________(点明困难), I have to ask for your help. Would you like to ______________(恳请帮助一) In the meanwhile, I beg you to ________________ in order that____________________(求助理由). In addition, I would like to _____________________(求助二). I’m sure that I can ______________ with your help. (表明信心和期盼)It will be appreciated if you can help me to ______________________(表达感谢).
Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分作文模板示例】
(重庆市拔尖强基联盟2023-2024学年高三上学期12月月考英语试题)假定你是李华,本学期你校开设了英语口语课,但是你不太适应外教的授课。你决定给英国朋友Andrew写一封邮件,寻求他的帮助。要点包括:
1. 告知困难;
2.寻求求助。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Andrew,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Andrew,
I’m writing to share with you a problem I’m currently facing. This semester, our school has introduced an oral English course, and I’m struggling to adapt to the teaching style of our foreign teacher.
Faced with the course, I find it challenging to understand his/her accent and follow the pace of the class. As a result, I’m feeling quite frustrated and I’m worried that my oral English skills won’t be effectively improved. I was wondering if you could offer me some advice or tips on how to better cope with this situation. Perhaps you have some experience or suggestions that could help me improve my comprehension and communication skills in a foreign language environment.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【译文】
亲爱的安德鲁,
我写信是想和你分享一下我目前正面临的一个问题。本学期,我们学校开设了一门英语口语课程,我正在努力适应我们的外语教师的教学风格。我发现要理解他/她的口音和跟上全班同学的节奏很有挑战性。因此,我感到很沮丧,我担心我的英语口语技能不会得到有效的提高。 我想知道你是否可以给我一些建议或建议,如何更好地应对这种情况。也许你有一些经验或建议,可以帮助我提高我在外语环境中的理解能力和沟通能力。 我期待着很快收到你的来信。
李华
(辽宁省丹东市五校协作体2023-2024学年高三12月试题)
假设你是某中学高三学生李华。近期你校外教Steve做了一场关于读后续写的讲座。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括
1.表达感谢并简述你的收获;
2.说明你在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。
参考词汇:读后续写 continuation writing
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Steve,
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Yours
Li hua
【答案】
Dear Steve,
I’m writing to express my thanks for the wonderful lecture you delivered on continuation writing. I’ve learned really a lot. However, I am still puzzled by some difficulties in it.
For instance, I find it hard to grasp the theme of the passage. Besides, I also feel it hard to continue when confronted with new words. What can I do Would you please give me some advice
I would be really grateful if you could help me out. Thank you very much again. Your earliest reply would be appreciated.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于近期校外教Steve做了一场关于读后续写的讲座这一情况,用英文给他写一封电子邮件,表达感谢并简述收获,说明自己在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
困惑的:puzzled→ confused
此外:Besides → What’s more
建议:advice→ suggestion
感激的:grateful→ thankful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’ve learned really a lot. However, I am still puzzled by some difficulties in it.
拓展句:Though I’ve learned really a lot, I am still puzzled by some difficulties in it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, I also feel it hard to continue when confronted with new words.(运用了连词when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】I would be really grateful if you could help me out.(运用了连词if引导的条件状语从句)
2.(四川省德阳市第五中学2023-2024学年高三12月试题)
假定你是李华,在外刊阅读中遇到了困难,尝试一些方法后仍未达到预期效果。请你给外教Marcus写一封邮件寻求帮助,内容包括:
1. 尝试方法;
2. 请求指导;
3. 表达感谢。
注意:写作词数应为100左右。
Dear Marcus,
How is everything going
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Marcus,
How is everything going Recently we are encouraged to read more foreign magazines to improve our English, but I have much difficulty with it, so I am wiring for your generous assistance.
It is so big a headache for me since despite trying various methods, I haven’t yet achieved the desired results. For instance, I attempted to resort to a dictionary to look up unfamiliar words while reading. However, I find it quite time-consuming and it interrupts the flow of my reading. In addition, I tried reading the articles aloud to help understand, but the complexity of the content and structure was a substantial challenge. Given that you have rich experience in reading and teaching in foreign magazines, could you kindly offer me some guidance to help me out
I would appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience. Thank you in advance for your energy.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Marcus写一封邮件,就在外刊阅读中遇到的困难寻求帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
鼓励:encourage→inspire
尽管:despite→in spite of
此外:in addition→what’s more
提前:in advance→ahead
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句:Recently we are encouraged to read more foreign magazines to improve our English, but I have much difficulty with it, so I am wiring for your generous assistance.
拓展句:Recently we are encouraged to read more foreign magazines to improve our English, but I have so much difficulty with it that I am wiring for your generous assistance.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is so big a headache for me since despite trying various methods, I haven’t yet achieved the desired results.(运用了since引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】Given that you have rich experience in reading and teaching in foreign magazines, could you kindly offer me some guidance to help me out (运用了given that引导的条件状语从句)
3.(海南省海口市琼山区海南中学2023-2024学年高三试题)
假如你是李华。本学期你校开设了英语口语课,由于你不太适应外教 Mike的授课,你决定给他写一封求助信。内容包括:
1. 谈谈你面临的具体问题;
2. 希望得到帮助。
注意:
1. 词数 80 左右, 开头和结尾已为你写好, 不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
I am Li Hua, one of your students in Oral English class.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
I am Li Hua, one of your students in Oral English class. I am writing to seek help from you.
You know, I come from a junior high school in the countryside, where teachers don’t speak much English in class. Now I find it really hard to follow you in class. I hope you can recommend some listening materials to me so that I can improve my listening after class. Besides, could I practice speaking with you for half an hour at weekends at your convenient time
I would be grateful if you could lend me a helping hand.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华。本学期你校开设了英语口语课,由于你不太适应外教 Mike的授课,你决定给他写一封求助信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
寻求帮助:seek help from→turn to sb. for help
感谢:grateful→thankful
此外:besides→in addition
口语:spoken English→oral English
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, could I practice speaking with you for half an hour at weekends at your convenient time
拓展句:Besides, I hope I can practice speaking with you for half an hour at weekends at your convenient time, which I think can help improve my spoken English.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I hope you can recommend some listening materials to me so that I can improve my listening after class. (运用了目的状语从句)
[高分句型2] You know, I come from a junior high school in the countryside, where teachers don’t speak much English in class. (运用了where引导非限制性定语从句)
4.(2024届浙江省温州市高三11月第一次适应性考试试题)
假定你是李华,在外刊阅读中遇到了困难,尝试一些方法后仍未达到预期效果。请你给外教Marcus写一封邮件寻求帮助,内容包括:
1.尝试方法:
2.请求指导。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。
Dear Marcus,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Marcus,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to seek your guidance on a problem I have been facing while reading foreign magazines. Despite trying various methods, I am unable to comprehend the articles as effectively as I would like to.
I have tried using online translation tools and looking up unfamiliar words in the dictionary, but these methods have not yielded the desired results. I believe that with your expertise and guidance, I can improve my reading skills and better understand the content of these magazines.
Would it be possible for us to schedule a meeting or a call to discuss this further I would greatly appreciate any advice or tips you may have.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定你是李华,在外刊阅读中遇到了困难,尝试一些方法后仍未达到预期效果。请你给外教Marcus写一封邮件寻求帮助,内容包括:1.尝试方法:2.请求指导。
【详解】1.词汇积累
方法:method→means
提高:improve→enhance
感谢:appreciate→thank
建议:tip→suggestion
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Despite trying various methods, I am unable to comprehend the articles as effectively as I would like to.
拓展句:Although I have tried various methods, I am unable to comprehend the articles as effectively as I would like to.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I would greatly appreciate any advice or tips you may have.(运用了省略关系代词的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I believe that with your expertise and guidance, I can improve my reading skills and better understand the content of these magazines. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
5.(重庆市2023-2024学年高三上学期10月质检试题)
假定你是李华,将担任杭州亚运会(Asian Games)的国际志愿者。在接待外国友人方面,你有一些困惑,于是你写信给曾经担任过伦敦奥运会志愿者的外教James求助。要点如下:
1.具体的困惑;
2.希望得到帮助。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案
Dear James,
How is everything going I am reaching out to seek your valuable assistance as a novice international volunteer for the upcoming Asian Games in Hangzhou. I have encountered some difficulties recently and would greatly appreciate your help.
I’m struggling with what key information to provide for our international guests about the Asian Games, and I also find myself challenged by the prospect of interacting with foreigners due to potential cultural differences. Given your experience as a London Olympics volunteer, I was wondering if you could offer me some guidance in this matter. I would be immensely grateful.
Thank you in advance for your help. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给曾经担任过伦敦奥运会志愿者的外教James写信,向他求助,介绍怎样做好志愿者。
【详解】1.词汇积累
寻找:seek→look for
遇到(问题、困难等):encounter→run into
由于:due to→on account of
感激的:grateful→appreciative
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I have encountered some difficulties recently and would greatly appreciate your help.
拓展句:I have encountered some difficulties recently and I would appreciate it if you can help me.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m struggling with what key information to provide for our international guests about the Asian Games, and I also find myself challenged by the prospect of interacting with foreigners due to potential cultural differences. (运用了“疑问词+不定式”作宾语以及过去分词短语作宾语补足语等)
【高分句型2】Given your experience as a London Olympics volunteer, I was wondering if you could offer me some guidance in this matter. (运用了过去分词转化的介词given以及if引导的宾语从句)
6.(吉林省长春外国语2023年高三试题)
假设你是学生李华,你家乡的雾凇(rime)负有盛名,你写了一篇英文宣传稿,想请外籍教师Bob帮助润色。请根据提示,用英语给Bob写一封求助信。内容包括:
1.求助事由;
2.求助内容;
3.表达感激。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.信的格式已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Bob,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor.
When it comes to rime, there is no denying that it enjoys a great reputation in my hometown. For a long time I have been longing to write an appealing article to make it better known. However, only when I put the idea into practice did I find that my English is far from satisfaction. As I know, you have a good command of written English, which impresses me a lot. Would you like to do me a favor to have my draft polished I will pay you a visit at your earliest convenience.
I would appreciate it if you could take my request into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是学生李华,你家乡的雾凇(rime)负有盛名,你写了一篇英文宣传稿,想请外籍教师Bob帮助润色。请根据提示,用英语给Bob写一封求助信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助某人:do sb. a favor→give sb. a hand
渴望做某事:long to do sth.→be eager to do sth.
吸引人的:appealing→attractive
考虑某事: take sth. into consideration→ take sth. into account
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Would you like to do me a favor to have my draft polished I will pay you a visit at your earliest convenience.
拓展句:If you would like to do me a favor to have my draft polished, I will pay you a visit at your earliest convenience.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When it comes to rime, there is no denying that it enjoys a great reputation in my hometown.(运用了that引导同位语从句)
[高分句型2] However, only when I put the idea into practice did I find that my English is far from satisfaction. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句和倒装句)
7.(广东省梅州市2023年高三试题)
假设你是李华,将参加下个月的运动会,尽管你已做了准备,但仍感觉训练不得要领。请你就此给外籍教练Mr. Smith写一封求助信。内容包括:
1. 求助事由;
2. 求助内容;
3. 表达感激
注意:
1、词数80词左右,开头结尾不计入总词数;
2、适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student. These days a problem has been bothering me a lot, so I’m writing to ask you for help.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student. These days a problem has been bothering me a lot, so I’m writing to ask you for help.
Two weeks ago, my classmate recommended me to take part in the high-jump in the sports meeting which is to be held next month. In his view, I’m tall and athletic and I’m equal to it. As a result, encouraged by him, I have made some preparations for it and have spared more time to practice. However, I still have no confidence in myself because I have made some mistakes in the training. And even I have failed several times. It seems that I haven’t acquired the key point of doing high-jump. How can I jump higher Would you like to give me some specific and professional guidance The more details you offer, the more improvement I’ll get.
I would appreciate it if you could lend me a hand. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生就参加下个月的运动会事宜给外籍教练Mr. Smith写一封求助信。其内容包括:求助事由、求助内容和表达感激。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:take part in →participate in
观点:view→perspective
获得:acquire →obtain
帮某人:lend sb a hand→do sb a favor
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: And even I have failed several times.
拓展句: And even I have failed several times, which discouraged me deeply
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Two weeks ago, my classmate recommended me to take part in the high-jump in the sports meeting which is to be held next month. (运用了which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】It seems that I haven’t acquired the key point of doing high-jump. (运用了固定句型it seems that...)
8.(2023年四川省绵阳市高三试题)
假定你是李华,将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛。你在准备过程中遇到了困难,请用英语给美国好友Tom写一封信。内容包括:
1. 求助内容;
2. 希望得到帮助;
3. 邀请观看比赛。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文章开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
How are you getting on
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
How are you getting on With the summer vacation drawing near, I’m to participate in an English speech contest of middle school students to be held in Beijing. Faced with so many challenges in the course of the preparation, I have no alternative but to turn to you (in the hope that you will be so kind as to do me a favor).
First and foremost, I find it exceedingly challenging for me to collect some useful information on the Internet(, without which my speech wouldn’t be rich in content). Besides, I have a great desire to polish my spoken English, especially the pronunciation and intonation. Nothing could be better if you could lend me a helping hand with respect to these problems.
(In the meanwhile,) I’d like to extend my warmest invitation to you to make a trip to Beijing to enjoy the competition in person. Looking forward to your presence.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定学生是李华,在准备去北京参加的中学生英语演讲比赛中遇到了困难,要向自己的美国好友Tom写一封求助信并邀请他来观看比赛。内容包括求助的内容并希望得到帮助。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
参加:participate in→ take part in/ involve in
帮忙:do a favor→ give a hand
非常:exceedingly→ extremely
除此之外:besides→ moreover/additionally
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:With the summer vacation drawing near, I’m to participate in an English speech contest of middle school students to be held in Beijing.
复合句:With the summer vacation drawing near, I’m to participate in an English speech contest of middle school students which will be held in Beijing.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Faced with so many challenges in the course of the preparation, I have no alternative but to turn to you (in the hope that you will be so kind as to do me a favor).(运用了过去分词短语作状语和that引导的同位语从句)
【高分句型2】I find it exceedingly challenging for me to collect some useful information on the Internet(, without which my speech wouldn’t be rich in content).(运用了it作形式宾语和介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
9.(2023年湖南省娄底市普通高中名校联考试题)
假定你是李华,作为一名高三的学生,你发现英语学习对你来说具有很大的挑战性,尤其在阅读方面,因此你向外籍教师 Kevin求助,希望得到他建设性的建议。
注意:1. 词数80词左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Kevin,
How are you Faced with the challenge of English learning, I’m writing to ask for your help.
As you know, I am weak in English, especially reading comprehension. Although I have tried every means to improve it, like expanding my vocabulary and doing a large number of exercises, so far all my efforts have ended in failure. Now with the important exam drawing near, I am at a loss what to do next.
I would appreciate it very much if you could give me some advice on how to improve my reading ability effectively. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。现要求考生向外籍教师 Kevin写信求助,希望得到他关于英语阅读方面学习建设性的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
帮助:help →assistance
很多:a large number of→ plenty of
临近:draw near→ be around the corner
给:give → offer
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Faced with the challenge of English learning, I’m writing to ask for your help.
拓展句:As I am faced with the challenge of English learning, I’m writing to ask for your help.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As you know, I am weak in English, especially reading comprehension. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 Although I have tried every means to improve it, like expanding my vocabulary and doing a large number of exercises, so far all my efforts have ended in failure. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句)
10.假设你是李华,你和父母就出国留学的意见相悖,为此你感到很苦恼。请你就此给你的英国笔友 Peter写信求助。要点如下:
1.父母的观点:国外学习环境好,培养独立的能力等;
2.你的观点:英语基础差,留学费用高等。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to ask for your advice on whether I should further my study abroad. My parents insist that I should go. They think the destination they choose for me has a really excellent learning environment and that studying abroad will enable me to be independent, which will prepare me for a brighter future.
However, I don’t agree with them. I think my English is too poor to communicate with foreigners. Besides, I’m afraid the high tuition fee will be a burden to my family.
Please write to me as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本书面表达属于应用文写作。要求针对出国留学,自己和父母意见相悖的问题向好友写信求助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:advice→suggestion
卓越的:excellent→superior
糟糕的:poor→terrible
此外:besides → what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Please write to me as soon as possible.
拓展句:If you have any useful advice, please write to me as soon as possible.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to ask for your advice on whether I should further my study abroad.(运用了whether引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】They think the destination they choose for me has a really superior learning environment and that studying abroad will enable me to be independent, which will prepare me for a brighter future.(运用了that引导的宾语从句及which引导的非限制性定语从句)题型12 求助信
第一段 写给机构,需自我介绍。 写给友人或师长,需寒暄问候,再写出求助目的。
第二段 详述问题,提出要求。
第三段 表达感谢并期望得到回复。
【满分词汇模板】
短语 ____________________面对......困难 ____________________和别人交流有困难 ____________________遇到问题 ____________________遇到困难 ____________________向你求助 ____________________帮某人一个忙 ____________________感到压力很大
【满分句型模板之开篇“风头”句】
I am writing to turn to you for help.
我信心向你寻求帮助
I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
我别无选择只能向你求助
I'm writing to ask you to do me a favor, as I meet with/ come across some problems while planning a Green Campus campaign.
我写信请你帮忙,因为我正在策划一个绿色校园运动时遇到了一些问题。
I am eager to get your timely help.
我渴望得到你及时的帮助。
5. The reason why I am writing to you is that I wonder if you could do me a favor.
我写信给你是想知道你能否帮我。
【满分句型模板之开篇“猪肚”句】
What bothers me is that I am a at loss / have no idea how to review what I have learned by myself at home.
让我困扰的是,我不知道如何回顾我自己在家里学到的东西。
2. Faced with so challenging a problem, I have no alternative but to turn to you for help.
面对这个难题,我只得向你求助.
I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice.
如果你能给我一些建议,我将不胜感激。
4. I would be more than happy if you could...
如果你能...我将非常高兴......
5. First and foremost, I have great difficulty in doing sth.
首先最重要的是,我做...有着很大的困难
6. Additionally, I find it's too challenging for me to do sth.
此外,我发现做...对我来说挑战太大
Last but certainly not least, doing sth is a big headache for me.
最后但同样重要的是,做...让我很头疼一、夺人眼球开头句(开篇表意)
8. I have much trouble in concentrating on online classes, making me really frustrated.
我很难专心上网课,使我很苦恼,
I am stuck and wondering if you could offer me some practical advice as I know you have
organized similar activities.
我被难住了,知道你组织过类似的活动,所以我想知道你是否可以给我一些实用的建议。
I feel greatly stressed, so would you be so kind enough to give me some advice on how to
relieve stress.
我现在压力很大,你能给我一些减压的建议吗
Learning you have rich experience in organizing opera performances, I was wondering if you could...
得知你在组织歌剧表演方面有丰富的经验,我想知道你是否可以。
【满分句型模板之结尾“豹尾”句】
Thanks for your kind consideration.
谢谢你的友好考虑。
I am looking forward to receiving your earliest reply.
我期待着最早收到你的来信。
3. I would be very grateful if you could take the trouble to help me deal with the problem.
如果你能费心帮我处理这个问题,我将不胜感激.
4. Your timely help will be highly appreciated.
非常感谢你及时的帮助。
I'd appreciate it if you could give me some guidance instructions.
如果你能给我一些指导,我将不胜感激。
Hopefully, your kind and timely help would be offered to me.
我希望,你可以提供给我及时善良的帮助。
【满分作文模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
My name is _____________. I’m writing ______________________.(表明写信目的)
Faced with _____________(点明困难), I have to ask for your help. Would you like to ______________(恳请帮助一) In the meanwhile, I beg you to ________________ in order that____________________(求助理由). In addition, I would like to _____________________(求助二). I’m sure that I can ______________ with your help. (表明信心和期盼)It will be appreciated if you can help me to ______________________(表达感谢).
Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分作文模板示例】
(重庆市拔尖强基联盟2023-2024学年高三上学期12月月考英语试题)假定你是李华,本学期你校开设了英语口语课,但是你不太适应外教的授课。你决定给英国朋友Andrew写一封邮件,寻求他的帮助。要点包括:
1. 告知困难;
2.寻求求助。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Andrew,
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Yours,
Li Hua
(辽宁省丹东市五校协作体2023-2024学年高三12月试题)
假设你是某中学高三学生李华。近期你校外教Steve做了一场关于读后续写的讲座。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括
1.表达感谢并简述你的收获;
2.说明你在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。
参考词汇:读后续写 continuation writing
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Steve,
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Yours
Li hua
2.(四川省德阳市第五中学2023-2024学年高三12月试题)
假定你是李华,在外刊阅读中遇到了困难,尝试一些方法后仍未达到预期效果。请你给外教Marcus写一封邮件寻求帮助,内容包括:
1. 尝试方法;
2. 请求指导;
3. 表达感谢。
注意:写作词数应为100左右。
Dear Marcus,
How is everything going
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Yours,
Li Hua
3.(海南省海口市琼山区海南中学2023-2024学年高三试题)
假如你是李华。本学期你校开设了英语口语课,由于你不太适应外教 Mike的授课,你决定给他写一封求助信。内容包括:
1. 谈谈你面临的具体问题;
2. 希望得到帮助。
注意:
1. 词数 80 左右, 开头和结尾已为你写好, 不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
I am Li Hua, one of your students in Oral English class.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4.(2024届浙江省温州市高三11月第一次适应性考试试题)
假定你是李华,在外刊阅读中遇到了困难,尝试一些方法后仍未达到预期效果。请你给外教Marcus写一封邮件寻求帮助,内容包括:
1.尝试方法:
2.请求指导。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。
Dear Marcus,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5.(重庆市2023-2024学年高三上学期10月质检试题)
假定你是李华,将担任杭州亚运会(Asian Games)的国际志愿者。在接待外国友人方面,你有一些困惑,于是你写信给曾经担任过伦敦奥运会志愿者的外教James求助。要点如下:
1.具体的困惑;
2.希望得到帮助。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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6.(吉林省长春外国语2023年高三试题)
假设你是学生李华,你家乡的雾凇(rime)负有盛名,你写了一篇英文宣传稿,想请外籍教师Bob帮助润色。请根据提示,用英语给Bob写一封求助信。内容包括:
1.求助事由;
2.求助内容;
3.表达感激。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.信的格式已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
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Yours,
Li Hua
7.(广东省梅州市2023年高三试题)
假设你是李华,将参加下个月的运动会,尽管你已做了准备,但仍感觉训练不得要领。请你就此给外籍教练Mr. Smith写一封求助信。内容包括:
1. 求助事由;
2. 求助内容;
3. 表达感激
注意:
1、词数80词左右,开头结尾不计入总词数;
2、适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student. These days a problem has been bothering me a lot, so I’m writing to ask you for help.
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Yours,
Li Hua
8.(2023年四川省绵阳市高三试题)
假定你是李华,将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛。你在准备过程中遇到了困难,请用英语给美国好友Tom写一封信。内容包括:
1. 求助内容;
2. 希望得到帮助;
3. 邀请观看比赛。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文章开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
How are you getting on
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Yours,
Li Hua
9.(2023年湖南省娄底市普通高中名校联考试题)
假定你是李华,作为一名高三的学生,你发现英语学习对你来说具有很大的挑战性,尤其在阅读方面,因此你向外籍教师 Kevin求助,希望得到他建设性的建议。
注意:1. 词数80词左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10.假设你是李华,你和父母就出国留学的意见相悖,为此你感到很苦恼。请你就此给你的英国笔友 Peter写信求助。要点如下:
1.父母的观点:国外学习环境好,培养独立的能力等;
2.你的观点:英语基础差,留学费用高等。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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