2024届佛山市高三英语教学质量检测卷一读后续写--一次特别的沙滩生日派对讲义

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名称 2024届佛山市高三英语教学质量检测卷一读后续写--一次特别的沙滩生日派对讲义
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【2024届佛山市高三教学质量检测卷一读后续写原题】
As the afternoon sun bathed the local beach with its warm, golden rays, four-year-old William sat on the beach with a mix of expectation and confusion. His dad, Steven, sat by his side. They were waiting for William's friends to arrive and celebrate his long-awaited birthday party. William's wide eyes, filled with hope and happiness, stared at the shoreline, looking for familiar faces.
He kept asking his dad where everyone was, and Steven just told him "they're coming soon, "trying to ease his son's growing impatience. But the longer they waited, the more hopeless William became. He was extremely disappointed when the two invited families called and said they couldn't make it to the celebration because of unexpected situations.
Steven watched his son, who had been eagerly expecting his special day for what seemed like ages. This year, William had been more aware than ever of his upcoming birthday, asking throughout the month when his birthday was, eagerly expecting a good time.
Feeling a sense of guilt for his son's disappointment, Steven decided to turn to social media for help. He posted a lovely picture of him and William on the beach. Their faces were filled with a mix of hope and disappointment. The sincere words with the picture read, "William would love some friends to play with on the beach. To celebrate his fourth birthday, he has Hot Wheels, sand toys, dinosaurs, and we have some snacks and drinks. Any and all welcome. "
William's wish for companionship produced a strong response from the local people. They flooded the post with messages of support, birthday wishes, and offers to join the celebration. They were determined to make William's day special.
"Going there. See you soon, "one warm-hearted local commented on the post, promising to bring her family along. The message aroused the same feeling from many others, who were quick to follow suit.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Soon, the beach was filled with scenes of joy. ________________________________________________________
After hours of laughter and games, the sun began to set. ____________________________________________________
2【前文分析】
午后,温暖的金色阳光沐浴在当地的海滩上,四岁的威廉坐在海滩上,心中充满了期待和困惑。他的父亲史蒂文坐在他身边。他们在等威廉的朋友们来庆祝他期待已久的生日聚会。威廉睁大了眼睛,充满了希望和幸福,他凝视着海岸线,寻找着熟悉的面孔。
他不停地问爸爸大家都到哪里去了,史蒂文只是告诉他“他们很快就来了”,试图安抚儿子越来越不耐烦的情绪。但他们等得越久,威廉就越绝望。当两个被邀请的家庭打电话来,说他们因为意外情况不能来参加庆祝活动时,他非常失望。
史蒂文看着他的儿子,他热切地期待着这个特殊的日子似乎已经很久了。今年,威廉比以往任何时候都更清楚自己即将到来的生日,他在一个月里一直在问自己的生日是什么时候,热切地期待着一个美好的时光。
史蒂文对儿子的失望感到内疚,他决定向社交媒体寻求帮助。他上传了一张他和威廉在海滩上的可爱照片。他们的脸上充满了希望和失望。照片上真挚的文字是这样写的:“威廉喜欢和一些朋友一起在海滩上玩耍。为了庆祝他的四岁生日,他有风火轮,沙滩玩具,恐龙,我们有一些零食和饮料。任何人都欢迎。”
威廉想要陪伴的愿望在当地引起了强烈反响。他们在帖子里留言表示支持,祝愿生日,并表示愿意加入庆祝活动。他们决心让威廉的日子与众不同。
“去那里。一名热心的当地人在帖子下评论道,并承诺会带她的家人一起去。这条消息引起了许多人的共鸣,他们很快就效仿了。
3【优美句子展示】
Para1
1. The warm-hearted people took advantage of this opportunity to make acquaintance with each other.
When the birthday cake was laid out, those present sang the birthday songs spontaneously.
2. As soon as the guests came, William's impatience was gone. His eyebrows danced and spirit soared.
3. Reaching as far as the eyes can see, William's previous disappointment vanished without any trace.
3.They experienced a memorable and fantastic moments around the beach where they shared everything together joyfully.
4. Enormous joy welled up in every corner of the beach
5. It was at that time that all the disappointment and sadness was gone . Instead, radiant smile flickered through everyone's face.
6. Bathed in the sunshine and delight from the cosy atmosphere,the Children ran here and there to seek for their pleasure.Surrounded by laughter and wishes, William blew out candles and shared the sweet moment with others.
7. More and more local people got actively involved in William's birthday party with their kids.
Para2
1. It was love that made the world go around and William felt it deep in his little heart.
2, Steve shared the video through Ivia the
social media to express his gratitude. For william, it was truly a memorable experience, which will be engraved in his mind forever.
3. It was the strangers' kindness from all walks of life that made the day special and unique.
4. The experience created was undoubtedly lingered in William's heart for the years to come.
5.Later that night, I posted some pictures about the party and added some grateful words on my social media account.
6. Most importantly, it had also buried a kind
and loved seed in his young heart. Apart from this. this thing also had exerted on others' thinking about humanity.
7. How happy William was! How good steven was as a father! How kind the people were! How cosy the world was!
5【范文展示】
Soon, the beach was filled with scenes of joy. More and more community members arrived to make William’s birthday special, eager to share in the excitement of a young boy’s milestone. Children played together, building sandcastles and sharing their favorite toys. Parents chatted and connected, forming new friendships on the sun-kissed shoreline. The two invited families also sent their birthday wishes through video. Laughter and cheer surrounded William as he blew out the candles on his birthday cake, radiant smile lighting up his face. The delicious scent of the cake filled the air as everyone gathered to sing “Happy Birthday” and share in the sweet moment.
After hours of laughter and games, the sun began to set. The little boy’s heart was filled with happiness, and he couldn’t stop smiling as he looked back on the day’s events. As the sun dipped below the horizon, it was time for their newfound friends to bid goodbye and head home. His dad, Steven, took to social media once more to express his gratitude. “Thank you so much, everyone, for the birthday wishes and support,” he wrote. “I’ll never lose faith in humanity.” The sun may have set on this special day, but the memories created would undoubtedly linger in William’s heart for years to come.