2024届湖北云学名校联盟3月联考高二联考续写---走失的狗狗Spider重新回归 讲义
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2024.03.06 湖北云学名校联盟3月联考高二联考续写试题如下：
I was eight years old when my mother was told that she would never walk again without calipers, and she wished to visit doctors in London.
The day before we boarded the ship, father committed his pet dog. Spider to his friend Sandy while we were overseas. We didn't know how long my mother's treatment would take or how long we would be away.
Six weeks later, an air-letter arrived from Sandy,saying that Spider had run away just two weeks after we had sailed and that despite many efforts, the dog was never found. I will always remember my father's eyes watery as he read this news. Though my mother and I tried to comfort him, we knew in our hearts how useless that was.
We sailed back to Australia two years later.My father immediately began his own scarch for Spider. After many false calls, we had to accept the fact that the dog was gone.
One cold winter's Saturday morning eight months after our return, my father had a call from Gin Gin, an old lady 375 kilometers away. On the phone she said she had been putting food out "for a very yellow old dog" in the night for weeks and “it was just glimpses of the similar dog in the shadows” in her disused tennis court.
That was enough for my father to drive five and a half hours to see this yellow dog.Sadly,Gin Gin told us the yellow dog hadn't been around for a few days. My father had a strange look in his eyes. (266字符）
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
（一框）Paragraph 1 Then, he put two fingers to his lips and did his special whistle for Spider. ____
（二框）Paragraph 2 It was him, my father's long-lost friend, Spider. ______
【文章分析】
本文讲述了：“我的父亲”千里寻狗的故事。
我母亲因为疾病，需前往伦敦就医。我与父亲陪同她一同前往。于是，父亲不得不把他的宠物狗Spider委托给Sandy照顾。
六周后，Sandy写信告诉我们:Spider跑丢了。父亲闻此落泪。
两年后，我们回到家乡——澳大利亚。一回来后，父亲便开始他的寻狗之旅。但渐渐地，我们不可不接受“狗丢失”这一事实。
一个寒冷的冬日周六早晨，我父亲接到一位叫Gin Gin的老奶奶的电话，她告诉父亲：她一直在给一只黄色的老狗喂食，而且她还发现这只狗还在她的废弃的网球场上待过。
闻此信息，父亲不远千里驱车来到Gin Gin的住处。不过遗憾的是，狗已经有几天不在Gin Gin家附近逗留了。见此，父亲眼中流露出困惑。
文章到此戛然而止。给出两段首句如下：
续段一：他把两个手指放在嘴唇上，为Spider吹了特殊口哨。
续断二：正是它，我父亲失散多年的朋友，Spider.
根据“互动总则”与“主题统领”（主题是“情节设定”的依据），可以构思如下
主题 主题是控制情节走向的幕后统帅！ 文章主题：父亲爱狗，Gin Gin也爱狗。人们与动物的和谐共处。
伏笔 伏笔助立主题，伏笔促进情节。（伏笔主要是人物现状和性格分析） 父亲：爱狗； Gin Gin：爱狗。
续 段 一 一轮主配互动 父亲：吹口哨 狗：没反应 （没有什么回应“口哨”） 父亲：布满愁容。
二轮主配互动 我: 安慰父亲，说到“X”。 父亲: 充耳不闻，继续吹口哨。
三轮主配互动 （交代背景：我正准备劝父亲放弃努力，这是草丛中有动静） 狗：从灌木丛中飞奔出来。 我们：都兴奋地大喊起来。
衔接句 我们都兴奋地大喊起来。（只要写到“狗的出现”即可。）
续 段 二 一轮主配互动 狗： 不停地舔我父亲的脸 父亲： 容光焕发，说到：“我可找到你了。”
二轮己己互动 （交代背景：父亲把狗放进车子里） 父亲：走过去，走到Gin Gin 老奶奶那里。 父亲：放一百美元在老奶奶手上，并不断表示谢意，说到“如果没有你，我们是找不到狗的，请接受我们的心意。” Gin Gin: 坚决不收钱，并说：“善待动物是每个人的责任。”
【参考范文】
Paragraph 1：Then, he put two fingers to his lips and did his special whistle for Spider.
(1)But nothing came into our sight,which disappointed us greatly, especial my father.
(2)“Maybe spider is not here.Maybe he has found its new home. Don’t feel so bad.” I comforted , wanting to cheer him up.
(3)But my dad, turning a deaf ear to my words, started to do his special whistle again.
(4)I was about to persuaded him to give up when something moved in the bush.
(5)Suddenly, from the bush, a dog flew into my father’s arms with great force.
(6)No sooner had we caught sight of this than we blurt out “wow”with excitement.
Paragraph 2: It was him, my father’s long-lost friend, Spider.
(1)Once he was in my father’s arms, he kept licking my father’s face, as if expressing his deep affection.
(2)“My boy, I find you at last. You worry me terribly.” My father said, face radiant with joy.
(3)Next, dad wrapped Spider in an old blanket and put it into the car carefully.
(4)Then he went over to Mrs. Gin Gin.
(5)Putting 100 dollars in the old lady’s hands, Dad extended his gratitude. “Without you, we could not have found our dog. Please accept this present.”
(6)The old lady determinedly refused the money, and she said, “ Animals are our friends. It is our duty to treat them kindly.”
I was eight years old when my mother was told that she would never walk again without calipers, and she wished to visit doctors in London.
The day before we boarded the ship, father committed his pet dog. Spider to his friend Sandy while we were overseas. We didn't know how long my mother's treatment would take or how long we would be away.
Six weeks later, an air-letter arrived from Sandy,saying that Spider had run away just two weeks after we had sailed and that despite many efforts, the dog was never found. I will always remember my father's eyes watery as he read this news. Though my mother and I tried to comfort him, we knew in our hearts how useless that was.
We sailed back to Australia two years later.My father immediately began his own scarch for Spider. After many false calls, we had to accept the fact that the dog was gone.
One cold winter's Saturday morning eight months after our return, my father had a call from Gin Gin, an old lady 375 kilometers away. On the phone she said she had been putting food out "for a very yellow old dog" in the night for weeks and “it was just glimpses of the similar dog in the shadows” in her disused tennis court.
That was enough for my father to drive five and a half hours to see this yellow dog.Sadly,Gin Gin told us the yellow dog hadn't been around for a few days. My father had a strange look in his eyes. (266字符）
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
（一框）Paragraph 1 Then, he put two fingers to his lips and did his special whistle for Spider. ____
（二框）Paragraph 2 It was him, my father's long-lost friend, Spider. ______
【文章分析】
本文讲述了：“我的父亲”千里寻狗的故事。
我母亲因为疾病，需前往伦敦就医。我与父亲陪同她一同前往。于是，父亲不得不把他的宠物狗Spider委托给Sandy照顾。
六周后，Sandy写信告诉我们:Spider跑丢了。父亲闻此落泪。
两年后，我们回到家乡——澳大利亚。一回来后，父亲便开始他的寻狗之旅。但渐渐地，我们不可不接受“狗丢失”这一事实。
一个寒冷的冬日周六早晨，我父亲接到一位叫Gin Gin的老奶奶的电话，她告诉父亲：她一直在给一只黄色的老狗喂食，而且她还发现这只狗还在她的废弃的网球场上待过。
闻此信息，父亲不远千里驱车来到Gin Gin的住处。不过遗憾的是，狗已经有几天不在Gin Gin家附近逗留了。见此，父亲眼中流露出困惑。
文章到此戛然而止。给出两段首句如下：
续段一：他把两个手指放在嘴唇上，为Spider吹了特殊口哨。
续断二：正是它，我父亲失散多年的朋友，Spider.
根据“互动总则”与“主题统领”（主题是“情节设定”的依据），可以构思如下
主题 主题是控制情节走向的幕后统帅！ 文章主题：父亲爱狗，Gin Gin也爱狗。人们与动物的和谐共处。
伏笔 伏笔助立主题，伏笔促进情节。（伏笔主要是人物现状和性格分析） 父亲：爱狗； Gin Gin：爱狗。
续 段 一 一轮主配互动 父亲：吹口哨 狗：没反应 （没有什么回应“口哨”） 父亲：布满愁容。
二轮主配互动 我: 安慰父亲，说到“X”。 父亲: 充耳不闻，继续吹口哨。
三轮主配互动 （交代背景：我正准备劝父亲放弃努力，这是草丛中有动静） 狗：从灌木丛中飞奔出来。 我们：都兴奋地大喊起来。
衔接句 我们都兴奋地大喊起来。（只要写到“狗的出现”即可。）
续 段 二 一轮主配互动 狗： 不停地舔我父亲的脸 父亲： 容光焕发，说到：“我可找到你了。”
二轮己己互动 （交代背景：父亲把狗放进车子里） 父亲：走过去，走到Gin Gin 老奶奶那里。 父亲：放一百美元在老奶奶手上，并不断表示谢意，说到“如果没有你，我们是找不到狗的，请接受我们的心意。” Gin Gin: 坚决不收钱，并说：“善待动物是每个人的责任。”
【参考范文】
Paragraph 1：Then, he put two fingers to his lips and did his special whistle for Spider.
(1)But nothing came into our sight,which disappointed us greatly, especial my father.
(2)“Maybe spider is not here.Maybe he has found its new home. Don’t feel so bad.” I comforted , wanting to cheer him up.
(3)But my dad, turning a deaf ear to my words, started to do his special whistle again.
(4)I was about to persuaded him to give up when something moved in the bush.
(5)Suddenly, from the bush, a dog flew into my father’s arms with great force.
(6)No sooner had we caught sight of this than we blurt out “wow”with excitement.
Paragraph 2: It was him, my father’s long-lost friend, Spider.
(1)Once he was in my father’s arms, he kept licking my father’s face, as if expressing his deep affection.
(2)“My boy, I find you at last. You worry me terribly.” My father said, face radiant with joy.
(3)Next, dad wrapped Spider in an old blanket and put it into the car carefully.
(4)Then he went over to Mrs. Gin Gin.
(5)Putting 100 dollars in the old lady’s hands, Dad extended his gratitude. “Without you, we could not have found our dog. Please accept this present.”
(6)The old lady determinedly refused the money, and she said, “ Animals are our friends. It is our duty to treat them kindly.”